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by Vicky L. Ring (artist-ring@sbcglobal.net)

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Genre: Science Fiction/Fantasy User Review:

What if there really was an UFO Philip would know? Since strange and frightening things have been happening at his new school, being picked on by two bullies, twin sister acting really odd, and a homeroom teacher that's very frightening. Now he has to save two bullies as they take a horrifying adventure into a dimension to rescue his twin sister and nineteen girls from becoming mutated aliens.

MISS IRA AND THE CREEPY EYE

FADE IN:

INT. PHILIP'S THOUGHTS - DAY

PHILIP staring at sister thinking. Curly red hair, green
eyes, freckles and glasses. MAY a twin with shoulder length
wavy red hair, sparkling green eyes and wears glasses.

            BROTHER (G)
      (PHILIP)
How come May my twin is so self
assured? Why do I have a real hard
time making friends at any
schools? I am branded as a nerd.
Why, cause I wear glasses, as if
that really mattered.

      (MAY)
Philip, quit daydreaming. Come on
its time to walk to our new
school.
      (PHILIP)
(NERVOUS)

Yeah, sure. (GESTURES) Let's go.

      (MAY)
Oh Philip. Quit being such a
worry wart. Nobody will pick
on you.

ANGLE ON MAY as she grabs her sack lunch off the counter.
WIDE ANGLE PHILIP as he snatches his lunch shakily.
They head out the front door, Philip closes the door behind
him and feeling sad hopes he doesn't get picked on.

EXT. THE HOUSE - DAY

The houses all look the same except for trim work. Their
house is the one needing new paint, burnt grass in yard.
They walk a couple of blocks and come to a dead end. A sign
reads: SHALLOWED ROAD.
PHILIP and MAY gawk at a gigantic two story and a black iron
gate. Philip SHIVERS as he feels and hears the breeze pick
up speed through the trees.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
Turns toward his sister. She's
GONE. He looks out of the corner
of his green eyes and saw her
walking down the dirt road. He
runs after her.

May, are you, okay. (CONCERNED)

He waves his hand in front of her
face. No response. She stares at
the house, as he stares at her
tensely and snaps his finger.
Nothing.

(POINTS A FINGER AT HOUSE)

May, that house right there.
Is no different than all the
other houses we've ever seen.

(HE SHRUGGED) Just look at it!

PHILIP looks at the house his face gaps a weird surprise. He
can't take his eyes off it. The GIGANTIC two story house was
VICTORIAN with a BALCONY, its trimmed in FLORESCENT pink and
blue. That's not what disturbed him. It was the odd shapes
of framework, Triangles, Rectangles inside of Squares,
Circles inside of Octagons.Three triangle rooms at the top,
the one in the center had a shape of an EYE.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
The more he stared the house
seemed to be draining his brain.
When he began to see DOUBLE images
of everything. The house grew
larger before his eyes.

(WHISPERS)
No, it can't be... (Shaking head)

      (MAY)
(TRANCE)

Who do you think lives here?

      (PHILIP)
(SHRUGGING)

            (MORE)

BROTHER (cont'd)
How should I know. Maybe a couple
of retired people who likes to
watch a lot of science fiction
movies.
(PAUSES) Hey, its time to
get to school...before were late.

MAY still STARED at the strange house, PHILIP grabs his
sister's elbow and leads her to school, the whole time MAY
stares over her shoulder. Although the house is out of
sight.

INT. THE BULLY - DAY

MAY JERKS her arm a way as she enters the building, Leaving
PHILIP in total shock.
He enters behind her with his head down feeling REJECTED, as
he walks up to a wall locker.
A short, overweight pimpled boy BRUSHED in front of PHILIP
and the locker.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
Hey, nerd. (SMIRKING)
This locker's already taken.

      (PHILIP)
(MUMBLES)

Okay...

He moves over to next locker.

The BULLY shoves his arm in front of the other locker.
PHILIP looks down at his shoes. Slowly turns away and starts
to walk off.
ALL OF A SUDDEN--He feels this heavy leg SWIPE his leg.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)

(YELLS)

OH NO!

He slides across the floor.

HIS GLASSES FLY OFF HIS FACE, HE SLOWLY PEEKS AROUND.
STUDENTS IN THE HALL SNICKERS AND LAUGHS. HIS FACE TURNS A
PLUM RED.

BULLY
(PETER)

(LAUGHING)

Welcome to Norview High, dork.

PHILIP stares at the BULLY'S shoes as he rounds the corner.
He gets up NERVOUSLY and grabs his glasses, as he RUNS to
his class. Right before entering he feels disturbed. He
STOPS. Sees the BULLY grinning.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(WHISPERING)

Bummer...That's the only seat left
in the room.
(PAUSES) Why me?
(GATHERING HIS WITS AND SIGHS) Be
brave.

He sits at the empty desk in front
of the bully.

      (BULLY)
(SARCASTIC)

I bet you thought you could get
away from me.

The bully leans forward close to
Philip's ear.

Well, didn't you?

      (PHILIP)
(CALM)

No, not exactly. (PAUSING)

Now did I.

BULLY
(PETER)
(GROWLS ANGRILY)

The students were throwing paper balls when the BULLY
decides to ARGUE with a STUDENT across from him.
The students FREEZES their PAPER BALLS and goes SILENT as
the TEACHER ENTERS the room.

ALIEN TEACHER
(MISS IRA)
My name is Miss Ira and I'm your
new homeroom teacher. Now when I
call your names, please raise your
hands.

When roll call began the TEACHER has an accent, the students
hands fly up, as if in a trance. PHILIP has to fight the
(SLEEPY SPELL) as he notices how young and enchanting his
teacher looks. With all the bracelets clinging to her wrists
and her long gypsy like dress. Her hair is long and dark,
her eyes brown and wide.
ALL OF A SUDDEN...He notices an antique golden EYE AMULET
around her neck.

The EYE inside the amulet OPENS. It WINKS at Philip.
Philip is TERRIFIED. He SHAKES his head in disbelief, he
STRUGGLES in his chair. A force-field around him is HOLDING
him down. His eyes GAZES on the TEACHER. She NODS her head,
Smiles and GAZES back with squinting eyes of an OLD wise
woman.
He blinks and then TREMBLES.

The TEACHER touches the pink flesh of the eye with her long
red fingernails.

CLOSE UP-- The EYE shoots out a beam of red light on PHILIP.

He looks at himself and he's glowing RED. He's frightened
and SCREAMS. No one can hear him.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(YELLS)

The eye it's alive! (WHISPERS)

It's really alive.

Hysterically he looks around all
the students looked stiff as a
board. He sees the bully and
through roll call his name's
Peter.

PHILIP waves his hands in front of the BULLY. Then he gets
him back for embarrassing him in the hallway. He POKES at
his nose and then give a hard THUMP to the BULLY'S nose. He
feels her watching him as he TURNS towards the front and
sees the CREEPY TEACHER nodding as if she was READING his
mind.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(WHISPERING)

Does that nod mean...yes.

Does she know what I'm thinking.

Philip trembles as the teacher
gives him another nod and wink. He
wishes the bell would ring so he
could wake up from this trance.

Soon he wished the bell would ring. When it rang he bolted
out of his chair and not once looking back.

EXT. OUTSIDE THE SCHOOL - DAY

After school PHILIP WAITS on the school steps for his
sister, when a CREEPY feeling WASHES over him. Thinking that
MISS IRA is WATCHING him.
ALL OF A SUDDEN---POUNDING FOOTSTEPS SOUNDED BEHIND HIM. HE
KNOWS ITS THE BULLY.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(DEVASTATED)

Oh no. Not again...

He puts his hands over his head in
disappointment.

      (PETER)
(SHOUTING)

There he is...(BREATHING HEAVILY)

Standing in front of Philip.

Guss what?

A Beat.
            (MORE)

            BROTHER (cont'd)

I want you to meet my buddy, Mark.

He's a bully too.

      (PHILIP)
(MUMBLES)

Oh...

He lifts his head up and stares at
them (FROWNING.)

      (MARK)
(POUNDING HIS FISTS)

So, what are we going to do to
this nerd.

      (PETER)
(COOLEY)

Oh, let me think...

      (PHILIP)
Don't take to long, I don't want
to be here all day.

      (MARK)
Let's throw him in the dumpster
behind the school. you know, like
we did to the last nerd.

      (PETER)
(JABS MARK)

No, not this nerd...he's sort of
different than the other nerds.

      (MARK)
(FRUSTRATED)

Then what?

            (MORE)

BROTHER (cont'd)

PHILIP barely hears Peter saying, I have a better
idea---PETER smiles and whispers in Mark's ear.
THE NEXT THING PHILIP see, they grab his backpack and runs
down the street.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(SHOUTS)

Hey, give me my backpack!

He chases down the street. Gives
up and walks down the street
kicking rocks all the way to
Shallowed Road.

EXT. SHALLOWED ROAD - DAY

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(RUNNING)

He sees his sister at the iron
gate.

Hey, May. I've been waiting for
you at school this whole time.
And you've been right here at
this stupid house...

He puts his hands in his jean
pockets.

(CALMLY SAYS) Why did you leave
me?
You know we have always waited on
one another after school.

MAY ignores him and stares at the house in a trance, her
hands are gripping the black iron bars tightly as her hands
turn red.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(AGGRAVATED)

Hey, didn't you hear what I just
said.

He grabs her arms and tugs on it.
            (MORE)

BROTHER (cont'd)
She won't budge.

We have to go home now. (DEMANDED)

(GENTLY) He tries to pry her
fingers loose from the iron gate.

PHILIP wonders what's going on. So he grabs the iron bars
and slowly takes a deep breath.
NOTHING happens, so he waits. Something strange and vibrant
flows over him and then THROUGH him. So magical,cool,
inspirational. He's SMILING.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(EXCITED)

I love this gate...(WHISPERING)
I feel so strong...handsome and...

The feelings vanished.

WHAT? (He demanded)

      (THE GATE)
(ORDERED)

Let go!

      (PHILIP)
No way. I can't and I won't do it!

      (THE GATE)
LET GO!

The gate without any WARNING hummed, PHILIP held the bars
tightly. The gate began to SHAKE and RATTLE, the humming
grew LOUDER as it buzzed in his ears. No matter what he was
determined to hold on.

Gate began to GLOW changing colors as it reached out like a
THUNDERBOLT HANDS full of electricity and ZAPS PHILIP.
He goes FLYING a few feet away. He rubs his head and slowly
gets up from the ground, his legs all WOBBLY he walks home
leaving MAY behind.

10.

INT. PHILIP WAKES AT 12:00 - NIGHT

PHILIP wakes up in the middle of the night, checks May's
room, She's not there. He knows where she is, he slips on
his shoes, goes outside. Dogs barking as he runs down the
street to SHALLOWED ROAD. He HIDES behind a big tree and
watches the house lit up in different GLOWING colors in
every room.
MAY and NINETEEN GIRLS are holding onto the IRON GATE.
He slowly walks toward them. When the house BLINDS him with
a bright light.

The girls AWAKEN from the trance and wanders around mumbling
where there at. The girls are plain looking and wearing
their glasses. PHILIP walks through the crowd looking for
his sister, its dark but the moon gives them all a HAUNTING
GLOW.
He BUMPS into someone.

            TWIN
      (MAY)
(PUSHING HIM)

Watch it, buster!

      (PHILIP)
(LOWERS HIS HEAD)

Sorry. (WHISPERING) Why are you
here?

(GESTURING CURIOUSLY)

Why are all these girls doing
here?

      (MAY)
(HOSTILE)

Now that's one of your business.

      (PHILIP)
(SAD)

What's wrong with you, May. And
why are you being so rude to me?

(He PAUSES and TOUCHES her arm.)

This isn't like you at all.
            (MORE)

11.

TWIN (cont'd)

(MAY)
(SHRUGS OFF HIS HAND)

(GROWLS) Don't touch me!

He watches her nose stick up in the air, and she walks off
leaving him behind. He wonders why his sister is acting so
strange and why was May not being May.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(SHOUTS)

Be that way...I won't come near
you anymore!

As he RUNS past her.

(Mumbles)

Miss Goody Two Shoes.

INT. WEIRD THINGS - DAY

Philip wakes up hearing MAY singing, he dresses and then
TIPTOES to her cracked door. He silently PEEKS in. She's
sitting down and applying cosmetics to her freckled face
in mirror. Philip's stunned.

            TWIN
      (MAY)
(SINGING)

By the light of the moon
shadows play by the darkened night
what a joy...

if you could see the real me...
One of nature's gifts
from far and wide across the
universe.

This is what the eye shall see
Another kind of me!

      (PHILIP)
(under his breath)

Did Miss Ira teach her that scary
            (MORE)

12.

TWIN (cont'd)
song? Or did she steal May's
spirit?

Suddenly a hairbrush ZOOMS across the room. He DUCKS his
head in the nick of time as it hits the door and bounces to
the floor.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(GASPS)

Oh my God...She saw me!

      (MAY)
(PRISSY VOICE)

My, oh my...if it isn't my
snooping brother being nosy.

She enjoys watching Philip's eyes widen with fright.

TWIN
(MAY)
(RAISES AN EYEBROW)

Did I startle you?

EXT. WEIRD THING CONT. - DAY

Philip walks to the school by himself, he's worried and
scared for his sister, and the creepy song she sang kept
popping up inside his head. He climbs the steps at school
when the BULLIES were waiting for him. He was SURPRISED that
they brought his backpack back.

BULLY
(PETER)
(TEASING SWINGING BACKPACK)

If you want your backpack...then
come and get it.

Philip stares at the grinning Peter. Then he looks at Mark
with his tongue sticking out at him.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(SMILES)

            (MORE)

13.

BROTHER (cont'd)
You know you guys are so immature,
your tongue is so long. You could
probably run a mile with it.

Philip gets SCARED he (mutters)

Uh oh, there going to pound me.

Suddenly the backpack Peter holds drops to the ground. PETER
and MARK faces change from angry to I'm in love looks.
PHILIP turns to register what or who made this happen. It
was MAY, and she was without her glasses and she looked like
a beauty Queen. PHILIP GRINS as he grabs his backpack.

INT. MISS IRA CREEPY - DAY

He then enters the classroom when his face drops and he
trembles from fear, as he takes a seat he notices four girls
that were on SHALLOWED ROAD was now without glasses and
looked like beauty Queens. Something was going on, he just
didn't know what.
Then he felt eyes on him he shivered as Miss Ira's eyes
became beady. She nodded and smirked at him. Like she was
READING his MIND or something.
The BELL Rings.

INT. DIMLY HALL AND CLOSET - DAY

The hallway was over crowded as he notices the other girls
who had been on SHALLOWED ROAD wore no glass and were beauty
Queens too. All twenty girls.

He saw out of the corner of his eye MISS IRA, MARK and PETER
who was FOLLOWING behind her like puppy dogs. They went into
the JANITORIAL CLOSET.
Philip watched the door CLOSE. No one in the hall could see
them and all the noise, Just HIMSELF could see go into the
closet.

He's NERVOUS he hurries to the closet, and puts his ear to
the door.WAITING and LISTENING.
Finally the voice comes--HE SHUDDERS.

14.

ALIEN TEACHER
(MISS IRA)
(RASPY VOICE)

You boys are the bravest and
strongest I have ever seen. I've
been around many schools around
the world in search for bullies
just like you.

PHILIP hears this sound like a broken down vacuum clean. He
jerks his ear away from the door, the sound is so loud that
his heart is beating over time. He knows that the BULLIES
were terrible, but he knew they needed his help.
He TURNS the KNOB.

SWINGS the door OPEN.

He can't scream, he trembles instead. He grabs the wood
frame for support. He feels like he wants to faint as he
stares at the HORRIFIED THING in the closet.

MISS IRA is a walking CORPSE, as she turns her SKULL LIKE
HEAD AT PHILIP, her neck snaps and crackles.

            ALIEN TEACHER
      (MISS IRA)
(ORDERS RASPY)

Get out of here!

(HISSING)
And shut the door behind you.

      (PHILIP)
(PARALYZED WITH FEAR)

No. (NOT SURE HE SAID THAT)

Notices the few wiry gray hairs on
top of her bald head, her beady
red eyes flame with fire

            ALIEN TEACHER
      (MISS IRA)
(FURIOUS)

Well, what are you waiting for...
Do as I say!

CRACKING a bony finger toward the
door.
            (MORE)

15.

            ALIEN TEACHER (cont'd)

      (PHILIP)
(THINKS he knows she knows)

She looked like she had--
escaped from the grave, itself.

He could smell the mold,swamp
stench, about her.As he held his
nose tightly closed.

      (MISS IRA)
(FURIOUS)

You puny, pestering boy!

(HISSING)

Get out!

He sees something yellow, slimy SEEPING out of her rotten
jagged dingy teeth. Her flesh decomposed of yellowish-brown
hangs loosely from her bones. Her decrypted arms are wrapped
safely around the BULLIES. PHILIP UNSURE about what he is
seeing RUBS his eyes.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(she knows what he thinks)

Why did she want Mark and Peter?

He REMEMBERS the WHEEZING noise.

Did she want their souls?

      (MISS IRA)
(GROWLED AND ANSWERED HIS
THOUGHTS)

That's right... next time it will
be yours that I take.

She SNAPS her bony fingers and PHILIP watches HORRIFIED as
two of her FINGERS go FLYING off her hand.
He LEANS on the wall for support, he's pasty looking and
happens to see a MALE TEACHER walking by. He reaches out and
grabs the teachers arm.
The TEACHER STOPS and LOOKS at him funny.

16.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(BARELY BREATHING)

Mister, do you see her?

POINTING inside the closet.

            MALE TEACHER
      (TEACHER)
(SHRUGS)

See whom exactly.

STARES at the kid concerned.

      (PHILIP)
(HYSTERICAL)

Them. (POINTING)

There's three of them in the
closet.

      (TEACHER)
(FROWNING)

Listen to me kid. You look kind of
pale. Maybe, you should go to the
nurse's station and lay down a
bit.

The MALE TEACHER is still FROWNING as he reaches out and
touches PHILIP'S forehead. He nods his head.

            MALE TEACHER
      (TEACHER)
(FROWNING)

Yes,I think you do have a fever.

      (PHILIP)
Okay, sure I'll go. (LIES)

      (TEACHER)
(CONCERNED)

Good boy. (WALKS AWAY)

            (MORE)

17.

MALE TEACHER (cont'd)

(PHILIP)
(THOUGHT)

How come no one sees them in the
closet? Did she have the whole
school under her spell? How come
not me?

INT. TWO CONFUSED BULLIES - DAY

The bell rings and PETER and MARK snaps out of the TRANCE
and BOLTS from the THING in the closet. (PHILIP JUMPS as all
THREE BOYS watch MISS IRA changed back to her normal self.

PETER and MARK rubs their eyes as if they were dreaming.
Before MISS IRA jumps out of the closet faster than a cat
she gives PHILIP EVIL EYES.

Next thing PHILIP feels is two strong hands SQUEEZING his
SHOULDERS, as he looks into the BULLIES angry faces.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
Tell me what just happened.

He SQUEEZES Philip's shoulders
TIGHTLY.

      (PHILIP)
(WINCHES)

Okay, I'll give you an explanation
to this whole weird situation.

      (PETER)
(THREATENING)

It better be good...Or--

He let go of Philip's shoulder and
clenched his FISTS.

      (PHILIP)
(NODS NERVOUSLY)

Yeah, I get it. (pauses)

That thing in the closet was our
            (MORE)

18.

            BULLY (cont'd)
homeroom teacher, Peter.

      (PETER)
(GASP)

No, way. It was so mortifying.

      (MARK)
(CRINGES)

Yeah. It looked like it could've
been the wife of tales from the
crypt.

      (PHILIP)
(SHIVERS)

Well, that was Miss Ira.

      (PETER)
(GESTURED)

Why were we in the closet, and
what does she want with us?

      (PHILIP)
(GESTURES HANDS)

She wants your souls, I think...

      (MARK)
(PLEADS)

Hey, carrot top. If you keep a
watch over us, we won't pick on
you anymore...Is that a deal or
what.

      (PETER)
(TENSED SMILE)

Yeah, could you please, Philip.

19.

PHILIP watched them down the hall and smiled, he now had
made two new friends and PETER had called him by his name
and not nerd. Instead of watching them after classes, he
watched MISS IRA as he peeked around the corner from her
class. He saw her digging in her big black bag. The eye
around her neck opened its eye. Terrified Philip as he burns
rubber and squeaks his shoes as he turns a corner and runs
down the hall. He can hear MISS IRA'S echoing laughter.

ALIEN TEACHER
(MISS IRA)
Remember Philip...
There's no running in the halls.

EXT. SPYING ON SHALLOWED ROAD - DAY

Walking to Shallowed Road he hid behind a tree. When a red
sports car swerved around the corner and parked up to the
black iron gates. He noticed who was behind the wheel and
shivered as she touched the eye amulet and a green glow
spread thickly, as the gate opened with a loud creak. she
drives up the dirt road heading to the house as the
background wobbles.

The gate slams SHUT. Voices of TWENTY girls including MAY,
grabs the iron bars of the gate as a green glow spread and
does a zigzag around the girls. THEY VANISH. He's in
complete shock.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(GASP)

Just like that! But where did they
go?

He has an idea a secret plan as he runs home.

INT. BUMPS INTO DAD - DAY

            DAD
      (MR. NAEDELL)
Hey, slow down son. (HESITATES)

Where's May?

      (PHILIP)
Oh, she doesn't want to walk home
with me. She's changed in many
ways now, and has no time for
            (MORE)

20.

            DAD (cont'd)
her brother.

      (DAD)
So, my little girl has grown up.

      (PHILIP)
I know Dad. She's wearing makeup
and she's sort of...

      (DAD)
(INTERRUPTING)

Different.

      (PHILIP)
(SIGHS)

Yeah.

MAY rushes through the front door and let's it slam behind
her. She walks up to her DAD and brother.

            DAD
      (MR. NAEDELL)
(BUSHY EYEBROW RAISE)

Uh, where's your glasses?

      (MAY)
(SNOBBISH)

I don't need those yucky things,
anymore. And if your wondering I
had a friend who gave me contacts.

MAY gives PHILIP one of those smirks. Like it was his fault
that DAD had asked about her glasses. Dad was seriously
thinking with his blue eyes and rubbing the stubble on his
chin.

            DAD
      (MR. NAEDELL)
(FROWNING)

Can you see good?

      (MAY)
            (MORE)

21.

DAD (cont'd)
(GRINNING)

Sure I can.

(DAD)
That's nice. You look beautiful.

MAY giggles and hugs her DAD. PHILIP notices that MAY'S
green eyes that she is not wearing contacts. She was fibbing
and he was starting to become suspicious of her.

Later on he was finishing up his homework in his room. When
he smells Dad's cooking. YUM FRIED CHICKEN!. He feels like
he's floating as he enters the kitchen and sits down at the
table. He notices his DAD is going out as he's dressed in
evening clothes and grabs his car key from off the counter.

            DAD
      (MR. NAEDELL)
So, how do I look?

      (PHILIP)
Marvelous. Are you going out on a
date?

      (DAD)
(LAUGHING)

No. I wish...Just going out with a

couple guys.

      (PHILIP)
(MOUTHFUL OF FOOD)

Cool. (He gives a FAREWELL SALUTE
to his DAD.

INT. MAY'S ROOM - DAY

PHILIP knows MAY'S gone as he slips into her bedroom and
locks her door. His SECRET PLAN is to dress up like his
sister. He sits in front of her mirror and tries on base,
then a blue eyeshadow on his eyelids. It looks awful like he
has a bruise so he wipes it off and tries a blue-green
color. Following the eyeliner and mascara. Now he goes to
her closet and searches through the boxes for May's

22.

Halloween wig, which is red and long. He slips over her
flowered summer dress that smell like lavender perfume. Then
slips his feet into a tight pair of sandals. Pins the wig on
his head. Something's missing lipstick. He wears her rosy
pink lip gloss onto his mouth and enjoys admiring himself
that he looks just like her.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(SMILING)

There. I look just like May.

(SMACKS HIS MOUTH)

EXT. VANISH TO DIMENSION - DAY

By the time PHILIP arrived at the iron gate, he had blisters
forming around his feet. H lays MAY'S sweater on the gate to
distract the gate. He figured the gate must have a sensory
that only picks up female scent and thoughts. He laid his
hands on the bars and began to think girls thoughts.

All of a sudden this powerful feeling washes over him, as he
watches the green glow spread around him and then through
him. He felt like a brand new person, more self assured.
A Flash of bright lights, as he closed his eyes to the
blinding blare.

When he reopened his eyes, he was astounded and amazed at
the scenery. Gigantic flowers of every kind. He breathed in
the fragrance, as he glared at the sun, and different shades
of blue in the sky. What amazed him more was a rainbow. He
bent down and touched the soft dewy emerald grass.

23.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(EXCITED)

This is unbelievable! Yet, so
real this place of...
Paradise For Girls.

      (A VOICE)
(ECHOING)

There's a boy, here!

      (PHILIP)
(UNDER HIS BREATH)

Where in the world can I hide?

He runs and hides behind a gigantic sparkling rose, as he
touches the soft petal to peek around at his surrounding,
all the petals fall off the rose. He's breathing heavily
from fright as his eyes began to roam. His eyes become wide
as saucers a he see the ALIEN-CREATURES, mixed breed between
a snake head and a furry spider body. He's frightened as he
snuggles closer to the stem without any petals. He sees an
alien on the other side of the thick stem and becomes
petrified.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(WHISPERS)

Oh my God. No way!

He wishes he could click his feet together and disappear
like Dorthy did in the Wizard of OZ. A blue light beams on
something in the distance, it looked like a statue. He feels
a hot stinky breath of rotten eggs above his head, he's
terrified to look up. He holds his breath. A BEAT.

The ALIEN CREATURE finally gives up and turns away walking
on spider legs the opposite direction. PHILIP takes off
running as fast as his legs can carry him towards the statue
glowing in blue. When he gets there he catches his breath
and notices the statue is MISS IRA. She's wearing the EYE
AMULET around her neck. He runs his trembling hands over the
statue, trying to find a button or something so he can
escape from this frightening place. He gets this unknown
insight that tells him to touch the eye amulet. He lets his
fingers slowly roam the amulet. But then he fears that it
might bite him.

24.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(POKES AT THE EYE)

(SCREAMS) Ouch!

Pull his finger back.

      (EERIE VOICE)
(ANIMATED STATUE)

Whomever wants to leave?
Must be a girl...

CLOSE UP ANGLE PHILIP watched horrified as the statue became
animated as it opened its glowing purple eyes. It dawned on
him that the eye amulet could see him and knew he was a boy.
He takes off his glasses and closing his eye he concentrated
real hard on being a girl.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(WHISPERING FROM MAY'S SONG)

Another kind of me, another kind

of me...Another kind of me...

(PUSHING) The eye inward.

WIDE ANGLE PHILIP'S eyes widen as his jaw dropped. The EYE
closed around his finger as he started glowing a bright
orange. The EYE grew larger as he was being sucked through
the portal hole of the pupil. A whirlwind of fluorescent
colors of a whirlwind he screamed dizzily when he reached
the end of the darkened tunnel. He landed with a thud on the
hard ground right outside the iron gate.

It was dark outside as he picked up his glasses and took
May's sweater off the gate. (Sighing) with relief, he's
thankful he was back in his own world and heads for home.

INT. JUST GOT IN BED - NIGHT

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(SIGHED)

Woo...
Now that was one close
            (MORE)

25.

BROTHER (cont'd)
encounter. (falls asleep)

(DAD)
(TAPPING HIS SON'S ARM)

Wake up, Philip! Come on, wake up.
You have some explaining to do.

PHILIP tosses and turns as he hears his DAD in his sleep. He
slowly rolls his heavy glued eyelids open, His eyelashes
hurt so he rubs them. He sees his DAD with a shocked
expression. He sits up in bed and May's wig falls into his
lap. He forgot to change out of May's dress and wash his
face with the makeup. His face turns a scarlet red.

INT. PHILIP TELLS A LIE CONTINUED - DAY

PHILIP feels like he didn't get enough sleep. He fumbles
with May's wig in his lap thinking of a lie to tell his DAD,
to why he was dressed just like his daughter.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(EXPLAINING)

Dad...
This doesn't look like it seems to
be.

(He fumbles with May's wig.)

I mean, not the way you're
probably thinking it does.

PHILIP watches his DAD'S bushy eyebrow raise, he had his
arms folded across his chest. He seemed to be patient enough
to hear his story as he stared with curiosity.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(NERVOUS)

Okay. A couple of buddies of mine.
Well they super dared me to play
this prank on this guy. The guy
happens to have a major crush on
May.

(He rolled my eyes upward.)
            (MORE)

26.

            BROTHER (cont'd)

And I'm sure you know the rest and
that's why I'm dressed like May.

      (DAD)
(LAUGHING)

I remember doing that very same
thing when I was a teen. I guess
some things guys do never change.

(SMILING)

Go clean yourself up for school.

(Pointing a finger toward
bathroom.)

      (PHILIP)
(SIGHING HEADING FOR BATHROOM)

Hey, Dad... (Turning to face his
Dad)

Does May know about this?

He shakes the edge of the dress.

      (DAD)
(LAUGHS)

No, she doesn't know.

INT. MISS IRA AND THE EYE - DAY

PHILIP met PETER inside the hallway at school. PETER was
nervous and was fidgeting with his hands. PHILIP hands PETER
a pair of earplugs as they near the classroom of Miss Ira's.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Now, (WHISPERING)
wear these earplugs as soon as we
enter the classroom.

            (MORE)

27.

BROTHER (cont'd)
(NERVOUS) And whatever you do,
Peter. Do not make a move or a
sound. (HE GULPS)
Remember you're in a trance, so
don't blink or both of us will be
in big trouble.

PHILIP watched PETER put the earplugs in his ears as they
entered the classroom and walked silently to their desk and
took a seat. Roll call never came as they waited. But an
eerie song did.

BROTHER
(FOUR GIRLS)
(SANG)

Way beyond the universe of stars
from any human beings reach,
Into the galaxy of planets
Something's out there...
Something's waiting...
Something staring,
Something wants someone's breath
from afar, and that something
is from planet Mars.

PHILIP'S skin crawled with the chills as he really looked at
the four girls in his classroom. One was blond headed and
wore pigtails, second one in front roll had short butched
dark curly hair with green eyes. Third one, shoulder length
dirty blond hair with dark eyes. Fourth one, long black hair
that was straightened, dark chocolate completion, and dark
eyes.

PHILIP looks at the front desk MISS IRA is grinning. The Eye
around her neck is moving from side to side. It looked like
it was struggling to get free from the amulet it was molded
too. When it detached itself it floated as it grew larger.
It buzzed as it zoomed in on him like a camera lens.

PHILIP shrank in his chair, the eye zapped him with a red
laser beam, he started seeing triple vision as he looked
around the room. Noticing the four girls were gone.

His eyes tried to refocus as he stared at Miss Ira, but she
wasn't her young self. She was the thing, the old ancient
corpse.

She was walking down the aisle with a slow limp in her left
leg. Her bones clanking and her joints rattling, PHILIP

28.

pinched his nose when she leaned over his shoulder. He could
still smell the month old garbage as he closed his eyes real
tight.
He wanted to scream when he felt her long yellowish tongue
slime's his earlobe. He shivered horribly and kept his eyes
shut. All he could think of was please go away.

BULLY
(PETER)
(TINY FEARING VOICE)

Please...help me.
Help me....Philip.

PHILIP could hear poor Peter's cry, but could he save him.
Or should he save himself as he cringed lower in his chair.
He heard a loud CRUNCH, SNAP and POP! He slowly turned his
head and it was MISS IRA'S neck as she struggled with
PETER'S face in her bony hands. The loud wheezing noise
began as her tongue came slithering out like a snake with a
thick slimy plunger on the end.

PHILIP watched horrified as he saw PETER tight lipped as the
plunger landed on his mouth. His eyes were wide with fright
and his face was deathly white. He kept shrinking lower in
his chair.

PHILIP slowly legs wobbling from fear as he gathers courage
and strength. MISS IRA doesn't see him as he pushes her
sideways with all his strength.

MISS IRA was light as a feather from being bones as she
falls onto the floor and slides down the aisle of desks.
She's angry.
PHILIP hurries and grabs PETER'S hands and jerks him out of
the chair. PETER was in shock.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(YELLS)

Run Peter!

PETER sluggishly runs out of the room like in slow motion.
PHILIP was right behind him as he takes a look back in the
room. MISS IRA is getting up from the floor, her head starts
twisting around in circles, until it finally snaps back into
place.

29.

ALIEN TEACHER
(MISS IRA)
(FURIOUS)

I'll get you for this...
I will.

EXT. OUTSIDE THE SCHOOL - DAY

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Do you believe me, now.

      (PETER)
(QUIVERING)

I, I do. (kicking dirt)

But I want to know, how your going
to stop her.

      (PHILIP)
Wait a minute. She's after you,
not me.

(Frowning putting hands in
pocket.)

      (PETER)
(SMACKING GUM)

Oh, okay. I mean, how are we going
to stop her.

      (PHILIP)
Now, that's more like it.

      (PETER)
What if we grab that eye amulet
from around her neck?

      (PHILIP)
(SHAKING HEAD)

No that wouldn't be to bright. If
we did that Miss Ira wouldn't let
            (MORE)

30.

            BROTHER (cont'd)
us get that close. Or she would
definitely have those girls stop
us... (HESITATES)
And think what that creepy eye
would do to the one who touches
it. I mean, that eye does have a
life of its own. You know...

      (PETER)
(DISAPPOINTED)

And we don't have any organized
plan to attach her on her own
ground.

      (PHILIP)
No. Sure don't, not yet.

      (PETER)
What happened to those four girls
in the classroom?

      (PHILIP)
(THROWING HIS HANDS UP)

They disappeared to another world.

      (PETER)
(ROLLED EYES)

Now how do you know that.

      (PHILIP)
(GLANCING TOWARD TREES)

'Cause I've already been there.

      (PETER)
(SHAKING HEAD)

Uh, no way! Your just kidding.

      (PHILIP)
            (MORE)

31.

BROTHER (cont'd)
(SERIOUS)

Believe what you will.

INT. BACK INSIDE SCHOOL - DAY

PHILIP is in the hallway and PETER follows him in silence.
PHILIP sees his sister MAY she looked like a zombie just
standing there. He walks up to her she's just staring at a
wall.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
May. It's me.

      (MAY)
(ROBOT VOICE)

If it's me that you see...

(VOICE ECHOS THE HALL)
It's the eye of Miss Ira's!

PHILIP stood facing May mortified as she turns and walks
away. PETER is standing beside PHILIP.

BULLY
(PETER)
(GULPS LOUDLY)

She really scares me.

PETER and PHILIP split up to their next class.
PHILIP enters his science class he was feeling spooked. He
takes a seat and listens to his teacher MR. BURNFIRE who is
tall, built like a construction worker, head full of light
brown hair, muscular face with hazel eyes, looked around
forties.

            SCIENCE TEACHER
      (MR. BURNFIRE)
Excuse me.

(He stands next to Philip's desk.)

      (PHILIP)
            (MORE)

32.

SCIENCE TEACHER (cont'd)
(LOOKS UP)

Sorry.

He wasn't paying attention to
teacher.

(MR. BURNFIRE)
(NODS)

So class. This semester we will be
talking and writing about the
mysteries of UFO'S encounters.
And's we'll be discussing
sightings on old newspaper
clippings and researching
discovery books on them.

He walks slowly back to the front
of the class.

If you have any questions feel
free to raise your hands. Or if
you believe that there are really
UFO'S out there in the universe
somewhere? Just raise your hands.

A few STUDENTS raised there hands and the ones who didn't
were critics about UFO'S.

            JUST A KID
      (OUTBURST COMMENT)
My mom and dad says that peoples
imaginations running wild.
(LAUGHS)

      (KID #2)
Yeah, aliens never were here. It's
just made up by creative science
fiction writers. Like get
real...Mr. Burnfire.

      (KID #3)
(LAUGHS)

Get real...if I ever did see one,
I'd guess it'll make a believer
out of me.
            (MORE)

33.

JUST A KID (cont'd)

PHILIP nodded agreeing with the three kids, but it did
happen to him, and he did see aliens with his own eyes. And
it did make a believer out of him.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(WHISPERING)

Awesome, this is one cool teacher!

Philip shivered remembering the
extraterrestrial that he saw about
6 feet tall, and he knew if he
ever went back there, he would
have to bring PETER with him.

MALE TEACHER
(MR. BURNFIRE)
(POINTS TO A STUDENT)

Turn the light switch off, please.

The movie projector began.

EXT. AFTER SCHOOL - DAY

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(Meets PETER in schoolyard.)

Where's Mark?

      (PETER)
(Anxious)

I've looked everywhere for Mark
and I can't find him.

      (PHILIP)
Hey, maybe Mark got sick and had
to go home, earlier.

      (PETER)
(shaking his head)

            (MORE)

34.

            BROTHER (cont'd)
No, I already called his house and
his mom hasn't seen him.

(Peter pops a piece of gum in his
mouth and words bubbled out.)

So, do you think Miss Ira has him,
already?

      (PHILIP)
(concerned)

That is a possibility.

      (PETER)
Then what do we do? And what's the
plan.

      (PHILIP)
(smiles)

Maybe I should tell my DAD what's
going on?

Philip nods.

They walked to PHILIP'S house and PETER popped bubbles with
his gum.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
(Frowning)
Do you think your Dad will believe
us?

      (PHILIP)
I sure hope so, I mean I don't
know what else to do?

35.

INT. A PLAN - DAY

Once inside the house PHILIP leads PETER to the kitchen and
PETER sits in a wooden chair. PHILIP sees a note on the
counter picks it up and sits in a chair. PETER leans over
and reads the letter too. It reads: Sorry kids, I'm going to
be home late. Eat left overs in the frig. Love DAD. PETER
gives PHILIP a pat on the back.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
(DISAPPOINTED)

Well, don't feel bad. You can
always tell your Dad later.

      (PHILIP)
(SAD)

Yeah, I know. But late might mean
later.

      (PETER)
So, what are we going to do in the
meantime?

      (PHILIP)
(SHAKING HEAD)

You shouldn't have asked me that,
Peter.

(EYES ROLLING)
Follow me. We're going to plan B.

      (PETER)
Cool. What's the plan?

      (PHILIP)
(GRINNING)

We are going to dress up like
girls.

36.

PHILIP watches as PETER'S big grin dropped right off his
face. It turned so red PHILIP thought it would pop like a
balloon. They go inside of May's pink and white bedroom.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Come on, it's not that bad.

      (PETER)
(Exclaimed)

Oh yes it is! I'm not dressing as
no girl.

      (PHILIP)
(Nodding)

If you want to save, Mark.

(Pointing) Then you have too.

      (PETER)
(Pointing back)

No! Just your are!

      (PHILIP)
(Calmly)

Listen Peter, I'm not going to
that other world by myself this
time. I was really scared to death
when I went. (hesitates)
So I'm asking you right now. Do
you want to save Mark or not?

      (PETER)
Well yeah, I do...
But I don't like the idea about
the dressing code in your plan B.

      (PHILIP)
Trust me, I don't either.

37.

PHILIP locks May's door and walks to her chair and sits at
May's mirror, while PETER sits on May's pink ruffled bed.
PETER has a confused face as PHILIP watches in the mirror.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
(Disgusted)

I don't understand why do we have
to dress like a girl?

      (PHILIP)
(Arches a famous brow)

Well, the iron gate is the key to
the dimensional world. The gate
will let us through only if it
picks up a female scent and
thought of a girls mind. I'm
pretty sure, that's how it works.
(pauses)
I mean it did work for me dressed
like May and thinking like a girl.

(Philip applies mascara on his
lashes.)

See. That's why we have to decoy
ourselves as a girl.

      (PETER)
(Disgusted)

That is so disgusting! (jumps off
May's bed.)

      (PHILIP)
Look, it's the only way to pass
through the iron gate.

Philip slips on May's dress, wig
and sandals. He glances in the
mirror at himself.

      (PETER)
(Glares squinting)

You had better not ever tell a
            (MORE)

38.

BULLY (cont'd)
soul about this...(threatened)

(PHILIP)
(squeamish)

Trust me, I won't. (frowning)

WIDE SHOT EXT. DAY

PHILIP and PETER headed down the street to PETER'S house
which was a couple of blocks and through the creek. PETER
was walking fast leaving PHILIP in his trails. PHILIP had
the feeling that PETER didn't like him being May. When they
arrived at PETER'S House it was small white house trimmed in
blue.

INT. PETER'S HOUSE - DAY

The front room had a blue carpet and gold framed table, his
mom and dad weren't home, but PHILIP could see all the
family pictures everywhere throughout the hallway to PETER'S
Parents room. PETER's mom was old fashioned back in the
fifties, with the stripes blouses and checkered tight pants.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
I know what your thinking. My
mom's clothes never match.
Sometimes I think she's stuck in
1945 fashion, instead of the year
20th century.

      (PHILIP)
Well at least she has color
cordination. Right.

PETER hurried and threw on his mother's clothing, and her
slippers. He sat down at his mom's vanity mirror and tried
to put on cosmetics. PHILIP starts laughing, 'cause PETER
looks frustrated and angry, but he looks like a clown.
PHILIP grabs a wash cloth wipes PETER'S face and helps him
with the makeup.

            BROTHER
      (PETER)
Wow, you're really good with
makeup.

            (MORE)

39.

            BROTHER (cont'd)

      (PHILIP)
(SMILES)

Thanks I've had practice. You
don't even need to wear a wig,
with your short wavy hair.

      (PETER)
So, what do we do now?

      (PHILIP)
We're ready to go to Shallowed
Road.

      (PETER)
(HEADS OUR FRONT DOOR)

I'm more than ready. Let's go!

EXT. SHALLOWED ROAD AS GIRLS (SUN GOING DOWN) - DAY

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(WHISPERING)

You have to be quiet. (HIDING
behind a tree.)

      (PETER)
(WHISPERING BACK)

How come? (Standing behind
Philip)

      (PHILIP)
(POINTING TOWARDS THE GIRLS)

Now watch what happens to those
girls as they wrap their hands
around the bars.

40.

This time something different happened with the GIRLS. TINY
green SPRINKLES danced around the GIRLS heads, like tiny
RAINDROPS.

Both BOYS GAPS as a GIGANTIC GLOWING HAND snatches the GIRLS
away!

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Now it's our turn.

      (PETER)
(EYES WIDEN)

No I changed my mind.

(He shakes like a frozen
Popsicle.)

      (PHILIP)
Don't be scared.

PHILIP notices the wind blowing through the trees, yet the
wind wasn't blowing on him or PETER. Strange. He grabs
PETER'S hands and places them on the iron bars, and then his
own.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
Ready.

(He forgot to warn PETER.)

The gate BUZZED and SHOOK, PETER held on tightly. He had a
weird and disturbed face. The gate glowed RED.

BULLY
(PETER)
(FEARING)

What's happening to me?

Before PHILIP could answer PETER, the gate put off SPARKS,
as a Bolt of purple electricity ZAPPED through PETER.

PETER goes FLYING and lands a few feet away.

41.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(RUNNING)

Peter, are you, Okay?

      (PETER)
(MUTTERS)

Sort of...

PHILIP helps PETER to his feet, PETER feels wobbly as PHILIP
helps dust off PETER'S mothers clothing.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
I am so sorry.

      (PETER)
Sorry for what.

      (PHILIP)
(HONEST)

Well. For not warning you.

      (PETER)
(SURPRISED)

A warning!

      (PHILIP)
Yeah, about the electricity part.

      (PETER)
It's to late for that now. (PAUSE)

I guess I was being rejected.

      (PHILIP)
Yeah, you were. It happened to me
the first time, too.

42.

PETER pulls out a stick of bubble gum and sticks it in his
mouth. He hands over PHILIP a piece and PHILIP sticks it
into May's pocket for later.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(WARNING)

Now this time think like a girl,
Peter.

(Throwing May's sweater on the
gate for Peter.)

And now I'll give you a warning.
If you see an alien creature,
you'd better run for dear life!

      (PETER)
(NERVOUS)

Good warning. (WHISPERING)
You betcha, I'll run...

PHILIP and PETER concentrated on being girls with their
hands on the gate. A green glow came. Following the bright
blinding light.

PHILIP OPENS his eyes. GLANCES to see if PETER was beside
him.

EXT. INTO PARADISE FOR GIRLS - DAY

PHILIP GASP, PETER wasn't with him. Instead was a furry
alien creature with a snakelike head, with bulging green
eyes, and was breathing hot rotten eggs and dripping slime.

PHILIP was face to face with the ALIEN.

He wonders why PHILIP wasn't with him. Dawning on him it was
May's sweater he let PETER use. The gate had been confused
because PHILIP was the closes to May.

A VOICE
(MISS IRA'S)
(SHRILLING)

Get him...
Get that boy, now!

43.

His whole body was tensed, sweat beaded his forehead from
panic. Ducking his head just in time to see the snakelike
head swipe the top of his hair. He kept dodging around. But
he knew he couldn't keep this up much longer. He backs away,
his body all tingly and he runs like crazy with shaky legs.

EXT. MISS IRA'S AN ALIEN - DAY

PHILIP on the emerald grass he sees this gigantic purple
flower and hides behind it to catch his breath.

He feels something hot breathing down his back his hairs
stood straight on end. He's afraid to face it. It's hissing
close to his ear, he knows its an alien because the rotten
egg smell.

Cautiously, he tilts his head and his face turned to stone.
Miss Ira was and alien creature, her eyes were bulging,
round and green. He thinks that she must be the ancient
mother of all these aliens. And 'Paradise For Girls' was
just and illusion to trick the girls.

            ALIEN TEACHER
      (MISS IRA)
(Nods her snakelike head)

Now, I have you where I want you,
boy. (Hissing)
You might not be a big bully, but
are brave as well as smart.
(CACKLING)
I like that!

Her long yellowish tongue came
slithering out, as big drops of
melted goop splattered the ground.

      (PHILIP)
(Mutters)

Gross. (Slime slips off his ear)

      (MISS IRA)
You're not quite what I expected,
but you will do nicely.

PHILIP starts choking as he feels MISS IRA'S furry spidery

44.

legs wrap around his chest. He tries to struggle free, he
feels her slimy tongue with the plunger on the end. Inching
closer squirming like a snake toward his mouth. Who would
save him there was no one.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(BEGS)

No...
Please not me. (whispering)

PHILIP shakes his head and struggles from the plunger trying
to attach on his mouth. Frightened by the feel of
caterpillar legs that inched on his face, he knows he's
doomed if he doesn't get free. He feels her loosen her grip
on him by the plunger tongue close by his mouth. He
struggles one arm free and grabs the slippery slimy tongue.
He squeezes the tongue, she squeals as he freed his other
arm. He backs away still holding her tongue, they began to
play tug a war. MISS IRA moves forward. PHILIP pulls back
her tongue and lets go like a rubber band. MISS IRA screams
as she looses her balance falls backwards on the ground, her
tongue laying 6 feet beside her.

PHILIP takes off running, he past odd shaped flowers. Sweat
rolling off his face, the emerald grass he ran on, changed
to red sand. May's sandals he wore made him slip and slide,
and slowed him down.

PHILIP stops to catch his breath the air was hot. He gawks
up at the evening sky, two round moons glowed above. Then
they vanished and he was in the dark.

A loud scream echoed through the darkness. Amazed by an
octagon door glowed red magically before him. He shudders
from the chills and sweat.

45.

INT: INSIDE TUNNEL

PHILIP wonders if this octagon door is a trap, but he
figured there was no other place to go in the darkness.
Curiously, he knows this glowing door would take him
somewhere else. He hears a scream again. It comes from the
other side of the strange door. He has to jump through it,
it stands in midair about five feet.

PHILIP backs up and runs really fast and jumps. He bounces
back to the ground. The octagon door glowed orange like a
shield protecting itself from him entering. After four times
he was exhausted, he pushed himself to run like a runner and
jump like a basketball player, he made it as he went flying
through it.

PHILIP falls hard on the stoned ground on the other side of
the octagon door. He jumps up and rubs his elbows and knees
from the fall. The ECHOING SCREAM came from one of the
tunnels bathed in a dim blue light.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(His Voice Echos)

Which way do I go? (Confused)
Left or right...

He slowly walks to the left
tunnel, he hugs the wall. Eerie
blue shadows play on the wall.
Yet, he continues to head downward
on a slow level, and the tunnel
was getting slippery from built up
slime.

PHILIP slips on a slimy stone falling onto his back, he
slide straight down into the darkened hole. He screams as he
hits air.

Free falling, PHILIP lands on something springy as he
bounces briefly and grabs onto it. But then he was stuck and
a bright light comes on. He's terrified he's sitting in a
gigantic spider web. He wasn't alone, MISS IRA was there and
now she had PHILIP and MARK trapped in her web.

            ALIEN TEACHER
      (MISS IRA)
(HISSING)

Did you think that you could hide
            (MORE)

46.

            ALIEN TEACHER (cont'd)
from little old me? (Slides next
to PHILIP) Why, I think I'd
rather have a spirited boy
instead.

      (PHILIP)
No. Why me? (nods toward Mark
with a shaky head)
I thought you said you wanted a
bully.
(Shrugs)
Remember, he's the bully that you
wanted. I'm not a bully, but a
puny weakling boy.

      (MISS IRA)
(Cackling ruefully)

So you are! (Spitting goop on
Philip's face.

(Glares at Mark)

The bigger the better, the
stronger the power!

(She wraps her spidery legs around
Mark.)

      (MARK)
(Slim-ed head to foot)

Not me. (Pleading)
Please take him...

Mark's eyes were big as saucers.

PHILIP looks down and sees that the web is a long way up
from the ground beneath them. He sees big fluffy pillows on
the ground. So he starts struggling his hands to free
himself, so he could save Mark from Miss Ira.

All of a sudden...they hear a scream falling from above.
PETER was falling fast like a cannonball. From the weight of
PETER'S body he lands on top of MISS IRA and the web snaps,
everyone screams, but the fluffy pillows down below saves
their fall.

47.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Wow, this fall was cool!

      (PETER)
Yeah, thanks to these pillow
sacks. (GRINNING)
Or we could've been splattered.

      (MARK)
But one thing, guys. (He pointed
at the pillows)
These aren't fluffy pillows, they
are spider sacks.

The BOY'S struggled free as they jumped from the spider
sacks, they saw MISS IRA as she made an escape crawling
through an exit of the room. Giving them an evil eye for
landing on her precious spider sacks.

            2ND BULLY
      (MARK)
Hey, thanks for saving me, guys. I
was so terrified when she cornered
me in the hallway at school. Then
zapped me with that creepy eye,
and then I ended up here.

      (PHILIP)
So, have you seen any
extraterrestrials, yet?

      (MARK)
(HYSTERICAL)

I have! At first when she zapped
me here, I saw them and the first
thing that popped in my head was.
Am I in an episode with Captain
James T. Kirk from the USS
Enterprise.

      (PETER)
(DISAPPOINTED)

I haven't seen any yet.
            (MORE)

48.

            2ND BULLY (cont'd)

      (PHILIP)
(Scary voice)

Oh, but you will...

      (MARK)
(SMILING)
Nice dresses.

      (PHILIP)
Thanks for the compliment.

(Wondered when Mark would notice.)

Philip notices Peter was giving
him uncomfortable faces. Hey it
wasn't his fault that Mark would
see him dressed like a girl.

INT. GLOWING TUNNELS - DAY

The BOYS glanced around at the room full of twenty spider
sacks, the walls were dark red, seemed to have weird
inscriptions that filled the walls, they looked but couldn't
understand what alien messages it meant.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Hey, did you see the girls
anywhere?

      (PETER)
(SHAKES HEAD)
I haven't.

      (MARK)
(EYEBROWS KNITTED)
Uh, I didn't exactly see them, but
I did hear hear them singing
earlier, before Miss Ira trapped
me in her web.

      (PHILIP)
Then we have to find them,
immediately!
            (MORE)

49.

            BROTHER (cont'd)

Philip's hands gestured
everywhere.

      (MARK)
(FRANTICALLY)

We don't have time to save them.
We should save ourselves and get
out of this weird place.

      (PHILIP)
(SHAKING HEAD)

No, it's you that doesn't
understand. May is my sister, and
I'm not going to leave her here.
(Threw hands up in the air)
It's not going to help you by
saying no, Mark. You have no
choice in the matter 'cause were
stuck here.

      (MARK)
Let's leave him.

      (PETER)
Wait a minute. Philip is right,
Mark. (POINTS) He knows the way to
escape this place.

      (PHILIP)
Thank you.

      (MARK)
(Muffled something under his
breath.)

      (PHILIP)
What?

      (MARK)
Nothing.

50.

INT. INTO ANOTHER WEIRD ROOM - DAY

The BOYS followed the corner of the wall that Miss Ira had
went through. It was a tight squeeze through the passage,
PETER got stuck and had to level his belly. The more they
slowly walked the more it smelled, pinching thier noses when
a RED glowing light flashed above them. They entered in
another room.

2ND BULLY
(MARK)
(CRIED OUT)

Help! (As he hit the slippery
floor.

PHILIP and PETER kept thier balance or would've gone down
with MARK.

2ND BULLY
(MARK)
(DISGUSTED)

Gross... (He flung the gooey
substance at the room.

PHILIP and PETER gazed down at the substance and shaking
thier heads at one another. They smiled secretly, it was big
piles of spider droppings.

2ND BULLY
(MARK)
(FRUSTRATED)
Don't just stand there. (FROWNING)
Aren't you guys going to help me
up?

PHILIP and PETER grinning grabs Mark's arms and helps him to
his feet. MARK'S backside was smeared with stinky droppings.

The BOYS exit out of that room and enters a wider room. This
room has a yellow glow and there's writings on the wall.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(CURIOUS)

Wait a second... (Slides his hand
across the deep carvings on the
wall.)

      (PETER and MARK)
            (MORE)

51.

            BROTHER (cont'd)
(UNISON)

What's wrong? (They walk closer
to Philip and the wall.)

      (PHILIP)
This wall contains a message.

      (MARK)
(SARCASTIC)
Well, then read it!

      (PHILIP)
(BITTER)

I will...(He runs his hand slowly
over the inscription.)

(WHISPERS)
Or at least I'll try, too. (Trying
to make out the markings on the
dim lit wall.)

(DRAWS IN BREATH)
There's a shape of a spider, and a
shape of a snake. (GRIMACING)
A human figure and a spider
sack...
      (PETER)
What does that mean?

      (PHILIP)
(EXPLAINS)
Well from what I've gathered so
far. (Shrugging)
We already know Miss Ira's an
alien. So what I figure from
theses symbols on the wall. That
means it links to...Miss Ira to an
experimental breed.

PHILIP glances over to see PETER chewing his bubble gum fast
and loud. MARK was frightened but trying to hide the fear in
his eyes.

52.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
I don't understand. So, you think
that these alien creatures had
somehow created Miss Ira?

      (PHILIP)
(NODS)
Yes, that's what the wall is
saying.

Philip grabs Peter's hand and
trails it across the markings.

(EXPLAINING)
See, this is earth, and this is
the planet Mars. (He moves
Peter's hand over.)
Now this one is the human figure.
Now look...

(FEELING LIKE AN ARCHEOLOGY)
You can make out the shapes to
where the snake is connected to
the spider, and the human figure,
all in one inside the spider sack.

INT. BEHIND THE WALL - DAY

PHILIP felt PETER'S hand tremble beneath his as he tried to
explain the wall. PHILIP was scared too, and had that creepy
feeling as them.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(Continues)

Now see, these alien creatures had
created their very first mixed
breed experiment and it was Miss
Ira. I mean how else can she be
human, and yet be so ancient. A
creature all at the same time.

Philip pokes at the spider sack on
the wall.

The WALL slide open. The Boys eyes are wide and hearts
pounding in their chest.

53.

BULLY
(PETER)
(STAMMERING)
Oh...what is it? (He jerks Philip
in front of him.

There are two 6 feet alien creatures in a large room. PETER
is shivering from terror using PHILIP to protect him. The
ALIENS are hissing and wobbling their snake like heads.

BOYS sees the TWENTY GIRLS covered in spider sacks with
their heads sticking out and in a trance.

A loud shuffling of the door closes behind them. Trapping
the boys inside. MARK jumps and panics running around the
room. Aliens picking up his warmth and following him. MARK
dodges the aliens as bead of sweat drip down his face.

PETER stays still, yet trembling as sweat pours down his
chubby face. PHILIP knows both are attracting the aliens to
them.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(SHOUTING)
Mark! Stop moving and be quiet.
      (MARK)
(FRIGHTENED)

I can't I'm scared...

      (PHILIP)
(Shouts Back)

They have a snake brain, they
can't see you. So be still...

MARK froze. The two ALIENS snakelike faces were smoothing
the surface of MARK'S arms and chest. Probably peeing in his
pants, after a short PAUSE. The snakelike heads wobbled side
to side, sort of confused about no body movements.

Finally the ALIENS crawled on their spider legs to a wall on
the left and ONE of them pushed an invisible button on the
wall.

A triangle door opened, and the ALIENS glanced around once
more for body heat, before exiting.

The DOOR slide shut. The BOYS were trapped with TWENTY GIRLS
covered in spider sacks.

54.

The BOYS sunk up to the GIRLS studying them. They looked so
CREEPY with eyes staring back, but not seeing them, during
TRANSMUTATION.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
Is it to late to save the girls?

      (PHILIP)
I don't know. If it takes a month,
week or a few days or even just
hours?

      (MARK)
We should just save ourselves and
get out of here.

      (PHILIP)
No. It's not to late to save the
them.

      (PETER)
Yeah, we have to save them.
(Shrugging)
We have to at least try to set
them free.

      (PHILIP)
(NODDING)

You know what we have to do.

      (MARK)
(DISGUSTED)
Gross...That means we have to dig
those girls free, layer by layer.

      (PHILIP)
You got it!

The Boys didn't know how long it took them to dig through
the layers of the spider sacks to get to the girls. They
were exhausted, when they reached the thinnest layer.

55.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Who's going to be first to rip the
barrier to the girls?

      (MARK)
(GRIMACED)
You know what is in that last thin
layer. I'm not going to do it!

      (PHILIP)
(REMARKED)
So.

      (PETER)
Come on you, too. There's no time
for arguments right now. Let's
just rip the last layer off and
then find away to go home.

The BOYS stood there and fidgeting wondering which one would
begin to pull the last thin layer from the girls. PHILIP
reached into the sack and his hands were sticky. He felt
something wiggling from inside as he pulled the last layer
off. Chills swept his body.

Slimy and yellow goop poured onto the floor. A baby Snake
wiggled and squirmed covered in goop. A SPIDER slid to the
ground and crawled to a corner of a wall.

            2ND BULLY
      (MARK)
(PANICKING)
It's creepy...(Pointing at snake)
This whole dimension is really
creepy!

      (PETER)
(GROWLED)
Shut up, Mark! You know...
before you draw attention to those
alien creatures right outside this
room.

Peter put his finger to his mouth
and WHISPERED.

Then you will have something to be
whimpering about.

56.

INT. FAKE DIMENSION --DARKNESS - DAY

The GIRLS were free still covered in slime, still in a
trance.
When the LIGHT went out and the BOYS were in darkness.

ALIEN TEACHER
(MISS IRA)
(HER PIT PAT SOUNDS OF HER FEET)
Boy's...
I can see you in the darkness.

The BOYS closed their eyes holding their breath as they
leaned against the wall, and praying she wouldn't pick them
first as the victim.

ALIEN TEACHER
(MISS IRA)
(RASPY VOICE)

I'm getting closer...
Do you know what you did wrong?

The BOYS kept their mouths closed and they could smell her
stinky breath. MISS IRA was close to their faces, her
breathing came in short gasps. She was in her old ANCIENT
form.

            ALIEN TEACHER
      (MISS IRA)
(RASPY VOICE READING PHILIP'S
MIND)

That's correct, Philip. And why do
you think I need a bully's breath
for?

      (PHILIP)
(Stammered)

So...
So to stay young again.

Philip shivered from fright.

      (MISS IRA)
(CACKLING)

And this time I want you, Philip!

            (MORE)

57.

            ALIEN TEACHER (cont'd)
She hissed as goop hit Philip's
face.

      (PHILIP)
(FLINCHING)

But you said...(hesitating)
The bigger the better, the
stronger the power.

      (MISS IRA)
(HISSING FURIOUSLY)

I don't care about that now. I
have no time for nonsense. If I
don't get that breath of life once
a year...Then I will be doomed and
remain like this forever!

PHILIP watched fearfully as a red light RADIATED from MISS
IRA'S beady eyes as searched for movements into the
darkness.

A VOICE
(PETER OR MARK)
Run...

The BOYS ran as MISS IRA beamed her glowing eyes searching
for them. They could HEAR her neck snapping and crackling as
she aimed those flashlight eyes on them.

2ND BULLY
(MARK)
(SHOUTING)
Over here! I've found something.

PHILIP and PETER followed MARK'S echos in the darkness.
There was a tiny crack in a doorway, as it gave a sliver of
light and hope.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
Great...(Opening the door wider.)

The BOYS hurried and went through a narrow tunnel, stepping
on each others shoes. Coming to the end they saw light.

58.

EXT. SEEING STRANGE THINGS - DAY

Once outside the BOYS turned to face the exit of the tunnel.
It vanished before their eyes. MARK and PETER were amazed at
their surroundings of gigantic flowers, features of jungle
leaves, the two suns, hills, mountains. Everything was just
picture perfect.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
(ASTOUNDED)

This is beautiful...

      (PHILIP)
(SHRUGS)
I know...But unfortunately this is
only an illusion. (Gesturing)
This 'Paradise for Girls' is a
fake dimension of some kind to
fool the girls when they're
brought here.

      (MARK)
(TOUCHING THE GRASS)

Well, it feels pretty real to me.

      (PHILIP)
(SARCASTIC)
Well, if you think so.

      (PETER)
(ANXIOUS)
Hey, what about the girls? We left
them in such a hurry. We haven't
even rescued them yet.

      (PHILIP)
Don't worry, Peter. We did save
them. But now Miss Ira will use
them to stop us from leaving.

      (MARK)
(WORRIED)
Why does she need those girls,
anyways?
            (MORE)

59.

            BULLY (cont'd)

      (PHILIP)
It's a very simple question. She
needs those girls to be mutated
for the new world. You know..
(Hinting Philip glances at Peter.)
For the new generation of
mixed-breed aliens so they can
come to earth once a year and get
the breath of life from a bully.
(SCARY VOICE)
Beware...they want your breath of
life!

      (MARK)
(WARNING)
Stop it! (Glaring at Philip with
angry eyes.)
She wants your breath of life. Not
mine or Peter's. (Pointing at
Philip.)
Just yours!

      (PHILIP)
(ARGUED)
I think she doesn't know which one
she wants. (Furrowing brows)
I think she wants all three of us.

      (MARK)
(SURPRISED)
Well, (huffing)
Then we shouldn't have saved those
stupid girls.

While arguing they still walk not knowing where they are.

BULLY
(PETER)
Oh, yes we did! If we didn't save
those girls we would have had
twenty girls every year taking a
bullies breath, just so they can
stay young again.

The BOYS saw a splashing WATERFALL in a streaming lake about

60.

a mile ahead of them. They became really thirsty as they ran
toward it.

The SUN went down over a mountain, in its place two MOONS
glowed just a quickly.

EXT. CONTAMINATED LAKE - NIGHT

The BOYS stood beside the splashing water of the riverbank.
The water teased them to drink it.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
Boy, I sure am thirsty.

Peter licked his dry lips.

      (MARK)
I am too.

PHILIP and MARK watched in slow motion as PETER dropped to
his knees. CUPPING his hands he SCOOPED up a hand full of...

            BULLY
      (PETER)
(IN AGONY)

How disgusting!
What is this stuff?

Peter trying to shake the slimy
stuff which glued to his hands.

      (MARK)
Phooey...
It stinks like rotten fish.

      (PETER)
(ANGRY)
Don't rub it in. (Growling)
We all stink right now.

(Peter ask Philip again.)
What is this stuff flowing through
the stream?

Peter watching the thick bubbly
coated stream.

61.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(SHRUGS)
I don't know, exactly.

PHILIP glances at the two slivers of the moon. Out the
corner of his eye on other side of the lake, he saw an ALIEN
CREATURE slurping from the silvery reflection of the gooey
stream.

PHILIP'S socks felt like they rose past his knees.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(SCREAMS)
It's thier food supply!

The ALIEN CREATURE heard the SCREAM rearing its head from
the stream. It JUMPED into the stream stroking its spider
legs swimming toward them as its snakelike head wobbling
side to side.

PHILIP ran and didn't think PETER could run so fast. Mark
was behind PHILIP as they ran past plain fields, up small
hills, past the jungle with weird animal shapes of leaves.
They don't know how long they ran until MARK tripped on his
shoelaces and HIT the ground.

            2ND BULLY
      (MARK)
(BREATHING HEAVY)
I can't run anymore...

      (PETER)
(GASPING)
Miss Ira will get us. (Catches
breath)
If we stop running...

      (PHILIP)
(WINKS AT PETER)
Well, let's just leave him here.

      (MARK)
(FROWNING)
You guys are so cruel. I'm really
thirsty.

      (PHILIP)
            (MORE)

62.

2ND BULLY (cont'd)
We all are. (Stares a Peter.)
Hey Peter, what happened to the
bubble gum you were chewing on?

(PETER)
(EMBARRASSED)
I uh, I swallowed it, back there
in that room full of girls.

PHILIP remembers the gum he had in May's pocket. He grabs it
and halves the piece of gum for PETER and MARK.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Here you go. (Hands a piece to
Mark.

      (MARK)
(SMILING)
Thanks.

      (PHILIP)
Open. (Noticing Peter's stinky
hands)

Philip slips the gum into Peter's
mouth.

      (MARK)
(CURIOUS)
Do you really know how to leave
this place?

      (PETER)
Don't worry about it. Philip will
figure away out of here, he's done
it before, and he'll do it again.

      (PHILIP)
(GRINNING)
Thanks.

      (A VOICE)
Find them! Their here real
            (MORE)

63.

BROTHER (cont'd)
close...

The BOYS were tired of running, as they ran on wobbly legs.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(WHISPERING)
Over here. (POINTING to a
gigantic flower.)
We can hide right here behind it.

The BOYS hid behind a purple gigantic flower, they could
hear the GIRLS singing in the distance. PHILIP points as
they silently watch the girls by an old white statue.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(WHISPERING)
I remember this.

      (MARK)
(DEMANDED)
Remember what?

      (PHILIP)
The statue. (Whispering back)
There's an eye amulet around that
statue's neck.

      (MARK)
(SARCASTIC)
So...
What about it?

      (PHILIP)
Well for your info...
(SARCASTIC BACK)
That's how we can escape.

      (PETER)
Awesome...

      (MARK)
But how in the world are we going
to escape with all those girls
            (MORE)

64.

BROTHER (cont'd)
there?

(PHILIP)
That's easy. They will try to stop
us, but we won't let them.
(Gesturing)
Follow me.

Philip sneak behind a gigantic
weirdest looking plant. Bright and
orange it sort of looked like an
octopus.

EXT. ESCAPING OCTOPUS AND DIMENSION - NIGHT

The BOYS listened to the eerie voice of Miss Ira, speaking
through the animated statue. The GIRLS stood in a circle
sort of guarding it with their lives.

A VOICE
(MISS IRA)
(ECHOING ANGRY)
Do not let those boys escape
Paradise for Girls!

PHILIP listened to PETER and MARK gasp beside him. The
STATUE eyes OPENED, a red beam of light escaped from the
stoned pupils.

Horrible CHILLS spread through them.

            2ND BULLY
      (MARK)
(STUTTERING)
This is to real...To be true.
I mean I feel--like I'm in a
terrifying nightmare or something.

Mark pinches his arm.

      (PHILIP)
Believe me. (Whispering)
I know...

PHILIP was grossed out PETER was chewing his gum and biting
his already chewed up fingernails. MARK was busy studying
the bright orange OCTOPUS PLANT, touching the long orange

65.

leaves.

The OCTOPUS PLANT shook, it came to LIFE.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(SHOUTING)
Mark...You shouldn't have touched
it!

The BOYS couldn't run, the OCTOPUS had its leafy legs
wrapped tightly around their waist. It squeezed them, as it
pulled its roots from the ground. Orange leaves falling off
as it wobbled when it walked.

BOYS trying to struggle free when new ORANGE shaky legs with
snakelike heads on the ends started attaching them.

The BOYS dodging their faces from the snapping snakelike
heads.
MARK grabbed one and POPPED it like a BALLOON. PETER and
PHILIP grabbed the snakelike heads and began to POP them.
GREEN slime OOZED down their hands.

The OCTOPUS plant slowed down, dropped its hold on the BOYS
and went limp and fell to the ground.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
It's about time. Where do you
think it was taking us?

      (PHILIP)
Beats me...It's a mystery to me.

      (MARK)
Boy this slime is hard to get off.

He shook his hands and the slime
bounced back like a rubber ball.

It's some kind of rubber
substance.

      (PHILIP)
Sure enough.

He played with the rubber bounce
back slime.

            (MORE)

66.

            BULLY (cont'd)
      (MARK)
Look! (Cried)
The girls are coming.

      (PETER)
What are we going to do?

      (PHILIP)
It's time to play keep away tag.

The GIRLS charged at the BOYS. The BOYS, played like
football as they dodged, slid, pushed and shoved the GIRLS
as they ran closer to the statue. The GIRLS were right
behind them.

67.

            2ND BULLY
      (MARK)
(HYSTERICAL)
Now what?

Standing in front of the statue.
      (PHILIP)
Hand me your bubble gum. (Ordered)
And hurry!

He watches Peter hand him the gum
from his mouth.

FRANTICALLY
Now hurry, Mark.

He rolled the gum into a ball in
his hand. He stuck it on the pupil
of the eye amulet.

(ORDERED)
Think like a girl, Mark. And push
the eye!

      (MISS IRA'S VOICE)
(ECHOING)
You can't trick me this time
boys...I can still see you.

The statue came to life it was the
real head of Miss Ira.

(WICKED LAUGHTER)
I can see you from behind...

The BOYS turned around and the GIRLS were behind them.
SMIRKING. PHILIP notices the twenty girls are wearing EYE
AMULETS around their necks.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Hurry Mark, think like a girl and
push the eye.

      (MARK)
(TINY VOICE)
Okay...

He closed his eyes and pushed the
eye.

68.

PHILIP grabs MARK and PETER by the shoulders as the
whirlwind of colors swept them away. SCREAMING as they
vanished from Paradise for Girls.

They landed to the ground outside the GATE. PHILIP felt a
hand on his shoulder. He sighed as he saw MAY.

TWIN
(MAY)
(ROBOT VOICE)
I'll be watching you wherever you
go.
Beware of the eye of Miss Ira's.

PHILIP glared at this new stranger walking down the street
without him. Each day he knew MAY was becoming another kind
of person.

PHILIP waves to PETER and MARK as they head to their homes.

PHILIP heads slowly to his house with his head down. He went
to his bedroom LOCKED his door. JUMPED into his bed and fell
asleep.

INT. SECRET TO DAD (EARLY MORNING) - NIGHT

DAD
(MR. NAEDELL)
(ORDERING)

Open this door!

He was pounding on his son's door.

PHILIP hears his DAD and the pounding. He knows his DAD
sounds UPSET. PHILIP unlocks his door and STUMBLES back from
lack of sleep.

            DAD
      (MR. NAEDELL)
(STERNLY)
Do you have any clue to what time
it is?

He walks into his son's room.
      (PHILIP)
No. (MUMBLING)
Isn't it morning?
            (MORE)

69.

            DAD (cont'd)

      (DAD)
Well yes. (FROWNING)
But where were you all the way
until this morning?

      (PHILIP)
(SLEEPY)
I'm sorry, Dad. But May was out
all night too...you know.

      (DAD)
(ARCHING A BROW)
Oh well that explains a lot. At
least your sister left a note.

PHILIP jumps back into bed and covers himself up. His
bedroom was still dark so his DAD couldn't see him.

DAD
(MR. NAEDELL)
(SNIFFING THE ROOM)
What's that awful smell?

He turns on Philip's light switch.

PHILIP has a shocked expression from his DAD's reaction that
his son was dressed like his daughter, again.

DAD
(MR. NAEDELL)
(EYEBROW KNITTED)
Explain this to me, son? (Sits on
son's bed)

And don't leave anything out.

See's the slime and takes off
May's sandals from his son's
blistered feet.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(MUMBLES)

Miss Ira is my homeroom teacher
and she puts a spell over the
whole school. She has this creepy
            (MORE)

70.

            BROTHER (cont'd)
eye and she's a mutated alien
creature. Peter, Mark and me went
to another dimension and we got
slimed.

      (DAD)
You're trying to tell me that this
Miss Ira is from outer space?

      (PHILIP)
(Sleepy)
Yes.

      (DAD)
(SERIOUS)
Are you telling me the truth?

      (PHILIP)
(SERIOUS)
Dad. Yes I'm telling the
truth...See Miss Ira lives in this
two story house on Shallowed Road.
And that's where May's hanging out
at.

      (DAD)
So, what planet do you think Miss
Ira's from?

      (PHILIP)
Mars.

      (DAD)
Did you and your friends go to
Mars and get slimed by aliens?

      (PHILIP)
(CONFUSED)
No...
I mean yes. But I don't think it
was Mars. I'm so sleepy I can't
really think... Miss Ira isn't
human and May and nineteen other
girls who use to be plain as May
and wearing glasses are now
            (MORE)

71.

BROTHER (cont'd)
without. They wear this eye amulet
around their necks they got it
from the dimension.

Philip YAWNS and falls asleep.

INT. QUESTIONING MAY (MORNING) - DAY

PHILIP stumbled out of bed to his door, cracked it so he
could listen to May and his DAD's conversation.

            DAD
      (MR. NAEDELL)
That's a really beautiful
necklace, May. (Folding his arms
to his chest)
It looks like an antique.

      (MAY)
Thank you, daddy. It is an
antique.

      (DAD)
Who's the lucky guy?

      (MAY)
(CHARMING)
No, he's just a secret admirer. I
don't even know who he is.

      (PHILIP)
(WHISPERING)
That fiber.
He heads toward the bathroom to
get cleaned up for school.

      (DAD)
Here's a can of paint thinner and
a sponge to get that slime off
your body, son. (He sets the can
by the door.)
Don't get any around your eyes,
that stuff will fall right off.

      (PHILIP)
Okay, thanks dad.
            (MORE)

72.

DAD (cont'd)

Philip goes to the bathroom door
and opens it and grabs the can and
sponge. Cleans himself and hops
back into the shower.

PHILIP sits at the kitchen table and eats breakfast.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Thanks Dad.

Eats bacon and eggs.

      (DAD)
(CURIOUS)
What was the name of that place
you went too?

Drinking coffee.
Sitting at the table.

      (PHILIP)
(SORT OF CONFUSED)
Paradise for Girls. (He grabs his
backpack waves to his Dad.

      (DAD)
Bye son, have a nice day at
school.

Watching his son concerned from
out the window heading down the
street.

EXT. GIRLS WATCHING THEM - DAY

PHILIP passes Shallowed Road, no girls. Arriving at school
he meets PETER on the school steps. PETER was fidgeting, and
biting his nails.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
Hey.

            (MORE)

73.

            BULLY (cont'd)
      (PHILIP)
Hey, so what's up?

He notices Peter's hands are still
plastered with slime.

      (PETER)
(NERVOUS)
So, how did you get the slime off?

      (PHILIP)
My Dad gave me paint thinner.

      (PETER)
Mark and I used a brittle pad, as
you can see it didn't work.

(SIGHING)
So do you know what is going to
happen?

      (PHILIP)
(CALMLY)
My guess is as good as yours.
(Shrugging)
I don't know, but I'll figure
something out.

INT. INSIDE SCHOOL - DAY

PHILIP and PETER entered the school when they headed over to
MARK leaning against his locker.

They feel eyes watching them as they glance slowly around.

The GIRLS penetrating stares leaning against their lockers
wearing the eye amulets. Giving the BOYS creepy smiles on
their faces.

            2ND BULLY
      (MARK)
(SCARED)
Do you see, them?

He nudges Philip's arm.

            (MORE)

74.

            2ND BULLY (cont'd)

      (PHILIP)
(WHISPERS)
Yes. They're being that obvious.

      (PETER)
They want us to be afraid.

MARK'S eyes darted side to side as he headed to his class.
PHILIP and PETER rounded the corner to their class as they
entered, they felt like zombies. Glancing around as they sat
at their desk, it was just boys in the room.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Where are the girls?

He asked a boy across the isle.

      (A BOY)
Beats me. I was the first one here
and I haven't seen them, yet.

The boy shifted in his seat.

      (PHILIP)
(UNCOMFORTABLE)
This is getting really weird.

He faces Peter.

      (PETER)
(NODS)
Where do you think Miss Ira is?

      (PHILIP)
(ROLLS EYES)
You know, I don't know.

He notices Peter's eyes go wide.

PHILIP faces the front Miss Ira was in her chair. He felt

75.

frozen as the chills slowly crept his flesh.

MISS IRA had aged by ten years, deep wrinkles around her
eyes.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(WHISPERS)

Don't worry, Peter. I won't let
her get us. Okay.

He gawks at PETER with pale face.

      (PETER)
(MOUTHS WORD)

Okay.

Looks like he wants to bolt out of
chair.

      (GIRLS VOICE)
(GIRLS APPEARED)
You can't hide from me...(UNISON)
You can't escape from Miss Ira's
eye...

The Girls repeated over again,
until bell rang.

INT. SCIENCE CLASS - DAY

PHILIP enters his science class and he follows MR.BURNFIRE'S
eyes as he roams to six GIRLS in his classroom with the same
identical eye amulets. MR. BURNFIRE was studying them with a
weird expression.

            SCIENCE TEACHER
      (MR. BURNFIRE)
(REASSURING SMILE)
Okay, class. (Clapping his hands)
Today I want all of you to do a
writing assignment in class about
UFO'S encounters. It can be
fiction or nonfiction. Maybe a
story about a family or friend who
seen a UFO or not or just write
about the movie we watched
yesterday.

            (MORE)

76.

            SCIENCE TEACHER (cont'd)

      (PHILIP)
(RAISING HAND)
Do we have to do a reading in
front of the class when were
through?

      (MR. BURNFIRE)
(LAUGHED)
No. Not at all, these stories will
be confidential. I assure all of
you.

EVERYONE took out notebook and pen and began writing their
assignment.

PHILIP felt someone looking over his shoulder. Glancing up
it was MR. BURNFIRE.

The Bell rang PHILIP smiles and hands MR. BURNFIRE his ten
page assignment.

EXT. AFTER SCHOOL - DAY

PHILIP sees the dark storm clouds, the wind is blowing
really hard. He's looking for PETER and MARK out in the
school yard.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(SEES PETER and MARK)
Wait up! (Runs toward them.)

      (PETER)
(GAZING AT THE TREES)
What's going on with the weather?

(CONFUSED)
I mean I've never seen the wind
blow from all directions before.
It sort of looks like the wind is
confused or something.

      (PHILIP)
Yeah, it's pretty weird.

(Looking at Peter's short way hair
shifting with the wind.)

            (MORE)

77.

            BROTHER (cont'd)
From the looks of the wind, I
think this is the night Miss Ira
strikes...

      (PETER)
(SERIOUS)
What do you mean by that?

      (PHILIP)
Well, you've seen the way Miss Ira
has aged about ten years, right.

He puts his hand in his pocket.

      (PETER)
Yeah. (Shrugs)
So...

      (PHILIP)
(CONCERN)
That means she needs one of us,
this night.

      (PETER)
(NERVOUS)
Or all of us?

      (MARK)
(TREMBLING)
You don't think she's going to
come to our houses tonight.
(SIGHS)
Do you?

      (PHILIP)
(GUESSING)
It's possible. But I doubt it.

      (PETER)
(FROWNING)
But how do you know for sure this
is the night, Philip?

      (MARK)
            (MORE)

78.

            BROTHER (cont'd)
(SUSPICIOUS)
Yeah that's right...(Eyeballing
Philip)
How does he know? Is he hiding
something from us that he knows
about?

      (PETER)
(THINKING)
Of course....

He stiffens.

Yeah what do you know?

      (PHILIP)
(POINTING TO CLOUDS)
Do you see that full moon and
notice how the dark clouds are
undisturbed by it.

      (PETER)
(CURIOUS)
Yeah...

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
It's very rare to see something
like this. Especially in the
daytime.

      (MARK)
(INTERRUPTING)
That's doesn't prove anything.
(FROWNING)
So what if the clouds aren't
disturbing the moon, what's all
this about?

      (PHILIP)
(FOLDING HIS ARMS)
Oh, but it does. Remember when I
translated the inscription on the
wall. (hesitating)
Well I didn't want to scare you I
only describe what she had become,
            (MORE)

79.

            BROTHER (cont'd)
but not how she had to stay alive.

      (MARK)
(AGITATED)
I told you, Peter. (Tightening his
fists into balls.)
That he was hiding the rest of the
truth from us...

      (PHILIP)
Hey, I'm sorry, guys. (shrugs)
But this is really scary stuff.
Miss Ira was playing around with
us. (Sighing)
She really didn't need our breath
of life, before. She was just
testing to see how strong we
really are. (Hesitating and
frowning)
I think this is the night for her
to find a life to stay alive.
There's a full moon and a storm.
(Pointing)
She has aged by ten years, and
needs her beauty to stay young
again is finding a bully. Just
think if she doesn't get her
breath of life tonight?

      (PETER)
She'd be forever in her old
ancient form. (Shivered.)

      (MARK)
I think she'd die and crumble to
pieces.

      (PHILIP)
(NODS)
So do I.

      (PETER)
Do you think it would be all right
if we came over to your house?

      (PHILIP)
            (MORE)

80.

BROTHER (cont'd)
Sure. (GRINNING)
But we'd better hurry, then.

He points to the sky overhead.

Big raindrops pour from the darkened sky, the BOYS are
running as a the thunder roared...A gigantic bolt of
lightening strikes down. Hitting a branch right in front of
them, as they jump back from fright.

THEY make it to PHILIP'S house as they enter soaked from
head to foot.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(SHOUTING)
Run...
Run faster!

INT. MAY WAS FRIGHTENING - DAY

MR. NAEDELL handing towels to the BOYS when they entered.
The BOYS went into the kitchen and sat down in the chairs.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Is May here?

He dried his hair with the towel.

      (DAD)
(LOW VOICE)
She's in her room singing this
really strange song. (Running his
hand through his hair.)
I don't get it. May has never
ignored me, before.

He frowns worried expression.

      (PHILIP)
(SERIOUS)
I told you Dad, things are going
to get a lot more creeper than
this.

He watched his Dad nod.

      (DAD)
            (MORE)

81.

BROTHER (cont'd)
(PHONE RINGING)

Excuse for a moment kids.

Pulling the cellular from his
jacket and leaving the kitchen.

So it's true the whole incident.
(hesitates.)
Okay, remember what I said, and we
will be ready to...

He notices his son was ease
dropping and hung up the phone.
Walks back to the kitchen.

Hey, its been nice meeting you
boys, but I have an emergency.
Something important just came up
and I have to go check it out.

Slips on raincoat and rubber
boots. Grabbed his keys. Turns
around to Philip.

Oh, by the way. I left a small box
in your room.

Goes out the door.

The BOYS watched MR. NAEDELL back out of the driveway from
the kitchen window. PHILIP waved to his friends to follow
him as they walked down the hallway.

The BOYS stops. MAY was singing.

TWIN
(MAY)
(SINGING)
The moon is glowing like a pearl
in the darkened stormy night,
it's almost time for Miss Ira,
to say her sweet, sweet
goodbyes...

She went silent.

PHILIP looked at MARK and PETER and put his finger to his
mouth for them be quiet.

MAY knew they were ease dropping outside her closed door.

82.

TWIN
(MAY)
(CACKLING)
I know you, boys...are out there.
Don't you know it's rude to be
ease dropping. (PAUSES)
But really do you think you can
stop me this night?

PHILIP tiptoes softly to his bedroom with MARK and PETER
behind him. LOCKING his door he found the small box on his
bed. It was his contact lens.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
You know your Dad seemed to be
hiding something from you, before
he left.

He sat on Philip's bed.

      (PHILIP)
Oh, I know...(shrugs)
I overheard his end of the
conversation.

      (PETER)
So he knows.

      (PHILIP)
I think he does.

      (MARK)
Hey... (Feeling calmer.)
I just heard the front door slam.

      (PHILIP)
Great. Follow me, I'm ready for
plan C.

He unlocks his bedroom and they
head down the hall.

      (PETER)
Philip, aren't we suppose to dress
up like girls?

            (MORE)

83.

BULLY (cont'd)

(PHILIP)
Not this time, I figured since
Mark passed through the portal
whole just by thinking like a
girl. There's no need for it.

INT. GARAGE - NIGHT

PHILIP goes inside garage, flips on light switch. MARK and
PETER looks around at all the stuffed boxes.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
What are we looking for?

      (PHILIP)
Two gallons of insect spray.
(Rummaging through boxes and
behind pictures.)

I should have them here,
somewhere.

      (PETER)
I found them.

He picks up tow plastic containers
that has a sprayer rod on the end.

      (PHILIP)
Cool.

Walking over to Peter and Mark at
the end of the garage.

      (PETER)
This is awesome. We're going to
power blast those alien-creatures.

      (PHILIP)
Hey, it's pouring outside.

He walks over to a box that has
COATS written on it. He pulls out
several large sized raincoats with
hoods. Hands them to Mark and
            (MORE)

84.

            BULLY (cont'd)
Peter as they slip them on.

(GRIM SMILE)
Are we ready?

      (PETER)
(ANXIOUS)
I sure am!

      (MARK)
(NERVOUS)
Me too, I guess.

EXT. BEWARE OF MISS IRA - DAY

The BOYS headed down to Shallowed Road, they hear the
frightening roar of thunder, rustling leaves, branches
breaking and see lightening.Strong whispering winds saying
beware of this night as they run with flapping raincoats.

The two story house was glowing with lights, as they came up
to the iron gate.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
(ASTOUNDED)
The gate...it's wide open!

      (MARK)
(SARCASTIC)
Oh, that's fantastic.

He fidgeted with his hands.

      (PHILIP)
Don't you dare bail out on us. I
know your scared, but so are we.
(hesitates looking at the house)
But we have to do this, we have to
save our own life.

      (PETER)
(POPS GUM INTO MOUTH)
(MUMBLES)
Cause if if you don't help...Well
then.

            (MORE)

85.

            BULLY (cont'd)
He makes a fist.

      (MARK)
Oh, Okay. I'll help.

      (PHILIP)
Ready.

      (PETER)
More than ready!

Picking both gallons of insect
spray, hands one to Mark. Sees
Philip giving him a look.

Hey, don't look at me like that.
Like I said I'm more than ready to
power blast those creatures back
to outer space!

      (MARK)
(SHIVERS IN THE DOWN POUR)
This weather is so haunting. It
reminds me of Halloween night.

      (PHILIP)
(NODS)
Yeah, it's pretty spooky all
right.

      (PETER)
Come on. We've wasted enough time.
Let's go save those girls!

The BOYS marched through the gate and up the slippery
sloping hill to the HOUSE. It was still storming and the
BOYS slipped several time.

The HOUSE loomed over them as if in a science fiction
fairytale.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
Wow! Look at that huge front door.

      (MARK)
            (MORE)

86.

            BULLY (cont'd)
What are those glowing triangles
doing rotating in a zigzag pattern
on the door.

      (PHILIP)
It's some kind of code.

He studies the colorful blinking
musical patterns.

      (MARK)
(IRRITATED)
How do we open this door?

      (PHILIP)
(AGGRAVATED)
Hold on. I'm trying to figure it
out. (SIGHS)
I think if we push the rotating
small triangles it might open the
door for us.

      (PETER)
But what if we push the wrong
triangle and it zaps us?

      (PHILIP)
Not this time, Peter. If it
doesn't work we'll try the larger
triangles.

      (PETER)
Okay, just tell us when.

      (PHILIP)
Remember just the small triangles.
(paused)
Now!

BOYS pushed at the same time on the glowing triangles.
The DOOR sucked them through like an under water current.
BOYS held their breaths.

Inside the HOUSE Christmas lights blinked in the room. BOYS
sneezed, as they saw cobwebs and dust hanging on the walls

87.

and the wooden floor.

PHILIP notices a dusty picture hanging on the wall. He dust
it off with his hand.

            BULLY
      (PETER)
What's that?

Scaring Philip as he jumps.

      (PHILIP)
It's Miss Ira when she was about
May's age. I think it was her last
picture, before she had been
abducted by those alien creatures.

      (MARK)
She's really pretty.

      (PHILIP)
I wonder how old this real
painting is?

      (PETER)
(POINTING AT PICTURE)
Well maybe the clothing will tell
us what century, she'd been
abducted?

      (MARK)
Not actually, but close.

      (PHILIP)
Definitely from 1600 or something.
(SIGHING)
Who cares?

Strange foggy odor drifts from wooden stairs, the BOYS taste
it in their mouth. PHILIP drops the picture. Heads up the
stairs with Mark and Peter behind him. PETER'S foot went
through rotted step.

            ALIEN TEACHER
      (MISS IRA)
(VOICE)
            (MORE)

88.

            ALIEN TEACHER (cont'd)
I've been waiting for
you...(Squealing)
Come on up I have a wonderful
surprise waiting--just for you!

Cackling, wheezing and coughing.

      (PHILIP)
(SHIVERED)
Don't be afraid...

He keeps climbing quietly.

      (MARK)
(QUIVERED)
She...she knows our plan.

      (PETER)
How? (SHRUGS)

      (PHILIP)
(WHISPERS)
Well, she has her plan and we have
ours, but she doesn't know how
ours ends.

Pointing to the power blasters as
they stood on top of the
staircase.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(WHISPER)
Turn the knob.

He stood by the first door.

      (PETER)
(BARELY WHISPER)
No way.

      (MARK)
(SHAKING HEAD MOUTHING)
Don't look at me.

Lifts up power blaster.
            (MORE)

89.

BROTHER (cont'd)

(PHILIP)
Okay. (MOUTHING WORDS)
Be that way.

He turns the knob slowly, opens
door.

It's empty.

PHILIP tried several more doors each time empty. They came
to a door by a window at the end of hall. Voices heard
faintly from inside.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Hand twitching as he turn the
knob.

(MOUTHING)
Be ready...

Swings door open. Peter and Mark
jumps in front of door and starts
spraying everything.

(WHISPERS)
Wait, there's no one in here.

      (PETER)
(EXCITED)
This is awesome! I've never seen a
real spacecraft before. He drops
his power blaster to the floor.

      (MARK)
(FASCINATED)
It is amazing. Look at all those
blinking lights on the panel. We
must be in the control room.

      (PETER)
(WONDERMENT)
So where not in the two story
house after all?

            (MORE)

90.

            BROTHER (cont'd)
      (PHILIP)
(SHAKES HEAD)
No...that means we never went to
the dimension of Paradise for
Girls, either. (Pauses)
It was just a big illusion.

      (MARK)
(GASPS)
We were right here inside this
spacecraft the whole time. (SIGHS)
Unbelievable.

The GIRLS appeared all twenty holding hands in a circle. The
BOYS were inside circle when MISS IRA the ancient form
appeared.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(SCREAMS)
It's a trap!

He hears Mark and Peter screams
from fright.

MISS IRA has no hair, empty eye sockets, her bones were
rotten.
TRANSFORMING from alien creature, to ancient old skeleton
and back to herself.

ALIEN TEACHER
(MISS IRA)
(RASPY VOICE)
I got all three of you now!
(CACKLING)
Did you think you could really
surprise little old me? (HISSING)

She danced swirling, twirling in
circles, hands swaying sort of
snakelike.

The BOYS shook their heads, shivering, paralyzed.

            ALIEN TEACHER
      (MISS IRA)
(ENJOYMENT)
I knew about your plan before you
did. (DANCING)
I can see that you brought your
            (MORE)

91.

            ALIEN TEACHER (cont'd)
plan C with you, Philip. (HISSING)
Did you not remember that I can
read your mind? I can read all
your minds!

Cackling she bent over and kissed
Philip with slime.

      (PHILIP)
(CRINGING)
Yuck!

Wiping the slime with his
raincoat.

      (MISS IRA)
(GRINNING SLIMY TEETH)
Oh, Philip, you have came along
way from the weakling boy which I
knew in class. (WRAPS BONY ARM
AROUND HIM)
Why your not even a weakling
anymore. (GROWLS)
Your a bully just as they are!

Points to Mark and Peter.
(ORDERS)
Take them away to the spider room!

She vanishes.

GIRLS grabs the BOYS. BOYS struggles and pushes the GIRLS.
PETER steps on a girl's toe. SHE screams. MARK and PETER
starts stepping on toes.

            2ND BULLY
      (MARK)
(SHOUTS)
I got a necklace!

      (PHILIP)
(SHOUTS BACK)
RUN!

He runs with a necklace.

PHILIP loses PETER and MARK as he runs down a narrow slimy

92.

tunnel that changed colors as he past. It shifted as a maze.
MAY pops up, PHILIP runs back the way he came. Finding a
dark grubby hole, he crawls in.

A VOICE
(MISS IRA)
(HISSING)
SSSSSSSS...

PHILIP shivers in the dark, he smells rotten eggs. A pair of
beady red eyes looms like a flashlight in the small room.
Fear paralyzed him, face to face with MISS IRA and a room
full of baby wiggling snakes slithering across his hands.

ALIEN TEACHER
(MISS IRA)
You cannot escape me! (giggling
and hissing)
I got you where I want you...

PHILIP fears snakes as he squeezes the eye amulet in his
hand. Blue light glows around him. He VANISHES and he looks
around he's in the control room.

            1
      (ALIEN CREATURE)
(HISSING)
It's time...(wobbling over to the
control panel)

      (2 Alien Creature)
(HISSING BACK)
And I feel a warm blooded human in
the control room...

Both Aliens aimed snakelike head
toward Philip.

He's here! (HISSING LOUDER)

      (1 ALIEN CREATURE)
Let's start the spacecraft.

Pushing musical colored gadgets.

PHILIP hid in a corner breathing hard, he was deciding if he
should push the eye amulet.
The ALIENS after starting the ship, made tip, tapping sounds
as they headed toward him. Big drops of gooey slime from
their mouths hit the floor and bubbled and sizzled.

93.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Something touched Philip's
shoulder.

(SCREAMS)
AHHHH.......

      (MARK)
(CUPS PHILIP'S SCREAM WITH HANDS)
Shhh, it's me.

      (PHILIP)
(WHISPERING)
There's no way out of here.

      (MARK)
Yes, there is. There's always away
out.

The Boys stepped further away from
the silvery wall.

      (PETER)
Sneaked up to Philip and Mark.
They jumped!

(WHISPERING)
One of these glowing objects on
the wall, is our way out.

      (PHILIP)
(HYSTERICAL)
Then let's push them all.

All three BOYS pushed glowing objects. When the door slid
open, MARK and PETER grabbed their power blasters, and ran
down the stairs.

            ALIEN TEACHER
      (MISS IRA)
(SHOUTING)
Not so fast!

Coming up stairs with limp, and
spider-head and corpse body.

(RASPY)
            (MORE)

94.

            ALIEN TEACHER (cont'd)
You boys aren't going anywhere.

      (THE GIRLS)
(UNISON)
We're coming to get you...were
coming to get you.

As they came from out of the
rooms.

      (PHILIP)
It's time.

Glancing at insect spray.

      (PETER)
(WHISPER)
Ready.

      (MARK)
More than ready.

PETER and MARK sprayed the power blasters at MISS IRA. Her
corpse body transformed into a spider and jumped off the top
of stairs.
Two ALIEN CREATURES from control room sneaking up on the
BOYS.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(YELLS)
Spray the alien creatures behind
us!

      (MARK)
What about the girls?

      (PHILIP)
We can't spray the girls. Were
going to have to snatch all their
eye amulets.

95.

A loud Buzzing noise vibrated the HOUSE, the walls shook,
the BOYS tried to keep their balance.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(VOICE VIBRATING)
Oh my God, the spacecraft is ready
to take off into outer space!

      (PETER)
(SHOUTING)
Yeah, with us aboard it!

      (MARK)
We have to get out of here. Now!

      (PHILIP)
We can't. We can't leave without
those girls.

      (MARK)
(ARGUE)
Yes we can?

      (PHILIP)
(YELLED)
No where not..
Not without my sister.

      (MARK)
(FRUSTRATED)
Then what are we suppose to do
with them?

      (PHILIP)
Grab their necklaces, and gather
the girls downstairs and line them
up. (PAUSES)
And please, make them all hold
hands.

PETER and MARK takes the eye amulets and gathers the girls
downstairs.
PHILIP rounds the corner behind the stairs, MISS IRA has his
sister.

96.

A VOICE
(MISS IRA)
(RASPY)
Act as you did before I met you.
And bring your brother to me.

PHILIP waits for MAY to round the corner as he snatches her
eye amulet, grabs her elbow and heads to the others. The
HOUSE starts shifting, the kids try to keep balance, some
feet getting stepped on.
PHILIP uses ten fingers pressing orange large triangles on
door.

EXT. MISS IRA TURNS TO DUST - NIGHT

TWENTY-THREE kids were beamed outside the spacecraft. The
GIRLS could barely see without their glasses, it was hard to
walk through the deep mud.

            TWIN
      (MAY)
What's going on?

Touching Philip's shoulder.

      (PHILIP)
(JUMPS)
You were abducted.

      (MR. NAEDELL AND
       CREW)
(SHOUTING)
RUN! (REPEATEDLY)

PHILIP notices the iron gate was closed, the invisible
shield was keeping DAD and military from entering. PHILIP
and KIDS starts running down the sloping hill. The HOUSE
BUZZED as they glance back.

UFO spinning five feet off ground, lights blinking. Odd
looking creepy eye in the center, and a real bulging eyeball
on the top moving around watching them.

THEY keep running down hill, slipping through the mud as
they head for the iron gate.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(SHOUTS)
Okay, girls, Peter and Mark you
            (MORE)

97.

BROTHER (cont'd)
know what to do put your hands on
the gate and think like girls.

TWENTY-THREE kids were zapped on the other side of gate.
PHILIP felt something wasn't right. He glanced beside him
and screamed.
MISS IRA grabbed his shoulder. She was ancient old, her bony
nose fell off, her rotted teeth shattered like procelain.

            ALIEN TEACHER
      (MISS IRA)
(RASPY HISS)
Look what you have done to me!

      (PHILIP)
(DISGUSTED)
Your gross...

      (MISS IRA)
Here I am falling to pieces before
you. (POINTING A FINGER)
And it's all your fault! (HISSING)
It's not over until it's truly
over. I will get you, Philip. I
will!

Her jawbone cracked and crumbled
to the ground.

      (PHILIP)
No, it's over this time...

Shaky hand he jerks the eye amulet
from her neck.

PHILIP watches as MISS IRA aged to color of mummified bones,
she deteriorated to a pile of dust, as her ashes blew with
the wind.
EVERYONE was cheering for PHILIP. He waved and grinned back
bravely at the crowd.

CROWD starts screaming and pointing with frightened looks.

PHILIP glances to the spacecraft he fears the gigantic
glowing hand in red as it escapes from the bulging eye. It
flows his way. PHILIP panic's with terror in his eyes.

98.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(FRIGHTENED)
Ohhhh....Oh my God!
      (EVERYONE YELLING)
Run, Philip...Run!
      (MR. BURNFIRE)
(SHOUTING)
Hurry, run...

Dressed in military uniform.

PHILIP runs down the muddy dirt road, he looks back at the
glowing hand that's after him. He trips on the big branch
from lightening earlier. He falls, rolls on his back.

GLOWING HAND stops above him in midair. It looms over his
body.
PHILIP trembles as he puts both hands up shakily to ward it
off.

IT closes two ghostly fingers and reaches for the eye amulet
in PHILIP'S shaky hand. PHILIP screams.

GHOSTLY HAND with eye amulet swiftly flows back to the
bulging eye and slips back in.

PHILIP sighs relief and wonders why didn't the ghostly hand
take back the eye amulets from PETER and MARK.

BROTHER
(PHILIP)
(WHISPERS)
The ghostly hand only took back
Miss Ira's amulet because it has
full supernatural powers to
control all the other eyes.

AFTER the spacecraft took off into the night sky. PHILIP
gets up and runs to his DAD. DAD hugs his trembling son.

            DAD
      (MR. NAEDELL)
Are you, okay?

Looking at frightened son.

      (PHILIP)
(TREMBLING)
Honestly Dad. No.

            (MORE)

99.

            DAD (cont'd)

      (DAD)
(CONCERNED)
Well, son. (Patting Philip on his
back.)
You don't have to be scared
anymore. I'm positive they won't
be back.

(CHUCKLES)
I mean not in our lifetime.

      (PHILIP)
(FROWNING)
But Dad, they will be back. It's
not over yet.

      (MAY)
(JOINS PHILIP AND DAD)
Good job, Philip. (Pats Philip on
back)
That was one close encounter for
you.

PHILIP confused about MAY. HE smiles at MAY.
MAY winks and its evil.
MR. BURNFIRE joins them.

            SCIENCE TEACHER
      (MR. BURNFIRE)
(SHAKES Mr. NAEDELL'S HAND)
Well it looks like this case is
closed. (SHRUGS)
I guess I don't need to be a
science teacher at the school.

(He faces Philip.)
Oh by the way, that was one
terrific UFO report. (WINKS)
You and your buddies did one fine
job on solving a real UFO case.

      (PHILIP)
(MUTTERS)
Thanks.

100.

PHILIP walks away and heads toward PETER and MARK standing
by a tree.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Hey guys, do you still have the
eye amulets?

Philip looks at Mark glancing at
Peter.

      (PETER)
(Whispering)
Yeah, there hidden in this
raincoat.

He points to the pocket.

      (PHILIP)
Are they all there?

      (PETER)
I think so. (Shrugs)
Except for the glowing hand that
snatched the one you had.

      (MARK)
So, are we suppose to hand these
amulets over to your Dad? You
know... (shrugs)
For top secret evidence.

      (PHILIP)
I haven't decided yet. May isn't
acting like herself. And I'm
getting really bad chills when she
looks at me.

(Looks around curiously)
Maybe, I'm over exerting myself
from all this weird stuff that's
been happening?

      (MARK)
            (MORE)

101.

            BROTHER (cont'd)
Then that's more than enough
reason to give those amulets to
your Dad.
(WORRIED)
Just in case she tries to sneak
them from us.

      (PHILIP)
(NODS)
Okay, Peter go ahead and count the
amulets.

(POINTING)
Make sure you have exactly twenty.

      (PETER)
(GRUMBLES)
Are you crazy? How am I going to
count them in the dark..(Pauses)
I mean, not in less I have to
expose them by taking them out of
the raincoat.
(SIGHS)
Everyone will see them.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
(HITS HIS FOREHEAD)
Okay, your right...
      (PETER)
(POINTS)
Your sister's coming!
      (PHILIP)
(NERVOUS)
She sure is...(Sighs)

MAY joins the BOYS and CHARMS them.

            TWIN
      (MAY)
Ha, Ha! Are you boys talking about
me or just planning a conspiracy
against me?

      (PHILIP)
Uh, no. (trembles)
            (MORE)

102.

TWIN (cont'd)
Why would you think that?

(MAY)
(POINTS AT PHILIP)
Oh, I can see right through you!

MARK and PETER were flabbergasted, they couldn't disguise
their expression about the lie of hiding something from MAY.

            TWIN
      (MAY)
I really came over here to get to
know Peter. (Smiling)

      (PETER)
(SURPRISED)
Really!

      (MAY)
I did...

(DEMANDING)
Now tell your buddies to get lost!
So we can talk.

      (PETER)
(GRINNING)
You heard her guys. Get lost! I'll
catch up with you later.

PHILIP and MARK looks at PETER like he lost his mind. The
BOYS give him a look like a warning.

EXT. IMPRINT ON GROUND - NIGHT

PHILIP and MARK sneaked up on the MILITARY MEN that had
flash bulbs and electronic devices around the gigantic
imprint where the spacecraft had been.

            DAD
      (MR. NAEDELL)
(ORDERED)
Shine the light right here in this
spot. (Pointing)

      (OFFICER)
Yes sir.
            (MORE)

103.

            DAD (cont'd)

Beaming the light on particular
spot.

      (Mr. NAEDELL)
I'm having a hard time figuring
out this code.

Trailing a light finger over the
design.

What do you think of it, Mr.
Burnfire? Do you think you can
figure it out?

      (Mr. BURNFIRE)
Sure, I'll give it a try.

He studies it. Scratches his head.

Well, I got to tell you, I think
its pointless.

(Shrugs)
There aren't any clues, but
shapes.

      (Mr. NAEDELL)
WATCHES BURNFIRE PUT HAND OH HIP.

(LECTURES)
Well let's not forget Mr. Burnfire
that we are a special force here.
Everything we do in life is to
study and find answers to the
outer space existence. And that's
our job to find the meaning or
clue to phenomenal appearances.
Let's not forget we try and solve
the mysteries of the unknown.

      (MR. BURNFIRE)
But look. (POINTS at IMPRINTS)
These are childish markings.
(SIGHS)
There just outlines of shapes and
sizes. Nothing can tell us what
its meanings are, its unclear and
unwritten. (shrugs)
            (MORE)

104.

DAD (cont'd)
I really don't see anything for us
to go on. I think its useless.

PHILIP steps forward and puts a hand on his DAD.

105.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Uh, Dad.

      (Mr. NAEDELL)
Yes, son. (Looks At Philip)
What is it?

      (PHILIP)
Can I take a look?

      (MR. BURNFIRE)
(INTERRUPTING)
If we can't figure it out, than
how can your son?

      (MR. NAEDELL)
It won't hurt him or this imprint
if he trys.

      (MR. BURNFIRE)
(FURIOUS)
Sure, why not. Give it a shot!

      (MR. NAEDELL)
Who knows, my son might figure it
out. Go ahead, son.

      (PHILIP)
Thanks, Dad.

He squats on his knees.

      (MR. NAEDELL)
(WHISPERS IN SON'S EAR)
Don't let Mr. Burnfire intimate
you. He sort of good at it, but
doesn't realize that he does it.

PHILIP was studying the shapes and noticed the patterns all
fell in order. MAY pushes him in the mud.

106.

DAD
(MR. NAEDELL)
(YELLS)
No, MAY!

PHILIP gets help from Dad as he lifts him from being covered
in mud.

            DAD
      (MR. NAEDELL)
(FROWNING)
I can't believe you did that! Why
did you push your brother in the
mud and on our evidence?

      (MAY)
(GASP)
It was an accident. I was running
and didn't see Philip bent over in
the dark like that.

(HUFFING)
Beside I can't see without my
glasses on. Anyways, I didn't mean
too. (SIGHS)
It really isn't my fault I
couldn't stop in time.

      (MR. NAEDELL)
I thought you were wearing
contacts?

      (MAY)
(HESITATES)
Well. Those contact wore out, so I
threw them away.

      (DAD)
That's understandable, but what
about Philip?

      (MAY)
(SNOBBISH)
What about him?

            (MORE)

107.

            DAD (cont'd)
      (MR. NAEDELL)
Aren't you going to apologize for
getting him covered in mud?

      (MAY)
(FLAT VOICE)
Please accept my apology.

Gawking at her brother.

      (PHILIP)
Accepted. (Feeling skeptical)
Can we go home now Dad.

Looking down at all the thick mud
on his clothes and hands.

      (MR. NAEDELL)
Sure, its late. I'll be back in a
couple of minutes.

PHILIP watches his DAD tell his CREW to secure the UFO
project, WIRED fences, and other secured posts and signs.

INT. INSIDE CAR - NIGHT

            TWIN
      (MAY)
Ha, Ha! I get the front seat.

      (PHILIP)
Your childish. Who cares?

      (MR. NAEDELL)
Kids let's not argue, Okay.

He shuts his car door and turns
the ignition and heads down the
road.

      (PHILIP)
So, how did it go with you and
Peter?

            (MORE)

108.

            TWIN (cont'd)

      (MAY)
(WAVES A HAND)
It was so boring.

      (PHILIP)
(CURIOUS)
Boring, how boring?

      (MAY)
All he did was smile. No talk.

      (PHILIP)
(SARCASTIC)
Oh really.

      (MAY)
Nothing personal, Philip. But
remind me not to have a
conversation with him ever again.

(Turns to stare at Philip.)
Okay.

      (PHILIP)
(IRRITATED)
Alright!

INT. WHAT WAS SHE - NIGHT

PHILIP showers and changes. The FAMILY eats dinner. LATER
MAY knocks on PHILIP's bedroom door.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Who's there?

      (MAY)
It is I, May.

      (PHILIP)
What do you want?

He jumps out of bed.

            (MORE)

109.

BROTHER (cont'd)

(MAY)
I need to talk to you, sweet
brother of mine.

PHILIP fears to open the door.

            TWIN
      (MAY)
(PLEADED)
Please, Philip. Let me in.

      (PHILIP)
(opens door a crack)
What do you want to talk about?

His heart beating.

MAY barges in and jumps on his bed.

            BROTHER
      (PHILIP)
Well go ahead. (Folding arms)
What is it that you want?

Walks to bed and sits on edge.

      (MAY)
Okay. (Curls hair around finger.)
I don't know what happened to me
or how I changed?

(SIGHS)
So there's this big gap in my
memory and I thought maybe you
could fill in the rest.

      (PHILIP)
(IRRITATED)
Are you serious?

Throws hand into air.

      (MAY)
(LAUGHS)
Please, tell me. I remember the
part where we escaped from the
spacecraft and the glowing hand.
But I don't remember before that.
            (MORE)

110.

BROTHER (cont'd)

PHILIP laughs with MAY and explained the part that was the
scariest about the song she sang in her room.

TWIN
(MAY)
Were you frightened of me?

PHILIP has no words SHOCKED.

TWIN
(MAY)
(WICKEDLY)
Well, were you?

PHILIP leaves her in his room and watches horror movies in
the living room.

INT. CHECKING ON MAY - NIGHT

PHILIP wakes up later in the night when the floor creaked.
Leaving his room he passes MAY'S bedroom, her door is part
opened.
PHILIP watches her she's staring out her window, head
tilted, the moonbeams play on her face. MAY looks ghostly
and sad.

He goes outside and looks up into the night stars, he see's
a tiny color flashing above. He knows the spacecraft is
still there.

Goes back into house and peeks in on May again. He shivers
from something foggy outside her window.

TWIN
(MAY)
(CHILLY VOICE)
How long must I linger, before I
must surrender.

She turns her ghostly face to
Philip.

PHILIP is awestruck with terror. MAY is skeletal looking as
the fog seems to enter her jawbone.

PHILIP turns at camera with WIDE eyes and TREMBLES from
terror.

FADE OUT.

Feedback

From Brian Chidueme	Date 7/6/2006
It's alright, just edit the dialogue headings.

From clarinda	Date 7/27/2005
I think the settings of the script is excellence the story is quick reading and action packed for it being for general readers and also being for children movie. The end was spooky you didn't do like other movie scripts where the screen goes black and then you hear a scream. I enjoyed it.

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