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by Ben (benw_brown@hotmail.com)
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Genre: Comedy
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FADE IN:
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EXT. WALKING TOWARD SCHOOL - DAY |
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Butch leaves his house and walks to starts off toward
school. |
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BULLY 1
(speaks in a
agressive and
intimidating
voice)
well what do we have here? |
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Bully1 stops Butch and talks to him |
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BULLY2
(speaks in a deep
voice)
it looks like wes agot us a faggot
loner here. |
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Bully2 jumps out from the behind the tree |
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BUTCH
(speaks in a
trembling voice)
What do you guys want from me? |
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BULLY3
(speaks in a
normal voice)
Oh we don't want much, just your
cash. |
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comes from behind Butch |
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BUTCH
(speaks in
frightened voice)
No, your not getting my money |
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BULLY2
(talks in a gravel
tone.)
you will give us the money or
we'll just take from you. |
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BUTCH
(trys to say in a
confident voice
but it just comes
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BUTCH (cont'd)
out as a squeak.)
no, I already told you No! |
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BULLY2
(casual voice)
Look, don't make me hurt you |
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BULLY 1
(speaks in a angry
voice)
thats it, jump him |
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BUTCH
(in a mewing voice)
Help. |
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BULLY 1
(intimidation
voice.)
No ones going to help you!! not
now not ever, who would want to? |
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INT. BUTCH ARRIVES AT SCHOOL - NIGHT |
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Butch crawls his way into the school. |
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BUTCH
(speaks in a
trembling voice)
where is everyone? |
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BUTCH
(speaks then
passes out.)
I see a light. |
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TEACHER
(in a worried
voice)
Who's there? Oh my god, are you
alright? |
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Teacher hears no response and walks over toward Butch. |
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TEACHER
(in a motherly
voice)
What the hell happened to you? |
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walks closer to butch, bends down to take a better look at
him. |
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TEACHER
Hang on I'll go and get help. |
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she runs toward her office. |
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TEACHER
Hello, 911 i need an ambulance
right away. |
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AMBULANCE ARRIVES AND TAKES BUTCH TO THE HOSPITAL. |
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EXT. TEN YEARS LATER - DAY |
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Teacher runs out of the classroom screaming |
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TEACHER
(cracking voice.)
Thats its! Your driving me nuts,
STOP IT!! I can't take it anymore! |
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THE BAD ONES
(Yells with
excitement.)
We are the champions my friends,
we kill the teacher,
We are the Champions my friends.
Time to P-A-R-T-y.... |
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BULLY3
(meets with the
principal)
Hello, Good morning sir. |
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BUTCH
(Speaks in a
devastated voice.)
Good Morning to you mame...Have we
met before? |
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BULLY3
(Speaks in a
brilliant voice)
I don't think so, I am not from
around here. My name is
Mrs.Taylor. |
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BUTCH
we'll it was nice to meet you Mrs.
Taylor. I'll see you at Lunch, if
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BUTCH (cont'd)
you need anything give me a shout
ok! |
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BULLY3
(in a pleased
voice)
Sure thing. Have a good day. |
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they head of in different directions. |
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BUTCH
(thinks to
himself, but is
heard by the
viewers.)
wait a minute shes,shes one of the
group that used to beat om me. I
know, I've seen her before.... |
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He walks into his office. |
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INT. THE BAR - NIGHT |
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BUTCH
(stress out)
hey Bartender, get me a cold one. |
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BULLY2
(currious)
whats the matter Jake ? |
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BUTCH
Its the new teacher that was
hired. |
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BUTCH
how'd you know it was a women?
Who told you? |
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BULLY2
I know because shes my wife! |
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BULLY2
whats the matter with her? |
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BUTCH
well...I just realize that she and
her friends used to beat me up
when I was younger. |
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BULLY2
really thats sucks, I feel bad for
you and I'm really sorry about
that to. |
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BUTCH
Give me another beer... I think
I'm going to need it. |
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BULLY2
Its on the house, have many as you
like. |
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BUTCH
its just that she and he gang used
to beat me up on my way to school
and now shes teaching at my
school, where I'm the principal! |
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BULLY2
You know she has change and so
have I, we are very sorry about
those years ago, we didn't know
better, its just that you were so
much smarter then us. |
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BUTCH
what do you mean "WE". |
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BULLY2
Don't you reconize me? |
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BUTCH
(speaks in a
slured voice.)
wa it a min ite your..your...your
.zzzzzz...zzzzzz.zzzzz.zzzzz.zzzzz.zzzzzzz.zzzzz |
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BULLY2
I'll call a cab for him |
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INT. NEXT SCHOOL DAY - DAY |
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BULLY3
so I heard that you were at the
bar last night.... |
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BUTCH
yeah I had a few drinks |
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BULLY3
A few.... It was more then a
few....try 11 |
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BUTCH
I downed 11 beer, thats not like
me. |
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THE BAD ONES
(yelling)
look look look the principal is
hung over ( oh i don't feel so
good.puke,) |
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one of the kids starts gagging sounds to the right of the
principal. |
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BUTCH
Clean up on isle 2! |
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THE BAD ONES
hahahahah he puked! |
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BUTCH
one kid after another starts to
actually puke. |
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BUTCH
(devasteted voice.)
clean up on isle 3....4.....5..oh
hell just clean up this whole damn
place. |
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JANITOR
(grumpy voice)
what you want? |
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BUTCH
Could you please clean up this
mess? |
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JANITOR
(grumpy voice)
I was in the middle of napping and
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JANITOR (cont'd)
now you want me to clean up this
mess you made! |
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JANITOR
Fine, don't say I never do
anything around here! |
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BUTCH
now to deal with guys. I want you
to clean yourselves up and then go
directly back to class |
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THE BAD ONES
(disappointed
voices)
yes Mr Andrews |
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butch heads back to the principals office |
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GR 10 TEACHER
You kids get back here right now
before I go to tell the principal |
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THE BAD ONES
(excited voices)
Run! |
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Kids run toward the town |
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THE BAD ONES
(huffing and
puffing out of
breath)
I think where far enough now |
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RING.....RING .....RING |
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BULLY 1
Cholate Kings High, Mr Waltors
speaking how may I help you? |
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BULLY2
Is Mr Andrews available? |
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BULLY 1
Mr Andrews you have a telephone
call |
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8.
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BULLY2
Jake this is John, the bar owner
I'm calling to inform you that
there is a bunch of kids hanging
outside of my bar |
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BUTCH
Ok I come and get them. |
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GR 10 TEACHER
Mr andrew there you are, a bunch
of kids just ran out of the
school. |
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BUTCH
I know, I'm on the phone with the
bar owner right now who is saying
the kids who left are hanging
outside his bar. |
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GR 10 TEACHER
(Yells)
what the hell are you still
sitting on your ass for go and get
them. |
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BULLY 1
If you need me, call me |
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EXT. OUTS IDE OF BAR - DAY |
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BUTCH
Well, Well look at this we.ve got
a bunch of smartie pants.Think you
can skip school while just bearly
hanging on. |
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THE BAD ONES
How the hell did you know, where
we were? |
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BUTCH
I'm the principal I know and see
all! Now I'm taking you back to
school and calling your parents. |
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Mr. Andrews pulls the students back to school by their ears. |
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BUTCH
(In a discusted
voice)
You know you guys remind me of
someone I used to know! |
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THE BAD ONES
(curiously)
Who was that Mr. Andrews? |
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BACK AT SCHOOL |
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BUTCH
(angry)
Now you kids sit on those chairs
right there in the corner and do
not think about moving an inch
form there....I mean it guys! |
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THE BAD ONES (1)
Whats the worst he could do to us? |
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THE BAD ONES (5)
Who Cares? |
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THE BAD ONES (3)
I heard stories about him. |
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THE BAD ONES (2,1,5,4)
Like what? Tell us Damnit |
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BUTCH
Ok you parents are on there way to
pick you up. |
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THE BAD ONES (all)
Oh shit |
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THE BAD ONES
Sorry, we'll be good just call our
parents and tell them not to come
because we'll listen and not skip
school anymore. |
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THE BAD ONES (5,1)
speak for yourself |
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PARENTS (4)
Well I never thought this day
would come for you. Yo ushould be
ashamed of yourselves. |
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PARENTS (all)
Thankyou for calling us |
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THE BAD ONES
Well behave better and not be do
anything bad anymore. just please
go home |
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PARENTS (all)
do you guys swear to what you just
said? |
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THE BAD ONES (5)
what are you going to do? |
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BUTCH
I'm getting paper and a pen |
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PARENTS (5)
Thats an excellent idea |
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BUTCH
Ok guys, write down what you just
said and sign your name.
Parents sign your name too below
yor son or daughters name and then
I will Sign my name and Date it.
So that if they get caught doing
bad stuff again I can say remeber
when you signed a little piece of
paper? |
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THE BAD ONES (3)
your joking right? |
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THE BAD ONES (1)
i don't think there joking around,
there being serious |
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PARENTS (3)
Damn right where serious, its your
guys future thats being juperized
by your actions. |
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PARENTS (1)
You may not think that we care
about you guys, we really do care
about you guys. |
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EXT. LUNCH TIME ON THE SOCCER FIELD - DAY |
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THE BAD ONES (3)
You guys every wonder what we'll
be in 20 years? |
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THE BAD ONES (5)
Actually I do, and I also wonder
what the childern of the future
will act like? |
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THE BAD ONES (2)
I never thought you be so nice....
Whats wrong with you ? |
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THE BAD ONES (5)
Nothing wrongs with me, I just
change for for the better! |
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THE BAD ONES (4)
yeah right |
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THE BAD ONES (5)
seriously Nothing wrongs with me,
I just change for for the better! |
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THE BAD ONES (2)
Me too, I think we all changed for
the better... but I still wonder
what the future will be like? |
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BUTCH
You'll Never Know until it hits
you. What you guys doing out here? |
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THE BAD ONES (1)
Are we in trouble? |
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BUTCH
No. I just wondering how you guys
are doing and what you talking
about? |
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THE BAD ONES (3)
we'll where just talking about how
we've changed and what the future
will be like. |
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BUTCH
we'll its time to go back to class
see you guys tomorrow |
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THE BAD ONES (all)
alright.. bye |
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THE BAD ONES (5)
you think he bought it? |
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They walk towards the school |
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THE END |
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BUTCH
they'll be back.. they will have
to be they forgot their wallets! |
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BUTCH
(to the janitor)
I geuss there not getting any
smarter! but we'll have to work on
that. |
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JANITOR
(curriously)
think we should tell them? |
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BUTCH
(says it with a
smile and
laughter)
no i got an idea for them |
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JANITOR
what you got in mind....Jake? |
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BUTCH
They'll find out soon enough |
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JANITOR
(says it with an
evil laughter)
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JANITOR (cont'd)
not sure what you got cooking but
i like it alreay |
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INT. BAR - NIGHT |
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BULLY2
(to Jake)
well looked who just walked in |
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BULLY3
(to Jake in an
puzzled voice)
who said I was Devon? |
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BUTCH
Oh my I'm sorry mister |
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BULLY3
have you been drinking already? |
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BULLY3
(in a upset voice!)
Look who your talking too |
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BUTCH
oh my how rude of me Mrs Taylor.
I'm sorry I just wasn't expecting
you to be working here |
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BULLY3
You better be sorry, well i make
more in tips then i do teaching |
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BULLY3
NO I can't do that the kids love
me to much to do that and i love
teaching anyways this is just what
i do on the weekends. |
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BULLY3
well what can i get you? sir |
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BUTCH
i'll have a wiskey please |
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BULLY3
(she pours him his
drink)
he you go sir |
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BUTCH
thankyou kind person |
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BULLY3
Whats wrong Jake? You look like
you seen a ghost. |
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BUTCH
No...No ghost just that i'm being
transfored to another district,
when I do not know yet but my
guess is that it will be by the
end of the week. |
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BULLY3
(in a worried
voice)
thats not good Jake you can't do
that the kids and the staff love
ya, besides look at what you have
done for them already. |
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BUTCH
(in a sad voice)
think i need another drink! |
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EXT. BAR - NIGHT |
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BUTCH
(stumbles out of
the bar)
well night bar lady, see you on
monday. |
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BULLY3
someone better take him home. |
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BULLY2
(in a worried
voice)
you take him home, I'll watch the
bar until you get back. |
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BULLY3
ok i'll drop him home |
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she goes and gets in her car |
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BULLY3
(really worried)
Jake! oh no where did he get off
to now? come on Jake show
yourself! |
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BUTCH
(in a weak tone
voice)
over here.... |
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BUTCH
Oh shit what happened to you Jake? |
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she puts Jake in the car and drives back to the bar. |
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BULLY3
(spaeaks to Devon)
Hun we got a problem Jakes been
beat up. |
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BULLY2
oh no lets get him in here and
clean him up! is he ok? |
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BULLY3
(frightened voice)
no hes not ok he in bad shape! |
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BULLY2
he need to go to the hospital!
pronto |
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BULLY2
no we'll take him. |
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BULLY3
(shocked voice)
your going to close the bar early
tonight for the first time in
years. |
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BULLY2
yes. Ok everyone the bar is closed
as of right now so quickly finish
your last drink and please leave
don't worry about paying. jsut
leave right now and your drinks
are on the house. but you have to
lease right now! |
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BULLY3
ok lets take him to the hospital |
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BULLY2
oh no Didn't you put him in the
car |
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BULLY3
no i thought you did! |
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BULLY2
no i didn't, he's still back at
the bar! |
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they turn the car around just outside the hospital and head
back to the bar. |
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BULLY3
(in a serious
voice)
look he's right where we left him.
ok this time we won't forget him. |
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they put jake in the car and head back to the hospital. |
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INT. HOSPITAL - DAY |
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NURSE
how can I help you two this lovely
morning? |
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BULLY3
we have a friend in our car thats
been beat up by someone. |
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NURSE
oh no lets get him in here and
taken care of |
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BULLY2
take real good care of him |
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NURSE
ok we'll take care of him. you two
look tired you should go home and
get some rest. and we'll call you
if there is any improvements with
your friend. |
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they take Jake out of the car and put him in a bed. |
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BULLY2
well we would like to go home but
we cannot cause we just travelled
2 and a half hours to get our
friend to here. |
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NURSE
Oh i see well you can stay in the
hotel just down the road. |
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BULLY3
sounds good. we'll do that then,
heres my number if anything
happens to our friend Jake call me
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they head off to the hotel. |
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devon's phone rings |
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NURSE
we have your friend in he's in
room 21B6 hes in a comma but he's
breathing by himself. |
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NURSE
IF you two didn't do what you did
i'm affaird your friend wouldn't
be living right now. |
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BULLY2
(in a sarcastic
voice)
well thats comforting |
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INT. JAKE WAKES UP - DAY |
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NURSE
can anyone around here find my
adress book? |
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NURSE
geuss not! Here it is. ah ha ! |
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RING RING RING RING |
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DEVON ANSWERS THE PHONE |
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BULLY2
hello? whos calling? |
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NURSE
Hello Devon. this is nurse white
calling about your friend Jake. |
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BULLY2
what about him? is he awake now?
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NURSE
yes hes awake now after two years
he's finally awake. you need to
come to see him |
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BULLY2
ok we'll be there soon |
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BULLY2
Hey hun were closing the bar
tonight for a few days to go see
Jake |
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BULLY3
why do you want to go see him?
he's still in a comma! |
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BULLY2
No he's not,he just woke up today,
I just got off the phone with
nurse white who told me that Jake
coming around now. so where gonna
go see him like it or not ! |
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BULLY3
well then why are you sitting here
then. Hey all as of right now this
bar is closed for a few days.
jakes finally out of his comma! |
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2 HOURS LATER DEVON AND CHEVELLE ARRIVE AT THE HOSPITAL |
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NURSE
YOR here good, he's been moved to
room 11b1 |
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THEY RUSH UP TO HIS NEW ROOM |
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BULLY2
Jake. do you remember who we are? |
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BUTCH
Of course i do your my brother and
your my sister |
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FADE OUT. |
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