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Learning Curve 2
by Orbin Walcott (orbinwalcott@yahoo.com)

Rated: R   Genre: Drama   User Review: ****
The boys from "Learning Curve" have just completed their first year of college. Our protagonist from the first story, Anthony, has finally found a balance between his parental life and personal life, thanks to his loving girlfriend, Alicia. His friends convince him to go on a road trip to Florida, even though he's run into his ex-girlfriend, Nikki, who plans on stealing their daughter away from him. Learning Curve 2 details the journey a young man must take to stay loyal to himself, his friends, and above all else, his family. Because the road can truly test one's limits.


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FADE IN:

EXT. COLLEGE CAMPUS - ESTABLISH - DAY
                                                            
We're looking at an establishing shot over an entire college
campus in the heart of Boston, PANNING AROUND school
buildings and the like, until we see a sign telling us where
we are: "EMERSON COLLEGE".
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. EMERSON COLLEGE, FILM CLASS - DAY
                                                            
It's the final day of class, and there are within fifteen
STUDENTS -- some bored, some attentive -- hearing PROFESSOR
SPALDING, mid-50s, giving a lecture that seems to be going
on forever. Among the bored students is ANTHONY RAMOS, 20,
who is anxiously waiting in his seat. His eyes are
constantly on the clock:
                                                            
CU - CLOCK FACE
                                                            
It's five minutes to three PM.
                                                            
BACK TO SCENE
                                                            
Anthony has aged one year, but still looks the same as when
we last saw him.
                                                            
                       PROF. SPALDING
      (to class)
...And so when you are all
directing your first feature,
remember that it is also a team
effort, not just your own. Your
assignment for the summer is to
shoot and edit a home movie about
anything. It can be a music video,
as long as its tasteful, or simply
a documentary. I'm expecting the
work to be done, come this fall.
                                                            
The school bell RINGS (OS).
                                                            
                       PROF. SPALDING (cont'd)
Class dismissed. Have a great
summer everyone. And remember: our
editing rooms will be available
all summer for your use!
                                                            

2.

All the students pack their things, getting ready to leave.
A young female student passes by Anthony, as she heads out.
Call her JASMINE.
                                                            
                       JASMINE
      (smiling)
Have a good summer, Tony.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
You too, Jasmine.
                                                            
He gets his bag then leaves.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. SUFFOLK UNIVERSITY - DAY
                                                            
The familiar TOYOTA COROLLA, that belongs to Anthony, pulls
up to the front of the campus. ANGLE ON ALICIA ROJAS, 19,
walking out with a few girlfriends. As she carries her
backpack, we can clearly see the ENGAGEMENT RING given to
her by Anthony, on her ring finger. She waves good bye to
her friends before walking to the Toyota. She gets in:
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. TOYOTA
                                                            
Alicia gets in the passenger's seat, happy to see Anthony as
she tosses her bag in the back seat.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Hey, Babe!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Wassup?
                                                            
They share a small kiss.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (thinking aloud)
Finally, summer vacation!!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
I know, right? But, I still gotta
do an assignment for Professor
Spalding.
                                                            

3.

                       ALICIA
Tell me about it -- journalism
sucks! I have to do a few reports
for the summer. And I'm starting
my new job soon!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
That sucks. But at least you're
working this summer.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Why'd you quit your job at Boston
Medical, anyway? Last time I went
there, people were asking about
you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
It was cutting into my quality
time with Jessie.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Oh.
      (smiling)
Well, good luck with the job hunt,
Baby!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (chuckles)
Wow! Thank you. Hey so, now that
the year's over, did Alex try
anything on you?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smirking)
Why do you ask? You don't trust
us?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Look, I know it's fucked up to
question you guys, but knowing
him, I just need to know.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (jokingly)
Well, there was that one time...
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Oh, that son of a --
                                                            

4.

                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
I'm kidding! He was a gentleman.
Actually, he fought off every dude
that tried to ask me out.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (awkwardly)
Oh. Um... okay, cool.
                                                            
She chuckles then they drive off.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
EXT. RAMOS RESIDENCE - ESTABLISH - EARLY EVENING
                                                            
We see the Ramos' home in the same Dorchester neighborhood
as before, as the Toyota pulls up to the curb. There are
many children playing outside, as Alicia & Anthony step out
of the car.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. RAMOS RESIDENCE
                                                            
Anthony & Alicia walk in through the front door. Upon
entering, JESSICA RAMOS, 6, runs up to them and greets them
both with a hug.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
      (smiling)
Hi, Mommy! Hi, Daddy!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY/ALICIA
      (smiling)
Hey, Sweetie.
                                                            
The trio walk into the living room, where ISABEL & PABLO,
now in their early forties, are sitting down and watching
TV. Isabel is holding DAVID ROJAS, Anthony & Alicia's
months-old baby.
                                                            
                       PABLO
      (smiling)
Hey, it's the college students!
How was the first year?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Hey, Pablo. It was cool.
                                                            
Alicia walks over to Isabel, and takes the baby off her
hands. David is wide awake and cheerful:
                                                            

5.

                       ALICIA
      (in Spanish)
Hi, Isabel. How's my baby doing?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Hi, Alicia. David's fine; he's
been awake, playing with his
sister. Are you staying for
dinner?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Oh, sorry but I can't. I promised
my sister I'd go shopping with
her. Maybe next time, though.
                                                            
Suddenly, Anthony's cellphone RINGS (OS).
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Excuse me.
      (into phone)
Hello?
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (from phone)
Yo, wassup!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (into phone)
Nothin', Homie. Waz good?
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (from phone)
Me and the fellas 'bout to go out
to eat. You down?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (into phone)
Uh... yeah, sure. I'll see what I
can do.
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (from phone)
A'ight, peace.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (into phone)
Peace.
                                                            
He hangs up then heads back into the living room.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (to Anthony)
Who was it?
                                                            

6.

                       ANTHONY
Manny. He invited me out to eat.
You don't mind, do you, Ma?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Go ahead. And tell the boys I said
hi.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I will.
      (to Alicia)
You need a ride, Baby?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Yeah, please.
                                                            
Alicia carries David and his bag, as she and Anthony leave
the house.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (to Isabel & Pablo)
Good night.
                                                            
                       ISABEL/PABLO
Good night, Alicia.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
 
EXT. T.G.I. FRIDAY'S - ESTABLISH - NIGHT
                                                            
The parking lot is full as Anthony heads inside the
restaurant.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. T.G.I. FRIDAY'S
                                                            
Sitting at a booth are Anthony's friends: ALEX PEREZ, 20;
MANNY FONSECA, 19; and MARTIN "TAM-TAM" JONES, 19, who is
wearing a sharp suit at the moment. Anthony approaches their
table, and takes a seat as they look through MENUS:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Waz good, fellas!
                                                            
                       ALEX
Waz good, Tony.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
'Sup, T?
                                                            

7.

                       ANTHONY
Yo, what's with the suit?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Economics at Salem State. We had
mock interviews and shit today.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I see. So, how was y'all's first
year?
                                                            
                       MANNY
Cambridge College treated me
pretty good. IT is no joke,
though.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
My first year at Suffolk was the
shit! I've never seen so many fine
chicks in one school!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (grinning)
One of 'em better not've been my
fiancée.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (chuckles)
Naw, man. But I did take care of
her for you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah, I heard.
      (to Manny &
       Tam-Tam)
Apparently, this dude was actin'
jealous for me -- fightin' niggas
off Alicia an' shit!
                                                            
They all laugh.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Hey, somebody had to!
                                                            
A cute young waitress named CARLA approaches the table, with
her notepad in hand.
                                                            
                       CARLA
Hi, guys, my name is Carla; I'll
be your waitress for this evening.
                                                            

8.

                       MANNY
Hey.
                                                            
                       CARLA
Can I start you off with something
to drink?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Uh...yeah, I'll have a coke.
                                                            
                       ALEX
I'll have a sprite.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Can I have an ice tea, please?
                                                            
                       CARLA
      (writing it down)
Sure.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Same here.
                                                            
                       CARLA
      (writing it down)
Coming right up.
      (to Tam-Tam)
By the way, I like your suit!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
Oh, thanks.
                                                            
She leaves.
                                                            
                       ALEX
So, T, how was your freshman year?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Mine's was...interesting. When
you're knee-deep in dirty diapers,
it's kinda hard to think about
school. But, hey, I got to take
some film courses!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yo, why do you always do that?!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What?
                                                            

9.

                       TAM-TAM
Talk about your kids during
moments like these! Like, who the
fuck wants to hear about dirty
diapers at a fuckin' restaurant?!
                                                            
                       MANNY
Yeah, Tony. I mean, we love your
kids and all, but there's just
some things that you keep to
yourself, man!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Okay, I'm sorry! Damn, I guess my
college life ain't really all that
exciting...
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
A'ight, look, my bad. I wasn't
trying to be an asshole -- you
know your family are like family
to us too. But damn, homie, you
need to get out more!
                                                            
Carla returns with the drinks.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Thank you.
                                                            
                       CARLA
      (smiling)
You're welcome. So, are you boys
ready to order?
                                                            
                       ALL
Yeah.
                                                            
She readies her notepad.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. T.G.I. FRIDAY'S - LATER
                                                            
The boys are already going through their meals: Tam-Tam has
a CHEESEBURGER AND FRIES; Alex has a PASTA DISH; Manny is
working through BUFFALO WINGS AND MOZZARELLA STICKS; and
Anthony has a STEAK DINNER.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Yo, did I tell y'all 'bout what
happened to me on spring break?
                                                            

10.

                       ANTHONY
Naw, what happened?
                                                            
                       ALEX
A'ight, well this year Suffolk
took some people up to Montreal.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Canada? For what?
                                                            
                       ALEX
It was spring break, Manny. We
didn't need a reason. Besides,
drinking age is eighteen, up
there.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
What about weed, is it legal?
                                                            
                       ALEX
Only if its prescribed. It's not
like you can walk the streets with
it, like in Amsterdam.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
See, that's why I'm going to
Amsterdam next year!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (to Alex)
A'ight, get on with the story.
                                                            
                       ALEX (cont'd)
Okay. So, me and my two roommates
are in a hotel the first night
there. We're bored so we said
"fuck it, let's go to a bar." We
get to one, and we start knocking
back some shots. Then, these two
Canadian dudes come up to us, and
automatically figure that we're
American. They tell us about this
strip club, "The Foxhole" they
called it, and we all go.
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (smiling)
Wait, what's the place called?
                                                            
                       ALEX
The Foxhole.
                                                            

11.

                       MANNY
      (chuckles)
What, this place have an army
theme or somethin'?
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Something like that. Anyways,
we're payin' for lap-dances, and
this fine stripper named Cherry
approaches me for a private dance.
Needless to say, we fucked. But
when I get out, I see that my
white boy roommate, Todd, is
acting all funny. I asked my other
roommate, Dominic, what happened
and he says one of the Canadians
had slipped Todd a mean dose of X
in his drink.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
He was trippin', wasn't he?
                                                            
                       ALEX
HARD.
                                                            
They laugh.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
So, then what happened to you,
Alex?
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
What do you mean?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
You said somethin' happened to
you.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Yeah, I got some Canadian booty!
Weren't you listening?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yo, dawg, that's what we should
do!
                                                            
                       MANNY
What, take some X and get laid?
                                                            

12.

                       TAM-TAM
Other than the ecstasy, yeah sure.
But what I'm really talkin' about
is a road trip - just us four.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I don't know, man...
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Naw, hear me out. Now each one of
us has been working since freshman
year in high school, right?
                                                            
                       ALEX
Yeah, so?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
So, we all should have some money
saved up in the bank.
                                                            
They all get a look on their faces, considering the idea.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (beat)
How long you wanna do this for?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (shrugs)
Couple'a weeks, at the most.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (to Alex)
Well, I do have an aunt in Miami.
      (to Tam-Tam)
I guess that could be our
destination.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (nodding)
Yeah.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (thinking aloud)
Of course, I'd have to discuss it
with the wifey.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
You do that. How 'bout you, Manny,
you in?
                                                            

13.

                       MANNY
I ain't got shit-else goin' this
summer, so why not? But, who's
ride we takin'?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Not mine!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Let me worry about that. So its
settled, we're goin' on a road
trip.
                                                            
Tam-Tam raises his glass, and they all toast to the idea.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. ROJAS RESIDENCE - ESTABLISH - NIGHT
                                                            
Anthony's Toyota is parked out front, and he's headed
inside.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. ALICIA'S BEDROOM
                                                            
There's a KNOCK (OS) at the door, as a pajama-clad Alicia is
sitting on her bed, gently rocking Baby David to sleep. Her
room still looks the same as before, even with the inclusion
of a CRIB for the baby.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Come in.
                                                            
Anthony enters the room, closing the door behind:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (softly)
Hey, Baby.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (softly)
Hey.
                                                            
He kisses her, then sits next to her on the bed.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (softly)
How's my little man doin'?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (softly)
He's fine. 'Finally went to sleep.
                                                            

14.

She gets up and puts the baby in the crib.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Baby, it's kinda late. What're you
doin' here?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I wanted to talk to you about
something.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Okay, but can we talk outside? I
don't want David to wake up.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Mmm-hmm, sure.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. ROJAS RESIDENCE, FRONT PORCH
                                                            
Anthony walks out onto the porch; Alicia follows behind,
closing the front door for privacy.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
What's up?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Well, I was just talkin' with the
fellas, and we got this thing
planned for the summer.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
What kind of thing?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
A road trip.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
A road trip? To where?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Miami.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
For how long, though?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
'Few weeks, maybe less.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
But, Baby, I thought we'd be
spending time together this
summer. Remember, I got pregnant
            (MORE)

15.

                       ALICIA (cont'd)
last year, and we didn't get to do
much but go to the hospital.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Sweetie, I know. But it's only for
a few weeks. We'll have the rest
of the summer together - just you,
me and the kids. And besides...
      (smirking)
...being away from you for so
long, I'm gonna wanna do more than
spend time.
                                                            
She smiles, knowing exactly what he means.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
You promise you'll call me?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Everyday. And if not, you'll call
me, right?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Hell yeah! 'Make sure you ain't
messin' with no hood rats!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
So, I can go?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (hesistant)
Yeah, go. I'll take care of the
kids.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
You're the best, Alicia!
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
I know.
                                                            
He kisses her.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I'll see you tomorrow.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Okay. Good night.
                                                            

16.

                       ANTHONY
Good night.
                                                            
He gets in his car and drives off, while she heads back into
the house.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
 
EXT. CAR DEALERSHIP - DAY
                                                            
A used car dealership, somewhere in Boston. Tam-Tam walks
into the lot. WILLIE NEWTON, the salesman in his mid-40s,
greets Tam-Tam upon entering the lot.
                                                            
                       WILLIE
      (smiling)
Hi, I'm Willie Newton. How can I
help you?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Hey, I'm Martin Jones. We spoke on
the phone earlier.
                                                            
                       WILLIE
      (realizing)
Oh, yeah, Mr. Jones! What can I
help you with today?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Well, I'm lookin' for a good car
that has a decent amount of
mileage on it. And at a convenient
price too.
                                                            
                       WILLIE
      (smiling)
Well, you sure sound like you know
what you want, kid.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yeah, I'm going on a road trip
with some friends.
                                                            
                       WILLIE
Then, let's have a look around,
shall we?
                                                            
They walk around, checking out the various cars in the lot.
The first car they stop in front of is a 1995 NISSAN MAXIMA
GLE.
                                                            

17.

                       WILLIE
How 'bout this one? 1995 Nissan
Maxima GLE. It's in good
condition, has working air
conditioning, front-wheel drive --
a smooth ride overall.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Eh...it's looks cool, but I need
something a little more spacious.
                                                            
                       WILLIE
Well, come over here, and take a
look at --
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (noticing)
Yo, what is that?
                                                            
Willie turns as Tam-Tam quickly goes over to a classic
beauty, a 1967 CHEVY IMPALA. His expressions shows that this
is the car he wants.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (excited)
Oh, man, you gotta tell me what
car this is!
                                                            
                       WILLIE
      (smiling)
That, Mr. Jones, is a sixty-seven
Chevy Impala.
                                                            
Tam-Tam simply can't believe what he's seeing here, as he
can't contain himself. He gestures to get in:
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Can I?
                                                            
                       WILLIE
Be my guest.
                                                            
Tam-Tam gets in the driver's seat. He's loving it.
                                                            
                       WILLIE
This baby's been fully restored.
It's got great space for your
friends, when you go on that trip.
And great mileage too. How does it
feel?
                                                            

18.

                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
I could cry, man!
                                                            
                       WILLIE
      (chuckles)
Well, for ten thousand, you won't
have to.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Ten thousand? Damn, I can't afford
that.
                                                            
                       WILLIE
How much can you afford?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Seven thousand.
                                                            
                       WILLIE
      (beat)
I like you, kid, so I'll tell you
what? I'll knock off four
thousand, and that way you'll save
some money for your trip. We have
a deal?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (beat)
Deal.
                                                            
They shake hands and Tam-Tam gets out of the car.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. SOUTH BAY SHOPPING CENTER - ESTABLISH - DAY
                                                            
This is one of the local malls in Dorchester. The parking
lot is full as we see many consumers all throughout.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. BEST BUY
                                                            
Anthony & Alicia, along with Jessica, enter the store. They
walk around, checking out the merchandise. The DVDs seem to
attract Anthony's attention as he heads over and checks them
out.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
Daddy, I'm gonna check out the
games.
                                                            

19.

                       ANTHONY
Okay, sweetie, but stay close.
                                                            
Jessica ignores him as she quickly heads over to the games.
Anthony and Alicia continue on to the CDs:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (browsing CDs)
Hmm...Aventura has a new album
out. I so need to get me an iPod.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (browsing CDs)
How come you don't have one?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (shrugs)
I dunno. Never felt the need to, I
guess. Besides, I never had the
money for one.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What? But you've had a job since
before I met you.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Yeah, a part-time job. And you
forget, Tony, I'm a girl. I buy
girly things.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I've seen plenty of girls with
iPods.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
So?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (realizing)
Oh, I get it now! This is one of
those moments where you tell me
how you don't have something, and
I'm supposed to provide it
somehow.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
What? Nuh-uh! Matter of fact, how
can you say that when you're gonna
be my husband?
                                                            

20.

                       ANTHONY
Hey, I didn't object. I'm just
wondering if this is, like,
"training" for marriage. You know
what? Fine, I'll get you the iPod.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Baby, I'm not asking you to --
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (walking away)
No, I insist. Besides, I should
shut up now.
                                                            
Alicia chuckles to herself as he walks away.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Wow!
                                                            
She follows him.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. BEST BUY, CAMERA BOOTH - LATER
                                                            
Alicia, holding a brand new IPOD BOX, accompanies Anthony by
the camera booth, as he's attended by a SALESCLERK. The
clerk is demonstrating various CAMCORDERS to help Anthony
make a decision.
                                                            
                       SALESCLERK
... Now, this camera is high-def,
which is good for when you want
your home movies to have the
clearest image possible.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah... that's cool, but I don't
really need high definition.
Besides, the price is a bit high
for me.
                                                            
                       SALESCLERK
Oh, well take a look at this...
                                                            
They move on to another camcorder:
                                                            
                       SALESCLERK (cont'd)
This is a Sony MiniDV Handycam;
it's priced at two-fifty and has
Super Steadyshot, to reduce
shaking.
                                                            

21.

                       ANTHONY
MiniDV... that's those little
cassettes, right?
                                                            
                       SALESCLERK
Mmm-hmm.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Do you have that same camera, but
with a hard drive? I don't wanna
have to worry about buying tapes.
                                                            
                       SALESCLERK
Yeah.
      (points out camera)
This is that same camera, with a
thirty gig hard drive.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
How much is it?
                                                            
                       SALESCLERK
Uh...four hundred and fifty
dollars.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (beat)
I'll take it.
                                                            
                       SALESCLERK
I'll go get one for you.
                                                            
The Salesclerk leaves.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
So, why do you need a camera?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
School project. 'Professor wants
us to document something this
summer.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
What do you have in mind?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (sighs)
The trip, I guess. It's the only
interesting thing, I can think of.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smart-aleck)
And not me?
                                                            

22.

                       ANTHONY
Alicia, how many movies have you
seen, starring just one person?
C'mon, I'm trying to be a
filmmaker here.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (nodding)
Point taken.
                                                            
Jessica shows up with a SUPER MARIO BROTHERS game in hand:
                                                            
                       JESSICA
Daddy, can you buy me this?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Sorry, honey, I don't have a lot
of money to spend.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
But, you're buying Mommy the iPod.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (stammering)
Uh...I...
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (to Jessica)
Don't worry, Baby, I'll buy it for
you.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
      (smiling)
Thank you.
                                                            
                       NIKKI (OS)
Anthony?
                                                            
Anthony turns, finding NIKKI SANDOVAL, his ex-girlfriend,
nearby with some GIRLFRIENDS; this is Jessica's biological
mother, the one who broke Anthony's heart when we first met
him. Nikki, 22, is looking pretty cute now, as she
approaches Anthony and Alicia, who curiously watches:
                                                            
                       NIKKI (cont'd)
      (smiling)
It is you!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (confused)
Oh... hey...?
                                                            

23.

                       NIKKI
      (walking up)
Wow, this is a weird coincidence.
What're you doing here?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Shopping, like everyone else.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (noticing Jessica)
And who's this little angel?
                                                            
Jessica shies away, behind Alicia.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
That's my daughter, Jessica. I
thought you had left, Nikki.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Oh, I moved back to Boston a while
ago. I'm just lookin' for work
now.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Ohhkayyy...
                                                            
The salesclerk returns with the camcorder, handing it to
Anthony.
                                                            
                       SALESCLERK
Here you go, sir.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Thanks. Well, we gotta go, Nikki.
Good bye.
                                                            
Anthony takes Alicia's hand as they walk past Nikki, and
towards the cashiers. Jessica quickly follows behind; Nikki
takes notice of Anthony's behavior.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. APPLEBEE'S RESTAURANT - LATER
                                                            
Having bought their items, Anthony and the girls are now
sitting at a booth in the restaurant. Jessica is sitting
next to Alicia, admiring her game, as Alicia sits across
from Anthony, who looks worried:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Tony, what's wrong? Who was that
girl?
                                                            

24.

                       ANTHONY
I don't wanna talk about it.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
You can trust me.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (beat)
It was Nikki.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
As in your ex, Nikki?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (nodding)
Yeah.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
Who's Nikki?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Nobody, sweetie.
                                                            
Then suddenly, Nikki is about to pass by their table when
she notices them:
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (smiling)
Oh, hey! This is the second time
we see each other.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (under his breath)
Oh shit...
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Hi, I'm Alicia, and you are...?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
I'm Nikki. Me and Tony used to go
out. Are you his girl?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (showing ring)
Fiancé.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (impressed)
Fiancé, wow! I guess you're not
the boy I used to know, huh Tony?
                                                            

25.

                       ANTHONY
      (feigns smiling)
Yeah... excuse me, Alicia.
                                                            
Anthony gets up. He takes Nikki by the arm, and leads her to
the restroom area for some privacy.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Tony, what's wrong?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
What're you doing, Nikki? Why are
you following me?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (whispering)
What're you talking about?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
This! You're supposed to be out of
my fucking life for good!
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (whispering)
Calm down, Tony --
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
Stop calling me that!
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (whispering)
Me and my girls just came 'cause
we were hungry. What's wrong with
that?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
The timing, that's one thing.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (whispering)
Well, I did say I wanted to know
how my daughter was.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
Jessica's not your daughter. She's
"my problem", remember that?
                                                            

26.

                       NIKKI
      (whispering)
C'mon, you're not still holding a
grudge, are you?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
You burned me, Nikki, for six
years. And every time I look at
Jessica, I'm reminded of you!
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (whispering)
What do you want me to do?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
Stay the fuck away from me! I
don't ever wanna see you again.
And don't even go near Jessica, or
Alicia, for that matter.
                                                            
He walks away, while she rolls her eyes at him. Anthony
heads back to his table:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (to Alicia)
Baby, let's go.
                                                            
Alicia senses something wrong as she gets Jessica and
follows him out.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
EXT. VACANT LOT - NIGHT
                                                            
Anthony is lying on the hood of his Toyota, looking
contemplative, when Tam-Tam's Chevy pulls into the empty
lot. Tam-Tam, Manny & Alex step out of the car, and walk up
to Anthony.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Nice car, Tam.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
Sexy, right? It's a sixty-seven
Chevy Impala.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (disinterested)
That's great...
                                                            

27.

                       ALEX
Well, we're here, Tony. What's up?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (sighs)
Nikki's back.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Nikki, your ex?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yup.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Since when?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I don't know.
      (sitting up)
I don't like it, though. She saw
Jessie, and even spoke to Alicia.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Damn... I can already see this
bitch startin' trouble!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Mmm-hmm. Yo, I'm not even sure if
I still wanna go on this trip now.
I mean, what if she goes to my
house, and starts some shit with
my mom? Or what if she and Alicia
get into a fight over Jessie, and
I'm not around? Then what?
                                                            
                       ALEX
C'mon, man, Alicia's no punk --
she can handle herself.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
That's not the point, Alex.
Nikki's my daughter's biological
mother. If she does anything, she
could get away with it!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Dawg, don't stress, Alicia'll
handle it. So, don't pull out of
the trip, 'cause I'll kick ya ass!
                                                            
Anthony, feeling threatened, steps up to Tam-Tam's face.
                                                            

28.

                       ANTHONY
Go ahead, nigga, make a fuckin'
move! I'm lookin' out for my
family -- I don't give a shit
about a goddamn trip!
                                                            
Manny & Alex step in to break up the argument:
                                                            
                       ALEX
Yo, chill, Tony! You know he
didn't mean that.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Yeah, man. I mean, everything's
set for us; I just bought a
laptop, Tam-Tam's got his new
car...
                                                            
                       ALEX
Yeah, and I just bought a
shit-load of clothes, man. This
trip is the only chance the four
of us can spend the summer
together -- we need you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (beat)
Fine, I'll go. My bad, Tam-Tam.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (giving him dap)
Don't worry about it. It's my
fault.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
MONTAGE
                                                            
A) Manny's in his bedroom, trying to pack his clothes into a
DUFFEL BAG, while his two younger SIBLINGS distract him as
they play in the room.

B) Anthony is home, trying out his video camera as he
records his family.

C) Tam-Tam is in the driveway of his home, installing a CD
PLAYER in the Chevy.

D) Alex is alone in his apartment, with a girl -- presumably
his girlfriend. They stand at the doorway of his bedroom; he
seems to be sweet-talking her until she smiles and decides
to go into the room. He closes the door behind.
                                                            

29.

END MONTAGE
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
 
INT. RAMOS RESIDENCE, KITCHEN - DAY
                                                            
It's early in the morning, and there is a nice pancake feast
on the table as Pablo & Jessica sit and eat. The small
television on the counter is set on a SPANISH TALK SHOW.
Alicia is helping Isabel cook breakfast as Anthony walks in,
carrying his DUFFEL BAG and recording the event with his
camera. He sets his bag down:
                                                            
POV FROM VIDEO CAMERA
                                                            
Anthony is recording everything in the kitchen, narrating as
he goes along:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
And now, folks, I bring you to my
kitchen, where we seem to be
having a lovely breakfast.
                                                            
He moves on to Alicia who is at the counter, beating eggs in
a bowl:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
This young lady is the love of my
life; she is the mother of my son,
and soon to be my bride. Would you
kindly introduce yourself, Miss?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Hi, I'm Alicia.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
And what're you doing, Alicia?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Helping your mom cook breakfast
for you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
      (moving to Isabel)
And what exactly am I having, Mom?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Pancakes and eggs.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
Sounds good.
                                                            

30.

He moves on to Jessica, who's relishing the spotlight now.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
Here, folks, is my beautiful
daughter, Jessica.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
      (smiling)
Hi!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
Now the audience is wondering,
Jessie, are you gonna miss Daddy
while he's gone?
                                                            
                       JESSICA
      (smiling)
Mmm-mmm.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
What? And why not?
                                                            
                       JESSICA
      (smiling)
Because I won't.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
Fine then. And now moving on to
Pablo, my step-dad!
                                                            
All of Pablo's attention is on the television screen.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
      (continuation)
What are your current thoughts,
Pablo?
                                                            
                       PABLO
C'mon, get that camera out of my
face, Tony. I'm trying to watch
TV.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
      (sighs)
Okay, fine.
                                                            
BACK TO SCENE
                                                            
Anthony turns off the camera, then takes a seat at the
table. Alicia places his food in front of him, then kisses
him on the cheek; she sits next to Anthony.
                                                            

31.

                       ANTHONY
Thanks for coming, Babe.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
No problem.
                                                            
Isabel sits at the table with her food.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Are you sure you don't want a
plate, Alicia?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
No thanks. I'll just eat off of
Tony's.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Okay. So, Anthony, I called your
aunt in Miami and she said
everything is ready for you and
the boys.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (eating)
Cool.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Are you sure you'll be okay on the
road?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Ma, I'll be fine. I have enough
money, my cellphone, Manny's got a
laptop -- I'm good!
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Well, I'm just making sure.
                                                            
Suddenly, they hear a car HONKING IT'S HORN (OS).
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (recognizing it)
Alright, that's Tam-Tam. I'll see
you guys in a few weeks.
                                                            
Anthony gets up and kisses Jessica on the forehead:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
'Love you, Baby. Be good!
                                                            
He grabs his camera and duffel bag, and heads out. Alicia
follows behind.
                                                            

32.

                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. RAMOS RESIDENCE
                                                            
Tam-Tam, Alex & Manny are standing by the Chevy when Anthony
& Alicia walk out of the house. The two stop mid-way:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (handing keys)
Here's the keys to my car. Take
care of Jessie for me.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I will. Don't forget to call me.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
First call's tonight.
                                                            
She caresses his cheek before kissing him. The rest of the
boys, try to contain their boyish snickering. Then:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I love you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I love you.
                                                            
He heads for the Chevy, putting his bag in the trunk. As the
boys get inside the car, Anthony stands outside, thinking
for a beat. Next, he places his camera on the roof of the
car and suddenly RUNS towards Alicia. She laughs as he lifts
her up for a hug then gives her another passionate kiss:
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Tony, will you bring ya
pussy-whipped ass on, man!? We
gotta go!
                                                            
Anthony gives him the finger while still kissing Alicia.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Miss me already?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I'll be thinking about you, every
day.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (re: boys)
They're waiting on you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Let 'em wait.
                                                            

33.

He kisses her again, then heads back to the car. Taking his
camera before getting inside.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (waving)
Bye, you guys!
                                                            
                       BOYS
Bye!
                                                            
They drive off.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. CHEVY (MOVING)
                                                            
Anthony is recording the drive, while Manny is on his
laptop:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
These three knuckleheads are my
best friends: Alex...
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (nodding)
Wassup?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (cont'd)
... Manny...
                                                            
                       MANNY
Yo!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (cont'd)
... and Tam-Tam.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (looking forward)
How you be?
      (grinning)
Yo, T, I swear you're the only
nigga I know who's pussy-whipped!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Dawg, did you really have to say
that on camera?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (excited)
Oh, I'm on camera? Word!
      (to camera)
Uh...ladies, my name is Martin
Jones. I'm nineteen and I live
with my momma. Now, if you got a
            (MORE)

34.

                       TAM-TAM (cont'd)
problem with that, you'll learn
not to --
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Whatever, man, this ain't no love
connection!
      (to camera)
Now, ladies, if you're lookin' for
a real man, then you found him.
Hi, I'm Alex Perez. I'm twenty, I
live with my brother, and I'm a
cancer - which means I can be a
strong yet sensitive individual. I
make the best fried chicken,
that's finger-licking good,
besides myself. If you're
interested, call me at 617-555 --
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (turning off
       camera)
A'ight, that's enough of that. Yo,
Tam, which route we takin'?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
We gotta hit up Providence first.
'Drop something off for Manny's
mom.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Drop what off?
                                                            
                       MANNY
I don't know, some package for my
aunt.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. CHEVY, INTERSTATE - LATER
                                                            
We FOLLOW the Chevy as it drives along the interstate;
Anthony is recording some footage. He gains the attention of
some kids sitting in a mini van, who make faces and other
funny gestures to the camera. Anthony chuckles.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. HOUSE; PROVIDENCE, RHODE ISLAND - ESTABLISH - DAY
                                                            
The Chevy parks in front of a moderate one story home,
somewhere in Providence. The boys get out:
                                                            

35.

POV FROM CAMERA
                                                            
Anthony records as he follows the boys to the front door.
Manny is holding a small package as he KNOCKS on the door.
Moments later, a boy of late teens opens the door,
pretending to be surprised. This is PAULO, Manny's cousin:
                                                            
                       PAULO
Oh shit! Ma, I think we just won
somethin'; there's some dudes here
with a camera and a package!
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (chuckles)
Shut up, Paulo! Waz good?
                                                            
                       PAULO
Nothin' much, man. Come on in.
                                                            
BACK TO SCENE
                                                            
The boys follow him inside the house.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. HOUSE
                                                            
As the boys head inside, Manny is greeted by his 50-year-old
aunt, MARIA. They hug:
                                                            
                       MARIA
      (in Creole)
Manny, how are you?
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (in Creole)
I'm doing fine, Aunt Maria.
                                                            
                       MARIA
Who are your friends?
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (pointing out)
That's Alex, Anthony and Tam-Tam.
Guys, this is my aunt, Maria. And
that's my cousin, Paulo.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (recording)
How you doin'?
                                                            

36.

                       MANNY
      (to Maria)
Uh...my mother sent this for you.
                                                            
He hands her the package.
                                                            
                       MARIA
Oh, yeah, these are the spices I
asked for.
                                                            
She heads into the kitchen, then another one of Manny's
cousins comes out, a cute Cape Verdean girl named DULCE, 20.
She instantly attracts Alex's attention as she walks into
the room.
                                                            
                       DULCE
      (smiling)
Hey, Manny.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Wassup, Dulce.
                                                            
                       DULCE
Who you with?
                                                            
                       MANNY
Dulce, that's Anthony, Tam-Tam and
Alex. Fellas, this is my other
cousin, Dulce.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY/TAM-TAM
Hey/Wassup?
                                                            
Alex takes her hand as he works his charm:
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (grinning)
Dulce. You know that means sweet
in Spanish, right?
                                                            
                       DULCE
      (not impressed)
I'm sure it does. But I have a
man, so can I have my hand back?
                                                            
He lets go.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Alex, don't flirt with my family.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Who's flirting?
                                                            

37.

                       PAULO
      (to Anthony)
Yo, what's up with the camera?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Just felt like recording the trip.
                                                            
Paulo nods understandingly as his mother comes back out.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Okay, well we gotta go, but it was
nice seeing y'all.
                                                            
                       MARIA
Bye, Manny. Thank you for the
package.
                                                            
                       DULCE
Tell your mother I said hi.
                                                            
The boys leave.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
 
EXT. MOTEL - ESTABLISH - NIGHT
                                                            
We're looking at a small motel somewhere by a highway in New
England, with several cars parked in the parking lot.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. MOTEL ROOM, 2ND FLOOR
                                                            
Anthony is outside his room, talking on his cellphone.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (from phone)
So, where are you now?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (into phone)
Some motel, outside New York.
How's everything back home?
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. ROJAS RESIDENCE, FRONT PORCH - SAME
                                                            
Alicia is sitting on the front steps of her house.
                                                            

38.

                       ALICIA
Everything's fine here. Jessie's
asleep. I miss you.
                                                            
INTERCUTTING
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I miss you too, baby.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
What'd you guys do so far?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Um... not much, really. We had to
drop off a package for Manny's
aunt in Providence. But, other
than that, we've been mostly on
the road.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
That sounds boring.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (chuckles)
Baby, it's just the first day. So,
what you've been up to?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Nothing much; I did some training
for my job today. But other than
that, I've been home with the
kids.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Cool. Hey, you never told me where
your job is.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Oh, I didn't? Well, it's in Macy's
over in Braintree mall.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Oh okay. 'Can't wait to see you
when I get back.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Yeah, me too. When are you getting
back? The suspense is killing me!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Well, given the pace we're going
at, I'd say about a week and a
            (MORE)

39.

                       ANTHONY (cont'd)
half. No more than two weeks.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Damn, babe, you really know how to
torture a girl!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I'll be back before you know it.
You'll see.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
You better.
      (yawns)
Okay, Tony, I'm going to sleep. I
love you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
I love you too, sweetie. Sweet
dreams.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Good night.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Good night.
                                                            
They hang up. Alicia heads back inside her home.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. MOTEL ROOM
                                                            
Anthony smiles to himself as he puts his cellphone in his
pocket. He heads into his room.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. MOTEL ROOM
                                                            
The rest of the boys are inside the room as Anthony walks
in, closing the door behind. There are two beds as Manny
lies on one bed while using his laptop, and Alex lies on the
other while watching the TV; Tam-Tam is also watching TV as
he sits in a nearby chair. Anthony sits on Manny's bed:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What's on?
                                                            

40.

                       ALEX
Basketball -- Heat versus Magic.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (beat)
Yo, what's there to do around
here?
                                                            
                       ALEX
Tam, we're not even in New York
City, so I doubt there's much.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Well, shit, Manny, you got a
laptop -- look somethin' up!
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (looking at screen)
Found something. "GYM Sports Bar",
located on 8th Avenue in New York
City. Says here they got the best
happy hour. Y'all got IDs, right?
'Cause I'm not twenty-one yet.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yeah, fake IDs. But, a sports bar
sounds good.
      (to Alex & Anthony)
What y'all think?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I'm down.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Let's go.
                                                            
Manny closes his laptop and Alex turns off the television as
they all head out.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. NEW YORK CITY, TIMES SQUARE - LATER
                                                            
Tam-Tam's Chevy is cruising through the city that never
sleeps, as the boys take in the sights. Anthony is recording
more footage as they drive through Times Square.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. GYM SPORTS BAR - MINUTES LATER
                                                            
The bar has a quaint look and feel to it, as the boys emerge
from the Chevy, which is parked in front. On their way

41.

inside, they pass by a few men whom are standing outside as
they smoke cigarettes and converse among each other.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. GYM SPORTS BAR
                                                            
GYM Sports Bar is not exactly your average sports bar in the
traditional sense; it's not smoke-filled, with large rowdy
and burly men throughout. As said before, it is very quaint
and friendly. There are POOL TABLES, COUCHES, COFFEE TABLES,
FLAT SCREEN TVs everywhere, and of course, the bar itself,
with friendly bartenders to service you. The boys walk in,
looking around as everyone inside are doing their thing.
However, some can't help but turn and glance at the new
customers. Some looking a bit... lustful. You guessed it,
this is a gay bar.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (thinking aloud)
Kind of a sausage-fest, don't you
think?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (matter-of-fact)
Tam-Tam, this is a sports bar.
What girls do you know come here?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
I'm just sayin'...
                                                            
                       ALEX
Come on, man. Let's go play some
pool.
                                                            
Alex, Manny & Tam-Tam head to an empty pool table meanwhile
Anthony heads to the bar and takes a seat. A handsome
bartender named SAM, early-20s, approaches him.
                                                            
                       SAM
Hey, what can I get ya?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Bud Light, please.
                                                            
Sam gets a bottle and opens it before handing it to him.
Anthony takes a sip.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Mind putting on a game?
                                                            
                       SAM
Sure.
                                                            

42.

Sam picks up the remote control to the flat screen above the
bar. He starts scrolling through channels:
                                                            
                       SAM
What team?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Uh... how 'bout the Red Sox?
                                                            
                       SAM
Oooh! Sorry, we don't show Red Sox
games here. Only New York teams.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Damn. Okay, then the Mets.
                                                            
Sam puts it on a Mets game and places the remote aside.
                                                            
                       SAM
      (smiling)
Not a Yankees fan?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Never.
                                                            
                       SAM
Well, between me and you...
      (whispers)
... neither am I.
                                                            
They chuckle, then Sam extends his hand:
                                                            
                       SAM
I'm Sam.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (shaking hands)
Anthony.
                                                            
                       SAM (cont'd)
So, Anthony, I take it you're from
Boston?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah.
                                                            
                       SAM
That's cool. I'm not from here
either.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Really? Where're you from?
                                                            

43.

                       SAM
Philadelphia.
      (smiling)
And I'm a Phillies fan.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (chuckles)
Then you must've been happy when
they won the Series.
                                                            
                       SAM
      (jokingly)
You know, not really. I had money
on the Dodgers that year.
                                                            
They laugh again.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
INT. GYM SPORTS BAR - LATER
                                                            
Anthony is still at the bar, talking to Sam while his
friends are still playing pool, having drunk two beers each.
Manny takes notice of Anthony:
                                                            
                       MANNY
Yo, Tony hasn't left that bar
since we got here.
                                                            
Tam-Tam positions himself as he takes the next shot, missing
it.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
He probably made a new friend.
                                                            
                       MANNY
No, I mean, like, he's been
talking to that dude for a little
too long. Something feels kinda
weird about it.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Don't worry about it. You're up.
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (sighs)
All right.
                                                            
He takes his shot, sinking a ball. Meanwhile, Anthony & Sam
seem to be enjoying their innocent conversation.
                                                            

44.

                       ANTHONY
... Yeah, so basically, we're just
cruising through states until we
get to Miami. Which is good for me
'cause it gives me a chance to get
some footage for my class.
                                                            
                       SAM
Oh yeah? What's your major?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (takes a sip)
Film production. I wanna make
movies.
                                                            
                       SAM
      (impressed)
Wow, that sounds interesting. I
hope it all works out.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Thanks.
                                                            
                       SAM
      (beat)
So, listen, my shift ends in about
an hour. What do you say we head
back to my place? I can even give
you a tour of New York along the
way.
                                                            
Anthony is taken aback by the request. He's not exactly
offended, but his facial expression shows he wants to make
sure he heard what he heard.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Um... I'm sorry?
                                                            
                       SAM
Well, I think you're kinda cute.
And I don't normally get involved
with people from work.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (nervous chuckle)
Okay, I know I'm not drunk, but I
swear you were just coming on to
me.
                                                            
                       SAM
      (smiling)
Guilty as charged.
                                                            

45.

                       ANTHONY
Wait, are you telling me
you're...?
      (realizing)
Oh! I'm-I'm sorry, Sam, but I'm
not gay. In fact, I'm engaged
even.
                                                            
                       SAM
      (disappointed)
Oh, well that's too bad. She must
be a lucky girl.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah, I love her a lot. But hey,
thanks for the compliment?
      (beat)
Well, I'm-I'm gonna go before this
gets any more awkward than it
needs to be.
                                                            
Sam nods and Anthony leaves his beer at the bar as he slowly
gets up and heads over to his friends' pool table. He
approaches them:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
Guys, I think we should go - now.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Why, what's the problem?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
You brought us to a gay bar, you
dickhead! 'Bartender was just
hittin' on me!
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (chuckles)
Damn, nigga, you cheatin' on
Alicia already?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
Fuck you, let's go!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (whispering)
Yeah, man, if that's the case then
I'm leaving.
                                                            

46.

                       ALEX
      (sighs)
All right.
                                                            
They set the pool cues down as they begin to leave. On their
way out, they see various gay couples kissing meanwhile a
disgusted Tam-Tam is approached by one of the GAY PATRONS,
who is clearly invading his personal space.
                                                            
                       GAY PATRON
Hey, baby, where're you headed?
Can I buy you a drink?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Fuck no! Get the fuck away from
me, you fruitcake!
                                                            
                       GAY PATRON
Jeez! You don't have to be so
mean!
                                                            
The patron leaves. Manny, Anthony & Alex looks at Tam-Tam as
he looks forward -- clearly he's made them look bad.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
What?!
                                                            
The boys just shake their heads as they continue out.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. GYM SPORTS BAR
                                                            
There are a few more patrons standing outside and conversing
when the boys emerge from the building.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Tam, what the hell is your
problem?! That shit was
unnecessary back there!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
I don't care, dawg! I'm not into
that kinda shit!
                                                            
                       GAY PATRON #2
      (to Tam-Tam)
Hey, where're you boys headed? The
party's just getting started!
                                                            

47.

                       TAM-TAM
      (flipping him off)
Fuck you, faggot! Mind your own
fuckin' business -- !
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (shoves him)
Tam, what the fuck!?
      (to patron)
Sorry, sir. He's just had a bad
day.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Tam-Tam, you do that again and I
will knock you the fuck out and
leave you in the gayest part of
the city, butt-naked! Then, we'll
see whose a fag!
                                                            
As they get into an argument, Alex turns around and notices
two beautiful girls across the street, dressed as if for a
club. Call these two ALANA & KYRA, both in their early-20s.
He jogs over to them:
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Hey, ladies!
                                                            
                       ALANA/KYRA
      (smiling)
Hey!
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (shaking their
       hands)
Hi, I'm alex.
                                                            
                       KYRA
I'm Kyra, and that's Alana.
                                                            
                       ALANA
Hi.
                                                            
                       ALEX
I was just wondering if you two
know of any good clubs around
here? 'See, my friends and I are
staying at a hotel for the night,
and we're just looking for a place
to kick it. You know of any?
                                                            

48.

                       ALANA
      (smiling)
Why, what happened to GYM Sports?
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Let's just say there was a little
too much "male bonding" going on
in there, if you get what I'm
saying.
                                                            
They laugh.
                                                            
                       KYRA
Well, there's this place we know -
Club Groove. It's a Jazz club near
Washington Square, so I don't know
if...
                                                            
                       ALEX
Nah, we can do Jazz. Are y'all
heading there now? Can we give you
a ride?
                                                            
                       ALANA/KYRA
Um... yeah, sure.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Come on.
                                                            
Alex leads the girls back across just as his friends finish
arguing.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (to the boys)
Yo! This is Kyra, and that's her
friend, Alana.
                                                            
                       KYRA
      (waving)
Hi.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (keeping composure)
Hi, I'm Anthony. And that's Manny
& Tam-Tam.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Hey.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Alana and Kyra's just invited us
to a jazz club. Shall we go?
                                                            

49.

                       TAM-TAM
      (shrugs)
Let's.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I call shotgun!
                                                            
They all get into the Chevy, then drive off.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. CHEVY (MOVING)
                                                            
Anthony is sitting in the passenger's seat as he films
everything along the ride. Alana sits in between Manny and
Alex, who has Kyra sitting on his lap.
                                                            
POV FROM VIDEO CAMERA
                                                            
Anthony focuses the camera on the girls as he narrates:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
Well, we're in the Big Apple, New
York City, hitting up the club
scene. We just came from a bar,
but it turned out to be an
unexpected surprise.
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (chuckles)
Yeah, Tony found himself a new
boyfriend!
                                                            
Everyone laughs.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
Fuck you, Manny. Besides, it was
your idea to go there - which
tells me something about you.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
Yeah, man, ain't it time you came
out of the closet?
                                                            
They all laugh again:
                                                            
                       MANNY
Fuck you, Tam! You homophobe!
                                                            
                       ALANA
Hey, Anthony, what's with the
camera?
                                                            

50.

                       ANTHONY (OS)
It's a project for my film class.
You don't mind, do you?
                                                            
                       ALANA
Oh no, that's fine.
                                                            
She fixes her hair and pouts her lips, making herself pretty
for the camera.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
Oh wow, I guess a camera does
bring out different sides of
people.
                                                            
Alana smiles at the compliment.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. CLUB GROOVE - ESTABLISH - LATER
                                                            
Club Groove, from the looks of it, is a small-looking jazz
bar somewhere between Manhattan and Greenwich Village with
some people entering or exiting the building.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. CLUB GROOVE
                                                            
The club looks very nice inside as the boys and girls enjoy
their meals and drinks, as well as the live music.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yo, this place ain't bad.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (to Kyra)
Yeah, thanks for bringing us.
                                                            
                       KYRA
      (smiling)
You're welcome. 'Glad you like it.
                                                            
                       ALANA
So, where're you guys from anyway?
                                                            
                       MANNY
Boston, but we're on a road trip
to Miami.
                                                            
                       KYRA
Oh yeah, what's in Miami?
                                                            

51.

                       TAM-TAM
      (shrugs)
Nothin', really. We're just goin'
just to go.
                                                            
                       KYRA
Then what after that?
                                                            
                       ALEX
Anthony's wedding. Ain't that
right, Bro?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Maybe, we haven't decided yet.
                                                            
                       KYRA
      (surprised)
You're getting married? That's so
sweet. What's her name?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Alicia.
                                                            
                       ALANA
Can I come to the wedding?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Hell yeah! Whenever you're in
Boston, look us up.
                                                            
                       ALANA
      (chuckles)
Okay.
                                                            
                       KYRA
So, like, what gave you guys the
idea for the trip?
                                                            
                       ALEX
Well, one night I was telling a
story about my trip to Canada this
year, and all the crazy shit I got
into over there. Then Tam-Tam just
got the idea to go on a road trip
based on that.
                                                            
                       ALANA
How was your trip to Canada?
                                                            

52.

                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Oh, it was nuts. Definitely an
experience.
                                                            
                       KYRA
Where are you guys headed after
here?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I don't know, probably back to the
hotel. Why?
                                                            
                       KYRA
We should hang out.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
What? Of course, we've got the
whole night ahead!
                                                            
                       KYRA
      (smiling)
Sounds good.
                                                            
Alex and Kyra smile at each other -- an instant attraction
taking place meanwhile Alana glances at Anthony who shyly
looks away.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
 
EXT. SOUTH SHORE PLAZA - ESTABLISH - DAY
                                                            
It's close to noon as we see one of the well-known malls,
located out in Braintree, Massachusetts. There is an
abundance of cars in the parking lot and several people
around the area.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. MACY'S
                                                            
A female manager in her mid-40s, SHERYL, is walking through
the store with Alicia, who is dressed like the rest of the
employees of the building. They walk past different products
as Sheryl explains everything to Alicia.
                                                            
                       SHERYL
Well, Alicia, you've done your
training for the past few days, so
I think it's time we put you on
the floor. 'Think you can handle
            (MORE)

53.

                       SHERYL (cont'd)
it?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Yeah, I think I can.
                                                            
                       SHERYL
Good. Now, the mall just opened so
it's gonna be slow for about an
hour or two. I'm gonna place you
where the perfumes are, that way
you'll be the first person the
customers see on their way in.
Just greet them and offer a sample
of the latest products; if they
like it, then see if you can make
a sale. Okay?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Sure.
                                                            
They arrive at an empty PERFUME BOOTH:
                                                            
                       SHERYL
Well, here we are. If you have any
questions or concerns, just let me
know.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (nodding)
Okay. Thanks, Sheryl.
                                                            
                       SHERYL
      (smiling)
You're welcome.
                                                            
Sheryl walks away. Alicia gets inside the booth, setting up
the different PERFUMES on the counter. Moments later, a
MIDDLE-AGED WOMAN passes by:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Excuse me, Miss? Would you like to
try this new perfume?
                                                            
The woman waves her off as she continues on in. Seconds
later, an ELDER MAN enters the store:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Sir, may I show you this new
perfume? It makes a great gift for
the wife.
                                                            

54.

                       ELDER MAN
      (walking away)
No, thank you.
                                                            
Alicia sighs, but perks up at the sight of another ELDER
WOMAN walking into the store:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Ma'am, can I interest you in this
brand new perfume? It'll make all
the men go crazy!
                                                            
                       ELDER WOMAN
      (chuckles)
Sure, Honey.
                                                            
Alicia looks relieved as the woman approaches her.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. MOTEL - DAY
                                                            
Traffic is flowing by as we see the motel and it's daily
activities.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. MOTEL ROOM
                                                            
The room is near dark as Manny and Anthony are the only ones
asleep inside; we hear loud KNOCKING (OS) at the door. The
knocking persists until it becomes BANGING moments later.
Manny is the one who finally gets up to answer the door. He
finds Alex & Tam-Tam outside, looking gleeful.
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (sleepily)
Damn, dude, what time is it?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
Seven o'clock, wake ya ass up!
                                                            
They walk into the room, closing the door behind. Alex picks
up a pillow and HITS Anthony over the head with it, pissing
him off:
                                                            
                       ALEX
Tony, wake up!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What the fuck, Alex -- !?
                                                            

55.

                       ALEX
      (chuckles)
Get up, its time to hit the road!
                                                            
Anthony slowly sits up in bed, still sleepy.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What time is it?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (opening curtains)
Seven!
                                                            
The sunlight nearly blinds Anthony & Manny when it suddenly
brightens up the room:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (eyes covered)
Ah shit!
      (tosses pillow)
What the hell, Tam!? Give a
warning next time!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (chuckles)
My bad.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Did y'all niggas even sleep last
night?
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Shit, we just got back to the
motel!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What'chu mean?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
We spent the night wit' the girls!
                                                            
                       MANNY
Why am I not surprised?
                                                            
                       ALEX
You'd be stupid if you were. I
mean, ain't that the point of this
trip - the adventure?
                                                            
                       MANNY
Well, yeah, but it's also a time
for the four of us to bond.
                                                            

56.

                       TAM-TAM
      (scoffs)
Shit, well me an' Alana were doin'
a little "bonding" ourselves.
                                                            
He and Alex share a laugh.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
You guys are assholes.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Hey, well not all of us are
getting married, Tony.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
'The fuck that's supposed to mean?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Don't get us wrong, T, we happy
for you and all, but you decided
to hop on the marriage wagon. Not
us. So, don't get pissed when we
decide to live our lives to the
fullest.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Whatever. I'm hoppin' in the
shower.
                                                            
Anthony gets up, reaching into his bag for a TOWEL. As he
heads for the bathroom:
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (re: Alana)
Yo, Tony! For the record... she
was kinda diggin' you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (walking away)
Yeah, fuck you too.
                                                            
Tam-Tam simply smiles at the remark as he turns on the TV.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. GAS STATION - LATER
                                                            
We see the Chevy parked at a gas station somewhere along the
road, with Anthony filling up the gas tank. Tam-Tam and Alex
are in the back seat, both fast asleep. Anthony watches the
various cars pass on the highway as he waits for the tank to
fill up. As he finishes up, Manny walks out of the mini-mart

57.

with two LARGE BAGS OF FOOD. He approaches the car as
Anthony replaces the nozzle on the gas pump:
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (to Anthony)
We good to go?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah. What'd you get?
                                                            
                       MANNY
The good stuff.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
You get what I wanted?
                                                            
                       MANNY
Yeah.
                                                            
Manny reaches into one of the bags for a VITAMIN WATER then
tosses it to Anthony; they get back inside the car.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. CHEVY
                                                            
Anthony takes a sip of his water as he gets in the driver's
seat. Manny sits in the passenger's seat:
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (to Alex & Tam-Tam)
Yo, dickheads, wake up! I got some
food!
                                                            
Tam-Tam and Alex slowly get up, they look at the bags:
                                                            
                       MANNY (cont'd)
I got soda, chips, and snack
cakes. The nachos are mine!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (sleepily)
You stingy bastard. I'll take a
cupcake.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (sleepily)
Gimme a soda.
                                                            
Manny hands them the food.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Where we at?
                                                            

58.

                       ANTHONY
      (looking out)
Pennsylvania.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (takes a sip)
Damn, how long were we sleeping?
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (eating nachos)
About two and a half hours.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (scoffs)
I'm still tired -- that girl wore
me out!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah, well, we still got a lot of
ground to cover. So go back to
sleep.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
A'ight. Wake me up at the next
stop.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah.
                                                            
Anthony starts the ignition and drives off.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
INT. SOUTH SHORE PLAZA, FOOD COURT - LATER
                                                            
Alicia is sitting alone at a table, where her meal consists
of a SALAD AND A DRINK; she takes out her cellphone and
dials a number.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. CHEVY (MOVING) - SAME
                                                            
Everyone is asleep while Anthony is driving. His cellphone
suddenly begins to RING (OS) and he reaches into his pocket,
checking the caller ID before answering:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (into phone)
Hey, Baby.
                                                            

59.

INTERCUTTING
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Hey.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Wassup?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Nothing. I'm on my lunch break, so
I felt like calling you. What's up
on your end?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (on speakerphone)
We're good. Everybody's sleeping
so I'm at the wheel today.
                                                            
Tam-Tam slowly opens his eyes, eavesdropping on the
conversation:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
So, tell me, what'd you guys do
last night? It sounds like you had
a long night.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Oh, well, nothin' special. We went
to Manhattan and hit up a few
clubs, that's about it --
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
Tony's cheatin' on you with
another man, Alicia -- !!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (surprised)
What the fuck?! Nigga, I thought
you was sleeping?!
                                                            
Tam-Tam simply laughs, waking everyone else.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
What was that, Tony?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Huh? Oh, nothin', Baby -- Tam's
just actin' stupid.
      (to Tam-Tam)
I'ma beat ya ass at the next stop,
watch!
                                                            

60.

                       ALICIA
No, I heard something about
cheating....
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
No, Alicia, it's not like that!
It's...
      (sighs)
'See, what happened was that Manny
took us to a gay bar by mistake
and we didn't know. So, I'm
sittin' at the bar, talking to
this guy, when all of a sudden he
starts hittin' on me.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (into phone;
       chuckles)
Then, Tony went back home with the
dude!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
No, I didn't -- shut the fuck up,
Tam!!
                                                            
Alicia laughs at her boyfriend as he defends his sexuality.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
It's okay, Sweetie, I believe you.
Besides, if you were gay, you'd be
better in bed.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Wha -- ?!
                                                            
                       BOYS
Ooohhh!!
                                                            
The rest of the boys react to her comment and laugh, except
for Anthony of course.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Girl, what'chu talkin' about? You
know damn well twelve minutes and
forty-five pumps is all I need to
make you happy. This ain't no
goddamn triathlon!
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Yeah, but even if you came first,
you'd still be last, if you know
            (MORE)

61.

                       ALICIA (cont'd)
what I mean.
                                                            
                       BOYS
Ooohh!!!
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Get him, Alicia!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Oh, I see you got jokes, huh Babe?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (chuckles)
I'm just playing. Come on, it's
boring at my job!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Well, I don't know, you hurt my
feelings now.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
Aw, I'm sorry. Fine, I gotta get
back to work anyway. I'll call you
when I get out. I love you!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
'Love you too. Bye.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Bye.
                                                            
She hangs up.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (to Anthony)
You little bitch - you can't take
a joke!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Nigga, it ain't even that - I'm
driving. Besides, I ain't gotta
prove shit to y'all, unless y'all
want me to whip it out!
                                                            
                       ALEX
Nah, we good.
                                                            
Anthony continues driving, chuckling to himself.
                                                            

62.

                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
EXT. SOUTH SHORE PLAZA, PARKING LOT - EVENING
                                                            
We see Alicia, exhausted after a long day's work as she
walks towards her Toyota. She opens the door and tosses her
purse in the back; she's about to get in the driver's seat
when:
                                                            
                       NIKKI (OS)
Hey!
                                                            
Alicia turns as Nikki approaches the car -- an awkward
moment at best.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (concerned)
Hi...
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Alicia, right?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Yeah... Nikki, is it?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Yeah, that's it.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Is there, um... I don't know,
anything I can help you with...?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Nah, I just happened to be heading
inside, saw you walking to your
car, so I thought I'd say hi. So,
hi.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Okay.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
How's Jessica?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
She's fine. Is there something
that you want, Nikki?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Not at the moment. I'm surprised
Tony's not around.
      (chuckles)
When we were together, he was
always around me -- kinda like a
            (MORE)

63.

                       NIKKI (cont'd)
clingy boyfriend.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Well, he has his own things to do.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Really? Do you know all the
"things" he did to me?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (matter-of-fact)
I don't really care --
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Well, you should. I mean let's
face it, how well do you really
know your boyfriend? One minute
he's sweet and caring, then the
next, you're getting kicked to the
curb!
                                                            
                       ALICIA
He said you left him and abandoned
Jessie!
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Oh, is that what he's saying?
      (nodding)
Okay then. Well, he'll be
surprised to know that I want her
back.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (scoffs)
Yeah, that'll never happen. Excuse
me.
                                                            
Alicia gets in her car and begins pulling out of the parking
space. Nikki simply watches her through the windshield
before Alicia takes off.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
 
EXT. DINER - ESTABLISH - NIGHT
                                                            
We're looking upon a diner somewhere near a coastline.
Through a window, we can see Manny, Alex & Tam-Tam sitting
at a table and eating dinner. However, our attention is
focused on the Chevy parked outside.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            

64.

INT. CHEVY
                                                            
Anthony is sitting alone in the back seat, while talking on
his cellphone.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (into phone)
We're in Virginia Beach, Mom.
'Just got in a few hours ago.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. RAMOS RESIDENCE, LIVING ROOM - SAME
                                                            
Isabel is on the other end of the line, sitting on the couch
with Jessica as they watch a SPANISH SOAP-OPERA.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
That's good, Mijo. Are you boys
having a good time?
                                                            
INTERCUTTING
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah... I guess you could say
that. No, you know what?
Everything's good. I got a lot of
footage for my class, and I saw
some interesting things along the
way.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Well, I'm happy for you. It sounds
like you're having a lot of fun.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I am. How's things back home? Any
news for me?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
      (sighs)
We're fine. Pablo went out with
his brother so it's just me and
Jessica here, watching TV. That
staffing agency called for you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Oh yeah, what they say?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
They found a job for you, if you
can make it back within two weeks.
                                                            

65.

                       ANTHONY
Thanks, Ma. I'll give them a call
in the morning. Can you put Jessie
on please?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Okay, Anthony. I love you and take
care.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I will, Ma.
                                                            
Isabel hands Jessica the phone:
                                                            
                       JESSICA
Hello?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Hi, Sweetie.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
      (smiling)
Hi, Daddy!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What'cha doin'?
                                                            
                       JESSICA
Watching novelas with Grandma.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (taken aback)
Novelas? Ain't you a little young
for soap-operas?
                                                            
                       JESSICA
      (smiling)
No. Abuela says that I'm a "young
lady".
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (chuckles)
Okay, if you say so then. So, are
you ready for your first day of
camp tomorrow?
                                                            
                       JESSICA
Do I really have to go, Daddy?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Jessie, we've talked about this a
million times; I'm looking for a
job and your grandparents can't
            (MORE)

66.

                       ANTHONY (cont'd)
look after you everyday.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
Mommy can take care of me.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Mommy's working too, Honey. Just
go and make some new friends --
      (to himself)
-- God, I sound like my mother.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
      (sighs)
Okay, fine.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Well, Baby, I gotta go. I love
you.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
I love you too, Daddy. Bring me
something when you get back.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Okay. Bye.
                                                            
                       JESSICA
Bye.
                                                            
He hangs up. Anthony sits in the car, contemplating
something before stepping out of the car and heading into
the diner.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. ROJAS RESIDENCE - ESTABLISH - NIGHT
                                                            
The Toyota pulls up in front of the house and Alicia steps
out of the car, making her way into her home.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. ALICIA'S BEDROOM
                                                            
Alicia's older sister, ANNA, is sitting at the computer,
instant messaging people. She has the television on cartoons
while David lays on the bed, entertained. Anna still looks
as pretty as when we last saw her, comfortable in pajamas
when Alicia walks in the room, placing her purse aside. She
looks up:
                                                            

67.

                       ANNA
Hey, Sis.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Hey. Shouldn't you be home?
                                                            
                       ANNA
Me and William got into a fight,
so I came here for the night.
'Hope you don't mind me using your
computer.
                                                            
Alicia gestures that she doesn't mind as she sits next to
the baby. She lets out a sigh as she lies down.
                                                            
                       ANNA
Long day?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
What? Oh no, it's just...
something happened as I was
leaving work today.
                                                            
                       ANNA
What?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I ran into this girl, Anthony's
ex.
                                                            
                       ANNA
What's the problem?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
She's Jessie's mother, and I feel
kinda threatened by her. I mean
today was the second time I've run
into her. The first time was with
Tony, and he felt the same way.
                                                            
                       ANNA
Well, did she do anything?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
No, she didn't. She just said that
she wants Jessie back, but I left
before anything else was said or
done.
                                                            
                       ANNA
Hmm, I didn't know Anthony had
baggage like that. You should let
him know about this.
                                                            

68.

                       ALICIA
Nah, I don't think I'll be seeing
her again.
                                                            
                       ANNA
Well, I hope you're right.
                                                            
Anna turns back to the computer while Alicia continues
watching cartoons with her son.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
EXT. RAMOS RESIDENCE - DAY
                                                            
The street is filled with children playing when we see Nikki
approaching the front door. She RINGS the doorbell.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. RAMOS RESIDENCE
                                                            
Isabel opens the front door, and is surprised to see Nikki
at her doorstep. It becomes clear that this is an
unexpected, if not awkward surprise for her.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Nikki? What are you doing here?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (smiling)
Hi, Mrs. Ramos. How you been?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
I'm fine, thank you.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Wow, it's been a while...
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Yeah. Yeah, six years to be exact.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Well, you look great.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
What do you want, Nikki?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
I came to see your son, is he
here?
                                                            
Nikki makes a move to step inside, but Isabel quickly steps
in her way, blocking her off:
                                                            

69.

                       ISABEL
Actually, he's not here. He went
to Florida, and he won't be back
for another week.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Florida, really? Well, when's he
coming back?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
      (beat)
Good bye, Nikki.
                                                            
Isabel closes the door in her face.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. RAMOS RESIDENCE - SAME
                                                            
Nikki simply stands there for a moment, letting the gesture
sink in before she finally leaves.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. RAMOS RESIDENCE, LIVING ROOM
                                                            
Alicia is sitting in the living room, watching TV with David
when Isabel walks in. She turns:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Who was that, Isabel?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
      (sitting down)
Oh, it was just some girl Anthony
used to be with - don't worry
about it.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Was it Nikki?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
How do you know Nikki?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I saw her last night. She
approached me outside my job.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
What did she say?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Just a bunch of nonsense, really.
                                                            

70.

                       ISABEL
No, listen to me, Alicia: Nikki
was a conniving girl when Anthony
was with her. She did a lot of
cruel things to him - you should
not take what she says lightly.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I know. But I doubt she'll try
anything with Jessie.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Why do you say that?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
She kinda mentioned that she wants
Jessie back.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
I'm telling you, be careful! You
don't know what this girl can do,
okay?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Okay. Well, I gotta get ready to
pick up Jessie from camp anyway. I
lent my sister the car so she
should be due back any minute.
                                                            
They hear a car honking it's HORN (OS); Alicia recognizes
the sound and hands David to Isabel:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
That's Anna now. Here's David and
I'll be right back.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Bye.
                                                            
Alicia gets up and walks out.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. RAMOS RESIDENCE
                                                            
POV FROM INSIDE A CAR
                                                            
From down the street, we watch as Alicia exits the house and
climbs into the passenger seat of her Toyota.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            

71.

EXT. HONDA
                                                            
A very serious Nikki is sitting in the passenger's seat with
her friend, MARISOL, early-20s, at the wheel. Both watching
like hawks:
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (to Marisol)
Follow her.
                                                            
Marisol waits until the Toyota pulls out before starting the
ignition and following behind, keeping her distance the
whole way.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. DORCHESTER YMCA - LATER
                                                            
It's the end of the day for camp as we see numerous kids
leaving the local YMCA with their parents and guardians.
Alicia's Toyota pulls up to the front.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. TOYOTA
                                                            
As mentioned earlier, Anna is at the wheel when Alicia is
undoing her seat belt:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I'll be out in two minutes.
                                                            
                       ANNA
Take your time, Sis.
                                                            
Alicia gets out of the car.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. DORCHESTER YMCA
                                                            
As Alicia heads into the building, we can see Marisol's
Honda pull up around the corner.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. HONDA
                                                            
Nikki is readying to get out:
                                                            
                       NIKKI
I'll be right back.
                                                            

72.

                       MARISOL
You sure you wanna do this -- ?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Marisol, I got this! Okay? I got
this.
                                                            
                       MARISOL
Alright, do what you gotta do.
                                                            
Nikki steps out of the car and heads for the building.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. YMCA, BASKETBALL GYM
                                                            
Jessica is sitting on the bleachers, talking with 3 other
girls her age. The rest of the kids, which rounds them out
to about ten in total, are playing with the RUBBER BALLS on
the court for entertainment. The kids are being watched by
two female counselors, VICKY & JENNIFER, both in their
mid-30s. Vicky notices when Alicia walks into the gym; she
approaches:
                                                            
                       VICKY
      (smiling)
Hi, I'm Vicky. Can I help you?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Hi. I'm here to pick up my
daughter, Jessica Ramos.
                                                            
                       VICKY
Oh okay, she's sitting at the
bleachers. Jessica!
                                                            
Jessica looks up, happy to see Alicia. She comes down.
                                                            
                       VICKY
Jessica was great. She had no
problem fitting in or making
friends.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (smiling)
That's good to hear.
                                                            
Jessica joins them just as Nikki walks into the gym:
                                                            
                       VICKY
      (to Nikki)
Can I help you, Miss?
                                                            

73.

                       NIKKI
Yeah, I'm here to get my daughter.
                                                            
                       VICKY
Okay, which one would she be -- ?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (points to Jessica)
Her. Come on.
                                                            
Nikki grabs Jessica by the arm, attempting to take her away
until Alicia pushes her off:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Excuse you?! Don't be grabbing her
like that!
                                                            
                       VICKY
I'm sorry is there something going
on here, that I should know about?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Yeah, this girl is my daughter,
and that hoe is trying to steal
her from me!
                                                            
                       VICKY
Okay, Miss, I'm gonna need you to
lower your voice and refrain from
using foul language. Are you the
legal guardian?
                                                            
                       NIKKI/ALICIA
Yes!/No!
                                                            
                       VICKY
Who is the legal guardian?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I am! My boyfriend's Jessica's
father, and he's left me in charge
of her while he's on vacation; I
don't even know this woman!
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Oh yeah? Well, I'm Jessica's
mother! And I'm taking her home!
                                                            
Jennifer notices the commotion and joins in:
                                                            
                       JENNIFER
Is there a problem here?
                                                            

74.

                       VICKY
      (re: Alicia)
Jennifer, this woman here came to
pick up Jessica. But Miss...?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Nikki Sandoval.
                                                            
                       VICKY (cont'd)
Miss Sandoval here claims to be
the legal guardian.
                                                            
                       JENNIFER
Then, let's just call the father.
                                                            
                       VICKY
Well, from what I'm told, he's on
vacation.
                                                            
                       JENNIFER
I see...
                                                            
                       ALICIA
You know what? Here...
                                                            
Alicia takes out a LEGAL-LOOKING DOCUMENT from her pocket as
well as her DRIVER'S LICENSE, and hands them to Vicky.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
That's a copy of the application
my boyfriend and I signed, and
that's my Driver's license. My
name is Alicia Rojas. Take a look.
                                                            
Vicky looks it over, then:
                                                            
                       VICKY
      (nodding)
Yeah, I'll accept this. Miss
Sandoval, I'm gonna have to ask
you to leave.
                                                            
Jennifer begins to escort her out of the gym:
                                                            
                       NIKKI
What?! No, fuck that!!
      (to Alicia)
Bitch, you just fucked up!! I'm
getting my daughter back, watch!!
Oh, I can't believe this shit!!
                                                            
Nikki finally leaves the gym.
                                                            

75.

                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. HONDA
                                                            
A pissed off Nikki gets back into the car.
                                                            
                       MARISOL
What happened? You get your little
girl back?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (matter-of-fact)
No, do you see her here!? That
fuckin' bitch got me kicked out!
Let's just get out of here, before
I really get pissed!
                                                            
They drive off.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. DORCHESTER YMCA
                                                            
Alicia never notices the Honda passing by as she puts
Jessica in the back seat. Then she gets in front.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. TOYOTA
                                                            
As Alicia sits in the passenger's seat, her facial
expression makes it clear that she is upset by the encounter
with Nikki; it doesn't take long for Anna to notice.
                                                            
                       ANNA
What's wrong?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (beat)
You know, Anna, I've dealt with
ex-girlfriends before, but I can't
take this anymore. I mean the one
time I really get to spend some
bonding time with Jessie,
Anthony's ex is trying to ruin
everything!
                                                            
                       ANNA
What'd she do?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (tearing up)
She showed up inside, and she
actually tried to steal Jessie
            (MORE)

76.

                       ALICIA (cont'd)
away from me. I-I almost lost my
daughter for a moment there...!
                                                            
                       ANNA
Alright, that's it. I'm calling
Tony --
                                                            
                       ALICIA
No. I'll do it. Just take us home,
please.
                                                            
Anna simply nods and begins driving off, while Alicia wipes
away her tears, regaining her composure. Alicia looks up at
Jessica through the rear-view mirror; Jessica smiles at her,
and she simply returns the smile back.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
 
EXT. VIRGINIA BEACH COASTLINE, PIER - DAY
                                                            
Anthony is standing alone at the pier, recording footage of
all the SAILBOATS AND YACHTS out at sea, and the people down
at the beach below.
                                                            
POV FROM VIDEO CAMERA
                                                            
Everything in sight is being recorded:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
      (narrating)
Virginia Beach, from my own
personal experience, is a great
place for tourism. The beach
itself, as you can see, is simply
beautiful here. But the beach
isn't the only attraction; there's
plenty of shops here, as well as
restaurants. Aside from that,
Virginia Beach is the kind of
place where many good things can
happen. Who knows? You might even
find a lover here.
                                                            
                       ALEX (OS)
Tony!
                                                            
Anthony whips the camera around as Alex approaches:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
Speaking of lovers.
                                                            

77.

                       ALEX
Yo, we're about to leave. You
ready?
                                                            
BACK TO SCENE
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (turning off
       camera)
Yeah, I'm ready.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Come on.
                                                            
They leave the pier.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
INT. CHEVY (MOVING) - EVENING
                                                            
The sun is setting as the Chevy drives along the interstate.
Alex is at the wheel this time with Anthony in the
passenger's seat, and Tam-Tam & Manny in the back. They have
RAP MUSIC playing on the CD PLAYER as vibe to it.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yo, can y'all imagine how hip-hop
would be if 'Pac and Biggie had
never died?
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Yo, don't even start with that
shit!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
What? Come on, I'm serious!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
If Biggie and 2Pac were alive
today, the East Coast/West Coast
beef would still be alive wit 'em.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
How you figure that?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Easy: 'Pac would still keep it
goin'. I mean, I'm not trying to
say he was ignorant 'cause that
would be a direct insult to the
man, but how many diss tracks did
            (MORE)

78.

                       ANTHONY (cont'd)
he make towards Biggie?
                                                            
                       MANNY
I dunno.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
And how many did Biggie make
towards 'Pac?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Look, that's not what I'm talkin'
about, though! My point is they
were both good artists. Their
music was ahead of it's time. If
they were still alive, I believe
their music would still be as
good.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Yeah, but what if they burn-out?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
What do you mean?!
                                                            
                       ALEX
Think about it, it's the same case
in any genre: LL Cool J put out
ten albums and even then his sales
started droppin'. Or how about
when Eminem sorta peaked after
putting out The Eminem Show? Both
are great artists, in my opinion,
but eventually, they knew when to
quit and move on to other things.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
What's your point?
                                                            
                       ALEX
My point is that the same would've
happened with 2Pac and Biggie.
Think about it.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Man, whatever! I still stand by
what I say.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Okay.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            

79.

INT. ALICIA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
                                                            
Alicia is sitting at her computer, typing up an essay while
Jessica is lying on her bed watching TV. David is asleep in
his crib. We see Alicia struggling as she types, quickly
deleting words moments after she types them - unable to make
a decision. Clearly Nikki has affected her concentration.
She lets a sigh before grabbing her cellphone and leaving
the room.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. CHEVY (MOVING)
                                                            
The music is still playing as the boys drive along. Anthony
is staring out the window when his cellphone RINGS (OS); he
answers the call:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (into phone)
Hello?
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. ROJAS RESIDENCE, BACK PORCH - SAME
                                                            
The porch is dark as Alicia speaks into the phone, her voice
breaking as her eyes water:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (into phone)
Hey, Baby...
                                                            
INTERCUTTING
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Hey. What's wrong, you okay?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Um, yeah-yeah. Listen, there's
something I need to tell you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Okay...
      (lowers music
       volume)
Go ahead.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I ran into Nikki.
                                                            

80.

                       ANTHONY
      (disbelief)
What?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Twice.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
When?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Yesterday, outside my job. And
then again today, when I went to
pick up Jessie from camp.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What happened, did she follow you?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I don't know -- I think so. She
even showed up at your house.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What'd she say to you?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
She wants Jessie back.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
How so?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
She just does; she even tried to
take her from me at the YMCA.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Are you serious?!
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (nodding)
Yes. Anthony, I-I don't know what
to do, anymore. I mean, Nikki's
the biological mother -- I...
there's so much I can do without
you here!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Baby, baby, listen to me:
everything's gonna be okay.
Nothing bad is gonna happen, you
hear me? I promise. Just wait
until I get back. Can you do that
for me?
                                                            

81.

                       ALICIA
      (tearing up)
Yes...
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (cont'd)
'Far as we're all concerned,
you're the mother, and Jessie
knows this. Alicia, I need you to
stay strong for me, okay? You're
doing good.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Okay.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Baby, I love you so much. Nobody -
and I mean nobody - is gonna tear
down what we've built together.
I'll be home soon.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I love you, Anthony. Please come
home soon.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I will. Talk to you later.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Bye...
                                                            
Alicia hangs up the phone. She lets out a sigh of relief
before heading back into her home, wiping her tears before
doing so.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. CHEVY (MOVING)
                                                            
Anthony stares down at the floor for a beat, building up his
anger before going into a tantrum and HITTING his fist
against the dashboard. The boys take notice and Alex pulls
over to the side of the road. Anthony quickly gets out of
the car.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. SHOULDER OF THE ROAD
                                                            
Anthony's tantrum continues outside the car:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
FUCK!!! FUCKING BITCH!!!
AAARRGGHH, FUUUUUCCCKKK!!!!!!!
                                                            

82.

Manny, Alex & Tam-Tam quickly get out of the Chevy and rush
over to Anthony, trying to calm him down. Alex grabs him:
                                                            
                       ALEX
Tony, calm down! What's wrong,
man?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
It's Nikki, she won't leave Alicia
alone! She tried to steal Jessie
away from her today!
                                                            
                       MANNY
Oh shit, you serious?!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah - the bitch even went to my
house!
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
How'd you find this out?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Alicia just called me! Fuck!!
                                                            
                       ALEX
So, what's gonna happen now?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I'ma kill this fuckin' bitch!!
                                                            
Anthony rushes for the car, but his friends quickly hold him
back:
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yo, calm down, a'ight?! Don't
think like that. Besides we're
over five states away from home,
there's nothing you can do
personally, man.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Tam-Tam's right, Tony. Look, let's
just find a motel for the night,
then you can think over this,
okay?
                                                            
                       ALEX
Yeah, man, just... I don't know,
calm down. We got your back on
this, and we damn sure don't want
this chick to take your little
girl away. But, you'll make things
            (MORE)

83.

                       ALEX (cont'd)
worse the angrier you get.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (beat; softly)
Okay. Let's go.
                                                            
Tam-Tam puts an arm around him as they head back to the
Chevy:
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
You're gonna be a'ight. Trust me.
                                                            
They get back in the car and drive off.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
EXT. HOUSE - ESTABLISH - NIGHT
                                                            
We're looking at a 3-family house somewhere in the Ashmont
area of Boston.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. THIRD FLOOR APARTMENT, BACK PORCH
                                                            
We're not quite clear as to who's apartment this is when we
see Nikki & Marisol sitting on the back porch, drinking
BEERS. They stay quiet for a beat, staring out into the
neighborhood until Nikki finally breaks the silence:
                                                            
                       NIKKI
I just wanna see my little girl,
Marisol. To hold her, to talk to
her - is that so wrong of me?
                                                            
                       MARISOL
No. But, you are going about this
the wrong way, Nikki. I mean,
you're not exactly taking a
peaceful approach.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Anthony never gave me a chance.
You know, when I saw him last
summer, I was planning on sitting
down and talking things out with
him. But, he just walked right
past me, ignoring what I had to
say.
                                                            

84.

                       MARISOL
      (sighs)
Look, I don't know this guy like
you do, but I hate to see you
desperate like this. You know, you
can take him to court.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
You think that's gonna work?
                                                            
                       MARISOL
What other choice do you have?
There's this lawyer I know, out in
Jamaica Plain. He's the one who
got my brother off those drug
charges two years ago. Talk to
him, tell him your story, and
he'll take care of the rest.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
I dunno, though. I mean, yeah, me
and Anthony fucked up and had a
fallin' out... but I don't wanna
do that to him. It does look like
he's a good father.
                                                            
                       MARISOL
So what? It doesn't matter. If he
was a good father, then he'd let
the mother see her child. Am I
right?
                                                            
Nikki slowly nods - she knows this is true.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
      (beat)
Fine. Give me the number.
                                                            
Marisol heads into the apartment while Nikki sits there,
drinking her beer while thinking over her decision.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. HOLIDAY INN - ESTABLISH - NIGHT
                                                            
We're looking at a Holiday Inn, standing somewhere within a
beautiful city.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            

85.

INT. HOTEL ROOM
                                                            
Alex is sitting inside the two-bed room, bored as he watches
a movie on the television. He occasionally glances towards
the bathroom, almost as if he's hinting us something.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. BATHROOM
                                                            
A depressed Anthony is sitting fully clothed in the empty
bathtub. With his video camera in hand, he records the white
walls of the room.
                                                            
POV FROM VIDEO CAMERA
                                                            
The camera is pointed towards the white ceiling as Anthony
narrates:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
Emptiness. That's what this
ceiling reminds me of, emptiness.
Why? Because it's painted white.
No, I'm not trying to be racist
when I say that, given the fact
that I am a person of color. It's
simply because I once heard that
white is not a color, but the
absence of color.
                                                            
He points the camera to himself:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Whichever way you want to view it
is none of my concern, really.
                                                            
The camera is pointed back to the ceiling:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (OS)
However, that is not the point I'm
trying to make. As I point the
camera to this colorless ceiling,
how do you, the viewer, feel as
you stare at it. My answer?
Absolutely nothing. I don't even
know what to feel. Earlier this
evening, I'd received news which I
will not discuss, but had made
me... bitter, for lack of a better
word. I let my anger out a long
time ago, but now I don't know
what to feel. Think of this
ceiling as a challenge for
yourself to fill in the blanks.
            (MORE)

86.

                       ANTHONY (cont'd)
Good bye, for now.
                                                            
BACK TO SCENE
                                                            
Anthony turns off the camera as he continues sitting in the
tub, staring at the ceiling.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. ROOM
                                                            
As Alex continues watching TV, there is a KNOCK (OS) at the
door. He gets up and answers, finding Manny & Tam-Tam
outside, wearing SWIM ATTIRE and holding towels. They step
into the room as Alex closes the door.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Waz good? Where y'all headed?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
Yo, we just happened to look out
the window, and saw these dope ass
chicks takin' a dip in the pool!
You wanna come?
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Hell yeah!
                                                            
                       MANNY
Where's Tony? See if he wants to
come.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Yo, that nigga's been in the
bathroom for the last hour and a
half! I don't know if he's takin'
a shit or just sittin' there.
                                                            
                       MANNY
I'll get him.
                                                            
Manny heads over to the bathroom, and KNOCKS on the door.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Tony!
                                                            
Anthony opens the door and steps out, with his camera in
hand:
                                                            

87.

                       ANTHONY
What?
                                                            
He heads for the bed, setting his camera down.
                                                            
                       MANNY
We're about to head down to the
pool. You wanna come?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
No.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (disgusted)
Yo, you didn't record yourself
beatin' your meat, did you?
                                                            
Anthony gives him a very serious look for such a stupid
question.
                                                            
                       ALEX
So, what you gonna do?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I dunno. I think I'll do my
laundry.
                                                            
                       ALEX/TAM-TAM
      (taken aback)
Laundry?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah, nigga, laundry! Y'all got a
fuckin' problem with that?!
                                                            
The boys gesture that they have no problem. Clearly this guy
is not in a good mood.
                                                            
                       ALEX
A'ight, well I'm-I'ma go swim in
the pool. We'll check ya later.
                                                            
Anthony waves them off as Alex gets his swim trunks and
towel, and leaves. Anthony lets out a sigh before putting
his dirty clothes in a LARGE PLASTIC BAG.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. LAUNDRY ROOM - LATER
                                                            
The hotel's self-laundry room is empty, with the exception
of Anthony and a beautiful African American college-type
named LAUREN, early-20s, who is doing her own laundry close

88.

by. As Anthony loads his clothes in a washer, she looks
around for something until she finds a bottle of DETERGENT
standing idly by on a table close to him. She reaches for it
but he notices:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Uh, excuse me, Miss?
      (she turns)
That's mine.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (smiling)
Oh, I'm sorry. I was lookin'
around for the detergent until I
saw this...
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Oh, naw, it's no big deal. Use it
if you want - it's just soap.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (smiling)
Okay. I'm Lauren.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Anthony.
                                                            
She pours in the detergent into one of her washers, then
turns the machine on before handing the detergent back to
Anthony, who does the same.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
So, you from around here?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Naw, I'm from Boston. You?
                                                            
                       LAUREN
I grew up here, but I'm visiting.
I only came to see my sister.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Oh, I'm just passing through with
some friends. We're on a road trip
to Miami.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Oh, that's cool. A good way to
spend the summer.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (sighs)
Yeah, I guess so.
                                                            

89.

                       LAUREN
      (smiling)
What's wrong with that?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Nothin', it's just... to be
honest, I didn't really wanna
come. But I'm too far from home to
call it quits, you know what I
mean?
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Yeah, I know how you feel. I felt
the exact same way on my
mid-terms, this semester.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Oh yeah? What school you go to?
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Miami University. You?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Emerson College.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (grinning)
Let me guess: you're a film major?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
How the hell did you know that?
                                                            
                       LAUREN
I can see it in your eyes; you got
that artistic look.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Uh... thanks?
                                                            
                       LAUREN
It was either that, or pointing
out the fact that your camera's
right there.
                                                            
She points out his video camera sitting on top of a washer;
they laugh.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. HOLIDAY INN, SWIMMING POOL
                                                            

90.

There are 3 very beautiful ladies swimming in the pool, all
of them in their early-20s and with an OPEN COOLER full of
beers nearby. These girls are CANDACE, AMANDA, MELANIE. The
girls are enjoying their time together, drinking when
Tam-Tam, Alex & Manny arrive:
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
How you doin', ladies?
                                                            
The girls look up:
                                                            
                       GIRLS
      (smiling)
Hey!
                                                            
                       ALEX
I'm Alex. And these are my
friends, Manny and Tam-Tam. We
were wondering if we could join
you for a late-night swim?
                                                            
                       AMANDA
Sure. I'm Amanda, and that's
Candace and Melanie.
                                                            
The boys drop their towels and get in the water to join the
girls.
                                                            
                       CANDACE
You boys want a beer?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yeah, I'll take one.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Me too.
                                                            
Alex moves closer to Amanda, already attracted to her as she
smiles at him.
                                                            
                       AMANDA
      (softly)
Where're you guys from?
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (softly)
Boston.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. LAUNDRY ROOM - MINUTES LATER
                                                            

91.

Back in the laundry room, Anthony and Lauren are laughing as
he shows her some of the footage he's got on his video
camera. What they are watching are pretty much footage from
their stay in New York and Virginia.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (smiling)
Wow, it looks like you got a lot
of footage so far. What's New York
like? I've never been there.
                                                            
He smiles as he turns off the camera:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
It's cool. But it's definitely
something you don't expect.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
What do you mean?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
I ended up in a gay bar by
accident, where the bartender
tried to take me home with him.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (laughing)
Oh my God, are you serious?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Hey, I couldn't make that up if I
wanted to.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Wow, so what happened next?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Well, I left.
      (chuckles)
I mean, it got awkward for me, so
I just left. The guy was cool and
all, but I just had to leave.
Besides, I'm not gay anyway.
                                                            
They chuckle, but he gets up to attend his clothes as soon
as the washer finishes up.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. SWIMMING POOL
                                                            

92.

Back at the swimming, Alex is already a fast mover as we
find him in the midst of a make-out session with Amanda,
alone at one corner of the pool. Moments later, she pulls
away, smiling:
                                                            
                       AMANDA
      (softly)
Wow, you're kinda quick. We just
met, remember?
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (softly)
You wasn't objecting ten minutes
ago.
                                                            
                       AMANDA
      (smiling)
Oh, Sweetie, I'm not objecting.
                                                            
They continue kissing. Melanie and Manny are sitting at the
edge of the pool, drinking and watching Tam-Tam & Candace
frolic in the water.
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (to Melanie)
So, how long are y'all staying
here?
                                                            
                       MELANIE
We're actually leaving later on
tonight.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Where to?
                                                            
                       MELANIE
Atlanta.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Oh damn, that sucks. We just got
here, on our way to Florida.
What's in the ATL?
                                                            
                       MELANIE
We're going to a party, two nights
from now.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Oh, okay.
                                                            

93.

                       MELANIE
Hey, y'all should come. I mean, I
don't know if you guys want to,
but I think it'd be fun.
                                                            
                       MANNY
What kind of party is it?
                                                            
                       MELANIE
A house party. One of our college
friends is throwing a going-away
party before she goes to Europe.
                                                            
                       MANNY
A'ight, cool. I'll tell the
fellas.
                                                            
                       MELANIE
Cool.
                                                            
They smile at each other before taking another sip of their
beers.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. LAUNDRY ROOM - MINUTES LATER
                                                            
Lauren & Anthony are now sitting in front of the dryers,
watching their clothes tumble around as they pass the time.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (beat)
So, what's in Miami?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Nothin' special. We just made the
trip out of impulse. Other than
that, I have an aunt there.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Hit up South Beach when you get
there. Not the clubs, but the
beach itself. A lot of people
gather there and have their own
parties.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Oh word?
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Yeah. Most of the people that
can't get into the clubs end up
going there anyway, so its cool.
Hell, I'll even be there if you
            (MORE)

94.

                       LAUREN (cont'd)
go.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Alright, I will. My aunt lives in
South Beach anyway.
                                                            
The dryers finish up, and he starts bagging his clothes.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (smiling)
Ain't you gonna fold those?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Naw, I never cared to do it.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Okay.
                                                            
He finishes up.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (extending his
       hand)
Well, it was nice meeting you.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (shaking hands)
It was nice meeting you too. Good
night.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Good night.
                                                            
Anthony leaves with his load while she begins folding her
clothes.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. HOTEL CORRIDORS, 2ND FLOOR
                                                            
Anthony is walking through the corridors, carrying his bag
as he heads back to his room. He passes by a window, but
soon notices something outside. He peers out:
                                                            
ANTHONY'S POV
                                                            
He sees his friends and their new friends, getting out of
the pool and gathering their stuff before heading back
inside.
                                                            

95.

BACK TO SCENE
                                                            
Anthony smiles to himself, glad that his friends didn't let
his mood affect theirs. He takes out the key to his room and
heads inside.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. HOTEL ROOM, FIRST FLOOR
                                                            
Alex & Amanda and Tam-Tam & Candace can't seem to keep
themselves off each other as they arrive outside the girls'
hotel room on the first floor.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (to Candace;
       softly)
Damn! I didn't know you could hold
your breath that long!
                                                            
They chuckle.
                                                            
                       CANDACE
      (smiling)
You weren't bad yourself. So, why
do they call you "Tam-Tam"?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
'Cause one night with me, and
that's what you'll be sayin'.
                                                            
                       CANDACE
Is that right?
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Mmm-hmm.
                                                            
Alex & Amanda are still kissing by the doorway:
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (softly)
So, can I come inside?
                                                            
                       AMANDA
      (softly)
Sorry, but we gotta end this here.
We gotta get up early tomorrow.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Alright, that's no problem.
                                                            

96.

Manny & Melanie, who's carrying the cooler, finally catch up
to the group. They stop for a moment, however:
                                                            
                       MELANIE
Hey, so what's your number? I'll
text you with directions to the
party.
                                                            
She takes out her cellphone, getting ready to record the
number:
                                                            
                       MANNY
617-555-8193.
                                                            
She dials the number into her phone and saves it before
putting her phone away.
                                                            
                       MELANIE
Well, I had fun, Manny. I hope to
see you soon.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Same here.
                                                            
They both lean in for a tender kiss while the rest watch.
Then, Melanie heads back to her room, leaving Manny a bit
dumbstruck.
                                                            
                       AMANDA
      (smiling)
Okay, boys, it's time for y'all to
go.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
Aww, come on!
                                                            
                       CANDACE
      (smiling)
Good bye!
                                                            
The girls head into the room. Alex & Tam-Tam feign a groan
as they walk away towards Manny. They put an arm around him:
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Damn, kid, I didn't know you was
smooth with the ladies!
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (smiling)
Neither did I.
                                                            

97.

The boys walk past Lauren, who's carrying her clothes on her
way back to the same room that the boys just left. She
glances back before heading in.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
 
EXT. SOUTH SHORE PLAZA - ESTABLISH - DAY
                                                            
It's mid-afternoon when we see the mall, and all of it's
patrons outside.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. MACY'S
                                                            
Alicia is at her perfume booth, writing something in a
ledger as she keeps track of the inventory. She looks like
she's out of it when Sheryl approaches her.
                                                            
                       SHERYL
Alicia?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (looks up)
Hmm?
                                                            
                       SHERYL
Can I talk to you for second?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Sure.
                                                            
She puts the ledger away and steps out of the booth.
                                                            
                       SHERYL
I've been noticing a slight change
in your behavior. Care to talk
about it?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Um, I'm sorry. I've been dealing
with a lot of personal issues
lately.
                                                            
                       SHERYL
Well, I won't pry. But, if that's
the case, I think I'll put you in
the dressing room, folding
clothes. That way whatever's
bothering you won't affect the
sales.
                                                            

98.

                       ALICIA
Oh no, you don't have to, Sheryl.
I can handle it.
                                                            
                       SHERYL
I know you can, Honey, but you
seem to be a little depressed.
This is only for the best; it'll
give you some time to relax a bit
and clear your head. Afterwards,
you can let me know when you're
ready to come back. Okay?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
But who's gonna take over my spot?
                                                            
                       SHERYL
Monica will.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (beat)
Fine.
                                                            
Alicia looks slightly heartbroken as she walks away, passing
by Monica, who makes her way to the booth.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. LAW OFFICE, JAMAICA PLAIN - ESTABLISH - DAY
                                                            
We're looking at a small law office, somewhere in the heart
of Jamaica Plain, Massachusetts.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. LAWYER'S OFFICE
                                                            
Nikki enters the office, and is greeted by a clean cut
Hispanic man, of about late-forties, wearing a tailored
suit. This is JAVIER MARTINEZ, the lawyer Marisol spoke
about. He shakes her hand after closing the door behind:
                                                            
                       JAVIER
Good afternoon, I'm Javier
Martinez.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
I'm Nikki Sandoval. We spoke on
the phone.
                                                            

99.

                       JAVIER
      (realizing)
Oh, yes. Marisol recommended you.
Please, have a seat.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Thanks.
                                                            
She sits in front of the desk, while he takes a seat in his
own chair.
                                                            
                       JAVIER
So, what can I do for you, Nikki?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
I want custody of my daughter,
Jessica. Me and my ex-boyfriend
broke up when she was born, and he
kicked me to the curb and took her
with him. We didn't see each other
for six years, and when we finally
did, he had my daughter with him.
But, he wouldn't let me near her.
Still won't.
                                                            
                       JAVIER
Where is your ex-boyfriend now?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
He went to Florida. He's coming
back in a week from what I heard.
                                                            
                       JAVIER
      (nodding)
What's his name?
                                                            
He gets a pen, readying to write down the information.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Anthony Ramos. Can you help me get
my daughter or not?
                                                            
                       JAVIER
I'll see what I can do.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. MCDONALD'S - EARLY EVENING
                                                            
The boys step out of the restaurant, carrying their food as
Anthony records the departure:
                                                            

100.

                       ANTHONY
      (narrating)
... And so this McDonald's that
you're looking at makes this our
final stop in Charlotte, North
Carolina. By the way, the people
working here are a lot nicer than
those in any McDonald's back home.
Good bye, Charlotte!
                                                            
He shuts off the camera before joining up at the Chevy:
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (sips his drink)
Yo, who's drivin' tonight?
                                                            
                       ALEX
I already drove.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah, me too.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
A'ight, Manny, you're up.
      (handing keys)
Here.
                                                            
                       MANNY
A'ight, cool.
      (realizing)
Oh, yo! I forgot to tell y'all:
the girls invited us to a party.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (taken aback)
A party? Where?
                                                            
                       MANNY
Atlanta. I figured maybe we'd
swing through since it's on our
way to Florida.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (to Alex)
We can get there in, like, eight
hours tops.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Yeah, and if it's a house party,
we might not even need to spend
money on a hotel. Think you can
stay up that long?
                                                            

101.

                       TAM-TAM
Shit yeah! Hell, we can just take
turns drivin' until we get there!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (sarcastically)
Yo, I'm really glad that I'm a
part of this decision-making.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Oh I'm sorry, Tony, you wanna come
to the party?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Fuck it -- ain't like I got a
choice!
                                                            
                       ALEX
A'ight, then we're goin'.
                                                            
As they get back into the Chevy:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (thinking aloud)
Man, I swear, sometimes y'all are
real inconsiderate assholes...
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (smiling)
Man, shut the fuck up and get in
the car!
                                                            
They all get in the car and drive off.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. CHEVY, INTERSTATE - LATER
                                                            
There is a TIME LAPSE as the boys switch drivers
periodically, entertaining themselves with music, jokes and
inaudible conversations as they make their way to the state
of Georgia.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
INT. RAMOS RESIDENCE, KITCHEN - DAY
                                                            
Isabel and Pablo are conversing in the kitchen, drinking
coffee as they watch TV when the doorbell RINGS (OS). Pablo
gets up to answer:
                                                            
                       PABLO
I'll get it.
                                                            

102.

                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. RAMOS RESIDENCE
                                                            
Javier is standing outside, holding a SUBPOENA when Pablo
opens the door.
                                                            
                       PABLO
Can I help you, sir?
                                                            
                       JAVIER
Are you Anthony Ramos?
                                                            
                       PABLO
No, he's out of town. I'm his
stepfather, Pablo.
                                                            
                       JAVIER
      (handing subpoena)
Sir, this is a subpoena, ordering
your stepson to appear in court on
the date and time issued.
                                                            
                       PABLO
What for? What's this about?
                                                            
                       JAVIER
Your stepson is being sued for
custody of his child. My name is
Javier Martinez and I will be
representing the plaintiff, Nikki
Sandoval.
                                                            
Isabel shows up to join her husband.
                                                            
                       JAVIER (cont'd)
You both have a good day.
                                                            
Javier walks away as Pablo looks over the subpoena.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
What was that about?
                                                            
                       PABLO
      (reading)
Nikki is suing Anthony over child
custody...!
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Oh my God!
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            

103.

EXT. ATLANTA NEIGHBORHOOD - NIGHT
                                                            
We see the Chevy cruising through the neighborhood.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. CHEVY (MOVING)
                                                            
Having all changed into fresh clothes, Tam-Tam is at the
wheel while the boys look around at the different houses,
searching for something.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yo, Manny, you sure this is the
right street? 'Cause I don't see
shit!
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (checking
       cellphone)
Yeah, 121 Bellevue Road. This is
the street.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (pointing out)
There's the house.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. HOUSE
                                                            
We hear LOUD HIP-HOP MUSIC BLASTING (OS) as the Chevy finds
a parking space near the front of a large two-story house,
where the party is already in progress. The boys get out of
the car and make their way inside, passing by various groups
of people that are either drinking, smoking, or just
conversing.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. HOUSE
                                                            
The house is packed when the boys enter. They look around
and through the sea of people dancing. Inside the house,
there's more people doing the same as outside except with
the ability sit down somewhere; this is the best-looking
college party you could probably find anywhere!
                                                            
Melanie is talking to a friend when she and Manny notice
each other. She approaches him:
                                                            

104.

                       MELANIE
      (hugging him)
Manny, hey!
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (smiling)
Hey!
                                                            
                       MELANIE
      (smiling)
I'm glad you guys came.
      (re: Anthony)
Who's your friend?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Hi, I'm Anthony. Thanks for
inviting us.
                                                            
                       MELANIE
Oh, no problem.
                                                            
                       LAUREN (OS)
Anthony?
                                                            
They turn around as Lauren approaches.
                                                            
                       LAUREN (cont'd)
      (smiling)
What're you doing here?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I got invited.
                                                            
                       MELANIE
Wait, you two already know each
other?
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Yeah, we sorta did our laundry
together at the hotel.
                                                            
Alex is impressed with Anthony's find.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (to Anthony)
Come on, let's get a drink!
                                                            
She takes Anthony by the hand, and quickly leads him through
the sea of people. A confused Anthony looks back at Alex who
gestures that he's the man.
                                                            

105.

                       MANNY
      (to Melanie)
You wanna dance?
                                                            
                       MELANIE
      (smiling)
Yeah.
                                                            
They head for the dance floor, leaving Alex & Tam-Tam on
their own:
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (to Tam-Tam)
Fuck it, this is a party. Might as
well look for our "girls".
                                                            
The two bump fists before separating.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. RAMOS RESIDENCE, KITCHEN - NIGHT
                                                            
Alicia is still in her work clothes as she accompanies Pablo
& Isabel. They have the subpoena lying in front of them on
the table, as they sit down.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (beat)
I can't believe she's actually
doing this...
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Alicia, sweetie, do you know if
anything happened between Anthony
and Nikki before he left? Anything
that could provoke this?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
No, I swear.
                                                            
                       PABLO
Either way, Isabel, Anthony isn't
the kind of person that would do
something that could take him to
court. He's pretty careful.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Yes, I know. But how do you
explain the subpoena?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Well, Nikki did say she'd try to
get Jessie back, but this is
crossing the line! Have you told
            (MORE)

106.

                       ALICIA (cont'd)
Anthony yet?
                                                            
                       PABLO
      (shakes his head)
Mmm-mmm, not yet.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I'll call him right now --
                                                            
                       ISABEL
No, I'll do it. For now, just go
home and rest. Okay?
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Okay.
                                                            
Alicia looks at Isabel for a moment, who looks more worried
than she is, before getting up and leaving the house.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. ATLANTA HOUSE - LATER
                                                            
Back at the party, Alex is off somewhere, knocking back
shots with Amanda and a group of her friends; Tam-Tam is
making out with Candace in a corner; Manny & Melanie are
dancing to a slow jam, meanwhile Lauren & Anthony are
drinking and sitting on a couch:
                                                            
                       LAUREN
I'm really surprised you came. I
mean, I'm happy you did, but I
swore the other night would be it.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Well, like I said, this was spur
of the moment. Besides, it's not
like the other night meant
anything.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (under her breath)
Says you!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What?
                                                            
Lauren looks up at him for a moment. Then, she suddenly
kisses him. Anthony quickly backs away, trying to process
what just happened, then he gets up and quickly leaves.
Lauren is surprised by this:
                                                            

107.

                       LAUREN
Anthony! Anthony, wait!
                                                            
Anthony makes his way through the dance floor as Lauren
follows. Manny quickly takes notice:
                                                            
                       MANNY
      (to Melanie)
Will you excuse me for a sec?
                                                            
Manny quickly follows behind Lauren and Anthony.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. HOUSE
                                                            
Anthony exits the house and makes his way to the Chevy.
Lauren quickly jogs up to him.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Anthony, please, wait!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I'm sorry, but I can't do this!
                                                            
                       LAUREN
Why? What did I do?
                                                            
Manny emerges out of the house, and finds Anthony and Lauren
talking by the Chevy:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (sighs)
I'm-I'm engaged. And I have two
kids.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (taken aback)
Oh.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah. Look, I really love my
girlfriend, and I don't wanna ruin
things with her.
                                                            
                       LAUREN
      (nods
       understandingly)
I understand. Can we still hang
out in South Beach?
                                                            

108.

                       ANTHONY
      (beat)
Good bye, Lauren.
                                                            
They shakes hands then he notices Manny:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Manny! Tell Alex and Tam-Tam we're
leaving.
                                                            
Manny nods then heads back in.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
INT. CHEVY (MOVING) - LATER
                                                            
It's late in the night. All the boys are asleep as Anthony
drives through the interstate once again. He looks very
contemplative, as he stares out the windshield.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (thinking aloud)
What the fuck is happening...?
                                                            
He lets out a sigh as he continues driving.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
EXT. HIGHWAY - DAWN
                                                            
As the Chevy continues driving along, we see SIGNS
indicating that the boys are finally in Florida.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. GUTIERREZ RESIDENCE - MORNING
                                                            
Outside a beautiful one-family Floridian home, the Chevy
parks out across the street. Anthony gets out of the car
while the rest of the boys slowly wake up and get out.
Anthony walks up to the front door, and rings the DOORBELL.
Moments later, the door is answered by a woman wearing a
robe, and in her late-forties. This is NORMA GUTIERREZ,
Isabel's older sister and Anthony's aunt.
                                                            
                       NORMA
      (smiling)
Anthony, you made it.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Hi, Tia Norma.
                                                            

109.

They hug as the boys approach them:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Uh, Tia, these are my friends:
Alex, Martin and Manny.
                                                            
                       BOYS
Hi.
                                                            
                       NORMA
      (smiling)
Come inside.
                                                            
They do and she closes the door behind.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. GUTIERREZ RESIDENCE
                                                            
The house looks just as appealing inside as it does outside
when the boys step in. Anthony's beautiful cousin MILLIE,
late-teens, is sitting on the couch in her pajamas, watching
TV. She soon jumps up at the sight of her cousin:
                                                            
                       MILLIE
      (smiling)
Oh my God, Anthony!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Hey, Millie.
                                                            
She hugs him.
                                                            
                       MILLIE
Wow, you look good! How's Jessica?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
She's fine.
                                                            
                       NORMA
Are you boys hungry? I'm cooking
breakfast.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah, that'd be nice, Tia. Thanks.
Where's Tio Jorge and Nathan?
                                                            
                       NORMA
They went to work, Mijo.
                                                            

110.

They all follow Norma into the kitchen. Millie & Alex are
checking each other out, but Anthony catches them and
gestures for Alex to stop:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (whispering)
Not my cousin, dude.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (chuckles)
What? I'm not an animal, Dawg!
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. KITCHEN - MINUTES LATER
                                                            
Alex, Manny & Millie are sitting at the table while the rest
stand around the kitchen - all eating breakfast.
                                                            
                       NORMA
I thought you boys would get here
sooner.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Actually, Mrs. Gutierrez, we've
been kinda stopping on the way;
you know, checking out the cities.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yeah, especially since I have to
make a home movie for an
assignment.
                                                            
                       MILLIE
What kind of movie?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Just a little documentary of the
trip. Y'all wanna be in it?
                                                            
                       MILLIE
      (shrugs)
Sure.
                                                            
                       NORMA
      (smiling)
Not me, I look a mess!
                                                            
Anthony gets his camera and turns it on.
                                                            

111.

                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
No, you don't, Tia. You look
beautiful.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. GUTIERREZ RESIDENCE, BACK YARD - LATER
                                                            
Anthony & Alex are sitting outside by Norma's pool, drinking
a beer as they watch Manny, Tam-Tam & Millie enjoying
themselves in the water. They both watch very
contemplatively until Anthony suddenly cracks a smile:
                                                            
                       ALEX
What's up?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
I told Alicia's family I didn't
drink. I guess I lied.
                                                            
He takes another sip.
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (smiling)
Yeah, well, we can't all be
perfect.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I heard that!
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (re: Lauren)
Wow, so that chick kissed you and
you really ran away, huh?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What can I say? I'm faithful to my
woman. We can't all be hound dogs,
right?
                                                            
                       ALEX
'See, that's what makes you that
guy. Besides, I mess around so you
don't have to.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (smiling)
Thanks.
                                                            
Norma emerges from the house with a CORDLESS PHONE:
                                                            

112.

                       NORMA
Anthony, your mother is on the
phone.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (taking phone)
Thanks.
      (into phone)
Hello?
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. RAMOS RESIDENCE, KITCHEN - SAME
                                                            
Isabel is alone in the kitchen as she speaks into the phone:
                                                            
                       ISABEL
      (into phone)
Anthony, there's something I need
to tell you.
                                                            
INTERCUTTING
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
What is it, Ma?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Mijo, a subpoena came in for you
yesterday. You're being sued.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Sued? For what?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
      (beat)
Nikki wants custody of Jessica.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (disbelief)
What? Oh my God...!
                                                            
                       ISABEL
You have to be in court next week.
How soon do you think you can get
back?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Um... I'll be back tonight.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Are you sure? Norma told me you
just got there.
                                                            

113.

                       ANTHONY
I don't care. I have about four
hundred dollars left -- I can
catch a flight back. Just pick me
up when I do.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
Okay, I will.
                                                            
They hang up.
                                                            
                       ALEX
What's wrong, Tony?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (getting up)
Nikki's suing me for custody!
                                                            
                       ALEX
Are you shittin' me -- ?!
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
No, I'm not! I gotta get to the
airport.
                                                            
                       ALEX
Wait, you're leaving already?! But
we just got here!
                                                            
Manny & Tam-Tam take notice of Anthony readying to leave:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Yo, I don't have a choice. Just
have fun, and I'll see you guys
back home.
                                                            
Anthony heads back into the house. Manny & Tam-Tam walk up
to Alex.
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
      (to Alex)
Yo, where's Tony goin'?
                                                            
                       ALEX
      (looking off)
He's catchin' a flight back home.
                                                            
                       MANNY
But we just got here.
                                                            

114.

                       ALEX
      (beat; turns
       around)
Nikki's suing him.
                                                            
MONTAGE
                                                            
A) Anthony is in Miami International Airport, carrying his
duffel bag and buying a ticket from a check-in counter.

B) Alicia is working in the dressing room area in Macy's.
Her mood seems unchanged, as she folds clothes and puts them
away.

C) Anthony is on a flight heading back home.

D) Nikki is enjoying herself, drinking with mixed company.

E) It's late in the night. Alicia is lying on her bed, with
her arm around Jessica. She's reading a children's book when
she notices Jessica's asleep.

F) Anthony arrives at Boston Logan Airport, and finds Isabel
waiting for him. They embrace.
                                                            
INT. ISABEL'S CAR (MOVING) - LATE NIGHT
                                                            
Anthony is sitting in the passenger's seat as he and his
mother drive on the expressway.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
When's the court date?
                                                            
                       ISABEL
The twentieth. What happened
between you two?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Nikki and I ran into each other
before I left, and I simply told
her to stay away from the girls. I
didn't threaten her.
                                                            
                       ISABEL
      (in Spanish)
Yeah, but obviously she felt that
way.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (sighs)
Can you just drop me off at
Alicia's place, please?
                                                            

115.

She continues driving while he sinks in his seat.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. ROJAS RESIDENCE - LATER
                                                            
Isabel drives off as Anthony approaches the front door.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. ALICIA'S BEDROOM
                                                            
The room is dark, except for the moonlight creeping in when
Anthony quietly steps in, closing the door behind. He finds
Alicia and the children asleep but slowly makes his way to
the bed, climbing in next to his girlfriend. He spoons with
Alicia as she slowly wakes up:
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (sleepily)
Tony?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (softly)
Yeah.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
When'd you get back?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
An hour ago. I know about the
case, so I took a flight back.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
      (softly)
Mmm... I'm so glad you're back,
Baby. So glad.
                                                            
He holds her tightly as she goes back to sleep.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
 
EXT. COURTHOUSE - DAY
                                                            
Traffic is flowing in front of a city courthouse.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. COURTROOM
                                                            
We see Alicia, Isabel & Pablo, and the boys sitting amongst
people in the courtroom and behind a suited Anthony who sits

116.

at a table with his female lawyer. Nikki, also dressed
professionally, sits across with Javier. An AFRICAN-AMERICAN
female judge, JUDGE HARRIS, mid-50s, walks into the room and
heads for her seat:
                                                            
                       BAILIFF
Order! All rise for the honorable
Judge Harris.
                                                            
Everyone do as they're told while Judge Harris takes her
seat.
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
You may be seated.
                                                            
Everyone sits except for Nikki, Anthony and the lawyers. The
bailiff hands some DOCUMENTS to Judge Harris, tells her the
case, then returns to his post. Judge Harris looks over the
documents, then:
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
Sandoval.
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Yes.
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
It says in your complaint that Mr.
Ramos took your daughter, Jessica
Ramos, away from you, and never
allowed you to see her again?
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Yes, Your Honor.
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
Explain to me what happened.
                                                            
The dialogue becomes inaudible as Nikki tells her story. It
becomes clear by Anthony's expression that her story is
being fabricated.
                                                            
SERIES OF SHOTS
                                                            
Nikki and Anthony tell their stories, then their friends go
to the stand to testify on their behalves. It seems like a
lengthy trial.
                                                            
END SERIES OF SHOTS
                                                            
It's clear that by now the court is approaching a break
session as Judge Harris gathers her things.
                                                            

117.

                       JUDGE HARRIS
We'll be going on a break shortly.
Is there anything that the
plaintiff or the defendant wanna
add before we reach a verdict?
                                                            
Both sides are discussing it. Moments later, Anthony stands:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Your Honor, I'd like to say
something.
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
Go ahead, Mr. Ramos.
                                                            
He now has her undivided attention.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (beat; sighs)
You know, for the last six years,
I've been sort of afraid of this
day happening. Yes, I told Miss
Sandoval not to come near my
daughter, but I had good reason. I
remember the day that Jessica was
born, Nikki and I had a fight,
where she revealed the fact that
she had cheated on me and didn't
want anything to do with Jessica.
She even told me that the baby was
"my problem".
                                                            
Nikki's facial expression shows that she was not expecting
this.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY (cont'd)
I was fourteen when my daughter
was born. I had my whole life
ahead me, but instead, I became a
father. A loving one. Can I be
held responsible for keeping Nikki
away from us? Yes, absolutely. But
its a responsibility that I took a
long time ago. I've struggled to
build what I considered to be a
perfect family, regardless of
Nikki abandoning us. And if you
take my daughter away, then you
might as well lock me up forever.
Because that's a life I don't
wanna live. Thank you.
                                                            
He sits back down.
                                                            

118.

                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. COURTHOUSE, HALLWAYS - MINUTES LATER
                                                            
Anthony walks up to a VENDING MACHINE, readying to buy a
soda. He turns to his side, noticing Nikki & Javier talking
in the distance. She looks back at him for a moment, before
he turns away to buy his drink. Alex, Manny & Tam-Tam
approach him:
                                                            
                       TAM-TAM
Yo, did you really hit Nikki?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Her story's made up, Tam. And I
don't get why.
                                                            
                       MANNY
Well, regardless of what happens,
we got you, man.
                                                            
                       ALEX
No matter what.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (tearing up)
Thank you...
                                                            
They all embrace, then Anthony wipes his tears away.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. COURTROOM
                                                            
Everyone's back in the courtroom. Nikki & Javier are still
discussing some last-minute details while Anthony simply
sits in his chair, staring at the floor when Judge Harris
returns to her seat.
                                                            
                       BAILIFF
All rise!
                                                            
Everyone rises as Judge Harris sits down:
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
You may sit.
                                                            
Everybody sits down.
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS (cont'd)
Now, I've been going over the
details, and despite the fact that
both sides seem a bit sketchy,
I've reached a final verdict. In
            (MORE)

119.

                       JUDGE HARRIS (cont'd)
the case of Sandoval versus Ramos,
I hereby grant sole custody of
Jessica Ramos to... the defendant,
Anthony Ramos.
                                                            
Anthony still has his head down as he can't believe the
ruling, while his friends and family cheer in celebration.
Judge Harris BANGS her gavel:
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
Order! Order!
      (everyone calms
       down)
And you, Miss Sandoval. As a
mother of three, I am truly
disgusted by the fact that another
woman would dare abandon her child
after birth, and expect to get her
back so easily! I hereby order you
not to come within a hundred feet
of Mister Ramos, nor his family.
Do you here me?
                                                            
Nikki is tearing up, but nods in agreement:
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Yes, Your Honor...
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
      (bangs gavel)
Case dismissed!
                                                            
Anthony slowly looks up and at a teary-eyed Nikki as she and
Javier begin to walk away, then suddenly:
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (getting up)
Your Honor!
                                                            
Judge Harris is about to leave when she turns back:
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
Yes?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (beat)
I'm willing to let Nikki see my
daughter once, if you'll allow it.
                                                            
Nikki is surprised to hear this when Anthony turns back to
her.
                                                            

120.

                       JUDGE HARRIS
Are you sure that's what you want?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
      (turns around)
Yes, I'm sure.
                                                            
                       JUDGE HARRIS
Fine. Then, I'll allow ONE
supervised visit tomorrow.
                                                            
Judge Harris leaves. As Anthony begins to walk away, Nikki
approaches him:
                                                            
                       NIKKI
Anthony... thank you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
I'm not doing it for you. I'm
doing it because Jessie needs to
stop asking me the same question
over and over again.
                                                            
He walks away.
                                                            
                                         DISSOLVE TO:
                                                            
EXT. PLAYGROUND - DAY
                                                            
It's past noon and there's plenty of children playing in the
playground. We see Anthony & Alicia sitting on a park bench
as Nikki and Jessica are playing together, actually enjoying
themselves. A nearby POLICE OFFICER watches over the
activities.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
I can't believe you actually let
Nikki be with Jessie for the day,
Babe. I'm proud of you.
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Thanks, but I only did it for
Jessie. It's about time she knows
who her real mother is.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Still, it was the nicest thing you
could do.
      (sighs; thinking
       aloud)
What a summer!
                                                            

121.

                       ANTHONY
      (beat)
You know, there's still one thing
left to do.
                                                            
                       ALICIA
Oh yeah? And what's that?
                                                            
                       ANTHONY
Well, besides you and me getting
married, I still have to finish my
assignment.
                                                            
She chuckles, then gives him a light kiss before they
continue watching Nikki and Jessica play. They both go down
a slide together, laughing at the bottom. Then, Nikki &
Jessica both look up, smiling and waving at Anthony and
Alicia who return the gesture.
                                                            


THE END


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From vito jennette Date 8/17/2009 ****
Fantastic job on this one for sure. loved it!


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