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FEMME PHOBIA
by Ronald Ford III (ronaldford3@yahoo.com)

Rated: R   Genre: Miscellaneous   User Review: ****
A story about a MALE CHAUVINIST who lives in a WOMAN'S WORLD.


This screenplay is copyrighted to its author. All rights reserved. This screenplay may not be used or reproduced without the express written permission of the author.



FADE IN:

EXT. ZEKE'S BASEMENT - DAY
                                                            
We SEE a MAN wearing a POLICE HAT, and UNIFORM SHIRT:
staring down at

who knows what.

We can't see below his waist, because a WASHER MACHINE
is in front of him.

Ladies and Gentleman, this is our main ole buddy;

ZEKE,

"the 24 year old Maniac."
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (looking down)
All I want is the old world. I'd
do anything to get it back.
                                                            
We MOVE in CLOSER to the Maniac. We now move DOWNWARD a
bit, SEEING one of his HANDS. He's holding a

NINE MILIMETER towards

who knows what.

He starts SHOOTING….. BANGPOW!!BANG!!!BANG!!!

We finally see what the hell it is.

It's a MAGAZINE with BULLET HOLES

in the faces of

OPRAH,

HILARY CLINTON and

NICKI MINAJ'S…….. Ouch.
                                                            
                       ZEKE (O.S.)
And as far as I'm concerned.
Fuck Oprah, Hilary Clinton,
Nicki Minaj. And all you other
self righteous women rights
leader assholes responsible for
this new world…Go hang yourselves.
                                                            

2.

Suddenly,

we HEAR a DOOR OPEN and turn around.., seeing

LI, a 24 yr old Chinese woman,
holding BI, her 1 yr old baby daughter.

By Li's side is a 6 year old Chinese girl, CHAN, in blue
and white school uniform.

We see the

MANIAC,

who's completely caught off guard, pointing his gun in their
direction.

Li is unfazed. We can tell she's use to this shit.
                                                            
                       LI
      (in Chinese)
You are a piece of shit you
asshole! Every morning you
dress up as a cop. Shooting
up this and that! Talking to
yourself like a retard. You've
gone mad! Don't you see? ...
What about me, your daughters?!
                                                            
The maniac lowers his gun and gives her the puppy face.

She slams the door.

Our ole buddy's left alone again.

He closes his eyes and raises the nine millimeter
towards his temple.

15 MINUTES LATER

INT. ZEKE'S KITCHEN

Li's seated at a table, holding Bi in her arms.

The maniac is seen standing beside her.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I'm bout to take Chan to school.
Okay, Li?
                                                            

3.

Maniac kisses Li on her forehead. He then kisses Bi on her
cheek---

He's now walking out of the kitchen.
                                                            
                       LI
      (in chinese)
I love you too stupid!
                                                            
Li smiles-- Zeke turns around and smiles as well.

NEXT MORNING

INT. CONFESSION ROOM

Zeke's in his side of the confession booth, chewing on a
red starburst.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Starburst? Father Time?
                                                            
We hear an old voice respond slowly.
                                                            
                       FATHER TIME (O.S.)
No thank you, Zeke.
                                                            
10 MINUTES LATER

INT. CONFESSION ROOM

The maniac's strangling the shit out of Father Time.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I'll see to it that you and
your church burn in hell for
eternity for refusing to join
me in a quest of righteousness!
                                                            
For a moment

this looks like Homer Simpson choking the
hell out of his son Bart on a cartoon channel---

However, Father Time… in a

"timely manner"

delivers a kick to the maniac's balls.

The maniac loses grip and holds on to his nuts.

He and Father Time both breathe hard, in equal pain.
                                                            

4.

Father Time puts his hand on his neck and says:
                                                            
                       FATHER TIME
Find peace within yourself
first before claiming a
mission of righteousness!
                                                            
30 MINUTES LATER

INT. CHURCH HALL

Father Time's standing there holding his neck.

The MANIAC'S

ten feet away still holding on to his testicles.

Awkward moment between the two to say the least--

Father Time searches for the right words.
                                                            
                       FATHER TIME
How's the lady and kids?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
They're doing fantastic.
                                                            
Father Time smiles… He knows Zeke's lying.
                                                            
                       FATHER TIME
Good.
                                                            
EXT. CHURCH ENTRANCE – MOMENTS LATER

Zeke's walking down 20 or so stairs.

Yes, he's still in pain.

However, he also seems a bit relieved, being that he's all
by himself.

He shouts aloud "FUCK THIS HURTS!"...then walks out of
sight.

SIDE OF STREET

We see a

BLACK MERCEDES BENZ (2024 model) rolling along

in the same direction in which Zeke was seen heading.
                                                            

5.

EXT. SIDE STREET – DAY

We see a pretty BROWN HAND hanging outside the window
of the 2024 MERCEDES BENZ we just saw.

BROWN HAND'S POV

EXT. ZEKE'S BEDROOM WINDOW

Zeke appears to be in a heated conversation. We can't
see the other person, but Zeke keeps raising his voice.

INT. ZEKE'S ROOM – SAME

Zeke's talking to a PICTURE of OBAMA on a POSTER
hanging on his wall.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Where's the hope at Barack?
Since you left office in
2016, been nothing but hell.
Now over 60% of all income
in the world comes from
females. And over 70% of
all income comes from
females in U.S. alone!
                                                            
As Zeke keeps talking to the poster, we zoom in to the
TV behind him, in which we see the OPRAH SHOW is on.

INT. OPRAH SHOW – DAY

Yep, she made a comeback. She's by her couch as usual…
                                                            
                       OPRAH
Good morning everybody. Today's
show is going to be a highlight
reel for the most memorable
moments over the past 8 years.
Enjoy.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
YEAR 2020 (4 YEARS EARLIER)

INT. OPRAH SHOW

Oprah's on the couch again. Ready to talk to us.
                                                            

6.

                       OPRAH
Bill Gates and Donald Trump,
who once represented the
wealthiest of people, are now
the face of the middle class.
                                                            
Oprah pauses, just looks…. We see at a distance of no
more than 10 feet, BILL GATES- a complete mess,

pacing back in forth with a book in his hand.

We see Donald Trump

calmly seated on the couch nearby.
                                                            
                       BILL
Why don't you just shut
the hell up Oprah! Jeesh!
Everybody in the whole damn
world knows I haven't seen a
million dollars since who
knows when.
      (points at book)
I came here to promote my
book MICROSOFT MAKES A COME
BACK. Unlike that bullshit
program MICRASOFTA that you
women seem to love.
                                                            
We see Donald behind Bill. He taps him on the shoulder.

Bill quickly turns around.
                                                            
                       DONALD
Bill you should cool down.
                                                            
                       BILL
Shut up Donald. Don't tell me
to cool down.
                                                            
Bill smacks Trump across the side of his face.
                                                            
                       DONALD
      (holding his face)
Shit. That really hurt Bill.
                                                            
                       BILL
You're pathetic man.
                                                            
Bill knees him in the stomach,

then uppercuts his jaw.
                                                            

7.

We start to fade out… and then we see

white letters on the black screen that read:

YEAR 2022

INT. OPRAH SHOW (YEAR 2022)

Oprah's by the back with the audience

whom are (99.9% women.)
                                                            
                       OPRAH
This next guest I'm bringing
out is the face of this new
world. Motivation of these
young girls and women. Not
too long ago she worked under
Bill Gates. Due to discrimination
she took a loan from the bank and
started her own computer business
MICRASOFTA, along with like minded
females who faced the same
prejudices. Through various
investments, she now owns more
corporations and franchises than
any living person. She is the
richest person alive. Ladies and
gentlemen. De la THUNE!
                                                            
INT. OPRAH SHOW – MOMENTS LATER

Oprah's on the couch with a beautiful slender woman,
in a white suit.

This must be DE lA THUNE.
                                                            
                       DE LA THUNE
Like I said Oprah, I was done
wrong in my past due to my
gender. But by all means I
continue to hold on to my
integrity. Business is strictly
business. If I hire someone
it's base on their experience
and skills, not gender.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
      (to us)
There you have it ladies
and gentlemen. De la
THUNE!
                                                            

8.

YEAR 2017 (in white letters over the black screen)

INT. OPRAH SHOW – DAY

Oprah is seated with PRESIDENT HILARY CLINTON.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
Congratulations again President
Hilary Clinton on your victory
over Sarah Palin.
                                                            
                       PRESIDENT CLINTON
Thank you Oprah.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
Now, is there anything you'd
like to say to the American
people?
                                                            
                       PRESIDENT CLINTON
Sure.
      (looks at us)
Good morning American people.
In the past we have broken the
race barrier with our last
Presidency. Now we are breaking
the gender barrier. As I look
into your beautiful faces I know
everything will be just fine
American people.
                                                            
Oprah smiles and claps her hands.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
I love it!
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
YEAR 2018

INT. OPRAH SHOW - DAY

We see THREE MEN dressed in all black, seated by Oprah.

These three men include,

MEL GIBSON,

KANYE WEST, who's
holding a CD in his hands,

and a TALL EVIL LOOKING MAN.
                                                            

9.

                       OPRAH
      (To taller man)
So Oswert, you are the grand-
son of Oswald, the one who's
accused for the assassination
of Kennedy. And you are rumored
of wanting to kill President
Hilary Clinton.
                                                            
                       OSWERT
Yes that is true. However it
is important to understand
that I and my fellow friends
      (looks at Kanye
       and Gibson)
represent all of the men out
there who are fed up with this
world.
                                                            
Oprah looks at Oswert, like "are you kidding me?"

Suddenly
Kanye holds his CD in the air, and says to us:
                                                            
                       KANYE
I just want to say my new
soon to be Grammy winning CD
IT'S A MAN'S WORLD is in stores
now!
                                                            
Nobody reacts.

So Kanye looks at Mel Gibson like it's
his turn to speak. Mel just looks at us and then:
                                                            
                       MEL GIBSON
If any of you cunts as so
look at me funny I will bury
your ass in a fucking rose
garden!
                                                            
Oprah puts her hand over her mouth in complete shock.

A beat--

and she removes it back from her mouth.

She shakes her head in complete disgust.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
      (to us)
Commercial break.
                                                            

10.

We fade out..

YEAR 2020

INT. OPRAH SHOW

LADY GAGA,

who's wearing a PURPLE FAIRY OUTFIT,
is seated next to

NICKI MINAJ

who's wearing a PINK FAIRY OUTFIT---

Next to Nicki, is a woman with a

long SCAR along her CHEEK.

Her name is MYA AFFLICTED.

Mya and Oprah are engaged in the middle of dialogue.
                                                            
                       MYA AFFLICTED
When a woman comes to me, it's
because her husband or male
counterpart has done something
wrong. Upon her request she
gives me two dates. In between
that time period no physical
contact what so ever from her
or any woman in the H.W.N is
permitted for that male she
has just reported. We all know
that in today's world, the
middle class is rapidly dieing
out. So for the lower and upper
class, virtually every woman is
apart of the H.W.N. A free
community service that stretches
over half the world. We have
technology that helps our
organization communicate precisely
which male targets are to not be
in contact with under any
circumstances. For that male, the
only pleasure or physical contact
he can receive is from the
Underground where these women have
AIDS and other diseases of today
that are more deadly.
                                                            

11.

                       OPRAH
      (looks at us)
So the H.W.N. which is the
Housewife Neighborhood Watch
Team is making a huge
statement to all of you men
out there who are used to
taking advantage of your
wives or girlfriends.
                                                            
Lady Gaga adds to the dialogue.
                                                            
                       LADY GAGA
Absolutely, and if you have
troubles coming to any of
the locations to report an
incident, go online at Keep
His Ass In Check.com.
                                                            
Nicki Minaj joins in on the fun.
                                                            
                       NICK MINAJ
And look out for me and
Gaga's up and coming CD,
WOMEN RULE THE WORLD!
                                                            
We HEAR lots of CHEERS from the WOMEN AUDIENCE.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
YEAR 2022

INT. OPRAH SHOW

A small BOXING RING

is oddly on the middle of the
stage.

Behind it… we see that

A young lady in a scientist lab coat is seated next to
Oprah in the midst of talking about…
                                                            
                       OPRAH
Doctor Adrena Glandy. Now,
till this day it amazes me
that you are only 24 years
old, yet you have a doctor's
degree in physiology. That is
phenomenal!
                                                            

12.

Oprah gives her a round of APPLAUSE…

and of course EVERYBODY in the CROWD does the same.
                                                            
                       ADRENA GLANDY
      (blushes)
Thank you. My parents as you
know are scientists in the
field of physiology as well.
And with their heavy influence
on my education earlier on, I
graduated high school at the
age of 14.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
And ten years later you have
a doctor's degree. Amazing!!
                                                            
Oprah gives her another round of applause.

And yes,
EVERYBODY in the CROWD does the exact same thing.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
      (to Adrena)
Now you are a world famous
scientist due to your creation
which millions of us females
know today as the ULTIMATE
PILL. A pill specifically
designed for women.
                                                            
                       ADRENA GLANDY
Yes. Precisely. It increases
a woman's physical and mental
strength 50-100% for 2-4 hrs.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
      (to us)
And for those who don't know
it's available at CVS, RITE
AID, and all the other
pharmacies around the globe.
                                                            
We look in the AUDIENCE

and we see the eager 100 or
so women giving every ounce of attention to the show.

Amongst the women, we see LAILA ALI,
(Muhammed Ali's daughter)
                                                            

13.

We tune back into Adrena Glandy and Oprah, still
seated behind the boxing ring.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
Now explain what's going on
with this boxing ring. I
know we're all dieing to know.
                                                            
                       ADRENA GLANDY
I wanted to use it in a fun
way to demonstrate the
effectiveness of the ULTIMATE
PILL. I brought gloves, gym
clothes and safety boxing
gear for myself and a
participant who's willing
to go toe to toe with me
in a short but competitive
boxing match.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
Okay, this has never been done
before on the show. I don't
want anybody to get hurt.
                                                            
                       ADRENA GLANDY
      (to us)
Come on! Who's brave enough?!
                                                            
We see the crowd of women.

Some of them are being
silly, calling out one another's names.

We see a woman eye Laila Ali at a few meters away, then
shouts

"Hey Laila Ali's in the crowd!"

We now hear everybody shout "Laila! Laila Laila!"

We see Laila, who's acting shy for the moment.

She looks up at the STAGE
seeing Adrena smiling in her
face.

We see Laila Ali smile back at her.
                                                            
INT. OPRAH SHOW – 5 MINUTES LATER

Laila Ali and Adrena Glandy are dressed in boxing
gear, from head to toe. They step into the ring.

14.


We hear mad cheering from the crowd.

Laila and Adrena jog around the ring, easing their way into
one another.

Adrena, more aggressive, moves in.

Her movements are impressively fast, and connects, hitting
Laila with a jab to her shoulder.

Laila smiles, but Adrena frowns, and then jabs her in
the face.

Crowd goes crazy, and Laila is no longer smiling.

It's as though, she's possessed all of a sudden….

She hammers Adrena with a left handed jab over her
head and then a knockout uppercut with her right hand
to Adrena's chin.

Adrena is laid out on the floor like a dead fly.

Laila, not caring: screams at her, "What now bitch!"

INT. OPRAH SHOW – 10 MINUTE LATERS

Adrena Glandy and Laila Ali are seated next to one
another, still in their boxing gear, all bruised up.

Oprah stands before them and says to Adrena Glandy:
                                                            
                       OPRAH
Now I wanted to mention the
negatives of the ULTIMATE PILL.
Since its creation, over 70%
of all crimes, such as rape,
murders, robberies here in the
U.S. are committed by women.
Over 80% of those women are
found to have used this pill.
                                                            
                       ADRENA GLANDY
Yes and it's unfortunate, but
many women are shown to use it
for positive activities. Such
as to get through a day of work
or extra energy to play with
their kids. My goal is to help
women use this legal pill for
positive purposes.
                                                            

15.

We FADE TO BLACK…

YEAR 2023

INT. OPRAH SHOW

We see a GROUP OF PEOPLE seated on the COUCH…

We see a woman thug,

wearing a scarf on her head, baggy
shirt and sagging jeans, and timberland boots.

Next to her is a woman with a ball fade. She has
a bullet proof vest on.

Two men, who have on white gloves and wear black hooded
jackets, sit next to the woman with the ball fade.

And at last, a woman in a white and black suit, with
French braids to the back, is seen, talking to Oprah.

We notice the cigar in the woman's hand.

Her name is SKOLLIE, which means "crooked" in an African
language.
                                                            
                       SKOLLIE
      (puffs on cigar)
The government always wants a
piece of everything. The only
difference now is that the
majority of the government,
successful civilians and
organized crime doers are
women. Nearly every Kingpin
and major dealer which most of
them were obviously men, are
now in prison. The ways of
today are much harsher on
these men, which makes it
easier for a woman in this
world to rise in rankings.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
So now, most of the pimps and
drug dealers are now women?
And being that mostly women
make up the government, they
offer protection to the women
in the organized crime world?
                                                            

16.

                       SKOLLIE
      (puffs on cigar)
Correct. Women prostitutes are
now becoming pimps and drug
dealers. More men are now
prostitutes. And as you know, I
am the owner of the world's
largest escort business for
women. But by no means am I
a kingpin.
      (pauses then puffs
       again)
I mean, just look at me Oprah.
Do I look like I'm apart of
that world?
                                                            
Skollie smiles. Oprah knows damn well this woman is
a kingpin and beyond. And Skollie knows that Oprah
knows this. She's just fucking with Oprah.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
……..Not at all Skollie… Okay so
are you going to introduce us
to your friends?
                                                            
                       SKOLLIE
These two men here are the
Silent Ones. They never speak
but are valuable and precious
to me in numerous ways.
                                                            
We see the two men with the white gloves on, which
means these guys are more than likely killers.

We see the woman with the ball fade who wears the
bullet proof vest.

She pulls a gun out of her pocket.

Everybody in the crowd screams……

The woman shoots a

bullet in the air and then puts the gun right back in
her pocket. She does it all naturally then says to
Oprah:
                                                            
                       ONE BULLET
Hi Oprah. I'm One Bullet. Every
time before I speak, I shoot
one bullet from my gun.
                                                            

17.

The woman with the baggy shirt and sagging jeans on
is now in focus.

She looks emotionless.. then suddenly

the weirdest thing you'll see….

She giggles about
three times, sounding like those damn hyenas in the
LION KING.

She switches back to a serious, emotionless
face like nothing just happened. She says to Oprah:
                                                            
                       GIGGLES
And I'm Giggles. Before I talk
I giggle for one second. Then
I switch back to my serious face.
                                                            
We see Oprah, who's speechless… just looks at all of
these frightening, yet comical characters.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
      (to us)
Commercial break.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. ZEKE'S ROOM – AFTERNOON

We see the OPRAH SHOW playing on the TV.

Our ole maniac buddy Zeke, stands before the TV and
turns it off. We see a TAPE RECORDER in his other hand…

Zeke starts talking into the tape recorder:
                                                            
                       ZEKE
As for Satan's fury towards
God is my own feelings for
this world.
                                                            
EXT. STREET - SAME

We see the brown hand hanging out of the 2024 BENZ.

BLACK BENZ POV

EXT. ZEKE'S ROOM - SAME

We see Zeke through his window, still talking on his
tape recorder.
                                                            

18.

INT. BENZ - SAME

We see the brown hand holding a radio phone… in which
we hear---
                                                            
                       ZEKE'S VOICE (O.S.)
I am just a sheep surrounded
by wolves disguised as women
who look to slain me sexually,
physically, emotionally and
mentally. This world is wrong,
not me.
                                                            
We see the brown hand push the OFF button on the
radio phone.

INT. ZEKE'S KITCHEN – SEVERAL MINUTES LATER

We see a HAND grab a pair of keys, and a
9mm gun from a table

INT. MS. MOBIL GAS STATION – FEW MINUTES LATER

ELDER LADY IN A WHEELCHAIR

is seen first in line at the register area.

A young MOTHER and her DAUGHTER are right behind her.

On the other side of the store, we HEAR the door FLING open.

We see that IT'S THE MANIAC...

Dressed in a shirt with a picture

of OBAMA holding a
gun to HILARY CLINTON'S HEAD.

We see he's holding a 9MM GUN.

FEW MOMENTS LATER

INT – SAME

Zeke pushes the elderly woman in the wheelchair real
hard.

We see her roll backwards out of sight.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Keep it rolling back granny!
                                                            

19.

We see Zeke laugh. We hear the elderly woman
screaming "oh dear!" We now HEAR the wheelchair crash
into something. BOOM!

We see the mother and daughter not so far behind Zeke.
Zeke turns around, and the daughter says to him:
                                                            
                       DAUGHTER
You're a meany!
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (to Mom)
Teach this girl some manners.
                                                            
                       MOTHER
What makes you think you have
any?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Don't lecture me woman.
                                                            
Zeke sees a candy bar in the girl's hand. He snatches
it and then says to the mother:
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Society may not care. But you
women will learn your places.
                                                            
The maniac turns around and picks up a 10 gallon
bottle.

We see up-close that it reads: PREMIUM GAS.

EXT. MS. MOBIL GAS STATION – MOMENTS LATER

Sign on top of gas station reads MS. MOBIL GAS STATION.

Zeke's pouring the bottle into his gas tank.

In this time, most people do not use gas. So for those
who choose to use it usually do what he's doing now.

We see other cars, where women are seen inserting ELECTRIC
PLUGS into their car's battery(s).

Few seconds pass by and they take the electric plug out.

And that's it. "The way most people now get gas."

Zeke just stands there by his car.

He observes the
women getting into their cars and driving off.

20.


INT. ZEKE'S MUSIC STORE - AFTERNOON

We see a bunch of posters of JIMI HENDRIX and JAY-Z
around the place. We HEAR: JIMI HENDRIX'S CROSSTOWN
TRAFFIC playing.

The store is empty for the most part.

Except for PETO, a small Hispanic man 20s, is seen in
one of the CD AISLES.

We notice a large nasty bruise around one of his eyes.

We see Zeke walk in from the back door. He looks at Peto
who appears pretty damn mad. However, Zeke says:
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Yo taco bell! What the hell
happened to your eye?!
                                                            
Peto looks like he's about to turn into the Devil.
                                                            
                       PETO
Damn you Zeke! Stop calling me
taco Bell! You always call me
taco bell for the past two
years I've worked for you! No
more!
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Okay Peto. What's up with the
eye?
                                                            
                       PETO
      (laughs)
Oh, you're talking about this
nasty bruise on my face? Well
lets see, some more high
school girls gave me a beat
down because I didn't have the
Nick Minaj and Lady Gaga's
new WOMEN RULE THE WORLD album.
But apparently you told them
that we did.
                                                            
Zeke tries to hold back but laughs.

He's guilty.
                                                            

21.

                       ZEKE
Oh yeah I remember that man.
Fuck those girls. Fuck Nicki
and Gaga you hear?
                                                            
                       PETO
No I don't hear. And fuck you
my I hate every woman in sight
amigo. You know, this has to be
the only music store in the
damn world that sells so many
CDS.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
And your point?
                                                            
                       PETO
Nobody buys CDS like that
anymore! You ought to keep up
with the new technology.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
The women's technology?
                                                            
Peto has had enough.

He throws his arms up in the air, in defeat.
Peto then heads to the front door.

He opens it, and turns around. He looks at Zeke who's
standing still, not quite sure what to do.
                                                            
                       PETO
I'm done. You know I used to
think you were lucky to have
this store passed down to you
from your mother. But now I see
that you're just a fool.
                                                            
Peto closes the door and we see Zeke shakes his head--
didn't expect that to happen at all.

INT. JOE'S CUBICLE – HOUR LATER

We see a man with PAINTED FINGER NAILS, and FLAWLESS
WEAVE hanging down to his BACK.

His name is JOE.

We realize that he's sitting in his cubicle: in the
midst of talking to Zeke, who's standing nearby.
                                                            

22.

                       JOE
Oh so you're going to just
stand there and be all dramatic?
Why didn't you come to the
party last night?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
What? The Let Your Balls Hang
Party?
                                                            
                       JOE
Don't get cute Zekey boo. The
Let Your Balls Hang Party is
a very elegant gathering. I
guess you were too busy with
that Chinese bitch that you
can't even understand.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I rather hang with Li any day
as opposed to being around a
queer, surrounded by a bunch
of hanging balls.
                                                            
                       JOE
Excuse me?
                                                            
Joe gets up
and walks away from his desk in anger.
                                                            
INT. WOMAN'S BATHROOM – COUPLE MINUTES LATER

Zeke is standing outside a stall.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Come on Joe. I'm sorry. You
know you wasn't always like
this growing up. I know this
world is tough but you can
deal with it in a better way.
                                                            
We see under the STALL,
a pair of open toe heels.

We HEAR
the sound Of PEEING.

We hear the toilet flush.

Joe comes out. Walks past Zeke. Washes his hands.
                                                            

23.

                       JOE
You're right Zeke. I guess I
am getting too fruity.
                                                            
Joe laughs and Zeke does the same.

Joe turns around
and before Zeke even realizes,

Joe is no longer laughing.

And in one motion he drop kicks the
Maniac in the stomach.

Zeke automatically falls down hard.
We see Joe standing above him, yelling---
                                                            
                       JOE
Actually I'm not! And you can
deal with this world a whole
lot better yourself you know!
      (kicks Zeke in the
       nuts)
Too fruity that you bitch!
                                                            
INT. CAR – TEN MINUTES LATER

Zeke's holding a bag of ice in his lap.

He listens to a VOICE MESSAGE on his phone..
                                                            
                       JOE'S VOICE (ON PHONE)
Sorry Zekey boo. You know my
anger gets the best of me.
Well, I hope your little
friends feel better.
      (laughs)
Sorry Zekey again. Chao.
                                                            
Zeke puts his phone away, and shakes his head.

We see that Li is in the driver seat right next to him.
                                                            
                       LI
      (in chinese)
We go to market?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Yeah whatever you want.
                                                            
                       LI
      (in chinese)
We go to Market.
                                                            

24.

                       ZEKE
Yep. That's fine with me.
                                                            
INT. MRS. RANDAZZO'S FRUIT MARKET – AFTERNOON

Li shows a pineapple to Zeke that she just picked out.
                                                            
                       LI
      (in chinese)
You like?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Yeah sure.
                                                            
They walk through series of aisles.

She picks up a

little bit of everything and shows it to Zeke, whom
we see is hung over the cart full of fruit.

The MOTHER and DAUGHTER from the gas station are now
seen at about 30 feet across from Zeke and Li.

Daughter sees Zeke and pulls her Mother's arm…
                                                            
                       DAUGHTER
      (points at Zeke)
Mommy! Mr. Meany from the gas
station.
                                                            
The mother sees where she's pointing and tells her:
                                                            
                       MOTHER
Thank you baby.
      (pulls out phone)
Mommy has something for Mr.
Meany.
                                                            
INT. CASHIER LINE – 5 MINUTES LATER

Li unloads her cart, and gives the cashier her items.

Zeke is hung over the cart, going through the motions.

Daughter and Mother are spotted across the room at the
entrance door, keeping a close eye on Zeke.

The entrance door is shown opening.

Two LARGE POLICE
WOMEN, 6'5 250+ pounds, come in talking and laughing.


25.

We see Zeke who lifts his head up and just so happens
to sees the two cops near the mother and daughter,
pointing in his direction.

Zeke grabs Li in a blink of an eye and starts
dashing in the other direction.

INT. AISLE – SAME

Zeke's running towards us with Li behind him, who
looks confused, but never the less runs behind him.

Zeke reaches the end of an aisle and cuts the right corner.

INT. FOOD AISLE – MOMENTS LATER

Zeke's holding a little chubby girl high in the air,
covering her mouth with his hand. We see the Cops walk right
past, then takes a step back on a second thought.
                                                            
                       BOTH POLICE WOMEN
Put the girl down.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Come on, it's just a game we
play.
                                                            
                       BOTH POLICE WOMEN
Mr. Thomas.
                                                            
He lowers the. girl. A beat and he dashes out of sight.

INT. MRS. RANDAZZO'S EXIT AREA - 30 SECONDS LATER

Zeke's handcuffed.

The two women Police giants are manhandling him.
Carrying him like a little baby in their arms.

A few spectators are seen standing, eagerly watching.

INT. INTERROGATION ROOM – LATER AFTERNOON

We see both of the police women pinning Zeke against
the wall.

The meaner looking cop is OFFICER HUSH,

and the happier looking one who's smiling, is

OFFICER LONGFOOT.
                                                            

26.

                       OFFICER LONGFOOT
It seems that your girlfriend
knows how to dial 911. Too bad
I couldn't understand a damn
word she said.
                                                            
She laughs her ass off.

Officer Hush punches him in the
face.
                                                            
                       OFFICER LONGFOOT
I mean seriously? How do you
do it? My man says he doesn't
understand me some times. But
at least we speak the same
language.
                                                            
A moment and Zeke suddenly laughs hysterically.

Officer Hush and Longfoot look at one another confused.

Zeke looks Officer Longfoot in the eyes and says:
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I'm sorry it's just you said
you had a man?
                                                            
He then laughs louder.
                                                            
                       ZEKE (CONTINUES)
You. A fucking 7 foot Sasquatch
has a man that actually claims
you?!!!
                                                            
HUSH punches him a few more times in the stomach..
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Damn bitch…
                                                            
                       OFFICER LONGFOOT
What you say?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Nothing.
                                                            
Both of the officers smile and walk the other way.

As soon we see the door knob turn we also hear Zeke say:
                                                            
                       ZEKE (O.S.)
You 7 foot Bitches!
                                                            

27.

OFFICER LONGFOOT and HUSH turn around,

with BATONS in their hands.

We know what time it is.

INT. JAIL CELL – NIGHT

Zeke has a big ass lump on his face…

We hear a door open and see that it's OFFICER LONGFOOT.

She proceeds towards Zeke and opens his cell.
                                                            
                       OFFICER LONGFOOT
Looks like somebody likes you
after all.
                                                            
She moves in closer and grabs Zeke's nuts. He squeals.
                                                            
                       OFFICER LONGFOOT
I know who you are Thomas.
And I hate your kind you
hear me? I fuckin hate it.
                                                            
She lets his nuts go.. then closes the cell.

Our ole buddy's crouched on the ground w/his eyes closed..

We see him open them…

then we see a GUY in a BLACK
SUIT on the outside of his cell.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (to the guy)
Who the hell are you man? A
lawyer?
                                                            
                       AGENT
Not quite. I came here on the
authority of a person that can
get you out of jail fairly soon.
                                                            
The agent is seen sticking his hand through the cell
bars

and places a card on the ground.
                                                            
                       AGENT
Call that number on the card in
one hour and further information
will be given to you then.
                                                            

28.

The agent guy then starts heading out.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (getting off the
       ground)
Hey man! Are you fucking with
me?!
                                                            
                       AGENT
      (back turned)
No. Call that number in one
hour if you want to leave jail.
                                                            
Agent guy is gone. And Zeke just picks up the card and
looks at it once. Then throws it back on the ground.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
1 HOUR LATER

INT. LOBBY

Zeke's on the phone while holding the card in his hand.

NEXT DAY

EXT. POLICE DEPARTMENT

Zeke's walking down a flight of stairs.

We see

Officer Longfoot behind him at the door.
                                                            
                       OFFICER LONGFOOT
Alright Susie. Report back here
in three weeks 8 am sharp
alright? Remember, this is only
a bail. You're temporary free.
      (smiles)
Then again, you should already
know that Officer Thomas.
                                                            
Zeke stops walking and turns around and looks at

Officer longfoot seriously. Then relaxes a bit.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Sure thing Sasquatch.
                                                            
He then proceeds walking down the flight of stairs.
                                                            

29.

3 WEEKS LATER

INT. THEATER ROOM – DAY

Zeke's in a STRAY JACKET and wears a machine like
object on top of his HEAD with WIRES in it, to keep his
EYELIDS OPEN as in the movie A CLOCKWORK ORANGE.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (looking our way)
What the hell is this? A
clockwork orange, Matrix and
inception bullshit?
                                                            
We see the same BROWN HAND from earlier appear
suddenly. We see it cover Zeke's chest. A woman's
voice is heard, rather seductive or perhaps sexy.
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
Shh. If you want to leave in
three days as a free man, no
more talking. Understood?
                                                            
No more talking from Zeke.

He just stares at us as to
say,

"Lets get to the point!" As Sexy voice continues:
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
Okay Mr. Thomas. As you should
know by now, I have had my eyes
on you for a while. Over 10
years to be exact. Now, my
organization specializes in
turning criminal bound people
such as yourself into
productive civilians for the
better of our society. We are
perfect thus far in making this
a reality for over 100 people.
We convinced the courts that
you'd be given a second chance.
So now it's your turn.
                                                            
We now see that there's a

LARGE THEATER SCREEN

right in front of Zeke at about 20 ft or so.
                                                            

30.

The large theatre screen begins turning on. We now
see a SLIDE SHOW of WOMEN of all ETHNIC BACKGROUNDS: as
we hear the sexy voice:
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
So, you have a disorder known
as Femme Phobia. You fear any
and every woman whom you feel
threatens your manhood. Which
motivates you to do the things
you do. Now the challenge over
the next three days is to get an
understanding of what caused this
disorder for you in particular.
                                                            
We see about twenty random pictures of Zeke on the

screen pop up. Some child hood pictures, teenage and
more recent ones, as the sexy voice continues:
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
Today you will be watching
films that are actually a
collection of photos that we
have taken of you and other
people in your life. These
photos total in over 10,000.
You will view each photo and
answer whatever question I
ask you. This will help me
gain access to your thinking
processes in which we'll
examine and take further
actions from that point on…..
                                                            
We see Zeke, who's strapped up in his chair, head to toe.
Looking as stiff as a robot….
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
We will now begin the journey
into your mind Mr. Thomas. Look
at the screen and tell me the
first thing that comes to mind.
                                                            
We see an up-close of Zeke's face.

We begin moving closer and CLOSER,

till we can no longer see him, and

we are now therefore covered in DARKNESS.
                                                            

31.

INT. APARTMENT HALL WAY – DAY

We see a man dressed in a

BLACK and YELLOW FUR COAT,
with a BLACK and YELLOW PIMP like style HAT.

We see that he towers over the
much smaller Zeke, who's
only 12 at this time.

We see that Zeke's face
is covered with tears. He
tries fighting it, but
it's of no good at this point.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
……Why did you kill her?!
                                                            
                       BLACK YELLOW BEE
….I just had to. I been locked
in prison before you were even
born. And when I got out, I
saw this world and I say
myself, this is no place for
me. And this is no place for
your mother.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
If this is no place for you
then why are you still here?!
                                                            
                       BLACK YELLOW BEE
I ask myself that everyday son.
And that's why today I am going
to join your mother. But you.
You still have a chance to make
things right. Make us proud son.
Be ten times the man I could
ever dream of.
                                                            
Zeke seems more than frightened. More then likely he's
not even listening to a damn thing being said now.
                                                            
                       BLACK YELLOW BEE
We only met two weeks ago, but I'm
glad we at least met son…
New York is no place for a pimp
nowadays. My last trip is down
South with a friend of mines.
The place where I'll die.
                                                            

32.

Black yellow Bee notices that little Zeke is not
paying one bit of attention.
                                                            
                       BLACK YELLOW BEE
Now Zeke you look at your
Father Black Yellow Bee.
                                                            
Zeke barely looks up, just enough to please his father,
who places both of his hands on Zeke's shoulders.
                                                            
                       BLACK YELLOW BEE
Endure this son. And prepare
yourself. For a world where
being a man has nothing to
do with your gender... Farewell.
                                                            
Just like that we see Black Yellow Bee look his son in
the eyes one more time to never see him again.
                                                            
INT. BUS STOP – DAY

We see a WOMAN HOODLUM
stroll by Zeke,
who's seen in an
oversized BLACK MINK and YELLOW PIMP HAT.
                                                            
                       WOMAN HOODLUM
Hey little fella. A lil' too
nice of a coat you're wearing
to be takin' a bus now.
                                                            
Slight hesitation from Zeke, but manages to tell her—
                                                            
                       ZEKE
It's a mink. And get away.
                                                            
That does it for her---The hoodlum gets closer…..
and pulls a switch blade from her pants pocket.

She raises the blade

and suddenly

all we HEAR is two
sounds of a gunshot: POP! POP!

We see Zeke with a gun in his hand, realizing he's the
guilty one.

He can only look down at the woman who's now laying on
the ground, with two bullets in her stomach. She's still
alive--- but unable to move or talk clearly.
                                                            

33.

INT. BUS STOP – 30 MINUTES LATER

Zeke's standing in the same spot. The woman hoodlum is
laying on the ground before him. We see her eyes move,
so she's still alive.

We see a pretty SLIM GIRL from a distance walking along
side a boy. They're around Zeke's age. She comes closer
and Zeke looks at her as though she's a familiar face.
He SHOUTS to the girl:
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Mary?!
                                                            
She gets a good look at him and then it all makes since.
                                                            
                       MARY
Oh my god, Zeke?
                                                            
The boy with her, looks at the woman hoodlum on the ground.
                                                            
                       BOY
What happened? Why is she
bleeding?
                                                            
Zeke searches for words. Then he's like what the hell?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I shot her. She tried to rob
me.
                                                            
                       BOY
Oh, well the bitch had it
coming.
                                                            
Mary, a little disturbed by the talk, says to Zeke:
                                                            
                       MARY
Oh Zeke, this is my friend Joe.
He has to be home now or his
parents will kill him. But I
thank him for walking me to
the bus stop.
                                                            
Joe gets the message.

She just wants some alone time with Zeke.

Mary smiles at Joe, who waives bye to her
and Zeke.

Joe's a little bitter, but it is what it is.
                                                            

34.

INT. BUS – FEW MINUTES LATER

Zeke's seated in the middle row right next to Mary.

He looks out the window, seeing the woman hoodlum,

who's still on the ground. She tries to get the people
on the bus attention.

Zeke quickly turns to Mary…
                                                            
                       ZEKE
…So how good of friends are
you two?
                                                            
                       MARY
…Who Joe? ---get real.
                                                            
She laughs for a second…

Then suddenly her face is
full of compassion.
                                                            
                       MARY
I'm sorry about your mom Zeke.
She was a great woman.
                                                            
Zeke nods his head--- too painful to talk about.
                                                            
                       MARY
So how's life treating you?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
As though the Devil were
controlling it.
                                                            
She knows he's being funny. It's a part of his dark
humor. So it doesn't bother her much.
                                                            
                       MARY
I remember when we were little
kids you would stand up for me
against those bullies.
                                                            
Zeke looks at her like "what are you talking about?"
                                                            
                       ZEKE
You mean against those boys who
you would flirt and mess with?
                                                            

35.

                       MARY
Oh come on. If I were flirting
with them, then why would you
jump in?
                                                            
Zeke laughs…
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Cause your idea of flirting is
to pull on people's hair,
nipples and stuff like that.
And they didn't like that.
                                                            
Mary laughs with him.

She knows he's right.
                                                            
                       MARY
I guess...so, where you going?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (looking through
       the window)
Nowhere. Just riding the bus.
                                                            
                       MARY
      (leans on Zeke)
You should come to the movies with
me.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (faces Mary)
Okay.
                                                            
EXT. MRS. STAR THEATRE – NIGHT

Top of Theater reads

MRS. STAR THEATER.

A bunch of people are spotted entering the theater.

COMING OUT OF THE THEATER

We see a

blissful Mary walking along a disappointed
Zeke.
                                                            
                       MARY
How'd you like the movie?
                                                            

36.

                       ZEKE
It was alright.
                                                            
                       MARY
You didn't like it?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I mean the movie had Brittney
Spears starring as Moses. Come
on. That's blasphemy at its
worst.
                                                            
Mary unintentionally smiles.

She knows that's
ridiculous.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
NEXT YEAR (2013)

EXT. MRS. STAR THEATRE – NIGHT

Zeke and Mary are leaving the theatre again.

Mary takes one of Zeke's hands and holds it.

They continue walking.
                                                            
                       MARY
What did you think?
                                                            
Zeke stops walking and looks at her.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Halle Berry starring as Batman?
No. That's fucking ridiculous.
Cat Woman was enough for me.
                                                            
A beat and he grabs her hand and they keep walking.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
ANOTHER YEAR LATER (2014)

INT. MRS. STAR THEATER – NIGHT

ZEKE

is STORMING out of the THEATRE.

We see MARY RUN up from BEHIND.
                                                            

37.

Zeke turns around and faces Mary.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I hated the movie. Worst movie
ever made! The name of the damn
movie is Men take over! And
not a single man is in the
fuckin movie! It was all women!
I'm never going to the movies
again!
                                                            
                       MARY
Geesh Zeke. It's just a movie.
                                                            
Mary gets closer to Zeke and puts her arms around him.

He removes her arms quickly. He's still piss over the
last comment she just made, so he says to her:
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Yeah but when you see shit like
that on the screen, it makes you
think either the people
involved in making the film are
on dope. Or it's the people that
watch it. Or maybe both! You
know I must've seen a hundred
films with you within the past
few years. And all these damn
women you see starring in it,
you'd think they would've been
made a movie called WOMEN RULE
THE WORLD. But hey that's just
my opinion.
                                                            
Mary looks at him like you have got to be kidding me.

Zeke, who's more relieved now, puts his arms around
Mary and hugs her.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
EXT. PARK – AFTERNOON – 2 YEARS LATER

Zeke is on a swing with Mary on his lap.

We realize
they're in the middle of dialogue with each other.
                                                            

38.

                       ZEKE
I don't know, every morning I'm
over your place and I know your
dad's the most miserable man
alive.
                                                            
Mary gets off his lap and

then faces him.
                                                            
                       MARY
Oh come on Zeke, it's a hard
economy these days. Especially
for the guys. They're losing
jobs left to right.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (grabs her hand)
Yeah but your old man needs
some balls. Every day he
cooks all the meals, cleans
the house. Then your mother
comes home late at night from
work. And all she wants is two
things.
                                                            
She pulls her hand away from him.
                                                            
                       MARY
And what's that?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (smiles)
Have her dinner ready so she
can eat it. And to have his
ass hot and ready afterwards,
so she can tap it.
                                                            
Mary rushes him playfully and

starts hitting him in his
chest.
                                                            
                       MARY
Oh Zeke! Stop it. That's
horrible!
                                                            
Zeke grabs a hold of her and looks her in the eyes.

They smooch, and

she gets back on his lap.
                                                            

39.

EXT. PARKING LOT – FEW MINUTES LATER

Zeke and Mary are next to one another in the parking
lot area.

They look at the 2016 model CADILLAC, that's seen
pulling up just before them.

Zeke and Mary head towards the car.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (to Mary)
Like I said about your father,
it's all true. No kidding. You
know I'd die to see him for
once just express how he truly
feels. Cause that fake ass smile
of his drives me nuts.
                                                            
                       MARY
Well maybe you're the one who's
nuts.
                                                            
We see the front passenger side door open. An
impatient woman in a suit looks at Mary. Mary smiles
and says to the woman:
                                                            
                       MARY
Hey mom!
                                                            
Her mom opens the back door and Mary gets in.
                                                            
                       MARY'S MOM
Hey, lets' get home so your father
can cook for us. I'm starving.
                                                            
Zeke is walking to the other side of the car.

We see the
DRIVER SIDE DOOR OPEN..

An OVERLY EXCITED JOLLY FACED MAN is seen getting out.

He opens the door for Zeke.

This has to be Mary's father.
                                                            
                       MARY'S FATHER
Hey Zeke buddy!
                                                            
Zeke just stares him down boldly.
                                                            

40.

                       ZEKE
Cut the shit man.
                                                            
                       MARY'S FATHER
      (softens his face)
Give me a break kid. I know
my life is miserable. And so
will yours be once you reach
adulthood. So enjoy your
moments for the time being.
                                                            
Zeke is completely stunned. Mary's Father switches
back to his overly excited jolly mode and gets in the
driver seat.

EXT. JOE'S HOUSE – NIGHT

Zeke's sitting on the front porch.

We see that JOE is nearby, laying on the grass with his eyes
closed.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I've got to say Joe. I don't
get how your dad has a boy-
friend and your mom has a
girl friend. Yet your mom
and dad live in the same place
and they hardly talk. What's
going on with them?
                                                            
                       JOE
      (eyes still closed)
Well detective. If you insist,
my dad's been unemployed for
the longest. And my mother
doesn't make it any better by
always talking about her
bonuses, and how he needs to be
a man and what not.
                                                            
Zeke gets off the porch and walks towards Joe.

JOE'S

unaware, still laying down on the grass with his eyes
closed.

Zeke kneels down right before Joe and claps his hands.

Joe opens his eyes slowly, and looks at Zeke.
                                                            

41.

                       ZEKE (CONTINUES)
      (laughs)
So your dad deals with it by
boning other guys? And your
mom who's too hard on him gets
a woman to fulfill her
pleasurable needs?
                                                            
                       JOE
      (closes his eyes)
Pretty much detective.
                                                            
INT. ZEKE'S ROOM – DAY

Zeke's on his bed, while Mary lays on top of him.

We see that Mary's holding a book in one of her hands.

She glances at it, then throws it on the ground: where
we see a hundred more books and journals scattered all
over.

Zeke picks up one of the books and starts reading it.

Mary snatches the book out of his hand.
                                                            
                       MARY
So this is all you do when
you're alone? Read books on
Police Training and write
in your journal?
                                                            
Zeke takes the book back from her---then looks at her.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Yep. That's all I do when I'm
here.
                                                            
Mary gets off the bed.

She picks up a journal from the
ground and scans through it. Then looks at Zeke---
                                                            
                       MARY
What do you write in all
these journals?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Just everyday thoughts. And the
effects of today's society on
different people's lives.
                                                            

42.

Mary throws the journal

back onto the ground with
the rest of the zoo of books.
                                                            
                       MARY
      (smirks)
I thought you'd say something
like that. But what I'm trying
to say is, why are you so
serious all of the time? Or
better yet, do you love me more
or this obsession of yours?
                                                            
We see Zeke who's reading the book.

He now drops it
and looks at her like "oh shit here we go with this."
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Come on now Mary, where's this
coming from?
                                                            
Mary gets back on the bed and lays on top of him.

She puts her hand on his chest and says to him----
                                                            
                       MARY
I mean look at you. You just
graduated out of high school
and you're only 16. You're
already enrolled in a bachelors
program for a journalist degree.
And you plan on enrolling in the
police academy once you're 18.
It's good stuff and all. But
jeesh, when will you have time for
me?
                                                            
Zeke places his hand around Mary's neck.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I do these things to fill in a
void. I don't have a family
like you and Joe. Despite how
fucked up you guys families
are you still have a family.
All I have is this place you're
in right now, the cash my dad
left with me, and a dream.
                                                            

43.

Mary puts her face just within millimeters of Zeke—
She's getting really emotional now—--She really has
a thing for the kid.
                                                            
                       MARY
What dream? What about me Zeke?
                                                            
Zeke closes his eyes. He's in a completely different
world right now.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (to himself)
I just thrive on the challenge
of being that somebody who can
make an impact on today's
society.
                                                            
Mary realizes that this kid's heart isn't
where she thought it was. She's heartbroken.
                                                            
                       MARY
      (crying)
Well I guess that means bye!
                                                            
She gets off of him and runs out of the bedroom.

Our ole buddy Zeke

is looking more like the maniac
in the becoming. He's still laying on his bed with his
eyes closed, in complete harmony with himself.

He hums to himself,

"I am the new law of this society"
about three or four times and then opens his eyes with

a CREEPY SMILE across his face.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
4 YEARS LATER

YEAR 2020

INT. CHIEF MANWICH OFFICE - DAY

We see three BIG MAC'S placed neatly next to another on
a desk.

A 300 POUND BIG MAC MEANACE sits in the office chair.
She is CHIEF MANWICH.
                                                            

44.

                       CHIEF MANWICH
      (looks at us)
Dammit Thomas.. you were
messing around with two girls
while a woman directly across
the street was damn near beaten
to death. And don't say you
weren't aware because those
girls told me they notified you
for help. One more incident and
you can kiss your male
chauvinist ass good bye.
                                                            
We turn around and see Zeke.

He's in his police
uniform…
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I was aware of the tragedy but
Chief Manwich, those girls were
disrespecting a man officer. I
am the new law of this society.
So yes, I gave those girls a
ticket for j-walking on my street.
                                                            
Chief Manwich

takes a bite out of her Big Mac, while
looking Zeke in his eyes.
                                                            
                       CHIEF MANWICH
You're the law of what?... Just
listen to yourself you damn
idiot. You don't own any street.
And pretty soon you're not
going to own a police uniform
if you don't get the hell out
of my office in three seconds.
                                                            
In just three seconds we hear the door shut.

EXT. GAS STATION - NEXT DAY

We see a lady by her car screaming at us:
                                                            
                       SCREAMING LADY
Oh my god! Officer don't just
stand there help her!
                                                            

45.

WIDEN TO REVEAL

Zeke, in his cop uniform, walking towards the gas
station entrance.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (mockingly)
O my god! Help her!
      (pauses)
I just happen to be on break.
                                                            
He opens the door and walks inside.

Screaming Lady shakes her head in disbelief.

We see just on the side of her

TWO MALE HOODLUMS

grabbing an elderly woman out of her wheelchair.

She screams but it's not helping one bit.

The male hoodlums carry the elderly woman into a car.

We see the car roll out of sight. The screaming lady
just looks at it go.

We see Zeke walking out of the gas station with a
pack of starburst in his hands.

He walks past the screaming lady and smiles.

INT. CHIEF MANWICH'S OFFICE - DAY

Chief Manwich is pissed.

We see her seated in her chair.

She then hauls a quarter pounder into her mouth.
                                                            
                       CHIEF MANWICH
Dammit Thomas. I'd have you
lynched, but it turns out that
older lady ended up escaping
from those men. Now give me
your gun.
                                                            
We now see Zeke standing right at her desk.

He hands her his gun….
                                                            

46.

INT. OPRAH SHOW – FEW MONTHS LATER

A not so happy Oprah is seen

seated at her couch.
                                                            
                       OPRAH
      (looks at us)
Now this book which is called
A NEW SOCIETY is a collection
of journals kept by a writer
by the name of Zeke. He self
published it online. And it has
received a tremendous amount of
controversy amongst critics and
mainly women activist leaders.
And I personally have to agree
that it is both despicable and
degrading to women. It makes
men who are doing right by
women suffer because of this
garbage. If you're listening to
this Zeke, just do yourself a
favor and remove this book
from offline.
                                                            
Oprah shakes her head in anger.

INT. ZEKE'S LIVING ROOM – DAY

Zeke's standing by his couch,

while on the phone.
                                                            
                       AUNT’S VOICE (ON PHONE)
Zeke I'm so proud we've finally
got in touch. Like I said
earlier, your mother told me
long before she passed that
she would love for you to take
over her music store when the
time came. Just make sure you
look out for me and the rest
of your aunts.
                                                            
We see a

slick grin on Zeke's face.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Alright. Will do. So when
should I start?
                                                            

47.

                       AUNT’S VOICE (ON PHONE)
Well nephew, now that it's your
store I suppose whenever you
feel ready.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Well I'm going to start now.
You can tell the rest of my
Aunts whom work there including
you and any female employee to
start your permanent vacation
as of now.
                                                            
                       AUNT’S VOICE (ON PHONE)
….Zeke? I don't understand?...
                                                            
                       ZEKE
It's simple. You're all fired.
                                                            
He hangs the phone up before she can even get in
another word.

INT. BAR 101 – NIGHT

SERIES OF SHOTS

A) White woman buying a black man a drink

B) Black woman buying a white guy a drink

C) Chinese woman buying a Japanese guy a drink

We see

ZEKE and JOE
at a table talking/drinking beer.

We notice
Joe's
wearing an eye liner and lipstick….
                                                            
                       JOE
      (rolls his eyes)
Get to the point Zeke. What do
you want from me?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Okay being that you work at a
journalist headquarters I need
you to do whatever it takes to
get my article in the papers. I
need as many people possible to
read this article.
                                                            

48.

                       JOE
What the hell are you talking
about? What article?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I don't know yet. But I'm
working on it and when I get it
I need you to have it in the
papers.
                                                            
                       JOE
Whatever honey bun---You're
dreaming.
                                                            
We see both Joe and Zeke in silence.

We PAN across the BAR. Seeing majority of WOMEN in different
CLIQUES flirting with a scarce amount of
men: whom seem much more innocent, vulnerable and
feminine.

EXT. DOWNTOWN AREA – DAY

MEDIA of all kind is everywhere.

BYSTANDERS are on the
side of streets, stores, restaurants behind them.

On the other side of the street are

100'S OF MEN

rioting.. led by OSWERT, who's standing on top of his
raggedy car.

INT. ZEKE'S CAR – SAME

Zeke's in the driver seat looking ahead…

ZEKE'S POV

We see the riot scene again, realizing Zeke must be
pretty close to all the action that's going on.

EXT. DOWNTOWN AREA – DAY

We see a BLACK LEXUS.

From our view we see that

Skollie, One Bullet, Giggles and the Silent Ones
are all inside of the car.
                                                            

49.

We move across the downtown area, seeing several other
luxurious cars: Mercedes, a Bentley, etc. In each of
the cars we notice that women of high prestige sit in
them. They look as though they want to kill something.

It is now that we understand that they are looking at
Oswert's men destroying nearby restaurants and stores,
all of which must have some value to these women.

We focus on the savage men, hollering,
throwing solid objects at the buildings, breaking the
windows.

A sound that's louder than these savage men comes
from around the corner.

We see MILITARY SOLDIERS entering…

about 50 of them.

mostly FEMALES---they all hold

heavy artillery in hand..

while shouting: "hut two three four!"

A beat, and the Soldiers now split like the red sea…

making way for a

TANK coming in from behind within 20 feet of
Oswert and his men.

We see a MAN SOLDIER run up to Oswert.
                                                            
                       MAN SOLDIER
Get the fuck off that car!
                                                            
                       OSWERT
My problem is not with you
soldier.
                                                            
                       MAN SOLDIER
Then get your ass off that
fucking car!
                                                            
Oswert looks over him….

We see a soldier getting out of tank .. EAGLE sign on the
soldier's HAT is seen..

We realize it's a WOMAN.… COLONEL MAYHEM.
                                                            

50.

Oswert

points his finger at Colonel Mayhem.
                                                            
                       OSWERT
My problem is with that bitch.
                                                            
Everybody and their momma looks over at Colonel Mayhem.

She tilts her head to the side in slow motion all
while keeping steady eye contact with Oswert.

"This woman is no fucking joke."

She gets out of the tank and storms toward Oswert.

He jumps off the raggedy car.

He's now within inches of her face.
                                                            
                       OSWERT
You come here with your slave
army men and a tank. To scare
me? You are nothing. Just a
bitch in an army's suit.
                                                            
Mayhem's unfazed. She looks him in the eyes, whispers:
                                                            
                       COLONEL
Pressure points.
                                                            
Oswert looks confused.

She strikes him on side of his throat.

He instantly falls down,

knees first to the ground.

She kneels down and

shouts in his ears:
                                                            
                       COLONEL
You come here with your slave
men thinking you can scare me!
You're nothing! Just a bitch in
a man's suit!
                                                            
She lets him go.

Oswert is paralyzed.
                                                            

51.

SERIES OF SHOTS

A) We see Colonel Mayhem rally her troops.

B) Troops sweep the people off the streets.

C) Media catching coverage of everything

D) Lady thugs get in Lexus and leave.

E) A woman gets in her Bentley and leaves.

F) Zeke driving away from the scene.

INT. ZEKE'S CAR – NEXT MORNING

He's chilling in the driver seat, talking on the phone.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Joe? You see the news last
night?....Well Oswert was
found murdered…And if you
were downtown last night
you'd know that someone
there had something to do
with it.. and that it had
to be a woman of high
prestige…..I'm going to
find out who this woman is…
and bring her to due justice.
And that Joe, is going to be
our article.
                                                            
He hangs the phone up---and starts his car.

EXT. GRITTY NEIGHBORHOOD – DAY

One Bullet's seated on a porch….
Observing ahead where:

We see a group of

MALE THUGS

in front of her
in the middle of the street approaching a CRACK FIEND….

LEADER OF THE MALE THUGS deals to the crack fiend.

The crack fiend hands the leader male thug money, and
he puts it in his pocket.

We see One Bullet, still seated on the porch, watching.
                                                            

52.

The leader of the male thugs looks over at
One Bullet,… who boldly stares him down.

He gets the other guys attention to her then says:
                                                            
                       LEADER MALE THUG
Fuck you lookin' at you bald
headed bitch?
                                                            
One bullet takes a gun out of her pocket and aims it to
her side where nothing's insight.

She pulls the trigger…. POP!
                                                            
                       ONE BULLET
This is Skollie's territory!
                                                            
The leader of male thugs instantly responds from the
other side of the street.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
What bitch?! What the fuck is
wrong with you?!
                                                            
All the male thugs pull their guns out.

… One bullet calmly gets up and heads inside the
house behind her.

We see as we turn around…. ZEKE'S CAR.. He's inside,
holding a camera--- viewing the whole situation.

We now see the male thugs
playing around in the middle of the street..

Suddenly 5 DOORS on each side of the street
OPEN quietly. We couldn't even hear it.

The male thugs unknowingly
are still bullshitting around..

We see 10 women total…
5 on each side of the street
Stepping out of their houses…
dressed in all BLACK…

All of them hold rifles.

They look like ninjas.

They run fast as hell towards the male thugs silently.
                                                            

53.

INT. MIDDLE OF STREET – MOMENTS LATER

BLOOD is EVERYWHERE…

We see the women carry the dead corpses

into the houses where they came from.

INT. ZEKE'S CAR – SAME

Zeke smiles.. then starts his car..

Then we hear a gun cock from outside…

Its GIGGLES…

she laughs …. then quickly switches to serious face.
                                                            
                       GIGGLES
Hand it over camera man.
                                                            
Zeke gives her the camera..

Giggles laughs again

then quickly switches to serious face.
                                                            
                       GIGGLES
One more thing before you go
camera man.
                                                            
INT. ZEKE'S CAR – MOMENTS LATER

Zeke's driving---holding his steering wheel,

but does not have on a shirt, or pants.

Just a pair of drawers.

INT. MYA AFFLICTED'S OFFICE - AFTERNOON

Mya Afflicted, the president of Housewife Neighborhood Watch
team

is accompanied by

two of her not so brightest helpers,
(BLONDE 1 and BLONDE 2)

in the midst of talking about men…….
                                                            

54.

                       MYA AFFLICTED
      (pounds on her
       desk)
Men need to understand that
trust and commitment are
essential to stabilizing a
healthy relationship with
women.
                                                            
                       BLONDE 1
      (putting on
       lipstick)
Or they can always go to the
Underground. But then they'd
be better off jacking off till
their little wieners fall off.
                                                            
                       BLONDE 2
      (playing with her
       nails)
Shut up. You're so gross.
                                                            
Mya Afflicted shakes her head… The two blondes
ruined her message. She's use to it though.

We hear a door open… and see Zeke coming in.

Zeke goes to her, then we HEAR a LOUD RUCKUS suddenly
from BEHIND him.

An ANGRY WOMAN is seen dragging a crying and sobbing man
by his ear into the office.

The angry woman now lets go of his ear. She just looks
at the crying and sobbing man in disgust.
                                                            
                       MYA AFFLICTED
      (to the angry
       woman)
What did Antonio do now?
                                                            
                       ANGRY WOMAN
I came home from work and this
is the third day in a role to
a messy house! I'm not having
it! I pay the bills and buy
everything else! I should come
home to a clean house!
                                                            
Mya Afflicted pulls out a notebook from her drawer.
It's about that time…
                                                            

55.

                       MYA AFFLICTED
      (hands Angry woman
       the notebook)
That's a shame Antonio. Me and
the girls were just talking
about you men. And then here you
come with this mess.
                                                            
Angry Woman signs paper…hands the notebook back to Mya.
                                                            
                       MYA AFFLICTED
      (glances at page)
You messed up big this time
kiddo. Your punishment will be
for a whole year my friend.
                                                            
Angry Woman

drags the man back out of the office by his
ear…..

We see Zeke take a seat.

INT. SAME – SEVERAL MINUTES LATER

Zeke and Mya Afflicted are in the midst of dialogue.
                                                            
                       MYA AFFLICTED
Mr. Thomas, Oswert was no
different from the rest of you
men. His wife reported him
here just as much as the other
women. And that is that.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
A feeling in my gut tells me
you can help me. Is that true?
                                                            
                       MYA AFFLICTED
You can go to the underground
but you're on your own from
that point. A woman whom Oswert
use to visit from time to time
lives there…..I wish you well.
      (to the blondes)
Assist him to the Underground.
                                                            
                       BOTH OF THE BLONDES
Do we have to?
                                                            
Mya gives them that look.
                                                            

56.

EXT. MIDDLE OF STREET – SEVERAL MINUTES LATER

Girls point at the manhole.
We see Zeke lift it up.
                                                            
                       BOTH OF THE BLONDES
Good luck dude.
                                                            
They both walk back.. we hear them say "Eww gross,
I hope he doesn't have sex with any of them"

INT. UNDERGROUND – HALF HOUR LATER

This place looks like a cave where nothing but bats live.

We see a bunch of women.
They look as though their SKIN is made of DIRT.

We notice the

LARGE and GROTESQUE BUMPS on their faces
along with the TORN CLOTHING they wear.

Now, we move along, noticing
NURSES with MASKS on their face…

caring for a group of women, shown
ASLEEP in COTS.

As we remember from earlier, that many of these women
have diseases that are far worse than AIDS.

We see Zeke by a
LONELY WOMAN, wearing a hooded jacket…

Piece of PAPER is shown in one of her hands.

In the other hand the lonely woman holds a MIRROR…

and stares into her
REFLECTION.
                                                            
                       LONELY WOMAN
He was my only love. Then this
happened to me. He just
ignored me as though I were
never in his life before.
                                                            
She's crying out of control…

Zeke looks at her, not knowing what to do.
                                                            

57.

Zeke looks around this hell hole one last time…

The depressing sight of women so horrible to the eye
and knowing that some are bound to die within seconds
is too much to bear for so long. Even for Zeke.

He makes way to the exit. Leaving the lonely woman
in her misery..

We move in towards the lonely woman and we see

the PAPER which she's holding. And we see---

OSWERT'S FACE on it.

A tear drops on the paper…

EXT. UNDERGROUND – AFTERNOON

We see Zeke coming out of the manhole.

EXT. GAS STATION – AFTERNOON

Zeke's walking towards entrance.

At the side of the gas station… we see a group of WOMEN
THUGS… ganged up on a man against the brick wall.

Zeke unaware, opens the front door…walks in.

The group of women are now punching the man in the
face.

He hopelessly tries defending himself.

They push him to the ground and stomp him.

TEN MINUTES LATER

INT. SAME

We see a
VAN pull up at the side of gas station.

All 4 doors open.

A woman's shown signaling to the
other women thugs to "hurry up."

The women carry the man hastily into the van…
                                                            
We see the van roll out of sight.


58.

Zeke is now seen walking out of the gas station,
oblivious to all that is going on..

Our ole buddy just keeps walking towards us—

completely clueless---and gets into his car..

INT. BAPTIST CHURCH – AFTERNOON

We see a bold looking woman, dressed in black.

Her name is AHAVA... pastor of a Baptist church.

She's standing by pews...talking to several people.

Others are lined up… not too far,

We hear a phone ring.

Ahava answers, signals to the people, to excuse her.

The people say their byes…
And they then walk away. We see Ahava speak into the phone:
                                                            
                       AHAVA
Alright. See you then.
                                                            
She hangs up and then sighs.

INT. CAR – LATER

Ahava's in the back with Zeke.

He looks out window… tough looking neighborhood.

We see abandoned houses, gloomy atmosphere.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Rough neighborhood huh?
                                                            
                       AHAVA
It depends…I personally have
lived here my entire life. To
me, this is home sweet home.
                                                            
Zeke raises his eyebrows… and

slightly opens his
mouth… as to say

"I would have never guessed."
                                                            

59.

EXT. AHAVA'S HOUSE – LATER

Front lawn. Worn out house is seen.

Ahava and Zeke
are in a middle of conversation.

Zeke's face is in focus:

He looks really annoyed.
                                                            
                       AHAVA (O.S.)
As I said Mr. Thomas, I am
more concerned with the
everyday sins of this world.
Such as pride, self indulgence
as opposed to worries you
have of women dominance.
                                                            
Zeke looks down in our direction.

We turn and see a little boy (5) walk near Ahava.

She embraces him and hugs him.

She now kisses him on his cheek.

We can tell that the pastor
knows the little boy somehow.

The little boy then goes on about his way.

We then see Zeke's face again,

who's more annoyed.
                                                            
                       AHAVA (O.S.)
Kids. Helping the poor and the
needy. That is what life should
be about. Ambitions that only
serves one man are of worldly
matters. Love and compassion
are beauties that wealth and
fame could never buy.
                                                            
Zeke rolls his eyes. Then attempts to talk… but--
                                                            
                       AHAVA (O.S.)
I'm sorry that I was of no
help in your investigation.
Oswert attended church and
that's all I know.
                                                            

60.

We now see a hand on Zeke's face…
                                                            
                       AHAVA (O.S.)
Bless you child. Trust me.
This conversation is not in
vain that we had.
                                                            
We then see Ahava. She smiles at Zeke a beat. She then walks
in the other direction towards her house.

Zeke looks at her go….completely dumfounded.

Zeke heads across the street. We see a woman chauffer
by a black car.. She opens the back passenger door.

EXT. SIDE STREET – DAY

Zeke's car is parked. We see a Liquor Store in view.
Zeke's head is now seen, poking out of the driver seat.

ZEKE'S POV

20 middle school GIRLS walking on concrete sidewalk in
the same direction of two SMALLER middle school BOYS.

Boy 1's in school uniform. He's SCARED to death.

Boy 2 is

ARMY BOY. He's dressed in U.S. army soldier attire,
helmet on down to the army boots. He's a tough ass.

Boy 1's had it.

He turns around and flees. LEADER OF 20 GIRLS
(tallest of the bunch) moves in on the Army Boy.
                                                            
                       LEADER OF 20 GIRLS
Get off our side of the street
you soldier freak.
                                                            
                       ARMY BOY
It may be 20 of you she-males
but I'm not scared one bit.
                                                            
He says this with complete confidence.

Army Boy now

gives a nice blow to the leader's stomach.

The other girls rush him to the ground.
                                                            

61.

INT. ZEKE'S CAR

Zeke sees the girls stomping Army boy from his view.

EXT. SIDE STREET – SAME

Girls continue stomping the boy all over his body.

Then we hear a voice from afar.
                                                            
                       ZEKE (O.S.)
Hey! This is the police!
                                                            
The girls get one more stomp in…

Then jet away.

INT. ZEKE'S CAR – LATER

ARMY BOY'S in the

passenger seat holding a rag to his
swollen face.

We see Zeke in driver seat.

He looks at Army boy's face.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Why didn't you just go on the
other side of the street, son?
                                                            
                       ARMY BOY
My father served in the army
for 20 years. Told me never
back down from anybody.
Especially girls. He tells me
most of them are female
Charlies. Not natural.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
You always wear that helmet and
gear?
                                                            
                       ARMY BOY
Yes sir. Everyday after school,
I take off my civilian gear and
put on this here gear. Then I
get through the battlefield on
my way home where you just saw
me and the female charlies.
                                                            

62.

We see Zeke look at the boy. He's never seen
anybody like this child.

It's almost as though he admires the soul of this boy.

EXT. ARMY BOY'S HOME – DAY

Army Boy's outside Zeke's car. Zeke's in the driver seat.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
You take care of yourself now,
you hear?
                                                            
Army boy

salutes him.
                                                            
                       ARMY BOY
Yes sir.
                                                            
He eases. Then he turns around and

marches towards the

front of his house.

INT. ZEKE'S BATHROOM – NIGHT

Zeke's talking on the phone. We see that he's shirtless, and
wearing a towel around his waist.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Like I said Joe, the assignment
is under control…. Either
Skollie, De la THUNE or some
other woman has some type of
connection… I can feel it… but
yeah…I'm going to hop in the
shower…I'll talk to you later.
                                                            
He hangs up… hums to himself.

A rare peaceful moment for our maniac friend---

For once, the Maniac seems in
complete control this instance for whatever reason.

INT. ZEKE'S LIVING ROOM – LATER

Zeke, dressed in a robe, holds remote to turn off TV…

then he just stands still…and smiles.
                                                            

63.

Zeke's now laughing to himself…
Then stops…a more serious face… stares for a moment

Then he yells …..

Walks towards us…

We see him pick up the TV and throw it to the ground.

It smashes into pieces. He just looks down at it.

He now drops the remote.

INT. POOL AREA – NEXT MORNING

Zeke and Joe are spotted by a pool table.
                                                            
                       JOE
      (laughs)
His wife was the murderer!
You're thinking some highly
established woman was the cause
of Oswert's death, and yet his
own wife of all people is the
murderer!...
                                                            
Joe laughs out of control while clapping his hands.

Zeke shoots…misses badly-- Joe's in view, still amused.
                                                            
                       JOE
Lighten up. You know I text
you last night and you could
of at least text me back sweet
cakes.
                                                            
Joe shoots… his ball doesn't go in,
but it was close.

Zeke shoots and misses…
didn't even hit his ball.

Award SILENCE…
and Joe doesn't like it.

Joe walks up to Zeke…

He points down to his waist.
                                                            
                       JOE
What is that?
                                                            

64.

Zeke just looks at Joe. Then he finally looks down.

Joe quickly SHOVES the bottom of his POOL STICK in to

the middle of ZEKE'S STOMACH… PLLLOOOOOOP!!!

Zeke instantly falls to the ground… after hitting
the pool table, face first… PLLLAAAAAAP PLLLLAAAAAPPP!

We see an up-close on Joe's face.
                                                            
                       JOE
Sorry but Fuck you Zeke!
You're not going to ruin me
with your miserable ass! Good
day pumpkin pie.
                                                            
EXT. ZEKE'S NEIGHBORHOOD STREET – NEXT MORNING

Zeke's in a jogging outfit.. jogging through rain.

We seem him jogging towards us… and then suddenly

pauses and just stares at us… dripping wet.

We now see that he's looking at several houses on both
sides of the streets….

in which he sees a female truck driver, a female
mechanic, a female plumber, a female construction
worker, and a female gangster.

ALL OF THESE FEMALES

walk to their homes. We see men in bath robes, holding
their babies in their arms, embrace each one of these
females.

This image may suggest many things to us… but our ole
buddy doesn't waste any more time, and presumes to
jogging down the next block.

As he jogs down the street, more female mechanics
female plumbers, female construction workers and
female gangsters are seen.

Only this time they are getting into their vehicles.

Zeke sees this and jogs faster to the next block.

We now see yet the same thing as the block
before. Zeke sprints his way past this block as well.
                                                            

65.

Now females of other professions, such as doctors,
lawyers, teachers, etc. are seen entering their homes:
all before Zeke's eyes.

It begins to rain harder and harder outside.

Zeke begins sprinting faster than ever: in complete
frustration, perhaps in fear of these women? Or maybe
he's just losing his mind all together. But he keeps
moving faster and faster.

At the end of the block that he's running in is a
Chinese Restaurant across a main street. It reads
DRAGON EXPRESS at the top of it.

This is his destination. We see it in his eyes. He
may not have a clue as to what to expect, but he
keeps running towards it… and we---
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
INT. DRAGON EXPRESS – DINING ROOM – SAME

It's completely dead in here. More depressing
than a cemetery.

We see a bunch of the associates,
(all of them are Chinese)

seated at a table, looking at one another.

Not saying a single word.

Amongst the crowd of zombies is

LI, who decides to

get up and walk towards the front door.

EXT. DRAGON EXPRESS – MOMENTS LATER

The door is seen opening and we see Li behind it, who
then instantly screams… AHHHHHH!

LI'S POV

THE MANIAC

running towards us in TURBO SPEED!

Li however, manages to quickly close the door and Zeke
runs right into it.
                                                            

66.

INT. DRAGON EXPRESS – HOUR LATER

Zeke's laid on his back in a dining seat. He has a BIG
BLUE and PURPLE BRUISE on his forehead.

Li is seen holding a bag of ice over his face. Zeke
takes the bag out of her hand and throws it on the
other side of the table.

10 MINUTES LATER

INT. SAME

SERIES OF SHOTS

A) Li brings Zeke a plate of food.

B) Zeke throws the food on the ground.

C) Li picks up the food.

D) Zeke passes out on the ground.

E) Li helps Zeke off the ground.

Li assist Zeke to the table just behind him. He sits
down---completely worn out.

He looks at her in defeat….and says:
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Why are you helping me?
                                                            
                       LI
      (in Chinese)
Can I help you with anything?
                                                            
Zeke gets it.

She doesn't speak any English.

But he

just looks at her as though she's the most beautiful
creature he had ever laid eyes on.

And to him, she is because

she's the first female

that he can remember of that tolerates his
bullshit.
                                                            

67.

INT. CHECKOUT AREA – DAY

Zeke's seen talking to a CHINESE LADY CASHIER.….
                                                            
                       CHINESE LADY CASHIER
Her name Li. She just move to
America with her only child.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Okay. Tell Li I'm sorry for
being an asshole to her. And
if she doesn't mind, I'd like
to take her out.
                                                            
                       CHINESE LADY CASHIER
Okay.
                                                            
INT. DRAGON EXPRESS – DAY

Zeke's seated at a dining table by himself.

MONTAGE

Of Zeke seated at a dining table.

He's greeted by multiple

waiters, one after another.

MONTAGE ENDS

INT. DRAGON EXPRESS – NIGHT

Zeke's asleep at table.

Li appears…

She taps him on his shoulder.

Zeke's eyelids open…. sees her… and instantly smiles.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Li, nice to see you again.
                                                            
Li smiles and places her hands on the table. Zeke
sees her hands and gently puts his hand over hers.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
      (looks in her eyes)
Li, you're beautiful.
                                                            
Li senses that he's being genuine and then blushes.
                                                            

68.

EXT. LI'S HOUSE – DAY

Zeke's at front door.

The door opens, and we see LI. CHAN, (4) is by her side.
Zeke kneels down towards her and says----
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Hi Chan how are you?
                                                            
CHAN

covers her face in Li's shirt.

Zeke smiles and
then stands up.

They all walk to Zeke's car.

INT. HOSPITAL – DAY (A YEAR LATER)

Zeke's holding his baby in his arms..

Li's on the delivery bed… smiling.

The maniac and Li embrace this beautiful moment.
                                                            
                                         SCENE ENDS
                                                            
TWO YEARS LATER

INT. TEACHER'S ROOM – DAY

A woman TEACHER wearing glasses on is

seated at a table with Zeke.

Parent teacher conference type of atmosphere is felt.

Zeke doesn't seem to care much for it.
                                                            
                       WOMAN TEACHER
Thank you for coming to the
parent teacher conference Mr.
Thomas. I'd like to talk
about my concerns with Chan.
      (pauses briefly)
For one, she is very bright.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
But?
                                                            

69.

                       WOMAN TEACHER
But… yet she's in my class.
A learning disability class.
I'm sure this bothers you to
some degree?
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Of course. But if this is what
she needs…
                                                            
                       WOMAN TEACHER
Yes, precisely. But she
doesn't know any English. She
seems distant. Do you engage
in any activities with her
at home?
                                                            
We see that look in Zeke eyes:

that we haven't seen
in quite a while.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I don't teach her English
because I don't want her to
be like the rest of these
female assholes like you.
Now do we engage in any home
activities? Not your business
bitch. Follow your plans.
Cash in your bullshit U.S.
government checks and shut
the fuck up.
                                                            
Maniac gets up and leaves.

The teacher is appalled.

She just sits there

like a frozen chicken.

INT. INTEROGATION ROOM – DAY (BACK TO THE PRESENT TIME)

Zeke wakes up.

He looks dizzy….

He shouts, "What the hell?!"

We see the BROWN HAND right before his face…
                                                            

70.

ZEKE'S POV

Blurry vision… a shirt? pants?

can't make out the face if
it's a man or woman? …

We now HEAR that sweet SEXY VOICE:
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
This is your last chance for
redemption. Only one thing is
needed from you at this point.
That is… to consider what is
really important in your life.
                                                            
Zeke, locked in the stray jacket tries to get out...

He then calms down, losing his energy.

We see the brown hand holding a MASK. Puts it over
Zeke's face…

and now begins hypnotizing him.

Zeke's vision gets blurrier and blurrier…..as we hear:
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
I am now hypnotizing you
slowly and cautiously… I will
talk to you of things to come
in your near future as a result
of your present actions…..
                                                            
We see only the top of Zeke's head swaying back/forth.
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
That's right … Take it easy…
And here we go…1--- 2--- and
3.
                                                            
We see DARKNESS….

And here we go ….

Back into the

MANIAC'S MIND

YEAR 2040

Reads on the screen
                                                            

71.

INT. ZEKE'S ROOM – DAY

Zeke's more like a bum… with a ridiculous long beard.
Excessive Facial hair… A complete mess,

He's seen picking his toenails.

We see DE LA THUNE on the OPRAH SHOW..
De la THUNE and Oprah are laughing and talking.

Zeke throws his

crusty toe nails at the screen and cusses at it.

We hear a DOOR OPEN.

INT. LIVING ROOM – MOMENTS LATER

We see Li hugging a man… (Asian guy) …

Zeke squares him up…

We see both daughters come in from the front door.

Li makes quick eye contact w/Zeke and turns her head.

The Asian guy mean mugs Zeke.

Zeke walks his way with his hand stretched out as
though he intends to shake his hand genuinely..

And they do… shake hands.

And as they do,

the Maniac takes his other hand…

and pounds on the poor fellow… BAM! BAM! BAM!

INT. CELL – DAY (YEARS LATER)

Zeke's accompanied by a

LARGE BUFFED UP WOMAN,

Who comes from behind him and

grabs his ass.

Zeke doesn't react out of humiliation or surprise.

We can tell he's been in here a little too long.
                                                            

72.

MONTAGE

Of the BUFFED UP WOMAN... SMACKING and
GRABBING a HANDFUL of ZEKE'S ASS in a…

A) Cafeteria line full of people.

B) Cafeteria table with just them two.

C) Outside on the basketball court.

D) Inside their jail cell.

MONTAGE ENDS
                                                            
INT. VISIT ROOM - DAY

Zeke's seen, on his side of the room.

He seems

ANNOYED to say the least…

He's turning redder and redder by the second.

Zeke continues looking more and more fucked up…

We hear Joe's voice.
                                                            
                       JOE (O.S.)
You should be alright. Lotta
cute guys in here. And women.
                                                            
We now see Joe wearing a GREEN and PINK dress.

Along his side, is his boyfriend… a BIG MUSCLE MAN.
                                                            
                       BIG MUSCLE MAN
Hi Zeke. I agree with her.
                                                            
He has a very light voice.

It doesn't really match him.

He smiles and so does Joe.

We hear Zeke's voice.
                                                            
                       ZEKE (O.S.)
You two faggots can get the
fuck out of here now.
                                                            

73.

We see Zeke get up and walk out.

INT. CELL – NIGHT

Buffed up Woman is laying on her bed.

She now digs in her pants and starts fingering herself.

She licks her lips, while saying:
                                                            
                       BUFFED UP WOMAN
Come to poppa baby.
                                                            
We see Zeke holding on to the

cell bars. He just

STARES AT US;

"Like here we go."

He turns around and walks towards her.

She pats the bed….drooling…as he gets closer.
                                                            
                       BUFFED UP WOMAN
That's right come to daddy.
                                                            
Zeke's within an inch.

He goes to hug and her- and SUDDENLY.

He reaches into his back pocket,

grabs a switch blade all in one motion. And

"We know the rest"…

She didn't see it coming…..

INT. HOLE – DAY

Zeke's sitting there in darkness.

We hear a door open…

Tray of food's placed on the ground,

before the maniac…

He CHOWS it DOWN HIS THROAT.
                                                            

74.

INT. HOLE – AFTERNOON

Same story…

Maniac's sitting there in darkness.

He's moving back in forth…

We hear a door open and he immediately

runs toward our way--

He comes back with food in his hands.

He kneels down, and

eats his food as fast as he humanly possibly can.

INT. HOLE – NIGHT

He's standing up …. Moving back and forth…

After a moment, he slows down… and sits in a corner…
talks to himself… going crazy.

INT. INTEROGATION ROOM – DAY (BACK TO CURRENT)

We see Zeke,

in the stray jacket.

He wakes up,
breathing hard gasping for air.

ZEKE'S POV

Blurry as can be…

We HEAR the SEXY VOICE…
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
It's okay Mr. Thomas. That
which you just experienced were
only mental projections you
created under the authority of
my spell. Now I'm pleased that
you reacted with such genuine
horror. It lets me know you
aren't a mindless psycho who
doesn't care for a single thing
in this world.
                                                            

75.

Zeke continues to breathe heavily… eyes barely open.

He can't hear clearly… just his own heart pounding…
and he mutters…
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Am I dieing?
                                                            
We see the brown hand open his eye lids.

He sees her for the first time… but we do not.
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
No. for the first time in a
long time. You're alive. You
will be released in two days
after I do several other tests
to determine whether or not
you need any medication to
fully recover from your
disorder.
                                                            
We focus on Zeke, who then closes his eyes…

TWO DAYS LATER

INT. TAXI CAB - DAY

Maniac's in the back seat....chilling.

He's a free man!

We hear

JIMI HENDRIX CROSSTOWN TRAFFIC playing.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Hey, turn that up!
                                                            
Zeke's bopping his head and snapping his fingers.

Everything seems alright.

INT. CHAN'S ROOM – DAY

Room's completely EMPTY.

We only see

Zeke,

holding a framed picture of Chan.
                                                            

76.

INT. LI'S ROOM – DAY

This room is also completely empty.

Again, just Zeke,

staring into a picture of Li holding
their baby daughter, Bi.

INT. ZEKE'S ROOM – DAY

Zeke is throwing shit everywhere.

He flips his bed over.

Throws his dresser to the ground.

Kicks the walls. Yells repeatedly. "Ahhh!!!!"

He pauses for a beat…

Then he breaks down in a corner.

Falls to his knees

And starts to cry like a baby.

We HEAR and WITNESS

the CRYING of a GROWN MAN who just lost his family.

INT. GAS STATION – DAY

Elderly woman in the wheel chair from earlier,

approaches Zeke in the candy isle…..

Zeke smiles nervously.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Hi, Sorry for that dat day.
                                                            
                       ELDERLY WOMAN
      (smiling)
Don't worry about it. I have
to tell you something. I don't
want anybody to hear it.
                                                            
Zeke looks confused.

He nervously kneels down.
                                                            

77.

Elderly woman's looking like a pit bull in a dog fight.

His ear is right by her mouth.

She OPENS her MOUTH….

And locks her teeth on the bottom of his ear!

Rips the human flesh out!

Blood gushes instantly.

Zeke SCREAMS for his life and falls to the ground.

She runs him over back and forth with her

WHEEL CHAIR, all while hysterically laughing.

EXT. GAS STATION – DAY

We see a BANDAGE on Zeke's EAR.

He pumps some gas in his car.

INT. CAR – MOMENTS LATER

Zeke puts his car key in the ignition.

Turns it. Car won't start. Tries again. Won't start.

He throws a fit. Blows the horn.

The maniac lays his head on the wheel in defeat.

INT. RANDAZZO'S FRUIT MARKET – AFTERNOON

Officer Longfoot and Zeke are spotted by the entry
area.

She pats him on the back.
                                                            
                       OFFICER LONGFOOT
Sorry about the car. Keep your
head up alright?
                                                            
She walks away. Zeke nods his head in recognition.

INT. CASH REGISTER AREA – HOUR LATER

YOUNGER LADY CASHIER slides a DEBIT CARD through machine.
                                                            

78.

                       CASHIER
Sorry. That card didn't go
through either sir.
                                                            
She hands the card over to our direction.

We turn around and see Zeke take it. He shouts "fuck!"

He stares the Cashier down then looks at the card.

He throws it on the ground, where we see 10 or so
other debit or credit cards on the ground as well.
                                                            
                       CASHIER
Sir, I can hold your groceries
for you if you'd like?
                                                            
He smiles.

We see his CART stacked with GROCERIES.

He takes a gallon of milk and drops it.

It splatters all over the floor.

He takes an orange juice and lemonade bottle from his
cart and does the same.

The maniac takes a quick break.

Then flips his entire cart over.

INT. ZEKE'S ROOM – AFTERNOON

Maniac opens his closet. Mostly empty. Just two shirts.

One has a

PICTURE of BARACK OBAMA

holding a PISTOL
to HILARY CLINTON'S HEAD.

Other shirt reads in the Front:

Shoot me dead because in Marriage;

We now see the back of shirt.

It reads:

Women are the HUSBANDS and the men are the WIVES.
                                                            

79.

2 WEEKS LATER

INT. JOE'S GUEST ROOM – DAY

PINK everywhere. Floor, Wall, Bed…

We see pink slippers. We move up gradually,

Seeing pink pajamas, pink shirt…

And yes…it's the maniac. He's wearing pink.
                                                            
                       JOE (O.S.)
I'm glad you're comfortable
Zekey boo.
                                                            
Zeke rolls his eyes.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
I told you I'm only wearing
this shit cause I don't have
anything else to wear.
                                                            
We see Joe, who's wearing all PURPLE SLIPPERS and PAJAMAS.
                                                            
                       JOE
Well you make it look good.
Damn good. I'm jealous.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Whatever. Alright soon as I
find me a job I'm out.
                                                            
EXT. PARK – DAY

Group of Lady Thugs are seen near a BENCH…

LAUGHING, SMOKING WEED, and CIPHERING.

We see ZEKE, dressed in his pink pajamas, wearing
headphones.

He's within feet of the lady thugs.

He starts singing JIMI HENDRIX'S Manic Depression.
                                                            
                       ZEKE
Manic Depression! Searching my
soul! I know what I want! But
I just don't know..how to go
about getting it.
                                                            

80.

Zeke pretends he's playing a guitar and

falls to his knees. Making a complete fool of himself.

The lady thugs all laugh,, bursting into tears.

They shake their heads, point their fingers at him,

Take pictures of him with their phones.

EXT. PARKING LOT – SAME

WE see the BROWN HAND

hanging out of the 2024 model BLACK BENZ.

From this view: We see the lady thugs lifting Zeke off
the ground, and holding him over their heads.

EXT. ALLEY – MOMENTS LATER

We see one of the lady thugs open a

GARBAGE DUMPSTER.

We now see the rest of them holding Zeke way above
their heads.

They toss him in it.

Shut it. Then leave.

FEW MINUTES LATER

EXT. ALLEY –

We see that the dumpster is closed shut.

We see the Brown hand knock against the dumpster.
                                                            
                       ZEKE (O.S.)
What?! Leave me be!!
                                                            
We HEAR movement coming from within it. "BOOM! BOOM!"
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
Mr. Thomas, your family leaves
you and this is how you react?
Why I must say you are ten
times more pathetic than when
you went to jail. But this is
good. Only if you are learning.
                                                            

81.

More movement from the dumpster. "BOOM, BOOM"
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE (O.S.)
If you listen I can help you
get them back Mr. Thomas.
                                                            
We eventually hear less movement from the dumpster.

We FINALLY see who this mysterious sexy voice lady is.

We see her up-close and

realize that she is just a
REGULAR ORDINARY LOOKING WOMAN, 30's.

She wears a T-SHIRT and BLUE JEANS.

Nothing over the top. Just simple and plain ordinary.

Anyhow we feel more of a connection with her,

as we now SEE a SPARK in her EYES that SHINES like LIGHT.
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE
      (leaning against
       dumpster)
Now perhaps Mr. Thomas, you
should spend most of your
efforts valuing the special
women in your life.. As opposed
to degrading millions of
others that you don't even
know. As simple as it may
sound, it will help restore a
fundamental beauty you once
had when your own mother was
alive.
                                                            
She gets off the dumpster and takes a step back.

It's completely silent. We don't know if the maniac's
sleeping in there or what… but sexy voice starts to
walk back and forth… continuing with her advice:
                                                            
                       SEXY VOICE
At last Mr. Thomas I say to
you to do what's really in
your heart. Not what you
think your heart wants. But
what your heart itself truly
desires.... Goodbye.
                                                            
She gracefully walks away till we see her no more.
                                                            

82.

10 MINUTES LATER

EXT. ALLEY

Just the dumpster is in sight.

The dumpster opens… We see our favorite maniac,
poke his head out.

We see BANANA PEELS, SAUCE, and LEFTOVER MOLDED FOOD on
his FACE.

He rises out of the dumpster in his pink pajamas….more
like molded pajamas..

He just stands there on the concrete for a moment.
Not sure what to think or do…

Out of nowhere…

We see a GLOW from the SUN within a few feet.

We look up and see it.

It SHINES beautifully, god like.

And Zeke recognizes this god like beauty…

amazed by it.

We see a look in Zeke's eyes never seen before up
until this point..

We only can describe it as a look of understanding of
some truth…

that we ourselves have not yet figured out…

This may seem cliché but damn it.

It's believable.

He shall no longer go by the name MANIAC from this
point on.

From now on… we shall call him the ENLIGHTENED ONE...

INT. CHURCH – DAY (FEW YEARS LATER)

Zeke sits in a PEW with other church ATTENDEES…
EAGERLY absorbing the message…

FATHER TIME's seen behind a podium, PREACHING.
                                                            

83.

                       FATHER TIME
Humble yourselves and You
will be rewarded. Through
humiliation You will go far.
Pride, haughty ways will in
the end bring You to shame.
The meek shall and will
inherit the world.
                                                            
INT. CHIEF MANWICH'S OFFICE – DAY

Chief Manwich's in her chair laughing her ass off at
Zeke, who we see is standing right before her desk.

Zeke doesn't pout, react… just walks the other way
and touches the door knob…

We see a serious face on Chief Manwich suddenly… it
seems as though she almost feels bad.

She says something to Zeke…

Zeke lets go of the door knob and makes his way
back to her desk.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
(We see a black screen)

then a MAGAZINE appears--- reads:

JUNE 2028

MAIN STORY: OFFICER THOMAS

(Picture of Zeke in a cop uniform)

under it reads:

EX-COP is given second chance…

He lives beyond expectations thus far.

INT. MAN'S LIVING ROOM – NIGHT

A MAN is beating on a WOMAN.

Smacking her in the face…

Pushing her against couch… wall...

We hear her CRYING and BEGGING him to stop.
                                                            

84.

He continues beating on her.

INT. GIRL'S ROOM – SAME

A girl slowly opens her door…CRYING/TALKING into PHONE…

She peeks out of door/sees the man choking the woman.
                                                            
                       GIRL
Yes--send somebody quickly!
                                                            
INT. MAN'S LIVING ROOM – 2 MINUTES LATER

Out of nowhere… we HEAR a DOOR FLY OPEN.

The ENLIGHTENED ONE storms through…

He peeps the situation momentarily…

The man smiles at the ENLIGHTENED ONE as though he knows
just what to say and everything will be fine.

The woman is pathetically beat. Damn near unconscious.

Zeke heads over to the man purposefully. He roughs him up
and then gets the handcuffs out…

We see the girl holding on to the woman at this point.
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
(We look into a black screen)

then a NEWSPAPER appears---reads:

HEADLINES: June 2029 OFFICER THOMAS COMES THROUGH AGAIN

EXT. GROCERY STORE – DAY

A HEAVY SET WOMAN is

walking out of the ENTRANCE….pushing

her CART with GROCERIES stacked in it.

We see a tiny fellow behind her at a few feet…

Innocent-- no harm.

We see a CAR stop just in front of the heavy set woman:
in the STREET at a STOP SIGN.
                                                            

85.

The car rolls out of sight… We see the heavy set woman
SCREAMING…"Somebody get that man! He's got my purse!"

We see the tiny man DASHING away with a BIG BLACK
PURSE….

laughing…easily maneuvering through
crowds of normal sized folks..

Till he collides with a person…and completely drops
back as though he had just ran into a brick wall.

We see darkness and hear O.S. VOICE, "open your eyes."

We then see Zeke in our faces holding HANDCUFFS..

and lowers them to our faces…
                                                            
                                         CUT TO:
                                                            
(We see black screen again)

NEWSPAPER appears, reads--

HEADLINES: 2030 OFFICER THOMAS does the---

UNTHINKABLE

EXT. STREET CORNER – NIGHT

KID THE HUSTLER,

a 9 yr old girl thug,

hands ZEKE a bag of WEED.

ZEKE grabs the bag and then the kid…
puts her in his POLICE CAR.

We see Zeke chasing down SOLDIER 1 and SOLDIER 2.
(Two 6 yr old girls)…

who are SHOOTING BULLETS at him with RIFLES as they run.

They finally run out of ammo.

Zeke HAUNTS them down—

LIFTS them up by their EARS--

And TOSSES them into police car.
                                                            

86.

EXT. STREET CORNER – NIGHT

A newer MONTE CARLO

is sitting there posted on the side of the STREET.

INT. CAR – NIGHT

GIGGLES is in the passenger seat.

ONE BULLET is in the driver seat.

Giggles does her infamous hyena laugh.

She then quickly switches to her serious face..
                                                            
                       GIGGLES
Where they at?
                                                            
One bullet sticks her gun out the window.

We see ODDLY that the TRUNK of her CAR is OPEN…

However….One bullet's still holding her gun out the
window….

And shoots a bullet in the air.

… She brings the gun back inside the car.
                                                            
                       ONE BULLET
Hell if I know.
                                                            
We HEAR their CAR TRUNK CLOSING.

Giggles and One bullet jump…

both look at one another.

Before either One Bullet or Giggles can open their

car door….

there's an OFFICER on EACH SIDE….with

GUNS to their FACES….

We then see the ENLIGHTENED ONE…

close the trunk.

He drops a large bag of cocaine to the ground.
                                                            

87.

WIDESCREEN IMAGE

PICTURE of SKOLLIE with a cigar in her mouth on a--

NESWPAPER

Under it reads---

One last cigar puff…

Or will her charm set her free?

INT. POLICE MAIN LOBBY – HEADQUARTERS – DAY

MONTAGE

Zeke shakes hands with all types of people imaginable.

MONTAGE ENDS

INT. LOBBY – NIGHT

Zeke at desk. Officer Longfoot is seen nearby.

They're both quiet, seems as though they had a long day.

Officer Longfoot looks in the opposite direction.. We see

OUTSIDE

that a HONDA is parked in the front entrance area.
                                                            
                       OFFICER LONGFOOT
That car's been out there for
a while. I'ma see what's up.
                                                            
Zeke nods. Officer Longfoot makes her way.

INT. LOBBY – 2 MINUTES LATER

OFFICER LONGFOOT smiles in Zeke's face. Zeke's smiles
as well---we're like okay? What's going on?

INT. CAR – NIGHT

Zeke is squeezing the life out of Li…

THEY'RE BACK!

And they look truly happy and relieved to finally
see one another after being apart for so long.
                                                            

88.

INT. CHAN'S ROOM – NIGHT

Zeke's outside her room…holding Bi's hand--

She's pretty …about 6 or 7 years old now.

Li is on Chan's bed…waking her up.

Chan, (13 yrs now) takes the cover off of her bed---
sees Zeke…and quickly puts it back over her head.

CHAN then SCREAMS and SHOUTS… HUHHHHH!!!

Li kisses the cover. She gets up and makes way to
Zeke.

He sighs briefly and turns the other way.

6 YEARS LATER----2036

INT. OPRAH SHOW – DAY

Oprah's standing in the back with the audience…

She looks in our direction and says to us:
                                                            
                       OPRAH
Bill Gates is number one on
Forbes list for the past year
for the first time in 20
years. Lil Wayne's new album,
"MAN'S WORLD" is #1 in sells.
First time in 20 plus years.
We now have a U.S. Male
President. First in 20 years.
                                                            
She keeps talking…."this man … that man"..

We get it….Men are back on top… cliché? Not really.

INT. AUDITORIUM – NIGHT

Nice. Elegant---

1000 plus people sophistically clothed

in BLACK TUXEDO'S, COCKTAIL DRESSES… you name it.

We see ADAM SANDLER grace the stage… speaking on the
microphone. Aged quite a bit, but he's still the man.
                                                            

89.

                       ADAM SANDLER
This man has helped stopped
crime here in New York.
Put together after school
programs for our kids.
Contributed to the poor.
And was the leading voice in
getting rid of that shit that
people had in the palms of
their hands. Ridiculous right?
Just so they can buy things
and what not. I mean damn a
debit card isn't convenient
enough? But like this man
said, shit like that has been
warned against in the bible..
Receiving the mark of the
beast and what not. But this
humanitarian award for New
York residents goes here To
my friend. Your friend.
ISIAH THOMAS!
                                                            
We HEAR the ROARING and APPLAUDS from all over the room.

We then see the ENLIGHTENED ONE make his way towards
the stage.

EVERYBODY IN THE ROOM

gives him a standing ovation.

Adam Sandler greets the ENLIGHTENED one with a hug.

ENLIGHTENED ONE

takes the microphone. Looks over at all

the people applauding him…

He looks over to Li, who's seated with Bi in the front
row area. We briefly focus on two empty seats by them.

We now see CHAN,

surprisingly make her from the back of auditorium.

She looks stunning in her black dress.

She looks at Zeke-- SMILES. Zeke does the same. We now
see a beautiful glow on the Enlightened One's face.
                                                            

90.

INT. CATHOLIC CHURCH – DAY

Zeke and Li are standing before Father Time…

Zeke's in a BLACK SUIT… Li's in a beautifully distinct

ASIAN STYLED DRESS….

They KISS…. MMMMWAUH!

We then see EVERYBODY IN THE PEWS… stand up.
CLAP and CHEER.

Many TEARS of JOY as PEOPLE begin SNAPPING PICTURES of
the new and finally MARRIED COUPLE.

INT. CHURCH BASEMENT – DAY

CHINESE DINNERS of all sorts are seen on the tables.

We see CHIEF MANWICH wolf down a plate.

We see Kid with glasses,

PETO,

and ARMY BOY...EATING as well.

We then see Officer Longfoot…with SHAQUILLE ONEAL,

who's much older in appearance…but hey…he's Shaq.

Shaquille Oneal wipes his mouth with a napkin and
stomps his way over to the ENLIGHTENED ONE..

Who's seen at another table…10 feet or so--dining
with Li.

Shaquille Oneal towers over Zeke….while he's eating.

Zeke looks up-—-- not quite sure what to do.
                                                            
                       SHAQUILLE ONEAL
I heard a while back that you
used to give my wife a hard
time.
                                                            
Shaq gives him that mean mug look.

Zeke smiles nervously.

Shaq just looks at him.
                                                            

91.

Just as Zeke opens his mouth…

Shaq burst into tears LAUGHING.
                                                            
                       SHAQUILLE ONEAL
Hey man. Congratulations!
                                                            
Zeke's relieved-- laughs. So does everybody else
who's in the room..

We see JOE on the other side of the table---wearing a
WHITE DRESS. He stares at all the couples in the room:

Some who are old, young, good looking, not so good-
looking.

We see a look on Joe's face which entails of hurt or
yearning for something which he wants… who knows?

Anyhow … he eats from his plate… and so the wedding
celebration continues amongst the jolly crowd.

INT. BOWLING ALLEY – DAY

Zeke bowls a strike…

He makes way to grab another bowling ball…

Suddenly he stops in place.

Just stands there and appears to be shocked.

Then says to us:
                                                            
                       ZEKE
What happened to my friend?
                                                            
Silence for a bit.

Then---
                                                            
                       MAN'S VOICE (O.S.)
She's gone and dead. Forever…
                                                            
We turn around and we see, SUPRISINGLY, a

Well groomed… CLEAN CUT

JOE,

who is wearing a TUXEDO!
                                                            

92.

Joe's silent for a moment.

Then he eases a bit… flashes a smile.

Zeke smiles back at Joe…

and they slap hands.

We embrace this special moment--

As they hug briefly… then carry on with

the bowling festivities.

INT. GAS STATION – DAY

WE see the

ENLIGHTENED ONE in line paying cash for
a STARBURST CANDY.

We now see Bi, by his side.

She shakes her head in disappointment.
                                                            
                       BI
Dad, you really should retire.
That's all you eat is candy.
And you're getting older by
the second.
                                                            
Zeke takes his change.

He opens his starburst and eats one.

He smiles as he looks into Bi's face.

She too, can't help but to exchange a smile.

EXT. GAS STATION – SAME

We see a nice

SPORTS CAR (2036 model) parked by a gas pump.

It has tinted windows so we can't see who's in it.

In SIMULTANEOUS MOTION…

All four doors open. We now SEE

FOUR STRETCHED OUT ARMS come from each side of the doors.
                                                            

93.

INT. GAS STATION – SAME

Zeke and Bi are seen laughing…

Making their way out ---

Suddenly
in a heartbeat….

THE FRONT DOOR FLINGS OPEN!

We see FOUR WOMEN with SERIOUS FACES--not bullshitting
around.

(An African American, Irish, Caucasian and Japanese)

They all wear identical shirts…

with HILARLY CLINTON'S picture on it..

POINTING A GUN at BARACK OBAMA'S head.

They all reach inside their pants pockets and grab a

9MM GUN…

We hold on to this picture for a moment
for now we realize this is the new generation
of rebels to come…

Four young and bold women
who pride themselves on taking no shit
from no man.


We then PULL BACK from this IMAGE
of the FOUR WOMEN as they get

SMALLER and smaller and

then we
                                                            


FADE OUT.


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From Hayley Date 11/20/2011 ****
This was fantasic! Keep it up- this made me laugh out loud and hooked me from the beginnning :)

From Tia Date 8/30/2011 ****
The Screen Writer Ronald Ford is the type AMAZING talent that unfortunately is few and far between.. I had the honor of working with him as the Hair and Makeup Stylist for the actresses in the movie and I must say that he exceeded my expectations in that he is extremely knowledgeable and professional and was an absolute joy to work with. His work ethic and PASSION for what he loves is inspiring and I am SO ANXIOUS to see the end product!

From Daniel Miller Date 8/10/2011 ****
Tons of Great Detail.

From kevin taylor Date 6/25/2011 ****
its a great play,i love it.great concept and well thought out. cant wait to see the play.

From Jamie Date 6/22/2011 ****
I laughed my way through all of it. Superb!!!

From Peggy Bell Date 6/13/2011 ****
Ronald Ford did a superb job. This exciting screenplay was easy to follow and the characters were interesting. What imagination and creativity. Simply unique. Can't wait for the movie and/or weekly TV series. You are trully gifted, keep the creative juices flowing

From Carlos Gibson Gibson Date 4/28/2011 ****
Yea Cuz I Like This Script Well Put Together I Hope Someone Come Along And Put This Into A Real Live Production Movie! You HAve The Skills! Keep Em Coming I Love Them Both I Wouldnt Mind Being Apart Of This If It Was Brought To Attention Of Really Shooting A Movie For This ! I Believe You Got It All The Way ! Hope You Write And Type More Cuz i Got You And Support You!

From Stacy Date 4/26/2011 ****
Very unique concept! As everybody before me has said. Well done!!!

From Codd Date 4/26/2011 ****
Great script!! You created a world in which I could have never imagined and on top of that a story of soul searching for a purpose in life, in which Zeke realizes that he ought to treat the females whom are already in his own life with respect as opposed to dogging out everyday women in which he doesn't even know. So in the end he figures that his family is his true source of purpose, not seeking flaws and condeming a world in which women rule! Magnificent. This script should get you some where no time soon Ronald. Best of luck!!

From William Philpot Date 4/25/2011 ****
Ronald Ford does an excellent job in displaying the conflict in his screenplay. The lead character is a true example of do we or don’t we have a choice in the world we live in. While reading the screenplay I kept one thought in my mind. We have a right to accept or rebel in a society going against our perception of what is normal. However, do we have a choice? The humor, twist, characters and the use of everyday people in the media keep you interested throughout the screenplay. I visualize the screenplay as big production movie. And the film and actor playing the lead role should be nominated for an academy award. To the writer, please do not let them turn your script to a low budget film. The big movie studios (Warner Bros., Paramount Pictures, 20th Century, Fox, Touchstone Pictures, Columbia Pictures, and Universal) should take advantage of this suspenseful fantasy screenplay.

From Courtney Date 4/19/2011 ****
Wow, this was a bit twisted lol. Definitely wasn't expecting a story about women who ruled the world. I really liked it though! Very different. oh, and not for nothing, but I love Zeke's obsession with Starburst and that small mention of Jay-Z posters. Good stuff.

From Dominique Ford Date 4/8/2011 ****
I think the screenplay was well organized and I think the charcters was interesting. The plot had a good concept and showed the author's creativity. It seems like the author thought outside the box with this unique style he portrayed in this script. The main reason I think this script will succeed is because it's different. How many people actually thought about a new world with women controlling it? Not only that,the delivery and story was intriquing.


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