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Three Willows
by cosmo andoloro (partyperks847@gmail.com)

Rated: R   Genre: Organized Crime   User Review: ***1/2
Based on a true story. A quadruple homicide in Upstate NY leads and alcoholic County sheriff and his lead investigator with a checkered reputation on a journey through a bizarre world of small time career criminals,the mob, political pressure from other law enforcement agencies and his their political rivals,ending in the case being broken in a most unexpected way


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FADE IN:

INT. THE BECKMENS - DAY
                                                            
This is a story based on actual events that took place in
Oneida county NY in 1979. Out of respect for the living and
the dead,some names have been either changed or altered.
While there are elements of this story that are still in
question, in dispute, and some no one will ever know because
those with first hand knowledge are either dead or will take
the truth to their graves,th story you are about to see
represents as much as anyone alive knows for sure.
                                                            
RIDGE MILLS NY 1979
                                                            
Scene opens with Karl Beckman sitting in the office of the
Three willows nursery looking dejected and worried
                                                            
Judy enters the office
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (looking annoyed)
Big day today you know
                                                            
                       KARL
      (startled)
What?
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (Still annoyed)
We need to get the order for the
town of Lee on the trucks and over
to the landscapers before noon
                                                            
                       KARL
Oh yeah, yeah I...
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (Sternly)
Where are you karl?
                                                            
                       KARL
      (nervous laugh)
Where am I? I'm right here
                                                            
                       JUDY
No you're not, you're off in your
own world.I am really trying to
salvage what we have here and I
need you here with me, HERE karl
                                                            
Karl looks at Judy, then looks back down an the desk
                                                            

2.

                       KARL
Listen, I have a way to get some
financing....
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (interupting)
The bank is not going to loan us
anymore....
                                                            
                       KARL
      (Interupting)
Not the bank, an, an investor
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (angry)
What the fuck Karl what investor?
                                                            
                       KARL
      (Tentativly)
Billy...
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (angry and loud)
Oh Jesus Christ Karl no
                                                            
                       KARL
Hon listen...
                                                            
                       JUDY
Your going to a fucking loan
shark, a criminal? That's your
solution? What is wrong with...?
                                                            
Karl stands up
                                                            
                       KARL
      (Loud)
God damn it LISTEN!
                                                            
Judy rolls her eyes, sighs and crosses her arms
                                                            
                       KARL
      (forcing him self
       to lower his
       voice)
He wants to invest
                                                            
Judy gives a quizzical look
                                                            
                       KARL
      (with an impatiant
       sigh)
Yes, he wants to buy in. We have a
ton of work coming up and he knows
            (MORE)

3.

                       KARL (cont'd)
people in Florida looking for a
quick turn around. We can use that
money catch up on the debt from
the nursery and.....
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (LOUD)
KARL!
                                                            
Karl stops talking and looks at Judy
                                                            
                       JUDY
You trust Billy Kassab? You trust
that disgusting oily piece of
shit?
                                                            
                       KARL
He helped us...
                                                            
                       JUDY
Why do we even still know him
Karl?
                                                            
                       KARL
Honey he gave us seed money
before, and and he didn't screw
us...
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (Loud)
Gave us? he gave us seed money?
                                                            
Karl looks down
                                                            
                       JUDY
Karl, you paid him $300 a week for
a year and a half and that
deducted NOTHING from what he
loaned you. Everything we made in
profit went to him remember? I
cashed in my IRA to get that
monkey off our back to pay the
principle and you want to go
through all that again?
                                                            
Karl sighs and puts his hand on Judy's shoulders
                                                            
                       KARL
      (In a low
       reassuring voice)
Honey, it's not like that this
time, I promise
                                                            

4.

Judy looks back with a dead pan stare
                                                            
 
INT. THE FINAL SATURDAY - DAY
                                                            
Set in the three willows nursery on the final day of the
lives of Karl Beckman, Judy Beckman, Kim Dunn and Mike
Simons
                                                            
Kim Dunn, the mother of Karl Beckman is on the phone at the
front counter of the nursery
                                                            
                       KIM
I understand that but he is not
available right now. Yes I will
give him the message. Thank you
                                                            
                       JUDY
Bill collector?
                                                            
                       KIM
What else?
                                                            
                       JUDY
Something is going to have to give
here soon
                                                            
Karl walks in the room
                                                            
                       KARL
Things will be better soon Mom, I
promise
                                                            
                       KIM
Is that right?
                                                            
                       JUDY
Yeah, he has an "investor"
                                                            
                       KIM
Oh for God's sake Karl, what
investor?
                                                            
                       JUDY
You don't want to know
                                                            
                       KARL
Damn it! Our problem here is not
lack of work of lack of assets,
our problem here is I just need to
get some working capital to get
the jobs I have on the line in....
                                                            

5.

                       JUDY
Here we go again
                                                            
                       KARL
Once we get over this hump we'll
be fine
                                                            
                       KIM
I hope so Karl, you're my son and
i love you, but I don't know how
much more i can help you
                                                            
                       KARL
I appreciate everything...
                                                            
                       KIM
I know you do Karl.
                                                            
Kim looks at Karl lovingly but sternly
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (In a tense voice)
Giving you this job kind of voids
any debt we have to you, don't you
think Kim?
                                                            
Kim looks at Judy
                                                            
                       KIM
      (indignent)
Excuse me?
                                                            
                       JUDY
I'm just saying most of what you
do is busywork, that's all
                                                            
                       KIM
Buisywork?
                                                            
Judy shrugs her shoulders and turns away
                                                            
                       KARL
      (Looking at Judy)
                                                            
                       KARL
Honey that's not...
                                                            
                       KIM
      (Interupting)
Let me tell you something Judy,
when I first too over that god
damned mess you called the books
and sales tax,they were....
                                                            

6.

Judy quickly turns back around and glares at Kim
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (Angry)
All you did is change them, you
didn't improve them. I let take
them over because since we were
paying you I thought you might as
well do something around here
                                                            
                       KARL
Both of you...
                                                            
                       KIM (to judy)
      (angry but
       controlled)
You ungrateful bitch
                                                            
                       JUDY
How fucking dare you...
                                                            
                       KIM
How fucking dare you? All you do
is bitch and complain about the
business, except when you are at
the mall spending money on cloths
and makeup and god knows what else
you can't afford. You hate this
business, it's a loss, it loses
money, but that's not what you
tell your snooty friends at the Jr
league and your ridiculous book
club...
                                                            
Karl put his hands over his face as if to be at his wits end
                                                            
                       JUDY
You have no fucking idea...
                                                            
                       KIM
No Judy, YOU have no fucking
idea....
                                                            
Just then the bell that rings when the front door opens and
a customer walks in. Everyone tries to look as if all is
well
                                                            
                       JUDY (at customer)
Can I ....
                                                            
                       KIM
      (Interupting)
Can I help you?
                                                            

7.

Judy storms into the back of the store and Karl follows
                                                            
Fade Out
                                                            
 
INT. ROBBERY AND MURDER - AFTERNOON
                                                            
It is late afternoon and the nursery is ready to close. The
front door is unlocked and the closed sign is up. Karl is
writing something a a ledger, Judy is running the daily
receipts on the cash register, mike is sweeping the floor
and Judy is wandering aimlessly still annoyed from her words
with Kim. The front of the nursery is a room with a counter
and chairs with a coffee pot and posters of the various
trees they offer. There is also a display case case under
the register where the coin collection is displayed as the
nursery doubles as a coin shop on the side.
                                                            
Suddenly a masked man bursts in the door brandishing a
handgun, locking the dead bolt on the door behind him
                                                            
Judy, Karl and Kim speak all at once
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (Looking up)
Oh My God
                                                            
                       KARL
What the hell...
                                                            
Mike says nothing but freezes and looks terrified
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (Loundly)
Your hands, lemme see your fucking
hands
                                                            
Mike quickly drops his broom and puts his hands up still
looking terrified
                                                            
Judy and Karl slowly lift there hands. Kim just glares at
the intruder
                                                            
                       KIM
      (More angry that
       frightend)
What the hell do you want?
                                                            
Robber walks toward Kim, Kim stands defiantly
                                                            

8.

                       KARL
      (Looks at the
       robber)
What do you want? don't hurt us
                                                            
The robber reaches Kim and slaps her,knocking her to the
floor
                                                            
Mike Karl and Judy speak at once
                                                            
                       JUDY
NO!
                                                            
                       KARL
Stop it
                                                            
                       MIKE
Leave her alone asshole
                                                            
Kim on the floor, now looking shocked and terrified
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (Laughing)
Asshole?
                                                            
Points the gun first at Mike, then at Karl and Judy, then
back at Mike
                                                            
                       KARL
      (talking to Mike)
I will fucking.....
                                                            
A car is heard entering the parking lot, everyone looks
uncertain
                                                            
                       ROBBER
You people act natural or everyone
dies, you understand?
                                                            
The robber removes his mask revealing a man with almost a
baby face were it not for a scruffy beard with almost
shoulder length blond hair
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (looking at Kim
       who is still on
       the floor)
Get up bitch
                                                            
                       KARL
Mom, get up, do what he says
                                                            
Kim reluctantly gets up
                                                            

9.

A woman tries the door then knocks on the window, the robber
pretends to examine the coin collection and conceals the gun
in his pocket.They recognize the woman as their friend Carol
Williams
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (Gritting his
       teeth and under
       his breath)
Get rid of her
                                                            
Judy walks over to the door and at first just looks through
the window at Carol. Carol looks back wondering whey she
doesn't open the door. Judy opens the door half way and
begins to speak, carol half pushes her way in and begins to
speak
                                                            
                       CAROL
Hi guys, I know you're closing but
I see you are still here and have
customers so I have got to show
you something, this may be
something you are interested in
                                                            
The robber continues to fain interest in the coin collection
never making eye contact. Mike pretends to keep sweeping and
Judy stands silently against the wall
                                                            
Carol pulls two bills out of her peruse and hands them to
Karl who is standing behind the counter
                                                            
Karl examines the dollar bills and sees they are dated 1961
and that one side of the bills are plain black
                                                            
                       KARL
      (seeming to almost
       forget there is a
       robbery in
       progress for a
       moment)
I have heard of these but I have
never actually seen them before,
where di you get them?
                                                            
                       CAROL
They were in a bundle of one from
the bank. Are they worth anything?
                                                            
                       KARL
I am sure they are carol but I
would have to find out how much,
can you check back with me
tomorrow afternoon?
                                                            

10.

scene shifts to the robber momentarily as he looks up
                                                            
                       KARL
      (asn she moves
       toward the door)
Oh sure thing Karl, why don't you
hold on to them and I'll see you
then
                                                            
                       KARL
Ok carol
                                                            
                       CAROL
      (Waiving)
Bye everyone
                                                            
all at once
                                                            
                       JUDY
Bye Carol
                                                            
                       KARL
Bye now
                                                            
                       MIKE
Bye
                                                            
Kim says nothing
                                                            
Carol looks quizzically at the robber for a moment just
before leaving,then walks out the door
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (gritting his
       teeth)
FUCK !
                                                            
                       KARL
Please, dont....
                                                            
                       ROBBER
Shut the fuck up, let me think let
me think
                                                            
                       JUDY
Please, just go, we wont say...
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (almost in rage
       points the gun at
       Judy)
You think I'm stupid you fucking
cunt, do you think I'm fucking
            (MORE)

11.

                       ROBBER (cont'd)
stupid?
                                                            
Kim lunges at the robber
                                                            
                       KIM
      (screaming)
LEAVE US ALONE YOU bastard, LEAVE
US ALONE
                                                            
The robber points the gun at Kim and shoots striking her in
the forehead. Blood and tissue shoot out the exit wound on
the back of her head, he lifeless body falls to the floor.
Karl, Judy and make stand in complete shock for a seconds
then Judy screams
                                                            
                       KARL
      (screaming)
Noooo!
                                                            
Judy sobs, Karl staggers backward, Mike bends over and
vomits
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (strangely calm)
I told her to let me think. I
needed to think
                                                            
Everyone is silent for a few seconds
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (screaming)
ON THE FLOOR,EVERYONE ON THE
FUCKING FLOOR
                                                            
Mike lays face down on the floor, Judy runs to Karl shaking
and sobbing
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (Pointing the gun
       at Karl and Judy)
I said on the fucking floor
                                                            
Still in shock, Karl takes Judy's and and the lay face down
on the floor.
                                                            
Almost at the exact moment they get face down,the robber
fires a bullet into the back of Mike's head.
                                                            
Mikes body quiver and convulses, Karl and Judy are silent
                                                            

12.

The robber then fires a bullet in to the back of Mikes head,
he jerks, then lays lifeless as a pool of blood emerges
around his head
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (sobbing)
Not me, please not me
                                                            
                       ROBBER
      (looking confused
       and angry)
What did you say
                                                            
                       JUDY
      (screaming)
Please, don't kill me, please!
I'll do anything you want. I don't
want to die
                                                            
The robber smiles, then laughs
                                                            
                       ROBBER
You disloyal fucking bitch. I just
killed everyone around you and you
are begging me for your life, you
don't even care about them?
                                                            
Judy sobs, and the robber fires six shots into Judy's head
                                                            
Cut to a closeup of the robbers face. He wipes the sweat off
his forehead

Fade out
                                                            
 
INT. ENTER HAUSER AND DECASTRO - MORNING
                                                            
The scene opens in the early morning in the home of Sheriff
Bill Hauser. The house is unkempt and Hauser is fully
clothed asleep on his sofa. A near empty bottle of bourbon
and a half eaten Pizza is on the coffee table. The TV is on
and the "Today show" is playing
                                                            
Hauser's phone rings 8 times and he never wakes up or makes
any attempt to answer it. After a short pause it begins to
ring again
                                                            
                                         HAUSER WAKES UP
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Shit!
                                                            

13.

He gets up and staggers toward the kitchen where his phone
is on the wall
                                                            
                       KARL
Yeah yeah yeah
                                                            
He clumsily pick up the phone
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Hauser
                                                            
scene shifts back and forth between Hauser and Rick
                                                            
                       RICK
I am about to ruin your fucking
day
                                                            
                       KARL
Good morning to you too asshole,
don't you know it's Sunday?
                                                            
                       RICK
I hope you got some sleep,this is
gonna be one fucked up day
                                                            
                       KARL
      (sighs and coughs)
Some kids key a patrol car?
                                                            
                       RICK
Yeah ya idiot, I woke you up for
that
                                                            
                       KARL
      (annoyed)
What?
                                                            
                       RICK
      (in monotone)
Quadruple homicide
                                                            
long pause
                                                            
                       RICK
      (chuckling)
Hello?
                                                            
                       KARL
What did you say
                                                            
                       RICK
Quadruple homicide, and wait it
gets better, we have established a
crime scene and the fucking
            (MORE)

14.

                       RICK (cont'd)
troopers are all over the place
claiming this belongs to them
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Jesus Christ, where, who?
                                                            
                       RICK
Three Willows Nursery
                                                            
long pause
                                                            
                       RICK
I need you here Boss
                                                            
                       HAUSER
On the way, and keep those fucking
troopers away from my crime scene
                                                            
Hauser hangs up and turns around to see a 20 something blond
girl walking out of his bathroom in a towel
                                                            
                       YOUNG GIRL
I took a shower, I hope you don't
mind
                                                            
                       HAUSER
No, no thats...
                                                            
                       YOUNG GIRL
I tried to wake you up but you
passed out, sorry we didn't get to
do anything, I...
                                                            
                       HAUSER
No it's ok it's ok...
                                                            
                       YOUNG GIRL
We can do something now if you
like, I mean...
                                                            
                       HAUSER
No, I gotta run, I'm sorry,
really, just let yourself out when
your ready....
                                                            
                       YOUNG GIRL
      (looking worried)
So, ummm, I am still not going to
get my license suspended right?
                                                            
                       HAUSER
No, no I'll take care of it
                                                            

15.

                       YOUNG GIRL
Your so sweet
                                                            
Blows him a kiss
                                                            
                       YOUNG GIRL
Thanks
                                                            
She runs back in the bathroom
                                                            
 
INT. BLOOD BATH - LATER
                                                            
Hauser pulls into the parking along side the road in front
of the Three willows nursery. There are several sheriffs
deputy and state police squad cars already there
                                                            
Hauser gets out of his car and walks under the yellow police
line tape
                                                            
Hauser is approached by State police captain Gene Nichols
                                                            
                       TROOPER CAPTAIN
      (arrogent)
That's you Hauser, always the last
one on the scene
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Well you can go now Nichols we got
this
                                                            
                       TROOPER CAPTAIN
Bullshit, there are four dead
bodies in there, this is no...
                                                            
                       HAUSER
We got to the scene first Nichols
you know the....
                                                            
                       TROOPER CAPTAIN
Don't give me your God damned
jurisdiction bullshit Hauser. You
are way over your head here,back
off and let us do our job
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Ok gene, let me put it another
way. This is unincorporated Oneida
county. I am the duly elected
sheriff of......
                                                            
                       TROOPER CAPTAIN
You know damn well....
                                                            

16.

                       HAUSER
      (shouting)
I'm still talking Gene
                                                            
                       HAUSER
I am the duly elected sheriff of
Oneida County, and that makes me
the supreme law reinforcement
agent any where in the county
outside the cities and villages,,
neither of which we are in at the
moment...
                                                            
                       TROOPER CAPTAIN
I....
                                                            
                       HAUSER
I'm still talking Gene
                                                            
                       HAUSER
With that in mind, get you fat ass
away from my crime scene before i
arrest you for obstruction right
here in front of all you men, you
don't want that do you Gene?
                                                            
                       TROOPER CAPTAIN
You drunken.....
                                                            
Investigator Rick DeCastro walks up behind Nichols
                                                            
                       RICK
I would take great pleasure in
being the one to take your gun and
cuff you asshole. Go ahead, put me
to the test
                                                            
Nichols looks at Hauser, Hauser grins
                                                            
                       TROOPER CAPTAIN
      (laughs)
When you fuck this up because you
pass out in the middle of a
witness interview, we'll be ready
to take over
                                                            
Gene stomps away
                                                            
                       RICK
      (Smug grin)
Bye Gene
                                                            

17.

Scene shift to Hauser and DeCastro entering the building
they take only a single step inside.
                                                            
The 4 lifeless bodies were still on the floor and the floor
was covered with the intermingled partially congealed blood
of the four victims
                                                            
                       RICK
Mom, Dad wife and employee
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Anyone else work here?
                                                            
                       RICK
According to the Guy who found
this some part timers and sub
contractors,I already have the
office putting a list together
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Who was the first deputy on site?
                                                            
                       RICK
Burke
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Jesus thank God
                                                            
                       RICK
Yeah, he sealed and secured
everything and called me right
away
                                                            
                       KARL
Who found this?
                                                            
                       RICK
A old guy that ca,e in to buy some
mulch. He's over there with the
EMTs. He's pretty shaken up
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Where the hell are are your
people?
                                                            
                       KARL
On the way, I called you first. I
didn't want that asshole Nichols
bird dogging our crime scene guys
                                                            
The two walk back outside
                                                            

18.

                       HAUSER
Rick...
                                                            
Rick gives Hauser a quizzical look
                                                            
                       HAUSER
What sick bastard does this?
                                                            
                       RICK
Who knows?
                                                            
                       HAUSER
So as of now it's robbery homicide
ya think?
                                                            
                       RICK
I hope so, I sure as hell hope if
somebody did something like this,
it wasn't just for fun
                                                            
 
INT. RICK AT HOME - NIGHT
                                                            
Rick is laying on his back in his dimly lit bedroom while an
attractive woman on top of him and the two are having sex.
The woman is moaning and her thrusts increase in speed and
her moans get louder as she has an orgasm. She sighs and
rolls off Rick and lays flat on her back. Rick looks only
semi interested
                                                            
                       RICK
You ok?
                                                            
                       RICKS DATE
That was great, except I had to do
all the work
                                                            
                       RICK
      (Rolls his eyes
       and smiles)
I got a lot on my mind baby, sorry
                                                            
                       RICKS DATE
I heard about that crazy murder
thing at that nursery, that's
fucked up
                                                            
                       RICK
Fucked up is what it is
                                                            
                       RICKS DATE
Is it true they raped the women?
                                                            

19.

Rick looks over at her and pauses, then speaks
                                                            
                       RICK
Where did you hear that
                                                            
                       RICKS DATE
I dunno, it's what people are
saying
                                                            
                       RICK
Don't believe everything you hear
                                                            
                       RICKS DATE
An then the newspaper said...
                                                            
                       RICK
Don't belive everything you read
either
                                                            
                                         FADE OUT.
                                                            
 
INT. THE MEDIA AND THE FEDS - DAY
                                                            
Bill Hauser gets out of his car in the parking lot of the
Oneida County Court house. He is swamped by media and
reporters who badger him questions as he walks.
                                                            
                       HAUSER
I cant hear any of you if you all
talk at once
                                                            
                       REPORTER 1
Any leads in the case sheriff
Hauser?
                                                            
                       HAUSER
It's early in the investigation
and we are beginning to develop
leads
                                                            
all the reporters try to get there question in but one
reporters talks over them
                                                            
                       REPORTER 2
Sheriff there have been reports
that Mr Beckman had gambling debt
is that true?
                                                            
                       HAUSER
I would have no comment on that
aspect of the investigation
                                                            

20.

                       REPORTER 3
Is there any information on how
much was stolen from the shop?
                                                            
                       HAUSER
No comment at this time
                                                            
                       REPORTER CHRISTINE
Sheriff we have be told you are
here today to meet with the FBI,
will you be turning over the
investigation to them?
                                                            
                       HAUSER
No comment
                                                            
                       REPORTER CHRISTINE
Don't you think you should turn
this over to the FBI or at least
the state police Sheriff?
                                                            
Hauser stops walking and looks at Christine
                                                            
                       KARL
Why would I do that Christine?
                                                            
                       REPORTER CHRISTINE
This is a major crime sheriff, and
we hear there may be a mob
connection...
                                                            
The other reporters look on intently
                                                            
                       HAUSER
      (Interupts)
Where did you hear there was a mob
connection?
                                                            
                       REPORTER CHRISTINE
      (Looking
       uncomfortable)
Well we have had...
                                                            
Hauser starts walking again
                                                            
                       KARL
      (Looking forward
       and not looking
       at Christine)
The sheriffs department has
jurisdiction in this case, and
there is no indication at this
time there is any Mob
connection,stop spreading rumors c
            (MORE)

21.

                       KARL (cont'd)
Christine or you never get a job
at a real Newspaper
                                                            
                       REPORTER CHRISTINE (Trying to keep up with Hauser)
      (annoyed)
Sheriff...
                                                            
                       HAUSER
      (walking faster)
That's all for now people
                                                            
Christine stops walking as the other reporters continue to
follow Hauser and continue asking questions
                                                            
                       REPORTER CHRISTINE
      (Under her breath)
Asshole
                                                            
                                         SCEENE SWITCHES TO A
CONFERNCE ROOM WITH
HAUSER, THE DA AND
TWO FBI AGENTS
                                                            
Close up on the face of FBI agent one as he speaks
                                                            
                       FBI AGENT 1
There are indications of a mob
connection and this needs to be
turned over to the FBI
                                                            
Shift to FBI agent 2 who says nothing and looks
disinterested
                                                            
                       HAUSER
Where are you seeing any
indication of a mob connection...
                                                            
                       FBI AGENT 1
And even if there is no mob
connection stolen coins and
precious metals are federal
jurisdiction
                                                            
                       DISTRICT ATTY WAGNER
That's not exactly true agent
Hackett, it doesn't become federal
jurisdiction until the coins or
metals are sold or attempted to
be...
                                                            
                       HAUSER
This is not a federal matter....
                                                            

22.

                       FBI AGENT 2
Here is where we are at gentlemen,
sheriff Hauser, you will share
with us everything you know,
everything you learn and
everything you suspect on a daily
basis. The Sherrifs department
will continue the investigation
until the second this this becomes
a federal matter.
                                                            


FADE OUT.


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From eve holden Date 4/22/2012 ***1/2
I found myself gettin engrossed in the storyline, I liked that the characters were quite fleshed out, I would of liked 2 know a bit more about the motive and the murderer, but on the whole I think its a very good story especially the fact it is based on a true story, as is the script I am myself working on.


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