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by blaine (blainebirardi@yahoo.com)
Rated:
Genre: Teen Movies
User Review:
its a mix of fun and frolic. This is a very funny movie
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FADE IN:
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INT. CAR DEALERSHIP - DAY |
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MOM
(reaching over to
grab keys from
man)
Ok, thanks |
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DEALERSHIP GUY
there's one more paper to sign,
and then you'll be on your way |
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MOM
(signing
paper/contract)
there you go |
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DEALERSHIP GUY
all righty then your all set, the
car's all yours |
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mom walks out the door towards her new car and takes off to
her house in the hills |
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INT. INSIDE NEW CAR - DAY |
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MOM
(dialing cell
phone and calling
husband)
Hi hunny it's me .. I've got a
suprise for you when i get home |
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MOM
If I told you it wouldn't be a
suprise now would it |
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POPS
o come on please tell please
please please please please. |
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MOM
No im not going to tell you |
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MOM
you're right im not and im hanging
up |
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CHAD
wait wait wait wait ..... will you
tell chad? |
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MR. D.
WHY WOULD CHAD SAY THAT? |
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DIAL TONE |
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EXT. DRIVE WAY AT HOUSE - DAY |
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Mom drives up and suprises chad with a new car. Chad runs to
the car in excitment and looks in the car |
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CHAD
Holy s#@^ you got a Lambourghini |
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MOM
(scolding chad)
what did you say young man |
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CHAD
(sees his friend
sticky and
quickly changes
the subject)
yo sticky what up |
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sticky walks up and checks out the new car |
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STICKY
(lots of hand
motion)
yo Mrs. T . Nice ride |
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MOM
thanks sticky you wanna test drive
it |
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STICKY
yo that would be awsome. |
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mom throws him the keys and drives down the drive way and
once he hits the turn he floors it. |
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CHAD
I dont know. He is sticky and des
like to barrow things without
asking. Think of the bright side
if we did we could say it was
stolen and we would get money from
the INSURANCE. |
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MOM
(looks at chad)
I didnt really like that yellow
anyways. |
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4.
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POPS
(randomly appears)
where did the car go.
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MOM
(looks at pops)
sticky just stole it |
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CHAD
It sure is dad it sure is |
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POPS
how was school today |
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CHAD
fine dad how was work |
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POPS
it was good this guy had a big
tumor. and- |
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Mom and chad walk away and go into the house
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POPS
(lowers his head)
That is also depressing |
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and he walk in the house
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INT. DINNER TIME - NIGHT |
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MOM
so Chad was school fun today? |
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CHAD
I guess if you call getting a
swirly fun then yea |
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POPS
hahaha swirly's i remember those i
used to |
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Mom interupts him before he finishes |
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CHAD
(gives to thumbs
up and gives his
dad a high five)
its ok im going to teach myself
how to punch kids in th.. |
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chad is stopped by moms evil stare |
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CHAD
(looking down at
his peas and
playing with the
carrots)
nevermind |
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MOM
so hun what did you do today |
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POPS
uummm.. I ate food then |
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POPS
well I disected this persons head
an he had the biggest blood clott
on the right side of his head |
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CHAD
yea dad seriously we're eating |
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POPS
(chuckles)
sorry , but you asked |
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CHAD
i dont wanna those gross
and...green |
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MOM
fine then go upstairs |
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CHAD
why shuld I because I won't eat
stupid a#@ vegitables |
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MOM
thats it go to your room |
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MR. D.
hOW OLD IS THIS KID? |
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CHAD
(while walking
upstairs)
so stupid |
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INT. IN CHADS ROOM - NIGHT |
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CHAD
(while on the
phone with his
girlfriend)
hey babe |
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CHADS GF
hey
whats the matter you sound
different |
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7.
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CHAD
I got sent to my room for not
eating my peas |
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CHADS GF
(laghing)
really thats funny |
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VOICE IN THE BACKROUND
oh yea baby |
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CHAD
that guy in the backround |
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CHADS GF
what guy i didn't hear anything |
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VOICE IN THE BACKROUND
hey baby i like it like that |
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boom hits chad while on the phone |
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CHAD
oww, whatch it jeff .. damn that
hurt |
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CHAD
(holding his head)
damn dude that really hurt crap.
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JEFF
dude i said im sorry |
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CHAD
(whining)
I think im bleeding |
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chad walks out of shot and walks back in |
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chad is rubbing his head |
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DIRECTOR
(sounds alittle
bit annoyed)
still rolling |
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power rangers theme song in backround and chad is dressed up
as the red ranger |
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CHADS GF
(kind of laughing)
are you watching power rangers? |
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CHAD
(singing along
with theme song)
go go power rangers |
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CHADS GF
(wanting his
attention)
chad |
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CHADS GF
are you watching power rangers |
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TV: its morphing time |
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CHAD
of course not
(in a hurry)
i got a go bye |
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MR. D.
THIS IS RAMBLING. DO YOU HAVE AN
IDEA WHAT THIS IS GOING TO BE
ABOUT? |
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INT. SCHOOL - DAY |
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out side of school then the bell rings chad walks into the
school casually, then a camel walks past him but behind him |
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camel grunts |
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chad meets up with his best friend and sit down on the steps
infront of the school |
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CHAD
(kind of tired)
hey dude |
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CHADS BFF
(stalling)
ooo.... how come |
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CHAD
(tired)
there was a marathon of The Power
Rangers last night |
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CHADS BFF
dude I saw that too, but not at
purpose i couldn't find the remote |
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teacher walks outside |
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CHADS TEACHER
what the hell are doing out here |
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CHAD
(giggling)
are you even allowed to say hell |
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CHADS BFF
(giggles)
hhhhyea |
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CHADS TEACHER
not to sure.... what are you guys
talking about |
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CHAD
(yelling but not
to loud)
Power Rangers marathon last night |
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CHADS TEACHER
(excited)
you watched it too |
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CHADS TEACHER
(enthusiastic)
you remember when the yellow
ranger got hit with the sword and
died |
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CHAD
what when did that happen |
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CHADS TEACHER
(laughing)
im just kidding but seriously get
your ass inside |
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CHADS BFF
now I know your not allowed to say
that |
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DEALERSHIP GUY
hey Teacher A leave those kids
alone |
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CHADS TEACHER
(questioning the
world)
who the hell are you |
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DEALERSHIP GUY
(being proud hands
at his hips)
Im...... God |
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his phone rings and sounds like angels , doves are flying
behind him and the sun makes an aura around his head |
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CHADS TEACHER
where are those angels coming from |
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CHAD
(answering his
phone)
Oh.. sorry gatta take this. Hello
(sounding
depressed)
Oh hi dear
(taking phone away
from himself then
whispers)
its the wife
(puts phone back
to his head)
no i can't im.. im in the middle
of something(sighs) fine alright
(hangs up and an
akward silence)
well I gatta go.... sooo.....
(walks off) |
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random guitar dude in back practicing stairway to heaven but
he is very bad at playing |
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CHADS BFF
(butthead voice)
that was cool |
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CHAD
(butthead laugh)
wood shop hahaha |
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CHADS TEACHER
(yelling in a
squeeky voice)
you damn hoolagans |
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teacher clears throat |
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CHADS TEACHER
(normal voice)
you damn hoolagans
(yelling at guitar
dude)
shut the F*** up damnit |
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G TAR DUDE
(shaking his head
side to side)
sorry dude thats I rock man |
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guitar guy trips people yell sniper , zoo animals randomly
run across the screen |
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G TAR DUDE
(just got trampled
by zoo animals
and in critical
pain)
owch man .... that sucked |
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CHAD
(casualy saying)
lets go inside before somethin
else wierd happens |
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CHADS TEACHER
(agreeing)
yea I agree |
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CHADS BFF
(mesmerized)
wait I wanna see the baloons
(laughing at
himself and
(MORE)
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CHADS BFF (cont'd)
creepy scary
music in the
backround)
sqeeky sqeeky clean balo. |
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Teacher A punches chads bff out |
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CHADS TEACHER
Man that kids annoying |
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teacher A and Chad drag Chads BFF in the school |
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CHAD
(while dragging
him)
yep... i dont even know why iI
hang out with this kid |
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INT. CLASSROOM - DAY |
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CHADS TEACHER
(taking roll call)
Zender tikasahsa |
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CHADS TEACHER
(con'd)
titire manslap |
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(in excersist
voice)
Im going to kill you while your
sleeping |
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CHADS TEACHER
(con'd)
Ok... Chad |
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CHAD
(proud)
yes i am here and I will do my
best |
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CHADS TEACHER
(con'd and a
little perky)
Chads Best Friend |
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CHAD
(poking his
friends head)
He's here but not concious
(asking teacher)
does that count |
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CHADS TEACHER
(shaking his head)
im not sure
(shrugs his head)
o well |
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see guitar guy outside of window and hes still practicing |
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G TAR DUDE
(yellng to kids in
the class)
rock on B****s |
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teacher runs to window |
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CHADS TEACHER
(yelling at the g
tar guy)
get the hell out of here. You give
musians a bad name |
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teacher throws nearest students book at g tar guy |
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CHADS TEACHER
(out of breathe)
that guy is a bad influence on you
kids. Don't grow up, just stay in
school |
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(crying/whining)
my books |
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CHADS TEACHER
(hands at his hips
, less out of
breathe)
yea.. sorry bout that |
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CHADS TEACHER
(dramatic)
that was my son |
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thrill/shreek music in backround |
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CHADS TEACHER
change the track |
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kid with sterio playing the music |
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CHADS TEACHER
(listening but
looking at the
ground)
(clenching his fists)next
(still listening)
(clenching fists tighter) No the
next one
(still listening)
(Opens his hand and a dove flys
out of his hand)thats the one(
fades to black then spot light)
(annoyed) over here . thank
you.(dramatized) He was a good
student, he was my student , He
had good grades (climbing over
desks and kids in the class room)
He had Aced every test, he even
waxed my car every now and
then...(fades to black spot light
half way on his face and then
steps with one foot and slides
over into the center of the light)
until one day a bum slash hobo
arrives at our doorstep, wanting
to sell his beat up guitar for 100
(MORE)
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CHADS TEACHER (cont'd)
bucks and of coarse my son wanted
it so I bought it with our piggy
bank money( cries to his knees) |
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CHAD
(supportive)
Teacher A it'll be ok |
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CHADS TEACHER
(looking up very
quikly and saying
in evil voice)
No it wont, it already happened |
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teacher A crying in his hands |
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CHAD
(happy go lucky)
Oh yea... well better luck next
time |
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CHADS TEACHER
(looking at Chad
in Confusion)
Huh? |
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ET
(suggesting)
yea ask your wife to.. yu you know |
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CHADS TEACHER
(on his knees)
my wife left me and died in a car
accedent the same day |
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CHADS BFF
(looking at chad)
dude dont talk to him anymore its
just derpressing |
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CHAD
(excited)
your concious |
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CHADS BFF
(rubbing his head)
and have been for a while, what
happen all I remember are baloons |
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The Lunch Bell Rings |
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CHADS TEACHER
(still on his
knees and whining)
your dismissed(crying) |
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while Chad walks by his teacher his teacher gabs his leg
tightly and trips chad and makes him fall on his face |
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CHAD
(looking at his
teacher and a
puzzled look on
his face)
dude... |
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Teacher A just looks straight ahead and bursts into tears |
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CAFETERIA |
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CHAD
(in line to get
food)
I can't believe that wierdo
tripped me |
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CHADS BFF
(grabbing his tray)
(sarcasticly) yea I know |
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CHAD
(punches his
friend in the arm)
Dude ... (whispering)Shut up |
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all the crew camera men are behind them getting lunch as
well
and they're mouthing all the words to the script
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CHAD
(while walking to
their table)
(screams) the world is coming to
an end |
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everyone runs out the door and tramples the teacher about to
open the door |
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CHADS BFF
(putting his tray
down)
why did you scream that? |
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CHAD
(putting his feet
up in his friends
food)
so we would have the whole
cafateria to ourselvs and (looking
at the camera crew)the the camera
crew |
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CHADS BFF
(slightly pointing
at Chad's Shoes
and looking at
Chad)
Dude... What the hell |
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CHAD
(hands behind his
head)
(eyes open) what ... (looks at his
friend then looks at his
shoes)oh... my bad |
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CHADS BFF
(slightly pointing)
(yelling)Dude |
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CHAD
(looks at friend)
Im not going to lie to you |
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Chad gets up slowly and walks away calmly. Suddenly he stops
and turn around. Chad looks down at the table and notices
his friends orange juice just sitting there. He lookas at
his friend and then the juice. He picks it up, drinks it,
sets it down and walks away. |
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INT. CAR - DAY |
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Chad and his friend get in the car Friend slams the door and
the guitar guy comes out of know where and jumps in the back
of the jeep. |
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CHAD
(looks in the back)
Wait... who are you ? |
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Guitar guy is about to pull something out of his
backpack,but before he does Chad screams |
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CHAD
(screaming)
He's got a gun |
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G TAR DUDE
Chill dude .. its my name tag
I need a ride to work |
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Guitar guy secretly puts his gun in his pant lining and
looks around |
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G TAR DUDE
(fidgiting)
yea I don't have a gun(snickers)
(whispers)suckers |
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Chad and Friend looks at him |
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CHAD
I totally heard that |
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CHADS BFF
Yea man who cares |
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CHAD
(still looking at
guitar guy)
when did you get here |
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G TAR DUDE
(talking to chad)
He's been here the whole time man |
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CHAD
(looking at the
floor)
ok then |
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G TAR DUDE
you haven't looked at the road for
like 30 seconds |
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CHAD
(laughing)
I know... we're on a truck bed |
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camera shows them in a car on a bed of the filming truck |
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CHADS BFF
oh ... I get it. So its like a
lazy way of driving for the
actors. |
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CHAD
(doing the sort of
hand motion)
kind of . Its more of a safty
issue. Say we get in an accident
and it was our fault we would be
screwed |
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Guitar guy in the backround starts to stand up |
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G TAR DUDE
(while standing
and wind blowing
his hair in his
face)
im king of the wo |
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Suddenly guitar guy is slamed against a bridge wall and
falls baackward off the car and rolls into the middle of the
street. |
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CHADS BFF
(questioning)
what if the truck gets in an
accident |
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CHAD
(Thinking at first)
Hmm..Then.. we run like little
girls |
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Guitar guy is laying on the ground. He sits up and his hands
are all bent out of shape and his hair ids sticking out
everywhere as if he was electrocuted.His clothes looked all
black and skin tight. Guitar guy begins looking around. |
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G TAR DUDE
(looking around)
where am I? Who am i?...I know who
I am ... (silently)im Fredward
ScissorFist(Laughing to himself) |
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They hear a wierd sound from a distance |
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G TAR DUDE
(repeating)Fredward,Fredward,
Fredward |
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they stop at a red light. Guitar guy/Fredward runs past them
then stops and looks at them, jumps on the hood of the car,
reaches over and trys to cut chads hair with his fingers.
They get scared and floored it |
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CHADS BFF
(yelling and
freaked out by
"fredward")
Floor it man |
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both yelling "AHH" |
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CHAD
(stops yelling)
That time has already past(con't
yelling) |
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G TAR DUDE
(crazy talk)
let me cut your hair! |
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CHAD
(yelling)
No your not |
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Chad slams on the brake and "fredward"fly's off. Chad and
Friend look up and try to find "Fredward" |
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CHAD
(tryng to look for
Fredward)
where'd he go? |
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"Fredward"fastly stands up his hair changes to a slicked
back style. he is now wearing a suit , flips his wallet out |
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G TAR DUDE
(cop voice)
don't worry. I'm a F.B.I. agent |
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pulls his wallet out . looks at it, puts it back in his back
pocket |
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G TAR DUDE
Thats not important |
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CHADS BFF
hit him again . maybe he'll be a
clown. |
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G TAR DUDE
(slaming his hands
on the hood of
the car)
the important thing is that im
alright |
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CHADS BFF
seriously hit him again |
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"F.B.I." guy walks up to the drivers door |
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G TAR DUDE
(pointing at Chad
with a gun)
get out of the motorized
transportation vehicle |
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CHAD
(looks at "F.B.I."
guy)
I thought you didnt have a gun |
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G TAR DUDE
(looks around)
I lied.... Im confiscating your |
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Chad drives off before the fbi guy finishes his sentence |
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fbi guy lowers his gun and his head |
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G TAR DUDE
(crying)
It happend again |
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G Tar Dde looks to his right sees a line of cars with a semi
in front. He gets mad and starts shooting at the semi and he
doesnt even hit and a bird drops out of the air
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SEMI DRIVER
(while in the cab)
(looks at him like an idiot) |
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bubba gets out of the semi but stumbles down the steps on
the side. Walks over to FBI |
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SEMI DRIVER
(looks up at FBI)
heres a sniper that I found shot
the rope on the roof top and stop
that guy who is about to hang
himself. |
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bubba hands him the sniper |
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G TAR DUDE
(starts to aim at
the rope)
ok here goes nothin |
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aiming very carefully. He suddenly sneezes and fires the
gun, looks up he sees the guy on the ground next to some hay |
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"FBI" looks down at bubba and waiting for a response |
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SEMI DRIVER
(laughing)
better luck next time |
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bubba creeped off and runs to his semi and drives off |
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G TAR DUDE
(looks around him)
Bubba ? |
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"FBI" runs to the body on the ground |
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G TAR DUDE
(looks at the guy
sees that he i
still alive)
your alive . |
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HANG MAN
yea im alive and in pain.(looks at
the gun in his hand)you're the one
who shot me. |
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CHAD
yea ... sorry bout that I tried
to- |
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hangman interupts him |
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HANG MAN
im goin to tell every one that you
killed me |
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MR. D.
i HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU ARE DOING
IN THIS THING. IT SEEMS LIKE YOU
ARE JUST FILLING UP LINES. |
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G TAR DUDE
(reacts very fast)
No your not.(hits him with the
back of the sniper rifle) |
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"FBI" discovers the hay next to him then throws some pieces
of stray on the dead guy
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G TAR DUDE
(brushing off
hands)
there we go? |
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runs away with gun in hand and starts to swirl it up in the
air |
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INT. CHADS HOUSE - DAY |
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Mom is walking threw the upstairs hall way. She hears the
phone ring.She picks it up. |
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26.
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VOICE IN THE BACKROUND
(Yelling)
HANG UP THE PHONE WOMAN |
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hangs up the phone quickly. Mom walks away and the phone
rings again. |
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VOICE IN THE BACKROUND
(yellin)
HANG UP THE PHONE. I WANNA LEAVE A
MESSAGE |
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MOM
sorry... somebodys a bit cranky |
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mom hangs up . walks away it rings again and she lets it
ring. the answering machine goes on. |
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VOICE IN THE BACKROUND
Thank you for not picking up the
phone. Im calling to let you know
that you are in debt. |
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she looks at the machine |
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VOICE IN THE BACKROUND
about 5.2 million . If you do not
pay off the debt you will lose
every thing. I didnt want to talk
to you in person becase i dont
like to see people cry.In 5
seconds your house will blow up 5
4 3 2 1 (makes a explosion noise
with his mouth) just kidding. |
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machine turns off. phone rings again. machine turns on. |
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MOM
well how long do we have |
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27.
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VOICE IN THE BACKROUND
oh . I forgot... you have a week.
Bye Bye |
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machine turns off. mom runs down the stairs and starts to
drive off. phone rings again whie she is driving off.
Machine turns on again. |
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VOICE IN THE BACKROUND
where did she go? |
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INT. BACK WITH CHAD AND FRIEND - DAY |
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CHAD
(looks at friend)
dude where was sticky today |
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friend climbs over the seat and hops in the back seat
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CHAD
(drivng)
I didn't see him in math today |
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they see sticky zoom by in chads mom lamborgihni |
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CHADS BFF
dude catch up with him |
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chad accererates and does catch up with him they are goin
about 80 on the freeway |
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CHAD
(yelling out the
window)
Sticky where were you today at
school |
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STICKY
(yelling out his
window)
I was on a police chase all day |
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28.
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CHAD
(points his finger
to the off ramp
and yelling)
meet me at Zinco's |
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STICKY
(nooding his head
and yelling)
Okay meet ya there |
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Sticky speeds off the off ramp and chad and friend follow
from a distance |
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EXT. ZINCO'S PARKING LOT - DAY |
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scene starts when chad and friend see sticky waiting ontop
of the LAM and they park on the left hand side of the LAM a
few inches away from it |
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STICKY
(looks at chad)
whow watch it man! |
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chad casually walks out of the car and friend has to go
threw the roof of the car and slips and falls out . |
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CHAD
(walks over to
sticky)
where have you been all day |
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sticky jumps off the car |
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STICKY
I told you already I was on a
police chase all day |
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friend gets upand leans on the LAM |
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CHADS BFF
(looks at sticky)
if thats so, how did you get away |
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29.
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STICKY
(looks at them
both)
ya really wanna know? |
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CHAD
Yea man we wanna know |
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STICKY
your gonna laugh. Are you sure you
wanna know? |
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CHADS BFF
(slams his hands
on the car)
Yes we wanna know. |
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STICKY
(points at friend
and gives him the
snake eye)
don't you eva.. I mean eva do that
again, you got me! |
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CHAD
(puts his hands on
sticky's right
shoulder)
dude chill man, its not even your
car. |
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sticky walks to where friend slamed his hands. |
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CHAD
tell us what happened, how did you
get away. |
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STICKY
(examining the car
and then looks at
friend)
look what you did ya idiot. |
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30.
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CHAD
(walks over to
sticky and slaps
him in the back
of the head)
DUDE! |
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STICKY
(looks around)
oh yea sorry. (raising his voice)
I got distracted by the idiot over
here. |
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sticky hops back up on the LAM |
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CHADS BFF
you're mad at me and you're the
one that jumps on the roof of the
car. |
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chad punches him out |
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STICKY
(looks at chad)
how many times is that today . |
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CHAD
(putting his hands
on his hips)
twice, go on tell the story. |
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STICKY
alright it all starts out in the
morning |
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EXT. FLASH BACK ,CAR CHASE - DAY |
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fades to flash back |
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FADE OUT. |
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Feedback |
From Justin |
Date 1/24/2008 |
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AMAZING AND INSPIRING!!! Dude, if this movie isnt made I will cry. Try sending it to Spielberg or maybe George Lucas, or both. Incredible. |
From Ronald Wert |
Date 10/28/2007 |
0 stars |
Im sorry but I only got to the end of the second page and I wish I could get a refund of the three seconds that I wasted on reading it. For one give mom and pops names. And also what is with the ending of the second page. It says CHAD then will you tell chad. Then MR.D who is that? And Dealership guy? I dont think you should be writing scripts if you dont know what you are doing. |
From Larry Boodry |
Date 9/11/2005 |
0 stars |
Fun and frolic? A very funny movie? Where? And yes, you need to
get a grip on the language... |
From Lance |
Date 1/19/2005 |
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When 3 people have already given you 0 stars, there might be something wrong. Of course, I will give you a little benefit of the doubt. Quite frankly, though, this isn't the right idea for your writing style; so step back, think of something else (something completely different from this one) and start again. |
From Phillip |
Date 1/16/2005 |
0 stars |
This was awful, just awful. A cliched mess. Noone will ever take you seriously when your grammar is so poor. |
From S.M. McNair |
Date 1/12/2005 |
0 stars |
If Chad's looking for a note, he should've been looking for better paper at some discount store. This script isn't funny, nor does it even have an interesting main theme to draw an audience in. I'd feel ripped off, especially when one has to question who the main character really is. Maybe we're supposed to laugh in the inside, but outside it's just a poorly written, uncomedic script. |
From J.J |
Date 1/10/2005 |
0 stars |
Not funny at all. You need to learn proper English if you want to break into the buisness and write better screenplays. I didn't laugh once. Everything was used before. |
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