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The Se7en Deadly Sins: Final Destination 4
by Martin Aucoin (janemba60@yahoo.com)

Rated: R   Genre: Horror   User Review: *1/2
Jason Crum is happiest kid on Earth, good grades a bright future is coming his way but he never sees the biggest roadblock in his young life, death. When he saves himself and seven friends from a deadly tram crash he can only watch a deaths begins the hunt. When one of his friends dies a gruesome death Jason begins to think that there was more to his vision that meets the eye. Can Jason solve death's complicated puzzle? Or we he fall victim like so many others before him?


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THE SE7EN DEADLY SINS: FINAL DESTINATION 4

FADE IN:

EXT. ARRIVING AT THE HOTEL - NIGHT
                                                            
Jason(18) walks up to his room and looks at the number it
reads 1806. Jason always was polite you could tell by the
way he was dressed, a white t and jeans simple and polite
even his hair was polite pushed down so it looked like
something was alive up there.
                                                            
                       JASON
So this is my room I wonder who
the other seven kids will be.
                                                            
He opens the door.
                                                            
                       JASON
Crap no one is hear yet.
                                                            
He closes the door and the six falls of the door now the
door says 180.
                                                            
Jason jumps on the bed and Dalton(20) enters. Dalton's
always looks shaggy except for a his pitch black crew cut
but he is always dressed like a bum.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Shit.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hey Dalton.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Hey Jason.
                                                            
Then Cliff(18) enters. He is tall and very plump his face
doesn't show probably because his sand colored afro although
it always seems his belly is about to burst through his
shirt.
                                                            
                       CLIFF
Hey guys!
                                                            
                       DALTON
For fuck sakes.
                                                            
                       CLIFF
Hey Dalton how you doing?
                                                            

2.

Before he can answer Heather(17) walks in. Her neo-blonde
hair shines better than the light her tight mini-skirt which
she always seemed to where and her brown 100,000 dollar
sweatshirt.(She always bragged about how much it cost.)
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Ewww.
                                                            
                       JASON
Heather!
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Jason, oh thank god!
                                                            
Then Gregg(19) walks in. The always pissed off look on his
face was welcome, his cornrows always got him out of trouble
all he had to do was wave them and he was always cracking
the black card at his teachers.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Motha Fucka! Crum you got my
twenty dollars!?
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Calm down Gregg.
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah right hear.
                                                            
Jason hands Gregg twenty dollars.
                                                            
Becky(17) enters the room. Her hair was always pulled back
in a ponytail the athletic shorts and tank made her look
less intimidating than she really was.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Heather!
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Becky!
                                                            
They hug.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Nice.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Shut up or i'll fucking tear you
apart Moore!
                                                            
Then Richard(18) and Vicky(19) walk in. Richard was always
nicely dressed even if it was torn jeans and a "My Balls

3.

Itch" T-Shirt, it sorta complemented his dust brown hair.
Vicki on the other hand looked like a cheap hooker with red
torn lace draped all over her body and black and red on a
haircut never looked so sleazy.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Hey Gregg, Jason.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Hey Jason. Hi Dalton.
                                                            
                       DALTON
What's up Ho
                                                            
                       RICHARD
You fucker!
                                                            
Richard dives at Dalton but Gregg pulls him back.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Not worth it.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I'll fucking get you Moore.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Ha! The reaper will get me before
you do!
                                                            
                       CLIFF
Hey when are we going to the fair?
                                                            
                       DALTON
Tomorrow chubs.
                                                            
                       CLIFF
I'll sit on you Dalton.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Bring it!
                                                            
Cliff walks away.
                                                            
                       GREGG
What time is it?
                                                            
                       RICHARD
1:30? Damn we need to get some
sleep!
                                                            
                       DALTON
Hell yeah I am so god damn tired.
                                                            

4.

                       JASON
Everyone let's get's some rest!
                                                            
Everyone get's into their beds.
                                                            
                       JASON
Tomorrow the fuckin' state fair!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Hell yeah!
                                                            
                       HEATHER
And an amen to that!
                                                            
                       DALTON
Amen this!
                                                            
He flips off Heather she slaps him. The group falls asleep.
                                                            
 
EXT. HOTEL/MONORAIL/PREMONITION - DAY
                                                            
Jason wakes up.
                                                            
                       JASON
8:00 shit we're late!
                                                            
Jason wakes up everyone.
                                                            
                       DALTON
What!?
                                                            
                       JASON
Come on we're late!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Shit come on people!
                                                            
Everyone runs up and get's dressed and heads out the door.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Hey Jason!
                                                            
                       JASON
What?
                                                            
She walks up to him. Richard moves up closer to hear what
they are saying.
                                                            
                       VICKI
We can catch the monorail and only
be ten minutes late.
                                                            

5.

                       JASON
Hey cool, thanks.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Come on babe.
                                                            
He grabs her and pulls her away.
                                                            
They reach the door and walk to the monorail.
                                                            
"INTO THE VOID COMES ON BY NINE INCH NAILS"
                                                            
                       CLIFF
We're hear!
                                                            
                       CLIFF
Well the monrail at least.
                                                            
"TALKING TO MYSELF ON THE WAY TO THE STATION."
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah.
                                                            
"PICTURES IN MY HEAD OF THE FINAL DESTINATION."
                                                            
He touches the turnstile and enters the premonition.
                                                            
 
INT. PREMONITION - DAY
                                                            
                       GREGG
Let's go!
                                                            
                       DALTON
Oh yeah!
                                                            
They enter the tram. Some noisy kids run by them.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Fucking kids.
                                                            
The tram starts up.
                                                            
Vicki slides close to Jason.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hey.
                                                            
                       VICKI
So what are we going to do at the
fair?
                                                            

6.

                       JASON
Well you see...
                                                            
The kids run through the tram madly the kick a wire loose. A
open bottle of water wobbles and falls over it moves over to
the the exposed wire.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Oh.
                                                            
They move closer together and kiss.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I fucking knew it your dead!
                                                            
The water reaches the wire and sparks out, close up of the
brakes they fizz out.
                                                            
The tram attempts to slow down a little but the brakes
sparks and the tram spins out and Dalton is thrown through
the window and smashed against the wall blood sprays through
the window.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Holy crap!
                                                            
Cliff bends down to pick up some food he dropped the grip
bar goes flying and impales him through the head. Bits of
brain fly out and hit another passenger.
                                                            
Heather stands up the door flies of and smashes her up
against the wall organs drip out of her like a paste.
                                                            
Gregg tries to make the save but a piece of shrapnel
decapitates him his head rolls out of tram.
                                                            
The wires short out and swing through the open door they hit
Becky and she is electrocuted her skin is charred black as
the wires fry her.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hold on Vicki!
                                                            
Richard tries to get up but is whipped to the back of the
car then the back car detaches and he goes flying with the
car.
                                                            
The tram crashes and Vicki flies out and is smashed up
against the tracks, Jason lands next to her, he looks at her
face it is bloody and blank.
                                                            

7.

                       JASON
Vicki! Oh god, please no! It's
not fair.
                                                            
Another tram comes around the bend Jason jumps out of the
way it collides with the wreck and wires short out and cause
a fire. Jason attempts to run but he trips the wreck
explodes and the tunnel collapses on Jason.
                                                            
 
INT. MONORAIL - DAY
                                                            
The group enters the tram.
                                                            
                       JASON
No get off the train.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
What?
                                                            
                       JASON
Everyone let's go!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Fuck you we're staying!
                                                            
                       JASON
We're leaving!
                                                            
Richard punches Jason and they brawl.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Break it up!
                                                            
Gregg pulls them off the train everyone get's off.
                                                            
                       CLIFF
Come on Dalton!
                                                            
                       DALTON
Oh yeah.
                                                            
The train leaves.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Nice going ass!
                                                            
                       JASON
No wait stop the train, stop the
train!
                                                            

8.

                       JASON
It's going to crash!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
What the fuck is going on your
head!
                                                            
Then the tram crashes. Screams can be heard all through out
the station a sudden heat wave comes over the group and the
tunnel glows a bright orange.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Oh my god.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Shit!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
What the hell just happened?
                                                            
                       JASON
I don't know.
                                                            
 
EXT. POLICE STATION - DAY
                                                            
                       DALTON
Man, Jason, what the fuck.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Yeah Jason tell us how you knew
the train was going to crash!
                                                            
                       JASON
I saw it in my head.
                                                            
                       BECKY
What!?
                                                            
                       JASON
I don't know.
                                                            
                       VICKI
It's okay.
                                                            
She puts her arm over Jason, Richard looks on with envy.
                                                            
                       DALTON
I wanna go home.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Shut up Dalton! Your just pissing
everyone off.
                                                            

9.

                       DALTON
We'll at least I am not sleeping
around the entire freakin' high
school!
                                                            
                       GREGG
Calm down both of yall's!
                                                            
                       CLIFF
Guys the cops say we're good to
go.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Finally!
                                                            
They all walk out and get on the bus.
                                                            
 
EXT. HIGH SCHOOL - NIGHT
                                                            
Jason is collecting his stuff out of his locker.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Hey.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hey Vick.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Are you okay?
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah just a little wound up the
entire thing is still crazy in my
head.
                                                            
                       VICKI
We'll I don't think your crazy.
                                                            
                       JASON
We'll that's one person.
                                                            
He turns around and they kiss Richard is watching and walks
off.
                                                            
                       JASON
Don't you have a boyfriend?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Maybe.
                                                            
                       JASON
Naughty I like that.
                                                            

10.

They kiss again and Vicki walks off.
                                                            
He opens up his locker and in the mirror Richard is looking
at him.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
So think you can still my girl?
Huh, Huh!
                                                            
He grabs Jason and slams him against the locker.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
If I see you near her again I'll
cut your tounge out.
                                                            
                       JASON
Try.
                                                            
Richard walks away.
                                                            
 
EXT. DALTON'S HOUSE. - NIGHT
                                                            
Dalton walks up to his apartment there is a note.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Dalton, I left you some chicken
nuggets in the stove just heat
them up and you gotta tighten the
bolts on your ceiling fan that
thing could hurt someone.
Love,
Mom
                                                            
                       DALTON
Why you gotta break balls mom?
                                                            
He walks in and turns on the oven.
                                                            
He jumps on the couch and turns on the T.V.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Hey, the story, yes their is my
name bitch!
                                                            
He looks on the coffee table.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Another bible lesson, seven deadly
sins, ehh.
                                                            
He tosses it down and goes to sleep.
                                                            

11.

Cut To:
The nuggets heat up and set on fire, it starts to build.
                                                            
The fire starts to build and the glass cracks and smokes
pours out.
                                                            
He wakes up.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Huh?
                                                            
He sees the smoke and turns on the fan it starts to wobble
vigarously.
                                                            
He looks in the oven, he moves just as the glass blows up
and flies at him he grabs the fire extinguisher and puts it
out.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Thank god.
                                                            
The fan wobbles faster.
                                                            
 
INT. JASON'S HOUSE. - NIGHT
                                                            
Jason get's up off his bed and goes on the computer, he
types in premonition.
                                                            
A bunch of things come up he clicks on one it is about
flight 180.
                                                            
                       JASON
Holy shit.
                                                            
                       JASON
This can't be true.
                                                            
                       JASON
So if this is right then Dalton is
first, shit.
                                                            
                       JASON
No I won't believe it.
                                                            
He get's up and lays down on his bed.
                                                            
                       JASON
What if it is right than Dalton is
in real danger.
                                                            
Then his little fan shoots out and cuts one of his action
figure in half.
                                                            

12.

He stares at the action figure.
                                                            
                       JASON
Uh oh.
                                                            
 
INT. DALTON'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
                       DALTON
God damn!
                                                            
                       DALTON
This is ridicoulous!
                                                            
The phone rings he picks up.
                                                            
                       DALTON
Hello? Jason!
                                                            
                       JASON
Dalton, run, danger.
                                                            
The phone call get's cut of.
                                                            
He looks at the phone the phone number fizzes out and reads
180.
                                                            
                       DALTON
What the fuck is going on!
                                                            
The fan starts to shake extremely fast.
                                                            
                       DALTON
God you seriously are pissing me
off, stop trying to kill me you
son of a bitch!
                                                            
The phone sparks and flies off the counter.
                                                            
                       DALTON
God damn! First a freak fire and
now my phone is fucking up!
                                                            
The fan begins to come it hinges.
                                                            
                       DALTON
God this whole freakin world is
going insane!
                                                            
The fan is on the edge of whirring of the base.
                                                            

13.

                       DALTON
I hate can't I just get one days
rest!
                                                            
The fan comes off it's hinges and shots through the smoke
and slices right through Dalton.
                                                            
The phone rings.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hello? Dalton!
                                                            
Dalton's intestine spill all over. His dead body twitches
and begins to bleed from the mouth. As the phone rings he
twitches.
                                                            
The top half of his body falls from the fan more organs are
pulled out.
                                                            
 
EXT. FUNERAL - DAY
                                                            
Camera zooms in on Jason.
                                                            
                       JASON
This is crazy.
                                                            
                       GREGG
What's crazy?
                                                            
                       JASON
That Dalton is dead.
                                                            
                       GREGG
People die man that's life, when
people die it's just their time.
                                                            
                       JASON
What if we skipped our time to
die?
                                                            
                       GREGG
What do you mean we?
                                                            
                       JASON
Me, you, Vicki, Richard, Becky,
Heather, Cliff and Dalton. What if
when I stopped us from going on
the monorail we skipped our time
to die and now death is after us
to make sure we don't live for
much longer.
                                                            

14.

                       GREGG
Are you fucking high?
                                                            
                       GREGG
That's just talking crazy.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Where did you see this?
                                                            
                       JASON
This website about the crash of
Flight 180 nine years ago, that
massive pile-up six years ago and
the fatal roller coaster crash
three years ago and freak tsunami
only a year ago.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Yeah I'm going to walk away now.
                                                            
Gregg walks away and Vicki walks up to him.
                                                            
                       VICKI
What's going on?
                                                            
He tells her and she looks in interest.
                                                            
                       VICKI
So that means everyone else is in
danger if we don't figure out how
to stop it everyone is as good as
dead.
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah and it is working fast it has
already got Dalton.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Yeah.
                                                            
                       VICKI
So who is next to die?
                                                            
                       JASON
Well in my vision Dalton died
first, then Cliff.
                                                            
                       VICKI
So Cliff is next.
                                                            
Richard walks up to them.
                                                            

15.

                       RICHARD
Vicki what did I say about hanging
around this asshole.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Well.
                                                            
He escorts Vicki away.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
You're lucky we're at a funeral
Crum cause next time I see with my
girl I'll pop your head like a
pimple.
                                                            
Cliff walks up to Jason.
                                                            
                       CLIFF
Hey I am going to Franklin's
Chicken. Want to come with me?
                                                            
                       JASON
No.
                                                            
He walks away.
                                                            
                       JASON
Oh crap, Cliff!
                                                            
He goes up to Vicki and tells her, she begs Richard so she
can go with Jason.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I am coming with you.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right come on.
                                                            
 
INT. FRANKLIN'S CHICKEN - DAY
                                                            
They drive up and wait for Cliff.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
What the fuck is going on?
                                                            
                       JASON
Well when we got off the tram we
sorta' messed with death's design
and now we are all prime targets
first Dalton now Cliff.
                                                            

16.

                       RICHARD
You're nuts!
                                                            
                       VICKI
I believe him.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Seeing is believing so once I see
that fat pig die than I believe
you.
                                                            
                       JASON
You're an ass.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Damn straight!
                                                            
Jason turns on the radio and "killing time" by (Hed) P.E
comes on.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Seriously you should hear yourself
you sound like a loon. Stop all
this shit let's get outta' hear
cause the only thing that fat pig
Cliff is going to die from is a
heart attack!
                                                            
                       JASON
Fuck you!
                                                            
                       VICKI
Guys look!
                                                            
"JUST KILLING TIME.."
                                                            
A truck is speeding right at them.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Holy fuck!
                                                            
                       JASON
Guys come on!
                                                            
They get out just before the truck hits Jason's car.
                                                            
                       JASON
My car!
                                                            

17.

"KISS THE WORLD GOODBYE..."
                                                            
Jason's car crashes into another car the rumbling causes a
Franklin's Chicken sign to falls it smashes the driver up
against his steering wheel.
                                                            
Blood sprays over the group.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Oh my god.
                                                            
They look in the car Cliff's motionless body is sprawled
over the steering wheel, the wheel is extremely deep into
his chest. There is blood all over the dash. He then slides
of the wheel revealing the enormous gash, his ribs are
visible. He lets out a deep breath which only turns out to
be blood.
                                                            
                       JASON
Seeing is believing, huh Richard.
                                                            
Richard gags and holds in his puke.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Who the hell is next then?
                                                            
                       JASON
I don't know.
                                                            
The police come and walk them away.
                                                            
A couple hours later the group has gathered at Jason's
house.
                                                            
 
EXT. JASON'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
The doorbell rings and Jason answers it.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hey guys.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
What's up.
                                                            
                       JASON
COme in we gotta' lot to discuss.
                                                            
Richard and Vicki sit on the couch.
                                                            
                       JASON
I thought back and I think Heather
is next.
                                                            

18.

                       RICHARD
I still cannot believe this, that
we are on death's list and it is
focusing all it's energy on us.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right tomorrow we all gotta'
find Heather.
                                                            
                       VICKI
What if she's already dead?
                                                            
                       RICHARD
We'll just call in the morning if
she answers she is still alive but
if sobbing parents answer then..
                                                            
                       VICKI
She's dead.
                                                            
                       JASON
I remember her talking about
piercings or something.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Pierced Skin at the mall.
                                                            
                       JASON
So that's we're we'll go.
                                                            
Jason's little sister's portable piercer fires a piercing
out and it hits Richard in the leg.
                                                            
Jason hops up and calls 911.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Shit!
                                                            
The ambulance comes and takes him away.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Looks like we can't come.
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Go get em' tiger.
                                                            
She kisses him, Richard looks up from the stretcher.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Bastard.
                                                            

19.

Vicki goes with Richard, Jason heads upstairs.
                                                            
 
INT. JASON'S HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
Jason wakes up and get's dressed.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right time to go.
                                                            
The radio turns on.
                                                            
"THERE IS SOMEONE WALKING BEHIND YOU"
                                                            
Turn around look at me comes on he turns around his sister
Kelly(12) is standing there with her piercing gun she fires
at him two studs.
                                                            
                       JASON
What the fuck!
                                                            
                       KELLY
Almost got you big brother!
                                                            
                       JASON
You little bitch!
                                                            
He looks behind him the piercings have pierced through a
picture of Heather the studs have only pierced her eyes
                                                            
                       JASON
That cannot be good.
                                                            
                       JASON
Keys were are my keys?
                                                            
He picks up his keys.
                                                            
                       JASON
This is crazy.
                                                            
                       JASON
Give me a break death come on!
                                                            
He runs out the door and jumps in his car and drives away.
                                                            
 
EXT. MALL(HEATHER'S VIEW) - DAY
                                                            
Heather is walking through the mall.
                                                            

20.

                       HEATHER
I can't find a good sale today,
god it's so hectic and my piercing
appointment isn't for another five
minutes.
                                                            
                       JASON
Heather!
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Hey Jason!
                                                            
                       JASON
You need to listen to me.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
What is it Jason?
                                                            
                       JASON
You are next.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Next, what?
                                                            
                       JASON
When we got off the tram, we
fucked with death's design, now we
are all first on death's list.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Your an asshole, Gregg told me you
would act like this, you seriously
need to lay off the drugs Jason
I'm worried.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Oh shit it is time.
                                                            
                       JASON
For what?
                                                            
                       HEATHER
For my death just fucking kidding!
My piercing appointment is right
now yo wanna come with?
                                                            
Jason looks with a blank expression on his face.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Hello?
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah sure.
                                                            

21.

                       HEATHER
Cool.
                                                            
They walk off.
                                                            
 
INT. PIERCING STORE - DAY
                                                            
They walk up to the piercing store.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
There it is.
                                                            
                       JASON
What?
                                                            
                       HEATHER
That piercing, the stud little but
the rod is around eight inches.
                                                            
                       JASON
That's the one.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
What's the one?
                                                            
                       JASON
The one that my sister shot the
one that...
                                                            
                       JASON
We need to leave now!
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Fuck you!
                                                            
Heather pushes Jason back and walks up to the clerk.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Yolanda honey I am buying the
store now everyone get out!
                                                            
Everyone leaves the store and Heather makes her way to the
piercing chair.
                                                            
MISS MURDER BY AFI COMES ON.
                                                            
Heather hops up in the chair and loads up the piercing gun
                                                            
CLOSE UP OF THE WOOD BEGIN TO BREAK.
                                                            
                       JASON
Come on Heather be reasonable.
                                                            

22.

                       HEATHER
No you be reasonable come on death
coming after us I mean that is the
easily the dumbest thing you've
ever said.
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah but Dalton and Cliff...
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Screw them I mean Dalton was a
jerk and Cliff is just a big fat
ass.
                                                            
                       JASON
Just come with me.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
No I am getting this piercings and
I will look so good for graduation
and everyone else can just stay
the fuck away!
                                                            
"HEY MISS MURDER CAN I?"
                                                            
The chair snaps.
                                                            
"TAKE MY LIFE.."
                                                            
                       JASON
Oh shit!
                                                            
The piercing falls with her it lands on her eye it fires one
right through her eye than it bounces up and shoots another
through her other eye. It flips one more time and pierces
her right between the eyes.
                                                            
                       HEATHER
Hel, He, Help me.
                                                            
                       JASON
Heather? Heather!
                                                            
                                         CLOSE UP OF HER
FACE.
                                                            
                       JASON
Heather wake up!
                                                            
BLOOD BEGINS TO COME OUT OF HER MOUTH AND EARS.
                                                            

23.

JASON'S PHONE RINGS.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hello?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Hey Jason how's Heather?
                                                            
                       JASON
Well she's dead.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Oh my god.
                                                            
                       JASON
We need to meet up somewhere. Just
sit tight I'm coming to the
hospital.
                                                            
                       VICKI
No wait...
                                                            
JASON HANGS UP
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Jason's coming good now I can kick
his ass!
                                                            
RICHARD STANDS UP AND POUNDS HIS FISTS.
                                                            
 
EXT. HOSPITAL - NIGHT
                                                            
Jason's car pulls up to the front of the hospital there is a
man standing out front.
                                                            
He tries to walk in.
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
Hold up there sonny.
                                                            
                       JASON
Excuse me.
                                                            
He tries to get past the old man.
                                                            
                       JASON
What do you want!?
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
I need to tell you something about
your friends.
                                                            

24.

Jason looks at him with a stern face.
                                                            
                       JASON
What the hell do you know about my
friends you old bastard!
                                                            
He slams the old man up against the wall of the hospital.
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
Has death got you that confused
young Jason?
                                                            
Jason puts the old man down.
                                                            
                       JASON
How do you know my name? And what
do you mean by death?
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
Come with me young one.
                                                            
Jason follows the old guy through the doors and down the
elevator they enter a dark room.
                                                            
                       JASON
What's that smell?
                                                            
He looks Dalton motionless body is laying on a stretcher.
                                                            
                       JASON
What is going on?
                                                            
The old guy slides Dalton's upper half into the furnace
first.
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
Death is after you my boy, but
he's using something I have never
seen before.
                                                            
                       JASON
What are you talking about you old
bastard?
                                                            
The old man slides the other half of the body into the fire.
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
Death is killing your friends in a
new way the seven deadly sins.
                                                            
                       JASON
Huh?
                                                            

25.

                       OLD GUY
The seven deadly sins are sins in
which are the worst for mankind
all of your friends are a sin.
Dalton was sloth, Cliff gluttony
and Heather greed.
                                                            
                       JASON
What are the others what am I?
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
That will be a surprise.
                                                            
                       JASON
Fine how do I beat death?
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
Only new life can't truly defeat
death in the mean time look for
the clues.
                                                            
He laughs and walks away.
                                                            
                       JASON
Wait! Oh jeez now I gotta beat
death and find out which one of my
friends is next.
                                                            
He gets in the elevator and goes up to the top floor.
                                                            
He exits and walks into Richard room he is greeted by a
punch
                                                            
                       JASON
Ow! What the fuck!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
That's for kissing my girl!
                                                            
He punches Jason again.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Stop! Stop it both of you!
                                                            
Richard stops punching Jason.
                                                            
                       JASON
Thanks Vicki I need to tell you
guys something.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
No more BS about us dying! I am
getting tired of that shit.
                                                            

26.

                       JASON
Too bad, death is after us and
using the seven deadly sins to
kill us all.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Okay Jason now I think that is
even a little insane.
                                                            
                       JASON
No wait! Dalton was Sloth, Cliff
gluttony and Heather was greed.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Bullshit! Get out of my room and
take your slut with you!
                                                            
                       JASON
Now I know what you are envy.
                                                            
He walks out and Vicki follows.
                                                            
                       VICKI
What next?
                                                            
                       JASON
Gregg is next and he's got a
street race tomorrow and were
going to be there.
                                                            
                       JASON
Come on i'll drive you home.
                                                            
The two walk off screen and Jason's car speeds off.
                                                            
 
EXT. JASON'S HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
Jason wakes up and his phone rings.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hello?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Jason oh thank god!
                                                            
                       JASON
What is it? It's eight in the
morning.
                                                            
                       VICKI
I have good news.
                                                            

27.

                       JASON
What?! Did you find Gregg!?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Yeah! He is out of town for now
but when he comes back at three
he's heading into the underground
for a street race!
                                                            
                       JASON
Fast moving metal does not bode
well for people who are being
hunted by death.
                                                            
Jason hops up.
                                                            
                       JASON
I'm on my...
                                                            
There is huge crash.
                                                            
                       VICKI
What the fuck was that?
                                                            
                       JASON
I don't know.
                                                            
Jason looks outside.
                                                            
He walks out of his room and looks in the bathroom, then he
makes his way down the hall and enters his sister's room.
                                                            
                       JASON
Holy fuck!
                                                            
Jason drops the phone, there is a huge hole in his sister's
floor.
                                                            
                       VICKI
What happened?
                                                            
He pick the phone back up.
                                                            
                       JASON
My sister's stereo is on the floor
below me, it fell through the
floor and boy are my parents
gonna' be pissed at me! Hurry up
and come and get me.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Right I'll see you in a little
bit, oh yeah Richard is coming and
            (MORE)

28.

                       VICKI (cont'd)
were gonna' see if Becky wants to
come too.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right just hurry up I am not
going to be here when my parents
get back!
                                                            
He hangs up and rushes into his room and gets dressed and
runs out the door he runs and jumps up in his old treehouse.
                                                            
                       JASON
Haven't been up here in a while.
                                                            
He reaches under the couch and pulls out a laptop and turns
it on.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right, I don't think Gregg is
anger definitely not lust maybe
envy, so that leaves only one sin,
pride, yeah easily he takes to
much pride when he plays football
and when he races.
                                                            
A car pulls up.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Jason! Come on!
                                                            
                       JASON
So they did convince Becky, cool.
                                                            
He climbs down the ladder and gets in the car.
                                                            
 
INT. CAR - DAY
                                                            
Zoom into the car.
                                                            
                       BECKY
So let me get this straight death
is after us and we are each a
seven deadly sin?
                                                            
Jason shakes his head.
                                                            
                       JASON
Exactly.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Gregg is next then right? And he
is pride?
                                                            

29.

                       JASON
You got it.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Then what deadly sin am I?
                                                            
                       JASON
Well I am torn between lust and
anger the only remaining sins.
                                                            
                       BECKY
What about envy?
                                                            
                       JASON
Well that's....
                                                            
                       VICKI
My stupid ex-boyfriend.
                                                            
                       BECKY
You broke up? No way!
                                                            
                       VICKI
He called me a slut then he told
me to fuck off and I could believe
that silly shit.
                                                            
                       BECKY
What!? He called you a slut!? I am
going to kill him!
                                                            
                       VICKI
Calm down Becky!
                                                            
                       BECKY
Oh sorry, that silly temper of
mine.
                                                            
                       JASON
Becky I know what sin you are.
                                                            
                       BECKY
What is my sin?(Very angry voice)
                                                            
                       JASON
Anger.
                                                            
                       BECKY
What!? How dare you think I'm
angry! I am the most calm person
on the planet!
                                                            

30.

                       VICKI
Becky please just calm down!
                                                            
                       BECKY
Oh sorry, I guess you are right
Jason.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Guys we are getting close to the
bus stop remember what we have to
do.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Convince Gregg that he is next?
                                                            
                       JASON
Exactly.
                                                            
                       BECKY
He umm Vicki?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Yeah Becky?
                                                            
                       BECKY
If I die could you tell my parents
that I love them?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Sure Becky.
                                                            
The car pulls up to the bys stop and parks.
                                                            
 
INT. BUS STOP - DAY
                                                            
Jason, Vicki and Becky get out of the car.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right Gregg's bus should be
here any minute.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Hey Jason I have a question.
                                                            
                       JASON
What?
                                                            
                       VICKI
What about Richard?I mean I really don't care but how
will we know when he dies?
                                                            

31.

                       JASON
I can't believe I'm saying this
but we need to save Richard too.
                                                            
                       JASON
Even though he is a jerk he is a
human being.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Yeah.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Bus!
                                                            
                       JASON
All right guys get ready.
                                                            
A bunch of football players come out Gregg is the last one
out.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Gregg!
                                                            
                       GREGG
Hey Vicki, Becky and aw hell no,
Jason! Listen I'm tired of this
dying shit! I am not dying I am
the pride of this school I am the
star receiver Gregg motherfuckin'
Gilborne!
                                                            
                       JASON
Pride? Gregg wait!
                                                            
Gregg opens up the storage place and huge speaker falls out.
                                                            
Jason pulls Gregg away from the speaker right before he is
crushed.
                                                            
A spray can springs a leak and another guy throws a match
the can explodes and Vicki pulls Becky back before she is
hit by the flames.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Holy crap!
                                                            
                                         CUT TO RICHARD'S
HOUSE
                                                            
 
INT. RICHARD'S HOUSE - DAY
                                                            

32.

ZOOM IN ON RICHARD.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Man I can't believe that Jason
took Vicki away from me I gotta
get her back.
                                                            
He picks up the phone and calls her cell.
                                                            
                       VICKI
(Voice Mail) Hey this is Vicki
leave a message after the beep!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Hey Vick it's Richard, I need to
tell you something I really
lo..(The message gets cut off by
Jason's voice)
                                                            
                       JASON
Hello?
                                                            
Richard puts down the phone and calmly starts the microwave
and walks into the bathroom.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Mother Fucker! Son of A Bitch!
Jason Crum you are a dead bastard!
                                                            
As Richard yells the microwave heats up and sets on fire.
The fire spreads all through out the kitchen then a knife
falls and slices the gas line open the fire slowly creeps
towards the gas leak.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I am going to find them!
                                                            
He grabs the keys and puts on his jacket then he walks out
the door and starts the car.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Shit! I forgot my gun.
                                                            
Before he can walk in his house explodes he ducks as flaming
pieces of debris smash into his car. He gets up and runs as
his car explodes which causes a truck to swerve he is about
to be hit when someone pulls him into a van.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Don't worry we are bringing you to
a safe place.
                                                            

33.

                       RICHARD
Vick? Becky? Gregg? Jason? What is
going on?
                                                            
                       JASON
Well we already told you, death is
happening.
                                                            
                       BECKY
We are going to my dad's bomb
shelter until we can figure out a
good plan.
                                                            
Then Richard falls asleep.
                                                            
 
EXT. CAR CRASH/ BOMB SHELTER PT. 1 - DAY
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Oh man my head were are we?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Almost to the bomb shelter.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Vicki I am truly sorry for what I
said to you at the hospital you
have feelings too.
                                                            
Before she can answer another car slams into theirs.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Mother Fucker!
                                                            
The car spins away and crashes into the guardrail the force
flips it over the guardrail and they are left hanging over
an edge of a cliff.
                                                            
                       JASON
Everyone stay still.
                                                            
The car slightly tilts.
                                                            
A police officer(40) walks up to them.
                                                            
                       POLICE OFFICER
Stay were you are don't move!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
You don't need to tell us twice!
                                                            
The cop runs back to his car.
                                                            

34.

                       POLICE OFFICER
Requesting medical service we have
an emergency here.
                                                            
Jason looks out the window a dark shadow is cast over the
officer.
                                                            
                       OPERATOR
Were is your location?
                                                            
                       POLICE OFFICER
It's...
                                                            
                       JASON
Look out!
                                                            
A semi slams into the cop car, the car smashes the officer
against the guardrail. He practically explodes as he is
hit. Bloods, organs and many things unknown fly everywhere.
                                                            
                       JASON
Death just killed that cop.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Why?
                                                            
                       VICKI
      (Cuts Richard Off)
To prevent intervention...
                                                            
People start to come up to them but when the car catches
fire they back off.
                                                            
                       GREGG
How do you know it was death?
                                                            
                       JASON
I felt it a cold, dark feeling.
Hey is it getting hot in here.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Yeah it is!
                                                            
Vicki tilts the mirror and sees the fire.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Guys! The car is on fire! And I
think we are about to go over.
                                                            
The car makes a huge creak.
                                                            

35.

                       JASON
Alright we are going to crawl out
the windows alright... Now!
                                                            
The group crawls out quickly and the car begins to fall over
the cliff and Richard still woozy is taking to much time.
                                                            
                       JASON
Rich take my hand.
                                                            
Richard takes Jason's hand and Jason and the group pull
Richard out of the car just before it tumbles over the edge.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Thanks guys I would be a goner if
you wouldn't of saved me.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Wait we just intervened in are own
deaths, what does that mean?
                                                            
                       JASON
It means death just did a
round-a-bout Vicki is still next.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Oh no, Richard hold me.
                                                            
As she walks towards Richard she slips and falls back she
tumbles over the edge but Richard pulls her up.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Richard I knew you still cared.
                                                            
Richard and Vicki kiss.
                                                            
                       JASON
Alright guys we gotta get to the
bomb shelter before we all end up
like that cop.
                                                            
Richard and Vicki stop kissing. The group heads over the
guardrail and stop a car to Jason's surprise it is his mom,
Erin Crum(46).
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
Honey how are you?
                                                            
                       JASON
Mom we need a ride to Becky's
house.
                                                            

36.

                       ERIN CRUM
All right guys hop in.
                                                            
The group gets in the car they drive away, ten minutes into
the ride Erin turns on the radio.
                                                            
RING OF FIRE BY JOHNNY CASH STARTS.
                                                            
"I FEEL IN TO A BURNING RING OF FIRE AND IT BURNS."
                                                            
The radio cuts off as they arrive at Becky's house.
                                                            
They get out of the car and head into the backyard.
                                                            
                       JASON
Thanks mom.
                                                            
His mom pulls away the force pulls Jason into the street he
sits up seeing a taxi but Gregg pulls him up just before he
is hit.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Come on.
                                                            
They head into the bomb shelter.
                                                            
 
INT. BOMB SHELTER PT. 2 - DAY
                                                            
The group climbs down into the bomb shelter.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right guys we need to review.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Right death is after us and
killing us the way we were meant
to die on the tram.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
When you save someone they move to
the back of the list.
                                                            
                       BECKY
The only way to beat death is new
life right?
                                                            
                       GREGG
Yeah and we are all based on a
seven deadly sin.
                                                            

37.

                       JASON
Dalton was sloth, Cliff was
gluttony, Heather greed, Gregg
pride, Becky anger, Richard envy,
Vicki lust, which leaves me I
think the old guy said something
about being good virtues.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
      (Quietly)
Or maybe adultery...
                                                            
                       VICKI
      (Quietly)
Shhhh Richard(Giggling)
                                                            
                       JASON
What's are next move?
                                                            
                       GREGG
Later we need to go to the race
because the all-star needs to be
there.
                                                            
                       JASON
Fine we'll all leave at seven
giving us about an hour to get to
the school.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Becky how do you hang out hear it
is so cramped?
                                                            
                       BECKY
Usually there is only me.
                                                            
                       VICKI
All right but can we get outta
here?
                                                            
The shelter starts to shake and pieces of rock hit Gregg in
the head.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Ow! Son of a Bitch!
                                                            
                       BECKY
Shit the place is collapsing!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
We need to get out of here now!
                                                            
The group climbs up the ladder led by Vicki.
                                                            

38.

                       VICKI
The door is jammed!
                                                            
Vicki kicks at it multiple times but then she gives up.
                                                            
Jason climbs up next to her and then he rams himself hard
against the door it swings open.
                                                            
                       JASON
Come on!
                                                            
The group climbs out and runs away as the place collapses.
Jason looks at his watch it is 5:30.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right guys go home we'll meet
up at the race later and be
careful, I call my mom to drop us
off at our houses.
                                                            
The group nods and heads into the house ten minutes later
Jason's mom arrives they get in the car and are dropped off
at their houses.
                                                            
 
EXT. JASON'S HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
Jason looks at himself in the mirror looking at his cuts and
bruises.
                                                            
                       JASON
You'll never get me death, NEVER!
                                                            
He looks closely into the mirror a ghastly figure us
standing behind him.
                                                            
                       JASON
You can't scare me.
                                                            
The mirror suddenly shatters.
                                                            
                       JASON
Not even close.
                                                            
A swift breeze blows through the open window a marble rolls
of his shelf and hits the keyboard which opens up a page
about a recall of SubX180 Subwoofers. Jason looks at the
page and smiles.
                                                            
                       JASON
I told you death your not taking
anymore of my friends!
                                                            

39.

BOOM COMES ON BY P.O.D
                                                            
"BOOM! HEAR COMES THE BOOM! READY OR NOT..."
                                                            
                       JASON
I know a clue when I see one.
                                                            
Jason runs out the computer screen fizzes out only leaving
the numbers 180.
                                                            
 
INT. VICKI'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
Vicki walks in the room and starts up her cd player.
                                                            
                       VICKI
How long to I have before I leave
looks like time enough for a
couple songs.
                                                            
ELECTRIFIED BY MR. BIG COMES ON.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Ehh good enough.
                                                            
Her stereo fizzes out and the last word are "ELECTRIFIED!"
                                                            
                       VICKI
Fuck! I told my mom I needed a new
stereo but no she gets me a dress!
Fuckin Bullshit!
                                                            
She kicks the stereo it falls over the rumbling causes a
picture of the football team to fall it breaks she picks up
the picture.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Oh my god.
                                                            
Gregg's head is gone and two football players who died
earlier in the year in a car crash are gone.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Crap. Why do I have to get the
sign?
                                                            
                       VICKI
I just hope I am not to late, for
Gregg's sake.
                                                            
She picks up her keys and heads out of her room the stereo
starts to play electrified again.
                                                            

40.

"ELECTRIFIED.."
                                                            
 
INT. BECKY'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
Becky walks into the bathroom she looks at herself in the
mirror she sees a black curtain fold over her.
                                                            
She quickly turns around.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Who the hell is there? Come out or
I'll fucking stab you, I really
will, Caleb? Cici?
                                                            
                       BECKY
      (Quietly)
I really hate my family.
                                                            
She picks up some deodorant at puts it on she turns on the
radio.
                                                            
                       RADIO BROADCASTER
Big News if you bought SubX180
subwoofer they are having a total
recall because they have a
tendency to catch fire! Woah!
Better return it before you burn,
burn, burn.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Fucking radio always screwing up!
                                                            
She hucks the radio out the window it break into many pieces
but it still repeats the phrase 180, 180, 180.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Oh man I am getting a serious case
of the chills.
                                                            
Then her bathroom lights shatter.
                                                            
                       BECKY
What the heck!
                                                            
She gets the broom and sweeps it up and leaves a note for
her parents.
                                                            
                       BECKY
Christ these last days have been
hell.
                                                            
She walks by the tv the story about the subwoofers come on.
                                                            

41.

                       BECKY
It might be a clue is it? Dang it
has to be it's so obvious!
                                                            
She runs out the door and starts her car and leaves.
                                                            
 
INT. RICHARD'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
Richard enters his living room he jumps on the couch and
flips on the TV.
                                                            
                       NEWS ANCHOR
More news on those malfunctioning
subwoofers. If you don't know the
SubX180 are going under a total
recall because they have a
tendency to set on a fire and now
not only that but if a circuit
leaks they could explode so if you
own a SubX180 for your own safety
get rid of it.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Dude that is messed up that could
be really dangerous to anyone.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I should check with Gregg to see
if he has those in his car that
could be messy.
                                                            
                       NEWS ANCHOR
In other news the tram crash in
central was caused by a electrical
malfunction not a terrorist
attack. For those who don't know
about 4 days ago a tram crashed
then another tram crashed into the
wreck causing 180 deaths the only
survivors were Eight High School
students when one had a vision of
the wreck saving him and his
friends although three of them
Dalton Moore, Cliff Compton and
Heather Brooks have died in
mysterious which many people have
debated whether it is a
coincidence or something else.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Fuck I just realized how horrible
it was god I gotta say what I
            (MORE)

42.

                       RICHARD (cont'd)
gotta say to Vicki before it is to
late.
                                                            
He walks out the door and leaves in his car.
                                                            
 
INT. STREET RACE - DAY
                                                            
Many high octane cars pull up showing off their spinners and
engines.
                                                            
Then Jason, Becky, Richard and Vicki pull up in there cars.
                                                            
They all get out of their cars but before the can talk a man
approaches them.
                                                            
                       Q
Hey! What are you kids doing here?
This is for adults only. Oh wait a
minute.
                                                            
Q(25) turns around and walks up to a black and silver
Mercedes and Gregg lowers the window.
                                                            
                       GREGG
What Q?
                                                            
                       Q
Your friends are here Gregg.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Oh all right.
                                                            
He gets out of his car and walks up to the group.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Damn! That is your ride we need to
hang out more!
                                                            
                       GREGG
Naw it is just my racer it is
always in the shop I usually drive
a van.
                                                            
Q walks up to Gregg.
                                                            
                       Q
Hey your next victim is ready.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Who is it? Rogers, Baker, Harris?
                                                            

43.

                       Q
No some kid by the name of Damon
he takes to much pride in his
subwoofers those new SubX180's.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Oh yeah I gotta get some of those
bad boys for my ride!
                                                            
Gregg shifts his attention to the group.
                                                            
                       GREGG
All right guys I am going to race
after that we can leave all right.
                                                            
Gregg get in his car and starts it up, Jason runs up to the
car.
                                                            
                       JASON
      (Drowned out by
       Music)
Watch out for the SubX180 all
right? And be careful.
                                                            
Gregg just looks ahead and revs up the engine. Jason walks
away.
                                                            
                       Q
Y'all ready, all right 3, 2, 1 go!
                                                            
The cars speed up and head down the long stretch of road the
hits twist and turns Becky wanders away the opponents car's
trunk begins to spark but he pulls ahead.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Come on Gregg, you can beat him!
                                                            
                       GREGG
Oh man this is not going good.
                                                            
The opponents trunk still sparks the latch that holds it
closed rumbles vigorously.
                                                            
                       JASON
I am getting that feeling again,
you guys we need to go to the
finish line or else Gregg is going
to die!
                                                            
                       BECKY
He guys I got a report from the
halftrack something is going on
with the other guys car.
                                                            

44.

                       VICKI
The subwoofers! The SubX180's they
were having a recall they said
they could explode!
                                                            
                       JASON
Holy shit! Come on!
                                                            
They get in Jason's car and speed towards the finish line.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Man I can't let this guy beat me,
I can't lose my respect, I can't
lose my cred and I can't loose my
pride!
                                                            
The cars are about to reach the finish line, the groups car
pulls up.
                                                            
Gregg speeds up and rams his opponent he spins out and
crashes Gregg go's right through the finish line aand wins.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Yeah!
                                                            
Jason runs out of the car and heads towards Gregg's then
there is an explosion. Jason pulls Gregg out of the car as
the subwoofer flies towards him in crashes through his
window and lands on the trunk.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Dude thanks.
                                                            
Gregg's car fuel line splits and leaks oil unknown to
anyone.
                                                            
                       BECKY
You guys fucking scared me to
death I am going to kill you guys!
                                                            
Becky runs towards them in anger but slips on an oil slick
and lands halfway in the trunk of Q's car she is woozy and
throws up in the trunk.
                                                            
                       JASON
Come on lets go.
                                                            
The two walk away suddenly the car explodes and sends the
subwoofer flying up in the air.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Mother fuck.
                                                            

45.

The sub woofer slams down on Q's trunk severing Becky in
half from the chest up. Organs and blood spill out in a red
paste all over the ground as on lookers run away in terror.
                                                            
                       JASON
Son of a Bitch!
                                                            
                       GREGG
Dude that is fucked up.
                                                            
Vicki throws up and Richard holds it back. Then the group
packs up and leaves the race track.
                                                            
                       JASON
Death is fucking complicated.
                                                            
They drive away.
                                                            
 
EXT. GREGG'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
The survivors walk into Gregg's living room they all sit on
various things.
                                                            
                       GREGG
You guys stayin' the night?
                                                            
                       JASON
Sure it will be better if we stay
in a group.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Poor Becky, I mean we never saw it
coming it came out of nowhere but
we need to get through it.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Yeah it skipped me and went
straight to her I mean I did not
know death moved so fast.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I think it is getting pissed we
have lasted so long.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Why did we have to be the victims?
Why not someone else!?
                                                            
                       JASON
I have a theory about that. Did
any of you guys almost die? I mean
like you were gonna' die but
            (MORE)

46.

                       JASON (cont'd)
something or somebody saved you? I
was saved when I was only little
me and my dad were playing ball in
the park when some drunk guy came
in and started yelling at us my
dad told me to leave, I did.
Seconds later I heard gunshots, my
dad died that day he saved my
life.
                                                            
                       GREGG
I got one. When I was twelve my
brother turned off my alarm so I
missed the bus to school. The bus
collided with a semi everyone
died. I think my brother knew
that's why he did what he did.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Me too. When I was ten I was
scheduled to go on Flight 180 to
France but the taxi got lost,
Flight 180 exploded killing
everyone.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Last year I was driving my car
home from work when a a car pulled
suddenly in front of me and
smashed into the car. I was
trapped in my own car then it blew
up. But it was in my head so I
slowed down and he passed and I
didn't die!
                                                            
                       JASON
See!? We all cheated death before
and now it is tying up the lose
ends. We got to figure something
out fast. All right their is one
thing we know that new life beats
death so I think someone needs to
die and be brought back to life
but I don't see how that could
happen so for now that is out.
                                                            

47.

                       VICKI
We can't forget or sins that was
causes us to die, Dalton because
he was lazy and like Becky she was
mad that you guys scared her so
much that put her in perfect line
to get hit in the face with death
her own death.
                                                            
Gregg gets up and looks out the window and sees something.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Guys come here and look at this.
                                                            
The group walks up to the window. There is a ominous shadow
outside.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
That looks like...
                                                            
                       JASON
Death.
                                                            
A shadowy hand creeps up over the window and seems to grab
at them.
                                                            
                       VICKI
I think we should sleep on this
one.
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah hold on just let me check the
news.
                                                            
Jason turns on the tv.
                                                            
                       NEWS ANCHOR
Terror at the races tonight. At
around eleven thirty Becky Naile a
local resident was killed in a
freak accident involving the
malfunctioning subwoofer the
SubX180. Apparently Becky fell
into a trunk halfway and the
subwoofer propelled by a crash
slammed down on the trunk killing
her.
                                                            
Vicki runs to the bathroom and throws up.
                                                            
                       JASON
No more checking the news.
                                                            

48.

Jason turns off the tv, Vicki comes back into the living
room the all climb onto a couch or chair and slowly fall
asleep.
                                                            
 
INT. GREGG'S HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
Jason wakes up and goes to wake up the others when he hears
the radio.
                                                            
THE RING OF FIRE BY JOHNNY CASH IS PLAYING.
                                                            
                       JASON
That just keep getting creepier.
                                                            
"I FELL INTO A BURNING RING OF FIRE AND IT BURNS..."
                                                            
                       JASON
Hey Richard wake up.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
What do you want? So tired, come
on five more minutes.
                                                            
                       JASON
Dude I need you to wake Vicki
while I get Gregg up.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Fine.
                                                            
Richard gets up and walks into Gregg's room to get Vicki and
Jason wakes up Gregg.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Huh, what time is it?
                                                            
                       JASON
Nine a.m
                                                            
                       GREGG
God I never get up this early.
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah it is pretty early for all of
us.
                                                            
                       GREGG
I can't believe there is only four
of us left I mean it is really
scary. Jason are you afraid to
die?
                                                            

49.

                       JASON
Yeah Gregg I am.
                                                            
                       VICKI
WHY THE HELL ARE YOU WAKING ME UP
THIS EARLY IS THE FREAKIN'
MORNING!
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Sorry guys she doesn't want to get
up.
                                                            
Jason walks into the bedroom.
                                                            
                       JASON
Vicki can you get up?
                                                            
                       VICKI
No too tired.
                                                            
                       JASON
How about if I give you five
bucks?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Fine.
                                                            
Vicki gets up and walks into the living room with Jason.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
How did you do it?
                                                            
                       JASON
Bribed her with five bucks.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Oh.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right guys what is are next
move?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Breakfast.
                                                            
Gregg and Richard laugh.
                                                            

50.

                       JASON
This is serious you guys. At the
race last night after I intervened
with Gregg's death it skipped to
Becky, now Richard is next, then
Vicki, then me, then finally back
to Gregg.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I say we split our separate ways
until the football game in three
days then we meet up.
                                                            
                       JASON
Good idea we can keep in touch
with are cell phones and call if
you dodge death, okay?
                                                            
                       GREGG
Sounds like a plan.
                                                            
The group calls there rides and finally they all leave until
only Jason and Gregg remain.
                                                            
                       JASON
There's my mom all right then see
you Gregg.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Be safe Jason.
                                                            
They wave to each other as Jason gets in the car and drives
away.
                                                            
 
EXT. JASON'S HOUSE(1 DAY LATER) - DAY
                                                            
Jason wakes up and stares up at the ceiling.
                                                            
                       JASON
Dad why did you have to die? I was
just a little kid!
                                                            
He starts cry.
                                                            
                       JASON
It's not fair, why couldn't I die?
Why do I have this curse bestowed
upon me, I am so scared dad,
please help me.
                                                            
The radio comes on it is "Faliure's Not Flattering" by New
Found Glory.
                                                            

51.

"WHY DON'T YOU GET IT TOGETHER NOW."
                                                            
"FALIURE'S NOT FLATTERING."
                                                            
                       JASON
So that's how you show me a
freakin' song!? What the hell!
                                                            
Erin Crum walks in.
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
Honey why were you yelling?
                                                            
                       JASON
No reason.
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
You were thinking about your
father weren't you?
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah.
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
Poor baby. Come on get dressed we
will go for a walk and we can
talk.
                                                            
                       JASON
No I just need to think for a
while.
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
All right come to me if you change
your mind.
                                                            
She walks out the door.
                                                            
                       JASON
Christ these past days have been
hell, why couldn't you let us off
with a warning or something? Huh
death.
                                                            
                       JASON
God I can't believe I just said
that.
                                                            
He gets up and turns on his computer.
                                                            
He brings up a search page and types in defeating death. He
clicks on the first link.
                                                            

52.

                       JASON
Many believe death cannot be
defeated but I have the answer say
you save a bunch of people and
deaths comes after you well there
are two known ways new life, or
the rumored dying out of order.
Only one is known to restart
death's list a new the other
nobody is quite sure.
                                                            
                       JASON
Interesting that puts the old
guy's new life beats death theory
into perspective.
                                                            
                       JASON
But doesn't that mean like a baby?
Damn we don't have the kind time.
Our best bet for survival is one
of us making the sacrifice. Man I
need to clear my head.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hey mom!
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
What Jason?
                                                            
                       JASON
I'll take you up on that walk.
                                                            
She smiles and walks down the stairs, Jason shortly follows.
The computer still on the same page goes to screensaver but
the word death is still visible.
                                                            
 
INT. 3RD STREET(RICHARD'S VIEW) - DAY
                                                            
Richard calmly walks down 3rd Street to Vicki's House.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Dang it is a beautiful day out.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I never thought this day would
come because of Jason but I knew
she really liked me Richard King!
                                                            
He reaches in his pocket and pulls out a case he opens it a
sparkling ring shines.
                                                            

53.

                       RICHARD
She is going to love it. God I
hopes she says yes. Death will not
stop of me marrying the love of my
life.
                                                            
About 300 yards away there is a construction sight a massive
building is being built. Steel Beams and pipes are lined up
perfectly to build the shape of a skyscraper.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
And then once Jason finds out how
to fix this problem with death
we'll all be home free to do
whatever.
                                                            
The site now only 200 yards away begins to rig up a slender
pipe. The cords are not that strong but the checker walks
away before the coils begin to come undone.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Death will not stop me from my
ultimate goal never. Man I hope
nobody else dies I mean we have
all grown so close, it would be
heartbreaking.
                                                            
Now the construction site is only 100 yards away the pipe is
slowly lifted up the coils continue to undone.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Vicki here I come!
                                                            
He begins to run to pipe is up high now. Richard reaches the
site and trips the coils snap and pipe falls vertically.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Oh no!
                                                            
Then someone pulls Richard out of the way just as the pipe
crashes to the ground.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
You saved me.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Well duh.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Vicki I have something to tell
you. Will you marry me?
                                                            

54.

                       VICKI
Oh my god.
                                                            
She backs up in surprise into the road.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Vicki!
                                                            
Richard pulls her forward just as a speeding taxi zooms by.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Yes.
                                                            
He slips the ring on her finger and they kiss.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Shit we gotta call Jason.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Yeah he is next.
                                                            
 
INT. LINCOLN AVE. (JASON'S VIEW) - DAY
                                                            
Jason and his mom walk down the street as cars speed by.
                                                            
                       JASON
Why did dad do what he did?
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
Because he was looking out for his
best intrests. His son.
                                                            
                       JASON
But why couldn't he have left with
me?
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
I think he knew one of you were
going to die so he made the
sacrifice.
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
By the way why did you bring this
up anyway?
                                                            
                       JASON
No reason.
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
It is because of your vision
right?
                                                            

55.

                       JASON
Well yeah.
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
Thought so. What is big problem?
So what you got lucky, you should
be grateful that you got another
chance at life.
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah but alot of friends our now
dead. Dalton, Cliff, Becky and
Heather. For christ sakes mom I
saw Heather get shot in the eyes
with piercings! She died right in
front of me!
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
Shhh, It is okay come on we will
get Ice Cream here.
                                                            
                       JASON
All right.
                                                            
The Ice Cream place is simply called Aaron's the inside is
filled with ice cream machine and a stove. A clerk puts down
a skewer a strong wind blows through the place.
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
One Pineapple and one Chocolate.
                                                            
The clerk nods and walks to the ice cream machine the wind
blows with all its might the skewer moves towards the gas
line.
                                                            
                       JASON
You still remember my favorite.
                                                            
The clerk hands them the ice cream. The wind blows and the
skewer falls and breaks open the gas line.
                                                            
Jason and his mom walk outside and sit on a bench.
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
I know it is hard but eat and try
to think about something else.
                                                            
Jason nods. The clerk attempts to fire up the stove but it
won't work so he goes to get some matches. Jason's phone
rings.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Hello? Jason you're next.
                                                            

56.

The phone call gets cut off Jason stands up and the clerks
light the match there is a massive explosion. Erin tackles
Jason as the flames fly.
                                                            
                       JASON
Mom are you okay?
                                                            
He looks at his mom her back is charred black but the front
there is nothing but a blank stare.
                                                            
                       JASON
Mom! No please god, no! Why does
this keep happening to me?! Son of
a Bitch.
                                                            
Jason just sits there until the ambulances and fire trucks
arrive.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - NIGHT
                                                            
Jason is just sitting there with a blank look on his face
when Richard and Vicki come in.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Jason, bro are you okay?
                                                            
Jason looks at him with an awful face.
                                                            
                       JASON
My mom was burnt to a crisp and
now I have no parents. All I have
is my sister but I am sure death
will do something to take her too.
Besides that I am just keen.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Holy shit.
                                                            
Richard gets up and walks out of the room.
                                                            
                       VICKI
It is all gonna' be better
everyone is going to live because
we have the knowledge.
                                                            
                       JASON
Fuck knowledge! Death isn't going
to stop it is a machine. It
doesn't have feeling because if it
did I would still have parents.
                                                            
Vicki leans over to hug him but stops.
                                                            

57.

                       JASON
What? Afraid you'll die?
                                                            
                       VICKI
No I am married to Richard now.
                                                            
                       JASON
Wow.
                                                            
Vicki gets up and leaves and Gregg comes in.
                                                            
                       GREGG
You okay? Do you need anything?
                                                            
                       JASON
No. But thanks hey could you see
if my sister is here yet.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Sure, anything.
                                                            
Gregg walks out and comes back in with Kelly who is crying
here eyes out.
                                                            
                       KELLY
Jason were is mom?
                                                            
                       JASON
      (Crying)
Heaven.
                                                            
She runs to him and starts punching his chest.
                                                            
                       KELLY
      (Crying)
No it can't be true! No, no, no!
                                                            
                       JASON
Shhh, It is going to be okay. We
will get through this together.
                                                            
                       KELLY
That is what mom said to you when
dad died.
                                                            
Jason starts crying his eyes out with his sister.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I think we should leave them
alone.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Good idea.
                                                            

58.

                       JASON
      (Singing)
I want to swim away but don't know
how. Sometimes it feels just like
I am falling in the ocean. Let the
waves take me down, let the
hurricane set it motion yeah. Come
down, let the rain come down.
                                                            
                       KELLY
That is song mom sang to me to
calm me down.
                                                            
                       JASON
Yep.
                                                            
                       POLICE OFFICER
We got a place for you guys to
stay. Come on.
                                                            
Jason and Kelly get up and walk out the door they get in the
police cruiser and drive away.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Poor guy.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
We should go.
                                                            
Vicki and Richard walk out the door and drive away. Gregg
leaves shortly after.
                                                            
 
EXT. HOTEL 76 - NIGHT
                                                            
A police escort guides Jason and Kelly up to their room. It
is room 081
                                                            
                       KELLY
What's wrong big brother?
                                                            
                       JASON
Nothing come on.
                                                            
They enter the room. Jason looks back a mirror has reflected
the numbers 081, they now read 180.
                                                            
                       KELLY
Brother how long are we going to
be here?
                                                            

59.

                       JASON
Until the red cross can find us a
house.
                                                            
Kelly flips on the TV.
                                                            
                       NEWS ANCHOR
In other news today mother of two
Erin Crum and college grad Norman
Weisley was killed today after an
explosion at Aaron's. But Erin did
not die in vain she saved her
eighteen year old son's life by
shielding him from the blaze.

On a lighter note the big football
game is tommorow and..
                                                            
Jason turns off the TV.
                                                            
                       KELLY
Why did you do that?
                                                            
                       JASON
I need to tell you something.
                                                            
                       KELLY
What?
                                                            
                       JASON
I am going to that football game
tomorrow. I don't want you to go
near the football game all right?
In fact I want you to stay in the
hotel all day tommorow okay?
                                                            
                       KELLY
Why?
                                                            
                       JASON
Well I would risk losing you and I
don't want to take that risk,
okay?
                                                            
                       KELLY
Why would I get hurt?
                                                            
                       JASON
No reason. Just stay away, all
right?
                                                            
                       KELLY
All right.
                                                            

60.

                       JASON
Good girl now lets get to go to
bed.
                                                            
He picks Kelly up and brings her into the bathroom, rushing
water echoes through the room. He brings out and they both
have their sleeping clothes on. They climb into bed and
fall asleep.
                                                            
 
INT. HOTEL 76 - DAY
                                                            
Jason wakes up and looks out the window it is a sparkling
day out, birds are singing and the sun shines brightly.
                                                            
                       KELLY
Brother you're up!
                                                            
                       JASON
Yeah I...
                                                            
Suddenly the room bursts into flames and his sister is
instantly incinerated the flames come up and surround him
slowly burning his skin away.
                                                            
                       JASON
No! Get away!
                                                            
Suddenly he wakes up.
                                                            
Kelly is still sleeping he checks the clock it says Eight
O'clock.
                                                            
                       JASON
Twelve hours until the final game.
Tonight may be my final day alive.
It could be Gregg's or Richard or
even Vicki.
                                                            
He flips on the tv.
                                                            

61.

                       NEWS ANCHOR
It has been close to a week since
a deadly tram crash claimed the
lives of 180 people. But there
were some survivors for one Jason
Crum who says that he saw the
crash in his head and actually
saved seven of his friends but
some have died in mysterious ways
just like Flight 180 Nine Years
ago and also it is the anniversary
of Flight 180 memorial services
will be held at...
                                                            
He shuts off the TV.
                                                            
He gets and puts on some street clothes and walks out of the
room.
                                                            
He walks down the hallway and exits the Hotel.
                                                            
 
INT. LONG ISLAND(ALL AROUND THE CITY) - DAY
                                                            
Jason walks down the street he passes a familiar face.
                                                            
                       JASON
Hey!
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
Why hello Jason! I see the reaper
hasn't got you yet but what your
friends?
                                                            
Jason stares down.
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
How many of them are dead? 5 or
maybe 7?
                                                            
                       JASON
Four asshole! Oh yeah and my
fucking mom! You wanna' keep
messing with my head? Go on keep
bothering me.
                                                            
                       OLD GUY
Hey I just want to wish you good
luck at the game tonight.
                                                            
He laughs and disappears into a oncoming crowd of people.
                                                            

62.

                       JASON
Son of a Bitch.
                                                            
Jason walks off.
                                                            
He walks for a while and then decides to cross the street he
makes his way over to the bay.
                                                            
He hangs his head over the rail and looks out into the sun.
                                                            
                       JASON
Man, it sure does feel good to e
alive.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Yeah I know what you mean.
                                                            
                       JASON
What are you doing here Vicki? I
thought you would be planning your
wedding.
                                                            
                       VICKI
No Richard is doing it, he is
going to be late for the game.
                                                            
                       JASON
Didn't you guys ever think that
this would be your last day on
Earth?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Don't even say that! We are all
going to live and no one can
change that!
                                                            
                       JASON
Whatever.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Come on I will drive you back to
your hotel, you have left your
sister at the hotel alone for like
an hour.
                                                            
                       JASON
Fine.
                                                            
They begin to walk to Vicki's car.
                                                            
                       VICKI
What was that song you were
singing to your sister?
                                                            

63.

                       JASON
Oh it was a song my mom heard on
the radio and she loved it so she
started singing it to my sister
and that really calmed my sister
down.
                                                            
                       JASON
I think it is called "Into the
Ocean."
                                                            
                       VICKI
It was nice it made me feel
better.
                                                            
                       JASON
Thanks.
                                                            
They get into the car and drive back to the hotel.
                                                            
 
INT. HOTEL 76 - DAY
                                                            
Vicki's car pulls up to the hotel and Jason gets out.
                                                            
                       JASON
Thanks Vicki.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Anytime Jason.
                                                            
She closes the door and drives off.
                                                            
Jason walks up the stairs and pulls out his room key he
unlocks his door and his sister is still sleeping.
                                                            
                       JASON
Wow she must be really tired.
                                                            
He turns away to take his shoes off. His sister gets up and
hits with a metal serving pan. Jason is knocked out
instantly.
                                                            
She drops a note on him and walks out the door.
                                                            
Jason wakes up he looks at the clock it is 7:00 P.M
                                                            
                       JASON
What the hell! How the hell did it
get so late.
                                                            
He sees the note, he picks it up and reads it.
                                                            

64.

                       JASON
Dear Big Brother,
I can't let you die so I going to
the game not you, okay? Please
don't come or else you might die,
I heard the news it said you would
die, Brother!

So please don't go.
                                                            
                       JASON
Kelly, Kelly! I am coming to get
you!
                                                            
He runs out the door at down into the lobby he confronts his
protective officer.
                                                            
                       JASON
I need to go to the game now!
                                                            
                       POLICE OFFICER
Alright calm down I will bring
you.
                                                            
Jason and the cop rush into the patrol car and they speed
off.
                                                            
 
INT. FOOTBALL GAME - NIGHT
                                                            
The patrol car speeds up to the stadium it is 7:50.
                                                            
                       JASON
Thanks.
                                                            
The cop car speeds away and Jason runs into the stadium.
                                                            
                       KELLY
Kelly! Kelly where are you?!
                                                            
                       VICKI
      (From Across the
       Stadium)
Jason!
                                                            
                       VICKI
Hey Vicki!
                                                            
Vicki starts to run to Jason and Jason runs towards her.
                                                            
                       JASON
Vicki have you seen my sister?
                                                            

65.

                       VICKI
No but come and sit on the
bleachers maybe we can see her and
besides we need to keep an eye on
Gregg.
                                                            
                       JASON
      (Out of Breath)
Good idea Vick, come on lets go.
                                                            
Vicki helps Jason up the bleachers until they are half way
up, Vicki sets Jason down and sits next to him, a light is
dangling above Vicki's head. The Ring Of Fire comes on.
                                                            
                       COMMETATOR
The teams will be out shortly
folks.
                                                            
"I FELL INTO A BURNING RING OF FIRE AND IT BURNS,BURNS,BURNS
                                                            
AND THE FLAMES WENT HIGHER AND IT BURNS, BURNS, BURNS
                                                            
THE RING OF FIRE."
                                                            
Jason shudders.
                                                            
                       VICKI
What is wrong?
                                                            
                       JASON
Nothing just got the chills.
                                                            
A group of kids push out a row of fireworks and rowdy teen
puts his bottle of whiskey below the benches it crack and
slowly leaks onto the field.
                                                            
                       COMMETATOR
Alright folks get ready for the
game here is the opponents the
Garfield Sound!
                                                            
The crowd boos loudly.
                                                            
                       COMMETATOR
And the home boys the Lincoln
Attack!
                                                            
He announces the players one by one until it reaches Gregg.
                                                            
                       COMMETATOR
And the all-star receiver, Gregg
Gilborne!
                                                            

66.

The crowd jumps up off its feet causing the light to shake a
little and the forced causes the bottle to leak a little
more, the alcohol finds a indent a slowly moves out onto the
Attacks's 10 yard line.
                                                            
The players begin to start the game.
                                                            
                       JASON
I wish I knew were Kelly was.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Don't worry we will find her.
                                                            
The game continues and the alcohol slowly trickles down onto
the 10 yard line.
                                                            
Jason and Vicki watch the game and the light continues to
come undone due to the mad stomping of the crowd.
                                                            
The first quarter ends and the score is Lincoln: 13,
Garfield: 14.
                                                            
                       JASON
Alright we have waited long enough
lets go find my sister.
                                                            
                       VICKI
We gotta wait for the right moment
when she shows herself.
                                                            
The game continues and the alcohol slowly trickles it is
about half gone now. The light continues to shake.
                                                            
                       JASON
So when did you decide to marry
Richard?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Well after he saved me from that
car and I guess because I saved
him at the construction sight.
                                                            
                       JASON
Construction sight?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Yeah, why?
                                                            
                       JASON
Did you here Ring of Fire there!?
                                                            
                       VICKI
I think so, way up top though.
                                                            

67.

                       JASON
Of course it is so obvious!
                                                            
The alcohol begins to pool around the ten yard line.
                                                            
Gregg intercepts and begins to run towards the touchdown a
big guys tackles him and takes the ball he only get two feet
before Gregg strips the ball and runs.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Motha Fucker ain't gonna take my
pride!
                                                            
                       JASON
Gregg!
                                                            
"THE RING OF FIRE."
                                                            
Jason runs down the bleachers and jumps towards Gregg as the
same kids lights and drops a cigarette it lights the alcohol
as Jason jumps over the bar a tackles Gregg before he
reaches the ten yard line and the alcohol flares up.
                                                            
In the confusion two benched jocks accidentally throws jugs
of water onto the bleachers suddenly there is a loud screech
as a car barely misses a massive semi.
                                                            
The entire crowd rushes over the edges of the bleachers and
into the parking lot leaving only Vicki to ponder.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Richard!
                                                            
She tries to run off the bleachers but slips the light then
begins to fall.
                                                            
                       JASON
Vicki hold on!
                                                            
Jason makes a great leap onto the bleachers and picks Vicki
up and they both jump off just before the light crashes on
the bleachers lighting it up like a Christmas light. A
strong wind blows and edges the fire slowly towards the
fireworks rack.
                                                            
Richard runs in the stadium and sees Jason with his arm
draped over Vicki.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Vicki! You two-timing whore! How
dare you ruin our marriage like
this and with the lowest of the
low, Jason Crum!
                                                            

68.

Jason gets up and walks up to Richard.
                                                            
                       JASON
What is your problem don't just
assume you asshole!
                                                            
Suddenly Kelly runs out.
                                                            
                       KELLY
Step away from my brother!
                                                            
                       JASON
Stay out of this Kelly.
                                                            
The fire moves closer to the fireworks rack.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Trouble in family?
                                                            
Gregg runs up to Jason and Richard.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Back off Richard.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Whatever.
                                                            
Richard runs to Vicki and the fire is an inch away from the
fireworks rack.
                                                            
                       JASON
Thanks dude.
                                                            
                       GREGG
No problem.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
Hey crum! I just realized
something! You're next! It's over
for everyone else but not for you!
When you die the horrible death
you deserve you will be in hell
burning in the ring of fire.
                                                            
                       JASON
Don't be dumb you are still on
death's list Richard.
                                                            
Suddenly Jason remembers.
                                                            
                       JASON
Ring of Fire.
                                                            

69.

                       GREGG
What?
                                                            
                       RICHARD
No because I am not dying!
                                                            
Suddenly Jason pulls Gregg and Kelly down as the fireworks
go off and fly at them, the fireworks rocket and a stray one
connects with the face of Richard, bits of skin and flesh
burn away as the firework sets Richard's face on fire, his
eyes burn dry and one of his cheeks are exposed to the bone,
then his hair and skin on his scalp burn away in a big
blaze, then the flames go up once more and his bones are
charred a dull grey as he falls next to Vicki.
                                                            
                       VICKI
      (Very Loud)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
                                                            
She scoots away into Jason.
                                                            
The entire field is now on fire.
                                                            
"I FELL INTO A BURNING RING OF FIRE AND IT BURNS,BURNS,BURNS
                                                            
THE RING OF FIRE."
                                                            
                       JASON
I have to die.
                                                            
                       VICKI
What are you talking about?
                                                            
                       JASON
If I die out of order then we all
get saved.
                                                            
                       KELLY
No brother! You can't do this!
                                                            
                       JASON
Be a good girl now Kelly some nice
new parents will come and get you
and promise you will coroporate?
                                                            
                       KELLY
No, No, No, No!
                                                            
                       JASON
Hey Vicki.
                                                            

70.

He pulls Vicki towards and kisses her hard on the lips and
they embrace so passionately the pair radiates, after that
he shakes hands with Gregg and hugs his sister.
                                                            
The fire lurches up and Jason runs towards the fire.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Jason!
                                                            
                       KELLY
Big brother!
                                                            
Gregg holds them back and Jason waves and jumps into the
fire the skin burns away from his face as the flame
completely engulfs him.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Why Jason? Why did you do it?
                                                            
                       ERIN CRUM
Brother.
                                                            
                       GREGG
He did it to save all of us and
even you Kelly, he was willing to
make that sacrifice for us now
come on the police probably want
to know what happened.
                                                            
Gregg escorts Vicki and Kelly into the parking lot the
police walk up to them and Gregg explains what happened they
call their parents and when they come they welcome them with
open arms.
                                                            
 
EXT. MONORAIL(3 YEARS LATER) - DAY
                                                            
The monorail pulls up to the station and an much older
looking Gregg walks on his hair no longer in cornrows but
neatly matted down.
                                                            
Gregg sits down and looks next to him.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Vicki?
                                                            
                       VICKI
Gregg! What a nice surprise!
                                                            
Vicki looks much older her hair is pulled back in a ponytail
and she has a dress suit on, the hug and a teen walks up to
them.
                                                            

71.

                       KELLY
Excuse me.
                                                            
                       VICKI
Kelly!
                                                            
They hug and Gregg shakes hands with her.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Got a strong grip there don't ya
kid?
                                                            
She nods and sits next to Vicki.
                                                            
                       VICKI
You guys going to the crash
memorial for the remembrence?
                                                            
They nod.
                                                            
                       RICHARD
I can't believe that it has been
three years since that day, it
still hasn't set in that everyone
is gone.
                                                            
                       KELLY
I still can't believe that Jason
is gone.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Yeah something about that never
sat right with me.
                                                            
                       VICKI
What?
                                                            
                       GREGG
Well I think when you scooted away
from the field you intervened with
yourself which means that Jason
fell into death design and death
has been waiting for us.
                                                            
                       VICKI
No it is over, death is out of
lives until we are old an
wrinkled!
                                                            
                       KELLY
Vicki is right Gregg, it is over
for everyone.
                                                            

72.

                       GREGG
Yeah you are right.
                                                            
                       CONDUCTOR
Folks we may be experience a
little shaking a small earthquake
has been reported in the area.
                                                            
                       VICKI
That is odd there is never an
earthquake in New York.
                                                            
The lights flicker on and off.
                                                            
Suddenly the car starts to shake a little.
                                                            
                       CONDUCTOR
Don't worry folks it should pass
in just a few moments.
                                                            
The tram shakes a little more, suddenly a big rumble echoes
through the tunnel.
                                                            
                       CONDUCTOR
Don't worry folks, just stay calm.
                                                            
Tinks on the roof are heard.
                                                            
                       GREGG
What the hell is going on?
                                                            
                       VICKI
I don't know.
                                                            
                       GREGG
I am going to go check with the
conductor.
                                                            
Gregg walks up into the first car, suddenly the entire car
shakes and huge chunk of rock crashes through the ceiling of
the first car and smashes Gregg.
                                                            
                       KELLY
Gregg!
                                                            
Suddenly the car stops and Vicki shoots out the open space
and gets smashes up against a rock blood sprays all over the
car. Kelly runs out of the car.
                                                            
                       KELLY
What is going on!?
                                                            
Suddenly the entire tunnel falls in.
                                                            

73.

                       VICKI
Kelly!
                                                            
Suddenly Kelly realizes that she is still on the tram.
                                                            
                       CONDUCTOR
Folks we maybe experience a little
shaking a small earthquake has
been reported in the area.
                                                            
                       VICKI
That is odd there is never an
earthquake in New York.
                                                            
                       KELLY
We need to get off this train! The
tunnel is going to collapse and we
are all going to die!
                                                            
                       VICKI
No Kelly it is over, we beat
death.
                                                            
                       GREGG
Yeah don't be paranoid.
                                                            
The lights flicker on and off. Suddenly a chunk of the
tunnel smashes the car, Gregg and Vicki are smashed into
pieces.
                                                            
                       KELLY
No this can't be happening! Not to
me!
                                                            
The tram stops and Kelly saves herself by holding on to the
grip bar.
                                                            
Suddenly the tunnel collapses and before it crushes Kelly


we
                                                            
CUT TO BLACK.
                                                            


THE END


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From ralph keefer Date 7/21/2008 *1/2
Nothing to shocking. Kinda tired of FD series like most others. I think 3 movies is enough. Nothing ground breaking. So not great.

From Aaron G. White Date 4/14/2008 *
Nothing very gripping or new introduced with this script. I've gotta agree with Glenn, I really didn't care about the characters enough to be effected by their rather predictable deaths...

From Glenn Date 11/27/2006 *1/2
The FD series is so overdone, im sure you can be more creative. The characters were decent, but there deaths were pretty much the same as all the others fom the previous FD'. There was no suspense in your writing and I didnt really care if your characters lived or die, you need to create characters that people will love or hate. The dialogue really needs improvment, there was no real emotion when a character died and the others pretty much moved on like they didnt care.

From Antwoine Date 11/4/2006 **
This had a predictable flow and it didnt twist me very much. You need to throw in something outta left field or this script will seem identical to the previous movies. The formula has gotta change with this series for success.

From Brad Smith Date 10/31/2006 **
You do know there is a movie called Se7en, right? Also, I think we've had enough of this series.


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