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by parker mathewson (parkermathewson05@hotmail.com)
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Genre: Sports
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INT. WALKING TO SCHOOL ON A COLD MORNING - DAY |
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BILLY
Hey! Nice game last night! it was
amazing. |
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MIKE
Oh, hey thanks man. I'm so tired
now though. My parents were so
proud of me after that we had a
party until midnight. |
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MR D
pARTY UNTIL 3 ON A SCHOOL NIGHT?
UNLIKELY. |
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SARA
UH! Lucky! I wish my parents did
that for me sometime! |
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BILLY
Well your not the one who tackled
the guy and recovered the fumble
for a touchdown now were you? |
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SARA
no.... But hey i can do some
amazing things! |
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BILLY
Oh sure.. Like talk so fast my
ears fall off? But anyways, dude
Mike, I hope your the MVP this
year. I mean a thursday night game
that you won against the toughest
team in California? And how do you
still have time for your
homework!? |
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MIKE
Hehe, you know Bill, I have no
clue... But i didnt beat them
alone, it was a team effort |
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SARA (mad at Billy)
Well I hear soemone has a heart,
unlike someone whos name I will
not speak |
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2.
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BILLY
Aww come on Sara! You know you
love me! Ugh i guess now its time
to make up during class by making
you laugh... |
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INT. ENTER SCHOOL CLASSROOM - DAY |
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MRS. G
Ok everyone sit down!
Everyone stop crowding around
Mike! |
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MIKE
Ok guys seriously the bell rang
and i dont want a detention after
last night |
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MRS. G
(Screams)
HEY!! EVERYONE SIT DOWN!!
and mike you did an excelent job
last night, Im sure you will be
getting the MVP award this year |
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MIKE
Thanks Mrs. G but its a team
effort, not only me so not only I
should get the award |
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COACH
You see, thats why you should have
the MVP award, you make our team a
team. I think you are the only one
who has realized its not a solo
sport, no team could ever do
anything with only 1 good player |
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MIKE
Coach! Why are you here? I didnt
see you come in |
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MR D
IN FRONT OF THE CLASS? UNLIKELY |
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COACH
I am here to tell you to get a
speech ready for the award
ceremony hint hint, nudge nudge |
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MIKE
o..k... but how long shoud it be? |
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COACH
how ever long you want, just make
it good. I am trying to get you a
scholorship |
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INT. LUNCH TABLES - DAY |
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Mike walking in trying to memorize his speech |
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SARA
Hey Mike, whats that your reading? |
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MIKE
Oh, this? Nothin important
looks like your not mad at Billy
anymore |
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SARA
yea he was realy funny in first
period so i accepted his appology
Hey! dont change the subject on
me! Realy what is that? |
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MIKE
Something I had to write.. youll
see in 7th period |
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SARA
7th period? but thats math what
would you have to write for math? |
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BILLY
(sits down handing
sara her lunch)
Hey guys! Watcha talkin about? |
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SARA
(stares at Billy
smiling)
Oh, nothin just how im not mad at
you anymore.. you know the usual |
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BILLY
Haha suree.. well Mike, are you
gunna have another party tonight
with friends instead of family? |
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MIKE
I dont know.. not up to me but you
will be the first to know |
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MIKE
If im gunna have a party tonight
about last night |
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JAKE
Dude if that happens, its gunna be
awsome!! |
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MARK
Congrats Mike! Dude i wish i was
you right now, just wait till 5th
period i heard somebody wants to
ask you somethin |
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INT. 5TH PERIOD - DAY |
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MRS. C
Buenos Dias Clase! |
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CLASS
Buenos Dias Senora C |
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KYLE
(whispers to Mike
handing him a
note)
hey this is from Katie |
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MIKE
(looking over at
Katie after
reading the note)
*note reads*(Hey what are you
doing saturday night? call me
555-7284) |
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KATIE
(Staring at Mike
dreamily) |
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MRS. C
Mike! What are you doing? |
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MIKE
Nothing Senora C. I am just
preparing for next period |
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MRS. C
Ok well stop and pay attention
this is on the test next teusday |
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MIKE
(putting the note
in his pocket)
Yes mam |
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INT. 7TH PERIOD - DAY |
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MR. TWAIN
this is your principal speaking,
all classes must report to the gym
for an assembly |
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SARA
Oh, so this is what you were
studying those lines for, the
assembly |
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MIKE
Shh! dont tell anyone |
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MIKE
I dont know... All i know is I
needed a speech ready... |
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BILLY
Hey, whats this about? |
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INT. GYM - DAY |
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PEOPLE ARE RESTLESS IN THE GYM WHILE THEY ARE SETTLING IN |
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MR. TWAIN
Kids, settle down, its about time
for this assembly to start. Coach? |
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COACH
Thankyou Mr. Twain. now as you
kids know, we had an amazing
season, and an even greater night
game last night |
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WHOLE GYM
*cheers* *everyone around Mike
hitting him playfully* |
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COACH
now we all know that that was the
toughest team in California right? |
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COACH
well i am here to award the MVP to
the person who made that game
possible for us to win, Mike
Endure! |
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the gym goes crazy as Mike starts walking up to the stage
taking out the peice of paper that has his speech on it |
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MIKE
(nervously)
Thanks Coach, now i know all of
you guys were phsyched for the
game last night, especially after
we won! |
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WHOLE GYM
(cheers wildly) |
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Mike takes his speech and reads it slowly, with pauses
between each sentence. |
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MIKE
Everyone may think that this is
all for me, but i believe that
last nights game was a team
effort. Along with all the games
before this, and even in the
future, these will be team
efforts. We will only win, AS A
TEAM. |
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MIKE
I will only accept this award as a
team, i promise, i will not take
this as a single person or let the
success go to my head. Thank you
(MORE)
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MIKE (cont'd)
for your support of our team and
school! |
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After finishing his speech, he walks off the stage with
everyone cheering their lungs out |
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COACH
(wiping tears)
That is what our school is all
about, a team effort. That was
beautiful. everybody give 'im
another hand |
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WHOLE GYM
(claps
thunderously) |
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INT. MIKE WALKING HOME - DAY |
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Walking out of the gym after the speeches by the award
winners and the lettermen jackets had been newly equipped
with their badges and letters, Mike seems very happy. |
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BILLY
(runs up)
you seem extremely happy Mike,
whats goin on with you? |
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MIKE
Yea man, i got her number |
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MIKE
her... cant you remember??
fine... Katie |
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BILLY
(blank face while
thinking)
oh yea! haha sorry, couldnt
remember who you were talking
about |
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MIKE
(handing him the
note)
check this out |
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as billy starts reading the note, sara comes running up
smiling |
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BILLY
(stuffing note in
pocket to hide
from sara)
Hey sara, whatcha up to |
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SARA
Hey!!, nice new letter AND pins
Mike! |
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MIKE
thanks, i don't know were to put
my pins around my letter |
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SARA
Here (puts his pin in his letter
in a better spot) |
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MIKE
Woah thanks! it looks great! |
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BILLY
So are we gunna start walking? |
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BILLY
(high fiving Mike
handing him the
note secretly)
forgot to say, nice new jacket |
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start walking home and joking around |
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INT. MIKES HOME - DAY |
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Mike is sitting on his bed, bored so he picks up the phone |
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MIKE
Hey Katie, so what did you say you
were doin tomorow night? |
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KATIE
Hey Mike! nothing, why whats up? |
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MIKE
Well i was just wondering if you
wanted to go see a movie tomorrow
night... |
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KATIE
YEA!! ok so what time should we
meet? |
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MIKE
umm... six sound good to you? |
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KATIE
Ok, ill be counting the minutes |
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THE PHONE CLICKS OFF |
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MIKE
(dials another
number)
Hey is Billy there?
Thanks |
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MIKE
I just got off the phone with
Katie |
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BILLY
oh no way man! niice.. what did
she say? |
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MIKE
well.. i asked her to the movies
tomorow... |
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BILLY
wait.. you sound sad.. did she say
no?? |
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MIKE
HAHA PSYCHH!!! no dude she said
yes!! |
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MIKE
but ive never done this before..
what do i do? |
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BILLY
oh god... weve got a lot of work
to do.. |
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INT. OUTSIDE - DAY |
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MIKE
YOU WHATT!?!? I THOUGHT WE WERENT
GUNNA TELL HER!!! |
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BILLY
dude chill, we are gunna have a
lot of work to do before tomorow
night and i cant do it by myself |
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MIKE
ok fine.... it better be worth
it... |
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SARA
(walking in, stops
and sighs)
ok.. lets get this going |
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MIKE
yea... so what are we going to do
to help me? |
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SARA
dont ask unless its important, we
have little time and lots to do |
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INT. 'MOVIE THEATRE' - DAY |
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we appear in what we think is the movie theatre with mike
and katie sitting next to each other |
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KATIE
im having a real good time tonight
thanks for coming with me |
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MIKE
so am i, (whispers something in
her ear) |
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camera is about the perspective of the reel for the movie,
as we see them of what we think is making out. the camera
goes up and looks at the movie screen and starts going up to
the ceiling and fades. |
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MR D
THIS SHOWS HARD WORK BUT IM NOT
REALLY SURE WHAT THE POINT IS.
THERE NEEDS TO BE SOME THING TO
OVERCOME OR CHANGE. WHY THE
FUMBLE? |
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FADE OUT. |
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Feedback |
From Chris |
Date 5/28/2009 |
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Why does one guy say til midnight, then the next guy says til 3? |
From Marcus Robinault |
Date 2/2/2008 |
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It was okay, but extremely vague. Where are they? What are they doing? What do they look like? These are questions that you need to answer! |
From J.J |
Date 1/30/2008 |
0 stars |
First off, why was that rated PG? Now, this script has no direction. I had no idea what was going on. Movies are a visual media. I could not imagine what any of the characters looked like, how old they were etc. This needs to be described. This really didn't have that good of a plot either. The dialog was awful. It really wasn't believable at all. There were also a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. There's more I could talk about, but I won't waste my time. |
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