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by Adam (outcomesthewolves@yahoo.com)
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Genre: Comedy
User Review: 
Just a short film I had to make for school about Super heroes.
This screenplay is copyrighted to its author. All rights reserved. This screenplay may not be used or reproduced without the express written permission of the author.
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MR. PIBB
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EXT. HOOVER DAM - DAY |
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HOW MR. PIBB GETS HIS POWERS. |
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We see Mr. Pibb walking along the shore of hoover dam by
himself. He's just walking with his hands in his pockets,
not happy, not sad. Suddenly, someone uknown runs up and
pushes him into the water, just feet from a sign that says
radioactive. |
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NARRATOR (VO)
(Epic)
I was just your average guy.
Lonely, but who isn't anyways. I
was just taking a walk alongside
radioactive hoover dam. Who could
have guessed that on this day my
life would change forever.
Probably only god. |
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EXT. HOOVER DAM - DAY |
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We see Mr. Pibb rising from the water where he was pushed
in. Now, instead of his regular outfit, he's wearing a
superhero costume. He walks up to the shore and strikes a
pose. |
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NARRATOR (VO)
(Epic)
On that day, I was born again. I
now had super human powers, and a
world of possibilities. The only
question was, what to do with this
gift. |
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INT. ROOM - DAY |
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Mr. Pibb walks up to a baby doll who has a peice of candy.
He takes the candy and hits the baby. |
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NARRATOR (VO)
(Less Epic, but
still Epic)
First I tried using my powers to
take advantage of infants. |
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2.
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EXT. NATURE - DAY |
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Mr. Pibb walks up to an elderly woman and takes her purse
and runs. Someone runs up, grabs the purse, and pushes him
into water. |
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NARRATOR (VO)
I then tried taking advantage of
the elderly, but they were far to
wise. |
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INT. ROOM - DAY |
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Mr. Pibb is lying on the sofa seemingly asleep. Someone
unkown runs up and puts his hand in a glass of water. |
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NARRATOR (VO)
Nothing was working. My life had
no direction. I was drowning in
my own dispair, which is when i
discovered my only weakness. I
couldn't swim. But then I saw
something. Something that would
change me forever. |
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Mr. Pibb is sitting watching something on TV. |
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NARRATOR (VO)
(With Power)
March Of The Penguins. My life
suddenly had meaning. I knew
exactly why I had recieved these
powers. I had to help those in
need. |
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EXT. NATURE - DAY |
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Mr. Pibb is standing in pose. We hear a girl somewhere off
the camera screaming. Mr. Pibb cocks his ear. |
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MR. PIBB
(Heroically)
There's a girl who needs my help.
I must give it to her. |
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Mr. Pibb runs off screen and up to a girl. |
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MR. PIBB
Why are you screaming young lady?
(Girl)
That man stole my purse! |
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She points towards someone unknown running. Mr. Pibb takes
off after him and does a running tackle into the water. He
rises out of the water and runs back to the girl |
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MR. PIBB
(Mr. Pibb)
I believe this belongs to you.
(Girl)
Oh thank you Mr. Pibb. How can I
ever repay you.
(Mr. Pibb)
Why don't you stop by my place
later toninght. You can repay me
then. |
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Mr. Pibb winks and they both smile and look at each other
flirtatiously. Suddenly, Mr. Pibb turns around and runs
away. |
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INT. SCENE 7 - DAY |
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We see Mr. Pibb sitting outside sipping a pepsi. From
behind him, we see a figure walking up. |
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DR. PEPPER
(Ominous Voice)
At last we meet, Mr. Pibb.
(Mr. Pibb)
Who are you? Are you the
Antagonist?
(Dr. Pepper)
Yes. My name is Dr. Pepper. I've
come to destroy you. |
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Mr. Pibb stands up and faces Dr. Pepper. He slowly pulls
out a can of Mr. Pibb as does Dr. Pepper. Except of course,
instead of pulling out a Mr. Pibb, he pulls out a Dr.
Pepper. |
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MR. PIBB
You cannot destroy me. It is I
who shall destroy you. |
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He throws the can of Mr. Pibb at Dr. Pepper who throws a Dr.
Pepper at Mr. Pibb and back and forth. Eventually Mr. Pibb
pulls out a diet RC cola from his pocket which he sprays Dr.
Pepper with. |
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DR. PEPPER
Ohhhhh. How'd you know my weakness
was diet RC cola?
(Mr. Pibb)
Because, Dr. Pepper, no on likes
(MORE)
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DR. PEPPER (cont'd)
diet RC cola. |
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Mr. Pibb turns around and walks away leaving Dr. Pepper in
his misery. |
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THE END |
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| Feedback |
| From Josh A. Echevarria |
Date 4/10/2008 |
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| I enjoyed it. I laughed a few times. Its corny but not in an annoying, bad way. one thing, I thought that his weakness was water? How come there are so many times that he is pushed into water and then just gets up and walks away? But yea, well formatted, well written. Good work. |
| From Lucas |
Date 4/9/2008 |
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| pretty good i thought it was funny but it needs to be more discriptive. |
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