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American Dreamin
by Lemarze Smith (playerworldent@yahoo.com)

Rated: R   Genre: Drama   User Review:
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This is story about four boy's from Detroit who all have the same dream, being the best rap group in the world. On their way to the top they have trouble and learning experince's this is ment to be a T.V. series for hbo,showtime or cinamax. This is just a taste of what you will get if it actually get's made.


This screenplay is copyrighted to its author. All rights reserved. This screenplay may not be used or reproduced without the express written permission of the author.



FADE IN:

EXT. RIDING DOWN THE STREETS OF DETROIT - NIGHT
                                                            
Miles and Street's are riding in Miles car on their way to 7
mile to pick up Hood and Trigga Finga. While the car is
rolling on the streets of Detroit one of their tracks play
while the credits open, they roll up into the 7 mile
projects and we see Hood and Trigger Finger run to get in
the car but first Trigga Finga puts a duffel bag in the
trunk, the music plays the entire time their in the car.The
car drives off into the city heading to Highland Park.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
      (Pulls out a bag
       of weed.)
A nigga roll this up and lets
light some fire in this bitch.
                                                            
                       MILES
Nigga you better put that shit
away in my car, you know i don't
allow someking in here.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Come the fuck on Miles man don't
start that shit now I need to get
these niggas relaxed if we gone do
this.
                                                            
Miles cell phone is ringing.
                                                            
                       MILES
Nigga you know the rule you should
have did that shit before you left
the house.
      (Answers the phone)
Hello.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
This motherfucker is worst than my
mother.
                                                            
Andrea is in a bedroom with a guy who is make noise from the
bathroom, she is half naked and on the phone with Miles.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
      (Whispering)
You guy's have to hurry up, where
are you?
                                                            

2.

                       MILES
We like around the corner why?
                                                            
                       ANDREA
I'm stuck in a room with this guy
and he's trying to pay me to fuck
him, I played along but you know I
don't do shit like that Miles you
got to fucking hurry up.
                                                            
                       MILES
Alright! Alright! we gone be there
in minute bye!
                                                            
                       STREETS
Whats up?
                                                            
                       MILES
We got to hurry up somebody trying
to pay Andrea to fuck her.
                                                            
                       HOOD
So! Tell that bitch to lay down
take the dick and take the money,
hustle game motherfuckers.
                                                            
                       MILES
Shut the fuck up hood.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Anybody there got guns?
                                                            
                       MILES
I don't know. But remember don't
shot anybody.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Don't shoot anybody and you don't
know if anybody got guns fuck that
nigga, remember the pack fellas if
one shoot we all shoot.
                                                            
The car pulls up to curb in Highland Park way down the
street from the house that the boys are going to and stops,
the credits stop and the music stops. They get out the car
go to the trunk and open up Trigga Fingas bag so that he can
give out the guns.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
      (Opens the bag)
Alright boys we got some heavy
hardware and some ski mask to hide
our faces.
                                                            

3.

Trigga Finga hands Miles a silver gun.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Miles you get this nice shiny
bitch, cause I know you like your
bitch's nice and shiny.
                                                            
Trigga Finga gives Streets a black gun.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Streets you get this black one
cause I know you a true brother.
                                                            
Trigga Finga hands hood a very small gun.
                                                            
                       HOOD
Why I gotta get this Small piece
of shit?
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Cause that's what you are nigga.
Lets go take money.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Hold up. We going in here to take
they money not shoot everybody we
see in there.
                                                            
Streets, Miles and Hood looks at Trigga Finga.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
What the fuck is y'all looking at
me for?
                                                            
                       MILES
I don't know, why do we call you
Trigga Finga?
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Man Fuck all this talking lets go.
                                                            
The boys start walking towards the house with ski mask on.
                                                            
 
INT. STRIP PARTY ROBBERY - NIGHT
                                                            
Inside the house it's a strip party going on with about four
girls and 7 to 8 guy's, the boys break in and scares
everyone.
                                                            

4.

                       TRIGGA FINGA
Everybody empty your fucking
pockets strip all your cloths off
and get on the fucking floor.
                                                            
                       HOOD
Lady's look like y'all half way
there so just get naked.
                                                            
The guy upstairs with Andrea hears everything going on
downstairs so he gets his gun and starts to creep down,
while he's creeping down slowly Trigga Finga see him out the
corner of his eye the guy point's his gun at Miles head and
Trigga Finga instantly shoots the guy in the head killing
him. Gun fire starts to break out from most of the guys
there Andrea Rush's down stairs with a pistol in her hand.
One guy snatches Hood's hand and makes him empty his pistol
than he pulls a gun out and holds on Hood's head than Andrea
shoots the guy in the wrist, she than rushes upstairs and
another guy follows her and miles follows him she jumps out
the window with out the guy seeing her and miles catch the
guy in the room and pistol whips him. Streets gets his gun
shot out of his hand when he is about to shoot someone than
Trigga Finga shoots the guy in the chest three times killing
him than Trigga Finga and Hood starts wrestling with three
guy's. Streets is helpless with out a gun when a guy has him
staring down the barrel of a nine the guy pulls the trigger
but the weapon isn't loaded he than runs out the house and
Streets runs after him and chase him into some ones backyard
leading to a to tall brick wall where the guy is now
cornered and Streets picks up the rock and throw it at his
face and he starts beating the guy until he is out cold.
Streets than walks back to Miles house where Miles and
Andrea are in the basement.
                                                            
                       STREETS
What the fuck happened to y'all
two.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
This guy fucking guy was trying to
kill me and Miles saved my life.
                                                            
                       MILES
Where the fuck is Trigga Finga and
Hood?
                                                            
                       STREETS
I don't know I had to fuck this
nigga up.
                                                            
Trigga Finga and hood rolls in.
                                                            

5.

                       HOOD
The fucking cops came nigga
everybody broke the fuck out.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Nigga what the fuck you killing
niggas for what we say!
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Nigga if I ain't bust my heat you
and Miles would be laid out right
now!
                                                            
                       MILES
Nigga you got blood all over me.
                                                            
                       HOOD
I don't think you should be
worried about the blood.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Look fuck all that, how much we
get?
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
A little over 4 g's motherfucker.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
Well good give me my cut so I can
go home.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
You better go strip or something
you don't get no fucking cut you
aint do shit.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
I didn't do shit, you stupid bitch
I fucking set the whole thing up
asshole give me my fucking money.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
You gone have to kill me first.
                                                            
Andrea pulls her gun out and points it at Trigga Fingas
head, Miles hurries up and pulls her away.
                                                            
                       MILES
Hey! Trigga Finga give her a g.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
What nigga we gotta buy studio
equipment.
                                                            

6.

                       MILES
Give her a g, Streets tell him to
give her g.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Give her a g nigga.
                                                            
Trigga Finga very angry counts out a thousand dollars and
throws it on the table, Andrea picks it and gives Trigga
Finga the finger and leaves.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
See you tomorrow Miles!
                                                            
                       STREETS
Alright so tomorrow is Saturday we
all go home get some sleep and
meet up at my house around one so
we can go get this equipment so we
can start making hot tracks.
                                                            
                       HOOD
Where we gone keep the money?
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
With me.
                                                            
                       HOOD
Why with you?
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Cause I already got it.
                                                            
                       HOOD
What if I wanted to take it?
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
I'll shoot you.
                                                            
                       MILES
Look just let this nigga keep the
money we all gone see each other
tomorrow.
                                                            
All the boys start to walk up the stairs and the screen goes
to black.
                                                            
 
INT. MILES HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
Miles wakes up and looks at the clock the clock reads
11:00am, he gets up and goes into the shower while he's in
the shower the screen freeze and a quick description of him

7.

comes up. He goes back into his room gets dressed and than
picks up the gun he was using the night before, he empties
the clip with the bullets and puts the clip in his far back
drawer at the very bottom. He wraps the gun up in a towel
than he throws on his hoodie and put the toweled gun in the
pocket of his hoodie. He walks out the house very quickly.
                                                            
                       MILES
I'll be back later ma!
                                                            
 
INT. MILES AT HIS CAR - DAY
                                                            
Miles goes to his car than realizes he doesn't have any gas
he looks across the street at Andrea's Pondering on if he
should go over there and ask for gas money. In Andrea's
house she has a one year old brother who's in a play pin
crying and an eight year old sister who's watching TV. in
the living room Andrea is arguing with her mother in
Spanish, Miles walks in and the arguing stops.
                                                            
 
INT. ANDREA'S HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
                       ANDREA
Hey Miles! how you doing?
                                                            
                       MILES
Tired you know.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
I need to ask you a favor. you
think you can be a best friend and
take me to the store for diapers
and food? cause apparently I'm a
17 year old mother with no life.
      (directing the
       last comment at
       her mother.)
                                                            
                       MILES
Yeah I got you I was just about to
ask you for some gas money, gotta
hook up with the boys later on.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
um, well I guess i got you boo.
                                                            
 
INT. MILES AND ANDREA GO TO THE STORE - DAY
                                                            
On their way to the car the guy who Andrea shot in the wrist
the night before notices who she is from a distance walking

8.

with Miles he than starts to follow them from a distance in
his car. They get into the car and start heading towards the
store.
                                                            
                       MILES
So what you got up for tonight, we
should do something we haven't
chilled in a long time.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
Sorry I gotta strip the whole
weekend and Monday then I have my
day job during the rest of the
week.
                                                            
                       MILES
Monday I thought you didn't strip
on monday's
                                                            
                       ANDREA
Well since I had a little party
for you and your friends last
night I have to make up for it on
Monday. but hey why don't you come
to my house and come to work with
me you can watch me dance on a
pole.
                                                            
                       MILES
Naw I cant do that.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
Come on you never seen me dance
before, I don't care if you see me
naked I just don't want your
greesy friends to see me.
                                                            
                       MILES
Na that would be crossing
boundry's.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
Ok if you say so.
                                                            
                       MILES
Why you got to work so much?
                                                            
                       ANDREA
When your mother doesn't work or
none of her baby fathers pay child
support than you got to do what
you got to do. I mean me and my
brother and sister have to eat.
                                                            

9.

                       MILES
Look I'm gone take care of you one
day make sure you don't have to
strip no more aight.
                                                            
                       ANDREA
O.k.
                                                            
They pull up to the store when they get out of the car Miles
see a dumpster and throw the gun wrapped in a towel in the
dumpster.
                                                            
 
INT. TRIGGA FINGA INSIDE THE PARTY STORE - DAY
                                                            
Trigga Finga is at Musah party store on 7 mile auguring with
his father and telling Musah to hurry up and he also
threaten to rob the store.
                                                            
                       MUSAH FATHER
Get the fuck out of my store you
very very black man.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Shut yo old ass up motherfucker.
I'll rob this bitch.
                                                            
                       MUSAH FATHER
What bitch im no bitch yo a bitch.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
I didn't call you a bitch I said
I'm gone rob this bitch, this
store.
                                                            
                       MUSAH FATHER
Fuck you get out of my store
before I call the cops, and I know
that they don't like black man, i
don't like black man and i don't
like you.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
A Musah get out here before I blow
yo dads brains open, I'm not
fucking around I'll fuck this old
man up!
                                                            
The screen freezes in the middle of the auguring and a quick
description of Trigga Finga pops up. After the description
Musah finally comes out.
                                                            

10.

                       MUSAH
OK OK alright, both of you shut
the fuck your both week wanna be
gangsta's who aint about shit.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Fuck you nigga I ain't no wanna be
gangsta im the real thing bitch.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
Ha! my dad think he's Scarface and
you think your 50 cent.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Nigga I'm a true G nigga wait
until I tell you what we did last
night.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
What rob an eleven year old for
some ice cream by doing a drive
bye on a 10 speed with water
bloons and a water gun.
                                                            
Trigga Finga walks out the store and walks towards Musah's
car, Musah follows behind him.
                                                            
 
EXT. TRIGGA FINGA AND MUSAH INSIDE MUSAH'S CAR - DAY
                                                            
Musah and Trigga Finga get in the car and start smoking
weed.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
What the fuck did you do last
night.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
We robbed like seven or eight
niggas out by Miles crib.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
No fucking way.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Hell fucking way dude! We had this
little bitch set up a strip arty
than we broke in there made
everybody strip nigga i popped two
motherfuckers in the head.
                                                            

11.

                       MUSAH
Wait a minute you guys killed
people.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
No I killed people I'm the only
one with hart I had to save my
niggas Miles and Streets. If it
wasn't for me those niggas would
be dead right now.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
Damn how much did you fuckers get.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Over 4 stacks but this dumb ass
nigga Miles made me give some
money to that bitch Andrea. I
shouldn't have gave that bitch
nothing but some dick.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
You cant fuck her I here she
doesn't fuck guy's like that.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
It figures dike ass bitch. you
should have seen this pussy ass
nigga, give her some money
Streets make him give her some
money!
                                                            
                       MUSAH
So what the fuck are you guy's
gonna do with all that money.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
They think we gone buy some studio
equipment but you taking me to buy
a new car from yo home boy.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
What the fuck, we need that studio
equipment that shit would do me
some good to I'm the fucking
producer. their gonna be fucking
pissed.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Relax motherfucker I got something
better than studio equipment.
                                                            

12.

                       MUSAH
What? and you better not say
pussy.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
The other day I was smoking with
this nigga name felon.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
Yeah I heard of him big time
gangsta in Detroit from the Bronx
New York. so what does that have
to do with you.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Well he told me he's looking to
start a record label, he said he
got all types of connections and
contacts but he just don't have
the right act, so I slid him a
copy of our demo and he said he
want to meet with us today around
four, If everything goes good than
everything is good he gone help us
put together a album and we gone
help him launch his record label.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
You better hope this shit don't
blow up in your face.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
It wont. So how much you think I
can get this whip for.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
twelve hundred.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Twelve Hundred, Whooooo! nigga I'm
gone be riding clean boy!
                                                            
 
INT. HOODS APARTMENT - DAY
                                                            
Hood is in his bedroom with his little brother playing video
games.
                                                            
                       HOOD
You cant fuck with me in no madden
little nigga I don't even know why
pick up the sticks.
                                                            

13.

                       HOOD'S LITTLE BROTHER
Shut up Chris.
                                                            
                       HOOD
You shut up, you just mad cause
I'm about to dub yo little ass
biscuit boy!
                                                            
While hood his talking smack the screen freezes on a close
up of Hood and gives a quick description of him. Hoods
mother than comes in his room and finds his loaded gun.
                                                            
                       HOODS MOTHER
Chris, what is this?
                                                            
                       HOOD
What is what?
                                                            
                       HOODS MOTHER
Why the fuck do you have a gun in
my house boy? Are you fucking
crazy you got you little brother
in here and shit what the fuck is
wrong with you.
                                                            
                       HOOD
I got to go Ma, don't worry about
it.
                                                            
He quickly gets up and leaves out the house.
                                                            
                       HOODS MOTHER
Don't worry about it Chris! Chris!
get yo ass back here! I'm calling
yo father!
                                                            
 
INT. STREETS FRONT PORCH - DAY
                                                            
Streets is sitting on his front porch taking calls and a
couple of people come up and sort of secretly buy drugs from
him. His down the street neighbor Fred walks up and as he is
giving him a hand shake the screen freezes a quick
description of him comes up. Him and his neighbor sit on the
porch talking.
                                                            
                       STREETS
A nigga whats up with that little
bitch you be smoking with at yo
house.
                                                            

14.

                       FRED
Oh that shit nigga we just be
chilling, drinking, smokeing.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Fucking.
                                                            
Fred begins laughing historically.
                                                            
                       FRED
Naw it ain't like that at all.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Shit, I seen that little bitter,
for a white girl she got a little
ass on her, I know Musah fucked,
probably still fucking her, I
would fuck her but i think Trigga
Finga fucked and I don't fuck with
no bitch Trigga Finga fucked.
                                                            
Fred starts laughing, some one else come up to buy some
drugs from Streets while the exchange is being made Felon
has one of his guys driving him around in a Benz and see
what Streets is doing and smiles.
                                                            
                       FELON
I remember that used to be me
selling, now I'm the fucking
kingpin of this shit. I don't know
who that is but remind me that I
got get a piece of that, I cant
have these young niggas thinking
they can do whatever whereever.
                                                            
                       BLACK FOOT
Got it Boss.
                                                            
Felon drives off Miles pulls up and walks up to Streets.
                                                            
                       MILES
What up nigga. What up Freddy Fred
what you been up to nigga I ain't
seen you in a minute.
                                                            
                       FRED
Shit I'm just chilling going to
school nigga trying get my bred up
the hard way, I ain't no superstar
like y'all niggas.
                                                            
                       MILES
A you hear the new demo.
                                                            

15.

                       FRED
yeah man it's tight but the
quality kind of fucked up though.
                                                            
                       MILES
I know we cant get no radio
stations to play it and they said
no labels will listen to anything
that sounds like that. so we bout
to go get some new equipment
today.
                                                            
                       FRED
Word.
                                                            
Trigga Finga and Musha Pull up in Trigga Fingas new car.
They all looked shocked to see Trigga Finga with a car.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Is that Trigga Finga in a fucking
car.
                                                            
                       FRED
Where the fuck that nigga get a
car from. I just saw him walking
home from school yesterday.
                                                            
                       MILES
      (Looking at
       streets)
I wonder?
                                                            
Trigga Finga and Musah get out the car walking towards
Streets porch.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
What up niggas, what you think,
nice huh?
                                                            
                       STREETS
Yeah but where you get the money
for a car.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
The money from last night.
                                                            
                       MILES
The money from last nigga you
crazy we could have got killed
last night and you go and do this
bullshit.
                                                            

16.

                       TRIGGA FINGA
But you didn't get killed cause I
saved your life, I think of this
car as your thank you to me.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Nigga what the fuck is we gone do
about the studio equipment.
                                                            
                       MILES
How much did this cost?
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Relax it cost three thousand
dollars.
                                                            
Musah cuts his eye's at Trigga Finga
                                                            
                       MILES
So what the fuck is we gone do
now? we not doing it again.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Look I got us a meeting today with
this guy starting up a new record
label, his name is felon and he's
looking for a new act I showed him
our demo and he liked it, if he
likes us today we have a perfect
studio to record in anytime we
want.
                                                            
                       STREETS
What time is this meeting.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Four.
                                                            
                       STREETS
That's about a hour away we better
get going.
                                                            
                       MILES
you going along with this?
                                                            
                       STREETS
We ain't got no choice, its no
sense in arguing we might as well
take what we got.
                                                            
Hood runs up and tell them what happened to him he is out of
breath.
                                                            

17.

                       MILES
Shit now whats wrong with this
nigga?
                                                            
                       HOOD
      (Out of breath)
My moms found my gun she talking
shit. what should I say I just
left nigga.
                                                            
                       MILES
Just tell her you found the gun
and you was wondering how to
shooting one.
                                                            
                       HOOD
you think that's gone work?
                                                            
                       STREETS
Its better than telling her what
you did last night nigga.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Look we ain't got no time for this
bullshit we gotta go.
                                                            
                       HOOD
Where the fuck is we going? And
who's car is this?
                                                            
The boys including Musha all pile in Trigga Fingas car to
head over to felons as they pull off the guy who was
following miles is still following them from a distance.
                                                            
 
EXT. TRIGGA FINGAS CAR - DAY
                                                            
While in the car Trigga Finga sparks up some weed mainly to
bug Miles because Miles doesn't allow smoking in his car.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Its about to get cloudy in this
bitch so I hope nobody ain't got
no objections. Cause this is my
car and I smoke the riff Raff when
I want good laugh.
                                                            
Miles is looking at Trigga Finga very angry from the back
seat. Streets is in the front passenger seat, hood is in the
back behind streets and Musah is in the middle, they begin
to pass the weed around between the four of them leaving out
Miles cause he doesn't smoke. Trigga see a couple of girls

18.

walking down the street and the honks the horn twice him and
Hood start acting crazy and making noises towards the girls.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Whooo! Whats up baby! my back
seat is real spacey Ha Haaaaaa!
                                                            
                       HOOD
Goddamn look nigga she got some
BOOBIES! pull over nigga let me
holla.
                                                            
                       MILES
Come on man we ain't got no time.
                                                            
                       HOOD
nigga its always time for pussy.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Nigga just wait til I hook my ride
up I'm gone be flashing! getting
all the hoes. it's gone be black
nigga, black car, black tents,
black rims. they ain't gone be
able to say no, I'm gone have a
lot of puss puss in the cuss cuss.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Ha ha! nigga what you say.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Im gone have a lot o puss puss in
the cuss cuss.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! nigga what the
fuck do that mean.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Nigga i don't know but I'm gone
put it in one my rhymes cause its
mines.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! you a silly
motherfucker.
                                                            
They pull up at Felons Birmingham home and the notice a
beautiful girl moving in on the same block.They all get out
of the car and start walking slowly looking at, the girl
notice the boys looking at her, she smiles and waves than
her father see her smiling and waveing at the boys and pulls
her inside the house.
                                                            

19.

                       TRIGGA FINGA
Damn! she is bad!
                                                            
                       MILES
She was perfect she had
everything.
                                                            
                       STREETS
What? Miles approves with yo picky
ass you know if this nigga approve
than she gotta be a piece.
                                                            
                       MILES
Shut up streets.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
I wonder if she go to our school.
                                                            
                       HOOD
If she go to our school or not I'm
gone get it.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Nigga you ain't getting shit
before me. when I'm done with her
you can have my sloppy seconds.
                                                            
                       HOOD
Nigga put a buck on it.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Its a bet nigga.
                                                            
They shake on it.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
My moneys on Trigga.
                                                            
                       HOOD
Don't you got extra skin over your
dick that makes hard for you to
get pussy.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
Hey, I was circumcised asshole.
                                                            
 
INT. FELONS HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
They knock at the door and Felon's Keisha answers the door.
                                                            
                       KESHA
Can I help you?
                                                            

20.

                       TRIGGA FINGA
Yes we have a meeting with Felon,
you can tell him Trigga Finga is
here with his group.
                                                            
She looks Trigga Finga up and down looking at him wondering
why he calls him self Trigga Finga.
                                                            
                       KESHA
Trigga Finga? yeah right.come in.
                                                            
They enter Felons house and they all notice how attractive
his wife is.
                                                            
                       KESHA
Baby Trigga Finga and his group
are here to see you.
                                                            
From another room
                                                            
                       FELON
OK tell them ill be right down.
                                                            
                       KESHA
He'll be right down, you boys can
follow me to the living room and
have seat while you wait.
                                                            
She turns around and Hood and Trigga Finga start making
faces toward each other looking at her butt.
                                                            
                       MILES
This a nice house you all got here
miss.
                                                            
                       KESHA
Mrs.James you can call me
Mrs.James and thank you would you
boys like anything to drink or eat
while wait.
                                                            
Felon comes right in the room wearing a robe with a t-shirt
and basketball shorts under it on his robe is an F stitched
into it. he has flip-flops on with white socks on.
                                                            
                       FELON
Baby you can get every body some
lemonade OK. fellas let me take
you guys to the music room.
                                                            
                       MILES
James huh? My first name is James.
                                                            

21.

                       FELON
So, My middle name is money now
let's go talk about how we gone
make some.
                                                            
Felon walks them to his music room and they notice that he
feeds his dogs gun powder. has passes by his seven year old
son.
                                                            
                       FELON
Hey son, where you headed of to?
                                                            
                       ALLAN
To the video game room.
                                                            
                       FELON
Alright but before you go I want
to introduce you to daddy's new
group. Fellas Introduce your
selves.
                                                            
                       MILES
Whats up little man I'm Miles
                                                            
                       STREETS
Whats happening I'm Streets
                                                            
                       HOOD
I'm Hood.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
      (Making trigger
       pulling gestures.)
I'm your boy Trigga Finga.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
And I'm Musha the producer.
                                                            
                       ALLAN
Well I'm Allen James and I'm seven
years old now can i go play video
games now daddy?
                                                            
                       FELON
Yeah get outta here lil nigga.
                                                            
Allen runs off and the y all go straight to the Music room,
inside the music room a big radio with wall to wall surround
sound. and a producers table. Felons producer Uzan Oz is in
the music room when they walk in there is loud music playing
already and Felon begins to talk over the beat.
                                                            

22.

                       FELON
      (Yelling over the
       music.)
So you niggas wanna be in the rap
game. Turn that down for me Uzan.
                                                            
Uzan turns the music down you can still here it play very
softly in the background. Kesha bring a trey with a few
glasses of lemonade on it she put it down on a table and
everyone grabs a glass.
                                                            
                       FELON
Thank you baby you can go upstairs
I'll be after I'm done.This is my
producer Uzan Oz. Uzan This is
Miles, Streets, Hood and Trigga
Finga.
                                                            
Musah clears his throat loudly letting Felon know he forgot
them.
                                                            
                       FELON
Oh and this is musah. What do you
call yourselves.
                                                            
                       STREETS
We don't exactly have a name yet
but...
                                                            
                       FELON
you better come up with one if you
gone be working with me, now y'all
gone be working directly with Uzan
I know what he does and how he
does it and I like it. Musah you
can come down show me what you got
and maybe I can hook you up with a
job, you can start off as a
respectable intern maybe moping
floors and shit.
                                                            
Musah is looking at Felon very angry.
                                                            
                       FELON
Now this young man right here
nigga trigga said that y'all the
shit. Now he dropped me a demo, im
gone be real that shit had very
poor quality but i can fill some
lyrics, some creativity. But see I
believe that the showing is in the
putting if you know What I meen.
Uzan.
                                                            

23.

                       UZAN
Yeah boss.
                                                            
                       FELON
Put that track on we was working
on yesterday I want these lil
niggas to freestyle to it one by
one.
                                                            
Uzan Puts n a beat and Felon listens to a freestyle from
each one of them and like Miles, Streets and Hood, he seems
concerned win he learns that Trigga Finga cant freestyle.
                                                            
                       FELON
Whats that bullshit, you cant
freestyle, what if you get called
out by another rapper.
                                                            
All the boys are looking at each other with blank looks on
their faces.
                                                            
                       FELON
Alright get out of my house you
boys waisted my time i don't want
work with you your not a complete
group.
                                                            
All the boys jump and start complaining at first but than
Miles take over.
                                                            
                       MILES
Alright wait! look he cant
freestyle or write that well but
we guarantee his delivery is
flawless and if we have to we will
sit down with him and teach him
how to freestyle and write. Do
not walk away on us, we are a
complete group and we have a
formula and chemistry that works,
just give us a real chance to cut
some tracks in your studio and
prove it to you.
                                                            
The room gets quiet for a minute all the boys are looking at
each other and Felon is thinking to him self than he breaks
silence.
                                                            
                       FELON
O.k. your boy is good with
convincing me, but no bullshit.
                                                            

24.

Felon give Streets a card with the address to the studio. on
the back of the card is the boys scheduled days for
recording.
                                                            
                       FELON
You go to this place to record on
School craft, your schedule is on
the back of the card we work
Monday, Wednesday and Friday from
eight until whenever. you boys
forget you ever came here and
never tell anybody I live here you
understand.
                                                            
All the boys shaking their heads and saying yes.
                                                            
                       FELON
Now get out of here.
                                                            
 
EXT. GOING TO TRIGGA FINGAS CAR - DAY
                                                            
The boys are walking toward Trigga Fingas car Trigga Finga
takes the card from Street's and start reading thinking that
they don't need it and throws it on the ground. after the
boys walk away the guy who was following come and picks up
the card reads it to himself and puts it in his pocket and
walks of the screen. Streets walks off by himself at first
to a path close by Felons house. In this place there is a
nice view of a waterfall, Streets stand close to the edge
looking into the air thinking the rest of the boy's follow
him.
                                                            
                       MILES
Whats on your mind player.
                                                            
                       STREETS
I just hope we making the right
decision I just don't want to be
makeing no deals with the devil.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Look man I'm telling y'all I see
something good coming out of this
I wouldn't have done it if I
didn't fill good about it.
                                                            
                       MILES
Yes you would have. but that
doesn't matter now cause we in
this togeather.
                                                            

25.

                       HOOD
That's right and I'm in it to win
it.
                                                            
                       MUSAH
What the fuck are we going to do
about this fucker letting me shine
and produce you guy's.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Don't worry about that we got you,
you started with us you gone end
with us.
                                                            
There's a wide shot of the boy's standing near the waterfall
zooming out.
                                                            
 
INT. G-REALAS HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
The guy who was following everyone name is G-reala and he
was shot in the Wrist by Andrea and Trigga Finga killed his
older bother. He is with his crew 2 other people.
                                                            
                       G-REALA
I saw that bitch that fucking shot
me in the wrist, and that punk ass
motherfucker that killed my
brother. I know where the be at
and I know they fucking schedule
so come Monday those sons of
bitch's going down.
                                                            
                       JIMMY
You sure it was them nigga.
                                                            
                       G-REALA
Yeah nigga I been following them
all day what the fuck you gone ask
me that for!
                                                            
                       MARCUS
Chill out G we just don't want to
kill the wrong people man, you
gone fuck around and shoot up the
whole city of Detroit trying to
find tham nigga's.
                                                            
                       G-REALA
I don't give a fuck they killed my
brother they all geting theirs.
                                                            
 

26.

INT. IN SCHOOL THE NEXT DAY - DAY
                                                            
It is Monday morning and Miles is in English class with
Angel.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Hey how you doing my name is angle
and you are.
                                                            
Angel is holding her hand out waiting for a handshake and
Miles doesn't look to anxious to talk to her, he cuts his
eyes at her twice in a roll before he says something.
                                                            
                       MILES
I'm James Sims, everybody calls me
Miles.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Why do they call you Miles?
                                                            
                       MILES
Cause I lived on just about every
Mile road in Detroit.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (Smiling at Mile
       in a flirting
       type of way.)
Well I think I'll call you James,
you know to separate me and you
from everybody else.
                                                            
Miles looks at here with a blank look on his face for about
five seconds.
                                                            
                       MILES
Yeah what do you want?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Welll! I noticed you have a car.
                                                            
Miles is looking at his paper working on his work.
                                                            
                       MILES
Um hm I notice you noticing shit.
                                                            
Angel ignores what he says and just keep on with her
sentence.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
And I was wondering if you can
take me home everyday since I live
a little ways away.
                                                            

27.

                       MILES
You got gas money for five days a
week.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
No.
                                                            
                       MILES
Well you have a problem.
                                                            
She just looks at Miles while he does his work for a second.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Asshole.
                                                            
 
INT. HALLWAY OF THE SCHOOL - DAY
                                                            
Later that day Trigga Finga, Hood and Streets are walking
down the hall at lunch and notice another rap group with a
crowd around them spitting consistent freestyle flows and
the crowd is filling them one of the guys from the other
group notice the boys walking and challenge the groups
leader Streets to a freestyle battle, the battle is to
rounds the first round street gets ate up, but the second
round streets go hard and gets his respect. After the battle
Trigga Finga notices Angel and all three guy's quickly walk
up and introduce there self's.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Hey how you doing sweetness, whats
your name?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
I'm Angel.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Well Angel I'm Trigga Finga and
this is Hood and Streets, What
brings you to our school are you
new here where do you come from?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
I'm from California my dads in the
Marines.
                                                            
                       HOOD
You got a boyfriend?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
No. I had one back in L.A. but you
know the long distance thing I'm
not for that.
                                                            

28.

                       TRIGGA FINGA
Well you know that we a rap group.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
O,really what do guy's call
yourself?
                                                            
All the boy's look at each other clueless.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Well we don't exactly have a name
yet.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
well, what do you rap about?
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
We rap about love, how to treat a
lady and you know the finer things
in life.
                                                            
Streets and Hood look at Trigga Finga like he's crazy.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Oh, I was hoping that you raped
about gansta music cause that's
what I like and being that your
name is Trigga Finga it just
seem....
                                                            
                       HOOD
Well we do gangsta music, us
softer ones in the group
incorporate the other stuff.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Good cause I'm hosting a talent
show down at the state theater in
about a week from now and I don't
want all that slow type music, we
need something to keep the crowd
hype and I was wondering if you
guy's wanted to perform.
                                                            
Angel hands Streets a flier and Streets reads some of it out
loud.
                                                            
                       STREETS
      (Reading of the
       flier)
Grand prize ten thousand dollars
and a record contract with a
surprise record label. Whats the
            (MORE)

29.

                       STREETS (cont'd)
label shady?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Sorry not allowed to tell.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Thanks but I don't think where
interested.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Really cause your friends that you
where just raping with already
entered.
                                                            
                       STREETS
They did. Sign us up.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Great I'll put you down as no name
for now but you'll need a name
before the o.k. and its just you
three right.
                                                            
                       STREETS
No it's one more of us his name is
Miles we just don't know where he
is right now.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Miles that's the asshole that want
to charge me ten dollars a day for
gas money to take me home.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Ten dollars a day that's uncalled
for. I will take you home everyday
for free.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
No problem that's what good men do
good shit, am I right.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Thank you.
                                                            
Hood shakes his head at Trigga Finga and gives him a mean
look.
                                                            
 

30.

EXT. ANDREA GETS CAUGHT - NIGHT
                                                            
Later that night Andrea leaves the house going to the strip
club she is being followed by G-reala and his crew of 4
other guys in an SUV. When they get to the strip club
G-reala goes inside.
                                                            
                       G-REALA
I'm going inside motherfuckers
make sure if she comes out you get
her ass and call me on my celly
ok.
                                                            
                       JIMMY
Aight nigga.
                                                            
Andrea puts on her strip show while not knowing that G-reala
is in the very back of the club watching. When her session
is over she leaves and starts to walk down a dark alley
where she meets up with G-reala he beats her and knock her
down on the ground rapes her and than shoots her thinking he
killed her. He than rushes to the car with his boys they
quickly drive off talking about how they are about to kill
the other guys.
                                                            
                       G-REALA
Lets go get those other
motherfuckers they on school craft
I know exactly where they at.
                                                            
 
INT. FELONS STUDIO - NIGHT
                                                            
The same night the guy's are in the studio and felon notice
that miles is the best one out of the four causes he writes
almost every course and has the best verse all the time.
Music is playing and Trigga Finga is in the booth doing his
part.
                                                            
                       FELON
Alright Uzan! Uzan! cut the music
Trigga Finga come out I need to
talk to you boys.
                                                            
Trigga Finga comes out the booth and they all sit around
Felon.
                                                            
                       FELON
What the fuck is going on here.
this nigga here gone make all the
money. now ask me why.
                                                            

31.

                       HOOD
Why?
                                                            
                       FELON
Cause he writing all the hooks to
your songs.
                                                            
                       STREETS
We only did two songs.
                                                            
                       FELON
So I can see this is how you do it
all the time, if not all the time
about 85% of the time, this is
your formula.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
Streets is the leader of the group
and that's the way streets wants
it.
                                                            
                       FELON
no little nigga I'm the leader of
this group you gone do what the
fuck I want you to do.
                                                            
The room gets quite for a second.
                                                            
                       FELON
He also has the best flow, you
boys need to get it together a
group is only good if everyone is
equal, if one person stands out
the group is no good cause that
person is gonna get great offers
that he cant refuse and be
something bigger than what the
rest of you are.Now Trigga Finga
told me about that little talent
show.
                                                            
Streets cuts his eyes at Trigga Finga.
                                                            
                       FELON
This is a big opportunity for us
fellas you can get your record
deal I can start my company, but
we have to stick together and as
of right now where not ready to go
to the talent show, but I'm going
to prep you and make sure your
ready. Now lets get back to work.
                                                            
 

32.

EXT. LEAVING FELONS HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
The boys begin leavening Felons house.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Man why you tell that nigga about
the talent show.
                                                            
                       TRIGGA FINGA
That's our boss I got to tell him
when we get a gig.
                                                            
                       STREETS
Man shut the fuck up.
                                                            
In he middle of the conversation gun shots start to go off
at the four boys and they all get behind the Trigga Fingas
car on the ground Trigga Finga pulls out his gun and starts
shooting at the car Felon comes out of the house with some
of his guy's with shot guns in hands at the time they think
that its some of Felons enemies
                                                            
                       FELON
What the Fuck is going on out
here?
                                                            
                       BLACK FOOT
Felon it's probably those guy's
from Highland Park who don't want
to give up there territory.
                                                            
                       FELON
Alright you boys stay here for the
night until everything is safe
come on everybody in the house.
                                                            
Everyone goes in the house the door closes and the screen
fades to black.
                                                            


FADE OUT.


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