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by Robby Baker & Omari Grier (grieor10@ea1785.org)
Rated: 
Genre: Comedy
User Review: 
Seniors is a comedy series with four best friends who attend Westbury High in Boston, Mass. All four friends have their own talents in which contributes to their popularity within the school. The series goes into the lives of the four friends and their journey as high school students.
This screenplay is copyrighted to its author. All rights reserved. This screenplay may not be used or reproduced without the express written permission of the author.
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SENIORS (PILOT)
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FADE IN:
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EXT. SUBURBAN NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY |
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The sun begins to rise as the birds start CHIRPING. Adults
are rushing out of their homes because their late for work.
Dogs BARKING as their being walked by their owners. |
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INT. BED ROOMS OF FOUR TEENAGE BOYS - DAY |
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Four teenage boys still in bed not knowing that the bus will
arrive in 15 minutes. All here the sound of one large BARK
from a pit bull! |
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FOUR SCREENS |
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SCREEN ONE:
LEWIS RAY CASHEN sits up quickly.
SCREEN TWO:
ASAD KALIL sits up quickly.
SCREEN THREE:
ORY FOX sits up quickly.
SCREEN FOUR:
JARRED DANIELS sits up quickly. |
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EVERYONE
Im Gonna be late! |
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EXT. BUS STOP - DAY |
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One boy, STEVEN QUEEN who differs from the rest, is standing
patiently at the bus stop with a few other kids. |
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STEVEN
(singing w/Ipod)
Never gonna give you up, never
gonna let you down, never gonna
run around and desert you! |
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Steven looks over and sees two kids laughing at him. Two
FRESHMAN KIDS. |
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FRESHMAN KID
(whispering and
snickering w/
friend)
And you thought I was a gay! |
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FRESHMAN KID #2
(laughing)
Yeah your right, this kid is a
total dork! |
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STEVEN
I can hear what your saying you
know, and Im not gay! |
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FRESHMAN KID
You're singing Rick Roll. And my
sister told me you're head of the
video game club and AV club. Yeah,
that's not gay! Sounds to me that
you like the taste of weiners! |
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He starts nudging freshman kid #2. They starts laughing in
unison. |
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FRESHMAN KID #2
(In agreement)
Yeah that sounds extremely
homo-rific! |
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STEVEN
Whatever! My friends are on their
way as we speak and I can
guarantee you that they don't
think I'm gay! |
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EXT. THOMPSON STREET - DAY |
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The four main characters; Lewis Ray, Asad, Ory, and Jarred
break out of their homes. They start running side by side
down the street to the bus stop. |
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EXT. BUS STOP - DAY |
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Lewis, Ory, Asad, and Jarred come running and reach the
stop, just as the bus arrives. |
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STEVEN
Finally you guys are here. I've
been waiting for hours! |
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JARRED
Shut the hell up Steven, you've
only been here 20 minutes! |
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STEVEN
(Being sarcastic)
Ha-Ha very funny Jarred! Anyways,
I have an important question to
ask! Don't just answer, think long
and hard about it, and then
answer. |
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slight pause |
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STEVEN
Do you guys think I'm
........(interupted by everyone) |
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EVERYONE
YES STEVEN YOUR GAY! |
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They all jump on the bus. The two freshmen kids push Steven
out of the way and get on the bus. |
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STEVEN
But, I like boobs! |
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The bus driver stares at Steven with a look of
disappointment. Steven looks back at the bus driver |
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Steve gets HIT with a PAPER ball. Everyone on the bus
laughs. He lowers his head in shame and gets on the bus. |
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"METRO STATION" SHAKE IT |
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EXT. BUS RIDE TO SCHOOL - DAY |
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The bus travels through the city of Boston. Bus passes by
pedestrian's walking their dogs down the street. Many people
are waiting along the street to catch the bus for work. View
of birds flying through the city. |
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EXT. WESTBURY HIGH - DAY |
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The Bus pulls up in front of Westbury High. Students exit
bus. All five boys stand next to each other in front of the
bus; from left to right: Steven, Asad, Ory, Lewis Ray, and
Jarred. |
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LEWIS RAY
Man I cant believe were seniors
already! Seems like our high
school careers have gone by so
fast, you know! |
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A football is soaring through the air in the direction of
Steven. The football collides with Stevens genitals. |
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STEVEN
(Groaning Voice)
OH MY GOD, MY JUNK! |
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Everyone begins walking up the school stairs not knowing
that Steve was hit in the genital area. Steven falls to the
ground grasping his junk. |
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A STUDENT runs over to retrieve the ball. |
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STEVEN
(High pitched)
I'm cool! |
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The Student walks away. Steven looks up and sees everyone
walking up the school steps. |
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STEVEN
Can someone get me some ice!
Hello! Guys comeback! |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, HALLWAYS - DAY |
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Asad, Ray Lewis, Ory, and Jarred walk the halls to class
while being recognized by everyone in school. Ory because of
his basketball achievements, Ray Lewis and his playwrights,
Jarred and his football achievements, And Asads success
academically. The boys finally reach Mr.Dubois class. |
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Lewis Ray and Jarred catch the eye of a very attractive
blonde as she walks down the hall with her group of friends. |
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INT. WEST BURY HIGH, MR. DUBOIS CLASS - DAY |
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They all enter the classroom, as the bell RINGS. They fill
up the back four seats. Mr.Dubois stands up from his desk
and walks to the front to address the class. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Welcome back everyone! And welcome
to Homeroom. Now I would like to
introduce you all to the new
students. I know this is a major
transition with changing schools
but I just want you to feel
welcomed. For the remaining time
of homeroom, I would like you, the
new students, to introduce
yourselves. I don't want you all
to feel embarrassed, but I would
like you to talk about your after
school activities and where you
previously attended school.
Starting with you. |
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He motions a lonely looking student named NED SPEAKS to the
front of the class. He's really shy. |
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Ned stands to his feet and walks to the front of the class
with his head low |
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NED SPEAKS
Um...Huh...Hi...um I'm....uhh... |
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JARRED
Wow, I guess this kids name is Ned
Speaks but he doesn't speak! How
Ironic! |
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Jarred says sarcastically while sticking his hand out to
Asad looking for a pound on the knuckles. |
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Asad smacks his hand away. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Wow Jarred, its wonderful to see
that you have a sense of
vocabulary, but can you please not
interrupt our speaker. Thank you. |
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Mr. Dubois takes his attention off of Jarred and focuses on
Ned. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Now Ned, I understand that your
nervous. If you would like to do
this another time, you may. |
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Ory cuts him off. |
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NED SPEAKS
(Low tone)
uhh...Yeah. |
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ORY
Okay, Well, My name is Ory, yes
very nice to meet you and all.
But, my point is that if you use
the method of picturing girls
naked while speaking. This method
takes stress of the mind of the
speaker and allows them to relax. |
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NED SPEAKS
(Low tone)
Yeah, sure... Umm... |
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Asad interrupts. |
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ASAD
So what he's trying to say, Ned,
is that if the boobies of the
gurls in the front row arent
satisfying you right now,then
maybe you should try to picture a
naked something else... You can
use me. That's all I'm Saying! |
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The classroom starts laughing. |
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Asad stares at Ned really serious. He breaks his stare and
looks at a pretty girl near him who is eyeing him. |
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ASAD
If there's anytime you get nervous
sweetheart, you can picture me
naked also. But, you never know, I
might already be naked, literally.
(Winks at her) |
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JARRED
Or you can simulate the experience
by thinking of an E-woke. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Wow Asad, Having the grades of a
genius and the mind of a 12 year
old doesnt really come together
for me. |
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Steven walks into class with a ice pack on his genitals. |
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MR. DUBOIS
(puzzled face)
Steve Queen, what
happened....Actually I dont wanna
know. Ill let your lateness slide. |
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STEVEN
Thanks Mr. Dubois. |
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STUDENT
(Mocking)
Ah.. Thanks Mr. Dubois. |
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Steven sits at a chair in front of Jarred. Ned is still
standing in front of class. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Okay Ned you can sit down. Maybe
Krusty The Clown would like to go
next?
(Pointing to Asad) |
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ASAD
(Being saracastic)
Very Funny Dubois, But Okay |
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Asad walks to the front. |
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ASAD
Hello everyone! My name is Asad
Kalil as you may already know.
Ummmm...Lets see....Im Iranian... |
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Student yells from the back of the classroom |
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STUDENT
Like we didnt notice! |
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ASAD
(Sarcastic)
Ha-Ha...
(Regular)
and Im related to Osama Bin-Ladin. |
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Some people gasp in fear. |
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ASAD
Totally joking ladies and
gentlemen. Please get a hold of
your jock strap! |
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ORY
(Sarcastic)
And Michael Jackson doesnt like
Chucky Cheese! |
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ASAD
Touche Ory! So like i was saying,
I have the fourth highest GPA in
Westbury High, No Big Deal, No Big
Deal. Thank you. |
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Asad sits down. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Lewis Ray Cashen your next. |
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Lewis Ray walks to the front of the class. |
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LEWIS RAY
Hello. My name is Lewis Ray
Cashen. I'm the head of the
students writing program and Drama
club. I wan't to work in Hollywood
when I get out of here, and I'm
5'8, but I'm 6'1 if I stand on my
penis. |
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The class laughs but it's cut short by Mr. Dubois standing
up. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Sit Down Lewis. Congratulations
you're my first detention getter. |
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Mr. Dubois escorts Lewis Ray back to his seat. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Let's try again. Jarred Daniels.
Your up. |
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Jarred walks to the front of the class. Mr. Dubois sits back
down at his desk. |
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JARRED
Okay, lets see, my name is Jarred
Daniels, aka The Dog. I made all
city as a wide receievr here at
Westbury. I love clothes and
shoes. I wear a size 14 shoe! And
you know what they say ladies, A
man with big feet has.... |
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Chinese Foreign Exchange Student in the front row cuts him
off! |
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CHINESE FOREIGN ES
Big Sox. |
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Chinese kid looks for laughs, that don't come. |
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JARRED
No you Chinese Va Jay Jay, Big
Penis! Well...in other terms so
you can understand...
(Chinease accent)
Huge egg role. |
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Mr. Dubios stops him before he can say anymore. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Okay that's enough Jarred, have a
seat please! You've just joined
your freind in detention. |
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Jarred walks back to his seat. |
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LEWIS RAY
(High pitched)
What UP! |
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Lewis Ray and Jarred high five. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Ory Fox, step up to the center. |
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Ory Fox steps to the front of the class. |
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ORY
Hey everyone, as you all know I'm
Ory Fox. Im an all city shooting
guard here at Westbury High. I
love traveling and girls.Speaking
of girls. I know most of you are
new to the school and I would love
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ORY (cont'd)
to get to know you better. |
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Ory looks over to Mr. Dubois as if he is doing the right
thing. Mr. Dubois gives him a nod in agreement. |
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ORY
So can you write your numbers down
area code first and pass them to
your left and I will come around
to collect them. If you do not get
a call by Saturday, Please, feel
free to call me! Thank you! Oh and
I almost for got, my number is... |
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Ory is cut off by Mr. Dubois. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Ory, Please have a seat! |
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The bell RINGS and everyone begins walking out. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Oh yeah class, Ill be goin out of
town tonight and wont be back
until tuesday so have a great
weekend! See you next tueday! |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, HALLWAYS - DAY |
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Lewis, Asad, Ory, Jarred, and Steven walk out of Home room.
They stand outside and look at their class schedules. |
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They all look at their schedules. |
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ASAD
At least we all got fifth period
lunch. |
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They all stand depressed and sad thinking about having to
leave each other. Steven looks over on Ory's schedule. |
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STEVEN
Cool I got History with you. |
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They all look down at Steven. |
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ORY
(upset)
Just when I thought this day
couldnt get any gayer! |
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MUSIC- "LONELY DAY" SYSTEM OF A DOWN |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, JARRED'S PHYSICS CLASS - DAY |
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Jarred walks into a physics class full of strangers. He
walks in and sits in the back. And stares out the window. |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, LEWIS RAY'S, ENGLISH CLASS - DAY |
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Lewis Ray walks into class and sits down at his seat and
stares out the window. |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, ASAD'S GYM CLASS - DAY |
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Asad is getting changed in the locker room staring at his
locker. People wrestling around in the background. |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, ORY'S HISTORY CLASS - DAY |
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Ory's sitting in class looking out the window. Steven is
next to him chatting away (We DON'T hear what Stevens
saying.) Ory pays him no attention. |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, LUNCH ROOM - DAY |
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The four sit down at the end of the table with a few other
kids sitting there. |
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ASAD
How do we have no other classes
together? |
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LEWIS RAY
It's a conspiracy. |
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JARRED
A conspiracy of what? |
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LEWIS RAY
It's obvious, they know we're the
quote un-quote trouble makers in
this school. They set it up so no
teacher would have to deal with us
simultaneously as a whole. |
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JARRED
You're nuts you know that right? |
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Lewis Ray looks deep into Jarred's eye's. |
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LEWIS RAY
You know I'm right. |
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Steven sits down next to Asad. |
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STEVEN
Hey guys.
Everyone at the table stops
talking and looks over to Steven. |
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JARRED
Steven... what the hell are you
doing here? |
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STEVEN
Eating a sandwhich... |
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Steven looks at them. |
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Steven takes a bite of his sandwich. |
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ORY
No duh your eating a sandwhich,
but why the hell are you eating it
here!? |
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STEVEN
Fine, If you dont want me to eat
here i'll leave! |
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Steven gets up and begins to walk away |
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ORY
Steve come back, Were just messin
around. |
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Steve turns back and sits down |
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JARRED
Guys Focus! This is a very big
year for us if u havent noticed!
Were seniors and things have gotta
change! |
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LEWIS RAY
He's right fellows, he's so right |
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JARRED
No more going to the movies where
there's little 14 year olds in the
rated R showings! |
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ORY
Tell it like it is bruh! |
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JARRED
No more going to the mall and
finding 12 year old girls that
look 21! |
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ASAD, ORY, AND LWEIS RAY
Yeah |
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Jarred is quickly cut off by Steven |
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STEVEN
NO MORE DVR RECORDINGS OF AVATAR!
YES, NO MORE GUYS NO MORE!
(Throws his fist into the air) |
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Steven gets the attention of the entire lunch room |
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Everyone remains starring at Steven. Steven slowly lowers
his fist from the air. The bell rings and everyone exits
silently because there shocked at what they just heard. |
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LEWIS RAY
I have math guys, ill catch up
with you later! |
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Lewis Ray receievs no repsonse because his friends as wells
as the students are still in shock. |
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INT. WESTBURY, LEWIS RAY'S, MATH CLASS - DAY |
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Lewis Ray is in math class. He looks over at a pretty girl
who seems to be struggling. He also notice's that she was
the girl he and Jarred saw in the begining of school. |
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AMANDA
Omg yes im so lost right now! |
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Both laugh together |
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LEWIS RAY
Okay, pull your desk over. |
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Amanda slides her desk next to Lewis Ray |
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LEWIS RAY
Lets see.......Okay here's where
you messed up. Function y isnt x
equals a. Function y equals f(x)
and its continuous at a point of x
equals a. |
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Amanda looks at Ray Lewis in amazement because of his
intelligence with calculus. |
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AMANDA
Oh Okay, I can see exactly where I
messed up. Thanks Ray |
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LEWIS RAY
Anytime Amanda, Im glad I could
help. |
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They seperate their desks back into the original order. |
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AMANDA
Umm...My parents are going to be
out of town and Im having a little
back to school get together at my
house tonight. And I was wondering
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AMANDA (cont'd)
If you would like to come? |
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LEWIS RAY
Yeah sure...Would it be okay If I
brought a couple friends? |
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AMANDA
Yeah thats fine. The party starts
at 8 and this is my number along
with my adress. |
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Amanda hands Ray Lewis a ripped peice of paper with her cell
number and her home adress. The Bell rings! |
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AMANDA
Alright see you tonight! |
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LEWIS RAY
Okay Amanada see you tonight |
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Amanda walks out of the classroom |
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Ray Lewis begins throwing hand pumps because he is excited
about the party and Amanda |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, HALLWAYS-DAY - DAY |
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Ray walks out of class with his calculus book in one hand
and his backpack over his right shoulder. He walks the halls
of Westbury High on his way to detention with Jarred
Daniels. Ray Lewis enters Mr. Dubois classroom. |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, DETENTION - DAY |
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MR. DUBOIS
Lewis Ray, so glad you could join
us. Please, have a seat. |
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Lewis Ray walks over in his attempt to sit next to Jarred
Daniels. |
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MR. DUBOIS
And not next to Jarred! |
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Lewis Ray then turns around and walks to the opposite side
of the room. Lewis Ray has a seat and whips out his sidekick
mobile. |
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Text Message reads |
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LEWIS RAY
Yo Jarred, that hot chick that we
saw in the hallway earlier just
invited us to a back to school
party. |
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JARRED
No way bro, are you serious!? |
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LEWIS RAY
Im serious. All because I lied
about being good in calculus. I
saw that she needed help and I
showed her everything there was to
know about the lesson. I came, I
saw, I conquered! |
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JARRED
Yeah, but you suck at math. |
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LEWIS RAY
She doesn't know that. |
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LEWIS RAY
Well anyways, this party is really
going to set off the school year.
It's going to be legendairy. |
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Mr. Dubois stands up from his seat and walks over to Lewis
Ray. |
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MR. DUBOIS
You know the rules guys, no phones
during detention. |
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Mr. Dubois takes both of their cell phone's. |
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JARRED
I guess so Mr Dubois, it's only
detention. I cant beleieve you
take this ish seriously! |
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Jarred slumps down in his chair and Lewis Ray puts his head
down on his desk. Clock shows 3:15 and then gradually moves
to 3:45. |
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MR. DUBOIS
Okay guys get outta here. And I
dont want to see you back in here. |
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Mr. Dubois gives them their phones back. |
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INT. WESTBURY HIGH, HALLWAYS - DAY |
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Lewis Ray and Jarred walk out of the classroom. They walk
through the halls of Westbury High. |
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LEWIS RAY
Mr. Dubois is funny. |
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JARRED
Mr. Dubois is such a prick, why do
you think he's funny, I'm having
trouble comprehending your out of
the closet gayness right now! |
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LEWIS RAY
Come on J, you know I think Mr.
Dubois is a D-Bag. But he makes me
giggle. Plus, I don't want a bad
rep from him. You never know, I
might need him to write my
recommendation for college. |
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JARRED
Did you just say he makes you
giggle, wow your a homo! |
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Lewis Ray and Jarred walk outside to the school courtyard. |
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EXT. CRANDBERRY HIGH, COURTYARD - DAY |
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Lewis Ray and Jarred are walking toward the bus. |
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LEWIS RAY
Hey where did Asad and Ory go? |
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JARRED
Ory had basketball practice and
Asad has SAT prep. |
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They get on the bus. |
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INT. LATE BUS - DAY |
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Jarred and Lewis Ray enter the bus and head straight to the
back! |
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JARRED
Yo we playin ball today? |
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LEWIS RAY
Na man I cant, I gotta clean my
car! My mom just got it out of the
shop today and I have to get it
ready for tonight! |
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JARRED
Oh yeah, I gotta text Ory and
Asad. |
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JARRED
And let them know about tonight!
This party is going to be outta
control! |
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Both give pounds to each other! |
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EXT. BUS RIDE- DAY GOING INTO NIGHT - DAY |
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The bus leaves the school parking lot. The bus is traveling
from the city back into the suburban part of Boston. The bus
reaches Jarred and Lewis Ray's stop. Jarred and Lewis Ray
exit off the bus. |
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INT. BUS - DAY |
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Lewis Ray and Jarred get off of the bus out side of their
suburban town. Where they were picked up. |
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JARRED
Yo Lewis, Ory and Jarred just
texted me and there down for the
party. So we'll meet at your house
around eight. |
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LEWIS RAY
Sounds good. The party starts at
8, but you never wanna show up to
a party on time. |
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JARRED
Say word to big bird! |
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LEWIS RAY
Aite bro-hammer later! |
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Lewis Ray and Jarred are shown walking on opposite ends of
the street heading towards their house. |
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INT. DIFFERENT BEDROOMS - NIGHT |
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Four screens shown of all the boys getting dressed for the
party.
Music- N'sync- Just Got Paid |
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INT. CAR RIDE - NIGHT |
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Ory, Jarred, and Asad all meet up and stand outside while
waiting for Lewis Ray. Lewis Ray walks out and they all get
into the car. They pull out of the driveway and are on their
way to the party.
As they begin down the street in Lewis Ray's car, they see
Steven waiting outside of his house. They assume that Steven
is waiting for them to pick him up (which he is) from his
house. |
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ORY
OMG, are we supposed to be picking
Steven up? |
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ASAD
Whoa Whoa, Jarred you didn't say
anything about picking Steven up! |
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JARRED
Were not picking him up, right
Lewis? |
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LEWIS RAY
No. But how do you even think he
found out about the party? |
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Jarred goes through his phone to check his sent messages |
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JARRED
Aww wow, I accidentally forwarded
the message about the party to
everyone in my phone! |
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Lewis Ray slows down the car to talk to Steven. |
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ORY
What are you doing! Dont Slow
down, do you know what people will
think when they see us with him! |
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JARRED
Seriously bro, its bad enough that
we have to be around Asad. Tagging
along Steven will destroy the
unity of the group. |
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ORY
Yeah,its like having an entourage
with three famous guys, and then
grabbing Lance Bass and Clay
Aiken. |
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LEWIS RAY
Why would it be like that? |
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ORY
(To Lewis Ray)
They are totally disguisted by the
Va Jay Jay.
(Looking for a
fist bump)
What up?! |
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The car comes to a complete stop. |
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STEVEN
Whats up fellows. You ready to get
down tonight! I just downloaded
some new Madonna and Clay Aiken
that we can ride to! |
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Everyone in the car looks at each other with a confused
face. |
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LEWIS RAY
Steven we didn't, well, Jarred
didn't mean to send you that
message, it was an accident. It's
invite only |
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STEVEN
Aww dont be foolish |
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Steven goes to reach for the door, but is distracted when
his mom calls him. Steven turns around to respond. |
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Ory whispers to Lewis Ray |
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Lewis Ray steps on the gas and they take off down the road
Steven quickly turns around and runs out to the middle of
the street. |
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The car stops. Lewis RAy stick his head out the window. |
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LEWIS RAY
You wanna come? |
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Steven smiles and starts walking closer to the car. |
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The car speeds off. |
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EXT. AMANDA'S PARTY - NIGHT |
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Lewis Ray and the guys pull up to Amanda's house. And step
out the car. |
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LEWIS RAY
This is going to be awesome... |
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The four walk in the front door. |
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INT. AMANDA'S PARTY - NIGHT |
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The four enter the party. |
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Amanda comes down the steps and smiles when she sees Lewis
Ray. |
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LEWIS RAY
Amyna...(trailing off. He forgets
her name.) |
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ASAD
(Whipering in
LEwis Ear)
Amanda. |
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LEWIS RAY
Amanda!
(To Asad)
Good looking good looking. |
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Lewis Ray walks up the steps and hugs her. SWING back to the
other three. |
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23.
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MUSIC- "INSIDE OF YOU" HOOBASTANK |
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JArred up side down doing a keg stand.
Ory and Asad playing beer pong. Asad nails an around the
back shot. The crowd goes wild.
Lewis Ray kissing the girl on her bed. |
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EXT. PARTY HOUSE.
A man holding a briefcase walking up to the door.
Jarred going shot for shot with someone.
Ory having trouble standing up to throw the pong. He throws
the pong and falls backwards. Asad tries to catch him and
falls with him.
Lewis Ray takes off his shirt. Looks over and sees a picture
of Mr. Doubouis.
Mr doubois walks in holding a briefcase sees all the kids. |
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MUSIC STOPS |
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MR. DUBOIS
What the hell is going on?! |
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Everyone looks for a second. |
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NED SPEAKS
What the hell, Mr. Dubois! Didn't
anyone tell you that this is a
high school party! |
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MR. DUBOIS
THIS IS MY HOUSE! |
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Ned looks over and sees a picture of Mr. Dubois and Amanda |
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NED SPEAKS
OMG THIS IS HIS HOUSE! EVERYONE
GET YOUR ISH AND GET THE HELL
OUTTA HERE! |
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Everyone bolts out the back door |
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Amanda walks out from a room upstairs with a sheet wrapped
around her. |
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AMANDA
(guilty look)
Daddy. |
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Lewis Ray walks up behind her. |
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Lewis Ray and Mr dobuis catch eye's. |
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Lewis Ray runs back in the room. |
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Mr. Dobouis looks around in shock beause most of the people
at the party are his students. He is also shocked to see Ned
Speaks in nothin but his boxers. |
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EXT. BASKETBALL COURTS - DAY |
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Lewis Ray, Jarred, Ory, and Asad are sitting on the
bleachers. Quiet for a moment. |
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ORY
Mondays going to be extremely
awkward.(Laughing to himself) Did
anyone see Ned Speaks at the party
last night? |
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LEWIS RAY
(sarcastically)
Yeah I know, so much for first
impressions. |
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Lewis Ray is immediately interupted by Jarred |
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JARRED
(To Lewis Ray)
So Bro, did you or did you not get
the yams last night? |
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LEWIS RAY
You know I did. |
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ASAD
Did Mr. Doubois see you? |
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LEWIS RAY
You know he did. |
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Lewis Ray and Jarred both laugh together. |
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Steven comes in to the courts. He has a ball and goggles on.
He walks down the court dribbling the ball with his head
down. Lewis Ray walks over to Steve while he's shooting free
throws. |
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LEWIS RAY
Steve, Im really sorry about last
night man. We didn't mean to leave
you. |
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LEWIS RAY
Okay we did, but please dont take
it personal. It was an invite only
party and I wanted to make a great
first impression on Amanda. |
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STEVEN
I guess I understand. |
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Asad walks over to Steve and Lewis Ray |
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ASAD
Yeah sorry about that Steve. |
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Ory walks over to Steve, Asad, and Lewis Ray |
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Steven hesitates for a second |
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THE END |
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| Feedback |
| From Cameron |
Date 1/31/2009 |
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| Really to tell you the truth....I WANT ANOTHER EPISODE! A few laughs....a few smirks. That is what a makes a TV show great! Just remember to check spelling and stop using Im lauguage like u and OMG!
Your Friend,
Cameron |
| From Alex Ash |
Date 1/15/2009 |
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| I enjoyed it, it was funny at some parts, repetitive at others. Overall though, good job |
| From Omar |
Date 1/13/2009 |
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| Very creative and funny |
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