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Hell On Hill
by Britton Powers (midway9@hotmail.com)

Rated: R   Genre: Horror   User Review: *
short film, slasher


This screenplay is copyrighted to its author. All rights reserved. This screenplay may not be used or reproduced without the express written permission of the author.



HELL ON HILL

FADE IN:

INT. THE BREAKOUT OF JIM - NIGHT
                                                            
open to Midway County Prison
                                                            
                       GUARD
well did you watch the game
saturday
                                                            
                       GUARD 2
yeah it was a good one
                                                            
                       GUARD
yeah well we will have a good team
this year
                                                            
PRISON ALARMS START SOUNDING
                                                            
                       GUARD 2
hurry someones breaking out
                                                            
RUNNING DOWN THE PRISON TO AN EMPTY CELL
                                                            
                       GUARD 2
look an empty cell
                                                            
AS THEY LOOK INSIDE THEY NOTICE A BODY OF A PRISONER
                                                            
                       GUARD 2
who ever did this is gone by now
call the police
                                                            
THE BODY OF THE PRISONER WAS MUTALATED
                                                            
                                         WOODS
                                                            
                       JIM
now that i am out i need to get
back at the people that put me
here
                                                            
 
EXT. THE ABUSE OF CHILDHOOD DAVE - DAY
                                                            
INSIDE OF THE ADAMS HOUSE
                                                            
                       DAD*(DAVE)*
i will kill you for looking at me
like that
                                                            
                       DAVE
im not even looking at you
                                                            
                       DAD*(DAVE)*
Come Here!
                                                            
DAVE'S DAD BEATS HIM UP AND ABUSES HIM
                                                            
DAVE RUNS AWAY TO A NEARBY TOWN CALLED MIDWAY
                                                            
 

2.

EXT. THE MEETING OF TERROR - NIGHT
                                                            
JIM IS RUNNING AWAY FROM COPS AS DAVE IS RUNNING FROM HOME
                                                            
THEY MEET SOMETIME AROUND MIDNIGHT SOMEWHERE IN THE WOODS
                                                            
                       JIM
who are you
                                                            
                       DAVE
dave
                                                            
                       DAVE
you?
                                                            
                       JIM
your mother
                                                            
                       DAVE
im gonna kill you
                                                            
                       JIM
lets go
                                                            
JIM AND DAVE START A FIGHT
                                                            
AFTER ABOUT FIVE MINUTES THE FIGHT IS CLEARLY WON BY DAVE
                                                            
                       DAVE
had enough yet
                                                            
                       JIM
yeah calm down
                                                            
                       JIM
wow your strong you need to hang
with me as protection or to help
me out
                                                            
                       DAVE
what would you need help with
                                                            
                       JIM
erasing the population from this
crappy community
                                                            
                       DAVE
you mean MURDER?!
                                                            
                       JIM
if thats what it takes
                                                            
                       DAVE
theres no way in hell that i will
do that
                                                            
                       JIM
fine you can go back to your
daddys house and get beat some
more
                                                            
                       DAVE
fine ill do it but i need to eat i
am so hungry
                                                            

3.

                       JIM
we will find something
                                                            
                                         SUN RISES
                                                            
 
EXT. THE FIRST KILL - DAY
                                                            
SOMEWHERE IN MIDWAY IN THE WOODS NEXT TO THE NEWBERRY FARM
                                                            
                       JIM
you still hungry fat boy
                                                            
                       DAVE
of course and dont call me fat or
i will kill you
                                                            
                       JIM
ok well theres breakfast if you
wanna help me
                                                            
                       DAVE
that farmer?
                                                            
                       JIM
yup help me
                                                            
                       JIM
whatever i am sure i am gonna
regret this
                                                            
JIM TAKES OF RUNNING TOWARDS THE OLD FARMER AS DAVE FOLLOWS
                                                            
Jim is beating on the farmer and having trouble with
finishing him off so dave steps in and shows what he can do,
he yells and picks up the old farmer and breaks his back
right over his knee
                                                            
                       JIM
wow nice one that almost made me
look like a panzy
                                                            
                       DAVE
ALMOST!?
                                                            
                       JIM
shut up dude and lets eat
                                                            
                       DAVE
alright lets eat
                                                            
JIM AND DAVE START EATING THE FLESH OF THE FARMER
                                                            
 
INT. THE FOUNDATION OF THE CAMPER - DAY
                                                            
AFTER FINISHING OFF THE FARMER JIM AND DAVE START HIKING
                                                            
THEN LATER THAT DAY THE RUN UP ON A 50 ACRE PIECE OF LAND
                                                            
THE LAND HAS A CAMPER OUT IN THE MIDDLE WITH A ROAD NEAR BY
                                                            
                       JIM
wow doesnt this look kinda homey
                                                            

4.

                       DAVE
not really kinda crappy but it
will work
                                                            
                       JIM
youll get over it and we will be
able to find food cause the road
runs nearby and look there is a
neighbor so lets go see if we can
find weapons
                                                            
                       DAVE
ok i get the first pick
                                                            
                       JIM
ok i dont really care what i get
                                                            
                       DAVE
ok
                                                            
JIM AND DAVE HEAD DOWN TO THE NEIGHBORS HOUSE VERY SNEAKY
                                                            
                       JIM
that was not a far walk
                                                            
ONCE THEY GET THERE THEY FIND A PICKAX AND A SLEDGEHAMMER
                                                            
                       DAVE
ill take the hammer that will be a
nice one to swing around
                                                            
                       JIM
guess ill just take the pickax
                                                            
                       DAVE
that will work
                                                            
                       JIM
yeah
                                                            
 
INT. THE HUNT IS ON - NIGHT
                                                            
LATER THAT NIGHT AT THE SHERIFFS STATION
                                                            
                       DEPUTY 1
ugh sheriff looks like we got
another prank call
                                                            
                       SHERIFF BLACK
what is he saying
                                                            
                       DEPUTY 1
an old farmer is missing and a
body was found beaten and halfway
eaten
                                                            
                       DEPUTY 2
there was also a call about a
prisoner escaping Midway County
Prison
                                                            
                       SHERIFF BLACK
Well lets go check it out
                                                            

5.

                       DEPUTY 3
ill go with ya
                                                            
                       DEPUTY 1
ill go 2
                                                            
                       DEPUTY 2
me too ugh
                                                            
AS THEY ARIVE THEY FIND THE BODY AND DECLARE ITS THE FARMER
                                                            
                       SHERIFF BLACK
looks like the fools killed and
ate the old bastard
                                                            
                       DEPUTY 2
gross im gonna be sick ugh
                                                            
                       DEPUTY 1
grow up and spartan up quit acting
like a panzy
                                                            
                       SHERIFF BLACK
shut up and stop fooling around
this is serious buisness
                                                            
                       SHERIFF BLACK
search the area in a 25 mile
radius the body is fresh they are
close
                                                            
DEPUTIES START SEARCHING THE AREA LOOKING FOR CLUES
                                                            
                       DEPUTY 1
sorry sir but i cant find anything
                                                            
                       DEPUTY 3
me niether
                                                            
                       SHERIFF BLACK
well lets keep looking till we
find something i will not rest
until i find and put the man away
behind this
                                                            
MEANWHILE, JIM AND DAVE ARE WAITING FOR THE NEXT VICTIM
                                                            
                       JIM
ugh this might take a while since
this is a rural area and not many
people travel this road
                                                            
                       DAVE
ugh tell me about it
                                                            
THEN ALL OF A SUDDEN A MOUNTAIN BIKER IS SEEN RIDING BY
                                                            
                       JIM
here we go heres our only chance i
will wack him as i hide in the
ditch
                                                            

6.

AS THE BIKER RIDES BY, JIM SWINGS THE PICK AX AND PENETRATES
THROUGH THE HELMET AND ENTERS THROUGH HIS EYE KILLING HIM
INSTANTLY
                                                            
                       JIM
Awwww that felt too good
                                                            
                       DAVE
well lets get to eating
                                                            
JIM AND DAVE BEGIN EATING AGAIN
                                                            
                                         POLICE
RADIO(BACKGROUND)
                                                            
"ANOTHER PERSON IS MISSING IN MIDWAY COUNTY"
                                                            
                       SHERIFF BLACK
looks like the sick bastards are
out doing it again
                                                            
                       SHERIFF BLACK
lets head to the scene
                                                            
JIM AND DAVE ARE IN THE CAMPER WHEN POLICE SURROUND IT
                                                            
                       SHERIFF BLACK
get out with your hands on your
head
                                                            
THE TWO GET OUT AND ARE TAKEN TO PRISON, WITH DEATH SENTENCE
                                                            


FADE OUT.


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From Jocsan Date 9/25/2014 *
Your dialogue needs work & your formatting needs to be improved. Try to give us a belief introduction description of your main cast of characters before they start their set of dialogue where their set to appear.

From John A Ortega Date 7/12/2010 1/2
Take a few writing classes to help you better express your stories.

From Darren Date 10/28/2009 *
I give it a 1 for effort. I mean no disrespect. But you need to elaborate more. The dialogue was very child like, predictable of a young mind just putting anything down on paper. i couldnt even finish it, im sorry. Just my opinion.


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