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Evil wants me...
by Jose Calderon (tonycalderon@sbcglobal.net)

Rated: R   Genre: Drama   User Review:
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Drugs, collecting taxes, and underground mafia type.


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FADE IN:

INT. THE RACKET - DAY
                                                            
The racket is a collection agency for legal and illegal
companies. Businesses that can't go to the police. They
mainly work of bad checks, the racket will buy the bounced
checks up to 50% of the face value and collect up to 150%.
By any means necessary.
                                                            
 
INT. VO / THE CHECKS - DAY
                                                            
THE SCREEN IS BLACK, AND THERE IS A LADY'S VOICE.
                                                            
                       MICHELLE
      (sitting across
       the way)
Abel, I have 157 checks. Eighty
percent are new, which I still
have to send out letters, I will
send them today. On the others I
will need your services.
                                                            
OPENING SHOT, ABEL SITTING ACROSS THE WAY.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (picks up the
       phone)
Leave me the copies. ( copies of
bounced checks, what they use to
get the money from people)
                                                            
OPENS A DRAWER AND HANDS HER A CHECK.
                                                            
                       ABEL
This is for you....See you next
week.
                                                            
SHE DOESN'T SAY A WORD, GRABS HER CHECK AND LEAVES.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (dials Angel's
       number..)
                                                            

2.

                       ANGEL
      (picks up the
       phone)
I'm at a copies house, let me call
you back
                                                            
HANGS UP THE PHONE, AND ASK THE GUYS WHO IS ON THE GROUND
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (throws the copies
       of his check and
       the overdraft
       charges)
You ignored our letters, and now
you want to threaten me with the
police. ( pulls out his gun) What
if I shoot you right now, ( gun is
on the top of his head)
                                                            
                       COPY 1
      (extends out his
       hands)
No, no, I will pay...I'm sorry,
how much is it??
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (tapping the gun
       on the top of his
       head)
It's 300 for the checks, 100
dollars for the overdraft charges.
And my fee is ....( looks around
his house, see's a tv he likes),
that.
                                                            
 
INT. OUTSIDE COPY 1 HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
PLACES A 36" LCD TV IN THE BACK OF HIS TRUNK, HE CLOSES IT
AND DIALS ABEL'S NUMBER.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (picks up his
       phone)
I got more checks for you. Meet me
at the spot on Harbor for lunch.
                                                            

3.

                       ANGEL
...(hangs up the phone)
                                                            
 
INT. THE SPOT - DAY
                                                            
ANGEL AND ABEL MEET OUTSIDE THE RESTAURANT AND SHAKE HANDS
AND HUG. THEY WALK IN TOGETHER, AND ARE ESCORTED BY ANGELS
FAVORITE WAITRESS.
                                                            
                       FABIOLA
      (points at a table)
Here you go senores, I will be
back to take your order.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks at her)
And you can bring my heart back,
beautiful...( she smiles and
leaves)
                                                            
ANGEL HANDS HIM A MENU WITH AN ENVELOPE INSIDE, ALL THE
COPIES HE HAS COLLECTED FROM.
                                                            
ABEL HANDS HIM ONE BACK, HIS CUT FROM LASTS WEEK'S COPIES.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (hands a brown
       envelope)
This is this weeks, new copies...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
I have two more copies before I
see Aracely tonight.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looking at the
       menu)
One is in Placentia, by the house
(crackhouse).
                                                            
ABEL LOOKS UP AT HIM, NOT SURE OF WHERE HE IS GOING WITH
THIS
                                                            

4.

                       ANGEL
I have been hearing things aren't
going good there...
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (puts the menu
       down)
Until it's my problem, it will be
yours. Until then, I don't give a
shit about the house.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (puts his menu
       down)
I'll still check it out, sooner or
later, it will be my problem.
                                                            
 
EXT. PLACENTIA LAST COPY PICK UP - NIGHT
                                                            
PULLS UP TO A MODEST HOME, HE LOOKS AT THE DRIVE WAY, NICE
TAHOE HE THOUGHT. WALKS UP TO THE DOOR, AND KNOCKS. HE HAS
BEEN WORRIED ABOUT THIS COPY, IT AN OLD FRIEND OF HIS
MOTHER. HE WILL HAVE TO BE EXTRA TOUGH WITH THIS GUY.
                                                            
                       ROLANDO
      (opens the door
       and smiles)
Hay, Angel, how are you mijo?
                                                            
BEFORE ROLANDO FINISHES HIS SENTENCE, ANGEL PUNCHES HIM IN
THE STOMACH.
                                                            
                       ROLANDO
      (holding his
       stomach)
Angel! Why did you hit me??
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (throws the copies
       at him)
You ignored these letters, and now
I'm here to collect. You owe the
jewelery store, 3 thousand
dollars.
                                                            

5.

ANGEL PULLS OUT HIS GUN, PUTS IT UP AGAINST HIS HEAD.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
I DON'T HAVE TIME TO GO TO
ANYONE'S FUNERAL THIS MONTH, SO
JUST GIVE ME THE MONEY SO I CAN
LEAVE YOU, YOU FUCKEN
DEGENERATE...
                                                            
                       ROLANDO
      (looking at Angel,
       scared out of his
       mind.)
I'll pay, I'll pay...How much, 3
thousand dollars?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
It's 5000, 1500 fee for the over
draft, and 500 for me...
                                                            
                       ROLANDO
      (looks up at
       Angel, not
       thinking
       straight, he said
       one of the most
       stupidest things
       you can say to
       the collector)
Take a check???
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (cocks his gun and
       shoots him in the
       knee)
The other will not go to the
knee...
                                                            
                       ROLANDO
      (holds his knee
       and starts crying)
Ok Angel, I need to go downstairs,
to get the money.
                                                            

6.

                       ANGEL
Hurry up, and don't think about
making any calls..
                                                            
WHILE ROLANDO GOES DOWNSTAIRS TO GET THE MONEY, ANGELS
STARES OUTSIDE, AT THE CRACKHOUSE. HE NOTICES SMOKEY ACTING
WEIRD WITH THE POSTED GUY. HE SEES SMOKE RUN OUT WITH THE
ENVELOPE.
                                                            
ROLANDO COMES BACK UP AND GIVES ANGEL THE MONEY. ANGEL
COUNTS IT ON THE TABLE AND HANDS HIM THE PHONE.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Here, if you can't drive your ass
to the hospital, call an
ambulance. You were cleaning your
gun, and it went of..ok...
                                                            
KNODS AS HE DIALS FOR THE AMBULANCE...
                                                            
 
EXT. ARACELY'S NIGHT - NIGHT
                                                            
ANGELS PUTS THE MONEY IN HIS POCKET, GETS IN HIS CAR AND
DRIVES BY THE CRACKHOUSE. STOPS, LOOKS AT IT, THEN HE
LEAVES. AND DIALS HIS GIRLFRIENDS NUMBER.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (on his cell
       phone, Aracely
       picks up)
                                                            
                       ARACELY
      (opens her
       cellphone)
Hi baby...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
What you doing beautiful??
                                                            
                       ARACELY
I'm tired, getting ready for bed.
Uhg, it was a crazy day, planning
a wedding is tough...I love you...
                                                            

7.

                       ANGEL
I love you to, I'll call you
tomorrow, ok mi Celita...
                                                            
                       ARACELY
ok, did I tell that I love you
today?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
No...
                                                            
                       ARACELY
Well I do...bye baby...tomorrow is
our day...
                                                            
HANGS UP THE PHONE, AND THEN PRESSES A SPEED DIAL NUMBER 2..
                                                            
THAT NUMBER BELONGS TO THE COLOMBIAN, A LADY FRIEND WHO HE
HAS CHEATED ON ALL HIS GIRLS WITH...
                                                            
 
EXT. CALL TO THE COLUMBIAN - NIGHT
                                                            
                       COLUMBIAN
      (answers phone her
       house phone, in a
       thong and tanktop)
Hey, there is my little angelito.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
What you doing lady??
                                                            
                       COLUMBIAN
      (laying on the
       couch)
Waiting for you, hurry up and get
your ass over here. I have
beer...
                                                            
TAKES OF TO THE COLUMBIAN'S HOUSE...
                                                            
 
INT. NO SHOWS... - DAY
                                                            
Coming out of post office, Able has a box, a weekly pick up
for his area of responsibility. Driving to the restaurant,

8.

parks, get's out the car and flicks cigarette. Greets his
aunt as he walks in.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (smiles)
Hola Tia, me da algo de armorsar?
                                                            
                       TIA
      (smiles back, as
       she lays plates
       down for
       customers)
Si mijo...
                                                            
Abel walks to the back of the building, opens the box and
counts the envelopes. Two are missing from the weekly pick
ups.
                                                            
He opens up a drawer and grabs a bag with prepaid cell
phones...Grabs one of them and sends a text. He then
whistles and his 15 year old cousin to come in the office.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (gives him two
       quarters)
Orale mijo, make the call.
                                                            
Tony takes of to the nearest payphone and calls Happy's
girlfriend.
                                                            
                       LIZ
      (cell phone
       rings..)
Hello?
                                                            
                       TONY
      (pushes buttons)
Blip, Blip, Blip...(hangs up)
                                                            
Tony runs back and tells Abel that he has sent the message.
                                                            
Abel then walks out, and with the new phone sends a text to
another phone, that Happy has hidden. Specifically for only
text's with the new number of the week.
                                                            

9.

Happy walks out his house, goes the garage,and from a hiding
spot, gets the phone. The new text is waiting, he dials the
number and then erases it from the text phone.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (answers phone)
B (BUENA PARK), A ( ANAHEIM), F
(FULLETON), Y ( YORBA LINDA),
OK..LH ( LA HABRA), P (PLACENTIA)
NO SHOWS..
                                                            
                       HAPPY
Fuck!
                                                            
                       ABEL
You know...
                                                            
HAPPY HANGS UP, BECAUSE HE KNOWS WHAT'S GOING ON. REACHES
FOR HIS CELL PHONE TO CALL HIS GIRL.
                                                            
                       HAPPY
Liz!!
                                                            
                       LIZ
What? I'm making breakfast...
                                                            
                       HAPPY
Get your ass over here...
                                                            
                       LIZ
What mijo?
                                                            
                       HAPPY
Smokey's a no show again. That's
two weeks in a row, one week I can
play off, but not two. Call your
friend and ask her what the fuck
is going on!!
                                                            
 
INT. THE CHASE - DAY
                                                            
Abel hangs up with Happy and gets his text only phone. He
text's one of his contacts, from Placentia, one of the now
shows. And walks out to use a payphone.
                                                            

10.

THE PHONE RINGS, ANGEL IS IN BED WITH THE COLOMBIAN WHEN HE
REACHES OVER, SHE JUMPS OF THE BED ( WITH ONLY A THONG) AND
WALKS TO THE RESTROOM...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
What.
                                                            
                       COLUMBIAN
      (as she walks
       towards the
       restroom, turns
       to Angel)
That better not be the bitch your
gonna marry...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (covers the phone)
Shut up...
                                                            
SHE FLIPS HIM OF AND HEADS TOWARD THE BATHROOM..
                                                            
                       ABEL
I have a now show in Plaz. What
the fuck is going on.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (light a cigarette)
Fuck no, this is the second one.
Last week, Happy picked up an
empty bag. There old homeboys,so
Happy doesn't want to check him.
                                                            
                       ABEL
Where is he?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
He is still collecting but keeping
it. Last night I saw him pick up.
                                                            
THEY HANG UP..
                                                            
THE COLOMBIAN COMES OUT THE BATHROOM..JUMPS ON THE BED, NEXT
TO ANGEL..
                                                            

11.

                       COLUMBIAN
      (puts her head on
       his chest)
You still getting married, baby!!
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (gets up from the
       bed)
Yeah, I have to go lady. I will
call you, ok.
                                                            
THEY BOTH GET DRESSED, SHE WALKS HIM OUT.
                                                            
                       COLUMBIAN
      (as they walk out)
You know what Angel, don't bother,
I'm not going to be here anymore.
I'm going to tell the him , yes,
that I will marry him. I'm done
waiting for you...
                                                            
DOESN'T TURN AROUND, KEEPS WALKING TOWARDS HIS CAR. SHE
CLOSES THE DOOR...
                                                            
 
INT. EARLY COLLECTION - NIGHT
                                                            
IT'S ABOUT 5:00PM AND ANGEL HEADS TO THE CRACK HOUSE IN
PLACENTIA.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (he walks in the
       house, through
       the back,
       youngsters that
       look really young
       are posted as
       watch outs)
What's up Robert? How's business?
                                                            
                       BOB
      (Get's up..from
       counting receipts)
Orale! Doing some extra credit
huh?
                                                            

12.

                       ANGEL
      (sparks up a
       cigarette)
No, what the fuck is up with
Smokey?
                                                            
                       BOB
      (takes Angel to
       another room)
Homie, that fool is on a good one,
I didn't want to say anything
fucked up about the vato. Since
he is the one, our friend chose,
but he is starting to collect
early.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (puffs his fraho)
There has been no deliveries from
this house for the past two weeks.
                                                            
                       BOB
He called me yesterday, and said
that he will be by to collect
early again this week.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
There talking about closing down
the house, until this shit taken
care of. And I don't think Smokey
will be by anytime soon.
                                                            
                       BOB
That's good to hear, but I needed
to know sooner when this happens.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
I know, but I don't make those
decisions I just clean up the
shit.
                                                            
                       BOB
Well, somke's is at the motel 6
with his hina. They have been
there a while.
                                                            

13.

                       ANGEL
From now one, my carnalito will be
picking up. Look into getting
into a different location, moving
this shit soon. We don't want to
get to careless, and get new
people to.
                                                            
THEY SHAKE HANDS AND ANGEL LEAVES FROM THE BACK DOOR.
                                                            
 
INT. THE CHASE - DAY
                                                            
AT THE MOTEL 6, SMOKEY IS WITH HIS GIRL, SHE IS ALL LOADED
AND HE IS ON THE CORNER OF THE BED. HOLDING HIS HEAD, HE
KNOWS HE'S IN TROUBLE.
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
Mari, you ok?
                                                            
                       MARY
Yeah, why?
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
Because were fucked baby, i'm
sorry I go you into this. I love
you mija, but we are in trouble.
                                                            
                       MARY
It will be ok, Happy will make it
better...
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
      (turns to her)
Fuck Happy, it's just me and you
baby. Nobody will be able to help
us, not even Happy...
                                                            
HE LEANS OVER AND KISSES HER. HE DOES LOVE HER, SHE IS THE
REASON WHY HE KEPT THE TWO WEEKS OF COLLECTIONS...
                                                            
 

14.

INT. LIZ 'S CALL TO MARY ( MOTEL 6) - DAY
                                                            
                       MARY
      (leans over to
       pick up her phone)
Homegirl, what's up?
                                                            
                       LIZ
      (talks in the
       garage)
Where are you? Is your man with
you?
                                                            
                       MARY
We are at the motel, smokey is
fucked up. Can you ask Happy pick
him up?
                                                            
HAPPY IS RIGHT BESIDE HER, SHE COVERS THE PHONE TO TALK TO
HAPPY.
                                                            
                       LIZ
      (leans over to
       Happy)
He's at the motel in Anaheim, he
want you to pick him up, I think
he is scared...
                                                            
HAPPY KNODS AND HEADS OUT THE DOOR.
                                                            
                       LIZ
He is on his way. Is there any
money left? You don't have to tell
me, but if there is, save it. It
might save his life, if you love
him.
                                                            
                       MARY
I do Liz, I do..
                                                            
THEY HANG UP.
                                                            
 
INT. MOTEL GETAWAY - DAY
                                                            
AT THE MOTEL
                                                            

15.

                       MARY
      (leans over to
       smokey)
Happy is on his way, you better
get ready..
                                                            
SMOKEY GETS UP AND HEADS TOWARD THE BATHROOM
                                                            
LIZ GETS ALL THE MONEY FROM HIS POCKETS AND PUTS IN HER BAG,
HER INTENTION IS TO GIVE IT TO LIZ, JUST LIKE SHE TOLD HER,
TO SAVE HER LIFE.
                                                            
HAPPY PULLS UP TO THE MOTEL, HE SCOPES OUT THE AREA AND
PARKS BEHIND SMOKEY'S WINDOW.
                                                            
IN THE OTHER SIDE, ANGEL IS PULLS UP AND SEE'S HAPPY LOOK
AROUND AND GO TOWARDS THE MOTEL. HE STAYS IN HIS CAR AND
WAITS.
                                                            
HAPPY GOES UP TO THE MOTEL AND KNOCKS...
                                                            
                       MARY
      (taps the bathroom
       door)
Daddy, hurry Happy is here..
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
      (throws water in
       his face)
Let him in.
                                                            
MARY LET'S HAPPY IN AND GIVES HIM A HUG AND A KISS ON THE
CHEEK.
                                                            
BATHROOM DOOR OPENS AND OUT COMES SMOKEY, IN A WIFE BEATER
                                                            
THEY SHAKE HANDS AND HUG.
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
What's going on Happy?
                                                            
                       HAPPY
A whole lot off shit carnal, let's
the fuck out of here.
                                                            

16.

                       SMOKEY
      (grabs his shirt,
       kisses his girl)
I'll call you ok, luv you mija..
                                                            
HAPPY FOLLOWS SMOKEY OUT AND THEY GET IN THE CAR.
                                                            
ACROSS THE STREET, ANGELS SEEN BOTH OF THEM LEAVING THE
HOTEL THROUGH THE REAR VIEW MIRROR AND GETS OF THE CAR AND
GOES STRAIGHT TO THE ROOM.
                                                            
 
INT. ANGEL AND THE MOTEL ROOM - DAY
                                                            
ANGEL GOES UP TO THE ROOM, KICKS THE DOOR OPEN AND SEES
MARY, HE GRABS HER BY THE HAIR AND TROWS HER TO THE BED.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Where are they going?
                                                            
                       MARY
Who!!
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (pulls out his gun
       and cocks it)
You know who the fuck I'm talking
about, don't make shoot over some
bullshit...
                                                            
                       MARY
I don't know, I called Happy and
just asked him to take him. I
have this money, take it...
                                                            
GETS THE MONEY THAT SHE TOOK FROM SMOKEY, LOOKS IT OVER AND
PUTS IT IN HIS POCKET.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (puts his gun back
       in the small of
       his back)
Is this all that is left over?
                                                            

17.

                       MARY
That's everything, He said it was
all his, I didn't know what was
going on. Is everything ok?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (as he walks out..)
I don't know?
                                                            
 
EXT. OUTSIDE THE MOTEL - DAY
                                                            
EVIL ( ANGEL) SPARKS A CIGARETTE AND FOR DIALS ABEL.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (answers phone)
Speak...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (puffs his fraho)
They just left, he picked him
up...I got what's left of the
feria..
                                                            
                       ABEL
I'll call you later...
                                                            
 
EXT. THE ORDER - NIGHT
                                                            
IT'S ABOUT 7 PM...ABEL HAS MADE PHONE CALLS AND IS NOW TO
MEET WITH THE LITTLE BROTHER OF THE SHOT CALLER...
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (dials Abel's
       number..)
                                                            
Abel pulls into a park, looks around...He see's Andy point
to the top off the bridge...He walks towards him...
                                                            
THEY MEET IN THE MIDDLE, THEY HUG..
                                                            

18.

                       ABEL
      (Looking around..)
The homie is letting him do what
ever he wants..That's two weeks
already..I can't answer for that..
                                                            
                       ANDY
What do you want to do?
                                                            
                       ABEL
Talk to your carnal, those fools
got to go, little homie...
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (knodds to Abel)
I'll make the call..
                                                            
 
INT. THE BETRAYAL - DAY
                                                            
IT'S MORNING, SMOKEY WAKES UP AND LOOKS AROUND...HE IS
PARANOID, STAYING IN POMONA WITH HIS AUNT...
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
      (opens a new phone)
                                                            
OPENS UP AN ENVELOPE AND LOOKS FOR A LETTER THAT CONTAINS A
PHONE NUMBER OF A POMONA BLACK GANGMEMBER..
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
      (dials Smitty's
       number..)
                                                            
                       SMITHY
      (answers phone)
What nigga!!!
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
Negro, it's me...I need help...
                                                            
                       SMITHY
Smoke,what you get yo self into
now....
                                                            

19.

                       SMOKEY
I fucked up,I kept envelopes. I
need to hide out for a while.
                                                            
                       SMITHY
Aight, I got a club house on 12th
st, with some niggas over
there...They owe me some money,
you can chill there...But smoke...
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
What negro...
                                                            
                       SMITHY
I don't want no mutha fucken ese's
coming around shooting niggas...We
got enough of that already...
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
Simon Negro....I'm on my way to
your house...
                                                            
 
EXT. THE YARD - DAY
                                                            
OSO IS PLAYING BASKETBALL, HE HAS THE BALL WHEN HE SIGNALS
TO HIS FRIENDS TO MAKE THE CALL...
                                                            
ANDY IS BY A PAYPHONE,HE HAS ABOUT 4 PHONES THAT HE VISITS
AND GETS CALLS REGULARLY. HE SMOKES...
                                                            
THE CELL PHONE IN PELICAN BAY, STARTS RINGING AND THE GUYS
SIGNALS OSO...
                                                            
OSO DROPS THE BALL RIGHT WERE HE STANDS, WALKS OF TOWARDS
HIS FRIENDS WHO ARE GATHERED TOGETHER, TO HIDE HIS CALLS...
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (payphone rings,
       Andy picks up...)
Two things...
                                                            
                       OSO
      (sits on the
       bench...)
OK...
                                                            

20.

                       ANDY
I'm not going to
bullshit..Smokeyis fucking up, and
Happy isnt doing shit about
it..Word is that smoke is with
some mayates in Pomona...And our
friend wants both of them out...
                                                            
                       OSO
ok...
                                                            
OSO HANGS UP THE PHONE AND GIVE IT BACK TO THE GUY. HE
JOINS HIS GAME. ANDY HANGS UP THE PHONE, STARES AT IT FOR A
WHILE...OPENS UP HIS TEXT ONLY PHONE AND TEXTES THE PHONE
NUMBER TO ANOTHER PAYPHONE TO ABEL...
                                                            
ABEL IS AT A RESTAURANT WHEN HE RECEIVES THE TEXTES...HE
WALKS OUT TO THE PAYPHONE..LOOKS AROUND WHILE LIGHTING A
CIGARETTE...
DIALS THE PAYPHONE NUMBER...
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (answers phone)
It's done, do it...
                                                            
HANGS UP THE PHONE HEADS TOWARD THE RESTAURANT...
                                                            
 
INT. CALL TO EVIL / IN THE RESTAURANT - DAY
                                                            
ABEL WALKS IN SLOW, HE LOOKS AROUND, THERE IS A FAMILY
HAVING DINNER. THE HUSBAND LOOKS UP, AND THEN HE WALKS
TOWARDS THE CASHIER, HE ASK'S HER FOR A BEER. HE THEN HEADS
TOWARDS HIS TABLE. HE SITS, TAKES A DRINK, THINKS ABOUT
THEIR TIME IN JAIL ( W/ HAPPY)..PUTS HIS BEER DOWN, GET'S
HIS TEXT ONLY PHONE AND TEXT'S EVIL ( ANGEL)
                                                            
 
INT. THE BRIDAL - DAY
                                                            
ANGEL IS WITH OLGA (ARACELY'S COUSIN, THE FIANCE) AND ONE OF
THE BRIDES MAIDS, HER NAME IS BETTY. ANGEL AND BETTY USED
TO HAVE A RELATIONSHIP AND IS THE REASON WHY OLGA HAS DOUBTS
ON ANGELS LOVE FOR HER. THEY HAVE BEEN ENGAGED FOR ABOUT 8
MONTHS AND SEEING EACH OTHER FOR ABOUT 2 YEARS.
                                                            

21.

ANGEL IS LEANING ON THE COUNTER WHEN ABEL SENDS HIM A TEXT.
HE IS LOOKING AT HIS PHONE WHILE OLGA WALKS UP TO HIM AND
BETTY GET'S BESIDE HIM, HE FIRST LOOKS AT OLGA AND THEN
BETTY TO HIS RIGHT...
                                                            
                       OLGA
      (crosses her arms)
I want to ask you something, and I
want you to tell me the truth..
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks at her and
       then looks down
       at his phone (
       through his
       shades))
Make it fast, I have to leave...
                                                            
                       BETTY
      (leans towards
       Angel)
What's your hurry? Aracely is with
her mom, not like you have to go
see someone else, right??,( shakes
her head)..
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks at Betty)
I'm not like that anymore,
Betty..I was different back
then....
                                                            
                       BETTY
Dogs never change...
                                                            
BETTY GIVES HIM A MEAN LOOK AND ANGEL LOOKS TOWARD OLGA.
                                                            
                       OLGA
      (looks at Betty)
I want to know, and I want you to
tell me, in front of Betty. Do
you really love Aracely, are you
going to take care of her like a
real man should...
                                                            

22.

HE LOOKS AT HER, PUTS HIS PHONE IN HIS POCKET AND LOOKS AT
HIS WATCH...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (leans towards
       Olga)
I love Aracely, I have never felt
like this before. I can't wait to
make her my wife. I'm here in a
fucken bridal shower place. That
should tell you something...
                                                            
                       OLGA
Angel, you forget we know you.
Aracely doesn't think of you like
we do. I am not fooled by you...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
There is a reason why I asked her
and no one else. I ready to have
a family now. I am going to make
her my wife.
                                                            
                       OLGA
      (leans forward)
Have you ever cheated on her?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
no!
                                                            
                       OLGA
Are you sure? I will give you a
chance to come clean...Have you
ever cheated on her?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (keens in on her)
No! I told you, No!
                                                            
ANGEL TAKES OF HIS GLASSES AND PUTS THEM IN HIS POCKET..
                                                            
                       OLGA
      (brings out an
       evelope)
Sorry Betty, but we can't let him
marry Aracely...(turns to Angel)
            (MORE)

23.

                       OLGA (cont'd)
I know about the Colombian...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Olga! What you talking about?
                                                            
                       OLGA
I know about the colombian. I
know about the movies, the video
tape, and I now that you have been
seeing her for about 3 years. When
you get to close to anyone, you
break their hearts, using your
Columbian slut. You always did run
to her...I got this in the mail, (
an envelope)
                                                            
ANGEL LOOKS AT BETTY, WHO DOES THE MATH IN HER HEAD AND
FIGURES OUT THAT HE CHEATED ON HER WITH THE COLUMBIAN AS
WELL...ANGEL SHAKES HIS HEAD, AND CUSSES THE COLUMBIAN OUT
IN HIS HEAD...PICTURES HER PUTTING THE ENVELOPE TOGETHER.
                                                            
                       BETTY
Is that when you would leave.
Angel, did you cheat on me with
her?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks at Olga and
       then at Betty)
Betty, I told you. Only with the
whitegirl, that's it...
                                                            
                       OLGA
      (looks at Betty)
Betty, i'm sorry but I didn't know
he cheated on you to with her...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Olga, stop lying, I don't cheat.
Do not try to tell Aracely any of
this...
                                                            
                       OLGA
      (holds up the
       evelope)
To late, I sent her a copy of
            (MORE)

24.

                       OLGA (cont'd)
this.
                                                            
ANGEL GRABS THE ENVELOPE AND BETTY RIPS IT OUT FROM HIS
HANDS..
                                                            
WITH ALL THE GRABBING, THE ENVELOPE RIPS OPEN AND THE
PICTURES FLY OUT. BETTY RECOGNIZES THE GIRL FROM PARTY'S
WHEN SHE DATED ANGEL.
                                                            
ANGEL CAN'T BELIEVE THAT SHE HAS THESE PICTURES...BETTY
LOOKS AT HIM AND THEN WITH ONE PICTURE. STARTS BEATING HIM
WITH IT. ANGEL FEELING THAT HE IS DISCOVERED AND CAN'T TALK
HIS WAY OUT OF THIS. TAKES OF RUNNING FOR HIS LIFE. THE
GIRLS START THROWING THIS AT HIM...
                                                            
ANGEL RUNS OUT THE BACK DOOR,AND JUMPS A FENCE. WHILE
RUNNING HE GETS A PHONE CALL FROM ABEL...
                                                            
                       ABEL
Call me back..
                                                            
HANGS UP WITHOUT SAYING A WORD, HE STOPS RUNNING AND THROWS
HIS ENGAGEMENT RING IN A DUMPSTER IN THE ALLEY...HEADS
TOWARDS HIS CAR..THEN HE WALKS BACK AND GET'S THE RING...
                                                            
 
EXT. THE PHONE CALL - DAY
                                                            
ANGEL'S CAR PULLS UP IN FRONT OF A PAYPHONE. LOOKS AT HIS
TEXT ONLY PHONE AND DIALS A NUMBER..
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (outside the
       restaurant)
Alright, both of them...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Same time?
                                                            
                       ABEL
I don't give a shit, just do it.
                                                            
THEY BOTH HANG UP...
                                                            
 

25.

INT. ANA DRIVE ANAHEIM / HAPPY'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
EVIL DRIVES UP TO THE LIQUOR STORE, TOWARDS THE ANA BY THE
SCHOOL. HE GETS OUT THE CAR, STARES TOWARDS HAPPY'S
APARTMENT. AS HE WALKS, HE RECEIVES A TEXT FROM ARACELY IT
READS ( I can't beleive you). CLOSES HIS PHONE, HE WALKS IN
THE PLAYITA ( MEXICAN RESTAURANT), ORDERS A BEER. HE WALKS
TO THE WINDOW AND LOOKS TOWARD THE APARTMENT.
                                                            
GRABS HIS BEER, WALKS TOWARD THE BACK, LOOKS TO HIS LEFT,
SEE'S PEOPLE EATING. MADDOGS EVERY MAN, THEY KNOW HE IS EVIL
FROM THE LOOK OF HIS EYES..
                                                            
HE LOOKS TO HIS LEFT, A COUPLE IN A BOOTH, THEY BOTH LOOK AT
HIM AND HE LOOKS AWAY, THEY BOTH LOOK AT EACH OTHER AND
LEAVE.
                                                            
HE WALKS TOWARDS A TABLE, WITH A PERFECT VIEW, HE LOOKS AT
THE TWO GUYS SITTING THERE.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks at both
       guys with a crazy
       look)
Me dan esta mesa?? ( can I have
this table)..
                                                            
THEY KNODD AND GRAB THEIR PLATES AND HEAD FOR THE OTHER
ROOM...ANGEL JUST SITS AND STARES OUR THE WINDOW.HE DRINKS
AND THE WAITRESS BRINGS HIM ON MORE BEER..( FAST FORWARD
TIME, ONE HOUR). HIS PHONE RINGS..
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (answers phone)
What!
                                                            
                       BOB
Done, come by tonight...
                                                            
HANGS UP THE PHONE, DIDNT NOTICE THAT HAPPY PULLED UP, AND
WALKED IN HIS HOUSE
                                                            
ANGEL NOTICED THAT SOMEONE IS STILL IN THE CAR. HE CAN'T
RECOGNIZE HIM, BUT HE SEE'S HAPPY COME OUT HIS HOUSE, HE
PUTS A GUN IN THE SMALL OF HIS BACK. HAPPY LOOKING AROUND,
THEN HIS GIRLS COMES OUT, KISSES HIM AND THEY LEAVE...
                                                            

26.

HE STANDS UP AND WALKS CLOSER TO THE WINDOW, HE SEES' THEM
LEAVE AND RECOGNIZES THE DRIVER.
                                                            
 
EXT. VISITING THE GIRLS - NIGHT
                                                            
EVIL HEADS TO ORANGE, AND STOPS BY THE COLUMBIANS HOUSE. THE
APARTMENT IS EMPTY, TROWS A CIG ON THE FLOOR AND LEAVES.
                                                            
HE GOES TO ARACELY'S HOUSE AND GET'S OUT THE CAR, A WAY DOWN
THE ROAD, HE CAN SEE HER. SHE PACES IN HER ROOM HOLDING A
LETTER AND CRYING. ANGEL LEANS ON HIS CAR, AND OPENS UP A
FORTHY, HE JUST STARES AT HER.
                                                            
 
INT. DREAM - NIGHT
                                                            
ANGEL IS DREAMING, HE IS UP AT THE ALTAR AND HIS BRIDE IS
NEXT TO HIM. HE OPENS THE VAIL AND IT'S THE COLOMBIAN..SHE
SMILES AND LAUGHS, HE BACKS AWAY, AND SHE SAID..
                                                            
                       COLUMBIAN
      (black lipstick)
What? You dont want to marry me?
hahaha...Well, now you have
to!!hahaha....
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (pulls out his gun
       and shoots her)
Shut up!!!
                                                            
HE WALKS UP TO SHOOT MORE, AND IT TURNS OUT TO BE ARACELY..
                                                            
HE WAKES UP...
                                                            
 
INT. ITS THE MORNING - DAY
                                                            
EVIL IS DRIVING TO GET SOME BREAKFAST. HE PULLS INTO A
MEXICAN RESTAURANT. HE ORDERS HIS BREAKFAST BURRITO AND
VISITS THE DONUT SHOP. HE WALKS IN, HE SEE'S ONE DRUG
DEALER THAT HAS BEEN DOGGING HIM. HE SIGNALS HIM TO SHUT
UP, AND SITS ON HIS TABLE...
                                                            
EVIL STARES AT HIM, THE GUY SHITS HIS PANTS.
                                                            

27.

                       ANGEL
      (keens on him)
Didn't I tell you not to do that..
                                                            
ANGEL HAD TREATHEN HIM NOT TO SELL TO ANY NEIGHBOR HOOD
GIRLS. ONE HAD OD'D THE MONTH BEFORE.
                                                            
THE DRUG DEALER JUST NODS AND TEARS COME DOWN HIS FACE.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (cups his chin
       with all his
       might)
Don't let me hear that you do it
again..
                                                            
HE GETS UP AND WALKS OUT, THE BAKER SEE'S ANGEL.
                                                            
                       BAKER
Good morning!!!
                                                            
ANGEL DOESN'T EVEN LOOK AT HIM...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks straight as
       he walks out)
Shut the fuck up!!
                                                            
                       MIKE
      (shakes his head,
       cleans the tears
       from his face)
I hate that asshole...
                                                            
AS HE WALKS OUT THE DONUT SHOP, HE SPARKS UP A CIGARETTE AND
WALKS IN THE MEXICAN RESTAURANT.
                                                            
ALL THE CUSTOMER LOOK AT HIM, BECAUSE HE IS NOT SUPPOSED TO
SMOKE IN THE PLACE. HE LOOKS MEAN AT ALL OF THEM, HE THROWS
THE SMOKE TO ONE CUSTOMERS FACE. AS HE WALKS BY THE CUSTOMER
SAYS..
                                                            
                       CUSTOMER
      (looks at his date)
What an asshole...
                                                            

28.

ANGEL GRABS HIS BURRITO, PAYS FOR IT. AS HE WALKS OUT, HE
PUTS THE CIGARETTE INTO THE CUSTOMERS BOWL OF MENUDO. THE
CUSTOMER SHAKES HIS HEAD.
                                                            
 
INT. CALL TO SMOKE - DAY
                                                            
SMOKEY IS IN THE CRACKHOUSE, IN POMONA. HE DOESN'T TRUST
ANYBODY THERE, HE SITS ON A COUCH WITH A GUN IN HIS PANTS...
                                                            
MARY STEPS OUTSIDE TO CALL SMOKEY, HER BROTHER HIDES BEHIND
A TOOL SHED.
                                                            
                       MARY
      (dials Smokey's
       number..)
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
      (struggles to get
       his phone out, he
       opens it up.)
Baby, I told you not to be calling
me...
                                                            
                       MARY
      (walking and
       smiling)
I missed you baby, I really miss
you. When can I see you again?
                                                            
                       SMOKEY
      (holds his head
       with one hand and
       the phone with
       the other)
Fuck it, baby come today. I'm in
Pomona, some abandoned house on
12th street.
                                                            
                       MARY
You said 12th street right, I
think I know how to find it.I'm
leaving now,you want me to take
anything?
                                                            
ONCE HECTOR (Mary's brother) HEARD 12th STREET, HE LEFT.
                                                            
 

29.

INT. NEW CRACK HOUSE IN PLACENTIA - NIGHT
                                                            
ANGELS PULLS UP TO AN ALLEY, HE TEXTES THE DOOR MAN, LETTING
HIM KNOW THAT HE IS COMING UP.
                                                            
THE DOORMAN OPENS THE DOOR, HE STEPS IN AND IS GREETED BY
BOB
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (Looking around..)
I like the new pad..My carnal will
be picking up this week..
                                                            
                       BOB
      (nods to Angel)
Orale...
                                                            
ANGEL LOOKS AT HIS PHONE WHEN HE GETS A TEXT FROM ABEL WITH
THE NEW NUMBER.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (Looks at Bob)
Have a phone I can use, a new one?
                                                            
                       BOB
      (tosses him a
       phone)
Here...Keep it...
                                                            
HEADS TOWARDS HIS CAR. WAITS FOR A WHILE...LOOKING
AROUND...TAKES OFF..
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (dials Abel's
       number..)
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (in his basement)
He is in Pomona, 12st, some mayate
crack house. Take care of it, and
torch the pad...
                                                            
HANGS UP THE PHONE, PULLS OUT A PAPER FROM UNDERNEATH HIS
CAR. HE HAS NOTHING BUT NUMBERS, THE LAST TWO NUMBERS IN
EVERY ROW ARE TRANSPOSED, THEY ARE HIS PHONE NUMBERS.
                                                            

30.

                       ABEL
      (dials number 4)
                                                            
                       JOSE
      (opens his cell
       phone, he is at
       some paisa bar in
       Tijuana..)
Que paso? (whats up).
                                                            
                       ANGEL
You hungry...
                                                            
                       JOSE
      (smiles..)
Yeah...Pomona?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (smiles...)
Let's get some tacos...
                                                            
 
EXT. YOU DEAD PENDEJO - NIGHT
                                                            
Angel parks a couple of minutes away, old habit, packs his
nine..As he walks up to the taco restaurant, he surprises
Jose's body guards...
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (he walks in
       through the back
       door)
Orale...( shows them his gun),
your dead, pendejo( as he looks at
one paisa)..( smiles and walks in
the restaurant)..
                                                            
 
INT. TACOS DE ANDA - NIGHT
                                                            
HE WALKS IN AND GET A SIGNAL FROM JOSE WHO IS SITTING AT A
TABLE...
                                                            
 

31.

INT. TACOS WITH JOSE - NIGHT
                                                            
HE WALKS UP TO JOSE, THEY SHAKE HANDS AND THEY SIT.
                                                            
                       JOSE
      (signals the
       waitress for a
       two beers)
I ordered already, the usual
right..
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (takes out his
       cigarettes)
Simon. ( light a cigarette)
                                                            
THE WAITRESS COMES WITH THE TWO BEERS, AND THE CHEF WITH THE
TACOS.
                                                            
                       JOSE
      (takes a bite,
       cleans his hands)
Alright, Angel, what you got for
me.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (turns of his cig)
No, I need a favor. Here in
Pomona.
                                                            
SLIDES HIM A PIECE OF PAPER. IS THE ADDRESS WHERE SMOKEY IS
HIDING.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (switches to
       spanish)
Visita a mi amigo ( kill the
Mexican there). Y prende la luz,
esta oscura la casa. ( torch the
house). Y me saludas a los demas.
( kill everybody there).
                                                            
                       JOSE
I para mi cumpleanos. ( how much
for the job).
                                                            

32.

                       ANGEL
Yo no pero mi tia te va a dar 10
abrasos, y 5 besos en su casa. (10
AK's , 5 9mm , meet up in TJ)
                                                            
JOSE NODS AND THEY CONTINUE EATING.
                                                            
 
INT. LET'S PLAY CARDS - DAY
                                                            
ABEL WALKS TO HIS OFFICE, THINKS, AND THEN CALLS HIS
FRIDAY GIRL OVER.
                                                            
                       ABEL
Baby! Call the girls, invite them
over for card tonight.
                                                            
IN WALKS A BEAUTIFUL, BIG CHESTED WOMAN, WITH BLOND HAIR.
SOFT VOICE.
                                                            
                       BEATRIZ
      (touches his face)
Sure babe. Give me your phone.
                                                            
HE HANDS IT TO HER.
                                                            
SHE CALLS EVERY BODY'S FRIDAY GIRLS, THEY ALL AGREE TO MAKE
IT.
                                                            
                       BEATRIZ
      (she walks in)
Ok, it's done, there all coming.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (hands her backt
       he phone)
Call one more, for Louie.
                                                            
                       BEATRIZ
      (makes a face)
Babe, that fools scares me, he
doesn't talk much, but my homegirl
Sleepy like him.
                                                            

33.

                       ABEL
      (doesn't look at
       her)
Hurry up.
                                                            
BEATRIZ RETURNS, ABEL CALL THE RESTAURANT AND THEN HE SENDS
OUT A MASS TEXT TO HECTOR, ANDY, BOB, SMOKEY, ANGEL, AND
HAPPY. TELLS THEM TO NOT BRING THEIR WIVES. FRIDAY GIRLS
ONLY.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (texts Louie)
TEXT...( come over tonight, bring
sweetness) A GUN WITH A SILENCER.
                                                            
                       LOUIE
      (responds with a
       happy face)
;)
                                                            
 
EXT. THE CARD GAME - NIGHT
                                                            
IN THIS CARD GAME, ABEL PLANS TO SHOOT HAPPY ON THE TABLE,
HE WANTS THEM ALL TO SEE HIS HEAD FACE DOWN ON A DECK OF
CARDS. HE PLANS TO SEND A MESSAGE WITH THIS HIT. LOUIE IS
THE BEST KILLER HE HAS, AND HAS ASKED HIM TO DO THE HIT.
                                                            
THE GIRLS GET THERE FIRST, BEATRIZ IS THE FIRST AND GREETS
ALL OF THEM.
                                                            
BEATRIZ TAKE THEM ALL TO THE BACK OF THE HOUSE, IT A POOL /
CARD GAME PARTY. THEY ALL GET IN BATHING SUITES.
                                                            
THEY ALL TAKE DRINKS, CHANGE, AND GET IN THE POOL. AS THE
CARS START PULLING IN.
                                                            
THE FIRST TO PULL UP IN ANGEL. HE IS GREETED BY ABEL.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (hugs Angel)
How's our friend? ( whispers)
                                                            

34.

                       ANGEL
      (hugs and whispers
       back)
( leans forward) Tonight.
                                                            
THEY WALK BACK TO THE POOL AREA, ANGEL SEE'S LUISA, WHO HE
SEE'S EVERY NOW AND THEN.
                                                            
                       LUISA
      (gets out the
       pool, nice body,
       black hair)
( walks and gets a towel, dries
off while Angel get a drink) Hey
you, where you been at all my
life.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (opens up a beer,
       eyes on her, hugs
       her with a towel
       on)
Right here beautiful, right here.
( looks her up and down), You look
great, get ready and come sit with
me.
                                                            
SHE KISSES HIM AND SHE WALKS TO THE HOUSE.
                                                            
BOB, ANDY, AND HECTOR ALL COME IN THE SAME CAR.
                                                            
ABEL GREETS THEM ALL, HE LOOKS AT HIS WATCH BEFORE HE WALKS
THEM TO THE BACK. ALL THE GIRLS ARE ALL GETTING OUT,AND
GREETING THEIR DATES AS THEY ALL MAKE THEIR WAYS TO THE
HOUSE. THEY WILL ALL CHANGE AS THE FELLAS GATHER AT THE
BAR. TONY THE YOUNGSTER IS BARTENDING.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (all the fellas
       gather,)
Happy just texted, he running
late. No word from Smokey.
                                                            
THEY ALL LOOK AT EACH OTHER, AND THEY ALL KNOW WHAT IS GOING
TO HAPPEN, BUT NOBODY TALKS ABOUT IT.
                                                            

35.

                       ABEL
      (looks at his
       phone)
Oh yeah, Louie is coming to.
                                                            
WITH THAT HE WALKS TO THE HOUSE, AND THEY ALL LOOK AT EACH
OTHER. IT A SURE THING NOW.
                                                            
 
EXT. THE STORE - NIGHT
                                                            
LOUIE IS AT THE LIQUOR STORE, AS HAPPY PULLS UP, HE SPOTS
LOUIE'S CAR AND PULLS OUT, HE PARKS BEHIND THE STORE AND
PEAKS THROUGH THE WINDOW. HE KNOWS LOUIE'S REP, AND PUT TWO
AND TWO TOGETHER. HE WASN'T LEAVING THE CARD GAME THAT
NIGHT.
                                                            
HE SEE'S LOUIE BUY GLOVES AND CHLORINE, FOR THE CLEAN UP.
                                                            
HE PAYS AND IS MET OUTSIDE BY HAPPY. HAPPY IS IN HIS CAR AND
PULLS UP RIGHT NEXT TO LOUIE.
                                                            
                       HAPPY
      (from out his
       window)
Ese mi Louie, long time no see..
                                                            
                       LOUIE
      (looks under his
       glasses)
There he is..Happy, how you been
carnal?
                                                            
                       HAPPY
      (sparks up a
       cigarette)
Here and there, you know,
everywhere..Get in your car,
follow me, need your help real
quick.
                                                            
                       LOUIE
We are going to be late, you know
Abel trips when we show up late.
                                                            

36.

HAPPY JUST LOOKS AT HIM.
                                                            
                       LOUIE
Fuck it...Let me get my ride.
                                                            
AS HE WALKS TO HIS CAR, HE TEXTES ABEL, THAT HE MET UP WITH
HAPPY AND THAT THEY ARE GOING FOR A RIDE.
                                                            
 
INT. ANGEL'S TEXT - NIGHT
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (looks at his
       phone)
Look like both Louie and Happy got
some shit to do real quick. Let's
play some fucken cards..
                                                            
THEY ALL GO INSIDE, ALL THE GIRLS ARE READY, AND LOOKING
FINE. THEY GO TO THE TABLE AND BEGIN TO PLAY.
                                                            
ABEL DEALS, AND THEY ALL GET THEIR CARDS. HE GETS ANOTHER
TEXT FROM LOUIE.
                                                            
 
EXT. FOLLOWING HAPPY - NIGHT
                                                            
LOUIE IS FOLLOWING HAPPY AND HIDING HIS PHONE, AS HE TEXTES
HAPPY.
                                                            
                       LOUIE
      (texting)
" If he doesn't stop soon, I will
shoot him from my car, I fucken
swear".
                                                            
                                         BACK AT THE CARD
GAME.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (texting back)
" The farther the better".
                                                            
                                         IN HAPPY'S CAR
                                                            

37.

                       HAPPY
      (texting his girl)
" Baby, I'm getting close, get the
shotgun and hide in the garage".
                                                            
                                         LOUIE'S CAR
                                                            
                       LOUIE
      (texting back)
" Happy's girls house, close".
                                                            
                                         BACK AT THE CARD
GAME.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (texting back)
" do it there".
                                                            
                                         LOUIE'S CAR
                                                            
                       LOUIE
      (texting)
"SUL" ( see you later)
                                                            
                                         HAPPY'S CAR
                                                            
GETS A TEXT FROM HIS LADY.."IN THE GARAGE".
                                                            
LEANS OUT HIS WINDOW, IN FRONT OF HIS GARAGE.
                                                            
                       HAPPY
      (opens the garage)
Louie, park in front of the
garage, wait for me, we will take
your car.
                                                            
LOUIE NODS IN AGREEMENT, WHEN THE GARAGE DOOR CLOSES, HE
COCKS HIS GUN, AND GETS OUT THE CAR, HE WAITS IN THE BACK OF
THE CAR. KNEELING DOWN.
                                                            
HAPPY GETS THE GUN FROM HIS GIRL,AND GOES THROUGH THE HOUSE,
GO BY THE SIDE SO HE CAN SHOOT LOUIE FROM THE SIDE.
                                                            
HE RUNS OUT THE SIDE OF THE HOUSE, SHOOTS THROUGH THE
WINDOW, AND HE DOESN'T SEE LOUIE.
                                                            

38.

LOUIE SHOOTS FROM BEHIND THE CAR, HAPPY GETS DOWN, AND LOADS
MORE SHELLS,
                                                            
LOUIE WAITS AND THEN...HE FEELS THE COLD OF A GUN BEHIND HIS
EAR, BEFORE IT GOES OFF..LOUIE FALLS TO THE GROUND, HAPPY'S
GIRL SHOT HIM.
                                                            
HAPPY HEARS AND SEE'S HIS GIRL LOOKING DOWN WITH A GUN.
                                                            
                       HAPPY
      (gets up, walks
       towards the back.)
Baby, turn the car on and pop the
trunk, we are going for a long
ride.
                                                            
AFTER PUTTING LOUIE IN THE TRUNK, HAPPY GETS IN THE DRIVER'S
SEAT,LIZ PULLS OUT LOUIES PHONE, AND THERE ARE A COUPLE OF
MISSED TEXTES FROM ABEL.
                                                            
SHE READS ALL OF THEM, AND THEN HANDS IT TO HAPPY.
                                                            
                       LIZ
      (gives him the
       phone,)
Here, you were right, he was
supposed to kill you.
                                                            
                       HAPPY
      (hands her the
       phone)
Here, text back, with " done"..
                                                            
                                         BACK AT THE CARD
GAME.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (reads his text)
( smiles) Who wants a drink, (
folds his cards) Angel, go with
me. ( everyone knodded no)
                                                            
AS THEY WALK TOWARDS THE KITCHEN, ABEL LOOKS AT HIS PHONE.
                                                            

39.

                       ABEL
      (closes his phone)
I think Louie's dead, he never
textes when he is done.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (looks at his
       phone)
Louies last text was that he was
at his girls house.
                                                            
ANGEL FINISHES HIS DRINK AND LEAVES THE PARTY.
                                                            
 
EXT. KILL SMOKEY - NIGHT
                                                            
AS ANGEL LEAVES, HE TEXTE'S JOSE.
                                                            
JOSE RECEIVES THE TEXT, HE IS AT A HOUSE, WITH ABOUT 4 OTHER
PAISAS.
                                                            
                       JOSE
      (looks at this
       phone)
Vamonos...( they all get up and
head for the door)
                                                            
THE FOUR PAISAS GET IN ONE CAR AND JOSE GET'S IN HIS CAR.
                                                            
OPENS UP HIS PHONE, AND CALLS JUAQUIS.
                                                            
                       JUAQUIS
      (feels his phone
       vibrate)
Qvo?
                                                            
                       JOSE
Pick up the gas, and park about a
block away, wait for my call. I
will be at the park.
                                                            
PARKS BY THE BASEBALL FIELD, GOES TO THE STANDS AND STARES
AT THE HOUSE.
                                                            
HE SEE'S THE FOUR GUYS PARK IN THE ALLEY, THEY SPLIT UP AND
WALK TOWARDS THE HOUSE, JUAQUIS GOES TO THE BACK YARD.
                                                            

40.

ONE PAISA GOES IN FRONT OF THE HOUSE, ONE GOES TO THE SIDE,
AND ONE ON THE OTHER SIDE. JUAQIS NOTICES TWO BLACK GUYS
HAVING A DRINK AND A SMOKE IN THE BACK YARD, HE HIDES BEHIND
A TREE.
                                                            
                       BLACK GUY 1
      (puffs his cig)
Man, I don't like having this fool
here, I know this shit's going to
back fire.
                                                            
                       BLACK GUY 2
      (puffs his cig)
Shit, I say we tell them ese's
this nigga's right here, have them
bust his cap. I know they be out
there looking for him.
                                                            
 
INT. KILL SMOKE, IN THE HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
SMOKEY IS IN THE CHAIR, HEADPHONES, EYES CLOSED. THEY OPEN
EVERYTIME HE HEARS SOMEONE OUTSIDE TALK OR MAKE NOISE, HE
JUST LOOKS AT THE BOTTOM OF THE DOOR, SHADOWS.
                                                            
HE GET'S A TEXT. IT'S FROM MARY. " 15 MINS AWAY LOVE"
                                                            
PUTS A 38 SPECIAL ON HIS LAP, LISTENS TO A SONG ON HIS
IPOD..CLOSES HIS EYES...
                                                            
 
EXT. THE TWO BLACK GUYS OUTSIDE - NIGHT
                                                            
JOSE SEE'S THAT EVERYONE IS IN POSITION, HE SENDS A TEXT TO
JAQUIS.
                                                            
JUAQUIS RECEIVES HIS TEXT, LOOKS AROUND AND JUMPS OUT AND
SHOOTS BOTH GUYS IN THE HEAD, HE HAS A SILENCER SO THEIR IS
NO NOISE. HE TEXT'S BACK, THAT HIS AREA IS SECURE.JOSE TEXTS
THE PAISA ON THE SIDE WHERE THE WINDOW IS.
                                                            
LOOKS INSIDE AND TEXT'S JOSE THAT SMOKE IS THE ONLY ONE IN
THE HOUSE, AND HE IS FRONT OF THE DOOR, WITH A GUN
                                                            
JOSE TEXT JAQUIS, AND TELL HIM TO BREAKTHROUGH THE FRONT
DOOR, SHOOT SMOKE. TO WAIT FOR HIS SIGNAL.
                                                            

41.

TEXTS THE PAISA ON THE OTHER SIDE, WITH THE GAS CONTAINER.
TELL HIM TO BE READY, IN 2 MINUTES HE MUST RUN IN AND DROP
ALL THE GAS ALL OVER, TO TELL JUAQUIS TO LEAVE THE GUN.
                                                            
 
EXT. THE FRONT DOOR - NIGHT
                                                            
JUAQUIS LOOKS AT HIS GUN, HE GETS THE TEXT, KICKS THE DOOR,
HE SEE'S SMOKE OPEN HIS EYES,, IN SLOW MO...SMOKE GOES FOR
HIS GUN, BULLET HITS HIS FOREHEAD BEFORE HE CAN FEEL IT.
JUAQUIS WALKS UP, BEHIND HIM THE PAISA RUNS IN WITH A GAS
CAN. JUAQUIS PUTS ANOTHER BULLET IN SKULL. AND THE OTHER
PAISA CARRIES BLACK GUY 1 AND COMES IN WITH BLACK GUY 2.
WHEN THE PAISA IS DONE WITH THE CAN, HE WHISPERS IN JUAQUIS
EAR, JUAQUIS DROPS THE GUN. THEY WALK OUT, THE HOUSE BEGINS
TO BURN, JOSE IS ALREADY IN HIS CAR LEAVING...A COUPLE OF
BLOCKS AWAY, ANGELS LOOKS IN WITH BINOCULARS, GET IN HIS CAR
AND LEAVES...
                                                            
 
INT. DREAM - DAY
                                                            
IN THIS DREAM, ANGEL IS LAYING IN BED, THEIR IS A GIRL ON
TOP OF HIM, SHE HAS UNDER GARMENTS OF A WEDDING DRESS, HE IS
TALKING WHILE PLAYING WITH HER WEDDING RING.
                                                            
                       DREAM GIRL
      (ANGEL POV)
Babe, I can't wait to have
children with you, to grow old
with you, you make me so happy..
                                                            
HE PULLS HER TOWARDS HIM, HE SMELLS HER HAIR, PULLS IT BACK
WHILE GETTING READY TO KISS HER, AND SEE'S HER FACE, IT THE
COLOMBIAN. HE THROWS HER OFF, SHE IS ON THE FLOOR, LAUGHING,
AND HE GOES TO GET HIS GUN FROM HIS PANTS AND HE WAKES
UP....
                                                            
 
INT. TJ PHONE CALL - DAY
                                                            
AS ANGEL WAKES UP, HE GETS A CALL FROM ABEL, HE IS IN TJ AND
SENDS FOR HIM.
                                                            

42.

                       ABEL
      (in his backyard,
       dialing)
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (wakes up
       startled,)
Yeah...
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (takes a toke of
       his cigarette)
In at my cousins, come to my
aunts, we are waiting for you,
dont' forget the beer.( he is in
Rosarito, go to TJ today, bring
the guns.)
                                                            
HANGS UP, THEN HIS PHONE RINGS, IT'S BOB
                                                            
                       BOB
      (in the
       crackhouse,
       people behind him
       dealing)
They found Louie in Riverside, he
was in the back seat, they say it
was like he was robbed and killed
by some hooker...( Happy and his
girl put him in the back seat, un
zip his pants and take his
wallet.)
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Fuck! ( hangs up)
                                                            
 
INT. PAY OUT - DAY
                                                            
HAPPY WENT TO STRIP CLUB, WHERE ANDY HANGS OUT AT. HE WALKS
IN THROUGH THE DOORS, " I NEED A FREAK" IS PLAYING, HE WALKS
AROUND AND SEE'S GIRLS DANCING, GIRLS FREAKING GUYS. HE
WALKS TO ANDY'S TABLE THERE ARE A COUPLE OF GANGSTERS THAT
LOOK AT HIM, ANDY MOTIONS THEM THAT IT'S COOL.
                                                            

43.

                       ANDY
      (he pulls the
       girls of him, she
       was giving him a
       lap dance.)
There he is.
                                                            
                       HAPPY
      (puts a bag of
       money on the
       table)
Can we talk?
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (Grabs the bag,
       and on the other
       hand he has a
       drink)
Always time to talk.
                                                            
They both head to another room, Andy sits on the other side
of the table, two fisheras walk in, he motions them to
leave.
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (Sparks up a cig)
Talk.
                                                            
                       HAPPY
There's 60k on that bag, more than
double what smokey was behind.
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (Opens the bag)
Smokey is dead.
                                                            
                       HAPPY
      (Closes his eyes
       with hurt)
I'm asking for a pass, and to get
those mf of my back, they tried to
kill me yesterday.
                                                            
                       ANDY
I know.
                                                            

44.

                       HAPPY
We go along way, your carnal and
me. See what you can do. (
reaches for the bag)
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (puts his hand
       over Happy's)
Leave the bag with me, I will call
you after. ( talking with oso)
                                                            
 
EXT. PICKING UP THE GUNS - DAY
                                                            
ANGEL PUTS 3 AK AND 4 HAND GUNS IN HIS TRUNK. HE GET'S A
TEXT.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks at his
       phone)
TEXT...( I'M SORRY )...
                                                            
ANGEL TEXT'S BACK AND THEIR IS NO RESPONSE.
                                                            
ANGEL IS SHORT 7 AK'S AND 1 9MM. HIS PLAN IS TO ROB MIKE
(The drug dealer)AND ONE OTHER DRUG DEALER AND TAKE WHAT
EVER GUNS THEY HAVE.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (driving to Mike's
       house, he pulls
       up the drive way,
       bunch of
       gangsters and
       girls partying..)
                                                            
HE PULLS HIS CAR ON THE DRIVE WAY, AND LEAVES IT RUNNING,
GETS A GUN AND PUTS IT IN THE SMALL OF HIS BACK. HE WALKS
TO THE BACK, THERE ARE PEOPLE HAVING A BBQ AND HE WALKS UP
LIKE IF HE WAS INVITED, SOME PEOPLE NOD WITH A HELLO AND
ANGELS WALKS IN THE HOUSE.
                                                            
                       MIKE
      (walks out the
       bathroom with a
       young girl)
Shit..( he see's Angel as he puts
            (MORE)

45.

                       MIKE (cont'd)
his hand on his throat and walks
him to his room)
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (holing Mike with
       gun in one hand
       pointed at his
       head)
I told you, but you don't listen,
so now I'm going to tax you...(
trows him to the floor) Get the
fuck out, he tells a couple that
was in the room. ( they take of
running)
                                                            
                       MIKE
      (scared on the
       floor)
Angel, anything what you want,
please dont kill me, I'm sorry, I
won't do that anymore.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (sits down, sparks
       a cigarrette)
Guns, what guns do you have?
                                                            
                       MIKE
      (thinks...)
Shit, about 5 AK's some tweaker
gave me, he had no money.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (puffs as he looks
       at his phone)
Give them to me, and I might just
forget all about this visit.
                                                            
BED...MIKE PUTS THE 5 AK'S ON THE TABLE. ANGELS PICKS ONE UP
AND COCKS IT. POINTS IT AT MIKE.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (with his
       cigarette in his
       mouth)
Next time, not money, not guns
            (MORE)

46.

                       ANGEL (cont'd)
will save your life. No more
little girls...
                                                            
GETS UP, AS MIKE PUTS THE GUNS IN A BAG.
                                                            
ANGEL GRABS THE BAG AND MAKES HIS WAY TO THE DOOR. PEOPLE
JUST STARLE AT HIM, HE LOOKS AT NO ONE, AND WALKS OUT.
                                                            
PUTS THE GUNS IN THE TRUNK, AND THEN TEXTES THE CRACKHOUSE.
                                                            
AS HE MAKES HIS WAY TOWARDS THE CRACK HOUSE, THE GETS A TXT
BACK FROM BOB.
                                                            
                       BOB
      (opens the back
       door)
Orale, ( shakes Angel's hand, who
has a the bag with him)
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (puts the bag on
       the table)
I need some 9 mm, I can trade some
AK..
                                                            
                       BOB
      (gets up)
Alright...
                                                            
ANGEL IS NOW IN HIS CAR ON HIS WAY TO TJ.
                                                            
 
EXT. PARK, MEETING WITH HAPPY - DAY
                                                            
HAPPY IS AT THE PARK, WAITING FOR ANDY.
                                                            
ANDY PULLS UP, AND HE HAS THE BAG WITH HIM.
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (walks up to
       Happy, hands him
       the bag)
Shit's a little complicated
carnal, don't know what's up yet
(they are all meeting in TJ).
                                                            

47.

                       HAPPY
      (grabs the bag,
       worried look on
       his face)
What the fuck does that mean, we
go along way.
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (grabs his
       shoulder)
Carnal, don't worry,
                                                            
                       HAPPY
      (hugs Andy, and
       leaves..)
Orale...
                                                            
 
EXT. TJ - NIGHT
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (get's the sorry
       txt again, pulls
       up to the ranch,
       he see's a bunch
       of the homies
       car's there)
(Pops the trunk, whistles and one
of the paisas that lives there go
to see him, he carries the beer
that he bought.
                                                            
ABEL WALKS OUT TO GREET HIM.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (they hug, he
       leans forward to
       whisper something
       to him)
Louie's dead.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (closes his eyes,
       then acts like
       nothing)
Forget about that, come in, Jose
is here and that fucker wont shut
            (MORE)

48.

                       ABEL (cont'd)
up about the guns.
                                                            
 
INT. TJ HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
ANGEL IS WALKING BEHIND ABEL, THINKING ABOUT HIS FRIEND
LOUIE, AS THEY WALK THROUGH THE HOUSE, ABEL TELLS ANGEL TO
GO THE BACK, AND HE WALKS TOWARDS ANOTHER ROOM TO PUT THE
GUNS DOWN.
                                                            
THE BACK YARD HAS ALL THE FELLAS, SOME THAT HE KNEW FROM
BEFORE, DEPORTEES, AND SOME OFF THE TJ MEXICAN CARTEL. GIRLS
ALL OVER THE PLACE, HE GREETS PEOPLE AND WALKS TOWARD THE
BAR, GRABS A BEER AND WALKS TOWARD THE FIELD.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (is about to take
       a drink when Abel
       comes in from
       behind)
Don't get to comfy, I have a thing
I need you to do.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (downs it, crushes
       the can)
Now we are talking.
                                                            
 
EXT. TJ HIT - NIGHT
                                                            
V.O. SHOTS OF A NEW MAYOR, TALKING ABOUT CRACKING DOWN ON
CORRUPTION, DRUGS.
                                                            
                       ABEL
The new mayor is a new pain in the
ass. Time to put in some work
carnal, pay day is good.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (smiles..)
                                                            
                       ABEL (V.O.)
      (dissolve to the
       hit)
The mayor is talking tonight, 10
            (MORE)

49.

                       ABEL (cont'd)
minutes from here. the chief of
staff is the motherfucker who set
this up. Tonight the Mayor and
the LT Mayor are hit. We hit the
mayor form here, the LT is hit in
Califas, visiting family.
                                                            
 
INT. V.O. THE HIT - NIGHT
                                                            
YOU WILL BE DROPPED OF IN FRONT OF THE SPOT, WHEN THE
SECURITY SEE'S YOU, HE WILL TAKE OF TO THE BATHROOM. ONCE
YOU WALK IN, GO STRAIGHT TO HIM AND SHOOT THE MF. ONCE IN
THE HEAD, AND WHEN HE FALLS MAKE SURE YOU SHOOT HIM AGAIN.
THE CAR WILL BE IN THE OTHER SIDE. THEY WILL TAKE YOU TO
THE HOTEL ROOM, CHANGE YOUR CLOTHES, TAKE A SHOWER AND WALK
ACROSS.
                                                            
                       ABEL
I will be there waiting, and we
will leave.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
Who's hitting the LT?
                                                            
                       ABEL
Happy.
                                                            
 
INT. LT MAYOR HIT - DAY
                                                            
WHILE THE MAY0R IS BEING ASSASSINATED IN TJ, THE LT MAYOR IS
AT A FAMILY FUNCTION WITHOUT HIS WIFE, SHE IS AT THE MAYOR'S
FUNCTION, SHE WAS HAVING AN AFFAIR WITH THE MAYOR.
                                                            
AS HE IS BEING DRIVEN, HE TEXTS HIS FRIEND.
                                                            
                       LT MAYOR
      (has the cell
       phone, added the
       LT Mayor's number)
My friend, is the girl already
there, in the room.
                                                            

50.

                       HECTOR
      (texts back)
She's there, take the money, she
doesn't do anything with any
money.
                                                            
                       LT MAYOR
      (texts back)
OK.
                                                            
HE IS DROPPED OF IN THE FRONT OF A HOTEL, HE GETS OUT AND
LOOKS UP, HE LOOKS AT HIS PHONE AND THINKS ABOUT HIS WIFE.
                                                            
HE OPENS THE DOOR TO THE HOTEL, HE SEE'S A BEAUTIFUL GIRL,
IN A BIKINI, HE WALKS IN.
                                                            
                       LT MAYOR
      (takes of his
       jacket, puts it
       on the bed)
Hi, you must be my date.
                                                            
                       LIZ
      (walks over to
       him, hugs him and
       rubs her finger
       on his lips)
Lay down, put the money on the
dresser, I have to go freshen up,
and I will be out.
                                                            
HE TAKES OF HIS CLOTHES, LEAVES HIS BOXERS AND GLASSES ON.
TAKE A DRINK OF A CUP.
                                                            
                       LT MAYOR
      (lays down,
       changes the
       channel on the tv)
Baby, where are you, hurry..( mex
accent)
                                                            
                       LIZ
      (yells from the
       bathroom)
Don't forget the money, and take
of your glasses.
                                                            

51.

As he lays back down, he see's a person coming towards him
(slow mo, it's Happy walking towards him with a gun).
                                                            
                       LT MAYOR
      (puts his wallet
       on the dresser /
       take of his
       glasses)
Is that you baby.
                                                            
                       HAPPY
      (Happy comes into
       focus as he fires)
Yeah mother fucker, it's me.
                                                            
LIZ COMES OUT THE BATHROOM DRESSED, THEY PICK UP WITH WALLET
AND DROP SOME CLOTHES FROM A BAG, SO THAT THEY WOULD THINK A
HOOKER SHOT HIM AND ROBBED HIM.THEY LEAVE, DOOR CLOSES.
                                                            
 
INT. DREAM WITH ARACELY - DAY
                                                            
ANGEL WAKES UP, HE SEE'S THAT ARACELY ISN'T THERE. SHE IS
ON THE FLOOR LISTENING TO MUSIC. HE GOES TO HER, SITS
BEHIND HER, AND HUGS HER.
                                                            
                       ARACELY
      (smiles as angel
       hugs her)
I love you, you know that.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (smiles..)
I do. ( show her a ring box, then
opens it) Marry me.
                                                            
                       ARACELY
      (jumps forward,
       looks at the
       ring, and jumps
       on Angel)
Yes, I will marry you, I love you
baby!!!
                                                            
ANGEL WAKES UP! HE LOOKS AROUND, JUST A DREAM, STARES UP.
                                                            
 

52.

INT. THE SIT DOWN - DAY
                                                            
AS ANGEL PULLS UP, LUISA FROM THE CLUB STAY'S IN THE CAR. HE
OPENS THE DOOR AND SEE'S A CAR PARKED, AND HAPPY'S GIRL IS
IN THE DRIVER'S SEAT. SHE IS SMOKING A CIGARETTE.AND LOOKS
AT ANGEL WITH A STRAIGHT FACE. ANGEL SPARKS A CIG AND WALKS
TOWARDS THE WAREHOUSE.
                                                            
AS HE WALKS IN, HE SEE'S HAPPY SITTING DOWN, ABEL IN THE
OTHER SIDE, AND ANDY COMING BACK FROM HIS TRUCK, WITH
CORONA'S.
                                                            
HUGS, AND SHAKES ALL THEIR HANDS. WALKS TOWARD HIS SEAT, AND
SEE'S A PHONE ON THE TABLE. THEN IT RINGS.
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (pushes the green
       button)
Yeah!
                                                            
                       OSO
New phone!
                                                            
                       ANDY
Yeah!
                                                            
                       OSO
Making this snappy, Abel your
taking a vacation, your on the
radar, all this shit.
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (nods)
Simon!
                                                            
                       OSO
Happy!
                                                            
                       HAPPY
Yeah!
                                                            
                       OSO
      (as he talks a guy
       rushes happy from
       behind and starts
       choking him)
Your out! Andy make sure you dump
            (MORE)

53.

                       OSO (cont'd)
the fucker in Smokey neighborhood
let that be a lesson to everyone.
                                                            
                       ANDY
Simon!
                                                            
                       OSO
Angel!
                                                            
GRABS HIS GUN AND LOOKS BACK..NO ONE THERE.
                                                            
                       OSO
Relax carnalito, your being
promoted, Andy will tell you what
the fuck it up now!
                                                            
HE HANGS UP.
                                                            
                       ANDY
Put your gun back in, your going
to like this shit.
                                                            
ANDY HANDS ABEL A HUGE ENVELOPE AND GIVES HIM A HUG.
                                                            
WALKS OVER HAPPY'S BODY TO HAND ANOTHER ENVELOPE TO ANGEL.
                                                            
                       ANDY
      (sits down, hugs
       and hands him the
       envelope)
Abel is going on a vacation, a
long one. He's flagged at the
county, Happy had a guy feeding
information about our little war
to some fucking deputy, the deputy
works for us.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks over at
       Abel, as he
       smokes a cigar
       and puffs the air
       up)
And they didn't flag me?
                                                            

54.

                       ANDY
No, that is why your still active,
keep low for a couple of weeks,
and they you need to pick up this
guy.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks at the foto)
Who's is this fucker?
                                                            
                       ANDY
Your new boss, their some crazy
shit cooking and we need you to
show him around, he's been gone
for a while. Pick up the senor
and don't be late.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (as Andy gets up,
       drops the phone
       on the ground,
       and breaks it
       with his boots,
       they put the body
       in the back of
       the truck and
       drives away.)
Sure!
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (grabs the foto
       and smiles)
I heard of this vato, you are
going to have fun.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (gets the foto and
       puts it in his
       chest pocket)
How you getting home, need a ride?
                                                            
                       ABEL
Happy's girl is taking me back. (
they both smile)
                                                            

55.

THEY BOTH GET UP AND HUG, WALK OUT TOGETHER, ABEL WAITS AND
HE WATCHES ANGEL GET IN HIS CAR, THEN WALKS TOWARDS LIZ.
                                                            
                       LIZ
      (sticks her head
       out the car)
Where is Happy?
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (sparks up a
       cigarette)
Change of plans baby doll, he left
with Andy, so you have to drop me
off.
                                                            
                       LIZ
      (makes a crazy
       face)
Ok, I guess?
                                                            
                       ABEL
      (opens the door,
       and flicks the
       cig)
Scoot over, i'm driving this
bitch.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks in his rear
       view mirror that
       Abel get's in,
       and smiles.)
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (puffs his cig,
       and looks over at
       his chick)
Just one thing I still have to do.
                                                            
 
EXT. PAYBACK - DAY
                                                            
IT'S THE MORNING AFTER, AND ANGEL'S BEEN TRYING TO GET THE
INFORMATION OF THE PERSON THAT HAS BEEN TEXTING HIM, HE HAS
A FEELING IT'S THE COLOMBIAN CHICK. HE GET'S A PHONE CALL
FROM ONE OF HIS FRIENDS.
                                                            

56.

                       RICK
      (looking at his
       computer screen
       at his shop, he
       sees that the
       number was
       activated a week
       ago, by some
       white boy,dials
       Angel's number)
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks at his
       phone, he is at
       the restaurant)
Yeah?
                                                            
                       RICK
      (looking at his
       screen)
The number belongs to a guy that
lives in Brea, I think it's a
white dude, I'll text you the
address.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (puts on a shirt)
I owe you one, send the address
now.
                                                            
                       RICK
You cannot tell anyone I did this
shit for you.
                                                            
ANGELS HANGS UP.AND DIALS LUISA'S NUMBER.
                                                            
                       LUISA
      (opens up her
       phone)
Yes baby, you can come over.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
I'm going to need your help, i'm
on my way.
                                                            

57.

JUST AS HE HANGS UP, HE GETS THE ADDRESS TEXTED TO HIM. HE
SMILES AND STEPS ON IT.
                                                            
HE PULLS UP TO THE DRIVE WAY, HE HONKS AND SHE RUNS OUT.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (hands her an
       envelope)
When you get in, after you tell
the guy in the apartment you need
to use the phone, leave this in
his bedroom.
                                                            
                       LUISA
      (grabs the
       envelope)
Do I want to know what is in here?
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (looks at her.)
No you don't.
      (she looks at the
       envelope)
Luisa, no.
                                                            
                       LUISA
      (puts her hands
       back on her lap)
Fine, but you better take me out
for this.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (caresses her
       cheek.)
You got it beautiful.
                                                            
THEY PARK IN A CURB, HE GETS OUT AND LOOKS TOWARDS THE
APARTMENT. HE SPARKS UP A CIG AND BANGS THE CAR SO SHE CAN
GET OUT. HE SEE'S THE COLOMBIAN IN THE OTHER ROOM, JUST
GETTING IN THE SHOWER. JUST AS LUISA MEETS HIM BY THE CAR,
SHE HAD BROUGHT THE ENVELOPE.
                                                            

58.

                       ANGEL
      (puffs his cig)
Ok, go and knock on the door, ask
to use the phone, and leave the
envelope in the house.
                                                            
                       LUISA
      (points to him)
You better not leave me here,
Angel.
                                                            
                       ANGEL
      (points to the
       house)
Just fn go...
                                                            
                       LUISA
      (shakes her head)
Alright, alright..fuck...( she
walks towards the house)
                                                            
She walks up and knocks, looks back as angel signals to keep
knocking. The boyfriend opens the door and let's her I'n.
                                                            
 
INT. PAYBACK HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
She walks In looks around, she notices the bathroom is
closed and someone is taking a shower. He points to the
phone, as he walks to the kitchen. She drops the envelope
in the bottom of the bed. She acts like she is on hold, he
walks In.
                                                            
                       LUISA
      (Faking a
       conversation)
Thanks, yes down the street. Bye.
                                                            
                       LUISA
      (Hangs up the
       phone.)
My brother is on his way, thanks.
( the guy smiles as she leaves).
                                                            
THE GUY NOTICES THE ENVELOPE ON THE FLOOR. IT HAS HIS GIRL'S
NAME ON IT. HE OPENS IT, AND SEE'S PICTURES OF ANGEL AND

59.

HIS GIRL. THEN HE SEE'S A DVD. IT'S BLANK AND HAS LIPSTICK
ON IT. HE LOOKS TOWARDS THE BATHROOM AS THE SHOWER SHUTS
OFF.
                                                            
THE COLOMBIAN WALKS OUT, DRYING HER HAIR WITH A TOWEL. SHE
SEE'S HER MAN ON THE SIDE OF THE BED, SHE HEARS THE GATE
OUTSIDE CLOSE, AND SEE'S WHAT HE IS WATCHING. ITS THE VIDEO
SHE MADE WITH ANGEL, HE'S SPEECHLESS AND JUST LOOKS AT HER.
SHE RUNS TOWARDS THE WINDOW AND SEE'S THE GIRL WALKING. SHE
LOOKS UP AHEAD AND SEE'S ANGEL SMOKING A CIG ON THE BACK OF
HIS CAR. SHE YELL'S..
                                                            
                       COLUMBIAN
      (throw's a bottle
       that was on the
       table and it
       lands behind the
       girl, she doesn't
       turn around)
You fn bith, and fuck you, you fn
asshole.
                                                            
HE STAYS THERE STARING AT HER, AS LUISA GETS IN THE
PASSENGER SIDE, HE STAYS FOR A BIT AND FLIPS HIS CIGARETTE.
HE TURNS AND GET'S IN HIS CAR. THEY LEAVE...
                                                            
THE END.
                                                            


FADE OUT.


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