Home Screenwriting Products Screenwriter Community Screenwriting Store
ScriptBuddy - Screenwriting Software for the Web

Screenwriter Community

Back to List of Published Screenplays
View/Leave Feedback

The Lucky Girl
by Jessica Hopkins (mrs.mobley2011@yahoo.com)

Rated: PG-13   Genre: Teen Movies   User Review: ****
IM NOT FINISHED WITH IT, THERES ALOT MORE TO GO!.. NEED FEEDBACK TELL ME IF YOU LIKE IT SO FAR OR NOT..


This screenplay is copyrighted to its author. All rights reserved. This screenplay may not be used or reproduced without the express written permission of the author.



THE LUCKY GIRL

FADE IN:

INT. INSIDE A TEEN GIRLS ROOM - DAY
                                                            
                       AMBER
i just dont know what he sees in
that geeky girl, yuck.
                                                            
                       KATE
i know right, he's better off with
you.
                                                            
                       AMBER
      (evil smile on
       face)
yes he is and im going to get him
no matter what it takes
                                                            
                       KATE
and ill help.
                                                            
                       AMBER
thanks but i dont need any help
with this one..
                                                            
                       KATE
okay, whatever you say..
                                                            
enters AMBERS mother
                                                            
                       MRS.SAMANTHA
hey girls im on my way out, if
yall need anything just call my
phone..
                                                            
                       AMBER
okay mom, but where are you
going?..
                                                            
                       MRS.SAMANTHA
remember i was telling you the
other day i have a business trip
that has to be taken care of..
                                                            
                       AMBER
oh yeah, when are you coming
back?..
                                                            
                       MRS.SAMANTHA
in a week..
                                                            

2.

                       AMBER
okayyy and your leaving me here
all alone..
                                                            
                       MRS.SAMANTHA
yes, i trust you honey..
                                                            
                       AMBER
well thats good to know.. but when
is dad coming back?..
                                                            
                       MRS.SAMANTHA
ummm, idk.. but the neighbors will
be checking in on you every now
and then..
                                                            
                       AMBER
okay mom, bye love you..
                                                            
                       MRS.SAMANTHA
bye girls see you in a week and i
love you to..
                                                            
AMBER mother leaves room
                                                            
                       AMBER
you know what?..
                                                            
                       KATE
What?
                                                            
                       AMBER
party this weekend here..
                                                            
                       KATE
thats a great idea..
                                                            
                       AMBER
and ill invite nick and his
whatever she is..
                                                            
                       KATE
great idea.. your on a roll
today..
                                                            
                       AMBER
aint i always..
                                                            
secret handshake and then smiles at each other..
                                                            
 

3.

INT. ON COLLEGE CAMPUS AT A PARK - DAY
                                                            
SARAH AND NICK HAVING A PICNIC SURROUNDED BY OTHERS
                                                            
                       NICK
which sandwich do you want?.. i
got pb&j or turkey and ham..
                                                            
                       SARAH
ill take pb&j..
                                                            
                       NICK
well here you go..
                                                            
                       SARAH
i got a question for you..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiling at sarah)
ask away..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay, well what made you want to
ask me out on a date? your the
freaking quarterback for our
football team and im nothing, im
pretty sure you wouldnt want to be
seen anywhere in public with me
                                                            
                       NICK
well i think your very pretty and
you have a great personality and
besides its not always about the
looks, ya know.. your a really
nice girl
                                                            
                       SARAH
really?..
                                                            
                       NICK
yeah, im pretty sure you have
heard this before..
                                                            
                       SARAH
actually i havent, thats why i
asked.. everyone thinks im a
wierdo..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiling)
well i dont think that way about
you..
      (phone rings)
            (MORE)

4.

                       NICK (cont'd)
will you excuse me..
                                                            
                       SARAH
sure..
                                                            
                       NICK
hello.. this weekend?.. uhh i
dont know yet why?.. ill ask her
and see what she says.. alright
bye..
      (hangs up phone)
that was amber
                                                            
                       SARAH
what did she want?..
                                                            
                       NICK
she said she was having a party
this weekend and she wants us to
come..
                                                            
                       SARAH
id rather not go..
                                                            
                       NICK
if you dont want to go then we
dont have to go..
                                                            
                       SARAH
no, you can go if you want to..
dont let me not going keep you
from going and having fun..
                                                            
                       NICK
i dont want to go, id rather hang
out with you anyways..
                                                            
                       SARAH
are you sure?..
                                                            
                       NICK
positive and plus not to many guys
get to be with an awesome girl
like you..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
thanks..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiling)
no problem
      (phone rings)
            (MORE)

5.

                       NICK (cont'd)
excuse me again.. yeah.. no we're
not coming.. because we already
had something else planned
      (smiles at sarah)
and could you stop calling me, i
would really appreciate that
      (hangs up phone)
sorry about that, im working on
getting my number changed
                                                            
                       SARAH
why did yall break up?..
                                                            
                       NICK
she was a total bitch and was
always nagging.. i got tired of it
and cut her loose..
                                                            
                       SARAH
oh i see..
                                                            
nick picks up a sandwich and starts eating it..
                                                            
                       NICK
are you okay?.. your not eating..
                                                            
                       SARAH
not really hungry right now..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiling)
well you can always take it with
you..
                                                            
                       SARAH
yeah ill just take it with me..
                                                            
                       NICK
let me get done eating this then
we can go, if you want..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay..
                                                            
up walks one of nicks friends alex
                                                            
                       ALEX
hey, whats up nick?..
                                                            
                       NICK
whats up alex?..
                                                            

6.

                       ALEX
sarah..
                                                            
                       SARAH
hi..
                                                            
                       ALEX
what are you doing this weekend,
man?..
                                                            
                       NICK
sarah and i are hanging out..
                                                            
                       ALEX
oh, okay.. maybe next weekend
then..
                                                            
                       NICK
what were you planned on doing?..
                                                            
                       ALEX
me and the gang was putting
together a paintball tournament..
                                                            
                       NICK
oh, thats cool..
                                                            
                       SARAH
you could go if you want to, ill
just go home this weekend..
                                                            
                       NICK
no, its cool..
                                                            
                       ALEX
come on dude, she said you could..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (aggrevated tone)
next weekend..
                                                            
                       ALEX
alright, cool.. see you back at
the dorm..
                                                            
                       NICK
later..
                                                            
alex walks away
                                                            
                       SARAH
i told you that you could go..
                                                            

7.

                       NICK
and i told you that we were
hanging this weekend, what is
it?.. you dont want to hang with
me?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
i like hanging with you.. its just
that i dont want you to not go out
and have fun because of me..
                                                            
                       NICK
believe it or not i have fun
hanging with you..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
i better be getting back to my
dorm, i have to finish up this
research paper thats due next week
                                                            
                       NICK
okay, well let me walk you back to
your dorm..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay..
                                                            
nick walks sarah back to her dorm, they say their good
byes.. nick turns around and walks to his dorm..
                                                            
 
INT. INSIDE THE BOYS DORM - NIGHT
                                                            
                       NICK (to everybody)
whats up guys?..
                                                            
                       GUYS
whats up?..
                                                            
                       ALEX
whats up with you dude?..
                                                            
                       NICK
what do you mean?..
                                                            
                       ALEX
you and that girl?..
                                                            
                       NICK
who?.. sarah?..
                                                            

8.

                       ALEX
      (dusgusting look
       on face)
yeah her..
                                                            
                       NICK
i dont know.. i think we're kinda
dating..
                                                            
                       ALEX
dating?.. do you know what this
will do to your reputation?..
                                                            
                       SAM
yeah dude, that girl is a total
nerd..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (pissed tone)
watch your mouth.. and i dont care
about my reputation, im tired of
getting in relationships with
chicks just because they want to
be seen with me.. i like Sarah
shes a really nice girl and shes
different.. if you guys dont like
it then dont..
                                                            
                       SAM
shes a lot different..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (pissed tone)
so what if shes different alot,
thats what makes her who she is..
                                                            
                       SAM
alright dude, calm down i was just
saying..
                                                            
                       NICK
i am calm, im going to bed.. ill
talk to you guys in the morning..
                                                            
nick leaves the living room and goes to his room..
                                                            
 
INT. COLLEGE CAMPUS - DAY
                                                            
PEOPLE TALKING.. WALKING TO CLASS.. THROWING THE FOOTBALL
                                                            
nick is included in the football throwing but then he spots
sarah
                                                            

9.

                       NICK
hey guys ill catch up with you
later
      (yells)
sarah.. wait up..
                                                            
sarah stops and turns around..
                                                            
                       SARAH
oh, hi nick..
                                                            
                       NICK
hey beautiful, how did you
sleep?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
i slept good..
                                                            
                       NICK
so what are we doing tonight?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
whatever you want to do..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (opens the door
       for sarah)
well i was thinking about taking
you to this special place..
                                                            
as they are walking down the halls people are staring and
talking amongst themselves and others are just walking to
class.. nick looks pissed..
                                                            
                       SARAH
what time should i be ready?..
                                                            
                       NICK
uhh, ill be there around 7..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
seven it is then..
                                                            
                       NICK
you have a beautiful smile..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (shyly smiling)
thanks..
                                                            
                       NICK
can i walk you to class?..
                                                            

10.

                       SARAH
i thought you was doing that
already.
                                                            
                       NICK
      (laughs)
oh yeah..
                                                            
amber walks by and bumps sarah on purpose knocking her books
out of her hands..
                                                            
                       AMBER
      (slightly grinning)
oops i am soo sorry..
                                                            
                       SARAH
its okay..
                                                            
                       NICK (to amber)
why dont you watch where your
going next time..
                                                            
                       NICK (to sarah)
let me get those for you Sarah,
and its not okay.. you have to
stop letting people run over you..
it wasnt an accident, she did it
on purpose..
                                                            
                       SARAH
why would she do that?..
                                                            
                       NICK
because of me..
                                                            
                       SARAH
dont she understand that you
dumped her..
                                                            
                       NICK
i dont think she gets that i dont
want nothing to do with her..
                                                            
                       SARAH
well she needs to..
                                                            
                       NICK
ill have a talk with her about
this later..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay..
                                                            

11.

                       NICK
well i guess we're here..
                                                            
                       SARAH
yeap, see you after class?..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiles)
ill be right here waiting on you..
      (leans over and
       kiss sarah on the
       cheek)
                                                            
sarah smiles and enters her class.. when she gets inside she
finds a note that reads: STAY AWAY FROM NICK, OR YOU WILL
REGRET IT.. it had no name on it but she had a clue who it
could have been from.. so she put it in her pocket and got
her art supplies out..
                                                            
                       MRS. WILLIAMSON
everybody we have a transfer
student from britian coming today
his name is James Courtenay and
he's going to be in this class
from now on.. could you show him
around and be polite whenever he
gets here.. until he arrives you
all can work on what we have been
doing for the past week..
                                                            
the class gets up and goes to get their houses that they was
making from foam paper kinda like strofoam..they worked on
it for like five minutes then the transfer student had
arived..
                                                            
                       MRS. WILLIAMSON (to class)
okay class this is James
Courtenay..
                                                            
                       MRS. WILLIAMSON (to james)
nice to have you in my class, im
mrs.williams, you can sit anywhere
you would like..
                                                            
                       JAMES
thanks..
                                                            
james saw that no one was sitting beside sarah, and he
immediately took the seat..
                                                            

12.

                       JAMES
      (extends hand for
       handshake)
hey im james, and you are?
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (accepted the
       handshake offer)
sarah..
                                                            
                       JAMES
nice to meet you sarah
                                                            
                       SARAH
nice to meet you to..
                                                            
all the other girls in the classroom stopped.. with a
disappointed look on their face.. because james chose to sit
beside sarah instead of any of them.. they talked amongst
themselves..
                                                            
                       JAMES
so what are you all making?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
houses out of this material..
                                                            
                       JAMES
yours is coming a long really
well..
                                                            
                       SARAH
thanks..
                                                            
                       JAMES
my pleasure..
                                                            
                       SARAH
so your from britian?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
yes born and raised in britian but
ive been living in america for
five years now..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay..
                                                            
                       JAMES
do you think that you can show me
around this place until i get
familiar with it?..
                                                            

13.

                       SARAH
sure, do you have your schedule?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
yeah, just let me get it out of my
bookbag..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay..
                                                            
                       JAMES
here you go..
                                                            
sarah looked at the schedule..
                                                            
                       SARAH
we got every class together, so
this will be easy for the both of
us
                                                            
                       JAMES
      (smiling)
good..is every girl here like you?...
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (confused look on
       face)
excuse me, im not sure i know what
you mean..
                                                            
                       JAMES
i mean like very friendly..
                                                            
                       SARAH
well everybody here thinks im a
total wierdo except 2 people..
                                                            
                       JAMES
really?.. you seem to be the total
opposite..
                                                            
                       SARAH
thanks..
                                                            
                       JAMES
      (smiling)
do you mind if i help you work on
your house?..
                                                            

14.

                       SARAH
not at all, but if you would like
to make your own, i can go get you
some material..
                                                            
                       JAMES
i wouldnt put you through all that
trouble.. just tell me where i can
find it at and ill go get it..
                                                            
                       SARAH
your not putting me through any
trouble, ill just go gather your
stuff and be right back
                                                            
                       JAMES
okay then..
                                                            
so sarah went and got james some supplies so he can work on
his house..he made some progress but then it was time for
them to go to the next class.. and nick was waiting outside
the door just like he said he would..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiling)
i told you i would be here waiting
on you
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
Nick this is James and James this
is Nick
                                                            
                       NICK
nice to meet you James
                                                            
                       JAMES
the pleasure is all mine..
                                                            
they began walking down the hall, Nick was walking Sarah to
her next class.. all the girls were stopping and looking at
the new kid
                                                            
                       SARAH
James is a new transfer student
from britain.. and he asked me to
show him to his classses and he
ended up having all the same
classes as me
                                                            
                       NICK
oh, okay.. thats cool.. well
welcome man..
                                                            

15.

                       JAMES
thanks..
                                                            
                       NICK
do you play football dude?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
i played once..
                                                            
                       NICK
what happened, you didnt like it
or something?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
it was alright.. if i had a chance
to play again, i would.. but i got
hurt like a couple years back..
took a helmet straight to the
knee.. had to have surgery..
                                                            
                       NICK
damn thats got to suck. you could
still come out if you want now,
right?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
yeah im good now.. i might come
out..
                                                            
                       NICK
you should but i have to get to
class early to study a little
before my test.. im pretty sure
you will be okay walking with
james
                                                            
                       JAMES
she will be okay..
                                                            
                       NICK
well ill catch you after your next
class..
      (winks at sarah)
                                                            
                       SARAH
ill be waiting..
                                                            
nick turned and went the opposite way from james and sarah..
                                                            
                       JAMES
is that your boyfriend?..
                                                            

16.

                       SARAH
i dont know, we had a picnic the
other day and he's been really
nice to me
                                                            
                       JAMES
i think he likes you..
                                                            
                       SARAH
he couldnt..
                                                            
                       JAMES
i think he does..
                                                            
amber walks up to james..
                                                            
                       AMBER
mmh, who are you?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
im james..
                                                            
                       AMBER
and why havent i seen you here
before?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
i just arrived today..
                                                            
                       AMBER
okay, and why are you walking with
her when you can be walking with
someone like me?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
i dont even know you, just met you
like literally 5 seconds ago
                                                            
                       AMBER
well you can get to know me..
                                                            
                       JAMES
really now?..
                                                            
                       AMBER
yes you are hot..
                                                            
                       SARAH
ill just go, see you in class
james..
                                                            
                       JAMES
no im coming..
                                                            

17.

                       AMBER
i can show you to your class..
                                                            
                       JAMES
no, sarah is doing a great job..
                                                            
                       AMBER
okay, whatever.. you just dont
know what your missing out on..
                                                            
                       JAMES
      (smiles)
im sure its not much..
                                                            
                       AMBER
      (storms off pissed)
ugh!.. losers
                                                            
 
INT. INSIDE THE COLLEGE - DAY
                                                            
James and Sarah walking to their next class which was
psyhcology.. every girl in there tried to get with James,
they wrote their numbers on ripped off pieces of paper and
gave it to him.. he just smiled and took them.. the class
ended.. that was the last class for that day and Nick was
standing outside the door waiting on Sarah like before
                                                            
                       NICK
here i am, once again..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiles)
                                                            
sarah, nick, and james standing outside the classroom door
talking..
                                                            
                       SARAH
so james are you staying on
campus?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
yes i am..
                                                            
                       SARAH
well nick, do you think you can
show james to his dorm?..
                                                            
                       NICK
yeah, sure.. which one are you
in?..
                                                            

18.

                       JAMES
E386..
                                                            
                       NICK
cool, thats like two doors down
from me..
                                                            
                       JAMES
cool..
                                                            
                       NICK
sarah are you going to walk with
us?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
im going to go look for brittany,
she said she would meet me at the
waterfall..
                                                            
                       NICK
okay, well ill just text you
whenever im done showing him to
his dorm..
                                                            
they went their seperate ways..
                                                            
 
INT. COLLEGE CAMPUS - DAY
                                                            
SARAHS LOOKING FOR HER FRIEND BRITTANY
                                                            
                       SARAH
there you are..
                                                            
                       BRITTANY
      (smiles)
about time you got here..
                                                            
                       SARAH
well i was kinda tied up..
                                                            
                       BRITTANY
is there a boy involved in this
tie up?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
theres two..
                                                            
                       BRITTANY
      (shocked tone)
two?..
      (smiles)
damn girl.. i be out for a while
and you done gone and got you two
            (MORE)

19.

                       BRITTANY (cont'd)
guys.. are they cute at least?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
well you know one.. and the other
guy just got here today, he's a
transfer student.. he's just a
friend though his name is james..
but the other guy you know him,
well..
                                                            
                       BRITTANY
well............. who is it?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
nick..
                                                            
                       BRITTANY
      (thinking out loud)
nick.. nick.. nick..
                                                            
                       SARAH
yes nick..
                                                            
                       BRITTANY
      (gasp)
nick bryan?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
yes..
                                                            
                       BRITTANY
no way.. when the heck did this
happen?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
we had a picnic the other day..
but he's been walking me to class
today and everything.. we're
hanging out later on tonight..
                                                            
                       BRITTANY
no way.. i just cant believe
this..
                                                            
                       SARAH
well you better believe it.. the
new guy he's really nice..ill
introduce you guys if you want me
to..
                                                            

20.

                       BRITTANY
sure, but i need to go see what i
have to catch up on.. ill talk
with you later..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay.. just text me..
                                                            
 
INT. THE BOYS DORM - DAY
                                                            
NICK AND JAMES HEADED TOWARDS THE BOYS DORM
                                                            
                       NICK
so you like it here so far?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
yeah its okay.. are you and uhh
sarah dating?..
                                                            
                       NICK
i havent asked her just yet..
why?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
just asking.. but you do like her
right?..
                                                            
                       NICK
of course i do.. dont tell me you
like her to..
                                                            
                       JAMES
no, i just met her.. but she is a
nice girl..
                                                            
                       NICK
yeah she is.. i just cant believe
after all those years we spent in
high school together, i never
bothered to ask her out.. i guess
i just had my head so far up my
ass, i didnt know a good girl when
i saw one..
                                                            
                       JAMES
yeah.. i know what you mean dude..
can you believe almost every girl
in my pschology class gave me
their number..
                                                            

21.

                       NICK
welcome to the home of the sluts..
      (laughs)
watch out for a girl name amber..
that bitch is crazy.. i dated her
for like 3 months..
                                                            
                       JAMES
she came up to me today and asked
me why havent we met.. she seemed
a little to full of herself..
                                                            
                       NICK
she is.. well we're here.. aye
dude i think you got stuck with
the freaks..
                                                            
                       JAMES
freaks as in?..
                                                            
                       NICK
you'll see what im talking about..
if you need anything man, just
holler..
                                                            
                       JAMES
alright, thanks dude..
                                                            
nick turns and leaves.. and james enters the room..
                                                            
                       JAMES
anybody in here?..
                                                            
no one answered but he looked around and he saw all kind of
creepy stuff.. animal guts in jars full of water looking
liquid.. dead animals fur hanging up on the wall.. a picture
of two dudes on the wall (one looked indian and the other
was white)
                                                            
                       JAMES (to self)
where in the hell have they put
me..
                                                            
                       VOICE
are you scared?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
yeah, kinda..
                                                            
                       VOICE
good..
                                                            

22.

                       JAMES
where the heck are you?..
                                                            
                       VOICE
look up..
                                                            
james look up and he sees a skinny indiam looking boy
hanging from the ceiling..
                                                            
                       JAMES
what are you doing up there?..
                                                            
                       PABLO
ohh just hanging around..
                                                            
                       JAMES
well could you come down from
there.. thats not normal for most
humans..
                                                            
                       PABLO
who said i was fully human.. im
mixed with monkey, you know?..
thats why i can hang like this..
                                                            
                       JAMES
if your mixed with monkey then im
superman..
                                                            
                       PABLO
superman you are then..
                                                            
                       JAMES
whatever.. are there anymore
monkeys around here that i should
know about?..
                                                            
                       PABLO
well not monkeys but we do have
another room mate..
                                                            
                       JAMES
please let him be normal..
                                                            
                       PABLO
well you'll met him soon..
                                                            
 
INT. AT SARAHS DORM - NIGHT
                                                            
NICK IS OUTSIDE SARAH DORM WAITING FOR HER TO COME OUT
                                                            
sarah opens the door..
                                                            

23.

                       NICK
you look.. amazing..
                                                            
sarah was wearing a tight fitted red dress with some black
heels and her hair was curled in tight curls hanging..
                                                            
                       SARAH
you think so?..
                                                            
                       NICK
yes i do..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
thanks.. you look good to..
                                                            
nick was wearing a black polo vest with a white button up
collar shirt under it.. with some blue jeans and sperrys..
                                                            
 
INT. IN NICKS CAR - NIGHT
                                                            
                       SARAH
where are we going?..
                                                            
                       NICK
to a little place i like to go to
just get away and have some alone
time..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay.. how far is this place?..
                                                            
                       NICK
its not that far..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay.. and what will we be doing
at this place?.. sorry if im
talking alot but im just kind of
nervous.. never really did
anything like this before..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiles at sarah)
its okay.. i think its kind of
cute..
                                                            
                       SARAH
you would..
                                                            

24.

                       NICK
so what do you think of the new
guy?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
he's a cool guy so far.. why?..
                                                            
                       NICK
just wondering, he is actually
cool.. i kinda feel sorry for him
though?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
why is that?..
                                                            
                       NICK
his room mates are pablo and uhhh
whats his face..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (laughs)
no way..
                                                            
                       NICK
yes way..
                                                            
                       SARAH
im going to pick at him tomorrow..
so i got a question for you..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiles)
go ahead.. you've already asked
like five..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay, so.. what are we doing?.. i
mean like are we dating or what?..
                                                            
                       NICK
just give me some time with that
question.. i will answer it as
soon as we get to where we're
going..
                                                            
                       SARAH
are we close?..
                                                            
                       NICK
yeap.. almost there..
                                                            
                       SARAH
well good..
                                                            

25.

the rest of the way there the only noise that was heard was
the radio.. then they finally made it to their destination..
                                                            
 
INT. THE WOODS - NIGHT
                                                            
                       SARAH
the woods?..
                                                            
                       NICK
yeah, just follow me..
                                                            
                       SARAH
is it safe?..
                                                            
                       NICK
yeah, just give me your hand..
      (extends hand)
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay?..
      (takes his hand)
                                                            
he takes her to a little cabin house that his parents had
built for him a couple years back..
                                                            
                       SARAH
is this your little place..
                                                            
                       NICK
yeah, my parents had it built for
me like a couple years back..
                                                            
                       SARAH
it looks nice..
                                                            
                       NICK
thanks.. i havent been out here in
a while though.. due to school and
football..
                                                            
                       SARAH
ohh..okay.. how many people know
about this place?..
                                                            
                       NICK
just the guys.. let me just get
the key..
                                                            
                       SARAH
where is it?..
                                                            

26.

                       NICK
right over....... here..
                                                            
                       SARAH
im surprised you can remember
where you bury that thing at..
                                                            
                       NICK
i have some what good memory..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiles)
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiles)
after you..
                                                            
                       SARAH
thanks..
                                                            
they enter the house and he has the fire place going.. soft
music playing.. candles lit.. the table set for two.. the
lights dim..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (in awe)
wow, this is beautiful..
                                                            
                       NICK
im glad you like it..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (tears start
       rolling down
       cheeks)
                                                            
                       NICK
are you.... crying?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
its just that, i have never had
anything done like this before for
me and its just something i have
always dreamed of..
                                                            
                       NICK
well dont cry..
                                                            
                       SARAH
sorry.. im kind of a big baby..
                                                            

27.

                       NICK
well take a seat and ill go get
the food..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay..
                                                            
sarah sat down and nick went and got the food.. he came back
with some lasagna and toast.. and two glasses of juice..
                                                            
                       SARAH
that smells good..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiles)
thanks..
                                                            
                       SARAH
did you cook it yourself?..
                                                            
                       NICK
lets just say i had a little help
for my mom..
      (winks and smiles)
                                                            
                       SARAH
well it doesnt matter if you made
it or not..
                                                            
they sat and ate then when they got done eating they went to
the sofa and sat down to talk..
                                                            
                       NICK
about your question earlier..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiles)
yes?...
                                                            
                       NICK
well i know you know that i like
you, right?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
not really, but james told me that
you did..
                                                            
                       NICK
okay, well anyway i like you
alot.. in high school i dont know
why i didnt try to talk to you
then i guess i cared what other
people thought and not what my
heart wanted.. but now i dont care
            (MORE)

28.

                       NICK (cont'd)
what anybody say and im going with
my heart on this one..
                                                            
                       SARAH
your saying?..
                                                            
                       NICK
im saying that i want you to be my
girlfriend, i mean if you want
to.. if you dont ill totally
understand..
                                                            
                       SARAH
i would............ love to be
your girlfriend..
      (smiling)
                                                            
                       NICK
      (smiles)
cool..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiles)
                                                            
                       NICK
soooo what now?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
whatever you want..
                                                            
                       NICK
here why dont you find a movie you
like and pop it in..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay..
                                                            
there was a knock on the door..
                                                            
                       NICK
ill get it..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay..
                                                            
                       NICK
just a sec..
                                                            
james got to the door and opened it and it was amber..
                                                            
                       NICK
what are you doing here?..
                                                            

29.

                       AMBER
i seen your truck and i was just
thinking about you..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (annoyed tone)
what do i have to do for you to
leave me ALONE!!..
                                                            
                       AMBER
take me back.. i havent been
complete since you left me.. im a
complete mess..
                                                            
                       NICK
thats not my problem anymore, and
besides im seeing someone else..
so i wish you would get a life and
stay out of mine and stay away
from sarah to..
                                                            
                       AMBER
so its sarah your seeing now?..
that nerd..
                                                            
                       NICK
im done with this conversation and
this is also private property so
you can leave or either go to
jail.. your pick..
                                                            
nick closes the door and heads back in to sarah..
                                                            
                       SARAH
who was that?..
                                                            
                       NICK
that was amber.. she seen my truck
parked out there and she came into
the woods..
                                                            
                       SARAH
so what is she now, a stalker?..
                                                            
                       NICK
i have no idea.. but enough about
her.. lets talk about us..
                                                            
                       SARAH
okay..
                                                            
                       NICK
have you ever kissed a guy?..
                                                            

30.

                       SARAH
ima have to go with no..
                                                            
                       NICK
okay, so i will be your first
kiss?..
      (smiling)
                                                            
                       SARAH
yes you will be..
                                                            
                       NICK
ima take it easy on you this
time..
      (smiling)
                                                            
so nick leaned in and sarah did the same.. they kissed and
it was the best feeling she had ever had.. so she decided to
take control even though she didnt know what she was doing
she had seen it on some porn that she was watching.. so she
sat in his lap facing him and they continued kissing..
                                                            
                       NICK
are you sure you know what your
getting yourself into..
      (smiling)
                                                            
                       SARAH
no, not really.. but it couldnt
hurt to find out..
      (smiles)
                                                            
                       NICK
it might hurt you a little bit but
you'll be okay after about a
couple of minutes..
                                                            
                       SARAH
lets try it..
                                                            
                       NICK
you sure?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
positive..
                                                            
so nick picked sarah up and took her into the bed room..
laid her on the bed and begin taking his pants off..
                                                            
                       NICK
im going to ask you one last
time.. are you............
                                                            

31.

                       SARAH
geez nick.. im ready then ill ever
be..
                                                            
                       NICK
just making sure..
                                                            
so nick took control being that it was sarahs first time..
they did what they had to do and then fell asleep..
                                                            
 
INT. CABIN IN THE WOODS - DAY
                                                            
sarah woke up and looked around, she forgot where she was
and she thought last night was all a dream.. until she
turned over and seen nick sleeping soundly..
                                                            
                       SARAH (to self)
wow..
                                                            
sarah got up to go to the restroom.. when she came back nick
was woke..
                                                            
                       NICK
good morning gorgeous, for a
minute there i thought you had
bailed out on me..
                                                            
sarah went back and laid down beside nick..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
i would do no such thing..
                                                            
                       NICK
soooo, about last night..
                                                            
                       SARAH
how was it for you?..
                                                            
                       NICK
it was amazing.. ive had sex
plenty of times but last night was
great.. i guess when you have sex
with someone you really care for
it feels good..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
it was great for me to, being my
first time..
                                                            

32.

                       NICK
i feel really good about this, i
was your first kiss and i was your
first sex partner and maybe your
last..
      (winks and smiles)
                                                            
                       SARAH
you will defiantly be my last.. no
one else would want me..
                                                            
                       NICK
you have to stop bagging on
yourself like that.. you are not a
ugly girl, i dont even know why
people say stupid stuff like
that.they dont even know you know
you.. their just judging you just
to be judging you.. because they
know it will get to you.. i bet if
you acted like it didnt hurt you
they would just back off and leave
you alone..
                                                            
                       SARAH
do you seriously think that will
work?..
                                                            
                       NICK
oh i know it will work.. and that
shyness you have, i will have to
break you out of that and teach
you to start sticking up for
yourself..
                                                            
                       SARAH
i am so not shy..
                                                            
                       NICK
yeah you are..
                                                            
                       SARAH
whatever you say..
                                                            
                       NICK
are you hungry?.. i got some
pancakes and sausage in there
somewhere..
                                                            
                       SARAH
yeah, sure.. are you going to cook
it?..
                                                            

33.

                       NICK
well its already cooked, it just
need to be warmed up..
                                                            
                       SARAH
well i'll go warm it up..
                                                            
                       NICK
you sure?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
yeah im positive
                                                            
so sarah went and warmed up the breakfast and brought nick a
plate.. they ate and cleaned up the place.. then headed back
to the campus.
                                                            
 
INT. CAR RIDE BACK TO CAMPUS - DAY
                                                            
                       NICK
so are you feeling good?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
yeah.. ive never felt better..
                                                            
                       NICK
good.. good.. im glad i can make
you feel good..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
me to.. last night did you use
protection?..
                                                            
                       NICK
i dont think i did..
                                                            
                       SARAH
really?..
                                                            
                       NICK
i was just so ready to you know
that i forgot to slip one on.. but
i got like a whole draw full..
                                                            
                       SARAH
what if im pregnant now though?..
                                                            
                       NICK
i didnt ejaculate in you.. i
pulled out before it happened..
                                                            

34.

                       SARAH
but a girl can get pregnant off of
pre-cum.. guys dont know that
their pre-cumming in a girl then a
couple weeks later she finds out
that shes pregnant..
                                                            
                       NICK
      (a long pause)
well.. if you are then we'll just
have to take responsibility and
make time.. ya know?.. its nothing
to freak out over.. so just be
calm and if you need to take a
test then ill buy it..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiles)
okay..
                                                            
the rest of the ride was an awkward silence.. so they got to
the campus and nick kissed her on the cheek and they went
their seperate ways..
                                                            
 
INT. BACK ON CAMPUS - DAY
                                                            
SARAH WAS HEADED TO HER DORM WHEN JAMES SPOTTED HER
                                                            
                       JAMES
hey sarah..
                                                            
                       SARAH
well hey there james..
                                                            
                       JAMES
you look nice..
                                                            
                       SARAH
      (smiling)
thanks.. ive had a long night..
                                                            
                       JAMES
well what are you doing tonight?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
idk yet..
                                                            
                       JAMES
your not hanging with nick?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
idk..
                                                            

35.

                       JAMES
well do you want to hang out with
me?..
                                                            
                       SARAH
sure.. what do you have in mind?..
                                                            
                       JAMES
i dont know yet, ill think of
something..
                                                            
                       SARAH
so how do you like your room
mates?..
      (laughs)
                                                            
                       JAMES
those are some wierd dudes..
                                                            
                       SARAH
and people think im wierd.. at
least i act normal..
                                                            
                       JAMES
before they judge you they need to
meet pablo.. the guy literally
thinks he is a monkey..
                                                            
                       SARAH
i think they do to..
                                                            


FADE OUT.


Back to Top of Page
Leave Feedback
Feedback
From raisun Date 12/21/2011 ***1/2
Excellent. Keep working on it. I am sure you will be able to make a good script. Just a word of caution. There is a tendency for the characters and story to end up cliche. Please make sure it doesn't end up that way. Thanx for posting a good script.

From Ayana Date 11/30/2011 ****
um mm I think you have a good idea but what you might wanna do is make it realistic and less description of your dialogue would make it flow better. but overall I think you could have a solid story.


Back to Top of Page
Leave Feedback
You must be logged in to leave feedback.
Home    My Account    Products    Screenwriter Community    Screenwriter's Corner    Help
Forgot Your Password?    Privacy Policy    Copyright 2018, ScriptBuddy LLC.    Email help@scriptbuddy.com