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by @LUNEYBANDS (LUNEYBANDS@GMAIL.COM)
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Genre: Action/Adventure
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Colombia is a made for television drama/action series. It is set in Columbia South Carolina during a period of gang violence,drug turf wars,corruption within the police department as well as political and economical struggles.This intense drama showcases the streets of a "big little country city." This is the Pilot episode of the 8 episode series.
This screenplay is copyrighted to its author. All rights reserved. This screenplay may not be used or reproduced without the express written permission of the author.
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FADE IN:
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EXT. DRUG NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY |
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There is a few establishing shots to let the audience know
where we are. Example(Apt buildings, Streetlights, and etc.)
We see a teenage male standing on a street corner. He
clutches his waist as he looks around as if he is paranoid.
Serves being made and cars blasting music,before a
car pulls up in front of him.The passenger side window
already rolled down. |
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DRUG DEALER
What ya need?....What ya need? |
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GUTTA
What you looking like? |
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DRUG DEALER
Everything is everything,what you
need? |
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DRUG DEALER
Gutta,...Awww shit!I knew that was
you bruh.When you touchdown? |
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GUTTA
Bout 2 weeks ago... |
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DRUG DEALER
That's the move...What can I help
yall boys with? |
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GUTTA
(TO THE DRIVER)
You say you need a zip right?
(DRIVER NODS IN
AGREEMENT)
Zip |
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DRUG DEALER
10-4 of
what?...Green,white,brown,lean |
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GUTTA
Naw just loud...I see you doing it
big dog...Green,white,brown and
lean |
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The drug dealer looks down his block at all 3 of his
sellers.He waves the man directly across the street over to
him.He holds up 1 finger and makes an O with the other.The
seller acknowledges him and begins toward them. |
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DRUG DEALER
Yeah,you know how the game
go...The kids gotta eat,right? |
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GUTTA
Hell yeah,everybody got to eat... |
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We see the seller running up to the car.He hands the pack
through the car window to the driver.The driver hands him
the money after checking the drugs out. |
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GUTTA
What's your number bruh? |
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DRUG DEALER
(HANDS GUTTA A
BUSINESS CARD) |
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GUTTA
This nigga got business cards an
shit....You got the block booming
like when them Hurricane Katrina
victims first touchdown in the
city |
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DRUG DEALER
Hell yeah,Those were the
days....Whole shirts was for the
stupid scoop low |
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We see a female walk out of the house with a dufflebag in
hand.The [CAMERA TAILS] her down the steps as she approaches
the drug dealer. |
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ANGEL
Here boo,...Bravo said he's on the
way.That's all it,I counted 3
times |
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Drug dealer takes the bag.We see Gutta giving lustful eyes
towards Angel as he looks her up and down. |
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DRUG DEALER
He couldn't wait till I met him at
Linda's? |
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ANGEL
No he said he was right around the
corner |
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The Drug Dealer looks the other way as if he is annoyed by
Angels' response.We see Gutta still eyeing Angel. |
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DRUG DEALER
(WHISPERS TO ANGEL)
Aight....Next time you tell me
before you come out the house with
30,000 dollars... |
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Angel turns to walk away as we see her give Gutta a
scandalous look.Gutta nods in approval as we see Angel walk
back into the house. |
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GUTTA
Hell yeah,I'm bout to get my hands
back in...I just got to get all my
bread stacked back up,ya feel me |
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DRUG DEALER
You gotta start from somewhere
bruh...If you need anything hit me
up bruh,you got my number....I'll
set you straight |
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GUTTA
Word....What's up with a lil baby
or something tossed on face
then?...I know I'm good for it |
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DRUG DEALER
I would but I can't even do
it...I'm on my dick right now |
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GUTTA
Well how about you let me hold a
stack or something...I know you
got it.Look out for the dog |
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DRUG DEALER
I can't even do it bruh.... |
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We see Guttas' facial expression turn from laid back to
extremely angry.He aims his pistol out the window and
without any hesitation he fires bullets striking the Drug
Dealer.Gutta hops out of the car and grabs the dufflebag.He
also snatches the watch off of the Drug Dealers wrist and
then hops back into the car.The car speeds off leaving the
Drug Dealer laying in a pool of his own blood.[CAMERA ZOOMS]
in on the blood dripping to the cement. |
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The opening credits consist of various shots of regular
looking people in the city of Columbia.The people vary from
construction workers, teacher, librarian, congressman,
lawyer,police,firefighter,gangsters,hoodrats,crackheads,meth
heads,garbage men,etc.We see different historical buildings
as well as low income communities.We see a brick wall with
"PALM METAL STATE SOUTH CRACK" graffiti tagged.We see
Mexican gang graffiti as well as little kids in a playground
setting followed by the title "COLOMBIA." |
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EXT. HINES VIEW PARK - DAY |
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[CAMERA PANS DOWN/AERIAL VIEW]We see a stray dog wandering
the streets followed by SWIFT CAMERA PANS SFX to welcome you
into Hines View Park,a lower-middle class retirement
community that has been overtaken by drugs and crime.We see
Cordell Tubbs,a middle school basketball prodigy,walking to
the nearby gym.He dribbles his ball as he stops at a nearby
intersection.A car is approaching stereo blasting.The car
rolls to a slow stop.Cordell approaches the car cautiously. |
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CORDELL
(FACE SHOWS HIS
DISTASTE OF THE
VOLUME OF THE
SPEAKERS) |
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DARIUS
Lil C,What's cracking lil cuzz?You
hood?...Want me to drop you off? |
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CORDELL
Naw,I'm good.My nigga you riding
clean as a bitch....I aint gon lie
(CHECKS OUT CAR) |
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DARIUS
Yeah you should see my other two I
got just like this one.Flip
Flop....I call em The Three Blind
Mice |
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CORDELL
You doing it big though.....
(CHECKS OUT THE
INTERIOR OF THE
CAR)
Lemme ask you something Darius? |
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DARIUS
(OFFENDED)
How many times I done told you not
to call me Darius....It's D-Loc,ya
understand?
(WAITS FOR A
RESPONSE) |
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CORDELL
What do you do?.....I'm wanna get
like you nigga...."shiiit"
(LEANS HEAD INSIDE
CAR) |
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DARIUS
This is what I do
(PULLS OUT A WAD
OF MONEY)
That basketball....That's what you
do....So keep doing it lil C |
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CORDELL
You know it...They might let me
start on JV next year. |
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DARIUS
Damn right!Keep doing your thang
lil cuzz,I might come down to the
gym later on and run one or two
games and drag yall boys |
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CORDELL
Come on down old man.Anybody can
get it. |
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DARIUS
Aight,I see you...I'm out loco C
safe out chea ya dig |
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Darius chunks a deuce as he drives away.Cordell crosses the
street and walks into the gym parking lot.As he walks over
to the gym we see his friends Petey and Gary. |
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Cordell spots his friends,he rushes over to them.They do a
secret non-gang handshake.They approach the court. |
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CORDELL
I'm bout to beast |
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PETEY
No I'm bout to beast |
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GARY
Naw,I'm bout to beast.Yall lucky
if yall even get picked |
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CAMERA CAPTURES THE GAME DURING IN GAME PLAY ON COURT.THE
GAME ENDS ON A JUMPER AS THE TIRED WINNERS CONGRATULATE EACH
OTHER. |
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CORDELL
(SARCASTICALLY)
Who aint going to get
picked?........Oh |
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Cordell and the others approach the game before picks are
made but not before hearing a single gunshot followed 3
seconds later by a barrage of gunfire.All the players on the
court turn to direction of the shots.The captains continue
picking teams as the gunfire ceases.They act as if gunfire
commmonly occurs.Cordell is obviously bothered by the
barrage of bullets.Even so,Cordell is 1st pick,as he walks
over to join his team he turns and spots Darius' car
speeding past the gym. |
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IN THE BACKGROUND WE HEAR THE STREETBALL PLAYERS TALKING |
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GROWNMANHOOPER
That nigga hot cuzz |
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Cordell stands in awe,as the picks cease.He stares blankly
down the road in a trance.A couple of players take warm-up
shots around him. |
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TREMAINE G. (V.O)
It's real out here,everybody
trying to get it how they live.The
O.G's laying low and the young
gators running wild....And if you
get caught in the wrong place at
the wrong time then it's
gameover.You aint welcomed in
(MORE)
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TREMAINE G. (cont'd)
Colombia without a passport. |
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Petey calls Cordells' name to get his attention as everyone
else on the court continues with their game. |
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DARIUS
C!.....C!.....CORDELL!....What the
fuck bruh? |
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Cordell turns and heads closer towards court while the
players check the ball in game.He glances back over his
shoulder as he hears police sirens in the background.He
tries to shake off the thoughts and join in the game as
everyone else plays aggressive. |
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INT. KING TOM'S DRUG HOUSE - DAY |
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START VOICE OVER |
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{CAMERA PANS LEFT TO RIGHT\SLOW-MO} We see guns lined up
across an old wooden table.Beer bottles and ash trays are
scattered as well,along with neat stacks of money.We are
introduced to King Tom,who is sitting at the edge of his
bed.He counts money and drinks a dark liquor straight out of
the bottle.His eyes appear cold as the CAMERA ZOOMS into his
eyes.{SFX}We see different still shots of white
doves,dice,candles lit,condoms,money,women,liquor,black and
white mazes,etc.This brings to life the level of
intoxication that he is under. |
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EXT. KING TOM'S DRUG HOUSE - DAY |
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We see Darius pull up to the drug house fast.He skirts to a
stop and hops out of the car.He stumbles as he rushes to the
door and bangs on the door. |
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INT. KING TOM'S DRUG HOUSE - DAY |
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We hear a melodic track playing in the background.King Tom
sits on the edge of his bed counting money.We see the news
reporter on the TV.King Tom goes to check the pounding at
the door that is heard over the music.We see the news
reporter showing a picture of Darius as WANTED.King Tom
opens the door pistol aimed directly at Darius's head.Darius
places both arms in the air and freezes in shock. |
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DARIUS
Damn Tom,...Let me in OG |
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King Tom drops aim and turns and walks in.Darius rushes in
behind him.Darius checks out the peephole and blinds after
he closes the door behind him.He paces back and forth
nervous and Tom sits down casually. |
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KING TOM
You lucky I didn't decide to shoot
through the door like last time |
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DARIUS
Shit hot cuz.....Shit hot! |
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KING TOM
What you mean "shit hot?"....You
better have my money,I don't got
time for that foolishness loc |
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DARIUS
Man....I went to go serve one of
my heads up out there in The
View....and when I asked for the
money,the nigga tried to flex on
me like he aint have it |
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Darius rushes back to the window in a chronic paranoia
state. |
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DARIUS
So when I told him,"you made me
drive all the way over here and
you aint got my money?" |
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DARIUS
Soon as I looked in my passenger
side mirror,I saw a nigga with a
mask on running up to the whip.So
I grabbed the chopper out the
backseat....I heard the feen
telling his mans to shoot...I had
no other choice |
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KING TOM
So what?....He robbed you? |
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DARIUS
Yeah he snatched the girl off my
lap and tried to run off and I let
him have it...His partner shot one
time but he must've shot in the
air because the car aint got a
stratch on it |
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KING TOM
Who's car is that anyway? |
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DARIUS
Man I stole that shit cuzz |
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KING TOM
I'm gon tell you real G shit.This
coming from your big homie,you
need to pack your shit,get all the
money you got,and get the fuck out
of the city as quick as possible. |
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DARIUS
Man fuck that,I aint leaving.That
nigga shouldn't have tried me like
that.Knew I should have went to
the movies with my bitch. |
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KING TOM
On C's cuzz....I'mma need you to
get from around my spot
immediately, you understand me? |
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DARIUS
I aint have no where else to go
Tom.What you want me to do,I aint
never killed nobody before. |
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KING TOM
If you stay in the city,the county
is coming to scoop you up tomorrow
where ever they catch up to you
at....You gon need a miracle to
get out of that shit D.....And
that's real cuz
(HE TOSSES DARIUS
A BAG OF WEED)
Take that roll one up and get your
mind right....I'mma go back to
this back and continue handling
business. |
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King Tom walks to the backroom. |
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Darius pulls out a joint of marijuana.He puts the weed King
Tom gave him in his pocket.He lights up the joint as he
looks extremely stressed by the events of the last 24
hours.He closes his eyes and inhales deep breaths of the
joint.King Tom continues counting his money on the table and
guzzling huge gulps of his Hennesy.We see Darius taking long
drags of the joint.We see the smoke rising on the screen as
the Voice Over begins. |
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DARIUS (V.O)
It would take a miracle to get me
out of this mess I've gotten
myself into....And only GOD works
miracles but out here in these
streets,GOD doesn't exist. |
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INT. TREMAINE GROVE'S CONDO - NIGHT |
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{CAMERA PANS DOWN THE HALLWAY SLOW-MO} We hear O.S. arguing
between a man and a women.As we are taken down the hallway
we see pictures of a man and a women together.They look as
if they are husband and wife.The closer we get to the
bedroom the louder the arguing has gotten. |
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TREMAINE G.
Shut the fuck up!....Aint nobody
fucking no bitches,...You gon make
me slap the shit out of you! |
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We see Tremaine and Tamia in their bedroom arguing.Tremaine
tries to walk away as he brushes her off with his hand. |
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TAMIA
Fuck you Tremaine!...I'm tired of
you doing me wrong!...You trifling
ass nigga fuck you.Only good for
eating pussy anyway |
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TREMAINE G.
Man shut the hell up,you sound
stupid hoe |
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TAMIA
Oh,I'mma hoe???.......If I'm such
a hoe then why you with me
Tremaine?.....Huh? |
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TREMAINE G.
I'm getting tired of your shit....
(TRIES TO WALK
AWAY) |
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TAMIA
If I'm a hoe then your mama hoe
rat faced motherfucker!....Oh turn
your back on me,...bet you aint
turn your back on them bitches in
the street. |
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We see Tremaine go to the closet and grab his jacket but not
before being ambushed from behind by Tamia.Tamia jumps on
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Tremaines' back as he tries to exit the room.He flips her
over his shoulder and onto the floor. |
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TREMAINE G.
Keep fucking playing and I'm gon
hurt your ass in here,...keep on
now! |
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Tremaine tries to walk away again only to be stopped by
Tamia pulling on his leg.He leans over and slaps her with a
backhand.She releases her grip on his leg and immediately
grabs her face. |
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TREMAINE G.
See I told your dumb ass to keep
on |
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Tremaine heads toward the door.He throws on his hat and
prepares to exit not before being rushed by a knife wielding
Tamia.She swings the knife wildly slicing Tremaines' hand.He
draws back and clutches his bleeding hand. |
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TREMAINE G.
Bitch!...I'll kill your
motherfucking ass! |
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He cocks back his hand as if he is going to swing on her. |
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TAMIA
What nigga?!......"I'M CALLING THE
POLICE!" |
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TAMIA
Try it and next time I'm cutting
your dick off |
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He rescends on his smack threat.He grabs a nearby towel and
wraps it around his leaking hand and heads for the exit.He
opens the door and stops at the open doorway. |
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TREMAINE G.
When I come back I want all your
shit out of my house.You got 3
hours.
(SLAMS DOOR BEHIND
HIM) |
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Tamia throws the knife as she begins showing her concern on
Tremaines' threat.She falls to the floor and balls up in a
fetal position as CAMERA captures AERIAL OVERHEAD VIEW of
her lying on the floor.She pick ups her cellphone from the
floor.We see the numbers 911 being dialed on the phone. |
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EXT. GREYHOUND STATION - DAY |
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We see Rasheed Tucker standing in front of a Greyhound bus
station.He takes long drags from his cigarette as he looks
around cautiously.Tremaine Grove walks up to him with
dufflebag in hand.Tremaine hands Rasheed a black dufflebag. |
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TREMAINE G.
There's 12 whole ones in there.So
don't fuck around.Make sure you
tell Tom and Fishbone that they
still owe me for last time when
they came up short. |
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RASHEED
That's a bet....I need to holler
at you about some things later too |
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TREMAINE G.
Cool,we'll trap when you get
back.The bus should be pulling up
any minute |
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RASHEED
Fasho,...What happen to your hand
boss? |
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TREMAINE G.
Oh this,....
(THINKS OF A QUICK
LIE)
Man my damn Tigershark and
piranhas got into a fight again
and I had to break that shit
up...you know |
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RASHEED
Damn,...I guess that's the cost
for being a boss huh? |
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TREMAINE G.
(SLIGHTLY CHUCKLES)
Yeah you know how I do... |
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RASHEED
Before you go I been meaning to
tell you that them boys over there
in the heights been talking real
wreckless about you.I seen a
couple of them niggas in the club
last night,I was gon G-check all
of them lames but they hauled ass. |
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TREMAINE G.
Nigga please....You wasn't gon do
shit
(HUMBLE)
I don't got time to beef
Sheed.Success has alot of
enemies,if I wanted alot of
friends I wouldn't be in this
game. |
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RASHEED
Bet....But I'm still gon check
them fools for that all that shit
they was talking.Nobody going to
disrespect you bruh and get away
with it.That's on my hood |
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TREMAINE G.
Whatever fool,what you got to
understand Sheed is that if a real
nigga want you dead out here then
"you dead"....So don't go rushing
into some stupid hot shit
defending my name.I'm good
dun....Believe that |
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RASHEED
If you say so.You know what type
of nigga I am.I'm ready to get to
it.Fuck the negotiations,we
killing the hostages!....You know
how I rock T.G. |
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TREMAINE G.
(LAUGHS)
Yeah,Yeah I know how you rock.Get
back safe with my money bruh.I'll
holler at you when you touchdown |
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They shake hands as Tremaine walks back to his car.Rasheed
meanwhile waits on his bus and continues to smoke his
cigarette.We see Tremaine's picture{SFX} getting taken as he
gets in his car. |
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EXT. ACROSS THE TRACKS FROM THE BUS STATION - DAY |
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In a nearby parked car sit 2 men.The man behind the camera
is Deputy Gregory Vaughn.In the passenger side of his car
sits his newly appointed rookie Officer,Jason Beerman. |
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OFFICER BEERMAN
What do you think's in the bag? |
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Deputy Vaughn sips his hot coffee from a mug. |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
My guess would be anywhere from 1
to 20 kilo's of cocaine,maybe more |
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OFFICER BEERMAN
Woah,....Why don't we just go and
search him now,before he gets on
the bus? |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
Because if we go and search him
and he only has one kilo then we
would be damaging our opportunity
to catch his supplier....The drug
game is a food chain Beerman.He's
black so he's obviously not the
big fish.He has an international
source. |
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OFFICER BEERMAN
Right,...The little fish get eaten
by the big fish and the big fish
get eaten by the sharks. |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
Exactly,...and guess who are the
whales? |
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OFFICER BEERMAN
The kingpins |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
No,....We are....We eat thousands
of little fish at a time.Nobody is
bigger in this game than us,always
remember that. |
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OFFICER BEERMAN
(ANALYZES DEP.
VAUGHN'S REMARKS) |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
But we got some good shots here.So
I guess we can go catch lunch or
something cause I'm starving |
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OFFICER BEERMAN
Sounds good |
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We see the unmarked police car slowly pull out of the
strategically placed parking spot. |
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EXT. WOODCREST PARK - DAY |
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WE HEAR UP BEAT
GANGSTER TRACK |
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We see Gutta walking the streets of a middle class suburban
community.He walks past a line of cars checking each to see
if they are open.He finds one that is open.He does a quick
search of the car as we see him find a gun under the seat of
the car as well as jewelry in the middle console.He scoops
his goods and calmly walks away. |
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WE SEE A GROUP OF
MALES STANDING ON A
FRONT PORCH |
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ROCK
SHIT!......20 years in
jail?....Imma have to at least get
some head or something. FUCK what
yall talking bout (He says
jokingly) |
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W.C.G #1
This nigga gay as Gaga |
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W.C. G #2
You been smoking rocks for real
Rock |
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ROCK
Im just bullshitting. I would have
to beat my dick, everyday. |
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We see Gutta approaching from up the street.He looks behind
his shoulder watching out for any threats. |
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Gutta walks up to the porch.He is up to something but he
plays it calm but in a sneaky sly way. |
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GUTTA
Sup yall......What the lick read? |
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ROCK
Man we just coolin,just finished
burning, you know....the usual |
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16.
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BRANDON
What you hitting for it Gutta? |
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GUTTA
Aint shit,Just trying to get to
some money out here.You feel me? |
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ROCK
Hell yeah,I feel you |
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Gutta glances behind his shoulder and scratches his head
before interrupting Rock. |
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GUTTA
But ummm....Rock you remember that
pack I fronted you last week
right? |
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ROCK
(CONFUSED)
Naw,What pack? |
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GUTTA
The pack I fronted you last week
that you still owe me five fifty
on |
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ROCK
Naw that wasn't me.I don't
remember nothing like that |
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GUTTA
Well you better hurry up and
recall nigga.Because if you aint
trying to pay me "back" the money
you "owe" me then there's a
problem |
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ROCK
I knew you was gon be on some fuck
shit....
(DIGS IN POCKET) |
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GUTTA
Yeah,I'm still on my fuck shit
(FLASHES THE
PISTOL) |
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Brandon and the other WoodCrest Park Gangsters look as if
they are ashamed for Rock.Rock pulls out a thick knot of
money.He gives Gutta his money. |
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GUTTA
(QUICKLY COUNTS IT)
Hold up,...as I think back a
little harder.I believe you owe me
seven fifty not five fifty.....My
mistake |
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Rock reluctantly gives Gutta another 200 dollars.Gutta
smirks as he counts the money once again. |
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GUTTA
Fasho,....I got some freaks coming
to the spot later,B you can swing
through
(OBSERVES THE
OTHER MEN ON THE
PORCH)
I don't know the rest of these
cats so fuck them.But you good B,
I'll hit you up |
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He snarls at the other gangsters on the porch clutching his
gun on his waistline.He turns away and walks off back down
the street.Rock pulls his gun from his waistline. |
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ROCK
Fuck that nigga!....I'm tired of
Gutta always trying me |
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BRANDON
Just let that shit go....Too late
to murk something now.He gone,and
he got your money. |
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ROCK
He lucky I don't want to go down
for burning his ass dog....But I
swear to god the next time that
man try me,I'm gon merk him...And
that's on my mama |
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Brandon just shakes his head and continues to look at his
High Times Magazine.Rock stares down the street in anger and
embarassment.The other two G's continue to drink out of
their styrofoam cups. |
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EXT. ELI'S HOUSE - DAY |
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[CROSS THE STREET VIEW/CLOSE-UP]We see Eli Woods sitting on
the front porch of his suburban home.He is eating a plate of
chicken wings.Gutta approaches him and they shake
hands.Gutta catches a seat next to Eli. |
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18.
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ELI WOODS
Gutta Man....What it do? |
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GUTTA
Aint shit....Give me a piece of
chicken |
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GUTTA
(GRABS A PIECE)
This shit bout to buss |
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ELI WOODS
What's good with you? |
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GUTTA
Same ol...Trying to get it how I
live out chea |
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ELI WOODS
Fasho...My girl sister told me to
tell you holler at her too |
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GUTTA
Word...
(REMINISCES)
Yeah she got a tight lil
body.That's the play |
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Gutta wipes his hands on his pants leg.He throws the chicken
bones in the yard. |
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GUTTA
What you hitting for it today? |
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ELI WOODS
Me and B suppose to go to AJ Marx
a lil later to scoop up some more
pads. |
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GUTTA
I seen B earlier at his crib.It
was him,Rock,and some other fools. |
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ELI WOODS
That fool be taking forever.I
might go down there solo dolo |
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GUTTA
He aint look like he was ready to
go no where either.Speaking of
it,I had to G-check that fool Rock
(MORE)
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GUTTA (cont'd)
earlier at B crib. |
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ELI WOODS
(LAUGHS)
Why you keep picking on Rock man? |
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GUTTA
Cause,...I just don't like that
lil coward ass pussy |
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GUTTA
Made that coward give me 750 for
no reason...
(LAUGHS) |
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Eli puts his plate to the side.His cellphone rings twice
before he takes the call. |
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ELI WOODS
(ON THE PHONE)
Yola |
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ELI WOODS
(ON THE PHONE)
What? |
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ELI WOODS
(ON THE PHONE)
Where you at?....Aite...I'm on the
way |
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ELI WOODS
Man that was my cousin.He say he
need me to pick him up.He couldn't
explain but he said hurry up |
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GUTTA
Shit,I'm rolling with you |
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ELI WOODS
Aite...You got your tool? |
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GUTTA
(SARCASTICALLY)
Do I got my tool? |
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20.
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ELI WOODS
Aight bet,....Let's bounce |
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Eli and Gutta both hop up and head to the car as the camera
fades to black. |
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EXT. HINES VIEW PARK - NIGHT |
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We see Cordell,Petey,and Gary walking down the
street,they've just left the gym.Cordell does dribbling
drills as Petey and Gary walk beside him.They walk past a
house where obvious drug activity is taking place.One of the
dealers calls Gary over. |
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Gary turns to Cordell and Petey. |
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GARY
I'm out yall....I'mma holler at
yall at school tomorrow. |
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CORDELL
What you about to go do? |
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GARY
I'mma just chill over here with my
people them and then go home a lil
later. |
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We see an old wooden home with an oldsmobile in the
driveway.The grass is uneven and the paint chips away from
the house.We see a crackhead come out of the house. |
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PETEY
Boy,your uncle is going to whoop
your ass |
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GARY
My uncle aint gon do nothing.He
don't care what time I come home
anyway |
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PETEY
Whatever you say.Aight then |
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They all do their secret basketball handshakes before Gary
approaches the traphouse.Cordell and Petey continue walking
up the street.Cordell has stopped his drills. |
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21.
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CORDELL
How does Gary know them niggas? |
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PETEY
I don't know.He just trying to be
cool |
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CORDELL
I know who was shooting earlier |
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CORDELL
Because I seen him right before I
got to the gym and he had a big
ass gun in the backseat |
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PETEY
So,that don't mean he was the one
shooting |
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CORDELL
Yeah you right but I'm pretty sure
it was him. |
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PETEY
You better not tell nobody because
if word gets back to Darius then
he gon want to kill you |
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CORDELL
You the only person I done
told...So nobody else will know if
you don't tell anyone |
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PETEY
You good....I don't really
care,and who am I going to tell? |
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CORDELL
Fasho,...I'm out dog,holla at you
tomorrow |
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They do their secret basketball handshake before Cordell
runs to the house.Cordell grabs his keys and goes into the
house. |
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22.
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INT. CORDELL'S HOUSE - NIGHT |
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We see Cordell brushing his teeth in the bathroom mirror.He
gargles his mouth and prepares for bed.He enters his room
and starts flexing for the mirror.He goes into his dresser
and pulls out a purple bandanna.He ties the bandanna around
his face and walks back to the mirror. |
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CORDELL
(ATTEMPTS TO THROW
UP GANGSIGN)
Hines View Gangster Cuz
(HE GIGGLES TO
HIMSELF)
What's up Cuzz! |
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Cordell puts on a tough guy image ever as he portrays a
gangbanger.As Cordell throws up more gang signs in the
mirror his sister bursts in uninvited on his privacy.Cordell
turns around fast as he snatches the bandanna from around
his face. |
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CORDELL'S SISTER
Cordell Albert Tubbs I know you
are not throwing up gang signs in
my house |
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CORDELL'S SISTER
Because that's not what it looks
like.If you want to go throw up
gang signs go do it outside and
sleep and shower outside while
your at it. |
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CORDELL
(LOOKS DOWN
ASHAMED) |
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CORDELL'S SISTER
Gangbanging doesn't run in our
family and it damn sure is not
finna' start with you....So don't
you ever let me catch you throwing
up gang signs in "or" out of my
house do you understand me? |
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23.
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CORDELL'S SISTER
Now say your prayers and get in
bed before I have time to think
about whether or not to put you on
punishment |
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Cordell falls to his knees by his bed and closes his eyes
and says a prayer. |
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CORDELL
Now I lay me down to sleep,I pray
to you God for my soul to
keep...And if I shall die before I
wake,I pray to you God for my soul
to take...Amen |
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Cordell jumps into bed.His sister walks over and tucks him
in like a baby. |
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CORDELL'S SISTER
I only want the best for you
Cordell.I don't want to see you
hanging out on the corner selling
drugs and not amounting to
anything.You're my only brother,I
want for you to stay focused and
to turn your dreams into goals. |
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CORDELL'S SISTER
Love you too baby....Goodnight |
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Cordell's Sister walks over to the door to exit the room.She
picks up the purple bandanna from off of the dresser and
looks back at Cordell.She looks at the bandanna and slightly
shakes her head as she turns the lights off and closes the
bedroom door. |
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INT. TREMAINE GROVES RIMSHOP - DAY |
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We hear loud hip hop music blasting as we see the [CAMERA
PANS] a variety of big chrome wheels.We see which station
the radio is on as local music plays from the speakers.We
see Tremaine standing behind the counter dealing with a
customer.The customer is a flashy individual who looks as if
he is wealthy.The customer looks at a catalog while Tremaine
attempts to look up the rims on the computer. |
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24.
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CUSTOMER
These it right here
(SLIDES OVER
CATALOG) |
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TREMAINE G.
Alright,What size you going with? |
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CUSTOMER
I might go with them 4's but I
don't know if they gon' fit on my
Challenger |
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TREMAINE G.
We'll make em fit,I know you got
the money |
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Tremaine eyes focus on the door as he sees Rasheed
approaching the store.Rasheed walks to the window and waves
Tremaine outside. |
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TREMAINE G.
Yo....I got a customer up here |
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An employee emerges from the back.He takes over for Tremaine
as Tremaine goes outside to Rasheed. |
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RIMSHOP EMPLOYEE
What can I help you with? |
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EXT. GROVE'S RIMS - DAY |
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Tremaine walks over to Rasheed's car where he takes a bag
out of the trunk.He hands the bag over to Tremaine. |
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RASHEED
There's 180 in there....King Tom
was short |
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TREMAINE G.
Bet...I done told Tom about that
shit.Just because we family he
think he can get a pass.That's
thirty this time,not to mention
the twenty short he was last time.
(SHAKE HIS HEAD IN
DISAPPROVAL)
I'm going to have to have a little
talk with Tom,I see |
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25.
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RASHEED
And you may need to see what's up
with that nigga Fishbone.When I
went through there,he was acting
nervous and sweating like a
clucker or some shit.You gotta
keep your third eye open on that
nigga |
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TREMAINE G.
I'll see into that shit...I got
people all around both
Carolina's,especially the
upstate.He gon make me stop
dealing with him all together |
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RASHEED
He had all the guap though,but he
look down bad |
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TREMAINE G.
I'mma check into it,because we
can't have that.I aint serving no
heads.A smoker can't handle the
responsibilities of this game.He
can't function when put in an
uncomfortable situation.So I'mma
see what's up with Fishbone. |
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RASHEED
Bet...Well I'm out big
homie,everything good? |
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TREMAINE G.
Yeah everything Good.I Appreciate
you for looking out and getting
the job done consistently.My
Colombian connect,Chivi,is sending
his Colombians' to meet me with
100 quacks down at the docks in
Charleston.....And I want you to
go meet them with the money and
get on through |
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TREMAINE G.
Yeah,you think you can handle
it?If not I'll find someone else
to go scoop it up |
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26.
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RASHEED
Naw,I can handle it...If they your
plugs' people then they should be
good.I shouldn't have to take
nobody top off |
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TREMAINE G.
Whatever,....I'll hit you from a
payphone in a couple days.Have all
your phones with you because I'm
gonna call all 4 of them.Call me
back from the third. |
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RASHEED
Aight....Hold it down big dog. |
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Tremaine and Rasheed shake hands like business men.Tremaine
turns and walks back toward his rim shop.As he looks back
over his shoulder we see Polaroids [PHOTO SFX] being snapped
of Tremaine with the dufflebag in hand.Detective Vaughn is
the photographer.He snarls as Tremaine goes back into his
shop. |
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EXT. GREENWOOD SPRINGS - DAY |
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We hear an upbeat slow melodic gangster track being played
in the background.We see a playground with old equipment as
the paint is visibly seen chipping away.We see a low income
apartment complex where little kids are seen playing in the
street.We see a neighborhood drug dealer making an obvious
drug deal.We see a group of men huddled around a brick post
shooting dice.We see one of the onlookers snatch the pot of
money and take off running.The other players chase him after
the notice he has the money.One of the players pulls out a
gun instead of chasing the fleeing thief. |
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CRAP PLAYER 1
Fuck that...move,I'm bout to bust! |
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Crap Player 1 aims his barrel at the fleeing thief.He tracks
him down and pulls the trigger 3 times.We see a CLOSE-UP of
the Crap Players' face as he looks shell shocked.{SFX
FLASHBACK OF THE SHOTS}We are taken back to the shots from a
different angle.We see the thief still running after the 3
shots and we see Crap Player 2 is struck by the shots and
falls to the ground. |
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WE HEAR POLICE
SIRENS GETTING
CLOSER |
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We see Crap Player 1 run off in SLOW-MO as skit fades. |
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27.
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EXT. TREMAINE GROVES HOUSE - DAY |
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We see Tremaine Grove in the driveway washing his car.His
house is an upper-middle class home in the suburbs.We see
his white neighbors come outside to check the
mailbox.Tremaine throws up his hand and speaks. |
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Neighbor Rob walks over with mail in hand.He sips from his
coffee mug.Neighbor Rob is a middle aged white man who is
extremely nosy and always asking questions and gossiping
about people in the neighborhood.He is dressed in football
clothing and he appears a little tipsy. |
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NEIGHBOR ROB
Afternoon neighbor...Sweet ride |
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NEIGHBOR ROB
Just got it? |
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TREMAINE G.
Naw,....I've had it for about a
year and a half now.I keep it at
my other house in Georgia.I just
drive it on the weekends. |
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NEIGHBOR ROB
Wow....I was just thinking I
rarely see you in the
neighborhood.We're having a get
together later on,you're welcome
to come |
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TREMAINE G.
I really got to get back to
Georgia but I may swing through
before I leave though |
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NEIGHBOR ROB
No prob....Plenty of beer and
plenty of women...
(JOKINGLY)
White women but I know you rich
brothers like em...."I aint mad at
cha playa" |
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28.
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TREMAINE G. (V.O)
(THINKS TO HIMSELF)
What is that suppose to
mean?...I'll slap the shit out you
puss ass nigga
(FAKE SMILES) |
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NEIGHBOR ROB
Well let me get back to the
preparations.If you're still here
just knock...."I'll holler son"
(GIVES TREMAINE A
SOULFUL DAP) |
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We see Neighbor Rob walk back to his house through his
lawn.Tremaine walks over to his front door stoop.He sits on
the middle step and stares up at the sky. |
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TREMAINE G. (V.O)
See I go through interactions with
multi-millionares,small business
owners,lawyers,accountants,teachers,lawyers,even
police damn near everyday.But the
key out here in these streets is
learning how to adapt to any
environment.Remember all snakes
are cold-blooded but the lion is
the king of every jungle.So in
order to acheive greatness you
must take on qualities of
both.Mystical creatures don't
exist but yet we know of their
legends. |
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[SFX OF MYSTICAL CREATURES LIKE UNICORNS,LOCHNESS
MONSTER,PHOENIX,HALF MAN HALF BEASTS,ETC.] ARE FOLLOWED BY
STILL MUGSHOTS OF SOME OF THE MOST NOTORIOUS GANGSTERS TO
HAVE EVER LIVED LIKE AL CAPONE,JOHN GOTTI,LARRY
HOOVER,TOOKIE WILLIAMS,T-RODGERS,JEFF FORT,FREEWAY RICKY
ROSS,ETC. |
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TREMAINE G. (V.O)
I'm a living legend except my
story hasn't been told.So I'm the
mystical creature you read about
before he was discovered.I'mma God
in these streets. |
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EXT. OPEN FIELD - DAY |
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We see Detective Vaughn's undercover police car sitting in
an open field.Inside the vehicle sits Detective
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29.
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Vaughn,Officer Beerman and a black male with dreadlocks in
the back seat. |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
So what have you got for us? |
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FISHBONE
Well,...word on the streets is
that more work is on the way to
the city,....like alot of dope.The
prices real low right now,like
dirt cheap.I don't know who is
supplying all this work but I
heard it was some Mexicans. |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
The Colombian and Mexican Cartel
both have connections all over
South Carolina.They are at war for
the entire drug market.I need you
to get me a name for this connect. |
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FISHBONE
I'll check into it...But that's
all I got,where's my money? |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
(PULLS OUT A STACK
OF MONEY)
I got your money....But before you
get it,Tell me about Tremaine
Grove? |
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FISHBONE
That's my first uncle....He owns a
rimshop and a couple nightclubs
all over.He aint no drug dealer. |
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OFFICER BEERMAN
He's lying |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
You better hope he's not?......If
I find out you've been lying to me
Fishbone then you would understand
how I would become angry,...right? |
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FISHBONE
I tell yall crooked basturds
everything I know every week at
this same time and yall
questioning me now?...Fuck
yall,I'm helping yall |
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30.
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
Hold your horses,first, watch your
tone in my car.Second,you're not
helping us do shit.We're helping
you,feeding your drug
habit,keeping you out of
jail,stratching your name off of
indictments.Now play your role and
bring me back the good information
like you used to |
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Fishbone opens the car door and steps out of the car.He
looks through the passenger side window. |
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| |
DEPUTY VAUGHN
Your well-being is in our
hands.You do as we say or it'll
cost you not us |
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FISHBONE
Didn't I say Alright! |
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DEPUTY VAUGHN
(EVIL GRIN) |
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Deputy Vaughn rolls his passenger side window up and drives
off slowly from the open field. |
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INT. ELI'S CAR - DAY |
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We hear a heavy bassed hip hop track.We see Eli driving and
Gutta sitting in the passenger seat.Gutta is rolling up a
blunt as Eli turns the music down to call his cousin. |
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ELI WOODS
This nigga told me to come all the
way over here to View.He better
pick up |
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Eli hangs up as no one answers the call.Gutta sparks his
blunt and tilts his seat all the way back. |
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ELI WOODS
I'm bout to leave this nigga.He
probably on some hot shit anyway. |
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Eli's phone rings.He answers the phone. |
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ELI WOODS
(ON THE PHONE)
Yola,where you at?....I'm out chea |
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WE SEE LIL TONY ON
THE OTHER END |
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Lil Tony is standing in the front yard on the phone with a
black eye.He is wearing a green bandanna around his head. |
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LIL TONY
Yeahhhh!....We about to get it
now,them niggas done fucked up
(ON THE PHONE)
I'm on Rice Street...At
324....Hurry up cuz |
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Lil Tony hangs up the phone and paces back in forth in the
yard.We see Eli slowly driving down Rice Street searching
for Lil Tony.He spots him pacing back and forth in the front
yard.He pulls up and stops as Lil Tony runs and hops in the
car. |
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ELI WOODS
Man what the hell happen to your
face? |
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LIL TONY
Man them fools tried me earlier.I
was coming from the store and
these hoe view ass clowns tried to
sneak me |
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ELI WOODS
That's fucked up....You know this
they hood |
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LIL TONY
Fool fuck that!.....I go anywhere
in Columbia.I don't need no
passport....Take this left |
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ELI WOODS
These niggas don't care about who
you are bruh...You aint from here
so you can't just walk up and down
on another set turf at that |
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LIL TONY
Naw I got something for they ass.
(PULLS OUT A MINI
ASSAULT RIFLE)
Think they gon have my shit swole
and get away with that
(MORE)
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LIL TONY (cont'd)
shit.....Yeah right |
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GUTTA
Your lil cousin ready |
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We see Guttas' enjoyment at seeing Lil Tony's fire power.We
see Eli's car stop at a stop sign. |
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EXT. HINES VIEW PARK - DAY |
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We see Cordell,Petey and Gary walking down the street on
their way home.Cordell bounces his basketball as he does
dribbling drills on the walk.Gary looks at the traphouse.He
stops Cordell and Petey. |
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GARY
I'm about to go post over
here,I'mma holla at yall boys
later |
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PETEY
What you about to do over there
though? |
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GARY
Man them fools in their pay me to
do little shit for them like run a
bag to a car and get the money and
bring the money back to them |
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CORDELL
How much you get payed? |
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GARY
It depends,some days I get a
little bit like 50 dollars....And
then somedays I get alot like 300
dollars but I get paid everyday |
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CORDELL
(AMAZED)
You get 300 dollars to run a bag
to a car? |
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GARY
Yep,that's why I come over here
everyday. |
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CORDELL
Let us come with you.... |
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Gary glances at the traphouse.A couple gang members come
outside the house.They laugh to each other as one of them
recreates the jumping of Lil Tony. |
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GARY
I don't know...I guess it's cool
though.Come on' |
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PETEY
Man I don't know....I gotta get
home |
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CORDELL
Man come on,don't be such a
puss..It's not even dark yet,the
street lights aint even on |
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Petey agrees and follows Cordell and Gary into the yard up
to the door. |
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PSYCHO
(DEMONSTRATING)
I had him on the ground stomping
his face in the dirt...
(LAUGHS) |
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H.V GANGSTER 2
His eye all jacked up....I know
it's closed shut
(LAUGHS) |
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H.V GANGSTER 3
Shouldn't have been
slipping....How you gon come out
here with no pass? |
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PSYCHO
He asked for it.....A bitch can't
be your pass.Everybody already
fucked that hoe anyway,she don't
care |
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GARY
Psycho,What's up big
homie?...These my lil niggas
Cordell and Petey..They say they
trying to work |
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PSYCHO
Fasho,...I got a spot for yall lil
niggas...But yall got to get down
with the set first like the lil
homie G-Will did. |
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CORDELL
I'm trying to get down...I'm ready |
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We see Psycho give Cordell a sinister look as he gives a
evilish smirk.We see Eli's car approaching in the distance
as the CAMERA FOCUSES in on Cordell as he is the only one
who sees the car. |
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INT. ELI'S CAR - DAY |
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Lil Tony has wrapped his flag around his face now.He looks
out of the window as he rolls his window slowly down. |
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LIL TONY
The house right here on the
righthand side....Them the hoe ass
niggas who jumped me right there |
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ELI WOODS
Man just chill,I say we just ride
by and later on tonight we'll come
back through and wet it up |
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LIL TONY
Man,I aint hearing none of
that....I'm bout to let these
fools have it...Them niggas tried
me |
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Eli's car approaches the house.Gutta rolls his window down
as well. |
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EXT. HINES VIEW PARK TRAPHOUSE - DAY |
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We see Psycho and the rest of the Hines View Gangster still
joking around until finally Psycho spots the green bandanna
around Lil Tony's face as CAMERA ZOOMS from the step into
the car. |
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Psycho pulls 2 guns from his waistline but not before we see
a barrage of shots rain from the Eli's car.After numerous
rounds of ammunition have been fired we see a Eli's car
which has been filled with bullets speed off from the
scene.[SLOW-MOTION]After a few seconds of melancholy we see
a shell shocked Gary approach both of his friends Petey and
Cordell laying on the ground.They both have been shot,Petey
has the worst of the injuries with 3 bullets holes in his
chest.Cordell struggles for life as he's been shot in the
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back.Gary breaks down falls to his knees beside both of
them.We see an OVERHEAD AERIAL VIEW of Gary huddled around
Petey and Cordell as we hear sirens approaching in the
background. |
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TO BE CONTINUED |
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CAMERA FADES OUT AND ENDING CREDITS BEGIN |
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FADE OUT. |
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