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Genre: Horror
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Two sister's thsught they had a normal life in a new town called kingston texas but before they know it they didn't know it had a seceret behind the town that nobody knows untill they find out the real thing about this town till a surprise baby killer came along
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BABY GHOSTFACE
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FADE IN:
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EXT. IN THE KITCHEN - NIGHT |
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Victoria is on the phone in her kitchen with her sister
McKenzie Victoria Hang's the phone up walks towards McKenzie |
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VICTORIA BENZES
" Hey, McKenzie turn it to channel
4 there something on the news
about a guy named Jason got stab
to death last night." |
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McKenzie Turns it to Channel 4 |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Why should I" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"well if worth living is what you
want, i dont think worth
questioning should be said." |
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They both watch the morning news about the murder |
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(Victoria turns off the TV) |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"gosh poor guy stabbed to death,
thats so sad." |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Yeah it just happen out of
nowhere" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I think so" (Think for a minute)
"Yeah I think so" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I'm concerned that it's was just
a big prank" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"A big prank, a big prank this kid
just got stabs buy some crazy
person just killed him for no
reason he was just watching a
scary movie about a killer
cheerleader. Then just died out of
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VICTORIA BENZES (cont'd)
the blue." |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
" Seriously Victoria your just
being such a big scary chicken for
crying out loud (sigh) I'm sorry
for saying that it's just you are
taking this thing to personal, and
it's freaking me out can you just
stop." |
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Victoria walks to her laptop a research the killing |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"We'll from reading this article
about the ghostface killer here to
strike again." |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Look at Victoria
with an annoyed
look)
"Wow, you seen too much scary
movies, or you might drank too
much last night." |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Shut up, they found blood all
over his living room." |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(McKenzie Exit out)
"You're losing it" |
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Victoria boyfriend Tucker comes in |
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TUCKER THORNE
"Hey, Victoria Beezer" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Laugh)
"Babe you know its Benzes not
Beezer you crazy" (kisses him) |
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TUCKER THORNE
"Yeah I know I'm just like playing
with you doesn't get all hurt
inside. By the way what are you
reading?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I'm reading something about some
guy with a knife just killed
someone named Jason miller last
night, did you hear about that or
not?" |
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TUCKER THORNE
"No it was not guy it was a baby." |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Really wow a baby just killed
older people that really fuck up" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Yeah I know a random baby came
and just stared killing, by now I
thought it was going to be an
older person again." |
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Victoria closes her laptop and walk towards the living room
couch |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Maybe I'm taking this thing way
out of control." |
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Tucker sit next to her |
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TUCKER THORNE
(Laugh)
"Uhh you think" |
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Victoria get's mad |
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TUCKER THORNE
"I'm Kidding around with you god
calm down" |
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McKenzie Walks in |
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TUCKER THORNE
"Hey. Hey little miss McKenzie how
you doing?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Hey Tuck good, how you doing" |
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TUCKER THORNE
"Good thanks for asking" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Hey have Victoria been telling
you about that Ghostface killer
dude" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"She crazy right" |
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McKenzie Laugh |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(still laughing)
"Make sure he doesn't kill you
first" |
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TUCKER THORNE
"We'll if he does I'll kick his
ass" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Shut the hell up guy's" |
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TUCKER THORNE
"Hey, you're the one who is
freaking out at this stupid
killing spree" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(looks terrified)
"Hey Where's McKenzie?" |
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McKenzie pops out with the ghostface mask and scared
Victoria |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Screams)
"AHHHHHH" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Hahaha, I scared you " |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"You little …. |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"You little what, come on say it
you skinny chicken" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I'm going to be the bigger person
and not say it" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I thought so Hmhm" |
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TUCKER THORNE
"Well I'm goanna head out now so
see you later" |
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Tucker exit |
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All of a sudden Victoria phone rings |
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Victoria reaches for it |
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VOICE
"Hello who is this?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Who are you trying to reach here" |
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VOICE
"I don't know i wanna know who i'm
looking at" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(In a Annoyed
voice)
"Well it's Victoria Benzes for
your information now leave me
alone okay" |
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VOICE
"Well,well we got a firce one here
i like that" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Angry)
"Hey I'm not the one who calling a
17 year old girl on a Friday night
you creep" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Scared)
"Who is it" |
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Victoria hangs up her phone |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Some creeper trying to scare me" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"it might be someone from your
high school trying to pull a
halloween prank on you" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"yeah maybe you're right or it
could be tucker playing a joke on
me" |
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Baby Ghostface hides behind Victoria |
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McKenzie look scared |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(concern)
"Why do you look scared to me |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Scared)
"Umm, Victoria maybe you want to
turn around" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(playing around)
"why is baby Ghostface behind me" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Scared)
"Uhh, what the hell do you think
turn around look i'm not playing a
joke on you right now can you
please look" |
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Victoria turns around |
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McKenzie and Victoria runs towards the room |
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INT. IN VICTORIA BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS |
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Victoria locks the door |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(out of breath)
"Call the Police now" |
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Victoria dials the cops |
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POLICE
"911 what's your emergency?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Hi, my name is Victoria Benzes
someone is chasing me and my
sister" |
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POLICE
"Okay, what's your address miss
Benzes" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"My address is 7634 Glandwood |
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POLICE
"Okay help is on the way" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Okay thank you so much" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"what did the police say?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"They are coming as soon as
possible" |
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Victoria slightly opens the door and check she look left and
right then she close the door |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Is he there or what" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I don't know" |
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McKenzie stars to cry |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"why are you crying kenz?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Crying)
" I don't want to die tonight, I
don't want to die tonight I'm so
not ready to die yet, have you
seen a 11 year old girl die at
this young age" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"no but ..." |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I thaught so we need to get out
of here now" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Just calm down" |
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Victoria crack the door about an inch |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Crap, he almost saw me" |
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McKenzie stars to cry again |
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Victoria covers McKenzie Mouth |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Shhh, be quiet" |
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Victoria checks again |
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Victoria and McKenzie comes out of the room |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I think he left" |
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McKenzie still crying |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"See what I told you it's real not
like in those freaking stab movies
and all that other crap, this is
real life we need to try to
survive and make sure no one else
gets killed. |
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Cops comes five minutes later |
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SHERIFF TERMER
(Shouting)
"Hello is annyone here" |
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McKenzie and Victoria walks towards the living room |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"where in the hell where yall we
almost got killed" |
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SHERIFF TERMER
"Where so sorry" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"He almost killed my sister he was
right behind her almost freaking
stab her back" |
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SHERIFF TERMER
"Calm down little one its okay" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Easy for you, you didn't almost
get killed you were probally
eating a jelly donut and hot coco
or whatever you do when theres no
a crime scene or something" |
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Sheriff Termer Say's nothing and left |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(annoyed)
"See they didn't even care about
it they didn't mind if we almost
got killed" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Mad)
"There stuck up cops" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Yeah i know but they could of
look for clues or something to
find him" |
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INT. THE KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Angrey)
"How come the stupid cop's didn't
do anything to help" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(In Quotation)
"They only want evidence" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"By the way how did he get in
here?" |
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Victoria checks everywhere |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I don't know" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"oh yeah I forgot I let the back
door unlock" |
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Victoria check again and see the lock broken |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"No you didn't he broke the lock" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Seriously" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Confuse)
"I,I still don't get it how he
just got in here" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Well maybe he just snuck in here
while the door was unlock" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Hmm you never know unless you
find out" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Yeah i guess you're right" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I'm always right" (Laugh) |
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Victoria looks at McKenzie with a come on look |
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EXT. OUTSIDE IN THE NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY |
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THE SUN SHINING BRIGHTLY IN THE SKY |
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VICTORIA SEES ONE OF HER FRIEND |
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VICTORIA WALKING WITH HER FRIEND COURTNEY POPE |
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COURTNEY POPE
(Happy to see
Victoria)
"Hey Victoria how you been? and
how's you're sister?" |
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VICTORIA THINKING ABOUT WHAT HAPPEN THE NIGHT BEFORE |
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VICTORIA HAS A FLASBACK OF HER AND HER SISTER GETTING CHASE |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Hello earth to Victoria" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Oh, sorry" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Are you okay" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"What's the hell wrong with you" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Oh i was just thinking about what
happen to McKenzie and i the other
night" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"So, what happen with you and
you're sister the other night that
you did'nt tell me about" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"What happen was Mckenzie and i
were watch the news about a
killing that happen the night
before. then all of a sudden
Mckenzie was acting weird i did'nt
know what was wrong with her.so
after i got a call from a block
number and it was a creepy voice
on the phone telling me like who
is this and i was why are you
calling me late at night and last
Mckenzie said Baby Ghostface was
behind me i did'nt belive her then
i turn aroun then "BOOM" there he
was chasing me and Mckenzie then
we called the cops they did'nt do
crap about it so that what happen
that night" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"How come you did'nt tell me this
the day before" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I,I ddon't know i thaught you
would think i'm crazy or
something" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"so there is a baby in a mask from
the scream movies killing people
here in Kingston,Texas and he
get's to choose who lives and who
dies" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"This is bull so we have to watch
out to make sure that he dosn't
come and kill us |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"That's what i'm saying
girlfriend" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Wow i never knew that this could
actually happens in real life i
thaught it's was just a fake movie
that a guy just wrote for people
to enjoy watching scary movies" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Well belive it this is reality
not a freaking horror movie" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Well how do you know they might
make this into a movie someday if
they video tape the murders" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Well tonight make sure you lock
your doors close your windows and
look out" |
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COURTNEY POPE
(Laughing)
"Hmm,you're so funny you think i'm
gonna die tonight if i don't lock
my doors and close my windows" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I'm not playing around this is
serious" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Okay i wiil be careful, NOT
I'mgonna watch a scary movie
tonight and if i get a call out of
nowhere from a block number and
get chase then you're right okay" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Well if you get killed tonight
and i see you on the news found
dead then i will have the last
laugh" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Shut the hell up i'm not really
gonna die tonight you crazy bitch
haha" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Well enjoy you're last day here
on this earth that we live in
right now" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Oh my gosh really you really
think i'm gonna die tonight of
what you told me just this last
minute" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Uhh,Yeah" |
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Courtney walks away from Victoria |
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COURTNEY POPE
(yelling Out from
a far)
You're crazy i telling you, you
are freaking crazy right now bye |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Yelling out from
a far)
"Well good luck bitch" |
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VICTORIA WALKS BACK TO HER HOUSE |
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ANNOYED WITH HER FRIEND COUTNEY |
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INT. VICTORIA AND MCKENZIE'S HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER |
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VICTORIA WALKS IN AND SLAMS THE DOOR |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Mad)
"Uggg, I'm so fucking mad right
now" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"What's wrong with you" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Nothing just leave me alone for a
moment" |
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INT. VICTORIA ROOM - CONTINUOUS |
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Victoria slams her room door and sit's on her bed |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Ughh, i,i just can't stand her
right now" |
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Victoria grabs her cell phone and calls Courtney |
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COURTNEY POPE
(in a sweet voice)
"Hello" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Mad)
"You know what you are so gonna be
sorry when you get killed tonight |
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Courtney hangs up the phone |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"She is a freaking scared right
now" |
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McKenzie walks in |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Victoria are you okay" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Mad)
"McKenzie i told you to leave me
alone right now Courtney is gonna
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VICTORIA BENZES (cont'd)
get a call from the killer tonight
like the one that called me the
night before remember" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"So she is probably going to die" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Well tell her Sorry" |
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INT. COURTNEY POPES HOUSE - NIGHT |
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COURTNEY GETTING READY TO WATCH A NEW MOVIE THAT CAME OUT |
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SHE GOING TO WATCH STAB 6 |
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COURTNEY PUT'S THE DVD INSIDE THE DVD PLAYER AND HIT PLAY |
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SHE SIT'S ON HER COUCH WITH SOME POPCORN |
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STAB 6 PLAYES |
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SHANNON STAB 6
So who are you? |
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VOICE
(From Stab 6)
The question isn't who am I.
Thequestion is where am I? |
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SHANNON STAB 6
So where are you? |
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VOICE
(From Stab 6)
Your front porch. |
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SHANNON STAB 6
Why would you call me from my
frontporch? |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Wow this stupid ass blond girl
dosn't know where the fraking
killer is and plus she not a very
good actress why would they pick
her so stupid |
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COUNTINUES TO WATCH STAB 6 |
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VOICE
(From Stab 6)
That's the original part. |
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SHANNON STAB 6
Oh yeah? Well I call your bluff. |
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VOICE
(From Stab 6)
Starting to feel familiar? Maybe
weshould have started with
ding-dongditch... |
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SHANNON STAB 6
You're not scaring me. I killed
thelast fucker who tried to Stab
me,shot him right in the head.
Trustme when I say, you picked the
wronghouse. |
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Courtney pause the Movie and her phone rings it's a block
number |
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She answers the phone |
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Courtney look at the still of the movie |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Yes, who are you calling" |
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VOICE
"I don't know i guess i dial the
wrong number" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Well it happens sometimes" |
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Hangs up the phone |
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The phone rings again |
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VOICE
"Hello who is this" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"This is the person who you just
spoke to a few minutes ago" |
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VOICE
"Well sorry i just wanna know who
i'm speaking to" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Oh, Well it's Courtney Popoe" |
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VOICE
"Well hello then courtney" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Hello why are you calling me
again" |
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VOICE
"Do you wanna die tonight
Courtney" |
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Courtney get's Scared |
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COURTNEY POPE
"I'm not going to answer that" |
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VOICE
"Why don't you wanna answer this
little simply question huh" |
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COURTNEY POPE
(Courtney Relize
it might be
Victoria)
"Nice try Victoria trying to scare
me after what you told me early
this morning" |
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VOICE
"Who's Victoria this is not her" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Oh,Yeah then who is this" |
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VOICE
"Well think of me as you're movie
director" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Well i'm not a actress" |
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Courtney get's worries and look around her house |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Well you better stop now or i'm
few secounds of calling the cops |
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VOICE
"The cops are not going to do
anything to help you you're stuck
here for me to kill you" |
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COURTNEY POPE
"Fuck you,you don't kno where i
live" |
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VOICE
"Well how do you know i'm might be
hideing somewhere inside your
house" |
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Courtney walks around scared and worried she walks aroud
looking with the phone |
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COURTNEY POPE
"what do you want from me" |
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VOICE
"well theres a couple of reason i
want you and oh, heres one to
watch you squial while i kill you
right now |
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Courtney hang up the phone and baby Ghostface comes out and
chase her around her house ti'll Courtney finds a place to
hide she lock the door and try's to open the window to jump
out but, it won't budge.So she hears Baby Ghostface banging
on the door trying to get her.she starts to cry |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(Crying and
yelling)
"Leave me alone, Leave me alone
please stop it" |
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Baby Ghostface open's the phone and courtney hides under the
bed Baby Ghostface check everywhere then hears something and
see Courtney under the bed and grabs her as she scream's |
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COURTNEY POPE
(Screaming and
crying and
yelling)
"No,No,Noooooooooooooooo |
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Baby Ghostface knife fly into the air and stab her in her
arm and Curtney kick him and run's towards the door Baby
Ghostface Runs to Courtney. Courtney fall down on the floor
and Ghostface strike her with the knife and she dies |
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INT. VICTORIA ROOM - MORNING |
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Victoria is watching TV. Then one of Victoria Cousin Khasity
Greenville calls her |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(On the phone)
Hey, Victoria turn on the new's
there something about you're
friend Courtney Pope |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(On the Phone)
"Oh really i wonder what it is
Probably about a reaport of her
saving a lost puppy or something |
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Victoria turn's on the TV |
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NEW'S REPORTER
"Hi i'm Zackary Coleman with a sad
shocking news about a 17 year old
teenage girl by the name Courtney
Pope who was brutaly Murder last
night Police said that the 17 year
old was watching a movie alone
while all of a sudden she get's a
call from ablock number and also
police found blood all over her
body and on her floor the police
think it look like a murder scene
from a horror movie here is some
of Courtney neighbor heard her
screaming so let's talk to one
here is Ashely McHeart to tell us
about what she heard |
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NIEGHBOR
"Well i was going to take my dog
for a walk till i heard someone
scream i thaught that they where
playing around till i saw her
(MORE)
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20.
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NIEGHBOR (cont'd)
almost climb out of her window
then i thaught something was wrong
then i heard her screaming no,no
then that all i heard from her |
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NEW'S REPORTER
"Well thank you Amberly for your
comment on what happen police are
seaching for more evidene on the
crime well that all for now and
thanks for watchin new's 4
texas |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(On the phone)
"is that crazy" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(On the phone)
"Yeah i just saw here that day and
i told her to watch out but she
didnt listen then here you go she
ended up dead" |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(On the phone)
"so sad well talk to you later
then bye" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(On the Phone)
"Okay Bye" |
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Victoria hangs up the phone |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"That what i told her to be very
careful but she didn't litsen" |
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Victoria calls her sister Mckenzie |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Yelling out from
a far)
"McKenzie can you come up to my
room for a minute" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Yelling from a
far)
"Yeah i'm coming" |
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21.
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Mckenzie walks to Victoria Rooms |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"What's up sis" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"You know my friend Courtney" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Yeah why" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Well she got stab last night" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"wait,didn't you tell her about us
getting chase" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Yeah, but she got all mad and
said it's all fake and i'm being
dramatic" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"so she thaught it was fake" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"you're friend Courtney was crazy" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Yeah i know but now she dead we
gotta watch out who going to be
next this time i mean like really
we can't let everyone clode to us
to die like this" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"you're telling me we need to pay
as close attention as possible if
we can" |
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McKenzie walks towards the window and look out |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I wanna know who the killer is
aat this point so two people down
how many are left to go" |
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22.
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I have no idea like i aid we
gotta watch out to see who's next" |
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McKenzie walks away from the window a left the room |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(yelling)
"Wait McKenzie wait" |
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But McKenzie was to far away to hear Victoria |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"you never listen" |
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INT. DOWNSTARIS IN THE LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"McKenzie why didn't you listen to
me when i called you we need to
talk why he wanted to come here" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(annoyed)
"Didn't hear you yelling?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Calm down alright" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"No, it's not alright first he
killed some rendome guy named
jason and now as we speak you're
friend Courtney dead so what do
you have to say to that?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
I,I'm not sure actually to tell
you the truth" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"See told you we need to know who
it is that doing the murders here
in this small town" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Well if he comes towards us agian
we can try to see who it is K but
first let wait to see where he
will strike next" |
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23.
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"But one thing is how are we going
to know where he going next" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Oh yeah that true" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Shut the heck up" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Just saying the killings are only
going to get worse" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"You don't know that" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I know but what if it dose get
bad and then what are we going to
do huh?!" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I'm not sure" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"See what i'm telling you we don't
even know where he's going next" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"But what happens if we know
where the place is at" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"If we do we go out and see who is
in that mask" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Then what are we gonna do?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"You'll know..." |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"No, i don't what are you saying i
can't understand what you mean by
you'll know..." |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"You still don't get it do you?" |
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24.
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Get what?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"We see who the killeer is we un
mask him" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Maybe that's not a good thing to
do" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Why not" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I'm just saying" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Just saying what? you know we
didn't ask for it to be like this
it just happen out of nowhere" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Just drop it!" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(annoyed)
"Why are life is now in danger
bacause of this killer decide to
kill innicent people" |
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Victoria walks out of the room |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I can't belive you're being so
rediculous Victora do you realize
we are in sudden danger" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(from a far)
"I'm not being rediculous and i
know we need to be careful and be
safe" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Shut the freak up" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(still from a far)
"Exsuse me" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Nothing" |
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25.
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EXT. IN THE KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I think the problem is... that we
should be feeling like we should
be more shaken up about this...
whole murders here" |
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McKenzie walks towards the kitchen and sits on a chair |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I know but other's are shaken up
by this too but who we don't know
untill we see what happens next" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"But what if we don't what happen
if he killed the person beore we
even get over there" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Oh yeah i guess i didn't think
that far a head yet" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"let'ssee what's happen the next" |
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They hear a knock at the front door victora gose check it
out to see who s at the front door she turns on th proch igh
on and look through the deadbolt and check to see who is
outside see she nobody she unlock the door and rying to open
it as her heart is pounding McKenzie runs towards her |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Quietly)
"Who is at the door?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Shhh, i don't know old on let me
see" |
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Victoria opens the door and check through the screen door
takea step back to unlok the door and walks outsde to see
who had knock on the door she check left to right and she
walks awayfrom the house and look back at the house and she
ee McKenzie still standing in the front door |
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EXT. OUTSIDE IN THE FRONT YARD - CONTINUOUS |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"There nobody out here" |
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26.
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Victoria walks bak towards the house an check one more time
then till she heard a sound again McKenzie walks towards
Victoria |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Are you coing back inside
Victoria" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Yeah i am go back inside real
quick" |
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Victoria walks back to the house untill she heard a sound
again she ran strieght ahead to the house and she closed the
door quickley as she can and lock it she sit's down by the
door and cover her eyes |
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EXT. IN THE LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
""What happen ou there what was
that sound" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I don't know i heard it twice" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"What could it be are you sure it
wasn't him trying to get inside
here" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Yeah i'm sure" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"victoria are you alright" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"yes but i'm trying to figure out
what that sound was" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"We'll never know" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Why would someone knock on our
door and not be there i don't get
that like why in the hell would
they knock and not show there
face" |
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27.
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Probally crazy people making us
think that it's the killer try to
get us agian like the last time"" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Maybe or maybe not" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(sigh) I'm already getting tired
of all this" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"But what if it was him and luckly
i didn't get killed whle i was
standing there" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"That could be it too if you put
it that way" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Do you get it now i just realize
that this killer what's every one
that we know dead but who is next
i hope not one of my friends again
or even one of you're friends" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"oh,no i don't want any one of my
friends to die either" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"then tell them to watch out and
don't make it seems like a silly
joke ok McKenzie?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"O.k i'll tell them to watch out
for themselves" |
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McKenzie smiles |
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Victoria smiles and give her a hug |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Now be careful" |
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28.
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"you know will i'm not that dumb
okay i know to watch out for
myself" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"i'm just telling you" |
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McKenzie walks towards the couach and sits down |
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victoria phone rings |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Victoria you're cell phones is
ringing" |
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Victoria gose and pick up her phone and answers it and the
number is block |
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Victoria answers her phone |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Hello who is this?" |
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VOICE
"You know exactly who this is..." |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"No, I don,t." |
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VOICE
"Yes you do think of me as a
paparazzi i'm trying to hunt you
down and get a good shot of you" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Oh really where are you then
huh?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"This isn't funny cut it out now
or i'm a one call of calling the
cops" |
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VOICE
"The cops aren't gonna do you any
good you have to survie this
horror movie on your own even if
you try to stay alive" |
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29.
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MCKENZIE BENZES
(Quietly)
"What's going on" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(cover the phone
and look at
McKenzie)
"Shhh" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Asshole this is not a horror
movie do you see camera's filming
huh" |
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VOICE
"Ahh, you don't know the best part
of what i do" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Oh, yeah then what the hell is
it?" |
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VOICE
"To find you and you're little
sister too" |
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Victoria hangs up the phone and throw it on the couch |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Who was it on the phone?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"then same stalker again" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"What did he want from you?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"He want to find us" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I,I seceriously don't even know" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"How could you not freking know
you just talk to someone who
killing pepole right now on the
phone like a few secounds ago dam
get it to getter Victoria" |
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30.
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VICTORIA BENZES
"What got into you" |
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McKenzie walks towards the dvd case and pic out a stab 7
knife of doom |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Drop it already I'm gonna watch a
movie okay you can join me if you
want?" |
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Victoria walks towards the couch to watch the movie with
McKenzie |
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Mckenzie puts the movie on and hits play |
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They watch the movie |
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VICTORIA BENZES
""this is what where fucking going
through right now" |
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INT. KHASITY GREENVILLE ROOM - EVENING |
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Khasity is in her room watching tv until the phone rings |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(in a sweet voice)
"Hello" |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
"Who's this?" |
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VOICE
"Who i'm i calling " |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
"I thinck you dial the wrong
number?" |
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31.
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
"hmm it happens all the time don't
worry this isn't the first person
to call a wrong number" |
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Khasiy hang's up the phone and walk her closet and opens it
and while she close her closet her phone rings again |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
"Hello" |
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VOICE
"Hello who is this?" |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
"This is the person you talk to
like a while ago" |
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VOICE
"What's your favorite scary movie
Khasity?" |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
"Actually i don't have a favorite
scary movie" |
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VOICE
"Why don't you like scary movies" |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
"Beacause i hate it when they
stalk someone and call them by a
block number chase them down
stairs and gut them with their
knife and eww all that blood that
comes out of them" |
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VOICE
"Do you wanna die tonight
Khasity?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Scared)
"What?" |
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"Khasity hangs up the phone and runs down stairs and lock
the front door and she lock the back door and then ran up
the staris and went to her room she heard a sound down
stairs she looks everywhere and she see nothing then all of
a sudden she looks back in the living room out of nowhere
baby comes out and chase khasity outside in the backyard she
runs as fast as she can then till she tumble into the the
grass and baby ghostface comes after her raises his knife
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32.
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whlie khasity screams on top of her lungs she kick him on
his leg and runs out into the front yard she was hopeless
and in danger then till she didn't see him chase her back
she gose back to the front and check everywhere in the back |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(Confuse)
"What the.... how ......" |
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Khasity went back inside the house and went back up to her
room and closes the door |
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She open the door to make sure everything is clear |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
"That was a freaking nightmare" |
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then she closes the door |
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INT. VICTORIA AND MCKENZIE LIVING ROOM - DAY |
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McKenzie invited her friend Faith Underwood to hang out |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Thanks for coming ove Faith" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Oh you're welcome i wanted to
come anyway" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Hey, have you heard on what's
been going on this past few
week's?" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Actually no i havent't why what's
gonig on teel me" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Well it started with a phone call
from a block number and then he
was standing right behind victoria
and then we were chase by him" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Wow that's crazy did you get
hurt?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"no, thank goodness we didn't" |
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33.
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Well when we were talking about
that we heard a noise out of
nowhere so she check it outside
and nothing then we heeard it
again" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"but, the important thing is that
you guy's were ok now what else
happen?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"yeah i know that was close too" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"you telling me it look like it
was hard to getaway from it and
why did he call you before he
chase you i don't even get that
part at lease" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"it was a crazy thing to
experiance at this time of age" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"how crazy was it like bad or
really, really bad?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Like really,really bad i still
have nightmares from it and one of
victoria friend got killed by the
killer she told her to watch out
but she did'nt listen" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Oh my gosh that very terrible for
her" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Yeah we watched it on channel
forur news the next day" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"I bet her family was so sad to
find there own aughter dead and
how old was the girl?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"She was seventeen years old" |
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34.
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"wow really seventeen years old i
can't belive she died so young" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Yeah she didn't expect this to
happen to her" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Well she is in a better place
now" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"that true hey you wanna watch a
movie with me?" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Sure what kind of movie
comedy,kids/family,fantisy,romance
oh and my lease favorite of all
horror movie you pick it out" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I'm feeling like a scary movie
right now do you?" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Really McKenzie a horror movie
you gotta be kidding with me right
now" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I never kid about scary movies" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Fine(Sigh) what horror movie do
you wanna watch?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Well I'm thinking of INSIDE that
one of my new favorite horror
movie too like the STAB trilogy's" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"I guess you promise not to scare
me again like the last time i let
you pick out a horror movie to
watch" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"I won't i promise from the bottom
of my heart i won't trust me" |
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35.
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"(Sigh) Okay,Okay put the movie in
already for we can watch it and
get it over with it " |
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McKenzie put's in INSIDE to watch with Faith |
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McKenzie goes to get some popcorn |
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Faith starting to look scared and pause the movie and look
for McKenzie |
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Faith get's up from the couch and looks for McKenzie she
check in the kitchen she see's the bowl of popcorn she left
on the table she look in the hallway she can't find her |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Okay McKenzie stop scaring me i
know you playing with me now cut
it out i mean it right now stop" |
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Faith can't find McKenzie untill the lights turn off in the
living room she look and still see's the movie on |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Okay,Okay time me,time me so now
where are you huh McKenzie?" |
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The phone rings Faith get's scared |
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|
FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Really trying something new to
scare me" |
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She answers the phone |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
(Scared)
"Hello" |
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VOICE
"Hello who is this?" |
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VOICE
(Scared)
"Faith who's this" |
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VOICE
"This is the last person you ever
going to see alive" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"What do you mean?" |
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36.
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VOICE
"It means do you wanna die tonight
Faith?" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"You're crazy" |
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VOICE
I'm not crazy i'm a pyscho" |
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I'ts McKenzie putting a prank on Faith |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Hahaha I'm sorry i had to do it" |
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They both hang up the phone McKenzie get's the popcorn and
turn on the lights and sit on the couch |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Girl you promise not to scared me
again so you lie" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Öh come on it's almost Halloween
i love this holiday" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Well i don't you gotta understand
i don't like getting scared" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Fine,fine i won't scare you no
more" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Good now can we get back to the
movie?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
No, we can watch something elsë" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Hey you made me watch this movie
so let's finish it" |
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McKenzie hit's play and resume watching the movie |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Hey how did you made you;re voice
change like that?" |
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37.
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Oh that i use a voice changer
recorder" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Oh pretty cool,pretty cool but
why would you scare me like that" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"You know i was joking around with
you" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"I know you alway's done that" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"but i'm i fun or what?" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Fun but sometimes you can be a
jerk" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Me a jerk shame on you Faith" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Shame on you too for scaring me" |
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The phone ring's McKenzie answers it |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Nice try and good job of doing
the Ghostface voice goood day" |
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McKenzie hangs up the phone and get's up to pu the popcorn
on the counter in the kitchen and walks back to the couch |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
""Who was on the phone right now?" |
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38.
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Oh no one" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Mmhmh Yea (In quotations) "No
One" good one Kenzs" |
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McKenzie stop's the movie |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Why you stop it" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"You're mom here to pick you up
remember" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Oh okay we still have to finish
the movie again" |
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Faith Mom walks to the door and knocks McKenzie open's the
door |
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FAITH'S MOM
"Faith honey are you ready to go?" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Yeah Mom let me get my stuff" |
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FAITH'S MOM
"So McKenzie what did you guy's do
today?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Oh we just watch a movie and
talk" |
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FAITH'S MOM
"Oh how nice" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"I'm almost ready" |
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FAITH'S MOM
"Okay i'm still here faith i
haven't left yet" |
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Okay i'm ready" |
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FAITH'S MOM
"Say bye to McKenzie Faith don't
be rude" |
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39.
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FAITH UNDERWOOD
"Bye McKenzie" |
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Faith hugs McKenzie |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Bye Faith see you later" |
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FAITH'S MOM
"Bye McKenzie" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Bye Mrs.Underwood" |
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McKenzie close the door |
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EXT. IN VICTORIA AND MCKENZIE HOUSE - NIGHT |
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McKenzie is siting on the couch with her sister Victoria |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"What a long day" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Hey i heard on the new's today
that Khasity got attack by the
baby Ghostface" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Hey i heard on the new's today
that Khasity got attack by the
baby Ghostface" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"What are you serious about this?" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Yes you can call her if you want
if you don't belive me" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Fine i will" |
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McKenzie get's the phone and calls khasity |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(On the phone)
"Hello" |
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40.
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Hey Khasity did you get chase by
the killer today afternoon?" |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(On the phone)
"Hell yeah i did it was freaking
scary i ran out to the backyard
and i clumsy me i fell and he's
knife swing hight then i kick him
and i went to the front and he was
gone" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Wow are you okay?" |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(on the phone)
"Yeah i'm fine and it was like if
i was in a horror movie" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I know how you feel well thanks i
just wanted to know bye" |
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KAHSITY GREENVILLE
(On the phone)
"Okay bye" |
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They hang up |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"See what i tell you and you
thaught i was lied about it Que
Malo" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Oh be quiet" |
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Victoria cell phone rings |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"What the fuck do you want?" |
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VOICE
"Too see you die right now" |
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41.
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Where are you then huh?" |
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VOICE
"I'm rgiht outside you're door" |
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Victoria walks towards the door unlocks it and swings it opn
fast |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"So where are you i'm outside show
you're face" |
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Victoria turns around and see baby ghostface behind McKenzie
and slice McKenzie arm Victoria runs and push Baby ghostface
to the wall but baby ghostface kick victoria to the sofa |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Victoria look out!!!" |
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Victoria get's up and see baby ghostface and moved out of
the way Victoria run's and baby ghostface push her to the
wall and raises his knife victoria duck down and get
McKenzie to the room and close it and baby ghostface comes
to victoria she moves out of the way and run's back to the
living room |
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VICTORIA BENZES
(Yelling)
"Who are you and why are you doing
this!!?" |
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Baby ghostface run to victoria.Victoria runs and to the room
that McKenzie is in and lock it |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"How bad is it?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Bad like really bad" |
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Victoria sees McKenzie arm bleeding she get's a towel and
covers it while baby ghostface bangs on the door he burst it
open McKenzie and Victoria runs to the hall while baby
ghostface is walking Victoria and McKenzie run to the living
room and baby ghostface follows them and stay's in the same
position |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"So who are you? answer my
question now" |
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42.
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Yeah show us who you really are" |
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Baby Ghostface walks slowly towards them and Victoria and
McKenzie walks backwords baby ghostface run's towards them |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Go,go McKenzie go run and hide |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Just do it" |
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McKenzie run's to the room and victoria stay's in the same
position |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"What do you want now huh come on
i thaught you are one of the big
dogs now what" |
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Baby Ghostface run's toward Victoria Victoria ducks and baby
ghostface knife is stuck victoria dosen't have enough time
to get McKenzie so she went outside and baby ghostface run's
towards her outside |
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EXT. OUTSIDE - CONTINUOUS |
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Baby ghostface is outside with victoria she steps back while
baby ghostface is walking towards her she has nowhere else
to run baby ghostface stands there silent |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Are you going to do something to
me come on stab me sucker" |
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Baby Ghostface still stands still he holds his knife and
runs towards Victoria and stab her in the stomach while
McKenzie push baby ghostface on the floor |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"What the... What the hell just
happen what did you do McKenzie" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I knock him out with this " |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"What is that?" |
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43.
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"I don't know" |
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Victoria and McKenzie looks back at baby ghostface on the
floor out cold they turn back and walk to the kitchen |
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EXT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"That was one hell of a night?" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Yeah,You telling me alright" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Wait let me check real quick if
he still there for we can call the
police" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Oh yeah go ahead check quick" |
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Victoria went to the window to check if Baby ghostface was
still there |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Uhhh,McKenzie we have a promblem
here" |
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McKenzie walks towards Victoria to look outside |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"What is it" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"He's gone he not there on the
ground anymore" |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"What are you kidding" |
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VICTORIA BENZES
"No i'm not" |
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They both look outside the glass door and see him gone they
didn't know what to do now |
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MCKENZIE BENZES
"Well thery always come back they
always do it's no lie that what
happens in horror films" |
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44.
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VICTORIA BENZES
"Not again" |
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They both walk away from the class door and walks away from
the kitchen |
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FADE OUT. |
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Feedback |
From John Bradley |
Date 11/29/2012 |
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The opening starts out with a scene heading "In the Kitchen" I would take out the word "In" since that's already implied. Then in the first sentence of direction it says "in the kitchen" again. Not neccessary.
Character introductions need to be capitalized.
In dialogue numbers are typically spelt out "ten" instead of "10".
Check to make sure you have periods at the end of your sentences and the the first letters are capitalized.
Paranthetical Direction gets it's own line.
Quotation marks don't belong in dialogue.
Offscreen sounds and sounds from innanimate objects are supposed to be capitalized. TELEVISION PLAYS, PHONE RINGS, etc.....
You can have the greatest story in the world but if it is not meticulously editted no one who matters will take it seriously. For every hour you spend writing you need to spend ten editting.
http://screenwritingtips.blcklst.com/2009/06/ that is a good website to help you along, also try reading screenplays from films you love. |
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