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Timeline
by Michael Richards (badgertv0@gmail.com)

Rated: PG-13   Genre: Action/Adventure   User Review: ****
The story follows Harry Young, a cop who is promoted to chief after a group of criminals kill the old chief. Harry has a family and a wonderful job, but that all changes when he has a personal anger going against Lucas Castrello, the leader of a criminal gang entitled 'The Poppers'. Harry has several troubles finding them, but he soon gets help from an unknown man who gives him a time remote. Though the time remote works, bringing him back in time, will things ever be the same afterwards?


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FADE IN:

INT. YOUNG HOUSE, BEDROOM - MORNING
                                                            
We slowly zoom out of a white phone, the phone you saw at
beginning of Scream or your typical horror movie. As we
slowly zoom out, the camera takes it's chance to spin away
from it even more and reveal husband and wife lying in bed,
next to the table which the phone is upon. The phone rings,
and Harry Young is the first one to sit up and answer it.
                                                            
                       HARRY (Tired)
Yeah?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS (In Tears)
Harry, it's Douglas... It's Bobby,
he's dead.
                                                            
Harry doesn't talk, he is in complete surprise, he drops the
phone and falls to the bed, still silent, mouth agape, and
starts to cry. Lisa awakens and sits up.
                                                            
                       LISA (Surprised)
Harry, what's wrong?!
                                                            
                       HARRY
Bobby's dead... Bobby's... How?
How could this happen?
                                                            
Lisa hugs a crying Harry as we slowly zoom away from the two
and fade to black.
                                                            
 
EXT. GRAVEYARD, BOBBY'S FUNERAL - AFTERNOON
                                                            
Harry leads Lisa and Max down the aisle as drums play.
Soldiers stand nearby and continue to play the drums as
everyone sits down in their seats. An american flag is
folded and put on top of the coffin. Harry sits back and
watches as it happens, only for the screen to fade to black.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S CAR - MORNING
                                                            
                       HARRY
Max, I've told you to have fun in
school before, right?
                                                            
                       MAX
Yeah, why?
                                                            

2.

                       HARRY
Time flies... It flew for me and
now I can't do anything about it
but sit back and watch, wait for
time to fly again and again.
                                                            
                       MAX
Okay, are we almost there?
                                                            
 
INT. BAR - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry walks through a door and towards a man sitting on a
bar stool and drinking from a mug. Harry continues towards
this man, and does go to him.
                                                            
                       HARRY
How you holding up, Davis?
                                                            
Davis takes a sip of beer from his mug and sits back, he
sighs and looks up at Harry.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Jesus Christ, man, my brother just
died! Cut me some slack before you
put me on another mission.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Man, calm down. I'm not putting
you on another mission.
                                                            
                       DAVIS (You're lying)
Ugh-huh.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I'm not! Your brothers death hit
home for me to, you shouldn't
think it didn't because it did.
God, you've still got anger
issues. You know, I remember being
older than you by four years, you
were eight, I was twelve, and you
and you're brother were so
close... I couldn't believe it.
      (Leans in to Davis)
My point is, I feel this to,
exactly what your feeling. Which
is exactly why I'm gonna buy you a
beer.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Oh, come on, you don't have to do
that.
                                                            

3.

                       HARRY
I know, I want to.
      (Takes out Sheriff
       badge)
I'm the Sheriff now.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
My god, Harry, that's great! I
should be buying you a beer.
                                                            
                       HARRY
No, you're not going to. Your
brother just died, I'm buying
everyone a beer!
                                                            
Everyone in the bar cheers by clapping and yelling.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S CAR - AFTERNOON
                                                            
                       COP (Over Speakers)
There is a group of criminals
vandalizing a building around
304th Street.
                                                            
Harry grabs the microphone connected to the radio and speaks
into it.
                                                            
                       HARRY (Excited)
I got this.
                                                            
A car pulls up and Harry sees a group of men spraypainting a
building, he grabs his gun and opens the door.
                                                            
 
EXT. SIDEWALK - DAY
                                                            
                       HARRY (Adrenaline-Fueled)
Drop the paint! Put your hands up!
                                                            
                       CHARLES (Surprised; Scared)
Oh, shit! Guys, run!
                                                            
Harry chases after them as they run off, he watches as two
throw spray paint containers close to him, and he continues
running, swinging his gun up and down as he does so.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Stop! Put your hands up!
                                                            

4.

The criminals run into a street and a car comes, almost
crashing into them until they run ahead of it. Harry runs in
front of the car before it can continue driving and he
continues chasing down the criminals.
                                                            
                       HARRY (Angry)
Stop! I'm ordering you! Put your
god damn hands up in the air, now!
                                                            
The criminals continue running and Harry angrily stops, he
kicks the wall and starts walking back. Harry walks to the
wall and sees they have written 'Pigs Suck' on the wall, he
angrily kicks the wall and turns to walk to his car.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' OFFICE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
We see the words are now on television, and the camera zooms
away from the television to reveal a man watching. The man
angrily turns and we see his face as he leaves the room.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas walks out of his office and sees the group of
criminals run inside.
                                                            
                       CHARLES (Disappointed)
God damn cops caught us, man.
                                                            
Lucas angrily punches Charles and knocks him to the ground.
Everyone watches in surprise, their mouths agape.
                                                            
                       CHARLES (Scared)
I'm sorry, Lucas! I am, I swear.
                                                            
Lucas angrily punches Charles again, right across the face
and knocks him to the ground.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (Angry)
I can't have this. This was too
close! All of you, get the hell
out of my building, and never walk
back here again. God damn idiots.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
We're sorry, Lucas.
                                                            
Lucas angrily kicks Charles in the stomach and yells.
                                                            

5.

                       LUCAS
Do you think I care? God damnit,
if you go down, I go down with
your ass.
                                                            
                       PAUL
Jesus Christ, Lucas, it was a pig.
Get over it, you just need to calm
down.
                                                            
Lucas angrily punches Paul across the face and knocks him
into the wall.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Nobody tells me what to do, god
damnit!
                                                            
Lucas turns around and sees Charles is standing up and that
Paul is slowly moving away.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Good, now remember... Never come
back again.
                                                            
Frank, Leonardo, Harold, and Lew all walk out of a closet
wall and see the criminals running off. Frank looks down and
sees the blood, he watches in surprise.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (Crazily)
What, boy, you never see some
blood before?
                                                            
Everyone shares a laugh, even Frank himself for a moment.
                                                            
                       FRANK (Scared)
Not for awhile, that's all.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Well, can you guys clean up their
mess?
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER'
We got this, come on guys.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Hey, where's Davis?
                                                            
                       FRANK
His brother died yesterday, give
him some time to recover.
                                                            

6.

                       LUCAS
Tell him I send my sincere
apologizes for the incident.
                                                            
Frank nods and follows the three out the door. Lucas turns
and walks into his office as a man behind a counter walks
out and starts to clean up the blood.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas sits down in his chair and watches through a window as
Charles and his group sit on the hood of a car and smoke. We
see a zoom in show Charles look at Lucas, and they hold eye
contact until Lucas smiles and looks away.
                                                            
 
EXT. OUTSIDE LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       CHARLES (Angry; Proud)
We don't need that faggot.
                                                            
                       PAUL
And he clearly doesn't need us.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Let's give the guy a taste of his
own medicine.
                                                            
                       PAUL
What are you saying? That we just
go, attack him, right now?
                                                            
                       CHARLES
No, and not now... We train,
practice, gather a group, you
know, what he did. We become a
team.
                                                            
                       PAUL
That may be the stupidest idea
you've ever had.
                                                            
                       GANGSTER (Jokingly)
Has he ever had a good idea?
                                                            
The entire group cracks up in laughter, and Charles angrily
jumps up and kicks the car to shut them up.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Why don't you look forward to the
future and stop looking down at
the past? Screw you guys, I'm
doing this on my own if you won't
            (MORE)

7.

                       CHARLES (cont'd)
help.
                                                            
                       PAUL
I'm in, Charlie.
                                                            
Charles walks off and Paul follows after him as everyone
laughs.
                                                            
 
INT. YOUNG HOUSE, BEDROOM - MORNING
                                                            
Harry is asleep up until the point his alarm turns to 7:15
and goes off. Harry sits up and sees Lisa is gone, he
reaches over to where she would be laying and looks around,
looking for her. Harry turns off the alarm and stands up in
a hurry.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Lisa?! Where are you?!
                                                            
Harry runs downstairs with a baseball bat and sees a rock
next to broken glass.
                                                            
                       HARRY
God damnit, who did that?
                                                            
                       LISA
Max.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Are you sure?
                                                            
                       LISA
Pretty sure.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Max! Get down here!
                                                            
Max runs down the stairs, and Harry angrily throws the
baseball bat to the ground.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Why'd you do this?
                                                            
                       MAX
Do what?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Don't pull that on me, you did
this and there is no doubt, god
damnit.
                                                            

8.

                       MAX
Dad, I didn't do anything.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Really? Is that the truth? Go up
to your room, your grounded for
two weeks.
                                                            
Max angrily runs upstairs, and Harry walks off.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Just put it on the card, Lisa.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S CAR - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry drives down the street and sees his group of workers
standing and talking while looking at something on the
ground. Harry pulls up and opens the door.
                                                            
 
EXT. PARK - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry walks away from his car and sees his crew stop talking
and turn to him.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Sorry I'm late.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
No, don't be, we got all day.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Jesus Christ! Can you cut me some
slack, Douglas? I have a family
and what do you got, huh? Nothing,
I should care less whether or not
you get fired, and that's saying
something, because you're right
below my position right now,
Douglas.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
We've been waiting for you to show
up all morning, and you just get
here. For Christ sake, man, it's
nearly 10 o'clock!
                                                            
                       HARRY
You got a real mouth on you, you
know that? Shut the hell up unless
you want to be fired.
                                                            

9.

Harry kneels down and looks at the body.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Who is this?
                                                            
                       MATT
We've got no clue, Harry.
                                                            
Harry lifts up the victim's head and blood starts pouring
out. We see Douglas face turn sour, like he is about to
puke, and he turns away.
                                                            
                       MATT
Jesus Christ, what the hell is
wrong with killers now days?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Your asking me. I've been asking
myself that question for nearly
fifteen years now.
                                                            
Harry looks away from the blood as it continues.
                                                            
                       MATT
Shouldn't we test the blood?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Yeah, I was going to.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
What the hell is wrong with you,
man?
                                                            
                       MATT
What? Me?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Hell yeah, you! God damnit, do you
think he's stupid?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Hey, calm down! God damnit, can't
have one day without fighting, can
we?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
You know what? Screw you Harry,
I'm trying to stick up for you,
like a friend does, and you just
sit there, saying all of this
shit.
                                                            

10.

                       HARRY
Lower your voice, Doug, we're in
public! Public! That means you do
not get to just say what you want
to.
                                                            
                       MATT
What the hell crawled up your ass
anyways?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Nothing... It's just, your a cop,
a detective, not a rookie... So
don't say shit that rookies say.
                                                            
                       MATT
Shut the hell up! At least I'm
actually useful for this team!
                                                            
Douglas shoves Matt, and Harry is the first to spring up and
tackle Douglas away from Matt.
                                                            
                       HARRY
God damnit, Douglas! What the hell
is wrong with you?! That's illegal
god damnit. Why don't you just go
home, alright?! Go home and get
some god damn rest, because
apparently you didn't get any last
night.
                                                            
                       MATT
Yeah, Douglas, excuse me for doing
my job.
                                                            
Matt angrily walks off and doesn't say anything else.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
I don't need any rest.
                                                            
Harry angrily turns to Douglas.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Do you think I even care? Just go
home, Doug! You've done enough for
today. What is wrong with you
lately, whatever it is, go home
and forget about it. Come back
when your ready to do your job.
      (Leans in to
       Douglas
       menacingly)
And if you ever touch another cop
again, I will personally fire your
            (MORE)

11.

                       HARRY (cont'd)
ass.
                                                            
Harry walks away as Douglas stands there, smirking.
                                                            
 
INT. BAR - NIGHT
                                                            
Charles takes a sip of beer as the camera slowly revolves
around him to reveal his face and behind him the group
playing pool with Paul. Charles stands up, and we switch
angles to show him walking over to the pool table.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Who's winning?
                                                            
                       PAUL
Who'd you bet on?
                                                            
Another group of men stand next to them, laying out money
and dancing to the music while it plays.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Damnit, I didn't know they were
taking bets yet.
                                                            
                       PAUL (Laughs)
I bet on this guy right here.
                                                            
Paul points to someone with a black shirt and black bandanna
on.
                                                            
                       PAUL
Black's my favorite color.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Well are you too drunk to say
there names?
                                                            
                       PAUL
That and I forgot it.
                                                            
The group laughs as another ball is hit, spiraling into the
camera and causing a fade to black.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
I think I know the name.
                                                            
                       PAUL
Oh yeah?
                                                            
Another ball is hit and Paul takes the time to look at it.
                                                            

12.

                       GANGSTER
Yeah, speaking on that group idea,
Charlie, I'm gonna have to skip
that.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Come on, it'll be fun.
                                                            
                       PAUL
What's the name?
                                                            
                       CHARLES
The Devils.
                                                            
                       PAUL (Laughs)
I like it!
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Good, we need something because
we're going to hit Lucas in the
morning.
                                                            
                       GANGSTER
When are you going to let that guy
go, man? Damn, your more hooked
than a fish to a hook.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
It's not the hook that the fish
like, it's the food on the hook.
                                                            
                       GANGSTER
You know what I mean.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Join us.
                                                            
                       GANGSTER
No, god damnit, I said no. Now
leave me alone.
                                                            
                       CHARLES (Laughs)
That's fine... Yeah, that's...
Fine!
                                                            
As Charles yells 'Fine!', he grabs the gangster's head and
slams it onto the pool table, he then throws the man to the
ground. A bartender jumps the table, running for Charles.
Paul tackles the bartender and throws him into a table,
breaking the table and sending the bartender to the ground.
Charles kicks the man.
                                                            

13.

                       CHARLES
You gonna join now god damnit?!
Huh?!
                                                            
                       GANGSTER (In Tears)
Yes! God damnit, alright! I'll
join! I'll join, just please...
Please, don't hurt me.
                                                            
Charles smiles, he grabs his beer and drinks a long sip.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
      (Moves his beer
       down)
Now everyone, cheers!
                                                            
Everyone takes a sip, they then stop and a man gets ready to
hit another ball on the pool table. A final ball is hit, and
it smacks the camera, causing it to fade to black again.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - MORNING
                                                            
Harry walks through the door and walks over to his desk.
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Hey, we found a fingerprint on the
body.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Who's?
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Leonardo Wright.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Your brother?
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Sadly.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I'm sorry man.
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Hey, it's cool, no sweat. Besides,
it was his stupid ass decision to
join The Poppers anyway.
                                                            
The two smile and fist bump, then Samuel walks away.
                                                            
 

14.

INT. POLICE STATION - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry watches from behind a window as Leonardo and his
lawyer walk in. Samuel catches a glimpse of his brother as
the two walk by one another in the hall, all the both do is
smile as they pass by, hitting shoulders and continuing to
walk.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
      (VOICEOVER)
Why's it so sad in this place?
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - INTERROGATION ROOM - LATER
                                                            
                       HARRY
I dunno, it really wasn't until
you came in.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
Your a funny man, you know that?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Yeah, I've been told.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - WATCH ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Samuel and Douglas watch from behind the window, we turn the
camera and show the door opening, to which Sam and Douglas
both turn. Matt walks in.
                                                            
                       MATT
Am I late?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Shh...
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - INTERROGATION ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
I'm not asking if you did it, I'm
asking if there's anything that
can explain the fingerprint.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
Can I say hi, to my brother,
quick?
                                                            
Leonardo turns and waves at the window.
                                                            
 

15.

INT. POLICE STATION - WATCH ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
God damn douche bag.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
I was thinking you two are alike.
                                                            
The three share a brief laugh, even Matt.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - INTERROGATION ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
Stop, I'm tired of your bullshit.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
As am I.
                                                            
Harry angrily jumps to tackle Leonardo.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - WATCH ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Oh shit.
                                                            
The three run to the door to get in the interrogation room.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - INTERROGATION ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Douglas leads the two in and they look at Harry, who is
strangling Leonardo.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Stop it!
                                                            
Harry angrily walks towards Douglas and the two.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Sorry Sam.
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Don't sweat it, he gets on my
nerves too.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
I'll make you a deal you can't
refuse.
                                                            

16.

                       DOUGLAS
Can't refuse. Yeah right, that's
bullshit. Why would we trust you
after the game you just played?
                                                            
                       MATT
Even I agree with Doug here, how
can we trust this son of a bitch?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Let's here the offer first.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
I know where Lucas is, I know
every single detail about his
building, about his setup, about
his life... I'll become a rat for
you.
                                                            
                       HARRY
And how can we trust you?
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
I bring in prove... A, um, a
missing person's arm, or
something... A gun used to kill
someone, I dunno. Just tell me yes
or no, and I'll do whatever.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
You go in there untrained and
talk, he might know.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
I'll put in an ear piece, listen
to you guys. You tell me what to
do, you tell me what to say.
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
I hate to admit it, but that
sounds pretty damn solid,
actually.
                                                            
                       HARRY
No, okay? You've been up under my
skin this entire meeting, why the
hell would I put my trust in you.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
Because I'm telling you I'll do
it. Okay? I go in there, I come
back bringing prove, not
suspicion, not lies, not bullshit.
You understand? This is the game
            (MORE)

17.

                       LEONARDO (cont'd)
we play, we are always on the line
- just like you, just like any
average asshole cop out there
walking around on the streets.
Sure, I'll be walking on a thin
line, on thin ice, but hell I'll
do what it takes.
                                                            
We show the four cops standing side-by-side (From
left-to-right), Samuel, Harry, Douglas, and Matt, all
standing and looking at Leonardo, who has just put down a
pretty damn good offer.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
Come on god damnit! Give me an
answer, a fucking answer, that's
all I'm asking for.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I think we do it.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
I hate to say it but he's the
closest chance we got, aside from
our two rats already in there.
                                                            
                       MATT
Jesus Christ, Doug, just give away
everything in front of one of
them, god damn you retard.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Sorry, I should think before I
talk, I know...
                                                            
                       HARRY
Well start doing it, we can't
afford to miss this opportunity.
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
I don't trust him.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
Come on, man, we're brothers for
Christ sake!
                                                            
                       HARRY
Sam, he's the only chance we have
got at taking this guy down. Our
two guys, they haven't been
finding shit, and you know why?
Because Lucas is on to us, I'm
            (MORE)

18.

                       HARRY (cont'd)
telling ya.
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
We give him one chance, how bout
that?
                                                            
                       MATT
If he finds nothing, hell even if
he just sat there and lied to our
faces, we let him walk free.
                                                            
                       LEONARDO
Sound like a deal, gentlemen?
                                                            
                       HARRY
You got yourself a deal, but I
don't trust you until you bring
back evidence.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' BUILDING - AFTERNOON
                                                            
A car pulls up and the car flips open quickly. A drunken
Charles steps out, he can barely walk but still continues to
run, nearly tripping.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas looks up from watching television and sees Charles
walking in, he grabs a handgun from his table top and stands
up.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Oh shit!
                                                            
Lucas runs off to the door.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
We see Charles kick the door down, and quickly spin to show
Lucas running out of his door and lifting a gun up.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
You sons of bitches, do you even
know what you did?! Do you?!
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Drop the damn gun!
                                                            
Behind the counter, the waiter reaches for a gun.
                                                            

19.

                       WAITER
God damnit, sonny boy, you heard
what the man said.
                                                            
The waiter continues to pull out the shotgun and shoot,
almost hitting Charles, but hitting the wall behind him.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Jesus Christ, you suck at aim.
                                                            
Charles then turns and pulls a gun out, shooting the waiter
in the neck.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Get the hell out of here!
                                                            
Charles drinks from the bottle of whiskey in his hand.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
You've been drinking... You need
to calm down.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
I know what I've been doing,
Lucas! I'm not some fucking retard
you picked up off the side of the
road. You and me, Lukey, we're
brothers, we've been there for
each other ever since this gang
even started. But you just had to
throw it all away you son of a
bitch! You just had to be the man
in charge, you just ruined my
life! You've ruined it, Lucas, are
you god damn happy you son of a
bitch? As long as you get what you
want, your always happy, that's
right, excuse me, I forgot! Screw
you! You know what, if you kill
me, right here, right now, I'd
appreciate it! It'd be the first
time you did anything helpful.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
You don't mean any of that.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Yes I do... Yes I - I do...
      (Starts Crying)
What have you done to me?! I just
killed a man, I just... I mean it
all! You have taken my life and...
God damnit, why me? Why the fuck
            (MORE)

20.

                       CHARLES (cont'd)
did you have to meet me?
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A car pulls up, and Frank and the others step outside. They
see the other car and see Charles, Frank runs to the door.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank swings the door open and leads everybody inside. Lucas
looks at Frank and holds out his hand, telling him to stay
back.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
I've changed... I've changed...
Well you know what, of course I've
changed! I don't want to be this
person that you made me! I revolt
you, I despise you! I hate you! I
don't want to be a monster, a
terrible person, I want people to
miss me when I'm gone. That's why
I'm ending it right now, right
here! I've changed to the point...
I can't put this gun down, it has
to be used.
                                                            
Charles opens the gun and makes sure there is a bullet
inside, three bullets left.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Here it is! I'll be gone! Goodbye,
my only friends...
                                                            
Charles puts the gun up to his head.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
No!
                                                            
Lucas runs and tackles Charles to the ground, knocking the
gun into the corner and smacking Charles' head on the bar
table, knocking him out.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
He's cold... He's been drinking
and just passed out... Frank, I
need you to take him to his house,
here's his keys.
                                                            
Lucas digs out Charles' keys and throws them to Frank.
                                                            

21.

                       LUCAS
I need you to stay there, to watch
him and make sure he doesn't choke
to death. This stupid son of a
bitch doesn't know what he's got
coming for him.
                                                            
                       FRANK
I've got him.
                                                            
Lucas lifts Charles' up and gives him to Frank.
                                                            
 
EXT. CHARLES' HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Frank pulls up in his car, and upon stepping out, he grabs
Charles and the keys. We see Frank walking up steps from the
far, and we go back to see him walking up to the door, he
opens it and throws the keys into some bushes, he then steps
inside.
                                                            
 
INT. CHARLES' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank steps in and throws Charles' on a couch, he sees a
photo on a nearby dresser, it is of Bobby. Frank starts
tearing up and notices blood on the photo, he sticks it in
his pocket and falls back into a couch, he continues crying
as we watch from the other room now.
                                                            
 
INT. BAR - NIGHT
                                                            
We hear music playing as we zoom out of the view of the
music box, we pass a bartender leaning in and talking to a
girl, and eventually stop when we see Harry sitting on a
stool, drinking from a mug.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Hey, bartender! Another one,
thanks.
                                                            
We watch the door as Davis walks inside, he sees Harry and
quickly walks over.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Harry, where have you been the
last hour?!
                                                            
                       HARRY
You guess.
                                                            

22.

The bartender sets down another mug, and Harry starts
chugging it.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
God damnit, Harry, this is
serious.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Why, what's wrong?
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Leonardo Wright just died.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Oh shit, get your coat on.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
What? Why?
                                                            
                       HARRY
We've got work to do.
                                                            
Harry pays for his drink, then jumps up, puts his coat on,
and runs off to the door.
                                                            
 
EXT. BAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry pushes through the door and runs to his car, Davis
walks out behind him.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Hey, buddy, let's take my car! I'm
driving!
                                                            
Harry runs back to Davis and follows him to his car.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
The door swings open, we turn to a new angle to show Harry
walking in, Davis behind him. We change to a new angle and
see Douglas and Samuel walking towards them.
                                                            
                       HARRY
We've got to scope out his
apartment before someone takes
care of it.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Sounds like a plan, us four. Come
on, let's move!
                                                            
 

23.

INT. DOUGLAS' CAR - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry sits in the passenger seat as we watch Douglas get in
the driver's seat, Samuel and Davis take seats in the back.
Harry sighs, and Douglas sniffs the air, he turns
suspiciously to Harry's direction.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Have you been drinking?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Do we want to catch these guys or
not?
                                                            
Douglas starts driving off.
                                                            
 
EXT. LEONARDO'S HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Douglas pulls up, and we see another car pull up in the
background. Harry jumps out and grabs his gun off the
dashboard, he loads it.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Okay, remember, we stand next to
each other, Douglas and I will go
in first. Everyone, this man was
our one and only chance of
catching Lucas Castrello, we have
to move, we have to move, move,
move!
                                                            
Everyone runs to the house.
                                                            
 
INT. HAROLD'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER'
Oh shit!
                                                            
Harold digs his phone out and dials a number.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas picks up his ringing cell phone and angrily answers
it.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Hello?!
                                                            
 

24.

INT. HAROLD'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER'
The cops beat me here.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       LUCAS
God damnit! Hope they find nothing
or it's on your ass you hear me?!
Stay there, and when they leave,
you burn every inch of that god
damn pussy's house to the ground!
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER'
Got it.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Good, now when I hang up, I want
you to snap this phone. The police
probably got all our numbers from
this asshole.
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER'
Okay.
                                                            
Lucas angrily hangs up and rips his phone in two parts, he
throws them at the wall and yells.
                                                            
 
INT. HAROLD'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold rips his phone in two and throws them out of his
window as he watches Harry lead the three to the house,
Harold sits on edge.
                                                            
 
EXT. LEONARDO'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry leads his men forward, all with guns out in front of
them, prepared to shoot, prepared for the worse. Harry
angrily runs forward ahead of Doug and kicks the door down,
then running forward, and into the house.
                                                            
 
INT. LEONARDO'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry stops running and slowly moves around, swinging his
gun this way and that to make sure all is fine. He stops
when he sees for the most part is clear.
                                                            

25.

                       HARRY
Okay, let's start bagging
evidence.
                                                            
 
INT. HAROLD'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold watches nervously, he reaches for his gun as he
shakes.
                                                            
 
INT. LEONARDO'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
One, two, three, move!
                                                            
We hear the sound of moving and yelling as Harry and Douglas
lift a box off the camera lens. We then cut to a new angle
and watch as Harry swings the box open, inside, we are
treated to a zoom up in which we see the box is filled from
top to bottom, with nothing else but journals.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Jesus Christ, he sure knew how to
write words, didn't he?
                                                            
                       HARRY
I want two men to read every
single one of these journals. If
anything, I want them to tell me
the interesting parts, like names,
dates, anything that can lead to
catching this bastard. You
understand?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Got it, Mom.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You think that's funny, huh?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
No, what I find funny is a Sheriff
showing up to work drunk!
                                                            
Harry yells and angrily lashes forward towards Douglas, and
he doesn't stop, in fact, he angrily pins Douglas up against
the wall and punches him repeatedly. We watch as Davis and
Samuel pull Harry off.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You son of a bitch! I'm done with
your bullshit, Douglas! I'm done!
                                                            

26.

We watch Douglas' face as he does nothing but smirk, blood
coming from out his lips, he slowly starts to fall to the
ground, and we fade to black.
                                                            
 
EXT. LEONARDO'S FUNERAL - AFTERNOON
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Even if he got on my nerves
sometimes, he was a great man.
                                                            
Claps are heard, and we watch Samuel walk off the stage.
                                                            
                       HARRY
That was a great speech, Sam.
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Thanks man. Thanks for everything,
you didn't have to come here.
                                                            
                       HARRY
No, no, I wanted to.
                                                            
We watch from afar and show many cops have shown up, aside
from Douglas. Samuel and Harry sit back and watch the event
unfold as we fade to black once more.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - NIGHT
                                                            
The lamp light and the light emerging from the computer are
the only objects in the room shining light onto Harry's face
as he sits up on his bed, Lisa asleep at his side. We see
Harry's fingers dance across the keyboard and stop, they
move over to the 'delete' button and he suddenly presses it.
He stops when there is no words left, and angrily scrolls up
to reveal the words 'Bobby Ocopella: The Story of the
Legend'. Harry shuts the screen and sighs, he silently moves
over and turns the lamp light off.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - MORNING
                                                            
The doors swing open and Frank comes walking through, he
reaches in his pocket and takes out the photo of Bobby, we
see Davis follow behind him.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You two find much?
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Not in the last week. It's like
the bastard went fucking cold.
                                                            

27.

                       HARRY
God damnit! We had a lead, where
the hell did that go to?!
                                                            
                       FRANK
Harry, we tried, and we're real
sorry, but this guy has covered
most of his god damn track. I
mean, what do you want us to do
now? Break out into tears in front
of the guy and beg for some
concrete evidence? Jesus Christ,
this isn't Hollywood for Christ
sake.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You think I don't know that?! What
the hell happened, is he on to you
two?
                                                            
                       DAVIS
After his scumbag friend pulled
that shit-head stunt with the
graffiti, he's been sour lately.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Sour? What the hell do you mean by
'sour'?
                                                            
                       FRANK
He's been acting as if he knows
there's a rat in the system.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Well does he.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Harry, we tell you everything we
hear, see, and know, don't we?
What, do you not trust us?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Get him to talk, I don't care if
it takes you a machine gun and a
few deaths, we need this lead.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
There won't be a lead if we keep
pushing it!
                                                            
                       HARRY
Do you think I don't know this?!
                                                            

28.

Harry runs at Davis and angrily looks him in the face, they
stare, as Harry's eyes tell that he is depressed, and the
growing beard on Harry's face reveals he hasn't been
sleeping.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
I'm sorry.
                                                            
                       HARRY
It's... It's okay, I've just...
I've just been, over my limit...
The last few days I've had this
feeling like, like... I dunno,
sorta like something bad is gonna
happen, and I'm gonna stand back
and watch it. I feel responsible
for everything that has gone
wrong. For Christ sake, I haven't
slept for two days straight now, I
look like shit, I feel like
shit... It's like there's nothing
I can do about it, like this is
the way it is supposed to be.
                                                            
After a moment of silence, and watching Frank and Davis sit
down next to each other, we see Harry sigh and look at them.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I'll give you some more time.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Thank you, we appreciate it.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
We really do, Hairball, now, why
don't you go home and get some
rest, come back tomorrow?
                                                            
                       HARRY
I can't... I don't deserve it.
We've been chasing a lead for
awhile now, we need to start
sprinting after it, or else...
We'll never get anywhere with it.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - HARRY'S OFFICE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
We slowly watch Harry sitting at his chair, his hand under
his head, holding it up, as we slowly spin the camera around
and reveal Samuel walking up to the door and knocking. The
loud knock causes Harry to jump up, he was spaced off. Harry
stands up and opens the door forward.
                                                            

29.

                       HARRY
Yeah?
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Turns out those notebooks were
important.
                                                            
                       HARRY
What'd you find?
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Turns out my brother kept track of
everything. In the end, he was
more or less on our side no matter
how it seemed. He wrote down the
exact date the group started,
every god damn detail, who joined,
who left, who was a rat, who was a
killer, the whole deal.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Holy shit that's great! What do
you say I take them home for the
night, study them?
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
Sounds fine with me.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Just a second, I gotta share the
news.
                                                            
Harry leads Samuel away from his office and towards the main
police station talking room.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - TALK ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry grabs a microphone and pushes the button to talk into
it.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Hey, can everybody listen up? We
have some concrete evidence on the
Lucas Castrello case. This means
everybody can go home know if they
chose to do so. This is our first
stone hard truth to what happened,
so this evidence will be going
home with me, where they will stay
safe.
                                                            
 

30.

INT. POLICE STATION - EMPLOYEE ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Douglas and Matt take a drink from their coffee cups as they
lean against the desk, and both take away the coffee and
smile proudly as the news is heard.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
You ready to catch this guy?
                                                            
                       MATT
Hell yeah!
                                                            
The two high-five.
                                                            
 
EXT. POLICE STATION - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
We start zoomed into a door that reads 'NEW YORK POLICE
DEPARTMENT', we slowly zoom away far enough for the door to
swing open, and Harry walks through, we continue the
original path and keep zooming back, but we stop as we reach
his car and wait for him to get to the car and to open the
trunk, but not before setting the box down. The angle
changes to the inside of the trunk and we watch him put the
box downwards, we stay in the trunk and watch him shut the
lid.
                                                            
 
EXT. SCHOOL - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry's car pulls up, and we stay where we are as Max walks
out from the school and towards the car.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Max steps in and gets in the back seat, buckling himself in
and sitting back.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Hey buddy, I'm sorry for blaming
you for the rock. It's work,
nothing you did.
                                                            
                       MAX
I just want to go home.
                                                            
Harry sighs and drives off.
                                                            
 

31.

INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - BATHROOM - NIGHT
                                                            
Harry stands in front of his mirror, running his hands
through his five o'clock shadow look he has going on, he
smiles slightly and turns around. We watch him lift a box up
and start looking through notebooks as a montage plays,
cutting out some clips and showing what happens next. We
zoom in and show Harry running his finger down a page, he
finds the date January 12th, 1982. Harry circles it with a
marker and rips the page out, setting it down next to him.
His phone goes off, and he reluctantly answers it.
                                                            
                       HARRY
      (Lifts phone to
       his ear)
Hello?
                                                            
                       FRANK
Hey, we caught him.
                                                            
                       HARRY
What's that supposed to mean?
                                                            
                       FRANK
It means me and Davis just started
pulling our weight around here, we
found out where he lives.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Just to be clear, we are talking
about Lucas?
                                                            
 
INT. FRANK'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       FRANK
Yes, damn man! Your more paranoid
then we are, and that's bad right
there.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - BATHROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry flips his phone shut, and we slowly zoom away to
reveal his face along with the paper, we stay there and
watch as he turns his head to it, he grabs it, crumples it
up, and puts it into his pocket.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' HOUSE - MORNING
                                                            
We watch a fire hydrant as a car pulls up, causing us to
loose focus from the hydrant and to zoom up, where we see on

32.

the other side of the window, Harry is moving into the
passenger seat, lifting binoculars up to his eyes.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
We get a POV of what Harry sees through the binoculars,
which is Lucas walking to his house and opening it. We
switch angles to show Harry slowly moving downwards to hide,
and we see a strange man appear in the background - behind
the driver's seat window - and he raises his fist, and
knocks loudly, causing Harry to jump up.
                                                            
                       HARRY
One second!
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
We watch as Harry makes it to the front door and opens it,
then stepping out and standing up outside.
                                                            
                       HARRY
What is it?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
I know everything about you, I
know where you live, where you
sleep, where you work. You have a
family, a wife and a son. You have
friends, you blame their mistakes
on yourself.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Who the hell are you?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
You can call me 'The Time Guy', my
story does not matter. I do not
use my name anymore, not after the
incident.
                                                            
                       HARRY
What incident? What the hell are
you talking about?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
I know your depressed. I'm here to
change that.
                                                            
                       HARRY
What are you talking about?
                                                            

33.

                       THE TIME GUY
Here, take this...
                                                            
The Time Guy reaches in his pocket and grabs a remote, he
hands it to Harry's direction.
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
Take it.
                                                            
                       HARRY
What is it?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
It's a time remote, it allows you
to travel through time.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You know I'm a cop, right? I can
report this, you know that, right?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
Take it.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I'm not taking the god damn
remote!
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
Take it god damnit! Would you stop
being a damn pussy and take the
remote? Huh? I'm offering you all
the help you need, all you have to
do is take the remote. So, do I
have to repeat myself? Take it!
                                                            
                       HARRY
Get the hell away from me?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
Harry Young, take the remote.
                                                            
Harry looks amazed as he stands in shock, he slowly reaches
out, and we watch him grab the remote carefully from the
crazy guy. We switch angles to show the crazy guy is
smiling, his smile breaks into a fierce laugh, like how you
would hear a crazy person laughing. He turns around and
walks off quickly. We zoom close to Harry from below, and we
slowly spin up to reveal his face as he looks down to the
remote.
                                                            
 

34.

INT. HARRY'S CAR - NIGHT
                                                            
                       HARRY
Remember, stay in formation. Got
it, guys? Most of all, no fear. No
suspicion, we go in there when
Davis steps out and smokes a
cigarette. We don't go in there
with any second thoughts. This is
the real day, nothing else to say.
Do you understand?
                                                            
We show everyone in the car for the first time, and we watch
as Harry lifts a pair of binoculars to his eyes. A POV shot
shows him looking at Davis through a window.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Music beats loudly through speakers as we slowly spin past
them and reveal Davis and Frank sitting there. Davis stands
up and walks over to Lucas, who is sitting at a table and
drinking a can of beer.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Hey Luke, I'm gonna go have a
cigarette.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Just smoke it in here.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
I don't want to force others to
smell it.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
We're all men here. God damn, just
smoke it in here, I don't care,
I'm telling you no one cares.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Everyone watches in fear as we see Davis talking to Lucas.
                                                            
                       SAMUEL
He's been over there for a solid
minute, what the hell is he doing?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Is he in trouble? What's his
signal if he's in trouble.
                                                            

35.

                       HARRY
We didn't make one of those.
                                                            
                       MATT
You didn't make a Plan B? God
damnit, Harry! What the hell do we
do if he is in trouble?!
                                                            
                       HARRY
Improvise, god damnit! That's what
we do.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Just smoke the god damn cigarette
in here.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
No, really, I'll go outside.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
      (Grabs Davis by
       the Shoulder
       firmly and
       crazily)
You'll smoke the cigarette in
here, god damnit. Are you deaf or
stupid? You do what I say, do you
hear me?
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Y - ye - ye - yes sir.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Y - ye - ye - ye - yes sir.
      (Laughs at Davis
       like he's nothing)
Now, light it up. And next time,
don't act so weird about things,
okay?
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
I think he needs back up.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I'm watching him closely!
                                                            
 

36.

INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank sits and watches as Davis slowly starts to walk away.
Davis looks out the window and sees Harry, he shrugs.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
That's it, we're going on.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas sits at his desk and watches television as he hears a
report about Leonardo Wright. He angrily grabs a remote and
turns it off, a man walks next to him, and we spin upwards
to reveal it is Harold. Harold grabs Lucas' shoulder and
spins him around.
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER'
The cops are here.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
God damnit! Alright everybody, pig
alert! Get ready for war, no fear,
no hesitations! Kill if you must,
shoot if you want to escape.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry leads his men to the door, he swings his gun out in
front of him and runs up to the door.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Everybody ready? I'm looking at
them right now!
                                                            
We see men loading guns, one loads a shotgun and angrily
sneaks behind a table, watching. Another loads a handgun and
angrily walks next to Lucas, holding the gun out in front of
him. We watch as Lucas swings his gun out, and we zoom away
from him to reveal an army behind him. Frank and Davis grab
their handguns, Frank knocks into his badge, and it falls to
the ground. Davis angrily jumps up and shoots at the door.
                                                            
 

37.

EXT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A bullet flies through the door, causing Matt and Samuel to
take cover. Douglas and Harry run forward, Harry stands next
to the door.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Police! Open up, drop your
weapons!
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank grabs his badge and sneakily puts it into his pocket,
he too jumps up and shoots at the window, causing everyone
to start shooting.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
Let's go, move, move, move!
                                                            
Harry kicks the door down and runs forward, inside the
house, leading everyone inside with him.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas shoots his gun, firing at Harry. Harry jumps and the
bullet strikes the wall next to Douglas. Douglas shoots a
man in the knee, causing them all to begin running. Samuel
jumps in behind Douglas and shoots at them, causing Lucas to
shoot Samuel in the chest, knocking him over. Matt is the
last one in, and he manages to shoot close to Lew, causing
Harold to turn and shoot back. Harry watches as everyone
runs off aside from Frank and Davis.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Sorry guys, we had to shoot.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Damn near hit us.
                                                            
                       HARRY
It's fine, you two run off, tell
them you managed to shoot Matt in
the knee and me in the chest, lie
to them. Tell them that's what
took you so long, go!
                                                            

38.

Frank and Davis run off through the open back door, how the
others escaped, and Harry raises his gun in the air, firing
two shots off.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Douglas, call 911. Matt, call the
cops, give them the adress.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' HOUSE - ACROSS THE STREET - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry, Douglas, and Matt stand watching as the ambulance
pulls up.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
We'll catch the sick bastard,
Harry, I promise you that.
                                                            
Harry angrily turns and walks off.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - LATER
                                                            
Harry walks through his door and enters his room, he takes
his jacket off and angrily throws it up against the wall.
                                                            
                       LISA
Is everything alright?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Two cops dead in one god damn
week. What the hell are we doing
wrong? We still haven't caught
this freak, and he's running
around playing with strings
attached to him. He's playing
games, that's what he's doing.
Well you know what, if he wants to
play games, he's not the only one
with the god damn controller!
                                                            
                       LISA
I'm sorry honey.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Just forget I said anything.
                                                            
Lisa gets off the bed and walks over to Harry.
                                                            
                       LISA
How am I supposed to forget?
Harry, you mean the world to me.
Anything that you go through, I go
through. Simple as that, I don't
            (MORE)

39.

                       LISA (cont'd)
want to loose you, so if you have
any problems you bring them to me.
Got it?
                                                            
Harry starts crying and Lisa hugs him to cheer him up.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I want to catch this guy so badly.
                                                            
We watch from afar as Lisa continues to hug him, it's like
the beginning, when Harry heard of Bobby's death. Harry
continues crying and slowly continues on to hugging her as
we fade to black.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - HARRY'S OFFICE - MORNING
                                                            
Harry sits at his office, he looks at the remote - down at
his desk - and just pushes it aside. He looks depressed as
he reaches down and grabs the paper from his pocket.
                                                            
 
EXT. SIDEWALK - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry walks - his back to us - as we watch him. He reaches
in his pocket and grabs the remote, he sighs and puts it
back as he walks towards his car.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - NIGHT
                                                            
Lisa walks in the door and sees Harry sitting on the bed,
looking through notebooks.
                                                            
                       LISA
You got off work early?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Not exactly.
                                                            
                       LISA
How's the case coming?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Still cold. I'm catching up to
them, I swear I am. If this isn't
it, I don't know what it takes.
I'm onto something big right here,
right now. I keep telling myself
that, but I just keep wondering if
it's all - all... Just bullshit.
                                                            

40.

                       LISA
I'm sure you will find these guys.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You don't understand, I've been
telling myself that for nearly
fifteen years now. Ever since I've
been training, these guys have
been my main priority, my main
focus. Every god damn scumbag we
come across has been connected to
these guys in some way. All of
this, it all leads back to Lucas
Castrello, the biggest mob boss in
this town, and we're doing all the
shit we can to stop this guy, but
nothing's working. You'd think
this idiot would be behind bars by
now.
                                                            
                       LISA
Not yet, listen to yourself Harry,
your letting him get to you. Your
letting him overrun your life, and
your not doing anything to change
that.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Wait, wait, wait. Let's go back a
second. Excuse me? I'm letting him
get to me? I'm letting him get to
me?! No shit! I've been chasing
this guy for the better part of
fifteen years, Lisa, what the hell
do you expect me to do?!
                                                            
Lisa is silent, and Harry stands in shock at what he said.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I'm sorry, I didn't mean that,
Lisa. I just lost my... God damn,
god damnit. What have these guys
done to me?
                                                            
                       LISA
I don't know, but you need some
sleep Harry. Now, no more work.
This isn't a joke, this is
reality. You need sleep more than
this guy behind bars.
                                                            
 

41.

INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - LATER
                                                            
We slowly zoom out from the lamp that has not a touch of
light coming from it, and we slowly pan out to reveal Harry
and Lisa laying next to each other. Harry jumps up all of a
sudden and breaths heavily, he reaches over as we pan down
and watch him grab the remote and the paper.
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry walks out of the front door and to the outside area,
where he lifts the time remote to his head, along with the
paper. He dials in the date off the paper and hits a button,
he puts the paper back in his pocket and sees a bright light
flash for a brief second, not even.
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S HOUSE - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry slowly starts spinning around, he trips and falls into
a car. The car he falls into is not him, he touches it and
looks in shock. He stands up and grabs the paper, he reads
off of it and looks in shock. Harry quickly crumples it back
up and stashes it into his pocket once more, along with the
remote, he runs off quickly into the nighttime.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
It goes silent as we watch Harry running off as quick as he
can, we see him yelling, but cannot hear what he says right
away. Harry stops and looks around, we see a group of people
smoking. Harry stands in shock and watches as a cop car
flies between him and the enemies. The group of people start
running, but the cop car doesn't notice them. Harry chases
after them, and the sound returns as we watch his shoes
smack the concrete chasing after them.
                                                            
                       HARRY
No! Put your hands in the air! No!
                                                            
Harry chases after them even faster now, and watches as they
jump a fence and run by it on the other side. Harry runs and
jumps up, he grabs onto the fence and swings himself over.
Though his plan fails, and he falls to the ground. Harry
stands up and sighs, he grabs the paper and looks down at
it. He slowly moves his finger along the words he reads.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Oh no, damnit. Damnit!
                                                            
 

42.

EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas leads his men to a restaurant, where they all smile as
they stand proudly in a group.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
No, no, no!
                                                            
Harry puts the paper back in his pocket and runs off
quickly.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A younger version of Harry sits next to a younger version of
Lisa, and we watch as they see Lucas and his men menacingly
walking towards the restaurant they are in.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry runs by a stand of buildings and stops as he sees
Lucas and the group, he watches in fear as he sees the
restaurant.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
We watch the legs of Lucas and his group as they slowly move
closer, one of Lucas' men slowly drops a baseball bat into
his hand, while we see Lucas reach in his pocket and grab a
gun.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
No!
                                                            
Harry puts his hood up and starts running after the group,
reaching in his pocket, he grabs his gun and yells as he
gains speed.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Young Harry and Young Lisa continue to watch the event take
place.
                                                            

43.

                       HARRY (PAST)
Lisa, run!
                                                            
Young Lisa jumps up and runs off to safety while Young Harry
makes sure she leaves safely. Young Harry turns his head and
we spin the camera to make it a straight line of vision
while zooming into Lucas as his group enters the restaurant.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
No!
                                                            
Harry tackles one down, Young Charles, and is punched in the
face. Charles stands up and follows Lucas into the
restaurant.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas gives a disdain smile and starts walking forward.
Young Harry watches in fear.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Don't worry, you have nothing to
fear. As long as you give me the
money, your money - that is. Give
me your money, and we won't have a
problem. Well, what do you say?
Let's show your guests some
manners. Before it turns into
chaos, let's get started.
                                                            
Lucas walks over to a younger girl and smiles as he uses his
hand to move her hair behind her eye - it was in front
before. Lucas smiles and turns around.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Who wants to participate to save
this young girl's life? What's
your name my darling?
                                                            
                       CINDY
C - c - Cindy.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Nice to meet you Cindy, now who
will save this girl's life?
                                                            
Young Harry watches in fear, and he slowly raises his hand.
                                                            

44.

                       CINDY
Alright, all you have to do is get
her to give me her money, along
with your money, and this young
girl will go home to live another
night.
                                                            
Young Harry grabs his wallet and throws it to Lucas.
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
Cindy, give him your money.
                                                            
In tears, Cindy starts to take out her wallet and slowly
throws it to Lucas' feet.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Thank you.
                                                            
Lucas swings a gun out and shoots Cindy spot on, knocking
her to the ground.
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
No! No!
                                                            
Young Harry jumps under the table as Lucas shoots at him,
missing Harry though.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
We see Harry running around, looking for an object. He spots
a brick and picks it up, we watch as he slowly raises his
head to watch the Poppers from inside. Harry grabs the brick
and chucks it.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Charles stands and watches as Lucas slowly starts walking
towards Young Harry. A brick flies through the window and
knocks Charles to the ground.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry jumps to the ground to hide.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
God damnit, what'd you do?!
                                                            

45.

Young Lucas grabs Young Harry by the ear and drags him out
from under the table, he throws Harry to the floor and pulls
his gun to Young Harry's face.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Talk boy, that's all you gotta do.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry grabs a rock and angrily props himself up, he throws
it.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
The rock hits Lucas in the face, he drops his gun and
stumbles to the ground. Lucas angrily jumps up, snatches his
gun, and runs outside.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry takes off running as Lucas leads his men outside.
Harry jumps a bike rack and grabs another rock off the
ground, he throws it at Lucas, but misses. Harry runs across
the road, managing to make it safely. Lucas runs immediately
afterwards, not waiting even a second. Lucas sees a car
swing by him, and he dodges it, angrily throwing his gun up
in the air and continuing his chase. Harry runs across the
corner of a building and manages to go into an alley.
                                                            
 
EXT. ALLEYWAY - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry steps back into the darkness, where he hides as he
watches Lucas run in between the ally's walls and stand for
a moment... Thinking, planning his next move, but first he
has to find Harry. Harry grabs a brick on the ground slowly
and starts to shake, preparing to use it. Lucas pushes back,
he gives up... For now, at least. He steps back and walks
off, Harry puts the brick back down and takes a deep breath.
Harry takes the remote and puts in the present time, he
watches as the same event starts to occur, the brightness.
                                                            
 
EXT. ALLEYWAY - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry falls into the wall and sighs, he stands up and starts
walking off.
                                                            
 

46.

INT. HARRY'S NEW HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
The door swings open and Harry walks in, he slowly makes his
way towards his bed.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S NEW HOUSE - MORNING
                                                            
Harry hears his alarm go off, he sits up and looks over next
to him, he sees a girl - not Lisa - and looks suspiciously.
A knock on his door awakens the girl, and he jumps up to
answer it.
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S NEW HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
On the other end, The Time Guy stands, he looks at Harry -
who is standing inside the trailer he lives in.
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
Hope I'm not bothering you two
lovebirds.
                                                            
Harry walks outside and shuts the door, he looks at The Time
Guy.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You're not, who is she again?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
Wow, kid, you screwed things up
badly.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Look, last night... How'd I get
here?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
You don't remember? You drove here
- you did, no one else. I thought
you would have figured it out by
now, used the remote for something
smaller before something big...
You see kid, you get back and it
takes a good two hours for you to
remember what happened prior to
the changed occurrence in time.
                                                            
                       HARRY
So you're saying, I knew I lived
here. When I came back from that
day in 1982, I knew... I knew I
was living with a... A... God, I
don't even want to say the word.
            (MORE)

47.

                       HARRY (cont'd)
Why the hell didn't you warn me
about this stuff?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
Look kid, you got out of this one
fairly easy. The first time I used
that bad boy, I nearly lost my
damn arm.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You're saying I'm gonna loose my
arm?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
Far from my point. Kid, I'm saying
that in this particular case, it's
not easy being the one who
disturbs time. Harry, right? You
want to get your family back,
while keeping these guys away.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Yes, and I thought I did that!
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
You did no such thing, if anything
you did the complete opposite!
Look at where we are, clearly you
had something that brought The
Poppers back together, a reunion
between them, something. Harry, in
this case, there's a hell of a
thin line between getting your
family back and keeping these guys
low profile. It's hard, and I
cannot warn you enough that the
consequences may be severe, may be
grave, even. Hell, you may end up
regretting this, are you sure you
want to go again?
                                                            
                       HARRY
Why? How long do I have the
remote?
                                                            
                       THE TIME GUY
You sound like I give a lot of
these away for people to use - I
don't, they're not cheap, it took
me my entire college year to
finish this pocket version of our
first prototype. You have it for
as long as you need it, but only
            (MORE)

48.

                       THE TIME GUY (cont'd)
then you will not need it any
longer.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Thanks.
                                                            
The two shake hands, and Harry takes the remote from the
hand he has shaken, he raises it to his face.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S NEW HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry looks around his house, he checks drawers, under the
cushions, everywhere. Harry sighs and stands up.
                                                            
 
EXT. FRANK'S HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry runs to a house and kicks the door down, he sees Frank
awaken quickly, and Harry grabs a kitchen knife from Frank's
kitchen and runs over to him, holding the knife to Frank.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Are you still a cop?
                                                            
                       FRANK
Yes, just put the knife down. I'll
give you whatever you want, money,
the house, anything!
                                                            
                       HARRY
Anything, huh? How about a gun?
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - PAST - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
We slowly zoom out of a window and pan backwards until we
reveal Harry's shoulder as he watches his house. The front
view is him looking at it, he walks off quickly when he
hears a cop car coming his way.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry walks down the sidewalk, hands in pocket, back to us.
He grabs his gun and turns the corner, running after The
Poppers. Lucas runs to jump the fence, but Harry tackles him
down and knocks him to the ground. Charles makes the jump,
but Harry grabs him by the coat and throws him down.
Leonardo tackles Harry up against the wall and punches him.
Harry punches Leonardo off and grabs his gun, he aims it at
Lucas as Lucas stands, looking mad towards Harry.
                                                            

49.

                       LUCAS (PAST)
Come on boys, let's let the man
walk... Or die.
      (Swings a gun out
       to Harry)
All in all, in the end, it's his
choice, now isn't it?
                                                            
Harold snatches Harry's gun and empties it onto the cement
below.
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER' (PAST)
Damn cops.
      (Harold grabs
       Harry's badge)
Hate them all.
                                                            
Harold turns and throws the badge to the wall.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Let's go boys.
                                                            
Everyone runs off as Lucas stands there, still pointing his
gun towards Harry. Lucas smiles and drops the gun.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Don't be sad, it's not me. It's
you.
                                                            
Lucas laughs at his joke and kicks Harry down to the ground.
Lucas turns and runs off with his men. We slowly zoom into
Harry as he lays on the ground, he reaches over and grabs
his gun.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Young Harry and Young Lisa sit down, talking.
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
What's your favorite color?
                                                            
                       LISA (PAST)
Honestly, I never had one. I don't
get how you can chose when there's
so many so beautiful.
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
Yeah? How's your food?
                                                            
Young Lisa looks over and watches as the group shows up, she
slowly points at them in horror. Young Harry turns to see
who it is.
                                                            
 

50.

EXT. STREETS - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Harry runs to a man in the car, he knocks on the window and
holds his badge out.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I need your car sir, may I --
                                                            
The man swings the door open and steps out quickly.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Thank you, I'll try and get it
back to you.
                                                            
Harry jumps in and shuts the door.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas leads his men to the restaurant. Cop sirens go off,
and Lucas starts running with his men.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A waiter hangs up a phone and grabs a gun from a drawer.
                                                            
                       WAITER
Everybody stand back!
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - PARKING LOT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry pulls up and runs out, he pounds on the backdoor and
waits for it to open, he swings out his badge and runs
inside.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry swings his jacket up and puts on a pair of glasses, he
runs to the main dining section and sees everybody hiding.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I need three volunteers to
barricade the door with me
quickly.
                                                            
Young Harry steps out, and Young Lisa follows.
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
I will.
                                                            

51.

                       LISA (PAST)
And I.
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
No, I won't let you Lisa.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas gets closer and smiles at the sight of Harry.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
Come on, we don't have much
longer!
                                                            
The waiter runs out and helps Harry push a table towards the
wall. Young Harry and Young Lisa run forward.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       CHARLES (PAST)
There blocking the doors, man!
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Son of a bitch! Lew, hand me your
gun, mine's not gonna cut it.
                                                            
Lew hands Lucas a machine gun, and Lucas smiles as he takes
on more step and raises it to shoot.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
The Waiter watches in fear and reaches for his gun.
                                                            
                       WAITER
Duck!
                                                            
Everyone jumps down and ducks. Harry grabs his gun and sees
The Waiter is doing the same.
                                                            
Lucas puts his finger against the trigger. He pulls it, and
bullets go flying out of it.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
They continue to duck as bullets fly just above them. Young
Harry is shot in the arm, and he pushes Lisa under a table.
                                                            

52.

                       HARRY (PAST)
Don't move, stay there!
                                                            
                       LISA (PAST)
      (In Tears)
I'm not gonna let you die!
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
I'm not asking, I'm telling.
                                                            
Young Harry stands up fully and runs off, he jumps behind
the counter and pushes his back up against the back door.
                                                            
                       HARRY
He should be out of bullets soon
enough.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas drops the gun, he doesn't care to check if anyone's
dead or alive.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Charles, go check to see if
anyone's alive. Take the back
door, be careful, take a gun with
you.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - PARKING LOT - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Charles runs to the back door and kicks it down, knocking
Harry to the ground.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
No!
                                                            
Harry runs forward and shoots Charles in the shoulder,
knocking him to the ground. Harry turns and runs to the
bathroom, he grabs the remote and dials in the button. He
presses enter.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - EVENING
                                                            
We slowly pan around Lisa as she cries into her hands. We
hear footsteps and watch as Max runs forward.
                                                            

53.

                       MAX
What's wrong?
                                                            
                       LISA
Nothing baby, nothing... Nothing's
wrong.
                                                            
                       MAX
Then why are you crying?
                                                            
                       LISA
Your dad's been on that vacation
for awhile, hasn't he?
                                                            
                       MAX
Yeah. When's he coming home?
                                                            
                       LISA
I dunno, baby, I dunno.
                                                            
 
EXT. WOODS - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Matt and Douglas lead a group of people through the woods,
they all stand in a line - a formation. Matt holds onto a
leash that holds a dog that is helping them. We pan in the
same direction they are walking. They walk and a tree is
between them and the angle, and a sign on the tree reads
'HARRY YOUNG: MISSING, REWARD: 1500 DOLLARS'.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
The same sign is on a pole as we zoom away from it, pan to
the right and show people walking by. The people walk
towards where a large group of people stand, where a dead
body lies.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Alright everybody, move!
                                                            
Davis and Frank push through everyone and gather around the
dead body.
                                                            
                       FRANK
You wanna call the guys? I got
them.
                                                            
Frank steps forward and cups his hands around his mouth.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Ladies and gentlemen! This a
secure area, I need you to return
to what you were previously doing.
            (MORE)

54.

                       FRANK (cont'd)
Please and thank you! You don't
have to go home, but you can't be
here.
                                                            
Citizens walk off, and Frank turns to Davis.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Jesus Christ, how many times do
you think this town will cross a
freak like this guy?
                                                            
                       FRANK
I dunno, but I hope we won't cross
one for awhile after we catch this
guy.
                                                            
A car pulls up, and Lucas steps out.
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Oh, shit. What do we do?
                                                            
                       FRANK
Act casual.
                                                            
Lucas walks closer to them and stops close to their faces,
he smirks.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
What are we doing here?
                                                            
                       DAVIS
Nothing, sir.
                                                            
Lucas angrily punches Davis to the ground as Frank stands,
watching in fear.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
You don't call me sir, boy. You
hear me? I'm not Hitler god
damnit! Don't treat me like a
higher up, I'm not one.
                                                            
Lucas sees the badge showing from Davis' jacket, which is
now up under his arms after the hit. Lucas leans down and
grabs the badge.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
You're the rat.
                                                            
Davis lays crying, and he reaches his arm out.
                                                            

55.

                       DAVIS
I'm sorry, I didn't know the cops
would do what they've done.
Please, don't kill me.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Kill you? What makes you think I
would kill you? Huh? What makes
you think that, you scumbag?!
                                                            
Lucas kicks Davis in the chest, and Davis starts spitting
out blood. Frank watches in fear, but Lucas only smiles.
Lucas swings a gun out and doesn't hesitate to shoot Davis
in the head, spot on. He's done being lied to, and he's done
with Davis. Lucas and his group - including Frank - walk
off, away from the mess that has been done.
                                                            
 
INT. MATT'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
Matt steps inside and hears his phone go off, he reaches in
his pocket and grabs it.
                                                            
                       MATT
Matt here.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
      (In Tears)
God damn, Matt... Have you heard
the news?
                                                            
                       MATT
What happened?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Davis got killed by Lucas.
                                                            
                       MATT
Where's his body? The son of a
bitch isn't getting away this
time.
                                                            
Matt runs outside, shutting his door behind him.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDINGS - MORNING
                                                            
We watch from high in the air as we pass by several
buildings. The angle switches and shows Davis' body as Matt
and Douglas lead a group of investigators to the corpse.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
There was a note on the body.
                                                            

56.

                       INVESTIGATOR
Yes, we found that. It's in our
possession, no need to worry, sir.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
      (Angry)
What did it say?
                                                            
                       INVESTIGATOR
I'm afraid I'm unauthorized to
tell you such details.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
What did it say?!
                                                            
                       MATT
Calm down, Douglas, it's been a
long day, that's all.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Our friend is missing! People are
dying, and what are we doing to
stop it? Everything we can, but
it's not enough!
      (In Tears)
We have gotten no further in this
case, and I'm tired of it! He's
still walking, still talking,
still moving. I want him dead, not
just him, everyone ever aquatinted
with him, I want them dead! All
the abusers, the thief's, the
killers. All of them.
                                                            
                       MATT
Just ignore him.
                                                            
Matt wraps his arm around Douglas' shoulder and walks him
away from the scene.
                                                            
                       INVESTIGATOR
Before you go!
                                                            
Matt turns around and the investigator gives him the note.
                                                            
                       INVESTIGATOR
I'm just as mad as he is, frankly.
I think he deserves to know, now
that I see him in this shape.
                                                            
                       MATT
Thank you.
                                                            

57.

Matt and Douglas walk off.
                                                            
 
INT. BAR - NIGHT
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Alright you lazy bastards, we
haven't got long, so we better get
this group started.
                                                            
Everyone looks up from playing pool and towards Charles.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
We have to learn to handle things
on our own. I believe anyone, no
matter how stupid, how pathetic,
can do... Anything. I want Lucas
Castrello, not dead, alive... The
prize I pay is a hundred grand,
alive, nothing else. You bring him
to me dead, I will kill you.
                                                            
                       GANGSTER
Why do you have such a grudge
against this man?
                                                            
                       CHARLES
It's more to what he did to me.
                                                            
                       GANGSTER
What did he ever do to you?
                                                            
                       CHARLES
He made me what I am today, he
made me... Dead, inhuman... I am
what he wanted me to be, that's
right. This, what I am...
      (Uses his finger
       to circle his
       face)
He did it all. So if you don't
like me, go to my creator. Don't
stop there, bring him to me. Watch
as I stand on his throat, spit
down his mouth, and see the light
from his eyes vanish, along with
that single last drop of life.
                                                            
Everyone watches in fear.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Well, get started.
                                                            

58.

Everyone runs off but Charles and Paul. Charles fist bumps
Paul and sits back, smirking as he wraps his arms and puts
them behind his head.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - PAST - AFTERNOON
                                                            
Future Harry kicks the door down and runs inside, he now has
a bandanna around his mouth and raises his badge.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Everybody listen up!
                                                            
Everyone looks in his direction.
                                                            
                       HARRY
A group of robbers are going to
show up any second now.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Douglas and Matt walk down the streets, seeing a group of
people swarming around another dead body.
                                                            
                       MATT
Everybody out of the way!
                                                            
Matt and Douglas run to the body and Douglas picks up a
note, he lifts it to his head.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
      (Reading the Note)
Everyday, somebody new dies, up
until the point when you give way
and push away from my group.
                                                            
Matt grabs the other note and hands it to Douglas.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
      (Reading the
       second Note)
I know there's a rat, and I killed
him. Take two steps back with all
those cops, or watch as the city
goes down.
                                                            
Douglas angrily looks up at Matt.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
We could have prevented this! We
could have done something!
                                                            
 

59.

EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas lifts his arm up to read his watch and smiles, he
lowers his watch and watches Douglas and Matt.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
An explosion goes off nearby, rumbling the ground for a
moment and knocking several civilians to the ground.
                                                            
                       MATT
What the hell was that?!
                                                            
Matt and Douglas swing around, looking at buildings and
everywhere as they hold their guns out, away from them.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas quickly ducks to hide from the cops' viewpoints.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas leads his men to the restaurant, he grabs his gun and
raises it out in front of him.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Everybody get away! Hurry, now!
                                                            
Matt turns and watches as a man walks out of the church,
wearing a black trenchcoat and holding his hands in his
pockets. The man lifts his hands out and swings his coat
open, he grabs a machine gun and shoots at them. Matt shoves
Douglas to the ground and falls next to him. Civilians are
gunned down, and the man continues shooting at them.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas watches, laughing crazily as he does so.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry looks from the window in a door, he turns and sees
that they have barricaded the main doors. Harry locks the
door he stands next to and walks forward.
                                                            

60.

                       HARRY
Everybody stand in formation,
don't give up. If you have to,
fight back!
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas and his men stand menacingly, looking at the
restaurant as we pan around them to reveal them all.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Go!
                                                            
Lucas and his men run to the main doors. Charles kicks the
glass to one of the doors and it shatters. Leonardo kicks
the tables down that act as barricaders. Lucas grabs a brick
and throws it through the window, breaking it and opening
it.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       HARRY
Oh shit!
                                                            
Young Harry and Future Harry run to a table, they grab it
and flip it, preparing to cover the now open window.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas kicks the glass completely out and runs inside,
leading his men in.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Young Harry drops the table and runs to Lisa, Future Harry
gives up and steps back, he reaches for his gun.
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
Hide under the table, Lisa. Now,
don't ask questions.
                                                            
Lucas smiles and smacks Young Harry to the ground with the
tip of his gun. Lucas' men start running in and start to rob
the place.
                                                            
                       LEW (PAST)
Everyone put your god damn wallets
on the ground, and no one gets
hurt!
                                                            

61.

Lucas kneels down and grabs Young Harry's wallet, Future
Harry watches from the view. A group of people kneeling on
the floor take their wallets out and throw them into a pile
as we pan across them.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Sweetie, I need your wallet.
                                                            
Lucas kneels down to see Lisa, revealing he was talking to
her. In tears, Lisa slowly grabs her wallet and hands it to
him.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Thank you, now is this your
boyfriend?
      (Kicks Young Harry
       in the head)
This one, right here?
                                                            
Lisa slowly nods.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Shouldn't have hesitated, my
darling.
                                                            
Lucas swings out his gun and shoots Young Harry in the
chest.
                                                            
                       HARRY
No!
                                                            
Harry swings his gun out and shoots Lucas in the back,
knocking him to the ground. Leonardo turns and shoots at
Harry, managing to hit Harry's arm. Harry jumps out the
window and runs off. Leonardo leads the remaining men
outside, and Harry shoots at them as they follow him. Harry
trips on the ground and falls on his side, he holds his
chest and looks down: He has started to bleed. Leonardo
grabs Harry's gun and throws it aside, he takes his wallet
and puts it into his pocket.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Matt grabs his gun and jumps up, shooting the man in the
trench coat onto the ground. Douglas jumps up and runs over
to the man.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry grabs his remote quickly and dials in the numbers, he
shrieks in pain as he watches the bright light appear.
                                                            
 

62.

EXT. STREETS - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Douglas sees it is Lew, he grabs the gun and throws it
aside. He checks for more guns and stands up.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
All clear!
                                                            
Matt looks back at Douglas and sees something, he walks over
to him quickly and angrily.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
What is it? What do you see?
                                                            
Matt walks behind Douglas and rips a poster for Harry's
disappearance off the wall, he crumples it up and throws it.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Matt. Matt, you're angry.
                                                            
                       MATT
Of course I'm angry!
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
We will find him, Matt. I promise
you.
                                                            
                       MATT
It's useless, he's either dead or
alive, being beaten to death.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Or he ran off, we never know.
                                                            
                       MATT
Harry wouldn't run off.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Maybe, we don't know if he would
or not.
                                                            
                       MATT
He wouldn't!
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Okay, okay. Calm down, Matt.
                                                            
                       MATT
How do you live with yourself when
you say shit like that? Huh?! How
can you even say that? Huh?! How?!
How can you even have that cross
your mind just the -- the faintest
            (MORE)

63.

                       MATT (cont'd)
bit at all, huh?!
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Matt, I'm sorry. I didn't mean it
like --
                                                            
Matt swings his arm out and punches Douglas across the face,
knocking him to the ground.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Damnit! You son of a bitch, what
the hell is wrong with you?
                                                            
Douglas wipes blood away from his nose - where he is
bleeding - and looks up at Matt. Matt angrily runs to kick
Douglas in the face. Douglas takes the kick, but angrily
gets up and runs at Matt, throwing him into a tree and
pinning him against it. Matt punches Douglas once more,
knocking him to the floor. Douglas watches as Matt angrily
walks off, bleeding but not caring.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - PAST - EVENING
                                                            
Future Harry swings the doors open and walks inside, he has
a bandana covering his mouth once more, and walks to the
center to talk.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Robbers are going to be at these
very doors soon. I need three
volunteers to barricade the doors
with me, two to barricade all
windows and other side doors, and
one volunteer to call the police.
                                                            
Young Harry and Young Lisa jump up and run to Future Harry's
side. The waiter runs over and helps them push one table up
against the door.
                                                            
 
EXT. RESTAURANT - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Lucas and his men stand, looking at the barricaded
restaurant doors.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Someone knew we were coming.
                                                            
                       CHARLES (PAST)
How the hell is that possible?
                                                            

64.

                       LUCAS (PAST)
We were the only ones who knew
about it.
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER' (PAST)
Are you saying there's a rat
invasion?
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
I'm afraid so. Boys, we're gonna
skip this one. As soon as we find
this rat, their dying.
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry and the waiter watch through an open peak in the
window, they smile as they watch Lucas and his men leaving.
                                                            
                       HARRY
We've done it!
                                                            
 
INT. RESTAURANT - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
We pan around a table to reveal Future Harry is talking to
the police.
                                                            
                       COP
How did you know they would be
here ahead of time?
                                                            
                       HARRY
I saw them coming when I pulled up
in here, getting ready to eat.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - FUTURE - AFTERNOON
                                                            
Charles and Paul stand in front of a building as man walks
over to them -- a real estate agent.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
How much do you want for it?
                                                            
                       REAL ESTATE AGENT
Well, sir, don't you want to take
a look inside first?
                                                            
                       CHARLES
I don't give a shit about looks, I
just need a place to do business.
                                                            
 

65.

INT. CHARLES' BUILDING - LATER
                                                            
Charles sits in a chair as a Gangster walks forward.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
No luck finding the man, huh?
                                                            
                       GANGSTER
Not yet, I'm still looking day and
night. I got a group hunting 24/7,
all day, all night.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A group of people run forward with guns as we zoom away from
them and start to pan upwards.
                                                            
 
INT. CHARLES' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Charles sits back and smirks.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
What do you want, then?
                                                            
                       GANGSTER
A bigger reward, I think we all
do.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
'All'?
                                                            
Charles moves a curtain away from a nearby window and sees a
crowd forming outside of his building, yelling and angrily
screaming for him.
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Okay, you got what you want. Just
get out there and tell them that.
                                                            
 
INT. CHARLES' BUILDING - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
Charles stands and looks out the window, he shuts the
curtain and stands there for another moment.
                                                            
 
EXT. PARK - PAST - DAY
                                                            
Harry sits on a bench, he reaches in his pocket and takes
out a skeleton mask. Harry dons it over his face and stands
up, he grabs a voice disguiser and looks across the street.

66.

Harry runs across the street where Young Harry and Young
Lisa are walking out of a shop.
                                                            
 
EXT. SIDEWALK - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry runs up the sidewalk and swings his gun out, running
towards them once more. Young Harry pushes Young Lisa back
up against a door and steps forward to Harry.
                                                            
                       HARRY
      (Swinging his Gun)
Give me your money!
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
No.
                                                            
 
INT. SHOP - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Several people watch from inside as the showdown takes
place. They watch in fear as through the window they see
Young Harry walk right into Harry's gun tip.
                                                            
 
EXT. SIDEWALK - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry pushes his gun's tip up against Young Harry's heart
and gazes at the sight in fear.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Give me the money, and no one gets
hurt.
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
I'm not giving you my god damn
money.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Don't chose poorly! All you have
to do is hand it over, and I step
down. I walk away.
                                                            
                       HARRY (PAST)
I'm tired of the crime in this
town. I'm done sitting back and
watching as people get robber and
murdered and killed by people like
you: Pathetic, worthless, maggots.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You shouldn't talk that way to a
guy with a gun.
                                                            

67.

                       HARRY (PAST)
I'm done being scared! I'm done
shaking in my boots! If you want
to kill me, kill me! Come on, I'm
wide open you son of a bitch! Do
it, now! Pull the trigger! Throw
your life away, by waisting
anothers. All you have to do is
pull that trigger, all it takes is
one push. One, that's it, you pull
it back, and both of our lives
end. You go to jail, I die.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Give me your money!
                                                            
Harry tackles Young Harry up against the wall. Young Harry
punches Harry, forcing him to drop the voice disguiser to
the ground. Young Harry tackles Harry up against the wall
and punches him repeatedly.
                                                            
 
INT. SHOP - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Everyone watches in fear as Young Harry beats Harry
repeatedly, with nothing but his bare fist.
                                                            
 
EXT. SIDEWALK - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry shoves Young Harry off, he stands up and runs off, his
gun still in hand. Harry runs down the sidewalk, and Young
Harry watches. Several people burst out from the shop as
Young Lisa walks up to comfort Young Harry.
                                                            
                       SHOPPER
Go chase him down! Why'd you let
him get away? Are you god damn
nuts?
                                                            
                       LISA (PAST)
No, Harry, don't. You've already
proved your point well enough.
                                                            
Young Harry watches as Future Harry runs around the corner.
Harry runs around the corner and rips the mask off, he
throws it to reveal his face is now badly beaten and
unshaped. He puts his gun in his pocket -- along with both
of his hands -- and walks casually down the sidewalk, in the
background we see a man run up to him with a baseball bat.
Harry doesn't see the man until the man has already smacked
him over the head. The man takes everything from Harry's
pocket and throws it into a bag. A car pulls up, and the man

68.

throws the bag into the back seat. He walks over to Harry to
start dragging him into the back. Two men carry Harry over
to the back seat and throw him in, they shut the door.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' OFFICE - FUTURE - NIGHT
                                                            
Lucas sits in his chair and sees a group of people running
up to his outside window, he opens a drawer and grabs a key.
Jumping out of his chair, Lucas runs to the floorboards and
flips a rug out of his way, revealing a key slot in the
ground. Lucas opens it with the keys and finds a machine
gun, he reaches in to grab it.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
People walk angrily towards Lucas' building. Several carry
machine guns, handguns, and shotguns as they walk towards in
a mob.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold, Lew, Frank, the new bartender all watch out of
Lucas' window as the mob piles up, closer and closer.
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER'
Grab the guns, prepare to shoot.
Lucas, we're under attack!
                                                            
We spin around to reveal Lucas kicking the door open and
walking out with the machine gun.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
      (To the Waiter)
Sparky, hide beneath the bar
booth, if you need to, stand up
and shoot the shotgun under there.
      (To Harold, Lew,
       and Frank)
Think of everything we've worked
so hard for, and how these people
can just take it away so quickly!
We will not give up, we are The
Poppers god damnit, till the end
of time, and forever more after
that. Everyone, shoot, prepare to
die, we're going to war. We shoot
first, and we don't hesitate. We
pull the trigger, we kill them
all!
                                                            

69.

Harold, Lew, and Frank run to the windows and start kicking
them open. Sparky ducks beneath the bar booth and grabs his
shotgun. Lucas raises his machine gun and sends off the
first shots, causing the start of war. Bullets fly inside
the building, and Lucas ducks beneath the window. Lucas
waits for the gunshots to cease and jumps up once more,
shooting down at the men and running off to the window to
the right.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A group of people run forward and begin shooting at windows,
knocking them down. Harold jumps up and shoots several onto
the ground.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A door swings open and a badly beaten Harry is thrown down a
flight of stairs, he tumbles to the bottom, and lands
face-first on the cement. We slowly zoom into his now bloody
face, covered with browses and soaked out of color.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - UPSTAIRS - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold slams the door shut and walks away.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' BUILDING - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas jumps up and shoots at several.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Who sent them here?!
                                                            
                       FRANK
The cops wouldn't send a gang,
they'd be foolish enough to come
here themselves.
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER'
Looks like we pissed someone off
either way.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
More than just 'someone', looks
like the whole god damn town.
                                                            
 

70.

INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lisa sits at a table, silently eating a bowl of cereal until
a loud 'Boom' is heard, causing her to jump up. Lisa runs
over to the window and sees a group of people at her house
with machine guns. Lisa runs upstairs, after Max.
                                                            
 
INT. CHARLES' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Charles sits on his chair, smiling. He stands up and walks
over to his window, where he sees a group of people walking
towards a house outside, holding guns. Charles smiles at the
sight and grabs his phone.
                                                            
 
INT. DOUGLAS' HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
                                                            
A phone goes off, awakening Douglas as he lays on the couch
next to it. Douglas answers the phone.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Hello?
                                                            
 
INT. CHARLES' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       CHARLES
How bad of a cop are you? A
mastermind criminal moves two
houses away from you and you don't
even say hi?
                                                            
 
INT. DOUGLAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Who the hell are you? You're not
Lucas.
                                                            
 
INT. CHARLES' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       CHARLES
No, I'm not Lucas, although I'm an
old friend of his. I'm the last
person you will ever talk to.
                                                            
 
INT. DOUGLAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Douglas silently grabs his handgun off the table next to him
and keeps it at his side.
                                                            

71.

                       DOUGLAS
What the hell is that supposed to
mean?
                                                            
 
INT. CHARLES' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       CHARLES
Look outside, dumb cop, and you'll
find it all out.
                                                            
Charles laughs crazily, he hangs up and throws the phone to
the ground.
                                                            
 
INT. DOUGLAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Douglas looks outside and sees a group of people walking by
his house with guns.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Shit!
                                                            
Douglas runs into his narrow hallway as bullets start flying
inside of his house, he is hit in the shoulder and drops to
the floor in his hallway.
                                                            
 
EXT. DOUGLAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
The group of people continue shooting. The bullets fly at
the house wickedly, not wanting to cease, not wanting to
stop. The windows shatter, the walls crack.
                                                            
 
INT. CHARLES' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Charles laughs crazily as he watches it all unfold, he looks
at his watch and smiles, he turns around and walks over to a
machine gun on his wall. Charles lifts it off the wall and
walks off into the hallway.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lisa runs into Max's room and grabs him off his bed, falling
to the floor with him. Max awakens, screaming.
                                                            
                       LISA
It's okay, don't talk, be quiet.
                                                            
 

72.

EXT. HARRY'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
The group of men raise their guns and shoot at the windows.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - DINING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Bullets smack against the curtains, putting holes in them
and flying still afterwards.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lisa and Max run inside Lisa's bedroom and drop under the
bed as the bullets continue to fly. Lisa hugs Max as they
lay under the bed, Max crying and Lisa grabbing a gun above
her -- hidden under the mattress and hiding it next to her
side.
                                                            
 
EXT. STREETS - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Charles walks down the street, machine gun in hand. He
watches as his men run around the town, shooting at houses.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
The four stand up and shoot at people down below. Lucas
ducks and reloads his clip, he jumps up and shoots, yelling,
until the other three duck, he then ducks.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Several citizens start jumping through windows and attacking
Lucas and his men.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas guns down a line of people in his window, he runs up
to the window and yells as he shoots down many all at once.
He jumps down to the ground and reloads quickly. Harold
jumps up and substitues for him, shooting several until
Lucas starts shooting again.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
The door is kicked down and the shooters step inside.
                                                            

73.

                       SHOOTER #1
Why do we have to do this?
                                                            
                       SHOOTER #2
We gotta do what the boss wants or
we don't get paid, right?
                                                            
The shooters start kicking down objects. One shooter raises
his gun over his head and shoots upwards.
                                                            
 
INT. HARRY'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lisa grabs Max and runs over to a window as bullet start
flying through the floors in the other rooms. Lisa kicks the
window open after a few tries, she leads Max out first.
Bullets start flying in the room, and Max quickly drops to
the ground beneath. Lisa runs to the window and quickly gets
out, she grabs onto the ledge but manages to fall onto the
ground below as well anyway.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A man lifts a grenade up, but he is shot in the chest and
flies backwards before he can throw it. Several more yell
and start to run forward out of anger, they are all shot at
and several fall down. More bullets fly there way, and all
of them flip to the ground.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
The gunshots stop. Lucas is the first to notice this and
stands up quickly, they have won, everyone is either asleep
or dead. Lucas smiles and looks at the three on the ground.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
We won!
                                                            
Everyone smiles and throws their guns to the floor. Sparky
steps away from the bar stool and smiles as he walks over to
Lucas. Lucas stands still, and slowly drops his machine gun
to the floor. Harold and his men stand up, and Sparky walks
over to them. A loud gunshot goes off, and everyone turns to
see what has happened. Sparky's face turns to fear and he
yells. Harold, Lew, and Frank watch in surprise. Lew and
Frank dash to the floor, and Harold runs to Lucas. Lucas
lands on his side, a gunshot in his arm, and blood leaking
from the wound. Sparky grabs Lucas' machine gun and looks
outside to see Charles, Charles laughs crazily and shoots
Sparky repeatedly to the ground.
                                                            
 

74.

EXT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Charles laughs crazily as he walks over to the building.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold grabs the machine gun from Sparky's dead hands, he
jumps up and raises it over his shoulder, he sees Charles
and shoots him in the knee, causing Charles to drop to the
ground and drop his weapon. Harold smiles as he takes a step
outside.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold walks over to Charles, he steps on Charles' stomach,
pinning him to the ground. Harold uses the machine gun in
his hand to shove the other machine gun away. Harold then
kneels down and looks menacingly into Charles' face. Charles
laughs crazily, and Harold angrily punches him.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' NEW HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       LUCAS
As our building is being repaired,
we are to stay in my house in the
meantime. I have security watching
us, and we have Charles in our
possession.
                                                            
Lucas stands up and looks at the rest of his group, who are
sitting away from him.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
All the damage he's done to this
town...
                                                            
 
EXT. TOWN - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
We slowly pan around all the houses that have been gunned
down, the shattered glass and ruined walls.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' NEW HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       LUCAS
We'll kill him...
                                                            
 

75.

INT. LUCAS' NEW HOUSE - BASEMENT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A security guard stands and looks at Charles, who is laying
on the floor and laughing crazily.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' NEW HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Slowly, the death he deserves is
the death he will get.
                                                            
Everyone nods as we pan around them.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
We will pass this hard time for
us, we will, I promise all of you
that we will take down the police,
and in the end, we will be the
last ones -- the only ones --
standing. But first, we need to
end Charles, first, we have to do
what we were meant to do. And what
we need to do is to start anew,
leave town, and don't look back,
but Charles comes first. I promise
you all, everything is going to be
fine. Everyone, get some rest,
first thing tomorrow we'll be
busy.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas walks down the flight of stairs to the basement. Harry
looks even worse, blood is now covering two thirds of his
face.
                                                            
                       HARRY
No! No, man! I told you
everything, I don't know anything
else I swear. Please!
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Calm down you pathetic bastard.
                                                            
                       HARRY
I'm sorry. I'm sorry, let me go.
Let me go!
                                                            
Lucas punches Harry across the face, knocking him to the
ground.
                                                            

76.

                       LUCAS (PAST)
That's enough damnit! Ugh!
      (Looks at his fist)
You see what you make me do?!
                                                            
                       HARRY
Let me go.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
I would if I could.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You can, you've got the keys. If
you wanted to, you could let me go
right now.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
I don't want to.
      (Kneels down to
       Harry's face)
You're making me do this, son. If
it was up to me --
                                                            
                       HARRY
It is up to you!
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
If it was up to me, I'd let you
go. But it's not up to you, it's
up to the people who are afraid of
crime makers like you, and need
heroes, like me, I'm a hero, I can
save people. I just don't, and you
wanna know why? It's because I
despise people like you. I despise
every second of your life on this
Earth that I am forced to share
with animals like you, I despise
it all. I can't stand the sight of
you! I stay home at night, I watch
some television, but not once, not
even once! Do I go outside and try
to be the hero and you wanna know
why? Because there is too many
villains put on Earth for me to be
a hero.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Face it, you and me are just
alike. Afraid to admit that
there's something deep down inside
of us that we want to hide. For
you, it's the fact you're an
insane psycho, and for me, it's
            (MORE)

77.

                       HARRY (cont'd)
that I fear every moment of my
life because I'm a police officer,
trying to hide from people like
you while catching them at the
same time. I'm not fit for my job,
and I will admit it. But you,
you'll never admit your secret.
You're a psycho, a maniac, crazy
is the word they made for people
like you. We're both different,
not in good ways. But you know
what, Earth needs people like us!
Earth needs you and me standing
there, fighting, or else there is
no current, it's odd, uneven.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
I'm starting to like you, buddy
ole pal! What do you say, I decide
on whether or not to kill you one
more day.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Thanks, friend.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Oh, but, for the next twenty-four
hours when I'm deciding, you will
have no food, no water, nothing.
                                                            
Lucas walks off and slams the door behind him as Harry sits
angrily up against the wall.
                                                            
 
INT. MATT'S HOUSE - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
We slowly zoom out of Matt's open eyes. We get far away
enough to reveal he is alive, and he blinks. Matt puts a
jacket on and walks out of his house.
                                                            
 
EXT. MATT'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Matt looks at the bullet holes and sighs, he walks off.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - EVENING
                                                            
Matt stands in front of a white board and looks at a web
description of Harry, he turns around and walks over to his
desk.
                                                            

78.

                       DOUGLAS
No luck, huh?
                                                            
                       MATT
Douglas, how's the arm?
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Pretty good, hey, where were you
when the attack took place?
                                                            
                       MATT
I was out of town, helping my wife
get things packed in a new house.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
      (Surprised)
You're moving? Why didn't you say
anything?
                                                            
                       MATT
I didn't want you to take it
personal. You know the things that
have been happening between us.
It's just the time period, I
promise. My wife just finished
college, she's got a job as a
doctor two towns over.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
When are you leaving?
                                                            
                       MATT
She's starting work today. I'm
staying here for a month and
helping you guys catch Lucas.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
Thanks, that's a really thoughtful
thing, Matt.
                                                            
                       MATT
Hey Douglas, I'm sorry about
everything that went down between
us the other day.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
It's alright. We're all under a
lot of pressure, I was drunk when
I got to that crime scene anyway,
that's probably where most of the
words came from.
                                                            
The two fist-bump.
                                                            
 

79.

INT. LUCAS' NEW HOUSE - BASEMENT - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Charles cries are the only thing heard as we slowly pan out
from a wall in Lucas' basement, we pan around the room and
finally see Charles. We see Lucas kick the door open and
angrily walk towards Charles, putting a gun to his head.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Shut the hell up you son of a
bitch.
                                                            
Charles starts crying even more, and Lucas angrily keeps the
gun pointed at his head. Frank walks in.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Don't shoot him.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Why, huh? Why do I not shoot him?
Answer me, Frank! Frank, give me
one god damn good answer before I
blow the brains out of this
prick's head.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Because, we're going to use him as
bait.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - EVENING
                                                            
Lucas, Harold, Lew, and Frank stand on the rooftop.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Tomorrow we are going to call the
cops down here, saying that we
have Harry Young. When they come
running -- and trust me they will
be running -- we attack, we don't
think, we don't pause, we attack,
we shoot.
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER'
That actually sounds like a good
plan.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Good, because this all ends
tomorrow.
                                                            
 

80.

INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - MORNING
                                                            
The door swings open, and Lucas walks through. Harry looks
up at him.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
I've made up my mind. You've got
one more day, and then you're
dead, gone.
                                                            
                       HARRY
No, you're wrong.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
What do you mean 'I'm wrong?'
                                                            
                       HARRY
I just called the cops, they'll be
here any minute.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
You son of a bitch, you son of a
bitch!
                                                            
Lucas tackles Harry up against the wall and starts
strangling him with his bare hands.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
The door to the rooftop is kicked open, and Lucas angrily
drags Charles forward. Frank, Harold, and Lew follow.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Hand me the phone, I'll call the
cops. Harold, Lew, go to your
positions.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry punches Lucas off and runs to the door, he kicks it
open and sees a guard. The guard tackles Harry back into the
room.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
Hold him down!
                                                            
The guard holds Harry down, and Lucas angrily punches him.
                                                            
 

81.

EXT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
A group of cop cars arrive outside, Harold and Lew watch
through the windows.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold and Lew watch as they have the curtain pulled back.
                                                            
                       HAROLD 'BOULDER' (PAST)
Tell Lucas, we have to get out the
back door. Leave Harry in here!
Don't worry about him, only
yourself!
                                                            
Lew runs off, and Harold grabs a gun.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank stands on the corner, looking down to the ground. He
lifts the phone to his ear.
                                                            
 
INT. POLICE STATION - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Matt reaches for his phone and holds it to his ear.
                                                            
                       MATT
Hello?
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank smiles.
                                                            
                       FRANK
      (Whisper)
We got these guys.
      (Normally)
Get a piece of paper, I'll tell
you the address.
                                                            
 
INT. BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lew and Harold run down a flight of stairs and raise their
machine guns upwards.
                                                            
 

82.

INT. POLICE STATION - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       MATT
Guys, we got them!
                                                            
Douglas jumps up and runs off with Matt.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank drops the phone and turns around.
                                                            
                       FRANK
They're on their way.
                                                            
                       LUCAS
Good.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas turns around and sees Lew running through the door.
                                                            
                       LEW (PAST)
We got cops here, we gotta leave!
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
No, we stay. I'm tired of running,
we stay and we fight, even if it
means we have to die in the
process.
                                                            
 
EXT. LUCAS' HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Cops run out of their cars, towards the house they head as
Harold watches in fear through the window.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold shakes as he slowly raises the gun to the door.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank watches from above as Matt and Douglas pull up in
separate cars. Frank turns around, he sees Lucas is facing
the door, a machine gun in his hands. Frank raises his
handgun to the back of Lucas.
                                                            
                       FRANK
They're here.
                                                            

83.

                       LUCAS
      (Smiling)
Good.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas walks out of the room and grabs a machine gun, he
walks back in and looks at Harry, he raises it to his head.
Lew watches in fear. Harry watches in fear.
                                                            
                       HARRY
No, please.
                                                            
Lucas continues holding the gun, ignoring Harry and putting
his finger closer and closer to the trigger.
                                                            
                       HARRY
You don't have to do this.
                                                            
Lucas looks frustrated, like some sense of human nature left
in him does not want him to pull the trigger.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Lucas, you're better than this. It
doesn't have to end like this!
Just drop the gun, and walk away.
You don't get caught, I do. That's
the best option right now!
                                                            
Lucas' finger starts to tremble as he holds it to the
trigger.
                                                            
                       HARRY
It doesn't have to be this way.
Drop the gun, and let me go, just
push me away. Please, you don't
have to pull that trigger.
                                                            
                       LUCAS (PAST)
I know I don't! I know! You've
pushed me here, you've made me do
this! Everything that has led to
this moment, it's on you.
Everything! All of it!
                                                            
Lew walks out of the room, he grabs his gun from his pocket
and holds it at his side as he walks up the steps.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Do what you gotta do, then.
                                                            

84.

Harry closes his eyes. Lucas starts shaking, and pulls his
finger slightly away from the trigger. Harry holds his arms
out at his sides and Lucas doesn't do it.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold watches as the door is kicked open, he immediately
shoots a cop in the chest and jumps under a table as bullets
fly into his path.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas smiles and pushes his finger towards the trigger.
Frank watches in fear as he trembles, gun in hand.
                                                            
 
INT. BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Matt runs inside and Harold tackles him to the ground,
furiously starting to beat him. Douglas angrily kicks Harold
off and raises his gun to him. Lew runs out and shoots
Douglas in the chest, Douglas falls up against the wall and
raises his gun to Lew, shooting him in the arm and knocking
Lew to the ground.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harold raises his gun and shoots another cop. Lew kicks the
door open to upstairs, he uses a shotgun to shoot one cop
down in the chest. Cops run to the door that leads
downstairs. Harold watches as one cop stays behind and grabs
handcuffs, running over to Harold.
                                                            
 
INT. BUILDING - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Douglas raises his gun, but is shot in the arm by Lew.
Douglas flips face-first onto the ground, and Harold slowly
starts to vanish into thin air. Matt takes his hand off of
his eyes and sees Harold is no longer there, Douglas sits up
and raises his gun to Lew. Lew takes off running, and Matt
chases after him. Douglas grabs a handgun and starts to head
towards the stairway, he opens the gun and makes sure it has
bullets in it: Inside, six are contained. Douglas starts
using his bloody hand to narrate his way up to the rooftop.
                                                            
 

85.

INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas yells and takes his finger away. Lew runs to the room
and starts shooting as cops make there way forward, Lucas
turns and starts gunning them down. Harry grabs his police
badge and smacks Lew in the face, knocking him to the
ground. Lucas turns and smacks Harry to the ground with the
tip of his machine gun. Harry hits the ground, and Lucas
turns to continue shooting cops. Several cops hide as
bullets fly there way, Lew grabs his gun and shoots one cop
in the knee. A cop shoots Lucas in the shoulder, knocking
him to the ground.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Matt watches as Lew slowly sits up from off the ground, Matt
swings his gun forward and reaches for his handcuffs.
                                                            
                       MATT
Put your hands up, your weapons
down!
                                                            
Lew reluctantly does so, and Matt runs forward to handcuff
him.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank is now in silent tears, he trembles with the gun and
watches as Lucas prepares to start a war.
                                                            
 
INT. BUILDING - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Douglas watches through a crack, he reaches for his gun.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Cops run into the room, one kicks the machine gun away from
Lucas. Lew tackles one cop into the wall and punches him.
Another cop pulls Lew by the chest and throws him back.
Lucas reaches for the gun, but cops grab handcuffs and reach
for him. Lucas punches one cop and grabs his machine gun, he
stands up and guns down two cops and Lew.
                                                            
 

86.

EXT. BUILDING - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lew frees himself from Matt's grasp and runs around the
building. Matt chases after him and watches as Matt
vanishes. Matt watches in fear, he runs towards the building
door.
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry angrily shoots Lucas in the chest, sending him to the
ground and into the wall. Harry raises his badge.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Don't shoot, don't... Shoot.
                                                            
Harry stumbles backwards and realizes he has been shot in
the line of fire. Harry looks down and sees blood coming
from a wound in his chest. Harry falls to the ground and
looks at a dying Lucas.
                                                            
                       HARRY
We... Caught him.
                                                            
Cops watch in fear.
                                                            
                       HARRY
Let me die... With my family.
      (Reaches for
       Remote)
Don't call for... Help, leave
me... Be.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank watches as Lucas tumbles to the ground and starts to
vanish. Charles angrily stands up and tackles Frank onto the
ground. Frank drops his gun and reaches for it, Matt and
Douglas kick the door down and run up. Matt raises his gun
and shoots, Charles is shot in the chest and yells in pain.
Frank throws Charles off and stands up, Matt and Douglas
stand in front of Frank, they drop their guns to their
sides.
                                                            
                       MATT
You okay?
                                                            
We look at Frank's eyes as he watches in confusion.
                                                            
                       FRANK
Who are you?
                                                            

87.

                       DOUGLAS
Oh no, is he... God, damnit!
                                                            
 
INT. LUCAS' HOUSE - BASEMENT - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Cops walk out of the room. Harry dials in the present day,
getting the remote covered in blood. Harry presses the
button, and leans back against the wall he sits against.
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S HOUSE - FUTURE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry lands in his driveway and sees one car is there - his
car. Harry leans up against it and sees his house has been
badly gunned down. Down the road, a car starts to come to
the house.
                                                            
 
INT. LISA'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lisa reaches for a gun out of the glove department next to
her, she looks at the man, not recognizing him.
                                                            
                       MAX
Mom, that's Dad!
                                                            
Lisa stares as she drives towards him.
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry turns to see Lisa, he smiles and looks down at his
chest. Harry puts one hand up against the car, and another
against his bullet wound.
                                                            
 
INT. LISA'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lisa watches in fear, she drops the gun and reaches for her
phone.
                                                            
                       LISA
Oh god.
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Harry starts to tumble to the ground, he lets go of his
chest and sees his hand is covered in blood, he falls to his
knees, letting go of the car. A bloody hand print stays
printed to the car as he falls to the ground next to that.
We show an above view, he is smiling, he has died with his

88.

family knowing he did not leave them, but instead did what
he set out to do, and faced the consequences for that.
                                                            
 
INT. LISA'S CAR - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lisa and Max cry as she pulls the car up and jumps out of
it.
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
                       LISA
No! No!
                                                            
Lisa runs over to Harry, she grabs her phone and starts to
dial in a number.
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S FUNERAL - EVENING
                                                            
Drums are beat on as we focus on them. Lisa, Frank, Max,
Matt, and Douglas all sit in the same row of chairs. Frank
smiles as a man sits next to him, holding Frank's hand.
Matt's face is now covered with some browses, and Douglas is
even worse. Lisa and Max cry as they hug one another.
Harry's coffin is in the ground, and a priest stands in
front of it. Lisa stands up and walks over to where the
priest was previously standing.
                                                            
                       LISA
Harry Young was a good man. A good
cop. A good husband, a good
friend, a good father.
                                                            
Matt and Douglas keep their heads down, they listen in
silence.
                                                            
                       LISA
But he will always live on in our
hearts.
                                                            
Everyone claps as Matt walks over to where Lisa stands.
                                                            
                       MATT
I remember the first day I met
Harry Young, a brilliant, nice,
caring man. A good man, the kind
you read about in books,
biographies, a hero. Sure, he had
his flaws, but every great hero
has had their flaws. And that's
what he is: A great hero.
                                                            

89.

                       DOUGLAS
He let himself become dedicated,
committed, to this job, and in the
end that ruined him. That was a
mistake, but thanks to him, crime
is at an end. A mob boss who
gunned down the entire city is
caught, and who do we thank? Harry
Young, that's who.
                                                            
                       LISA
He's still in our hearts, we just
have to dig deep enough to find
him. And there with him, along
with him, will be his confidence,
his generousness, his hope, and
everything that we liked him for,
the man that he was will always be
in our hearts.
                                                            
                       MATT
We may never see anyone like him
again in this town, so let's all
have a moment of silence.
                                                            
                       DOUGLAS
And let's honor this great great
man.
                                                            
Frank is silent, he smiles. He remembers something.
                                                            
 
EXT. BUILDING - ROOFTOP - PAST - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Lucas falls to the ground and starts to vanish.
                                                            
 
EXT. HARRY'S FUNERAL - CONTINUOUS
                                                            
Frank closes his eyes, he pushes the memory away. In the
background, we see The Time Guy standing next to a tree. The
Time Guy drops the time remote to the ground and raises his
foot up over the remote, but before we can see what happens,
we:
                                                            


FADE OUT.


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From Thomas Date 2/19/2014 ****
The story is original, something Steven Spielberg would kill to conduct! Great job expressing your characters emotions off the page and to our mind. Amazing, aside from the lack of action and the use of too many minor characters, this is possibly the best screenplay I've seen on here: next to your Justice League screenplay, of course... You are really good with stories! Keep them coming!

From Mike Date 1/31/2014 ****
I'm a fan of your work (Deathray was great!), but this has definitely got to be your best! This was your first script, and this is amazing! The story, the suspense, the conclusion, it was all spectacular! 4 out of 4 stars, I'd just give advice that others have pointed out, have your redshirt characters do more, and maybe some better dialogue in some places. Aside from that, MY only problem was the fact that it was 89 pages long, it seems like some scenes were rushed, so maybe add some dialogue and to those scenes.

From Mikachu Date 12/25/2013 ****
Good job, maybe use more characters for more important things. For instance, there's a character named Lew who shows up maybe once or twice, maybe he could do more stuff...

From Michael Date 12/23/2013 ***1/2
Next time you could work on adding some more emotions, more action, and more suspense. All in all, good job, especially if this is your first screenplay! The story was amazing!

From Michael Date 12/22/2013 ***1/2
The story is great, the characters were great, and the dialogue was great. The only problem I had was that there should have been better quotes, I realize they may be heard to make sometimes, but some of the quotes in this either need to be fixed or redone completely, they can be a little cheesy and unbelievable at times in the story. Otherwise truly great! I think you should make more screenplays, and make them movies someday. Here is my rating for every main part of the story: Story: 4 out of 4 stars, brilliant idea, and greatly executed! Characters: 3.5 out of 4 stars, some of them might have been a little bit of redshirts, but most of them were good. Dialogue: 3.5 out of 4 stars, like I said, maybe just add some quotes that are better. Action: 3 out of 4 stars, a little more wouldn't hurt, I think this should be in the drama category. Adventure: 2 out of 4 stars, like I just stated, this isn't an adventure, I think this should go under drama instead of action/adventure. Drama: 4 out of 4 stars, the ending was so sad! Good job getting all the character's emotions off the page! Side note: I like the whole "Christopher Nolan"-like thing you got going on at the end there, where it cuts from future to past, from character to character, that's really suspenseful and dramatic! Keep up the good work!


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