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Sorry Ain't Gonna Get It
by Eddie D Frazier Jr & Paul Lawrence Bascomb Jr (cactusrec@gmail.com)

Rated: R   Genre: Drama   User Review: **
This is a story about three childhood friends, whose lives were changed by unforeseen events of life. Their struggles with life, love, marriage, heartbreak, happiness and tragedy. With "Hottie" as the cause of more than her share of trouble.


This screenplay is copyrighted with the Library of Congress and registered with the WGA (West). This screenplay may not be used or reproduced without the express written permission of the authors.



FADE IN:

EXT. TYREE RUNS INTO HIS OLD FRIEND - DAY
                                                            
Tyree is driving to his graduation ceremony when he stops at
a store for some gum and a soda. As he is coming out of the
store, he sees his friend Omar, who is talking with Darius
Smith, a wanna be street thug known as "Rocket Man".
                                                            
Tyree is excited to see his childhood and high school
friend.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Hey Omar....whats up man, haven't
seen you since we graduated from
high school.
                                                            
Omar looks around and sees Tyree coming toward him. He is
excited to see Tyree.
                                                            
                       OMAR
Hey Tyree...
                                                            
The two men hug each other.
                                                            
                       TYREE
What have you been up to?
                                                            
                       OMAR
Nothing much.....just working and
hanging out....
You know.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah man....you know I know.
                                                            
                       OMAR
Yeah.....I heard you going to be a
cop....is that true?
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah...you know....got to be like
my old man....wearing the badge,
to protect and serve the
public.....just like when we were
kids. Remember?
                                                            
                       OMAR
Yeah, don't I know....you always
got to be the cop when we played
cops and robbers....You would
always save the little girls in
the hood and I had to be the bad
            (MORE)

2.

                       OMAR (cont'd)
guy and sit in your little fucked
up make believe jail. While you
sat with all the girls..
                                                            
Omar and Tyree both laugh
                                                            
                       TYREE
You know the police could use a
few more good men.
                                                            
                       OMAR
You know me.....if it pays more
than I make now.....I'm game.
                                                            
Seeming annoyed at the interruption, Rocket-Man looks at
Tyree with a cold look.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
So you gonna be a
policeman....just like your old
man.....guess I'll be seeing you
on the streets someday.
                                                            
Tyree looks at Rocket Man with a look of annoyance as he
speaks.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah Darius.....maybe someday I
will.....
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
It's "Rocket Man" to you.....
                                                            
Rocket Man turns away from Tyree and looks at Omar.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Come on Omar....I got better
things to do with my time than be
seen talking to the police.....I
got me a date with a cute little
honey...if you know what I mean
                                                            
Omar smiles and says in a joking manner.
                                                            
                       OMAR
Yeah....like someone is going out
with you.....you need to get a
job.
                                                            
Rocket Man has a puzzled look on his face at first, then
grabs at his crotch and starts walking away.
                                                            

3.

                       ROCKET MAN
That shit ain't funny Omar. I
don't need no job, all ladies need
some lovin.....and Rocket Man
provides.......I'll talk to you
later Omar....see ya Mr.policeman.
                                                            
In a joking way, not taking what Rocket Man said seriously.
                                                            
                       OMAR
Did you here that? Rocket Man
ain't never had a girl friend. All
ladies need some lovin....you go
get you some lovin...I got to go
to work.
                                                            
Emphasizing his words with hands movements.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Man....why do you associate with
that wanna be....he ain't nothing
but trouble Omar....
                                                            
Shrugs his shoulders and speaks softly.
                                                            
                       OMAR
Yeah I know....but he's really
just talk...just like when we were
kids.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Well I don't put anything past
him....all about himself and
nobody else.
                                                            
                       OMAR
I hear ya....nice seeing you again
Tyree....say hi to your dad for
me.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah...got a graduation to
attend....I'll tell my dad you
said "hi"...remember what I said
about Rocket Man.
                                                            
                       OMAR
Yeah....get to your graduation
before you're late...I hear ya
about Rocket Man....Congrats Ty,
there's gonna be a new sheriff in
town!
                                                            
 

4.

INT. HAZEL BEECH GETS RAPED IN HER BEDROOM - DAY
                                                            
Rocket Man climbs over a fence. He's looking for a house to
break into, when he spots an open window and moves over to
get a better look. He looks inside the open window and can't
believe what he sees. He's looking into a bedroom and sees a
nice looking young female with a towel wrapped around her
body and she's fixing her hair to take a shower.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I need to get a move on.....my
mother will be here any minute
now.....
                                                            
Hazel walks into the bathroom and you can hear water in the
shower. She starts to sing as she showers.
                                                            
The Rocket Man looks around and then climbs in through the
open window. He looks around the room and spots Hazel's
panties and bra on her bed. He finds a hiding place in her
closet.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
      (looking at
       herself in the
       mirror)
Yeah girl...you got it going on.
                                                            
Hazel walks out of the bathroom....naked, into her bedroom.
She is putting on her body powder when she is grabbed from
behind and pushed toward the bed, she falls and hits her
head on the headboard and is knocked out. The unknown male
stares down at Hazel's young naked body and climbs on top of
her, pushing himself into her tight opening.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
      (husky voice.)
Don't scream or make a sound and
you won't get hurt....you gonna
get it, all of it...just like all
you bitches want it.
                                                            
Rocket Man is fixated on Hazel's taught and voluptuous body
when he enters her from behind. As he was raping Hottie, he
hears a slurred voice calling for her.
                                                            
                       MR BEECH
      (Drunken and
       slurred voice)
Haaazzzzeeeellll,
HHHhaaaazzzzzeeellll.....
                                                            

5.

                       ROCKET MAN
      (breathing hard)
You lucky I didn't get to finish
with you....cause girl.... you got
some sweet stuff...
                                                            
With the voice getting closer, the Rocket Man quickly climbs
out of the window, just as the bedroom door opens.
                                                            
 
INT. KIM'S HIGH SCHOOL CLASSROOM - DAY
                                                            
Class is about to end and Kim's teacher has just finished
recording the grades for homework done the night before.
                                                            
                       MALE TEACHER
Before you leave.....remember to
read chapters 15 through 18 for
tomorrows test and don't forget to
pick up your homework as you
leave.
                                                            
Kim looks at Sheila with a puzzled look on her face.
                                                            
                       KIM
I wonder why Hazel didn't show up
today?
                                                            
                       SHEILA
I don't know.....maybe she's sick
or something.....
                                                            
Kim shrugs her shoulders as Sheila and her walk toward the
teacher's desk to pick up their homework.
                                                            
                       KIM
I'll ask Ilene.....
                                                            
Sheila picks up her homework paper from her teacher's desk
and walks toward the door.
                                                            
                       KIM
See you tomorrow Sheila......
                                                            
Sheila waves back at her and disappears through the door.
                                                            
                       MALE TEACHER
Hi Kim....you're doing real well
on your homework
assignments......another A+....you
should do quite well on the test
tomorrow.....have you thought
about college yet?
                                                            

6.

                       KIM
Yes....I'm thinking about becoming
a doctor.....just like my uncle.
                                                            
The male teacher is handing the other students their
homework papers as he is talking to Kim.
                                                            
                       MALE TEACHER
Good choice......the world could
use a few more good
doctor's....keep up the good work
and I'll see you tomorrow.
                                                            
                       KIM
Okay....see you tomorrow
                                                            
Kim gets her homework paper and walks out of the classroom
into the noisy and busy school hallway. Its lunch period and
she is to meet Ilene in the front of school.
                                                            
 
EXT. ILENE IS WAITING FOR KIM - DAY
                                                            
Outside the front entrance of school, Ilene is waiting for
Kim, Ilene is being teased by 2 male students about her
name.
                                                            
The boy is singing his words in a nursery rhyme type of way.
                                                            
                       1ST BOY
Ilene, Ilene......that bitch is
mean
                                                            
                       2ND BOY
Edward means "Lion heart".....what
does Ilene mean?
                                                            
Ilene is looking around for Kim, trying to ignore the 2 male
students, then she snaps back.
                                                            
                       ILENE
It means....I lean over and you
kiss my ass......
                                                            
                       1ST BOY
I told you she was mean
                                                            
The 2 boys start running away and laughing as Kim walks up
to Ilene.
                                                            
                       KIM
Have you seen Hazel today?
                                                            

7.

                       ILENE
No.....I haven't
                                                            
Ilene looking sarcastically at Kim as if to say, she's in
your classroom.
                                                            
                       ILENE
She's in your class.....maybe
she's sick
                                                            
                       KIM
Well....we better hurry up if
we're going to her house......we
only got an hour for lunch
                                                            
 
INT. KIM AND ILENE REACH HAZEL'S HOUSE - DAY
                                                            
As Kim and Ilene reach Hazel's house, Hazel's mother drives
into the driveway and gets out of the car.
                                                            
                       KIM
Hello...Mrs. Beech
                                                            
                       MRS BEECH
Uh....hello girls....aren't you
headed the wrong way.....where's
Hazel.....is she in the house?
                                                            
Kim and Ilene look at each other, hoping they haven't gotten
Hazel in trouble, Mrs. Beech opens the door and calls
Hazel's name.
                                                            
                       MRS BEECH
Hazel....Hazel, you home....
                                                            
Mrs. Beech walks past an empty liquor bottle on the floor.
She calls out again.
                                                            
                       MRS BEECH
Hazel....you home....
                                                            
Mrs Beech walks into Hazel's room and sees Hazel on the bed,
naked and crying, Mr. Beech is standing over her in a
drunken stupor, with a bloody sheet in his hands..
                                                            
                       MRS BEECH
You son of a bitch....what have
you done to my daughter....
                                                            
Mrs Beech starts hitting him on his back with her closed
hand.
                                                            

8.

                       MRS BEECH
You son of a bitch....I'll kill
you....get away from my baby.....
                                                            
Mr. Beech turns suddenly and pushes Mrs. Beech to the floor
as he runs out of the room. He runs pass the girls, gets
into his truck and drives off.
                                                            
                       ILENE
What was that......about?
                                                            
                       KIM
I don't know.....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Damn.....he almost ran us over
trying to get out of here......
                                                            
                       KIM
Something must of happen to
Hazel.....
                                                            
 
INT. TYREE GETS A GRADUATION GIFT FROM HIS DAD - DAY
                                                            
Tyree has just graduated from the Police Academy, his father
gives him a gift,
                                                            
                       TYREE
Hi dad......didn't think I would
see you here at my graduation.
                                                            
                       JOHN
You know I wouldn't miss my son's
graduation from the
academy.....I'm proud of you son
                                                            
                       JOHN
Are you ready to go.....you know
I'm still on duty and I want to
give you something.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah dad....I"m ready.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Still driving the same old cruiser
I see.......
                                                            
                       JOHN
It's not the latest but it gets me
where I'm going......
                                                            

9.

                       JOHN
Look in the glove box.......
                                                            
                       TYREE
What did you get me dad.....a
brand new Glock?
                                                            
                       JOHN
No.....something better.....a real
piece.......
                                                            
                       TYREE
Ohhhh......she's a beauty......
chrome 45 auto with ivory
grips.....
                                                            
                       JOHN
That was my father's piece he
brought back from the war, before
becoming a cop.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Did grandpa ever use this as a
cop.....
                                                            
                       JOHN
No son.....he couldn't use it as a
beat cop......
                                                            
                       DISPATCH
Dispatch to Detective Stone,
Dispatch to Detective Stone, come
in
                                                            
                       JOHN
Excuse me son.....back to
work.....this is Detective
Stone..dispatch
                                                            
                       DISPATCH
Detective Stone, we have patrol at
443 West Street.....attempted rape
of a female, suspect is rape
victims step-father.....he has
fled the scene in a white pickup
truck....additional info at the
scene with black and white.
                                                            
                       JOHN
I'm on my way dispatch....have
patrol tape the crime
scene.....eta 8 minutes...Out.
                                                            

10.

                       JOHN
This will be you soon....as soon
as you get assigned to a
precinct....
                                                            
                       TYREE
I can't wait to get into the
action....
                                                            
Tyree hits the lights and siren.
                                                            
 
INT. DETECTIVE STONE ARRIVES AT THE SCENE - DAY
                                                            
Detective Stone arrives at the scene, he gets out andd
starts talking with the patrolman already on the scene.
Tyree notices 2 young females in the front yard talking to
each other.
                                                            
                       JOHN
What have we got.....
                                                            
                       POLICEMAN
Looks like attemted rape by the
step-father who was alone with the
victum,The wife came home to find
the step-father on top of the
victom.... trying to rape
her....we haven't gotten a
statement from the girl because
she's pretty much out of it, the
step-father was seen fleeing the
scene in an old pick up
truck......we have an APB out on
him and the truck, we also have 2
collaborating witnesses....they're
right over there.....
                                                            
The patrolman points to Ilene and Kim.
                                                            
Detective Stone and the policeman walk away from the car
toward Ilenre and Kim....Tyree is unable to hear anymore of
their conversation....
                                                            
                       JOHN
Hi....my name is John Stoneer,
police detective.....do you mind
if I ask you some questions about
what you saw?
                                                            
                       ILENE
We didn't see much....just Hazel's
step-father running out of the
door when Hazel's mom was chasing
            (MORE)

11.

                       ILENE (cont'd)
him.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Thats right....he jumped the fence
and got into an old truck.....
                                                            
                       JOHN
I appreciate your co-orporation
with this investigation....if you
would give your name to the
patrolman over there you are free
to leave...I'm sorry you had to
witness something like
this....especially to your
friend...
                                                            
Just as Detective Stoner was finishing up with
girls.....Mrs. Beech walks past as he is saying his
apologies to Ilene and Kim.
                                                            
                       MRS BEECH
Sorry anin't gonna get it this
time.....he's gonna pay for what
he did....to my baby
                                                            
 
INT. 10 YEARS LATER...INSIDE KIM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
                                                            
Kim is in front of a full length mirror making sure she
looks good for her night out with the girls. She receives a
phone call from Ilene who is calling to see if she is ready.
Kim answers the phone.
                                                            
                       KIM
Hello.
                                                            
                       ILENE
What's up girl.....or should I
say.....Dr. Kimberly Verdell
Hayes.... you dressed yet?
                                                            
Kim doesn't have a chance to answer before Ilene continues.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Girl it's been a long time since
the three of us have gotten
together...and since you've been
back, you've exiled yourself to
that house.
                                                            

12.

                       KIM
I know ..but you know how it is
being the new doctor on
staff...but I'm almost
dressed..... you talk to Hottie
yet?
                                                            
 
INT. INSIDE ILENE'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
                                                            
Ilene is in her home sitting on the side of the bed putting
on her bling (rings, bracelet, necklace etc.)as she get's up
and goes to the mirror to check out how she looks in the new
outfit she purchased, she is talking to Kim.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Not yet.... let me call her now
and put us on three way.
                                                            
 
INT. INSIDE HOTTIE'S BATHROOM, SHE IS IN THE SHOWER - NIGHT
                                                            
Hottie's cell phone rings, she steps out of the shower and
grabs a towel to wraps it around herself, she picks up her
phone and answers.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Hello?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hey Hottie... you ready..... I
know you better be dressed.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
You know it girl, is Kim still
going with us?
                                                            
 
INT. INSIDE ILENE'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
                                                            
Ilene clicks the flash button and has all three women on 3
way.
                                                            
                       ILENE
That bitch is lying..... Did you
hear that heifer tell that lie
Kim?
                                                            
                       KIM
Hottie... I know I don't hear the
shower still running.
                                                            

13.

                       HOTTIE
Hi Kim.... you could say hello
first.
                                                            
                       KIM
Hello heifer....why do you always
have to make us Late?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Late!... You know I have to make
an "entrance"
                                                            
                       ILENE
Girl....we're just going out to
dinner and some drinks.
                                                            
                       KIM
I told you that bitch is stuck on
herself.
                                                            
Kim laughs and Hottie laughs with her.
                                                            
                       KIM
Well....whose turn is it to drive?
                                                            
There is a short pause, then Ilene speaks.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hottie you know it's your
turn..... that's ok I'll
drive.... Bitch you owe me. Kim,
I'll be right over to pick you up,
then we'll go snatch up that
heifer.
                                                            
                       KIM
OK....I[ll be ready when you get
here.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Seems I'm not the only one that's
not ready.
                                                            
                       KIM
I'm ready.... just need to put on
my shoes and grab my purse.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Look you slow ass heifers I'm on
my way.....You know how I am about
time. Be ready......Bye.
                                                            

14.

Ilene hangs up. Both Kim and Hottie have a funny look on
their faces as they hang up their phones.
                                                            
 
INT. OUTSIDE HOTTIES WINDOW - NIGHT
                                                            
A man's figure stands in the shadows looking into Hottie's
window from across the street.
                                                            
 
EXT. ILENE AND KIM ARE IN ILENE'S CAR - NIGHT
                                                            
ILENE PICKS UP KIM AND THEY'RE ON THEIR WAY TO HOTTIE'S
HOUSE.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Girl I didn't think we were ever
going to get you out.....its been
a month since you've been back and
all you do is work.....
                                                            
                       KIM
I know....its not like I planned
it this way.....between setting up
my medical office, hiring staff,
seeing patients and my hospital
rounds.....really doesn't leave me
a lot of free time.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah I know.....just wanted to
celebrate you coming back and
being a doctor.....wanted to tell
you how proud I am of you....
                                                            
                       KIM
Thanks Ilene.....that makes me
feel good. I should be
congratulating you....a big time
bank manager.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Oh....I'm not that big....just a
manager for a local bank.
                                                            
                       KIM
The largest in the state.....you
always were the logical
one....keeping Hazel and me
together.
                                                            

15.

                       ILENE
You weren't too bad....but
Hazel.....now that took some work.
                                                            
                       KIM
Speaking of Hazel.....how is she
doing....she was pretty messed up
when I left for Med school...
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hazel is now "Hottie"...she wants
to be a movie star or
entertainer.....she has all these
schemes for getting rich.....like
owning the biggest club in the
city and using men to pay her way
through life....far as I'm
concerned.....she won't admit that
she could do better if she wasn't
so fascinated with these crazy
ambitions of hers.
                                                            
                       KIM
You know... she has always been
fast when men are concerned....you
know after that shit happened with
her step father....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah...i know....but don't talk
about that around Hazel....you
here me.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Okay....I hear you....do you think
she'll be ready when we get to her
place?
                                                            
                       ILENE
She better be....or it will just
be the two of us....
                                                            
                       KIM
You know you're just
talking....you want us to
celebrate....the three of us....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah....you're right....
                                                            
 

16.

EXT. IN FRONT OF HOTTIE'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
ILENE IMPATIENTLY BLOWS THE HORN AS KIM AND HER WAIT FOR
HOTTIE TO COME OUT.
                                                            
                       ILENE
How come that heifer can't ever be
ready I ought to leave her ass
here.
                                                            
                       KIM
Just be patient Ilene. You know
Hottie's our girl even though no
woman's man is safe around her.
                                                            
                       KIM
You trust her...... don't you?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Like a snake...
                                                            
KIM AND ILENE BOTH LAUGH. HOTTIE COMES OUT OF THE HOUSE.
GHETTO FABULOUS SWINGING HER HIPS AS SHE WALKS TOWARDS THE
CAR AND REACHES FOR THE FRONT PASSENGER DOOR WHERE KIM IS
SITTING.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Kim you ought to let me ride
shotgun. I can't be seen getting
out the back of a car unless it
has a chauffeur. I told you I
need to make an entrance..
                                                            
                       ILENE
I know you ain't gonna let her put
you in the back seat?
                                                            
                       KIM
I may not be street but I ain't
stupid either. Hottie get your
trifling butt in the back and
let's go!
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Heifer!
                                                            
AS HOTTIE REACHES FOR THE REAR DOOR HANDLE ILENE STEPS ON
THE GAS AND MOVES THE CAR UP ABOUT TEN FEET. HOTTIE ATTEMPTS
TO GRAB THE DOOR HANDLE, AGAIN ILENE STEPS ON THE GAS,
MOVING THE CAR FORWARD. HOTTIE REACHES FOR THE HANDLE A
THIRD TIME.
                                                            

17.

                       HOTTIE
Ilene stop playing before you make
me brake a heel or somethin'
                                                            
                       ILENE
I told you not to be late!
                                                            
                       KIM
Now both of you are acting crazy.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah... or brake that fat ass!
                                                            
KIM AND ILENE LOOK AT EACH OTHER AND START LAUGHING. HOTTIE
FINALLY GETS INTO THE CAR.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Y'all ain't nothin' but some silly
ho's. Y'all haters...hating on a
bitch 'cause she fine.
                                                            
ALL THE GIRLS START LAUGHING AS THEY DRIVE OFF TO DINNER.
                                                            
 
INT. THE RESTAURANT - NIGHT
                                                            
ALL THREE WOMEN ARE IN THE WAITING AREA, WAITING TO BE
SEATED, WHEN HOTTIE NOTICES A MIRROR... THE HOSTESS INFORMS
THE WOMEN THAT THEIR TABLE IS READY
                                                            
                       HOSTESS
Hello ladies, are you together?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah..... you all go head, I got
some last minute touch ups to do
before I make my "entrance"....
                                                            
                       HOSTESS
Smoking or non-smoking?
                                                            
                       KIM
I'd prefer...non-smoking
                                                            
                       ILENE
Neither one of us smoke...Hottie's
the smoker......and I'm already
getting tired of this "entrance"
shit.....that heifer is stuck on
herself.....let's take
non-smoking, it'll serve her
right.
                                                            

18.

                       KIM
That will be....non-smoking.
                                                            
                       HOSTESS
This way ladies.......
                                                            
THE HOSTESS TAKES ILENE AND KIM TO THE TABLE. HOTTIE WAITS
BEHIND BECAUSE SHE WANTS TO "PRIMP" HERSELF BEFORE MAKING
HER "ENTRANCE". ILENE AND KIM ARE SITTING AT THE TABLE
WAITING FOR "HOTTIE" TO JOIN THEM.
                                                            
                       ILENE
You know ... Hottie's our
girl....but sometimes she can
really test my patience.
                                                            
                       KIM
Remember when we were in high
school...an we use to tease her by
calling her "Miss Bitch" and she
would tell us...the name is "Ms.
Hazel Beech"
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah... Then she wanted everyone
to call her Miss Diva the
Chocolate Dream....girl I was so
glad when she settled for "Hottie"
                                                            
                       KIM
Yeah....she took to that name like
a duck to water....with her hot
butt...She didn't start acting
like that.....like she's the shit,
until her mother caught her
step-father trying to rape her.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah,that was really hard on her.
Doesn't seem so long ago. Ten
years. But lets drop this.....we
promised her, that we would never
bring this up again. And by the
way I heard he got out a few years
ago.
                                                            
                       KIM
Let's just drop it for now before
Hottie hears us. It's getting
late...she better come on.....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah...I'm getting hungry
                                                            

19.

                       KIM
So tell me. How's the banking
business. I hear you have a very
good position at a bank. I'm proud
of you Ilene but I knew you could
do it.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Oh yeah...I'm sorry Kim. Yes the
promotion. Girl I make good money
and I don't have to answer to
anyone when it comes time to spend
it.
                                                            
                       KIM
I know that's right.
                                                            
                       ILENE
oh girl congratulations DOCTOR
KIMBERLY VERDELL HAYES.
                                                            
                       KIM
Yes we did do well for ourselves.
Didn't we?
                                                            
 
INT. ANDREE' NOTICES HIS FIANCÉE AND BEST FRIEND - NIGHT
                                                            
ANDRE' SURPRISES HIS FIANCEE AND HIS BEST FRIEND (JOHN)
TOGETHER AT A TABLE IN A LOCAL LOUNGE.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
So what do we have here?
                                                            
                       ANDRE'S FIANCEE
What do you mean......
                                                            
                       JOHN
Andre'....what's up...what's
wrong.. Man you ought to chill.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Shut up... you've done your damage
....you need to leave....I mean
....like...right now!!... You
feelin' me!
                                                            
JOHN LOOKING SURPRISED BUT NOT KNOWING WHAT TO MAKE OF THE
SITUATION AND TRYING NOT TO MAKE THE SITUATION WORSE...AND
SINCE HE KNOWS IN HIS HEART HE'S DONE HIS BEST FRIEND WRONG
... GETS UP AND LEAVES
                                                            

20.

                       ANDRE'
How could you sleep with my best
friend....and think I wouldn't
find out.....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'S FIANCEE
I don't see what you're so upset
about. I only did it one time. Get
over it.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yeah...only one time that you will
admit to....who knows how long you
two have been at it.....now you're
out having dinner with this
motherfucker....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'S FIANCEE
Don't make such a big deal about
it.....we can put that behind
us....you should just drop
it......I don't want to talk about
that shit here baby.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
You're right....there's nothing
else to say.....you're just a
slut.....it's over.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'S FIANCEE
Yeah.....well, you know what...
you're right.....it has been more
than one time....you were always
working....want me to say I'm
sorry....okay I'm sorry....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
This time sorry anit gonna get
it....I'm through with your
mess....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'S FIANCEE
Oh well.....what can I say....and
for your information....I'm
keeping the ring....bye Andre'
                                                            
SHE PICKS UP HER DRINK AND DRINKS IT.....SHE REACHES FOR
JOHN'S DRINK AND GULPS IT DOWN TOO....SHE STANDS UP AND
PICKS UP THE WATER GLASS AND POURS IT OVER ANDRE'S HEAD....
                                                            

21.

                       ANDRE'S FIANCEE
Like I said....get over it
punk.....and by the way....don't
forget to pay for the bill.....
                                                            
SHE WALKS QUICKLY OUT OF THE RESTAURANT NOT LOOKING BACK.
                                                            
 
INT. KIM AND ILENE'S TABLE - NIGHT
                                                            
BOTH LOOKING AT THE SCENE ACROSS FROM THEM......
                                                            
                       ILENE
Girl....this place is popping with
drama tonight!
                                                            
                       KIM
Maybe we should leave....you know
how I am about "drama".
                                                            
                       ILENE
Girl....now that all the drama is
over with.....we can get a drink.
                                                            
                       KIM
I'm ready to go....next thing you
know.... they'll be shooting up
the place.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Girl....be cool.....just a three
way love triangle with drama
....if you know what I mean.
                                                            
                       KIM
They could of done that somewhere
else.
                                                            
ILENE AND KIM ARE LOOKING BEWILDERED AT EACH OTHER AS ANDRE'
GETS UP AND GOES TO THE MEN'S ROOM TO DRY HIMSELF OFF.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Whats it been....10 years since we
last hung out together?
                                                            
                       KIM
I can't believe it's been that
long.....but remember....you left
first because you were so in love
with Raymond.
                                                            

22.

                       ILENE
Well I was and he asked me to
marry him......
                                                            
                       KIM
Hazel and I were so crushed when
we found out you had gotten
married....and you didn't even
invite us.
                                                            
                       ILENE
True enough....but you know how
Raymond was....he was so impatient
and I went along with whatever he
wanted to make him happy.....I
believe that's why the marriage
failed.
                                                            
                       KIM
I'm so sorry to hear that....but
you did get your degree in
Business Finance Management and
came back home.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah I know....just like you went
on to Med School....
                                                            
                       KIM
Looks like we both did what we had
to do....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Soon as Hottie gets over
here....we'll toast ourselves for
finding success in the business
and medical worlds
                                                            
                       KIM
So how has Hottie been
doing.....you know.....after her
mother died?
                                                            
                       ILENE
She doesn't talk about it
much....so I don't ask her about
it.
                                                            
                       KIM
I mean.....she gets raped by her
step-father, he goes to
prison....we both leave town and
then her mother dies.
                                                            

23.

                       ILENE
You know Hottie......she doesn't
talk much about her past
life.....because she's got too
many dreams for the present.
                                                            
                       KIM
Like what?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Just like I told you in the
car.... wanting to be a movie
star...a club owner....a business
woman....own several fashion
boutique's.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Ok....I get the picture.....
                                                            
 
INT. TYREE STONE IS SITTING AT THE BAR - NIGHT
                                                            
TYREE CAN'T BELIEVE WHAT HE'S JUST SEEN HAPPEN WITH ANDRE
AND HIS FIANCEE. AS HE GLANCES AROUND THE RESTAURANT, HE
NOTICES KIM AND ILENE SITTING AT THE TABLE. HE ASKS THE
BARTENDER IF HE HAS SEEN THEM BEFORE TONIGHT. TYREE SENDS
THE WAITER OVER TO ILENE AND KIM'S TABLE TO INFORM THEM,
THEIR DINNER AND DRINKS IS ON HIM TONIGHT.
                                                            
                       BARTENDER
What will you have tonight Mr.
Stone?....the usual?
                                                            
                       TYREE
Can you believe that.....people
need to take care of that type of
business in private.
                                                            
                       BARTENDER
Yeah....but she's been coming here
with his friend for a while now.
                                                            
                       TYREE
So....I guess my man was the last
to know his fiancee.
                                                            
                       BARTENDER
You would be surprised what I see
in this place......
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah....after what I just
saw.....make it a double.
                                                            

24.

Tyree is staring at the table where Ilene and Kim are
seated.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Before you do....you see those two
ladies sitting at the table to the
right.
                                                            
                       BARTENDER
Yes...
                                                            
                       TYREE
Have you ever seen them here
before?
                                                            
                       BARTENDER
No...can't say I have....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Hmmmmm.....that one to the right
looks familiar....I've seen her
somewhere before....just thought
you might have seen her in here
before.
                                                            
                       BARTENDER
All I can say....is that neither
one of them are regulars
here....be right back with your
drink.
                                                            
Tyree is looking at a waiter about to take drinks to a
table.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Excuse me....
                                                            
                       WAITER
Yes sir....
                                                            
                       TYREE
See those two women sitting at
that table to your right....
                                                            
Tyree is pointing to the table where Ilene and Kim are
sitting.
                                                            
                       WAITER
Yes, I see them.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
I would like you to tell them that
their drinks and dinner is on me
tonight....Tyree Stone....I will
            (MORE)

25.

                       TYREE (cont'd)
take care of the tab with the
bartender....
                                                            
                       WAITER
Yes sir... Mr Tyree
Stone....consider it done.
                                                            
The waiter turns and walks away to deliver his drink order
and inform Ilene and Kim of Tyree's offer of dinner and
drinks on him tonight.
                                                            
                       WAITER
Good evening ladies, I've been
sent to inform you that Mr. Tyree
Stone is picking up your dinner
tab tonight
                                                            
                       KIM
And just who is Mr. Tyree Stone?
Ilene do you know a Tyree Stone?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hell no...who cares girl.....as
long as it's free....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Mr. Stone, is the gentleman at the
bar.
                                                            
THE WAITER POINTS TO TYREE WHO IS STANDING AT THE BAR.KIM
LOOKS TOWARD THE BAR AND SEES TYREE LOOKING AT HER, THEIR
EYES LOCK ONTO EACH OTHER IN A HYPNOTIC TRANCE THAT NEITHER
CAN BREAK AWAY FROM....ILENE IS WAVING HER HAND IN FRONT OF
KIM'S FACE.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Earth to Kim....are you still with
us....
                                                            
                       KIM
Girl...he's cute....
                                                            
THE WAITER IS ASKING KIM AND ILENE WHAT THEY'RE DRINKING.
                                                            
                       WAITER
May I take your drink order?
                                                            
                       ILENE
I'll have a dry Martini Russian,
dry with a lime twist....
                                                            

26.

                       KIM
Ummm.....let me have... a Boston
Spritzer
                                                            
                       KIM
Should we order Hottie a drink
too?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Who cares....she ain't here....she
can buy her own drink.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Maybe you're right......she isn't
here.....
                                                            
TYREE RECEIVES A PHONE CALL, WHICH INTERRUPTS HIS TRANCE
LIKE STATE.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Hello.....yes...... I'm leaving
right now.....
                                                            
TYREE TURNS TO THE BARTENDER
                                                            
                       TYREE
Did you get their drink order?
                                                            
                       WAITER
Yes....I did. Is there anything
else I can do for you Mr. Stone?
                                                            
                       TYREE
What ever those two ladies are
drinking and eating tonight
....put it on my tab....I've got
an emergency situation that needs
my attention......
                                                            
                       WAITER
I hope it isn't serious Mr
Stone...
                                                            
                       TYREE
Just police business.....good
night
                                                            
                       WAITER
Good night Mr Stone.
                                                            
TYREE WALKS QUICKLY OUT OF THE BAR AREA, TOWARD THE EXIT,
NOT LOOKING BACK.
                                                            
 

27.

INT. ANDRE'LEAVES THE MENS ROOM - NIGHT
                                                            
Andre' has just left the mens room, he walks toward the bar,
he could use a drink right now after his fight with his
fiancee'. Andre' doesn't know it but his night is about to
become even more interesting. Hottie makes her entrance but
not quite the way she had planned it.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Give me a Rum and Coke
                                                            
                       BARTENDER
Ok....rum and coke it is.....
                                                            
After receiving his drink.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Man.... I need this right now.....
after the night I'm having....what
else could possibly go wrong.....
                                                            
Andre' pays for his drink, he steps slightly away from the
bar, checking out the bar scene, he turns around and bumps
into Hottie. He spills his drink on her and him. Hottie is
upset.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Damn......
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Damn is right....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
I'm sorry ....I didn't mean to say
that.....this has really been a
bad night for me...look....here's
my card....let me buy you a new
dress.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Your card.....how do I know this
is you and how do I know you can
afford to buy me a new dress....
                                                            
HOTTIE LOOKS AT THE CARD, WHILE ANDRE' TAKES OUT HIS LICENSE
AND SHOWS IT TO HER...
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Are you......The Andre' Levine
                                                            
Hottie looks at his drivers license.
                                                            

28.

                       HOTTIE
.....the producer?
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yes....my number is on the
card.....call me and I will
personally take you shopping....
                                                            
HOTTIE APOLOGIZES, SHE LIKES WHAT HE SEES, BECOMES VERY
FLIRTATIOUS.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
It was just as much my fault as it
was yours....My name is Hazel
Beech..... why don't you join me
and my girlfriends at our
table....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Thank you for the invitation,
Hazel, but I really have to
go....now you make sure you call
me.....you and your friends have a
nice night.....maybe next time I
can meet them.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Ok... will tomorrow be too soon?
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
No, tomorrow will be just
fine...good night Ms.Beech
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Good night
                                                            
ANDRE' TURNS AND WALKS AWAY, HOTTIE STARRING AT ANDRE' AS HE
WALKS AWAY...... T
                                                            
 
INT. KIM AND ILENE WAITING IMPATIENTLY AT THE TABLE - NIGHT
                                                            
KIM AND ILENE ARE WAITING IMPATIENTLY AT THE TABLE FOR
HOTTIE TO MAKE HER "APPEARANCE", THEY NOTICE HER COMING TO
THE TABLE AND BUMPING INTO ANDRE' AT THE BAR. THEY NOTICE
ANDRE' GIVING HOTIE A CARD AND HOW THEY LOOKED AT EACH
OTHER. HOTTIE FINALLY GOES OVER TO THE TABLE AND SITS DOWN
AND THEY BEGIN TO TALK.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Kim....look at Hottie....she ain't
nothing but a man magnet....
                                                            

29.

HOTTIE REACHES THE TABLE
                                                            
                       KIM
Girl...we seen how you two were
looking at each other
                                                            
                       ILENE
You tell us to sit down and you're
out there picking up on another
man.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Girl....do you know who that was?
That was Andre' Levine....the
producer....
                                                            
                       KIM
And.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
You all don't know shit bout the
business....he's a big time music
producer.....and he's taking me
shopping tomorrow.....
                                                            
                       ILENE
And you just met him.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Well.....what can I tell
ya....when you're hot...you're
hot.....and Ilene....you're
not.....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Well big time producer or not, he
must of been a little too hot when
that woman he caught with his
friend poured a glass of water on
his head.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Kim, what is this ho talking
about?
                                                            
                       KIM
If you would have stayed with us
when we were seated you could have
seen it for yourself.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
There you two go hatein' again.
                                                            

30.

                       ILENE
Girl....shut up and sit
down...you're right, we just
lying.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I knew it...ok.....lets order....
                                                            
                       KIM
We already ordered our drinks.
                                                            
THE WAITER BRINGS KIM AND ILENE THEIR DRINKS, ASKS HOTTIE
WOULD SHE LIKE TO ORDER HER DRINK NOW.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
You heifer's didn't order me
one.....
                                                            
looking at the waiter
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'll have a White Russian with a
lime twist.
                                                            
THE WAITER TAKES HER ORDER AND WALKS AWAY
                                                            
                       ILENE
I don't know what Kim's got going
on, but some guy she's never met
is picking up our tab
tonight...guess you're not the
only one that's hot tonight....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Well....if that's the case....I'm
ordering me some lobster and
steak.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Hottie.....you weren't at the
table when he offered to pay our
tab...it was just Ilene and
I....and you were still "primping"
and had to make an "entrance"....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
So what are you saying....I don't
get no lobster and steak?
                                                            
                       ILENE
If you paying for it....or you can
call up your producer friend and
get him to pay for your tab
                                                            

31.

                       KIM
Ilene...have the waiter come over
and take our order
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
So...you all goin to cut me off
like that...you're not right
                                                            
                       KIM
Hottie you haven't changed a bit.
So where are you working these
days.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Work, ... these days....Now I
Knew you where cursing me when you
said Work!....but these days... I
don't know what you mean by that.
That must be doctor talk. And
don't worry when it comes to
money. I gets mine.
                                                            
ILENE GESTURES FOR THE WAITER TO COME AND TAKE THEIR FOOD
ORDER...WHILE THE WAITER BRINGS HOTTIE HER DRINK)
                                                            
 
EXT. TYREE ARRIVES AT THE ADDRESS - NIGHT
                                                            
TYREE ARRIVES AT THE ADDRESS GIVEN TO HIM BY HIS FORMER
DETECTIVE PARTNER. TYREE IS STILL THINKING ABOUT LEAVING THE
RESTAURANT BEFORE INTRODUCING HIMSELF TO KIM. HE HOPES THIS
ISN'T ANOTHER FALSE LEAD BECAUSE HE NEEDS TO SOLVE THIS CASE
AND FIND HIS CLIENT'S DAUGHTER. HE WALKS UP TO THE CRIME
SCENE AND SEES HIS FORMER PARTNER TALKING TO A PATROLMAN.
                                                            
With authority the detective speaks.
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Make sure that the crime scene is
properly taped off.....
                                                            
The detective almost shouting, seemingly agitated.
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
I don't want anybody... messing
with the scene.... before the
crime lab personnel get
here.....got that
                                                            
The policeman speaking in a some what reluctant voice.
                                                            

32.

                       POLICEMAN
Yes detective.....I'll make sure
the scene is properly roped off
                                                            
The policeman starts to walk away, but turns around to say
something to the detective.
                                                            
                       POLICEMAN
Do you want me to let you know
when the crime lab gets here?
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Yeah......let me know the moment
they get here.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
I see you got your hands full....
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Yeah....you know how it is.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah...I know......so what's the
MO
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
The same.....thought you could use
the info.....that's why I called
                                                            
                       TYREE
Thanks.....but your timing leaves
a lot to be desired....
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Oh....
                                                            
                       TYREE
I was just about to introduce
myself to a fine young lady and
then .....you call
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Well....next time I'll make a
reservation.....remember....you
called me for the help
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah....I know....so what have you
got
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Basically....the same MO.......
                                                            

33.

                       TYREE
Another missing female.....nobody
seen her in over a couple of weeks
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Yeah.....hoping this time it's not
a dead end.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
I know.....almost ....like they
disappear without a trace....like
they never were here....
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Her brother called in......said
his sister was missing
                                                            
                       TYREE
How long had it been.....when was
the last time he heard from his
sister?
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Little over 2 weeks, she was
suppose to call him after she
returned from a date....she never
did. He's down to the station
now.... talking to the artist,
think he's got some pictures too
                                                            
                       TYREE
Okay....
                                                            
The policeman comes rushing up excitedly.
                                                            
                       POLICEMAN
Excuse me....the crime labs
here....
                                                            
The detective answers seemingly uninterested.
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Okay....thanks
                                                            
Tyree starts to walk toward the apartment building, the
crime lab personnel have arrived on scene and his former
partner is talking to a policeman. Tyree doesn't see
anything he can gain here....so he wants to talk to the
missing girls brother.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Okay...to call her brother....
DETECTIVE:
                                                            

34.

                       DETECTIVE
Okay with me.....he can talk to
anybody he chooses....anin't that
right.....Ty
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah, that's right.....
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Well.....I've got to go do my
police thing....you know the
routine....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah.....I know....that's why I
retired....remember?
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
I thought.....you retired cause of
your old man dying....
                                                            
Looking at Tyree, the detective realizes he shouldn't of
mentioned Tyree's father's death.
                                                            
                       TYREE
That was part of it......
                                                            
Tyree speaking softly, almost sadly
                                                            
Tyree starts to walk away, he didn't want to remember his
father at this time, he was too emotional about losing his
father just before he retired from the force...
                                                            
                       TYREE
Listen....if the lab boys find
anything.....you'll let me know
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Sure Ty.....you know I can't let
my former boss and partner
down....go on home
                                                            
The detective realizes that his former boss and partner of
10 years is still not over his father's death.
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
I'll give you a call when I get
something.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Take care.....
                                                            

35.

                       DETECTIVE
You too.....
                                                            
TYREE WALKS BACK TO HIS CAR, HE GLANCES OVER HIS SHOULDER TO
SEE HIS FORMER PARTNER WALKING UP TO THE APARTMENT BUILDING,
TYREE GETS IN HIS CAR AND DRIVES OFF SLOWLY
                                                            
 
INT. KIM RUNS INTO TYREE - DAY
                                                            
KIM IS ON HER LUNCH BREAK AT A COFFEE SHOP NEAR THE
HOSPITAL, SHE IS EATING LUNCH AND READING A BOOK WHEN TYREE
WALKS OVER TO HER TABLE AND INTRODUCES HIMSELF. THEY TALK
FOR A WHILE BEFORE HE GETS ANOTHER CALL ON HIS CELL PHONE
AND HAS TO LEAVE.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Hello....excuse me for
interrupting....
                                                            
                       KIM
Uh....hello
                                                            
                       TYREE
I saw you sitting here and thought
I would come over and introduce
myself.....my name is..
                                                            
Kim interrupts Tyree before he can get his name out.
                                                            
                       KIM
Mr. Tyree Stone.....
                                                            
Tyree looking surprised
                                                            
                       TYREE
How.. did you..
                                                            
Again Kim interrupts before he finishes his question.
                                                            
                       KIM
The waiter.....its not everyday
someone pays for your dinner and
drinks.....then leaves without
introducing themselves.
                                                            
                       TYREE
The waiter...
                                                            
                       KIM
Would you like to sit down?
                                                            

36.

                       TYREE
Yes.....thank you.
                                                            
                       TYREE
You seem to have me at a
disadvantage here, you know
my.....but I don't know yours.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Do you always pay for the meal and
drinks of women you don't
know?.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
No....I don't make a habit of
it....Well actually let me be
honest with you. I found you to
be rather attractive and I was
interested in meeting you...
                                                            
                       KIM
My name is Kimberly Hayes.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Okay....Kimberly Hayes....a
pleasure to meet you
                                                            
                       KIM
So what brings you here.....Mr.
Stone?
                                                            
                       TYREE
Just stopped in for a coffee....on
my way to my office....
                                                            
                       TYREE
So what brings you here.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Lunch.....and it's Ms....
                                                            
                       TYREE
I didn't.... ask you
                                                            
                       KIM
I know....but you wanted to. Am I
right?
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yes ....you're right....I did want
to know......Do you come here
often....I mean for lunch?
                                                            

37.

                       KIM
Sometimes....the food's good and
its not far from where I work...
                                                            
                       TYREE
Oh...I see...and if you don't mind
me asking.....what type of
work....do you do?
                                                            
                       KIM
I could ask you the same
thing...what type of work do you
do and do you come here often?
                                                            
                       TYREE
Sorry....didn't mean to get
personal....but....to answer your
questions... I do come here quite
often....and for the same reasons
                                                            
                       KIM
You didn't answer my other
question......
                                                            
                       TYREE
You're right.....I own a business
not to far from here...
                                                            
                       KIM
Well Mr. Stone.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Call me Tyree....its not like
we're .. complete strangers...
                                                            
                       KIM
I guess you're right....after
all.....you did buy my friend and
I dinner and drinks last night....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yes.....I hope you had a good
time....sorry I wasn't able to
stay and introduce myself...but I
had an emergency I had to take
care of....
                                                            
                       KIM
That's okay.....we did have a good
time....and thank you very
much....from both of us....
                                                            

38.

                       TYREE
My pleasure....
                                                            
                       KIM
I'm a doctor of Internal Medicine
at Memorial General....
                                                            
                       TYREE
You don't say....
                                                            
                       KIM
Most people think I look too young
to be a doctor....
                                                            
                       TYREE
I think you look too good to be a
doctor
                                                            
                       KIM
Why thank you.....are you saying
that to be honest....or are you
trying to melt my butter....
                                                            
Tyree is A little embarrassed by Kim's remark.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Nooooo......I mean yes....I was
being ...honest with you....
                                                            
                       KIM
I will accept that as a
compliment....thank you...
                                                            
                       TYREE
Maybe....we can get together for
dinner sometime.....I mean....if
you aren't seeing somebody.
                                                            
                       KIM
Oh.....I guess that could be
arranged....after all....you did
buy me dinner and drinks....
                                                            
                       KIM
I owe you for dinner and drinks
so...I think it should be me
taking you out to dinner....don't
you think?
                                                            
                       TYREE
Well......I'm old school....and I
believe... a man should take the
woman out to dinner, you
know....open the door for
            (MORE)

39.

                       TYREE (cont'd)
her...protect her.....you know...
                                                            
Kim speaks teasingly
                                                            
                       KIM
I see....old school man...then
maybe this will work.....I cook
dinner for you at my place.
                                                            
                       TYREE
That sounds good.....haven't had a
home cooked meal in years.
                                                            
Kim is Smiling as she speaks.
                                                            
                       KIM
okay its set.....would Saturday be
okay?
                                                            
                       TYREE
Say about seven....
                                                            
                       KIM
Seven would be fine.....
                                                            
ALL OF A SUDDEN, TYREE'S CELL PHONE RINGS....HE ANSWERS IT
                                                            
                       TYREE
Excuse me, I need to take this
call....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Hello....yes.....I'm just around
the corner at Joe's....okay, I'll
be right there
                                                            
looking concerned and distracted
                                                            
                       KIM
I hope nothings wrong......
                                                            
                       TYREE
No...just a business call....but I
need to go....can I call you
later?
                                                            
                       KIM
Yes...here's my card....my private
number is on back.
                                                            
Kim hands Tyree a card.
                                                            

40.

                       KIM
I'm usually in bed by eleven
o'clock when I'm on rotation....
                                                            
Tyree takes Kim's card
                                                            
                       TYREE
Okay....I will make sure I call
you before eight...is that okay?
                                                            
                       KIM
Yes...that will be fine.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Sounds fine.....you have a nice
day
                                                            
                       KIM
You too....
                                                            
TYREE MAKES HIS WAY TO THE EXIT, KIM IS WATCHING HIM AS HE
LEAVES....
                                                            
 
EXT. TYREE ARRIVES AT THE SCENE - DAY
                                                            
TYREE ARRIVES AT THE SCENE OF ANOTHER ON GOING
INVESTIGATION...HE'S SEEN IT BEFORE.... MANY TIMES DURING
HIS DAYS AS A COP. HE IS RECOGNIZED BY HIS FORMER PARTNER ON
THE POLICE FORCE.....
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Back again....
                                                            
The detective is Writing down some notes on his pad as he
looks at Tyree.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah.. you know the drill....So
what have we got this time?
                                                            
Tyree looks at his former partner of 10 years, he's the one
who called him on his cell phone at the coffee shop.
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Same MO....another young woman
missing.. No motive or clues so
far....the crime lab's working he
scene right now....you know the
routine.....
                                                            

41.

Several police personnel are moving about the scene and a
crowd of onlookers is gathering, hoping to see a body or
something.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah....I know....by the book...
                                                            
Tyree sighs.
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
You okay, Ty?.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah.....I'm okay....this case has
me....you know how it is when I'm
on a case.....
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Yeah....I know
                                                            
nodding his head
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
Yeah.....just like when we were,
working cases together....hey
Ty....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah....just like the not so good
"old days"......
                                                            
Tyree and the detective are interrupted by a crime lab
personnel walking through them and talking at the same time.
                                                            
                       CRIME LAB TECH
Think we might have
something......one of the boys
lifted a print off the bed.....and
we found an address scratched on
the bathroom wall.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Wish I could take a look......any
chance?
                                                            
Sounding hopeful, not wanting to get his former partner into
any trouble
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
You know the department's
policy...
                                                            
The detective gives Tyree a stern, but friendly look
                                                            

42.

                       TYREE
Yeah...I know....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Well....let me know if anything
pans out...see if you can get me a
copy of the address....
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
I'll do what I can....hope we can
solve this case....soon
                                                            
                       TYREE
Soon would be too long...I need
answers now...before we lose
another one....
                                                            
Sounding more like he use to, when he was working on the
force
                                                            
                       DETECTIVE
I'll give you a call....give you
what I can....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Thanks.....
                                                            
Tyree shakes the detectives hand and walks back to his car,
he's hopeful that the new clues might help him break this
case, he's also thinking about Kim and their upcoming date.
                                                            
 
INT. HOTTIE CALLS ANDRE' AT THE STUDIO - DAY
                                                            
ANDRE' IS IN THE STUDIO WORKING ON SOME TRACKS FOR A MAJOR
FILM PROJECT WHEN HOTTIE CALLS.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'S SECRETARY
Andre' Levin Productions, how may
I direct your call?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Is Andre' Levin in?
                                                            
                       ANDRE'S SECRETARY
Mr. Levin is not in his
office....may I take a message?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
My name is Hazel Beech......and I
have an appointment with Mr. Levin
this afternoon.....
                                                            

43.

                       ANDRE'S SECRETARY
Yes....Ms. Beech.....I see he has
you on his schedule.....if you
will hold, I will contact him.
                                                            
Andre's secretary rings Andre's phone in the studio.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Hello
                                                            
                       ANDRE'S SECRETARY
Mr. Levin, I have a Ms. Hazel
Beech on line one....are you
available to take the call?
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yes Renee....I'll take the
call....put her through. Thank you
Renee....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'S SECRETARY
Connecting her now Mr Levin.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Hello, Hazel...
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Hello Andre'.....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
How are you doing today?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'm okay....hope I didn't catch
you at a bad time
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
No.....you didn't catch me at a
bad time.....I was just listening
to some tracks.....and waiting for
your call
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
You were!!
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
You sound surprised.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Well.....I am....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Don't be....
                                                            

44.

                       HOTTIE
Okay....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
So....are you ready to do some
shopping....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes......I am....if you are...
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yes....I am.....looking forward to
finding you another dress....as
long as it's not too expensive...
                                                            
Hottie is smiling as she speaks.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Oh....think I can come up with
something....that won't break your
bank....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
You know how you women are
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Does this mean we can go
anywhere.....I want to go?
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yes.....we can go anywhere you
want to go....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
So....when did you want to pick me
up?
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
How about....in an hour....that
will give me time to finish up
here and get to your place.
                                                            
Andre' is looking at the studio clock.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Sounds good to me.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Okay Hazel.....see you in an
hour....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Okay....see you then....
                                                            

45.

                       ANDRE'
Take care.....
                                                            
 
INT. ILENE IS AT WORK AT THE BANK - DAY
                                                            
Ilene's cell phone rings and she reaches into her purse to
get it, she reads the caller ID, it's Hottie, Ilene answer's
her phone.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hello this is the National Bank of
Trust & Loan. if we don't trust
you, you gets no loan...
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Girl quit playing. He's on his
way to pick me up.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Who?..
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
You know who. Andre'
                                                            
                       ILENE
Oh you guy's are on a first name
basis already.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Bitch ... I don't know why I
called you.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Cause I'm your girl. So where is
he taking you?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I don't know but he said I can go
anywhere I like.
                                                            
                       ILENE
I know where you shop and I also
know your taste...hope you're not
going to dig too deep into his
pockets.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Don't even go there.
                                                            

46.

                       HOTTIE
Girl you are no help....I better
finish getting ready before he
gets here.
                                                            
                       ILENE
What!..... You're gonna be on
time, dressed and ready. The
world must be coming to an end.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
What ever....I'll call you later
when I get back.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ok
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Bye..
                                                            
                       ILENE
Bye
                                                            
 
EXT. HOTTIE AND ANDRE' WALKING TOWARD THE PARKIG LOT - NIGHT
                                                            
HOTTIE AND ANDRE' ARE WALKING TOWARD ANDRE'S CAR....after
shopping most of the afternoon. Hottie is excited about the
new dresses Andre' purchased for her...Andre' notices a
beautiful woman walking past them in the parking lot,they
both exchange glances at each other, Andre' hopes Hazel
didn't see it. Andre' asks Hottie if she's hungry..
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Thank you so much for the lovely
dresses Andre'.....you didn't have
to buy me 2 dresses though
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Hey....it was my pleasure....not
everyday I get to go shopping with
such a beautiful woman.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Thank you for the compliment.....I
had a real good time with you this
afternoon....
                                                            
As Hottie and Andre' walk toward his car, Andre' checks out
a beautiful female passing them by, the female is also
checking out Andre'....Andre' hopes that Hottie didn't see
the look.
                                                            

47.

                       ANDRE'
Same here....so....you hungry?
                                                            
Seemingly distracted in thought.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes....I could stand a bite to eat
                                                            
Trying not to make it apparent that see saw Andre' checking
out another woman.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
I know a nice place we can
go....has good food and a
wonderful atmosphere....
                                                            
Regaining his composure....sure that Hottie didn't notice
his playboy behavior.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Sounds good to me but can we stop
by my place so I can change
clothes.....
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Sure....no problem....your place
isn't far from the restaurant.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Thank you Andre'.....
                                                            
Trying not to sound disappointed but realizing that Andre'
wasn't her man...yet....but she would need to be careful
with her emotions for Andre'.
                                                            
 
INT. KIM IS PREPARING A HOME COOKE DINNER FOR TYREE. - NIGHT
                                                            
kIM IS PREPARING DINNER FOR TYREE WHEN SHE IS UNEXPECTEDLY
INTERRUPTED BY HOTTIE WHO STOPS BY.
                                                            
HOTTIE KNOCKS ON KIM'S DOOR
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Hello.....Kim....are you here?
                                                            
Kim walks out of the kitchen and opens the door.
                                                            
                       KIM
Hottie....what are you doing
here....I thought you were Ty.
                                                            

48.

                       HOTTIE
Girl ....I just had to stop by and
show you the new dress that Andre'
brought me.....isn't it pretty?
                                                            
Kim looks at Hottie and walks back to the kitchen.
                                                            
                       KIM
Yeah Hottie....it's real
pretty....looks expensive.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
It is....Andre' took me to his
friends boutique....girl I'm going
to knock them out tonight when we
go out.
                                                            
                       KIM
Girl....you better be careful
accepting expensive gifts from
these men.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
You know me.....can I help it if
men find me irresistible.....
                                                            
The doorbell rings.
                                                            
                       KIM
That must be Ty.....girlfriend you
gotta go....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
So you're cooking for Ty....oh now
I see why you want me to
go........
                                                            
                       KIM
Yes.....I invited Ty over for a
home cooked meal and to watch a
movie....
                                                            
Kim opens the door and Tyree is standing there with flowers
and a bottle of wine.
                                                            
                       KIM
Hello Ty....won't you come in.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Hi Kim....I brought you these....
                                                            
Tyree hands Kim the flowers and the wine.
                                                            

49.

                       KIM
Thank you Tyree....the flowers are
beautiful.....I will put the
flowers in water and chill the
wine.....
                                                            
Kim motions Tyree to the sofa and walks to the kitchen.
                                                            
                       KIM
Make yourself comfortable....
dinner will be ready soon
                                                            
Hottie comes out of the bathroom and meets Kim in the
kitchen.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Hey Kim....is it okay if I wait
for Andre' here....it shouldn't be
long....ooooh what nice looking
flowers.
                                                            
                       KIM
Kim....I hope it isn't long....I
need to finish my meal.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
He said he should be right
up....he was in the parking lot
when he called me.
                                                            
The door bell rings. Hottie walks quickly toward the door
passing Tyree in the living room.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Hi Andre'....come on in.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Hi Hazel....you look marvelous in
that dress.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Thank you Andre'.....I want you to
meet Kim's friend....Tyree Stoner
                                                            
Andre' reaches his hand out to shake Tyree's hand.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Nice to meet you Tyree
Stoner...I'm Andre' Levin
                                                            
                       TYREE
Pleased to meet you Andre'...call
me Ty.
                                                            

50.

Hottie is going to the kitchen to tell Kim she is leaving
for her date.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Kim....Andre's here so I'm going
now.
                                                            
                       KIM
Aren't you going to introduce me
to Andre'....after all I am one of
your best friends.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Sure girlfriend....come on...I'll
introduce you now.
                                                            
Andre' and Tyree are sitting in the living room, neither man
is saying much.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Andre' I want you to meet one of
my best friends....Kimberly
Hayes....we just call her Kim
                                                            
                       KIM
Nice to meet you Andre'....I've
heard so much about you....
                                                            
Andre' is looking at his watch.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Nice to meet you Kim....we need to
go or we will be late....Hazel
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Okay....you know how I am about
time
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yeah....I know how you are about
time.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Nice meeting you Ty...
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yeah...nice meeting you....
                                                            
Andre' and Hottie walk out the door. Kim is standing in the
doorway.
                                                            

51.

                       KIM
Take care girlfriend....call me
tomorrow.
                                                            
                       KIM
Are you okay Ty? Sorry for the
interruption....dinner is ready.
                                                            
                       TYREE
I'm okay....was getting
uncomfortable sitting there with
Andre'....the guy didn't say much.
                                                            
                       KIM
Maybe he just needs to know you
before he talks...
                                                            
Tyree is pulling Kim's chair out for her and is walking to
his chair.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yeah maybe so....but there's
something about that guy I don't
like....
                                                            
                       KIM
Lets eat before dinner gets
cold.....
                                                            
Kim and Tyree finish dinner and a movie when Tyree decides
it's time to go home.
                                                            
                       TYREE
Hey sweetheart...its been a
wonderful night but I've got to
get going....busy day tomorrow...
                                                            
                       KIM
Are you sure you don't want to
stay?.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Would love to baby....but I have a
long day ahead of me....
                                                            
Tyree reaches over and kisses Kim, then walks out the door
toward his car.
                                                            
                       MR BEECH
Detective Stoner....
                                                            
Tyree looks around and sees a shadowy figure coming toward
him, he reaches for his gun and the figure calls his name.
                                                            

52.

                       MR BEECH
Don't worry...detective
Stoner...I'm not here to harm or
rob you...
                                                            
                       TYREE
How do you know my name and what
do you want?
                                                            
                       MR BEECH
My name is Mr. Beech....I went to
prison for a crime I didn't
do....your father was trying to
help me clear my name before he
died.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
So why are you talking to me?
                                                            
                       MR BEECH
I thought you might be able to
continue helping me to prove my
case.
                                                            
As Mr. Beech moved into the light, Tyree could see he was
wearing a ministers collar.
                                                            
                       TYREE
But how would you know I was
here....unless you were following
me.....
                                                            
                       MR BEECH
I won't say that I have or
haven't....you must help me...your
father was just about to prove me
innocent before he died....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Ok....take it easy....I can't
promise you anything but I'll see
what I can do....
                                                            
                       MR BEECH
God bless you Detective
Stoner.....the truth shall set me
free...I know it..
                                                            
 
EXT. OUTSIDE DAN JOHNSTON'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
DAN JOHNSTON'S HOUSE, HE OWNS A LARGE PRODUCTION COMPANY,
ANDRE' PULLS INTO THE DRIVEWAY, TO A GATE WITH IVY COVERING

53.

THE SIDE WALLS, ANDRE' REALIZES THAT HE WAS SUPPOSE TO BE
HERE AT 9 PM, BUT HE LOST TRACK OF TIME IN THE RESTAURANT,
HE'S HOPING MR. JOHNSTON IS STILL AVAILABLE TO SEE HIM AND
HOTTIE,HE PRESSES THE INTERCOM BUTTON AND A VOICE ANSWERS.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
It's after 10 pm....I hope were
not to late
                                                            
anxiously
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I do too...
                                                            
                       INTERCOM VOICE
Yes......may I help you?
                                                            
voice with no emotion
                                                            
Andre' lowers his window to answer the voice, Hottie is
holding onto his arm.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yes, I'm here to see Mr. Johnston,
this is Andre' Levin....he is
expecting me.....
                                                            
There is a pause, then the voice speaks
                                                            
                       INTERCOM VOICE
Yes....Mr. Levin....he was
expecting you around 9 pm
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yes....I'm apologize for being
late, I lost track of the
time.....and
                                                            
sounding apologetic
                                                            
Before Andre' can complete his sentence, the voice over the
intercom interrupts him
                                                            
                       INTERCOM VOICE
.....but he is not here at this
moment....he was called away on
studio business.....and he left
the following message.....you are
to call him tomorrow before 2 pm
to reschedule your
appointment,...... he gives his
apologies for not being able to
see you and your guest
tonight......but he looks forward
            (MORE)

54.

                       INTERCOM VOICE (cont'd)
to seeing you again
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
I see.......
                                                            
thinking
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Wow.....what a nice house.....is
this where your friend lives? Was
this my surprise......
                                                            
looking in amazement, talking rapidly
                                                            
                       INTERCOM VOICE
Mr. Levin....are you still there?
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yes.....Okay....tell Dan that I
will call him tomorrow before 2
pm...
                                                            
                       INTERCOM VOICE
I will Mr. Levin.....good-night...
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yeah........good night
                                                            
Sounding disappointed
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
It's okay....I know you wanted to
surprise me....
                                                            
Andre' is driving the car around the semi circle, he is
taking Hottie home. He trying to hide his disappointment
with missing his appointment with Mr. Johnston, his big
surprise was a bust, Hottie didn't seem to down, she's
asking questions about Mr. Johnston.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Sorry about that.....just wanted
to surprise you.....some surprise
                                                            
sounding sad
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Hey Andre'.....don't say
that....it's okay....
                                                            
warmly, with feeling
                                                            

55.

                       HOTTIE
How do you know Mr. Johnston?.....
He's a really important person in
the business......
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
and just think....you set up an
appointment for me to meet
him.....
                                                            
sounding a little sexy
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Well, I knew Mr. Johnston owned a
big production company.....I
thought that he would be able to
get you in a good movie....you
know.....get you a good part......
with visibility..
                                                            
sounding disappoint
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
No one has ever done that for
me.....they just wanted to use me
                                                            
sounding distant
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
But you're so different....you're
a good man Andre'....I can see
that.....a good man
                                                            
trance like
                                                            
 
EXT. OUTSIDE OF HOTTIE'S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
OUTSIDE OF HOTTIE'S HOUSE, ANDRE' WALKS AROUND TO OPEN THE
CAR DOOR FOR HOTTIE, SHE GETS OUT AND THEY WALK UP TO HER
FRONT DOOR.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
I had a really nice time with you
tonight.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah....me too
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
You are so much fun to be
with......
                                                            

56.

                       ANDRE'
I hope we can do this
again......soon
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Okay.....I would like that....come
here....
                                                            
with a sexy voice, Hottie pulls Anfre' into her arms and
gives him a kiss, she catches him off guard, he wasn't
expecting her to kiss him.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
I.....
                                                            
unexpected kiss
                                                            
Andre' and Hotie kiss for what seems like an eternity,
Andre' pulls back and tells Hottie good night
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
I guess you do...... want to see
me..... again....
                                                            
breathing heavily
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I want to see you......yes I want
to see more of you....
                                                            
breathing heavily
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
If... I can get the meeting
scheduled with Mr. Johnston....
for tomorrow.....would that be
okay with you?
                                                            
asking politely, breathing less heavily
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes.....that would be okay with
me.....
                                                            
still excited
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Well....I better be going.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Do you have to go?.....stay with
me tonight.....
                                                            

57.

They embrace once more...this time it's Andre' who starts
the kiss.
                                                            
 
INT. KIM'S BEDROOM - DAY
                                                            
Kim and Hottie talk the on phone about the new men in their
lives. Hottie suggests they find someone for Ilene, they
decide to take Ilene out and find her a man. Kim and Hottie
call Ilene on 3 way to put their plan in motion.
                                                            
                       KIM
What's up girl....you know I'm
kind of getting back into the
swing of things.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I see .... you got yourself a
detective girl. And he's almost
as cute as my Producer.
                                                            
                       KIM
They do have names you know.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah yeah and hopefully a lot of
money.
                                                            
                       KIM
Is that all you think about?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Well there's at least one more
thing
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Hottie!
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
What? I know you're going to let
Tyree put those hand cuff's on
you...I would.
                                                            
                       KIM
I know you would... just keep your
hands off. I kind of think he
might be Mr. Right.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Oh girl... whatever. You talk to
Ilene today?
                                                            

58.

                       KIM
No not yet. Get her on the three
way. I'll hold.
                                                            
Hottie dials Ilene's number
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hello
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Hey girl....what are you doing?
Reading a bunch of boring papers
your tired ass brought home from
work.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Shit girl I have bills to pay. And
unlike you I have to earn my own
money the old fashion way.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Well if you would loosen up you
might just catch yourself a man.
                                                            
                       ILENE
So what are you trying to say?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'm just saying that you keep
those legs of yours locked as
tight as that vault down at the
bank.
                                                            
                       KIM
Damn it Ilene..... I know you
ain't going to let Hottie get away
with that.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Kim I should have known your ass
was on the line with that wench.
                                                            
                       KIM
I'm sorry I didn't know she was
going to..
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah right. You heifers meet a
couple of men and right away
you're talking shit. You know I've
been there. Married, house, two
cars girl I'm so glad I didn't get
pregnant.
                                                            

59.

                       HOTTIE
Yeah right Ilene... whatever...
Listen to this! Kim said she's
going to let her detective friend
hand cuff her to the bed.
                                                            
                       KIM
Don't believe that fool
Ilene....though it might be fun
come to think of it.
                                                            
                       ILENE
I don't believe you said that shit
Kim. Don't let Hottie get your
ass in trouble.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Trouble! Girl if she don't I'll
tell Andre' to borrow them damn
hand cuff's....better yet we
better buy our own.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Well we see there ain't nothing
tight about your legs hottie.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
So what's up for tonight ...let's
do a little clubin...' you two up
for a little fun?
                                                            
                       KIM
I'm in......how about you Ilene?
It'll be fun... just the three of
us....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah alright...I've have a few
things to take care of...about
nine?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Sounds good to me.
                                                            
                       KIM
Me too....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ok I'll see you two tonight.
Hottie you're driving! So don't
be late!
                                                            

60.

                       HOTTIE
You just follow my lead and you
might get yourself a man.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Shut up! I'll see you tonight.
Bye
                                                            
                       KIM
Goodbye..
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Bye!
                                                            
 
INT. AT THE CLUB - NIGHT
                                                            
The girls are at the club sitting at a table looking around
the club. Ilene gets some unexpected attention from the
bouncer and club owner. Rocket Man sees Omar and they chat.
Hottie sees the director and decides to make her own
appointment. The director tells Rocket Man that they need 2
women to fill their quota for a very important client and to
stay focused. The director chats with Hottie and sets up an
appointment for Hottie and Kim to come by his place for
Hottie's screen test later that night. Hottie and Kim go to
the director's house without telling anybody.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Come on girls, this is our night
to have some fun.....
                                                            
Excitedly
                                                            
                       KIM
I'm with that....what about you
Ilene.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Well....it has been a long time
since I've been out....
                                                            
Looking around the club
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Relax Ilene...things haven't
changed that much since you've
been clubbing.
                                                            
                       ILENE
You know....I feel out of
place.....maybe I should just go
home and look at TV.
                                                            

61.

                       HOTTIE
That's your problem.....you stay
at home too much....just watching
that dumb TV.
                                                            
                       KIM
I agree, you need to get out
more....you know, get some action
at least once in a while....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah girlfriend....when was the
last time you've been with a
man....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Alright....lets not go there...
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
You know, I'm just telling it like
I see it....you know what they
say....
                                                            
                       KIM
What do they say...since you know
so much.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
If ya don't use it....ya gonna
lose it...
                                                            
                       KIM
I know what you mean
girlfriend....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ok...you made your point...it has
been a long time since I've been
with a man...
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Now that's what I'm talking
about...
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Ok girls...lets get busy...lets
start this party off right....we
need some drinks
                                                            
                       KIM
Yeah...lets get this party
started....
                                                            

62.

Hottie is looking around for a hostess.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Now where's the waitress...
                                                            
Kim is looking at Ilene
                                                            
                       KIM
Yeah...looks like she's ready to
party.
                                                            
                       ILENE
You know Hottie....she's always
ready to party...so how are you
and Tyree doing?
                                                            
                       KIM
We're doing very nice...I am glad
I met him, he's so nice.
                                                            
Ilene responds to Kim with sarcasm
                                                            
                       ILENE
And handsome, sexy and good in
bed...uh huh...I got it
                                                            
                       KIM
Ilene!...your minds in the gutter,
we've friends......that's all
                                                            
A hostess comes over to the table, she has a surprise for
Ilene.
                                                            
                       WAITRESS
The gentleman behind the bar wants
to buy you a drink...
                                                            
                       ILENE
For me....but I don't know him.
                                                            
                       HOSTESS
He owns this club.....so what will
you be drinking tonight?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Well I geuss....I'll have a
Martini...very dry....can my
friends order their drinks too?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'll have a martini...sweet, with
a twist
                                                            

63.

                       KIM
And I'll have a Tropical Storm.
                                                            
                       WAITRESS
I'll be right back with your
drinks
                                                            
Hottie is looking at Ilene
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Girl ...don't look now...but I
think somebody's gonna get asked
to dance..
                                                            
                       ERIC
Excuse me ladies...just thought I
would come over to see how things
are going and introduce
myself...my name is Eric...and
what's yours
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
My name is Hazel....Mr. Eric
                                                            
                       ERIC
Johnson....introduce me to your
friends.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
This is my girlfriend, Kim
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
And this is my other
girlfriend....Ilene
                                                            
                       ERIC
Pleasure to meet you Kim
                                                            
                       ERIC
Pleasure to meet you
Ilene....would you like to dance?
                                                            
                       ILENE
No....not right now, maybe later.
                                                            
                       ERIC
Ok, Ilene....I'll come back later
on my break and I will be looking
forward to that dance.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ok...Eric
                                                            

64.

                       HOTTIE
Did you see the way he was looking
at you girl?.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Yeah Ilene...he was looking all
over you girl....
                                                            
                       ILENE
I don't know...he looks a little
young...don't you think?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
It aint about the age of the
wood...but the size of the
timber...ya know
                                                            
                       KIM
You know it....but he looks so
handsome and that body....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Listen to you......I thought you
already had your man..girlfriend
                                                            
                       WAITRESS
Here are your drinks....sorry for
the delay ladies...but we're
really busy tonight.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Well, I better place my order for
the next round now then.....can't
be having a party without my
drink.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ummmm...this is good....haven't
had one of these in a while.
                                                            
                       KIM
You know it...order me another
Tropical Storm....Hottie
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
What about you Ilene?
                                                            
                       ILENE
I don't know if I should have
another.
                                                            

65.

                       HOTTIE
Girl.....you better get yourself
another drink....you got to be
ready for Mr. Eric when he comes
back.
                                                            
                       WAITRESS
I'll be back with your drinks as
soon as I can....enjoy your
drinks.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Ohhh girl....they're playing my
song.
                                                            
                       KIM
You know it girlfriend....that's
my song too..
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'm going to dance....you want to
come with me Kim.....maybe we can
find ourselves some young studs on
the dance floor.
                                                            
                       KIM
Will you be alright Ilene?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah....I'll be alright....you two
go ahead.
                                                            
                       JACK
Hi.....my name is Jackson
Big....what's yours.....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ilene....Ilene Lauren..
                                                            
                       JACK
Do you mind if i sit down?
                                                            
                       ILENE
No I don't mind....please sit
                                                            
                       JACK
I hope you enjoyed your drink?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yes thank you...it was very sweet
of you
                                                            

66.

                       JACK
My pleasure....always looking to
please an attractive woman such as
yourself....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Thank you.....so you own this
club?
                                                            
Hottie and Kim come back to the table as Ilene and Jack are
still talking.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Oh...excuse me....I didn't know
you had company....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Jack....I would like you to meet
my girlfriends....Hazel and Kim
                                                            
                       JACK
Pleasure to meet you....I have to
go and take care of some club
business....if you need
anything....just get a hostess and
its on me as my guess tonight.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Thank you Jack....but you don't
need to do that
                                                            
                       JACK
I know....but i am anyway...
                                                            
As Jack leaves, Eric comes over to see Ilene.
                                                            
                       ERIC
Are you ready for our dance yet?
You told me to come back
later....remember?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yes....I remember.
                                                            
                       ERIC
Do you still want to dance?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yes I do..
                                                            
Ilene gets up to dance with Eric. Kim and Hottie are talking
at the table.
                                                            

67.

                       ERIC
So what brings you out tonight?
                                                            
                       ILENE
My friends thought I needed to get
out...you know, working too
hard.....no social life.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Its been a while since I've
danced...
                                                            
                       ERIC
Same here...haven't danced in a
while myself....spend all my time
working here....you know you are
the first woman I've dance with in
over a year.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Really....I find that hard to
believe
                                                            
                       ERIC
Yeah...its true....with working
extra hours here and going to
college full time....doesn't give
me a lot of free time
                                                            
                       ILENE
I figured you have women all over
you....
                                                            
                       ERIC
Don't let the face and body fool
you....I'm really a very down to
earth guy
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ohhh....well I'm the same
way.....very practical...
                                                            
Ilene and Eric continue their dance..Rocket Man sees Omar
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Hey Omar....wassup?
                                                            
                       OMAR
Wassup Darius....
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Rocket Man....nobody calls me
Darius but you and my mother...
                                                            

68.

                       OMAR
Sorry Rocket Man....so what have
you been up to?....haven't seen
you for years man
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Yeah it has been a long
time....you know me...got a hustle
going always....I'm working right
now
                                                            
                       OMAR
So what kind of work do you do?
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Just say I'm into "public
relations"....you know I don't
talk about my work.....
                                                            
Rocket Man notices Omar looking at some women at a table.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
So....what you peepin at Omar....I
see you checking out them honeys
at the table.....
                                                            
Omar turns toward Rocket Man suddenly.
                                                            
                       OMAR
Yeah....just looking at someone
I've been trying to get with
forever.....but she doesn't see me
that way...
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Damn...thats sad man....but
listen....I've got to get back to
work....so you take care....good
to see you
                                                            
                       OMAR
Yeah Rocket....you take care too
                                                            
Omar watches as Rocket Man disappears into the crowd, he
thinks about asking the object of his affections to dance
but decides against it.
                                                            
Ilene is asking Hottie and Kim.
                                                            
                       ILENE
So where are our drinks?, I could
use one about now.
                                                            

69.

                       ERIC
I don't see a waitress.....I'll
have to go to the bar.....what do
you want?
                                                            
                       KIM
I'll have a Tropical Storm.
                                                            
                       ILENE
I'll have a Martini, dry with a
twist.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'll have a dry Martini with a
twist.
                                                            
                       ERIC
I'll be right back.
                                                            
Hottie sees a director shes heard about and leaves the
table. Kim and Ilene are talking
                                                            
                       KIM
So.... how are you two
doing....you look like your happy.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Really nice....Eric's s real
gentleman....and he's not much
younger than me.....he works a lot
like me and hasn't been out in a
long time too.
                                                            
                       KIM
Looks like he might be "the one".
                                                            
                       ILENE
Lets not get crazy....but I like
him...and I'm going home with him
tonight.
                                                            
                       KIM
Ohhh Ilene.....they gonna call you
a cradle robber....but who
cares....right girlfriend.
                                                            
                       ILENE
You said it....so I won't be
needing a ride home.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Excuse me....aren't you Jack
Smith....the director.
                                                            

70.

                       MR. SMITH
Why yes and you are.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'm Hazel Beech....my friends call
me "Hottie"
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Well.... Hottie....what do I owe
the pleasure of this meeting....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'm an actress and I heard that
you were looking for
actress's.....I read it in the
trade magazine...
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Well Hottie....I am looking for
some new talent....
                                                            
He is checking out Hottie's looks and body.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
and I like what I see....can you
act, what type of experience do
you have?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Thank you....I've been an actress
for the last 5 years doing small
parts...you know how it is.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
So you've been acting for the last
5 years....any good roles or
movies so far?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
A few here and there....nothing
major...you know, what ever paid
the bills.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
I see...you know I would need to
see your bio and glossies.....and
give you a screen test....to see
if you're right for the part..do
you have a kit that I can look
over?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes, I do...
                                                            

71.

                       MR. SMITH
Do you do nudity?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes...I do nudity
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
This is your lucky night..I'm free
and can call you in an hour....is
that too late for you....I really
need to get an actress into that
role as soon as possible.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I can be there....is it ok if I
bring my friend....she's sitting
at that table over there.
                                                            
Hottie points to the table where Ilene and Kim are sitting.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Which one would you be bringing?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
The one to your left...the slender
one...her name is Kim
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Yes...bring her along...does she
do any acting?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
No...she doesn't act...she's a
doctor.
                                                            
The director is thinking, he can't beleive his luck.....2
very beautiful women fall right into his lap....
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Excuse me for 1 second...
                                                            
The director gestures to Rocket Man to come over.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Yes Mr. Smith...whats up.....I
think I may have 2 possible
candidates...
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Thats good...but I may have hit
the mother load....two for the
price of one....real ladies....not
the street trash you bring me.
                                                            

72.

                       ROCKET MAN
So....what do you want me to do?
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Nothing....I've got two that are
going to walk right into our
trap....you go to the house and
get things prepared for our two
female guest....and no fooling
around with your boys....this deal
is worth a lot to me....so don't
screw this up.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
You got it boss.....
                                                            
Rocket Man leaves and Mr Smith turns back to Hottie
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
I will call you in an hour.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Okay...thank you Mr Smith...
                                                            
Hottie reaches for the card. She now has to convince Kim to
come along with her.
                                                            
Ilene and Kim are sitting at the table.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hey Kim...isn't that Omar over
there... at that table?
                                                            
                       KIM
Omar????
                                                            
                       ILENE
Girl....you remember Omar...the
dude that had the thing for Hottie
in high school ....
                                                            
Kim at first looks puzzled...then remembers Omar.
                                                            
                       KIM
Oh yeah....I remember him
now.....he tried his best to get
with Hottie....shew just kept
turning him down....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah...what a shame.....I wonder
what he's doing now?
                                                            

73.

                       KIM
Don't know....probally working two
jobs like he did back in the
day.....
                                                            
Illene leaves with Eric and leaves Kim alone at the table.
Hottie comes back to the table.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
So whats up....why are you sitting
alone...and where's Ilene?
                                                            
                       KIM
She left with Eric....I couldn't
believe it....she's going to get
laid...
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
What!!....well its about time she
got over Raymond and moved on.....
                                                            
Hottie looks at her watch....then looks at Kim.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I need you to do me a favor
Kim.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Yeah ....what is it?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I need you to come with me to an
audition for a movie part.....
                                                            
                       KIM
You know I'm there for you....so
when do you need to be there?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
In about an hour....its a real
important part and the director is
making the time for me
tonight.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Tonight!....I don't know
Hottie....you know I'm working two
shifts tomorrow and Tyree is
coming over....I don't know.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I don't ask you for much
Kim....this could be my big
break....I wouldn't ask you but
            (MORE)

74.

                       HOTTIE (cont'd)
Ilene is gone and I didn't want to
go by myself....you know...
                                                            
                       KIM
Okay...I see your point...strange
that the director would do this at
this time of night....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
He says its important....that's
why he wanted me to come
tonight....
                                                            
                       KIM
I should call Tyree and let him
know....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
No...because you know Ty is going
to talk you out of it....and this
is important to me.
                                                            
                       KIM
Aren't you going to call Andre'
and tell him the good news....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'll call him later...he's in the
studio tonight....working on an
important project....anyway...I
need to do this on my own....I
can't wait for Andre' to get
around to it.....this is my
career...
                                                            
                       KIM
Yeah..I guess you're right...so
when is he suppose to call you
back.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Within the hour...he gave me the
address where we're suppose to
meet....
                                                            
Hottie and Kim get up from the table and walk to Kim's car
                                                            
 

75.

INT. CASTING DIRECTOR CALLS HOTTIE - NIGHT
                                                            
Kim and Hottie arrive at Hottie's house. The director calls
Hottie and tells her to meet him at his home studio. He also
reminds her to bring Kim along with her.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Hello.
                                                            
                       MR. JOHNSTON
Hello Hazel... this is Mr.
Johnston. Do you still want to
meet...tonight?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes...I still want to meet with
you.
                                                            
                       MR. JOHNSTON
Fine....I am at my home
studio....will you have any
problem getting here?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
No....I shouldn't have a problem
finding your place.
                                                            
                       MR. JOHNSTON
That's good....and you will bring
your friend with you...right?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes...I will
                                                            
                       MR. JOHNSTON
That's good....don't forget to
bring your bio with you and any
pics that you may have.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Okay...I won't forget....see you
in about 30 minutes.
                                                            
                       MR. JOHNSTON
Just ring the buzzer at the gate
when you get here.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Ok ...
                                                            
Hottie hangs up and looks at Kim.
                                                            

76.

                       HOTTIE
That was Mr.Johnston.... the
director I was telling you about.
                                                            
                       KIM
Is he still meeting you tonight?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes...I told him we would be there
in 30 minutes.
                                                            
                       KIM
Okay...so whats wrong?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Nothing girl....I'm just a little
nervous...this could be my big
break.....
                                                            
                       KIM
Don't get nervous....you're an
actress...right....so just be
yourself and get the part.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah...you're right Kim....just be
myself.
                                                            
                       KIM
I still think we should let
somebody know where were
going....you never know what could
happen.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Come on...it will be fun...he
might have a part for you...I will
call Andre' when we get
there...promise.
                                                            
                       KIM
Ok...it might be fun...I've never
been to a film audition....
                                                            
The girls get into Kim's car and drive away.
                                                            
 
INT. ARRIVING AT THE DIRECTOR'S STUDIO - NIGHT
                                                            
Kim and Hottie arrive at the director's studio and ring the
service bell, the gate opens and the girls drive into the
studio lot. They look at each other and giggle with
excitement as they walk toward the studio doors.
                                                            

77.

                       HOTTIE
This is it....just pull up next to
that gate
                                                            
                       KIM
Okay....are you sure this is the
address?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah....this is the address.
                                                            
KIM DRIVES UP TO THE GATE AND STOPS.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
He said to ring the service bell
and the gate will open.
                                                            
                       KIM
OK...this place looks
creepy....like in those sci-fi
movies.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Girl shut up and press the
button...you were always the scary
one.
                                                            
                       KIM
OK...I'm pressing the button...you
satisfied....and I am not the
scary one..
                                                            
THE GATE OPENS AND THE GIRLS DRIVE THROUGH THE GATE.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I think we should go up to that
door over there.
                                                            
                       KIM
The one that has the light over
the door?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah...that looks like the door.
                                                            
                       KIM
Ok...
                                                            
Kim drives up to the door and parks the car. They get out of
the car and walk toward the door. Kim reminds Hottie to call
Andre'. Hottie rings the buzzer and a voice answers through
the speaker. The door opens, Hottie and Kim walk through the
studio doors. They are greeted by the director.
                                                            

78.

                       HOTTIE
Ok girlfriend...you ready for
this?
                                                            
                       KIM
Yes I'm ready....are you going to
call Andre' as you promised?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I am...lets get inside and then
I'll call Andre'....ok?
                                                            
                       KIM
Ok...
                                                            
HOTTIE RINGS THE BUZZER AT THE DOOR AND A VOICE ANSWERS.
                                                            
                       INTERCOM VOICE
Please come in Hazel, the director
will be with you shortly...
                                                            
THE DOOR OPENS, HOTTIE AND KIM WALK INTO THE STUDIO OFFICE.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Ok...
                                                            
                       KIM
This is nice....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah....real nice....look at the
furniture.
                                                            
                       KIM
I am...this is expensive stuff...
                                                            
They sit down and continue to look around the office area.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
This guy must have some money....a
lot of it.
                                                            
                       KIM
Yes...somebody got some money to
afford all this stuff. Are you
going to call Andre'?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Ok ...I'm calling him right
now....you satisfied?
                                                            
Before Hottie could make the call...the director appears and
welcomes them to his studio.
                                                            

79.

                       MR. SMITH
Welcome ladies...I am so glad you
could make it...
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Thank you....
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
I am looking forward to your
audition....are you nervous?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
No ...I'm not nervous...just hope
I get the part...
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
And you must be Hazel's friend....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes...this is Kim
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Nice to meet you Kim....have you
ever done any acting?
                                                            
                       KIM
Just a little in high
school...nothing much....why?
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
I don't know if Hazel mentioned
this....but there could be a part
in my film for you....interested?
                                                            
                       KIM
Well she did.... but I thought she
was just saying that to get me to
come along.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
See...I told you and you didn't
believe me...
                                                            
                       KIM
Ok Hazel....I believe you...
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Are you interested in the part?
                                                            
                       KIM
Yes...I am interested in the
part....
                                                            

80.

                       MR. SMITH
Good....so lets go tho the studio
and get ready for the audition....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'm ready....you ready Kim?
                                                            
                       KIM
Yes..I'm ready I guess
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Good...follow me ladies
                                                            
Hottie and Kim follow the director into the studio. The
girls are surprised when they see the rehearsal area and
equipment. The director has them sit down as he talks about
the movie script....he offers the women drinks as they are
reviewing the script. Kim begins to feel a little dizzy and
so does Hottie, before they can do anything they pass out.
The director and Rocket man prepare the two women for sale.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
This is a really nice studio you
have Mr. Smith...
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Thank you....
                                                            
                       KIM
This is the first time I've ever
been in a real studio before..
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I've seen several...but this is
the nicest.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Here we are ladies....if you will
please sit....I will get the
script.
                                                            
Hottie and Kim sit down and the director leaves them along
while he gets the scripts. Kim and Hottie are looking at all
the equipment and lights in amazement. The director returns
pushing a cart with bottles of alcohol on it.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Look at all the stuff thats in
here
                                                            
                       KIM
I'm looking....this guy must be a
wealthy man to own all this...
                                                            

81.

                       HOTTIE
Yeah....he is....you don't get
this kinda stuff if you're not
making some money.
                                                            
                       KIM
I believe you....this is so
exciting....wish Tyree could see
me now.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah...I bet....he wouldn't allow
you to even come here....you know
he's old fashion...old school....
                                                            
                       KIM
He's not that bad...why don't you
call Andree' now while were
waiting for Mr. Smith.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yeah I should.....
                                                            
Hottie attempts to call Andree' but she gets no signal.
                                                            
                       KIM
Did you call?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I can't get a signal....I'll try
later....
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Sorry for the delay ladies....but
I let everybody have the night
off...so I have to do everything
myself.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
We understand.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Would you ladies care for a drink?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Yes...what do you have?
                                                            
                       KIM
Maybe I shouldn't...I've had
enough at the club....don't want
to get drunk.
                                                            

82.

                       HOTTIE
I know you're not talking about
those kiddy drinks you had at the
club getting you drunk.....
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
I just meant...a drink to to relax
you before we start the
auditions...
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Make mine a scotch on the
rocks....
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
And you Kim?....what would you
like to drink....I can make just
about anything....
                                                            
                       KIM
Well....I guess so...can you make
me a sloe gin fizz?
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Yes I can...be right back with
your drinks.
                                                            
The director goes over to the cart to make the drinks.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Sloe Gin Fizz....
                                                            
                       KIM
Yes...so whats wrong with a sloe
gin fizz?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Nothing Kim...
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Her we are ladies....scotch on the
rocks for you Hazel...and a sloe
gin fizz for you Kim.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Thank you...
                                                            
                       KIM
Thank you....
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Now that we're comfortable....let
me tell you about the script and
the characters you will be
            (MORE)

83.

                       MR. SMITH (cont'd)
auditioning for......
                                                            
Mr. Smith explains the script to Hottie and Kim. They have
another drink as they go through the parts of the script.
Kim starts to feel a little dizzy and a short time later so
does Hottie. As the women try to figure out what is
happening to them....they both pass out.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
So what do you think Mr. Smith?
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Wonderful...you really have that
part nailed....I can feel the
character within you....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Thank you....I just did my
best...you know
                                                            
                       KIM
Yeah...you were great ....I never
knew you are really that
good.....girlfriend
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
And for a first timer...new to all
this....Kim...you did a fantastic
read for the character....
                                                            
                       KIM
Thank you....I just tried to put
myself into the part......whew...
                                                            
Kim starts to say something and tries to stand up.
                                                            
                       KIM
I think I might have of had too
much to drink...I need to go to
the restroom.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
The restrooms are down the hallway
to your right....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Are you alright Kim?....Do you
want me to go with you?
                                                            
                       KIM
I'll be alright....
                                                            

84.

Kim tries to stand up, but is overcome with dizziness and
falls back into the chair.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Kim are you alright?
                                                            
Hottie tries to stand up but she too is very dizzy.
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Kim...can you hear me....
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Seems like your friend has passed
out...are you feeeling well?
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
I'm dizzy but I can make it...must
call
                                                            
Hottie passes out. The director looks at the two ladies and
then calls for Rocket Man on the intercom.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Ok...its safe...they're both out
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Ok boss...be right there.
                                                            
The director is putting the glasses back onto the cart and
cleaning up the area where the two ladies were sitting,
while he is waiting for Rocket Man to come. He grins with a
sinister smile that he has gotten two beautiful bodies for
the bidding price of...five million dollars.
                                                            
 
INT. ILENE WAKES UP BUT NOT IN HER BED! - DAY
                                                            
Ilene wakes up the next morning and realizes that she's not
in her bed. She grabs her cell phone and calls Kim as Eric
enters the room with breakfast.
                                                            
Ilene calls Kim's cell phone. There is no answer, so she
leaves a message.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hello Kim. This is Ilene....call
me when you get this message.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hi Eric....what do you have there?
                                                            
Ilene is pointing to the tray Eric is holding.
                                                            

85.

                       ERIC
This is breakfast...I figured you
could use something to eat.
                                                            
                       ILENE
You're full of surprises...aren't
you?
                                                            
                       ERIC
Yes I am....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Before I eat...i need to call my
girlfriend and let her know that
I'm okay.....
                                                            
                       ERIC
Okay...don't let your food get
cold....you know how you women get
to talking.
                                                            
                       ILENE
I'll be just a sec.....
                                                            
Ilene calls Hottie's cell phone and gets no answer.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Hey girl...just letting you know
that I'm okay and I'm over to
Eric's place...so hit me back when
you get this message.
                                                            
                       ERIC
Now that you're done with the
phone....eat your food.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ok...I'm eating
                                                            
                       ERIC
I hope you like it....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ummmmm....this is good....I didn't
know you could cook....
                                                            
                       ERIC
I took a couple of cooking
classes...to improve my food
selections...can't eat hamburgers
every night.
                                                            

86.

                       ILENE
Yeah...you're right....you could
teach me a thing or two in the
kitchen.
                                                            
                       ERIC
I plan to teach you a lot after we
finish eating....
                                                            
Eric looks at Ilene.
                                                            
                       ILENE
I see....
                                                            
 
INT. ILENE IS STILL AT ERIC"S HOUSE - NIGHT
                                                            
It is night and Ilene has been at Eric's house the whole
day.
                                                            
                       ILENE
I can't remember having such a
wonderful day....
                                                            
Ilene is in Eric's arms as she is talking to him.
                                                            
                       ERIC
It has been a long time since I've
been this happy too....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yes...it has been a long
time...and you know what I'm
talking about.
                                                            
                       ERIC
Me too...
                                                            
                       ILENE
Come on...a fine young man like
you....i don't believe it.
                                                            
                       ERIC
Seriously...it has been a long
time for me....I know you don't
believe me.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Its not that I don't believe
you...
                                                            

87.

                       ERIC
Because I'm young and look
good....doesn't mean I'm sleeping
with every woman I see.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Is that so....
                                                            
                       ERIC
Yes...because I'm a mature...young
man....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Thats nice to hear....you are very
mature for your age.
                                                            
                       ERIC
No only am i mature....but I like
women who are older than my
age....you can talk to them, do
things with them.
                                                            
Ilene looks at Eric.
                                                            
                       ILENE
And what else can you do with
them?
                                                            
Eric looks at Ilene and pulls her across the bed.
                                                            
                       ERIC
You can make love to them....
                                                            
Eric gently kisses Ilene on her lips as his hands strokes
her breast.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Ohhhh Eric.....make love to
meeee....
                                                            
 
INT. ANDRE' CALLS HOTTIE BUT HOTTIE DOESN'T ANSWER. - NIGHT
                                                            
Andre' calls Hottie to tell her about another meeting with
his director friend. Unable to reach Hottie, Andre' calls
Ilene.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Damn...still not answering her
phone.
                                                            
Andre' leaves another message on Hottie's cell phone. He
calls his friend the director back and leaves a message.
                                                            

88.

                       ANDRE'
Hello....Mr. Johnston...this is
Andre' calling you back. I can't
get in touch with my friend...the
one I was telling you about...so
can you get back to me as soon as
possible about our
meeting....thank you.
                                                            
Andre' calls Ilene's phone number, maybe she know's where
Hottie is.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Hello Ilene....this is Andre'...I
just wanted to know if you've seen
Hazel...we were suppose to meet
today and I can't reach her by
phone....give me a call when you
get this message.
                                                            
Andre' closes his cell phone and looks out his office window
thinking, where is this woman, I hope she knows that I don't
put myself out there for everybody...how could she not
remember that they were to see each other today. He was
going to surprise her about the meeting with his director
friend.
                                                            
 
INT. MR. SMITH AND ROCKET MAN PREPARE FOR PHOTOS. - NIGHT
                                                            
Mr. Smith and Rocket Man carry Hottie and Kim to a private
part of the studio. They undress the women and take nude
photos of them for the bidding clients. Mr. Smith leaves to
make final preparations and leaves Rocket Man alone with the
two women.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Lets get them over to the private
studio....we'll take the pictures
there...
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
ok boss....
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Lets take this one first and we'll
come back for the other one.....
                                                            
The two men lift Hottie's body up and carry her away. They
return a short time later and carry Kim away.
                                                            

89.

                       MR. SMITH
Okay...lets get them undressed so
we can get the photos done....I'll
take this one you do the other
one....
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Okay....
                                                            
The men began to undress the women. Rocket Man is undressing
Hottie and he realizes that she is the one he raped many
years ago. Mr. Smith is staring at Kim's nude body, he
notices what a nice body she has and what a price she was
bound to bring from his clients. He looks over to Rocket Man
and notices he is staring at Hottie's body.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Is everything alright over
there...
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Uhhh....yes boss....I'm
okay....why are you asking?
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
You looked like you were in a
trance....
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
I'm okay...I'll get the camera and
finish setting up the lights.
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Yes...we need to hurray...the
effects will be wearing off
soon....I will need to give them a
booster injection to keep them
drugged until tonight....
                                                            
Rocket Man finishes the light setup and has the camera in
position. Mr Smith positions the women as Rocket Man takes
the photos. After they finish taking the photos, Mr Smith
hands Rocket Man a gown to put on Hottie....this will make
them look very sexy...thus bringing more dollars for us.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
You're right boss....these two
will bing in some nice dollars..
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Yes indeed....I need to finish up
some business at the port....you
stay here and give them the
booster injection....I shouldn't
            (MORE)

90.

                       MR. SMITH (cont'd)
be gone long....and no funny
business....you hear me....
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
I hear you boss....give them the
booster injection and no funny
business....
                                                            
                       MR. SMITH
Right....
                                                            
Mr. Smith leaves and Rocket Man is staring at Hottie's
body....what the boss doesn't know won't hurt him....as he
begins to push Hottie's night gown up her body.
                                                            
 
INT. ANDRE'S BECOMING WORRIED - DAY
                                                            
Andre's is sitting in his office trying to figure out where
Hazel could be, he has gone by her house and tried several
times to contact her by phone. He decides to call Tyree but
doesn't have his phone number. He calls information..
                                                            
                       411 INFORMATION
Information....may I help you...
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Yes....I need the address and
phone number to a Private
Investigator named Tyree Stone.
                                                            
                       411 INFORMATION
Searching....yes....I have it
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
Andre' writes down the info and
hangs up the phone.
                                                            
Andre' calls Tyree's office number but gets the answering
machine, he leaves a message for Tyree.
                                                            
                       ANDRE'
This is Andre'...we met at Kim's
house...I'm worried about
Hazel...I've tried calling her
since last night and I haven't
been able to reach, tried calling
Ilene too...and I can't reach
her....will you give me a call
when you get this
message....thanks
                                                            

91.

Andre' tries to take his attention off his
thoughts.....maybe she's with another man...
                                                            
 
INT. TYREE RETURNS TO HIS OFFICE.. - DAY
                                                            
Tyree has just returned to his office and calls the hospital
emergency room looking for Kim. As is waiting for someone to
answer the phone, he browses through Mr. Beech's file.
                                                            
                       EMERGENCY ROOM STAFF
Emergency room...may I help you
                                                            
                       TYREE
Yes...this is Tyree Stone....is Dr
Kimberly Hayes there?
                                                            
                       EMERGENCY ROOM STAFF
Dr. Hayes....let me check...no she
isn't here.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
She was supposed to work a double
today.....
                                                            
                       EMERGENCY ROOM STAFF
All I can tell you....is that Dr.
Hayes is not here.....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Okay....thank you....
                                                            
That"s strange, Kim didn't report for work, Kim would have
called him if she had been sick or changed her plans. Tyree
calls Kim's home phone.
                                                            
                       ANSWERING MACHINE
Please leave a message at the
tone....
                                                            
                       TYREE
Kim....Kim...are you there....this
is Tyree...call me when you get
this message?
                                                            
Tyree figures that Kim is with Hazel and just lost track of
time.....nothing to worry about. He continues reading Mr.
Beech's file.
                                                            
 

92.

INT. ILENE GOES TO WORK. - DAY
                                                            
Ilene is at her desk going through the mail, so much has
happened in the past few days....she has found her a new man
and has experienced the sexual pleasures she has missed
since her ex-husband.... she opens a letter labeled annual
physical report, reads it, only to find out she has tested
positive for HIV. She is stunned, shocked and in disbelief.
The last person she had sex with before her new man was
Raymond....her ex-husband.
                                                            
                       ILENE
No...no this can't be true. ...
There must be some kind of
mistake...
                                                            
                       ILENE
I haven't had sex with anyone but
Raymond.... until last
night.....That bastard.....that
dirty bastard.
                                                            
Ilene is thinking back and talking to herself as she
realizes it was Raymond who gave her HIV.....she unlocks her
bottom drawer and pulls out the gun she took from Hottie
some time ago...she stares at the gun and tells herself that
Raymond has gone too far this time....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Yeah.....he gave it to me....He
called one night. One night that I
was...Well anyway I just know it
was Raymond.
                                                            
Ilene is very upset and angry at Raymond.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Because I'm going to kill that
bastard .....Raymond you can't do
this to me and think I'm not going
to do something about it.
                                                            
ILENE PUTS THE GUN IN HER PURSE AS SHE LEAVES HER OFFICE..
                                                            
 
INT. HOTTIE WAKES UP AND TRIES TO CALL ILENE - DAY
                                                            
Hottie feels a presence over her body, she wakes up to find
a man raping her. She is still groggy and tries to get up
but the man holds her down and continues. The man finishes
and gets off Hottie, he leaves the room and Hottie tries to
call Ilene. Before she can complete her call, the man
returns and ties her up.
                                                            

93.

                       ROCKET MAN
Yeah baby...I'm going to make
sweet love to you ...baby.....you
looking good to me and I just have
to have you....forget what "the
man" says....I'm going to get
mine...
                                                            
Rocket Man is now on top of Hottie and she is beginning to
wake up, he is still lost in his own fantasy and continues
his sexual assault on Hottie's body.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
I know you feelin me....you feel
so nice.....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Ahhhhhhh.....whaaats going on.....
                                                            
Hottie is still feeling the effects of the drug but she can
feel someone on top of and in her, she tries to move but the
figure is too strong and he continues to rape her.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
Yeah ...thats it baby....move with
me and give the Rocket Man a good
ride baby....just like you did
when I had you before....
                                                            
                       HOTTIE
Stooooopppp....stttoooopppp.....
                                                            
The drug effect is too strong on Hottie and she is too weak
to stop the attack on her, so she lets him finish and then
she will try to call for help.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
You can't stop me now baby....you
mine until I'm finished with
you....
                                                            
Rocket Man finishes his rape of Hottie and decides he better
give her another injection before she completely wakes up.
He leaves the room to get the drugs. Hottie looks around for
her phone but she can't find it, she see another phone and
reaches for it and calls Ilene's number, she is leaving
Ilene a message when Rocket Man takes the phone from her
hand.
                                                            

94.

                       HOTTIE

Hellllooooo.....hellllo....Ilene....please
answer the phone....me and Kim are
at the director's.....
                                                            
Rocket Man takes the phone from Hottie's hand and pushes her
back down on the bed.
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
And who do you think you trying to
call....ain't nobody going to come
and get you....you mine and you
going to make me a lot of
money....you hear that.....
                                                            
                       ROCKET MAN
I got just what you need and I'm
going to give it to you
now....this will make you feel
good and maybe we can have some
more fun.....
                                                            
He injects Hottie in the arm and within a few minutes Hottie
is out cold. Rocket Man now looks over at Kim and licks his
lips.
                                                            
 
EXT. ARRIVING AT RAYMOND'S HOUSE. - DAY
                                                            
ILENE WALKS UP TO THE DOOR AND RINGS THE DOORBELL..
                                                            
                       ILENE
      (agitated voice)
Raymond........RAYMOND...
                                                            
RAYMOND COMES TO THE DOOR, HE LOOKS LIKE HE'S BEEN ASLEEP.
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
Yeah....who's there?
                                                            
                       ILENE
It's me....Ilene
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
Ilene?.....
                                                            
RAYMOND OPENS THE DOOR AND LETS ILENE IN.
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
This is a surprise....
                                                            

95.

                       ILENE
I need to talk to you
Raymond.....its important
                                                            
ILENE COMES IN AND RAYMOND WALKS CASUALLY INTO THE KITCHEN.
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
Can I offer you a drink?....cause
I'm thirsty.....
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
      (sounding puzzled)
So what is it... that you want to
talk to me about that is so.....
important?
                                                            
                       ILENE
Do you remember the last time we
were together....after our
divorce...
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
The last time we fucked or when we
did the divorce thing....
                                                            
                       ILENE
When you tricked me into having
sex with you.....
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
Yeah ....I think so....you know
me.
                                                            
                       ILENE
I told you I couldn't have sex
with you unless you were
clean....knowing all the women
you've been with.....
                                                            
RAYMOND IS SITTING BACK LIKE HE'S DREAMING.
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
Yeah....I can remember all them
positions that night....we must of
gone through 6 or 7....
                                                            
                       ILENE
Dammit Raymond!!....I haven't been
with anybody since then......
                                                            

96.

                       RAYMOND
Are you trying to tell me you're
pregnant.....I don't believe
this....
                                                            
AS ILENE SPEAKS, SHE PULLS OUT THE GUN.
                                                            
                       ILENE
No I'm not.....pregnant.
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
Hey....what are you doing with
that gun...we can talk this out
Ilene...... What ever it is I'm
sorry.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Raymond... Sorry ain't gonna get
it this time....you have to pay
for what you've done to me.
                                                            
ILENE TOSSES THE LETTER AT RAYMOND.
                                                            
                       ILENE
Read it....
                                                            
RAYMOND PICKS UP THE LETTER AND STARTS TO READ IT.
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
I may be many things....but I
would never do anything like that
to you....you have got to believe
me....
                                                            
ILENE IS MOVING CLOSER TO RAYMOND, WHO IS AGAINST THE WALL.
                                                            
                       ILENE
I've let you use me for a lot of
things Raymond....but not
anymore....this time you're going
to pay for what you've done to
me....
                                                            
WALKING TOWARD ILENE...PLEADING HIS CASE.
                                                            
                       RAYMOND
I was telling you the
truth.....don't do this.....
                                                            
ILENE COCKS THE GUN WITH SHAKING HANDS.
                                                            

97.

                       ILENE
You've played me one time too many
Raymond.....
                                                            
Ilene is pointing the gun at Raymond's penis. .
                                                            
                       ILENE
I should just shoot your thang
off....wouldn't that be a good
idea...Raymond....you won't be
screwing up somebody else's life
Raymond.....not this time....
                                                            
Raymond is on his knees crying and pleading for Ilene not to
shoot him. Ilene pushes the gun into Raymond's crotch.